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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 25th March 2008

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Thu Mar 27, 2008 12:20 pm

Dear Paint The Sky,

See I painted you in rainbow, and here I am to tell you I love your fic. It is beautiful, and their chemistry is so nice.

I really like your Faith. It is one of my fav characters in the show, and especially more in the comic.. she is just so great. :)

I was ready to read their first time, but nope... Well.. Maybe the second or the third? Lol.

Oh and I just totally love Tara's mother. :)

I hope she will ask Willow to come home with her for Thanksgiving.

Your character are really well alike the ones in the show without being canon and it is very cool. :)

oh and Spikey an danya? It's gonna be fun!

Thank you for your fic. :)

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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 25th March 2008

Postby Shy One » Sat Mar 29, 2008 9:51 am

Ooooooh, can I just say how yummy the last 2 updates were?

I absolutely loved them.
And I can't wait to read more.

Keep 'em coming!!!!!

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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 25th March 2008

Postby Willowfan » Thu Apr 10, 2008 6:56 pm

I really like this story-and need an update. Withdraw is bad. More please.
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 25th March 2008

Postby Paint the Sky » Fri Apr 11, 2008 10:53 am

Hey all, I thought I’d respond to the feed back seeing as it’s been bumped up the page, and to say a general thanks to the lurkers also, so, uh, thank you!

I’d love to say I have an update for you too, but alas real life has been a bitch lately and free time has been at a premium.

I’ve started the next chapter, but it’s been that long since I’ve been on a first date that my memory is failing me – LOL. Hopefully it will all fall into place, it’s coming along slowly, but that’s better than not coming at all.

katjetson - glad you enjoyed the mega update, and I’m sorry I took away the hot lovin’, but I’ll make up for it in the next chapter, hopefully. I also thought the ‘tears’ to be a realistic reaction, writing from memory on that one, plus it was also to emphasise what a big deal it was for them. I’m happy you liked that part.


Zampsa1975 – Sami, Willow wouldn’t do anything stupid, trust me, now me, on the other hand, I’d totally balls it up. I’m wondering how Spike and Anya will turn out. Can’t decide to have them get along or hate each other with a passion. Gonna have to think on that one.


wimpy0729 - I thought it was important for one of them to face their fear just to clarify their depth of feeling. Love is scary stuff. I love the image of Faith as an M&M. She would definitely be the red one.


hondos – Rosemary, glad you liked the romantic approach, and all the flippins made you happy. The emotional stuff is easy to write, for me real life is where I fall down, so I write the things I would like to say or be said to me.


JujuDeRoussie – Julia, thank you for your feed back and the rainbow colours for my name. I’m glad you’re enjoying the fic, and you like my version of Faith. She’s one of my fav’s too, and I’m pleased to show another side of her that appears to be realistic despite the portrayal of her character on the show. I think deep down she just needed a little love and trust.

I wanted Tara’s Mom to be there for her this time. I like fic’s where she’s alive, and there’s a more than good chance she’ll appear again. Spike and Anya will hopefully be fun.


Shy One – thanks for your feed back, and I’m sorry I haven’t been able to keep it comin’. I’m trying my best honest.


Willowfan – Sorry about the withdrawal symptoms, but you’ll have to go cold turkey for a while yet, but I’m pleased you like the story. Maybe your bumping it up again will speed me up a bit.
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 25th March 2008

Postby taralicious » Sun Apr 13, 2008 2:44 pm

Paint the Sky,
I came late to the game, which is better than coming prematurely, but I digress...
I found this lovely and heartfelt story of yours at chapter 10 so I didn't want to leave feedback and clutter up the pages with repeated observations which people had discussed way back when you initially posted the chapters.
Having now finished all twenty-five chapters that you've written, I have to say that the way you have captured the essences of all four women is truly remarkable and one is left with the impression that these are real people who respond to situations in completely natural ways, and not all of them are good ideas.
In the realm of fanfiction, it is always a temptation to take the easy way out when writing for established characters and just choose one trait of theirs to be the defining one and build a story around that.
This has the limiting factor of making the characters one-dimensional or, at the very least, not adding anything beyond what we know of them from the series.
Your depiction of all four women, Faith in particular, is to be commended because you have provided us with insight into why she is compelled to project the tough cookie exterior she uses as a defense mechanism.
There is more to her than the 'cleavagey slut bomb' monicker and she stood proud and tall in recognizing the sparkage recognition factor with Buffy and not wanting to play her the way she had others.
That and the threat of shovels, and rakes, and implements of destruction raining down on her from a vengeful and protective Willow taking her best-friend duties very seriously.
The point I am laboring to make is that even if a person was not well acquainted with these characters, having maybe just discovered the show, this story of yours brings them to life like all good fiction does and makes the reader feel like these are people they would like to be friends with.
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 25th March 2008

Postby Paint the Sky » Sun Apr 13, 2008 3:44 pm

Taralicious, welcome to the game!

Thank you for your feedback. It's good to know that my characterisation is realistic in terms of how they are reacting to their situations. In terms of cannon, at times I've wondered if I am staying true to Willow and Tara, and by that I mean should I have let them sleep together so soon. but, on the other hand, they're 18/19 yrs old, they're very attracted to each other on all levels, full of hormones and they both know what they want, so for me it seemed realistic that they would. It doesn't stop me having doubts about it though :) That's why I had Willow express her fears, it basically addressed my own doubts and hopefully cleared up any misgivings I'd instilled with the previous two chapters.

Faith in particular has been fun to write. Her character, on the show, always hinted at complexities that were never really explored, I always felt that just being set up to be the antithesis of Buffy was a waste of what could have been a more layered and story rich persona. The character I've written for her seems to have been met with approval here, so I must be doing something right ;-)

this story of yours brings them to life like all good fiction does and makes the reader feel like these are people they would like to be friends with.


That is one hell of a compliment, thank you, and it would be cool as f**k to have friends like them.
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 25th March 2008

Postby Paint the Sky » Wed Apr 16, 2008 4:44 pm

I know double posting is bad, but I couldn't have updated otherwise ;-)

It's date night, at last, hope you all enjoy it.


Title: Quiet Saturday Morning’s
Author: Paint the Sky
Rating: PG13 – NC-17
Pairing: W/T
Disclaimer: AU. No spoilers whatsoever. Oh, forgot to add that I don’t own any of the characters in BTVS, I’m only playing with them.
Feedback: Yeah, sure, why not.
Summary: Shy, newly gay Willow Rosenberg and her first venture into love with an equally shy blonde.
Notes: This is my first attempt at any kind of fiction since I left school many, many moons ago. After a long time reading the fic’s on this site and others I thought why the hell not, give it a whirl, try it on for size and all that.


Chapter 26

Willow fidgeted nervously as she waited outside the Sun Cinema for Tara, she wasn’t sure if it was nerves, or a combination of the triple shot Mocha that she had downed at the Pump fifteen minutes beforehand. Her hands felt cold and she shoved them into the pockets of her black denim jacket and then changed her mind and pulled them out again and let her arms hang at her sides before wrapping them around herself. She couldn’t settle, and as much as hadn’t wanted to arrive early she had, and now she was paying the penalty of standing on her own on a crowded street looking for all the world like a spazz as she waited in almost uncontained excitement for her girl. She stood staring in the direction from which she knew Tara would approach, her eyes straight ahead incase she missed one second of her love’s arrival.

