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Re: Please 13

Postby Mikaelah Braenna » Sun Apr 25, 2004 4:17 pm

:thud



Words seem to fail me right now ...and my mouth refuses to close ... In need of a cold shower ... :thud



~Mikaelah

Willow: "Where would you go? If you felt lost and alone? ..."

Tara: "To You..."


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Re: Please 13

Postby pipsberg » Sun Apr 25, 2004 7:48 pm

Hmmmmm, yummy! More please.

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

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Re: Please 13

Postby BFR from Paris » Mon Apr 26, 2004 4:43 am

Quote:
well, 'fuck me gently with a chainsaw'
I'll say... :sheep :sheep :sheep

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Re: Please 13

Postby AmberAlysonlover » Mon Apr 26, 2004 9:40 am

:thud thats all I can say about that!

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Re: Please 13

Postby littlecrazy80 » Mon Apr 26, 2004 11:54 am

:thud :drool :thud :drool :thud :drool :thud :drool :thud :drool



*lil´c*

"Okay, we’re here, we’re queer, let’s kick this shit into gear," Five by Five (Taras Shadow)



SweetAmber

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Re: Please 13

Postby sam darls » Mon Apr 26, 2004 1:15 pm

OH. MY.GOD..:thud :thud :thud That was..wow..:drool Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

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Re: Please 13

Postby willowhanded » Mon Apr 26, 2004 9:42 pm

isa ..

and then you.



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go ..f ...find.. girl...





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GIRLFRIEND . KTHNXWONDERFULUPDATEGOTTAGOBYE:thud thudthudthudthudthudthudthudthudthudthudthudthudthudthudthudthudthudthudthudthudthud

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Re: Please 13

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon May 03, 2004 6:20 am

WillowPowered – Thanks so much. Glad to make you…



Washi – Hot indeed :grin



Yvonne – Painful yourself :fuck me gently with a chainsaw? Pretty sure that would hurt (and not in a good way).



Mikaelah Braenna – Well then you probably liked it. :smirk



pipsberg – Hey there! :wave . More sometime. I write this fic whenever the mood strikes so when it strikes, more here. Thanks.



BFR from Paris – Ha ha. Glad you liked.



AmberAlysonlover – Ha ha. Glad you liked and were speechless.



Romy – Thanks.



sam darls – Thanks. You’re all making me smile this morning.



willowhanded – Hope you found that gf. Tee hee.



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Re: Please 13

Postby Stroke of Luck » Mon May 03, 2004 12:02 pm

OH oh Debra i guess i have to tell my baby about this update (but she already knows nearly all my wishes/dreams) hehehhe:blush lol well some scenes were really good, some i didnt like that much, but u cant get together everyones taste *shrugs* but still me loves it:D :bounce :drool :applause more plssssssssss:)



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

Even in death Baby, i´ll never leave u!

Edited by: Stroke of Luck at: 5/3/04 11:03 am
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Please 14

Postby JustSkipIt » Wed Jun 02, 2004 5:54 pm

Natti - Thanks. Yep, always going to be some for some people’s taste and some for others…


Title – Please Part 14A Girls Night Out

Author– JustSkipit - Debra

E-mail – No thanks. Post in the thread.

Feedback – Sure. I’m experimenting with first person again so bring it on.

Spoilers–None

Rating– Is there something past NC-17? NC-18?

Disclaimer – Willow and Tara and any other character that appeared in the syndicated television show “Buffy the Vampire Slayer” is property of Joss and Mutant Enemy, I’m only borrowing them and am not making any money off them Thanks.

Thoughts in italics!


I finished my shower and entered the bedroom to find Tara already nearly dressed. “Wow,” I commented surprised that she had dressed so quickly, “that was quick.” Tara had laid an outfit on the bed for me: jeans and a nearly sheer white blouse. My lover was also wearing jeans with a black leather vest which looked very fucking hot. In fact, I wanted to take her right there and then.

Anya had returned from her honeymoon complaining that she hadn’t had a bachelorette party. Apparently she sat next another set of newlyweds on the plane to Hawaii and had heard about the woman’s wild bachelorette party. “We’re going out this Saturday night,” Anya had declared Wednesday afternoon and no amount of pleading could convince her to change her mind.

She called and reserved a table at Sunnydale’s only male strip club. We all argued that if we simply had a party at the Bronze, Dawn, Giles, and Xander could all come but she said that part of the point of a bachelorette party was to keep the men and children out. Then I said that the two of us had no interest in seeing mostly naked men. Anya being Anya declared that we should simply imagine mostly naked women and that she and Buffy would have enough fun for everyone.

As I was still thinking of the things I would love to do with Tara’s body, I felt her arms wrap around my waist. Her lips were touching my ear as she whispered, “I’m not thinking that I’ll be very excited about the show.”

“Me neither,” I agreed, noting how her arms were brushing up against my breasts, my nipples hardening already.

“I’ll need something to keep me entertained,” Tara teased.

“What were you thinking of, my Mistress?” I asked hopefully. I didn’t know if she wanted to play but it was certainly worth the chance.

“I had a few ideas, my kitten,” Tara whispered as her fingertips moved to my nipples, beginning to twist and tug at them.

“Any you want to share with your kitten?” I asked as I felt the wetness growing between my legs.

“Go ahead and get dressed,” Tara whispered, “I set out your clothes.”

As I moved to pick up her selections I decided to egg her on a little: “I was surprised that you didn’t want me in a skirt,” I said. Of course it would get her. The most basic rule I should know is to address her correctly.

I looked up to see her smiling her beautiful lop-sided smile while I quickly dressed, hoping for a punishment before going out. Perhaps she would pepper my ass until it was tender and let me serve her so I could feel the heat and the wetness throughout the evening. God I hoped so. My lover sat on the edge of the bed patting her lap. Her teasing tone made it clear that she was going to make it a fun evening for both of us. “Not only questioning your Mistress but forgetting to address her correctly,” she clucked her tongue.

I kept my head down, both to be subservient and to hide the smile spreading across my face and pulled my pants and panties around my ankles before lying across my Mistress’s lap. “I’m so sorry, Mistress Tara,” I told her as I folded my fingers together behind my neck. I wondered if I was already making a mess on her black jeans and found the thought both exciting and nerve-wracking. If so she might want to punish me or make me serve her either of which was exciting and scary. The being out of control. Being in her control.

I could almost feel her smirk as Tara told me, “Oh I’m sure it won’t.” I smiled again knowing that it would certainly happen again. Forgetting to address my Mistress correctly was a way to receive my punishment and it had been sorely lacking lately. Or maybe not sorely… The first spank was light but they grew progressively harder as I counted and thanked my Mistress. She had become quite the expert on dispensing punishment and I could think of few things I preferred to laying across her lap counting out the strokes, at least for starters.

The spanks were getting more intense and my voice rose as tears came to my eyes. My Mistress gave me a few more spanks after the tears started. Then I felt her hand caressing my warm bottom. “Warm,” she breathed.

“Thank you, Mistress,” I told her as I felt her sliding out from under me.

“Lie right here,” she instructed me. She had turned my body as she moved so that my upper body lay on the bed while my legs hung over the side. The fact that my pants and panties were around my ankles left me feeling completely defenseless. She pulled my hands from behind my neck and put them behind my back. “I’ll be back in a minute,” she informed me and I wondered if she was going to give me more punishment.

When she returned I felt her hand on my back, holding me firmly to the bed. “Mistress Tara,” I begged, “may I please pleasure you to make up for my impertinence?” I was dripping onto the bed and wondered just how wet she was.

Her hand stayed in place as she whispered in my ear, “We don’t have that much time, kitten.” Then I felt both her hands on my back and wondered what she was doing. Fingers probed in my wetness and between my ass cheeks. I jumped involuntarily at the surprising feel of her fingertip tracing a circle on my tight hole but her other hand held me down, gripping my hair. Then the shocking feeling of her soft tongue, circling my opening.

“Oh Gods, Mistress Tara,” I moaned, unable to believe the sensation.

After a moment or two she pulled away. “That’s a good start,” she declared as she took one hand from my back.

“Thank you, Mistress,” I whimpered. Then I felt her fingers on my tight hole again. They were wet with lubricant and she quickly slid inside as shock waves traveled through my body. Her finger was moving inside me, relaxing my ring of muscle and I felt myself grinding against the bedspread. I could come if she would allow it from the amazing sensation of her dominating me so thoroughly and the friction on my soaking clit. Then she pulled out and I moaned in disappointment. A second later two fingers pressed against my opening, even more wet than before. As my rosebud blossomed under her thrusts and I groaned into the bed, I could feel more and more wetness on my hole and seeming to flow into me. She must have been pouring lube along the channel formed by her fingers.