She had caught up with Buffy at lunch-time who had taken it upon herself to select Willow’s outfit for her date. So there she stood, black cargoes complimented the denim jacket and a white vest covered her frame and heavy boots that would have kick started a Harley adorned her feet. Willow reckoned Buffy had already spent too much time with Faith by the time the outfit had been decided on. The cargoes hung low on her waist and she pulled the vest down to cover the strip of tummy that was on view to the world. It was a wasted effort as her vest rode up again and her tummy said “Hi” to anyone who cared to look. She resigned herself to the fact that Tara would love it so she stopped trying to cover up.

Still fidgeting and not quite sure to do with herself she reached for her cell-phone that was secreted in the side pocket of her cargoes. She reckoned that doing something was less conspicuous than standing there doing nothing and preceded to play with the phone. She wished Tara had a cell-phone, and in the moment she had that thought that she also wondered why she didn’t have one. It was a strange thing. Practically everyone had them, so why didn’t Tara? Maybe she didn’t like them, or she had no need for one. How could someone not need a phone? The very thought of doing without one gave Willow goosebumps. It would be like having a piece of you missing. How could anyone be complete without one?

Anyone who cared to look would have seen her patented resolve face as she decided that Tara shouldn’t go without a cell-phone for longer than she had too. It would be the perfect gift. After all, Saturday would be the first week anniversary of their meeting, and it was only polite to mark it with a gift. What says I love you better than a shiny new phone? Plus, think of the texty flirting we could do. Photos would be good too, ooh, don’t forget video. What time is it now, wonder if I have time to go get one…no, no wait till tomorrow and surprise her on Saturday. Mmm, yes, that’s a better option…oh, wow, here she comes just a walkin down the street…singin’ do wah diddy, dum diddy do…

Willow watched open mouthed as a vision of loveliness, and not to mention hot diggity damn sexiness sauntered up the street. With her focus totally on Tara the street faded into fuzzy background and the other people became bit part players in the slow motion movie in her head that starred her blonde goddess taking long strides in her leather trousers, hips swinging, and her luscious breasts encased in silk jiggling with a jaunty wobble. A light breeze blew her hair across her face and she ran her fingers through it twisting her head from side to side as she pushed her golden tresses back into place. Ooh, she should do shampoo ads, I’d tape it and play it on a loop all day.

Her face lit up with a brilliant smile when she saw Willow and she quickened her pace not wanting to waste another second of the time they could be together.

Determined to do the same, the previously rooted redhead bridged the distance between them, and after an awkward moment deciding on a greeting Tara wrapped her lover in warm hug.

Willow’s senses were assailed by the scent of blonde’s body as she too wrapped her arms around the taller girl’s waist. Vanilla and cinnamon, and something that was quintessentially Tara.

“Mmm, you smell good enough to eat,” the redhead murmured against Tara’s skin as she inhaled deeply.

Feeling mischievous she replied in low sexy voice, “Play your cards right and you just might.”

Willow pulled back from their hug and gave her a surprised look, but quickly recoverd, “So you’re gonna put out on the first date, Miss Maclay, good to know.”

Taking Tara’s hand she gave a little tug and began walking back to the cinema, “Let’s get this date started, today was a long time comin’ and there’s popcorn and a back row with our names on it.”

She had no choice but to follow, laughing softly at Willow’s girl on a mission approach.

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With tickets firmly gripped in one hand and Tara’s hand firmly grasped in the other Willow directed them both at speed across the foyer to the concessions stand. The high glass counter was brightly lit and the tasty smell of popcorn and hotdogs permeated the air and whetted the appetite. Willow was literally like a kid in a candy shop as she pointed out all the choclately goodness on display and babbled away extoling the virtues of her favourites.

Totally taken by the cuteness on display Tara could only watch as her excitable girlfriend bought enough sugary goodness to last two movies.

Ten minutes later and with her arms full of goodies Willow headed up the steps of the theatre and inched her way to the middle of the back row. Tara followed behind carrying a large bucket of popcorn and a large coke.

As they settled into the plush red mock velvet the coke was deposited in the drinks holder and they exchanged some of their burden, with Tara swapping the popcorn bucket for an assortment of packets and boxes.

“Uh, Will, you don’t think you might’ve gone a little overboard on the food front?” she asked her girlfriend as she sorted through the confectionary on her lap.

In the low light of the cinema she perused the quantity of food she had bought and said “Nah, what we don’t eat now, we can take with us, have you seen how many pockets are in my trousers. You can load me up like a pack mule and I’ll transport these goodies right outta here,” smiling, she held the popcorn out toward Tara.

Taking a handful of the still warm popcorn she picked up a piece with her other hand and popped it into her mouth, “Mmm, tastes good,” she said with a lick of her lips, “So, how did it go with Spike, is he up for blind dating?”

Between nibbles on her popcorn Willow told Tara that Spike would be happy to meet up with Anya, and if it suited her they could go out on Saturday.

“What about Anya, is she up for it?” Willow asked shoving more corn into her mouth and munching happily.

“Yeah, Anya’s up for just about anything if last nights conversation was more fact than fiction, I’m sure Saturday will be fine. Remind me to give you her number then Spike can make the arrangements with her,” Tara said, wondering at the same time how Willow managed to get so much popcorn in her mouth at one time.

The theatre lights dimmed and they directed their gaze at the screen just as the curtains swept back and the speakers blasted out jazzy music that signalled the adverts and the trailers.

Tara leant in, her head close to Willow, “We are the only ones here Will, I love empty cinemas, it’s like a private screening.”

“Me too,” the redhead answered turning her head to look at Tara, and with a cheeky grin said, “plus, if we want to make out, which, by the way, we have to, rites of passage and all that, there’s no-one to perv on us.”

“I don’t think we have time to make out, not if we have to finish that large bucket of popcorn, a large coke, and nine different sorts of candy,” the blonde teased, turning her face back to the screen and grabbing more corn from the bucket.

Willow reached her hand out to Tara’s lap and lifted some of the packets and with some deft manoeuvring managed to stuff a packet of skittles, heresy kisses and a box of milk duds into the thigh pocket of her cargoes. Another raid on the blonde’s stash resulted in the disappearance of another few packets of sugary treats, deposited into the pockets of her jacket which she had hung over the seat in front.

Tara chuckled quietly as her girlfriend got rid of the obstacles that threatened her smoochies, “Three left Will, I don’t think you have much pocket space left, don’t you wish one us had brought a bag?”

“Yes, dammit, then I’d get some smoochies, and if those pants weren’t so damn tight then you’d be able to squirrel some of this away too,” she held up the three errant packages, “but, if they didn’t exist, we wouldn’t have to get rid of them,” she said mysteriously.

“Whaddya gonna do, cast a spell and make them disappear?” challenged Tara, who was wondering just what the redhead was up to.

“Uh-huh, watch,” she held up the candy, “now you see ‘em,” she said flexing her wrist from side to side, “now you don’t.”

Tara was wide eyed with amazement as the three candy bars flew over Willow’s shoulder and landed between the seats two rows to the front of them. The blonde didn’t really know what to say. Part of her was impressed with Willow’s ingenuity and the other part thought it was a terrible waste of chocolate, not to mention the whole issue of littering. She was glad there was no-one around to see it, she didn’t think she could face the embarrassment of being asked to leave the establishment.