“Kitten,” she whispered as she continued thrusting, “tonight I am going to fuck your hot little asshole with my cock.”

I ground my teeth as I tried desperately to avoid coming at her words. “Yes, Mistress,” I gasped, “please … take me. I’m yours.”

“I want you ready for my cock though,” she said and I didn’t have the time to wonder what she meant before I felt a butt plug sliding into my hole. She held it firm as she instructed me, “Pull up your pants, kitten.”

What? I thought, shocked, she wants me to wear this out? And apparently she did because after I pulled up my pants and panties she smirked at me. “I have to go wash my hands,” she informed me as I dropped to my knees. She ran her hand over the bed and taunted me: “You got the bed all wet and messy, kitten.”

“I’m sorry Mistress,” I groaned, attempting to become more used to the unfamiliar sensation of the plug and wondering if she was really going to make me keep it all night. I couldn’t imagine going out for Anya’s party like this. At the same time, the excitement of the secret was nearly as arousing as the physical sensation.

Tara went to wash her hands and returned, revisiting the subject of the mess on the bed. “When we get home, we will see how sorry you are,” she teased. I had my head focused on the floor and felt the hot blush on my cheeks. Would people be able to see that something was going on? Would people know our game? Then her fingers were nimbly tying a choker around my neck and she lifted my chin, guiding me to my feet. “I’d rather this was your collar but we’ll wait until we get home, sweetie,” she told me.

“Thank you, Tara,” I told her, kissing her softly.

She kissed me back and told me, “See, I told you I had some ideas to make the evening more interesting.” We joined Buffy downstairs and Tara took the keys, saying that she would drive to pick up Anya.

“Why isn’t Willow driving?” Buffy asked since that was the habit.

“She wants to drink tonight,” Tara smoothly lied, “so I said I would drive. “

“I can drive,” Buffy offered and I heard Tara think, “I’d rather one of us drove even if we were drinking.”

“I agree, my Mistress,” I thought back at her, amused that I could address her that way and gratified at the blush that spread across her face. As we drove, I could feel the plug in my ass (how could I not?). It was initially uncomfortable but arousing at the same time. She had used so much lube that it didn’t hurt and seemed quite secure. Each bump in the road jostled it slightly and I started to wonder if she wasn’t doing it intentionally when she hit a pothole and then looked at me with her sexy smirk.

We pulled into a parking space just next to Anya’s car and got out to find her leaning on the driver’s side door. “You’re late,” she announced and waved her hand around the parking lot. “Just look,” she complained, “all these women are here before us and they’ll be closer to the sexy men and their penises.”

“I should have driven slower,” I hear Tara muttering under her breath. She placed her hand on my lower back, guiding me into the club and told Anya, “I’m sure there will be room.” I wasn’t exactly sure what she was referring to but the way the plug was stretching my muscles there would be room for whatever she wanted to do. Oh god, when we got home. And if she decided to punish me first… Jesus God!

We entered the club, not surprised by the pounding music, bright lights, or the testosterone in the air. The table Anya had reserved was by the stage—unfortunately—and a waiter wearing a bowtie and little else came over to take drink orders. My lover ordered me a margarita with a shot of tequila as a chaser and a beer for herself. Buffy and Anya both decided that mine sounded good and copied the order.

An hour and a half later, it seemed that Tara would definitely be driving us home and that Xander would have to come pick Anya up at the end of the night. Buffy and Anya were having a drinking contest in honor of the party and had had three drinks each. The more they drank, the wilder they got and both were enjoying quite rabid heterosexuality, catcalling the dancers, putting dollars in their G-strings, even exchanging deep kisses with a few of the sweaty men. Anya tried to convince Tara and I to engage in the game but Tara said no thank you to the ex-demon and told me that she had already gotten as close to a penis as she wanted.

I turned to whisper in her ear, “The only one I want to be close to is yours.” I was happy to see her gulp.

After a few more minutes she excused herself to go to the restroom. By the time she returned, I had started to wonder what was taking so long. Between the couple of drinks and the plug in my ass, I was feeling incredibly horny and I couldn’t wait for my lover to take me. “You were gone a long time,” I told her, using my sad little puppy-dog face to let her know that I missed her.

“I called Xander while I was there,” she explained. “Told him that he would have to come pick Anya up.”

“When can we go home?” I whispered in her ear, tacking on, “Mistress.”

“Soon, kitten,” she assured me as her hand dropped onto my lap under the table. She started just resting her fingers on my leg as she had been before but quickly started stroking my jeans, nearing my arousal. I had stopped being aware of Anya, or Buffy, or the dancers or any of the rest of it. All I could think of was my lover and the way she would surely take me as soon as we got home. I could feel her tense excitement and couldn’t wait to serve her.

“May I go to the restroom, Tara?” I asked obediently.

She nodded and whispered in my ear, “Be quick, kitten.”

I stood and made my way quickly through the club. With every step, I could feel the plug jostling in my ass and it was making me even more horny. I had to figure out how to take care of my needs without disturbing it and I noted the abundant lube around my ass and on my panties. Oh Goddess, this was going to be amazing. My lover had never fucked me like that and I couldn’t wait. There were so many women in the bathroom, washing their hands and fixing their makeup that I had to wait a few minutes to get to the sink and wash up.

I stepped into the hallway and started back toward our table but was surprised as arms folded around my waist from behind. Fingers brushed my necklace and I heard Tara’s voice in my ear: “Come this way, kitten.” We stepped through a door and my lover quickly locked it behind us.

I dropped to my knees keeping my head down and hands behind my back while attempting to determine where we were. From that vantage point, I could see the tile floor, the door, a toilet, and a urinal. We were in the men’s bathroom! I waited for her instruction, unable to believe that we were in the men’s bathroom or understand why. “This is the m-men’s bathroom, Mistress,” I nervously said.

Strong fingers wove into my hair and she pulled my head back slightly. “We won’t be disturbed, kitten,” she assured me, “the dancers all use the one in their dressing room.” Before I could speak she kissed me hard, thrusting her tongue into my mouth and taking exactly what she wanted. She pulled away, appearing satisfied by my raged breathing.

“The boys only use this room for one thing,” she informed me. One thing? What thing would they use this for if they have… Ok. I have to admit that my brain wasn’t really functioning all that well. Tara’s hands were unfastening her jeans and she opened the button-flys just enough to expose her strap-on. I wondered when she had put it on and realized that she must have done it when she had gone to the restroom. But the harness? She had to have put that on while I was in the shower. Oh Goddess, she had planned this all along.

Unbelievably she rolled a condom onto her ever-hard prick and then stepped closer, winding her fingers in my hair. “Do what the boys do in this room, kitten,” she ordered. I leaned closer unable to believe what we were doing. I had little interest in giving her a blowjob and was sure it couldn’t feel good to her but it was so fucking hot. Here I was on the floor of a bathroom, on my knees, sucking on my Mistress’s cock. I was serving her and loving it. I knew that she would always find more ways to punish me, more ways to pleasure me as long as I submitted to her will and gave up all control. My mouth worked her cock as if she could feel what I was doing, licking and sucking, taking as much as I could. I imagined that it was her clit and how good I was making her feel by working it so well. I could hear her encouraging me, calling me her kitten, and saying how lovely I looked, serving her on my knees.

Then suddenly she pulled away and I fell forward slightly, hitting her thighs with my face. I looked up and smiled at her. “Thank you, Mistress Tara,” I whispered.

A smirk spread over her face as she asked, “Thank me for what, kitten?”

“Thank you for letting me suck your cock in this bathroom, like the boys do, Mistress,” I answered.

She pulled me to my feet and then pushed me forward to the sink, taking both my hands and placing them on the edge of the bowl. Then I felt her hands roughly unbuttoning my pants and pulling them and my panties down around my ankles. “I liked it,” she hissed in my ear, “so I’m going to give you a little present.” I felt the plug moving in my ass and I moved back into the motion slightly. I was as turned on and wet as I had ever been. Then she pulled the plug out and deposited it in the sink in front of me. And then…

Her cock slid right up my asshole and I groaned. “Oh Fuck,” I moaned, only slightly aware that I wasn’t addressing her correctly.

Her hands grasped my hips, digging into the skin as she bent over to whisper in my ear: “Fuck? Is that what you want, kitten? Do you want me to fuck you?”

“Yes… please… Mistress… “ I panted and begged. She was slowly moving in me and it was absolutely incredible.

“Like this?” she asked as she snapped her hips, thrusting the dildo fully into my hole. She seemed to like my wordless whimper of an answer as she repeated the motion a few times. I could hear her breathing and knew that she was close to coming. She continued, alternating slow and fast thrusts and telling me what a hot sexy little ass I had and how much she was enjoying fucking it. “When we get home,” she breathed, “I might do this again.”