“Tara, you ok?” the redhead asked as she watched her girlfriends obvious conflict play on her face, “Um, maybe I shouldn’t have done that huh? Sometimes I act before I think, I better go get them back incase they attract mice or something cos mice, you know, prefer chocolate to cheese, which is strange cos when you think of mousetraps they always have cheese on them, don’t they, or is that just in cartoons?” She could make out Tara’s amusement as the screen flickered light on them and decided now would be a good time to shut up about mice. “Um, you didn’t happen to see where they landed, did you?” She gave a little shrug and a sheepish grin as she finished talking, hoping that Tara understood that she knew she had been a little over enthusiastic in her attempts.

The blonde broke into a wide smile as Willow’s act of contrition turned into a babble and she reached an arm behind her girl and pulled her into a deep kiss as a reward for taking a responsible attitude to her actions.

Ok, I wasn’t expecting this, but, I musta said the right thing cos Tara’s kissing me, and why the hell am I thinking, I should just be kissing her back.

Tara’s lips where soft and inviting and her tongue still held a buttery taste from the popcorn she had consumed while Willow had stowed away the confectionary. This was a stupid move, now I’m kissing her I don’t want to stop, but she’s just so adorable I can’t resist her for long. Mmm, god I love this woman’s tongue…

The redhead gripped the bucket on her lap for fear it would spill its contents to the floor with one hand, but her other reached for her lover and both girls groaned when it came to rest on Tara’s breast. Willow opened her eyes in surprise as she felt the soft mound against her palm, and pulling back from the kiss she giggled an apology. Oops. Naughty hand, you’ve got a mind of your own.

“If you’re sorry, why is your hand still on my boob?” asked Tara glancing down at her chest and trying not to laugh. She could see Willow’s blush in the light that came from the screen, and she could also the smile that played on the corner of her mouth.

“Oh, my hand, yeah, sorry,” her voice had a dreamy quality as he pulled her hand away. She shook her head to clear her thoughts and handed Tara the bucket of popcorn, “Chocolate, I better get it.”

“Two rows down, about three seats in from the wall,” she told her pointing in the general direction of the landing site.

Willow stood and eased past Tara and walked to the aisle and made her way down to the row where the candy bars would be. She moved along the row until she reached the last half dozen seats and gingerly felt around the floor with the toe of her boot, moving forward a little when each sweep of her foot yielded nothing.

One kiss, that’s all it had taken for Tara to want more, and when Willow’s hand had touched her breast her first instinct had been to lean into that touch and cover the hand with her own, to pull it closer, to make it hold her tighter. All she wanted to do now was take Willow back to her dorm and throw her to the bed and make love to her. No you don’t, you want to fuck her. She reddened at her honesty, ok, so I want to fuck her, but only because I love her, that’s ok isn’t it? She makes me crazy, god I want her so much. Ok gotta calm down, we’ll watch the movie like adults and not behave like lust addled teenagers, except technically I still am a teenager and given that I’m babbling like Will I can only deduce its because of lust addling nature of my girl…so best to just watch the movie.

She wrestled with her thoughts as she watched Willow search for the candy bars and the redhead gave her a little wave before ducking down and feeling along the floor for the discarded packets.

The redhead felt something move as her foot swept from right to left, she really hoped it was her errant candybars.

Eww, this floor is so not what I want my hands on just now, where are you, ah, there’s one…yay two…come in number three, your time is up…dammit…woohoo!

She stood triumphant and waved the bars at Tara. With a wide smile she did her happy dance and then proceeded to climb over the seats until she stood beside the blonde.

“I’m just gonna go and wash my hands, I’m not sure that floor is the most hygienic of surfaces, and I’m really glad I couldn’t see what I was doing, won’t be long. Oh, I better bin the candy, it could be contaminated.”

In the bathroom Willow washed her hands three times just to be sure they were clean and checked the knee of her trousers and was grateful nothing suspect had attached itself to her from her expedition along the floor.

She dried her hands quickly and made her way back to Tara.

“Ooh, made it just in time,” she said taking her seat just as the movie began, “so, do I do the old yawn and stretch routine, or do we behave like adults and you put your head on my shoulder and I put my arm around you?

“I think we can behave like adults,” said Tara with a light laugh as she lifted Willow’s arm to snuggle into her girl’s side.

Five minutes into the movie another couple came into the theatre and made their way to the back row. As they climbed the steps Willow whispered her dismay that they wouldn’t be alone anymore, “Shame though, I was looking forward to making out, damn, there goes my rite of passage.”

Tara raised her head to Willow’s ear and whispered, “Poor Will, we can make up for later. We can make out in the bathroom at the Stiff Kitten, isn’t making out in the ladies another rite?”

Willow felt a shiver run through her as Tara gave her earlobe a nip before she settled back to rest her head against the redheads shoulder, “Mmm, sounds good baby, I’m gonna hold you to that.”
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Throughout the movie they fed each other popcorn, purposely leaving a finger to linger on the others lips, and when Willow was sure they were being unobserved she had pulled Tara’s fingers into her mouth and sucked the buttery goodness of them and swirled her tongue around them, reminding the blonde of what Willow had done on their first night together when she had tasted Tara for the first time. In reply Tara done the same, and knowing her body blocked off the view of Willow’s she snaked her hand to the her lover’s breast and gave it a squeeze and pinched the nipple before letting her hand fall back to her girl’s waist. This is crazy Tara, your feeling up your girlfriend and there’s two strangers that could look this way at any time…

Glancing up Tara could see Willow bite her bottom lip and with a final twirl of her tongue she let the fingers slip from her mouth, and even in the dull glow of the cinema she could see arousal in Willow’s eyes, and her own shallow breaths advertised her’s to the redhead.

Willow dipped two fingers into the almost empty bucket and ran them round until they were covered in butter, and with great deliberation she anointed Tara’s lips before putting them in her own mouth and slowly sucking them clean. She watched open mouthed as Tara’s tongue emerged and did a lazy sweep around her mouth, and it took all her willpower not to bend forward and ravage the lips that looked so inviting to her eyes. Fucking hell, too much, too much…

Leaning down a little Willow suggested they better stop their food play or the the couple near the end of the row might get the shock of their lives. Tara nodded her ascent, and sucked down large mouthfuls of the coke they had been sharing, the last of the coke slurped up the straw with a loud gurgle that caused them both to break out in a fit of giggles which had earned a dirty look and an exaggerated shush from their unknown companions.

When the movie ended, and the house lights came up the couple near the end of the row got up and left quickly, Willow pulled Tara into a rough kiss, pouring everything she had been feeling into it. The blonde gave a throaty groan and pushed Willow back against the seat with the force of her response. The kiss fuelled the simmering arousal into boiling cauldron of desire that was threatening to wipe out any sense of decorum that was left within them. Hands were pushed into blonde and red hair, gripping and pulling, and breasts were mashed together as Tara pressed Willow deeper into her seat. They were oblivious now to everything but each other, their hearts pounded and blood rushed in their veins and the only thing that was important now was their need for each other. Hands began to roam, and Tara felt a hand at her breast, insistent and greedy. Her own hand rubbed hard along Willow thigh, first up and down the outside until she guided it to the soft fleshy inner part. Her hand travelled higher and she fumbled at the button on the waist of Will’s cargoes. The button refused to co-operate, and she growled in frustration, and brought her hand back to Willows inner thigh, squeezing the muscle and alternating with circular motions bringing the side of her hand into contact with her lover’s core.

The redhead raised her hips and pushed forward, her brain was melting in her skull, and the last of her conscious thought screamed at her to put the brakes on before the lust bus drove them both over the cliffs edge.

The blonde was on fire as Willow played with her nipple, she felt every nip and pull as though it was on her hot flesh and not through a layer of silk and another of lace. She pushed harder against her lover’s hand, her chest heaving and her back arched.

With a monumental effort Willow pulled her mouth away from the one that threatened to devour her, “Tara, Tara, oh, shit, that feels really good…uhg, can we skip the club, go back to your dorm?” Willow moaned as the blonde’s lips latched on to her pulse point.

“Mmm, god, yes, I want you so bad it hurts,” she mumbled still kissing the skin beneath her as her hand made full contact with Willow’s sex.

“Oh, fuck,” it was guttural sound, filled with need and want, and it was enough to make Tara lift her head and look deeply into green eyes full of arousal.

She pushed her hand hard into Willow, “Say that again,” she groaned as her wetness flooded her panties.

With a rock of her hips she gave a low groan.
“Ooh, fuck.”

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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 17th April 2008

Postby katjetson » Wed Apr 16, 2008 5:07 pm

Dibs in the house, yo!

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And she returns after, apparently, an 18 hour "nap."

So hey, yeah, you with the fiction of frolic-y fun (and I with the awful display of illiteration). Boyohboy, this is hot stuff. And so full of the details that a hungry little kitten craves.

Ooh, she should do shampoo ads, I'd tape it and play it on a loop all day


So Willow knows of the brilliance of QuickTime loop, too, eh? Hee.

Ok, I wasn't expecting this, but, I musta said the right thing cos Tara's kissing me, and why the hell am I thinking, I should just be kissing her back.


Damn. Those were some F-I-N-E internal Willow musings. Watch me covet 'em.

I really love their balance of sweet and sexy. It's heartwarming how they each wonder if they're going too far too fast, but also absolutely realistic about the reality that once you get a, er... uh... taste, there kinda is no stopping it. I mean, holy tongue boxes, Barbarella!, they're peeling off each other's clothes in the movie theatre. And "oh, fuck!" the things they are saying to each other...

Giddy Up!
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 17th April 2008

Postby Willowfan » Wed Apr 16, 2008 6:20 pm

Yipeeee! An update--and all steamy too. Very well done-and funny, loved the Willow antics-getting rid of the food. Can't wait for more.
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 17th April 2008

Postby Zampsa1975 » Thu Apr 17, 2008 4:34 am

Yay for another great update-y goodness... liked the naughty movie fun... so more naughtyness to come on Tara's dormroom... I hope her room haves good soundproofing...
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 17th April 2008

Postby amazon » Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:17 am

Woo and hoo!
So great! High level hotness! Can't wait to read the next! Please, please, please update soon :party
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 17th April 2008

Postby PolarBear » Fri Apr 18, 2008 4:10 am

I don't know if it's the lack of sleep or if it's just me, but again I find myself unable to leave any thoughtful feedback. Either way I still do enjoy your writing very much, so maybe I'll just say:

Thank you...

... and actually one thing just popped into my mind: The phone thing. It's funny how people seem to resist many things new. I remember that for years my grandma was all like "I don't have a cell phone and I'll never get one", but after her children bought her one, it was only after few months that she couldn't live without it. I'm curious to find out what's Tara's reason for not having one. Very meaningless detail probably, but it caught my attention.

And now that I've gotten of the ground, I very much loved Willow's inner ramblings, throwing candy bars, smut, the shampoo commercial thing, and... basically everything.
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 17th April 2008

Postby wimpy0729 » Fri Apr 18, 2008 11:13 am

Oh MY! The long-awaited date finally arrives. They're so cute, and I'm totally feeling their lusty thoughts. I loved their thoughts of breaking in the movie theatre and the restrooms of the Stiff Kitten (AKA Hard Clitty). Ah, that brings back good memories. I don't blame them at all for heading back to the dorms so quickly. I think if they'd have kept it up where they were, it could've led to a very embarrassing situation when the theater clean-up guy came though. Oh Fuck indeed.

Now get them two horny lesbos home soon, K? Can't wait to see what's next.


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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 17th April 2008

Postby Zooeys_Bridge » Fri Apr 18, 2008 8:45 pm

Paint_the_Sky SHOOT me in the face right now. I'm away for the weekend and Passover be damned, I'm catching up on your story.


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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 17th April 2008

Postby Shy One » Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:08 pm

Holy freakin' hotness!!!

That was just......mmm mmm good.
I hope that you take us to Tara's dorm room
and soon!
I can't wait for the next update....I hope it's just as smokin' as this
one was.

*scampers off to open the window and cool off*

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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 17th April 2008

Postby taralicious » Sun Apr 20, 2008 11:24 pm

PTS,
Oh fuck, indeed, was that the date we all have been vicariously and voyeuristically waiting for.
Yay for them to pick a movie theater which reminded me of the one of my youth, what with the curtain opening and the music and coming attractions and the red velvet reclining seats with the cup holders.
The cumming attraction between Willow and Tara as they recreated scenes from Last Tango in Paris, shades of Marlon Brando and Maria Schneider with the melted butter, was far more compelling and held their attention, and mine rather than anything the screen was projecting.
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 17th April 2008

Postby Paint the Sky » Tue Apr 22, 2008 11:41 am

Hey all, just responding to feedback, but if all goes to plan I’ll have an update posted on Thursday. The 24th is my birthday, so it’s my little pressie to all of you. It’ll be NC-17 all the way, so all the smutaholics among you will be happy (hopefully)

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once you get a, er... uh... taste, there kinda is no stopping it.


This is very true, their inner smut monkeys have been unleashed.

F-I-N-E


Whenever I see this, I always think F**ked-up, Insecure, Nuerotic, Emotional. I had considered at one point in my life to get it tattooed on my upper arm.


Willowfan – I thought that chucking the food was, hopefully, a very Willow thing, the whole acting without thinking instant fix to a problem. I almost had her eat them cookie monster style :-D


Zampsa1975 – Hey Sami, you make a very good point about soundproofing, the girls will very noisy in the next update. It could prove embarrassing.


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High level hotness!


The next chapter should keep you happy then, more hotness on the way!


PolarBear – The cell phone thing was a bit of filler and a bit of me too. I wonder how people function without one. I too used to say I don’t need one, I’m never getting tied to one of those etc, but now it’s like I couldn’t survive without a mobile. And, with Willow being such a tech-head, it seemed like a normal train of thought for her, plus, one week anniversary, it would make such a romantic gift ;-)


wimpy0729 -
Oh MY! The long-awaited date finally arrives.


I know, I thought I’d never get them there, believe me, I’m as happy as everyone else about it.

Now get them two horny lesbos home soon, K?


I have them home, and they’re very, very, pleased about that.