It was absolutely incredible. She was fucking me hard and dominating me completely. I could feel my wetness dripping down the insides of my thighs. As hard as she was fucking me, it didn’t hurt, probably because of the hours spent with that plug stretching me out and the lube she had so generously applied. Her fingers gripped my hips harder as she began shaking. “I’m coming, kitten,” she snarled through clenched teeth. I ached to come but I couldn’t until she said. My legs were shaking as she finally released her grip on my hips.

She began slowly thrusting into me again and reached around to caress my swollen clit. Her other hand went to my shoulder as she leaned forward to whisper in my ear: “You are such a good kitten. You please me so well. I love you, baby.”

“Than… Mistress…,” I whimpered as well as I could.

“Look up, kitten,” she commanded, “look in the mirror so you can see your Mistress fucking you.” I glanced up, taking in the sight of the two of us. Tara looked wild with her soaking bangs swaying over her eyes. The second our eyes locked she ordered me, “Come for me, kitten,” and I saw stars as my body shook and quivered.

I clenched my teeth and lifted my hand from the sink to cover my mouth, needing to scream and not wanting to at the same time. I bit down on the skin and felt another climax explode on top of the first.

Then I felt her cool hands stroking my face and her arms wrapped around my waist. “Are you ready for me to pull out, love?” she asked gently and I nodded. She pulled out slowly and gently, pulling off the condom and tossing it in the trash. “Are you ok, baby?” she checked and again I nodded. I leaned over the sink, breathing heavily with tears running down my face. The entire experience had been so intense that I couldn’t help the wave of emotions I felt: pleasure, pain, gratefulness that Tara would make my fantasies come true, love, joy, and so many more. She stroked my hair and after a minute I felt her hands turning me to face her. Gently she kissed me and then wrapped me in her arms for a loving hug. “I love you,” she whispered as she kissed my tears.

“I know,” I choked out, “thank you, Tara.”

“For you, baby,” she told me as she again kissed me. She stepped away for a moment to pick up her bag and pulled a ziplock from it, putting both toys in it and putting both back in her bag. “Do you need help cleaning up, love?” she asked.

“No,” I smiled, “give me a minute and I’ll join you at the table.” She kissed me again and started toward the door. “Tara,” I said as I reached out and grabbed her hand.

“Yes, love,” she responded, turning back with a worried look on her face.

“Can we go home soon so the kitten can show her Mistress how much she enjoyed her evening?”

A smirk crossed her face as she responded, “I’ll go tell Buffy and Anya that we’re ready to go.”



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Re: Please 14

Postby Washi » Wed Jun 02, 2004 6:23 pm

.... :thud

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"See? I've mastered this tact crap." Anya in Tears Of The Goddess by Lisa



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Re: Please 14

Postby tinnakaren » Wed Jun 02, 2004 6:31 pm

Whoa!



*picks jaw off of floor - tries to jump start brain*



Whoa!



I'm shaking... that was, wow, I'm..um...words fail me. Just wow.



You've outdone yourself once again Debra. Again, I say wow.

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Tinna Karen

-tölvunörd í fyrsta ættlið

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Re: Please 14

Postby Tempest Duer » Wed Jun 02, 2004 10:35 pm

NC-18? I dunno... murg... huh... :drool :thud :drool :thud :drool :thud :drool :thud :drool :thud

Saying that up is down will not make up, down.



~Gene Burns

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Re: Please 14

Postby pipsberg » Wed Jun 02, 2004 11:06 pm

Hmmm wow, great update!! :thud

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

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Re: Please 14

Postby sam darls » Thu Jun 03, 2004 10:58 am

Oh my god.........wow..that was hot..umm.yeah :thud :thud :drool . Love sam xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

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Re: Please 14

Postby littlecrazy80 » Thu Jun 03, 2004 11:27 am

Are you trying to kill me? :thud



*lil´c*

"I am S-E-X-Y" Amber at the FedCon



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Re: Please 14

Postby thesongwriter » Thu Jun 03, 2004 12:20 pm

Quote:
Are you trying to kill me?




@ romy:

hehe, try reading that update while listening to 'burning'!!!

now that would blow your mind!! *gg*

:thud :thud :thud



*picking myself out of the large puddle*

debra, absolutely awesome!!!



bb sam

Edited by: thesongwriter at: 6/3/04 11:24 am
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Re: Please 14

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Jun 22, 2004 6:07 pm

Well I got thinking and wondered if I ever replied to comments from the last update. And no, I didn’t: how rude and ungrateful. I’m so sorry to have taken so long. I appreciate and enjoy all the feedback.