Zooeys_Bridge – I know very little about Passover, so I hope you didn’t break any tradition or laws by reading this, your resolve is obviously of Willow proportions. Glad you enjoyed it.


Shy One -
I hope that you take us to Tara's dorm room
and soon!


Trust me, they headed straight home. Tara went to her room, and Willow is now playing monopoly with Buffy in hers. Only kidding!!


taralicious -
they recreated scenes from Last Tango in Paris, shades of Marlon Brando and Maria Schneider with the melted butter,


That hadn’t actually occurred to me when I was writing it, so thanks for sticking me with that lovely image. The only way I’d want Marlon Brando with a half pound of butter is if he was in my kitchen baking me a cake. :-D



To all the lurkers, thanks for bumping the view count, hope you enjoyed the movies.
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 17th April 2008

Postby Shy One » Tue Apr 22, 2008 1:21 pm

WOO and HOO!!!!

NC17 update!!!

YES!!!

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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 17th April 2008

Postby taralicious » Tue Apr 22, 2008 11:20 pm

That hadn’t actually occurred to me when I was writing it, so thanks for sticking me with that lovely image

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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 17th April 2008

Postby Paint the Sky » Wed Apr 23, 2008 4:39 pm

It's 12.05am GMT, it's my birthday, I'm in a good mood, so here is the update as promised.

Title: Quiet Saturday Morning’s
Author: Paint the Sky
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: W/T
Disclaimer: AU. No spoilers whatsoever. Oh, forgot to add that I don’t own any of the characters in BTVS, I’m only playing with them.
Feedback: Yeah, sure, why not.
Summary: Shy, newly gay Willow Rosenberg and her first venture into love with an equally shy blonde.
Note: This is my first attempt at any kind of fiction since I left school many, many moons ago. After a long time reading the fics on this site and others I thought why the hell not, give it a whirl, try it on for size and all that.

Chapter 27

Tara practically trailed Willow from the cinema and when she had seen the cab making its way down the road she gave out an ear piercing whistle and gestured wildly from the kerb.

Gaped mouth and staring at her girlfriend with amazement, Willow wondered where she had learnt to whistle like that, its just so…so in control of the situation. She’s sexy as hell like that…I mean like really sexy in a take charge kinda way…

Tara gave her look of amusement, “What? You can’t whistle? You just put your lips together and blow.”

“Yeah? I’d rather put our lips together and suck,” said the laughing redhead pulling Tara into a hug and kissing her on the cheek.

The cab pulled up and Willow was pushed into the back seat quickly followed by her eager girlfriend.

“Where to girls,” the driver asked as he pulled away and eased back into the light evening traffic.

Behind him, sitting as close to Willow without actually sitting in her lap, Tara called out “Sunnydale U, Fischer dorm.”

“Sure thing, blondie,” the driver replied cheerfully.

The cab journey had taken ten minutes, ten frustrating minutes of hand holding, hand squeezing, deep meaningful looks and lip licking. Tara had swallowed hard when Will squeezed her cargo covered thighs together and squirmed in her seat as a short fingernail scratched a circle in the palm of her hand. She looks about ready to explode, and I know how she feels.

After that they had both sat staring ahead, afraid if they looked at each other it would be like the cinema all over again. It was a silent and mutual decision, and the best solution to their problem. Either that or the driver would get a free show in his rear veiw mirror, and despite the mild exhibitionism in the back row, neither of them was willing to risk their reputaton at this point.

Willow’s mind was a blur of images from their previous encounters, but none were as potent as the ones in her imagination now. Their brief encounter in the cinema had upped the ante, opened the floodgates, and let the genie out of the bottle. Stop thinking in clichés Rosenberg, 740 verbal remember…

All Willow was sure of at that moment was that something had changed, innocent intimacy with sweet words and endearments was evolving into something more feral. Her body screamed at her to let it lead the way, don’t think, just act and feel, and give and take. She heard Tara’s words echo in her head, say that again, she shivered as she remembered the hand between her legs, pushing into her, and her lover’s eyes, the iris’s so blue, deep blue, dark with passion and lust, oh fuck indeed, there was no going back, evolution was a forward motion, an adaptation of improvement and development. She thought about her dream, and a small smile played at the corner of her mouth, her blonde without a name, taking her without complications of doubt or shame, a thing of the moment and in the moment. To act and feel without consequence knowing that everything was acceptable and welcomed. That was what Tara gave her, and that was what she gave in return.

The blonde flicked her glance briefly toward Willow, their silence was mutual, but she couldn’t help but wonder what her beautiful girl was thinking about. That quick look registered the concentration on Willow’s face, definitely no babble going on in that head of hers, she’s figuring something out though…

The campus came into view, and the driver followed the signs marking the route to Fischer, both girls gave a small sigh of relief as the cab slowed down after taking a right from the main road and the large brick building loomed closer through the windscreen.

When the cab had pulled up outside the dorm Willow paid the $6.50 fare with a $10 bill, and pulled Tara from the cab telling the driver to keep the change.

Never once letting go of each other they ran through the common areas ignoring the knowing looks from the few students who populated the halls and kept on going until the locked door to Tara’s room stopped their forward motion.

Pushing Tara to the forefront the blonde dug her hand into the front pocket of her leather jeans searching for her key, Willow moulded herself into the contours of her girlfriends back her hands travelling as far as they would reach down Tara’s thighs, firstly down the sides and then the fronts, “I love you in these,” she groaned as she felt the heat of Tara’s skin under the leather. Would it be too pervy to ask her to keep them on?

Tara fumbled the key into the lock as Willow’s hands slid further up, one unbuttoning the silk shirt, the other pawing at her belly, lightly scratching the soft skin. The redhead pushed her thigh between her lover’s legs and pulled Tara back toward it, “Oh god, Willow, you’ve got to stop or we’ll never make it inside,” she uttered through clenched teeth as she pushed down onto the limb between her own. Ooh, don’t stop, never stop…

The blonde placed her hands on the door frame, as Willow pushed harder into her, for fear that her unsteady legs would give way. The last button on her shirt was undone and Willows hand came to rest on the lacy surface of her bra, squeezing and groping she pressed hard at the flesh underneath, her other hand reached for the key and turned it anticlockwise and she then opened the door. With a strong push of her thigh she propelled Tara forward into the doorway. The blonde turned quickly and an outstretched hand grabbed Willow by the collar of her jacket and pulled her into the room and slammed the door behind them.

Within moments they where in each others arms, their lips coming together in a frenzied hunger whose appetite had been building since they left the movie house. They were unrestrained, biting and nipping at anything that strayed too close to teeth, tongues and lips were fair game, and more than once pleasure was heightened with pain.

Willow felt her back hit the door and Tara’s full weight was immediately pressed against her. She felt the heat of Tara’s skin burn through the light cotton of her vest and she pushed herself into it. She managed to shrug out of her jacket and push Tara’s shirt from her shoulders, the silk sliding to the floor, all the while keeping her lips on the blonde’s.

Tara’s hips pushed hard against her and she widened her stance and pulled the blonde into her. Willow’s hands found their way to Tara’s ass and she held her tight and began a slow grind of her hips. She felt her wetness seep through her panties, she was practically dripping.

Finally the kiss ended, and they looked at each other intently as Tara pushed her thigh against Willow’s pussy. I’ve never seen Tara look at me like that…fuck, I love it, she’s making me wetter just looking at me.

“Tell me what you Will, don’t hold anything back,” she gasped as she felt the redhead open her bra and scratch her nails along her shoulder-blades. C’mon Will, where’s your potty mouth?

“I want you,” Willow groaned, her movements grinding the seam of her pants into her now very wet center, “I want everything, I want to fuck you, I want to fuck you hard, make you scream my name when you cum, I want to make love to you, I want to hold you while you sleep, and I want to do it all over again when you wake.”

Willow pulled the bra from Tara’s body and latched her mouth onto creamy white skin, in series of small kisses she found her way to the nipple and sucked it hard into her mouth her tongue flicking at its hardness.

Tara gave a deep groan, a guttural sound that came from deep within her and she pulled Willow’s head harder against her breast, one hand held her there, the other reached down between them and this time there was no fumbling as she expertly undid the button of her lover’s pants and quickly pulled down the zipper.

Willow pushed against her hand, her action explicit permission for whatever Tara wanted to do. The blonde wasted no time in seeking out her goal, and a mere moment later she felt her fingers slide into warmth and abundant wetness, she felt a delicious pain at her breast as Willow’s teeth lightly scraped against taught sensitive flesh, and she pushed forward into a hot well of want.

“Oh God, Will, I want all that too. You feel soo good, so warm and wet, I love being inside you. Fucking you, pouring my love into you, you make me want to be wild, unrestrained. I need you inside me, fucking me Willow, fucking me hard,” something had taken over her. She remembered the Tara she had been in the shower, the one that wasn’t shy, the one who hoped that the redheaded girl could be the one to draw her out and now all possibilities lay before her and Willow’s love had released her.

“God, yes,” two words mumbled against her breast before Willow lifted her head and kissed her hard on the mouth. The leather was undone and Willow plunged her hand through blonde curls, and she felt the lace of Tara’s panties scratch the back of her hand as it moved further into the confined space.

They tried to make it across the room to the bed, kissing and fucking, stumbling and almost tripping before it came apparent that they wouldn’t make it without mishap.

They stood in the middle of the room, and looked at each other again, the kiss had ended but their hands still worked magic.

“I think we better lose your pants,” Tara said breathlessly as Willow stroked her clit, light touches that drove her crazy and made her hips inscribe circles in the space between them.

“Can we keep yours on, I want to feel the leather against me,” Willow felt her pussy clench as she spoke and Tara broke into a broad smile and flexed her fingers against the tightness that surrounded them. My girl really loves the leather.

“I’ll take that as a yes,” she said as she removed her hand from Tara’s pants and brought her fingers to her mouth licking the nectar from them as the blonde sank to her knees to untie Willow’s boots. Never once looking down, Tara slid her hand from Willow’s pants and licked her fingers clean, her eyes locked onto the redheads as they both took pleasure from the others actions.

The weight of candy in Willow’s pants had caused them to pool around her ankles and as she untied the laces Tara nuzzled against the warm skin of Willow’s thighs and her mouth watered at the scent of her lover’s arousal. Unable to resist she placed light kisses against the redhead’s mound.

Willow’s hands gripped at her shoulders, holding tight, pulling her in.

“You smell wonderful,” she placed a hand behind Willow’s right knee, “lift your foot,” the boot fell to floor under its own weight, and the sock was removed “I want to slide my tongue into you,” Tara murmured into her, loving the shiver that ran through her lover, and she moved a hand to the back of the left knee. Willow lifted her foot and again the boot fell and she felt Tara pull her sock off, and take her foot from the leg of her pants.

The redhead almost overbalanced as her foot never reached the floor, but she quickly steadied as Tara held her calf and moved the lower part of her leg onto her shoulder. With nothing behind her Willow leant forward as Tara pulled the crotch of her panties across and teased her clit with a questing tongue and insistent thumb.

She bucked against Tara’s mouth, the blonde stretching her tongue as far as she could to give Willow the contact she needed. Arousal dripped on to it like warm honey, and she greedily lapped it up. She tickled her tongue through wet folds, maddening stabs and licks that frustrated and satisfied in equal measure. She tastes as good as she smells.

“Oh, fuck, Tara, bed now, please, need more, want more, want you,” Willow whimpered pulling at blonde hair and pushing forward as much as much as she dared giving their precarious position.

She felt the blonde try to rise and Willow straightened and helped her up. Tara brought her face close and the redhead could smell her own arousal on her lover’s lips, “Taste yourself Will, lick my mouth clean.”

Her blood was roaring in her ears and she barely heard Tara’s enticing whisper, but a flick of the blonde’s tongue on her upper lip was enough to make the message clear.

She cleaned the blonde’s lips and licked her chin, she clamped her mouth on Tara’s and sucked the blonde’s tongue until no taste remained but her lover’s own.

Willow shook her foot out of her pants, and slipped her underwear off and to the floor, leaving her free to pull Tara toward the bed without risk of falling. The taste of her own pussy on her lover’s mouth increased the urgency of her need and she inwardly sighed as she felt the bed nudge against the backs of her legs. She fell back gently taking Tara with her, the resultant fall positioning the blonde between her thighs. Holy shit, leather feels good against me, I think I’m kinky and I don’t care.

Willow arched up and felt the smoothness of leather against her, the sensation was maddening and her cunt flooded as her arousal was taken new heights. She wrapped her legs around Tara’s hips and pulled her hard into her, Tara raised her upper body and put her weight on her elbows. She watched her lover’s face as she ground herself against Willow’s pussy. Her eyes, so green and liquid, were hidden from her, being tightly shut, her mouth, lips swollen and inviting, was open and air was gulped down in deep lungfuls. Her cheeks were flushed with effort and desire, she was a picture of rapture, lost to the pleasure that Tara gave her. I love what I do to her, and I love what she makes me want to do.

“Will, you look so beautiful, so wanton, I always want to make you feel this way,” she said softly and her reward was green eyes looking at her, into her, down into her very soul.

From somewhere Willow found the strength to roll them over and she now straddled leather and hips. She pushed her slick pussy down onto Tara’s mound, and with a slow slide back and forth she rubbed herself against the seams. Her lover’s hands were on her hips, guiding and encouraging her movements. She crossed her arms in front of her torso and gripped the hem of her vest and pulled it off in on movement. She quickly removed her bra, revealing her small breasts to her lover who lay beneath her gentling undulating, providing her with enough friction to just hold her on the edge of all out passion.

Tara’s hands moved upward from Willow’s hips, fingertips left hot trials along her sides and she cupped milky white breasts. Her lover threw her head back, red hair damp with sweat stuck to her forehead, breasts pushed into her palms, nipples as hard as pebbles. She licked her lips, her eyes raking over Willow’s nakedness, and focusing on short red curls, guarding the entrance to ecstasy dripping with desire that coated dark navy leather with a sheen of lust.

“Ride me Willow, push hard into me, let me see you cum. Let me hear you scream,” it was a command that her lover immediately obeyed, a servant to Tara’s desire as well as her own.

She pushed down hard and her pussy opened on her lover’s mound, the folds spreading her clit making contact with that exquisite surface. She leaned back slightly as Tara pushed up into her, she growled and grunted her inhibitions away. She moaned loudly as Tara pulled and twisted her impossibly sensitive nipple and groaned expletives as her lover slipped a hand between her legs.

Leather and skin, the combination was too much for her. She felt her climax build, her core tightened, stomach muscles clenched. She pushed down hard and two fingers slid easily into her, stroking and coaxing, unrelentingly bringing her head long into a maelstrom of pleasure.

“Oh, fuck, fuck, more, more, harder,” she cried, pushing hard against groin and fingers.

Tara was mesmerised by her lover, she revelled in Willow’s freedom, she felt hot juices splash on her hand and a nipple throb between her fingers. She heard Willow’s plea and withdrew her fingers and slammed back into her with a third. She fucked her lover as hard as she could, she curled her fingers and rubbed at the rippling muscles she felt beneath. She was as lost in desire as Willow, her body straining upwards, sweat trickling over her face and breasts. Willow’s orgasm was hers too.

With a final thrust she held her hand still, her fingers drummed out a rhythm that resulted in a primal scream from her lover above her. Racking shudders shook both of them and Willow bucked wildly on her hand, shallow rasping breaths left her lungs and Tara orchestrated all this with subtle movements of her sheathed digits.

Tara had felt each and every contraction of the pussy that wrapped around her, bands of muscle had gripped and pulled her further in, squeezing, constricting her movement, until finally they relaxed, the spasms lessening in their intensity to be replaced by a deep steady pulse that beat on her fingertips. Willow’s cunt felt superheated, steamy and humid, liquid love that flowed and pooled in her hand, and its aroma filled the room. Fuck, she feels amazing, I could stay like this forever. Her heartbeat is here, in my hand, on my fingers, I do this to her, and I want to do it for the rest of my life.

With her senses finally reined in Willow lifted her hips slightly and felt Tara’s fingers slide from her, more wetness followed and she gave a little shudder as she felt it coat her labia and drip from her.

The air was momentarily cold on Tara’s wet fingers and it served to bring her mind back from its dissection of Willow’s orgasm, she smiled hazily at her lover and Willow bent forward and laid her length along Tara’s body. Bellies and breasts mashed together, skin kissing skin, sweat mingling, warmed between hot bodies.

Strong arms held her close and her hands pushed into Tara’s hair and she brought her lips close to her lover’s ear and whispered “I loved how you fucked me, now I want you feel what I feel.”

Tara quivered at sensation of hot breath on her skin as Willow’s lips moved to her throat, little kisses and touches of her tongue, a confident hand kneaded her breast and a hard naked thigh pushed against her center. Willow inched her way down Tara’s skin, deliberately slow, drawing out small moans and whimpers from her lover whose frustration level was approaching critical.

“Will, don’t go slow, it’s killing me,” she groaned as the redheads mouth closed on a stiff nub, her hips flew up when Willow bit down on her nipple, and she wrapped a leg around Willow’s and pulled it tight against her quivering core, “oh, shit, that hurts soo good,” she growled pumping her hips harder into dense muscle.

With a soft pop the nipple pulled from Willow’s mouth, “Anything you want, baby,” she said punctuating her words with kisses as she backcrawled down Tara’s body.

Despite urgent hands at her shoulders pushing her she hovered over the blonde’s navel, licking the sweat from it and swirling her tongue around the indentation. She both heard and felt the growl of frustration that came from her girl, and she gave a little grin and carried on eating out Tara’s belly button.

“I love this bit of you, it’s so soft, it tastes so sweet, it’s perfect,” she mused, giving it little kisses and gentle nibbles. Willow arrowed her tongue and pushed the tip down into Tara’s navel, she flickered and teased and sucked hard, reddening the skin and biting hard.

Tara gripped the headboard as Willow’s tongue and mouth lingered at her naval, she bucked her hips in the hope that her lover would move on down to where she really needed that flickering tease monster to be. She felt like she was going to spontaneously combust, Willow’s tonguing, as erotic as it was, wasn’t enough to quell the fire in her core… Jesus, Will, eight inches south there’s something that tastes better than my belly button... I need to tell her…She bucked hard again as Willow pushed her tongue deep into her, oh, shit, that’s really good, but lower Will please…oh, fuck, please…

Tara could take no more, her hands flew off the headboard, and suddenly Willow’s head was yanked up by her short red hair, and Tara, sitting up as much as she could, her elbow supporting her weight, fixed her lover with a narrow gaze that made Willow’s blood run hotter, “Sweetie, I swear if you don’t get your mouth on my pussy within thirty seconds we’re getting dressed and going dancing, and not hot the sweaty kind either, I’ll keep you so far away from me, we wouldn’t look out of place at a church social.” With her heart hammering and her lungs fit to burst, she fell back onto the duvet and amazed at her own calm tone despite that every cell in her body was tense with need.

Even though Willow couldn’t be sure if Tara meant it or not she was taking no chances and scrambled back in double quick time to remove the blonde’s boots, and holding her pants at the ankles she pulled the leathers off in sweaty stages. Tara’s lacy panties followed the leathers to the floor and climbing back onto the bed she manoeuvred herself between Tara’s knees, pushed her thighs apart and hefted one leg over her shoulder.

Willow salivated at the sight before her, Tara’s pussy glistened with the evidence of her desire, it was slick and warm on her tongue as she delved in and lapped greedily at what was on offer. Between those delicious folds she found her prize and licked and nibbled until Tara’s clit hardened and stood proud from under its slippery hood. She felt Tara’s heel rub hard against her spine, digging in, pulling her closer, holding her in place, while the blonde rode her face. Closing her lips around the precious bundle, she held it gently she let it pulse and twitch against her tongue.

Tara’s gasps and moans of pleasure filled the room as she once again gripped the headboard, ignoring the creaking and sounds of straining from the wood, Willow’s mouth was the centre of her universe and her hips moved in orbit around it. Her body was flushed, blood pumped hard in every vein, and sounded like thunder in her ears. Every muscle and tendon was stretched and taut under the delicious torture administered by Willow’s mouth.

The redhead slipped her hands under Tara’s ass, she scratched at the soft skin, and ran her fingers over the swell of pliable muscles. She used her thumbs to open Tara wider, pulling her apart, she let the clit slip from her mouth she pushed her tongue deep into the blonde’s cunt. Flexing and curling it massaged the tight walls that held it captive, and Willow swallowed down nectar that flowed like wine. Sweet and musky it coated her throat and tasted like heaven.

Tara’s moans became growls. Primal noise, forged in the heat of lust, need, passion and love. It was a clarion call and her lover responded.

With one last long broad swipe from cunt to clit Willow pushed her body up and over Tara’s and hungrily sucked on her nipples, moving from one to the other over and over again. Her fingers slid and slipped over Tara’s clit, circling, nipping, and pulling.

Willow’s cunt was on fire, her hips humping against the mattress, she felt the duvet beneath her bunch up and she rubbed her herself against the fabric. The lack of friction was almost painful. Tara’s knee thumped against her hip as the blonde groaned and writhed and with a swift movement she swung her leg over her lover’s thigh and ground down onto her. Her wetness slicked the smooth skin and her hips found the rhythm she craved.

The ache in Tara’s arm finally forced her to let go of the headboard and her hands automatically went to her lover’s body. She stretched a hand down Willow’s back, and grabbed at her ass, the other reached Willow’s breast.

Willow’s fingers slid further down and she pushed them deep into Tara’s cunt, she fucked her hard and fast, her own imminent orgasm driving her on. She flexed her wrist and angled her thumb against Tara’s clit, pushing it hard against her, manipulating her desire to an even higher level.

“Cum with me Tara,” she grunted, “close, so fucking close,” she gasped pushing hard on the blonde’s thigh.

The blonde dug her heels into the bed and levered her hips high into the air as her body went rigid hearing her lover’s words. Her back arched and her shoulders took all of her weight as her world went supernova in an instant.

From somewhere Tara found a word, a name, Willow, and it was screamed as she fell headlong into spasms of pleasure. Deep ripples and contractions that whirlpooled and sucked her in, that took her to a place where her soul broke free and soared among the stars that exploded behind her eyes.

Tara’s name joined her own in the ether as Willow’s climax ripped through her, she flooded over the blonde’s thigh as ground down on the taut muscle, she felt pain and pleasure as Tara roughly pushed her fingers between her ass cheeks rubbing the delicate skin near her anus, sweat and slickness lubricating the way. Her lover held her breast in a clamp-like grip, the blonde oblivious in the throws of her own pleasure to what she was doing.

The summit reached they both began their descent, deep breaths in a synchronous rhythm calmed the heart and slowly conscious thought superseded unconscious act. Muscles that been tight and rigid regained plasticity, and a comfortable ache was all that remained.

Sweaty tremulous bodies rolled together to lie side by side, pulled together so close they could feel each others heartbeat, and limbs became entangled, bathing in mixed juices of mutual satiation.

They gazed at each other, eyes bright and alert, shimmering with emotion, smiles pulling at the corner of their mouths. Faces flushed with heat and blood, and shiny with sweat were mere inches from the other.

This was what it was like to be in love. This was what it was like to be loved, and this was what it was like to love in return.

There was no need to speak the words, what they felt at that moment remained unspoken, but they both knew how the other felt.

The air was thick with it, and the bed soaked in it, cunts were slick with it, and their hearts were full with it.

Their love needed no words when it was all around them and in them.

Long neglected lips met in a kiss, soft and gentle, full of familiarity. A kiss that was prelude to sleep, and was given in grateful thanks for two hearts that beat as one.
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 24th April 2008

Postby chance » Wed Apr 23, 2008 4:49 pm

Dibs. HA! It was mine. Excellent.

We like to update on the same days. That's crazy. (Of course, you update on days I don't, so I'm not sure who is following who around here.)

Oh! And HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

As for your actual story:

I love it when writers let them fuck. So often, we see the making love side of Willow and Tara -- and if not that, then it tends to be way to the kink, BDSM, etc. I love that in your story, not only do they fuck, but in that, they realize the full extent of their love. Bravo. Very nice.

The smut's great.

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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 24th April 2008

Postby Shy One » Wed Apr 23, 2008 5:30 pm

*faints*
*THUNK*

I think you broke me.
In a good way.

Thank you.
:blush

That was awesome......more please?

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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 24th April 2008

Postby Zampsa1975 » Thu Apr 24, 2008 3:03 am

Yay for great smutty update-y goodness... I still hope Tara's room soundproofing is good so that there isn't embarassing comments by Tara's dorm mates...

PS: Happy birthday :balloons
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 24th April 2008

Postby katjetson » Thu Apr 24, 2008 10:05 am

Happy birthday to us ALL! Mercy me! I could feeeeel their inhibitions peeling away like all that unwanted clothing. (Well, except for the leathers...) These two really went for the gold, huh? Again I say, it's so true to life. The sweet, young and shy love blossoming into confident fucking. Ah, I remember it well... Thank you so much for this adorable, funny and completely sexy tale. I always thrill when I see it's been updated.

“Tell me what you [want] Will, don’t hold anything back,” she gasped as she felt the redhead open her bra and scratch her nails along her shoulder-blades. C’mon Will, where’s your potty mouth?


I laughed, I blushed, I longed to hear Willow's potty mouth, too! Hooray for my morning warm fuzzies!
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 24th April 2008

Postby amazon » Thu Apr 24, 2008 10:53 am

I C-c-can't breathe! Need air!

AMAZING :applause

Oh, and happy birthday :balloons
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 24th April 2008

Postby wimpy0729 » Thu Apr 24, 2008 11:11 am

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! And thank you for giving us this kind of present. Wow, that was some hot monkey lovin! I agree with what was said earlier, that it was great the way you let them fuck. I'm not complaining at all when it's all sweet and gentle, no sir, but we all know there was some good hot fucking going on. And you gave this to us in a very excellent way, with the pumping and the slick cunts (oh my). You definitely took me to a very nice visual place. Now I need to wipe the drool from my chin and take a very cold shower.

Thanks for such a hot update, and I hope your birthday was a hot one too.


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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 24th April 2008

Postby PolarBear » Thu Apr 24, 2008 3:42 pm

Holy shit! That's some very, very hot stuff. Write something hotter and someone could die, and that someone would die happy.

Thank you and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 24th April 2008

Postby taralicious » Fri Apr 25, 2008 2:24 pm

PTS,
I hope you painted the town red, or any color of your choosing, to celebrate your birthday but any concievable scenario to commemerate the act of producing you, unless on a par with Willow and Tara's, falls immeasurably shorter than the act which we all voyeuristically were treated to.
The only way to wrap my head around all that their Holy Communion with each other signifies is to think of it in terms of Willow and Tara eating of each other's bodies and drinking of each other's nectar to form a transcendant union free of the moral ambiguity and taint which has been self-imposed by millenia of our ancestors.
The raw, feral, undiluted savagery of their primal lovemaking was a channeling of the spirits from the dawn of mankind.
Willow and Tara hungrily devoured each other as the most pure and natural expression of the recognition that they were the other's life-partner.
Within the coccon of their love-making, there was no self-doubt, no angst about 'is my partner comfortable about going this far or doing it this way', and certainly no heed given to pleasure or pain thresholds.
These will naturally be issues for future lovemaking sessions but for this first of a lifetime of such sessions, their very souls were attuned to such a synchronicity that it brought tears to my eyes.
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 24th April 2008

Postby Guest » Sat Apr 26, 2008 2:32 am

Hi Paint the Sky,

First and foremost, apologies for not responding to all of your newest updates. I had all the while been reading them but work and study commitments created a temporary barrier against feedback.

The last chapters were highly satisfying and after having reached the smut scene, I must say that the unconstrained progression in their desire and love felt raw yet unforced. In Chapter 25 specifically, I liked how you chose to set the tempo; it was a delicate merge of emotions and enacting of these emotions. Letting Willow be the first to be overwhelmed by her feelings was a scene I could relate to and that had the positive attribute of my being touched by your storyline. Everything has been resounding in free movements and it feels enticing to have the two of them completely let go of their emotions and be true to each other.

Vi’

P.S: Happy Birthday once again and thank you for the unexpected present ^^
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Re: Quiet Saturday Mornings Update 24th April 2008

Postby Nenyath » Tue Apr 29, 2008 1:58 am

Thank goodness for sweet, uncomplicated, and angst free fics! I'm really enjoying this one, Paint the Sky, they are so sweet, our Willow and Tara but also Faith and Buffy, nice to see yet another side of Faith!

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