Washi – I can always count on you to comment quickly. I’m glad you liked it.



tinnakaren – Jaw dropping? Awesome. Thanks a lot.



TempestDuer – Yep, NC-18. Gonna have to work on that one. Glad you liked.



pipsberg – Cool. Thanks so much.



sammi – Thanks. I’m glad that you liked it again.



Romy – Nope, definitely not trying to kill you…



bb Sam – I don’t know what “burning” is but I’m glad that the update puddled you.



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Hi!

Postby BARE1975 » Wed Jun 23, 2004 2:28 am

I must confess i finally read this fic at the fourth or so attempt, it went something like this:



1st time: “Ok, I’m bored, let’s read some W/T stuff. Ummm, Let’s see this one, Please: the series?.....(Bare reads 10 or so lines) What the hell is that thing?!!!!!! No, not my stuff, I’ll try another one.”



2nd time: “I can’t remember if I’ve read this fic, Please the series…. (Bare reads the same 10 lines again) Oh, jeez, it was that perv story, Ew.!!!”



3rd time: “ Yay!!!! Internet at home!!!! I can read all the naughty stuff I want without blushing like a complete jerk at work!!! Let’s see some Nc-17 fics. Please the series? I’m familiar with the title but I can’t remember it… (Bare reads AGAIN the same 10 lines) My God, is this thing chasing me?!!! Nononnono



4rt time: “ Uppsss, Please, the series…. Come on, Bare, be a grown up, Try something different. You read stuff that would have made adult people blush when you were 12 and left to your own devices at the public library with no more teenage books to read… It can’t be that bad. Think of it as something cultural (Bare reads the first 10 chapters without blinking once till it’s 3 in the morning, has only 4 hours to sleep before going to work, and no one near her to kill that strange but persistent craving that has built inside her) OH MY GOD!!!! “



Bare spends the next week having constantly the most kinky images she has led conciounsly in her mind in all her life.



Ok, now talking seriously, I doubt never something that I’ve read (And I can assure you that I’ve read a lot) has caused me so opposing thoughts and internal discussions about love, sex, desire, commitment and trust, and different ways to show these feelings. I don’t think of myself as a narrow-minded person; how could I, when a lot of people in the world would believe I’m evil because who I choose to love? But, even though I would never blame nobody for the way they show their desire, all that domination and totally surrender to someone stuff was for me kinky, really really kinky and weird.



For me, one of the most interesting items in you fic is how you develop both characters feelings and behaviours, showing why they do the things they do. Not that they need to justify themselves, but I understand them, breaking some walls that I had in my head.



Besides, it is REALLY HOT!!!! I wouldn’t try everything that I’ve read at all, but you’ve given me some very interesting ideas.



Anyway, I don’t know if something in that silly speech has any sense, I just wanted to give my point of view about it.



Regards



BARE1975
 


Re: Feedback Replies

Postby thesongwriter » Wed Jun 23, 2004 4:37 am

hey debra!



sorry I dragged an 'insider' between romy and I into your feedbacks!



"Burning" is a quite lusty, hot and I-Start-To-Drool NC-17 sex song I wrote for and because of your Please Series!

and as my personal groupie, romy knows how good the song is! *wink* :p



I hope that explained some misunderstandings...

PLEASE UPATE SOON!!!!



sam

thesongwriter
 


Re: Feedback Replies

Postby behindhereyes » Sun Sep 26, 2004 9:38 pm

Debra



Kneeling, hands behind back, looking at floor. please :punish me soon.





behindhereyes

"To the world, you may be one person; but to one person, you may be the world"

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Re: Feedback Replies

Postby Burn4her » Tue Dec 21, 2004 10:09 pm

I've spent the last day or two catching up on this. It's so deliciously hot, creative, and well done on every level. Can I assume that you will continue with the Series?



Nic

Burn4her
 


Re: Feedback Replies

Postby Tempest Duer » Wed Dec 22, 2004 12:52 am

*lies face down on the rug and says nothing, but looks up with pleading, puppy-dog eyes*

I got bitten by a drunk lesbian! Does that mean I'll turn into one?



~my friend Mary

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Re: Feedback Replies

Postby irishlassie101 » Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:22 am

W.O.W. :shock :sheep :clap



I´m, a little short on words right now, and in desperate need of a REALLY cold shower !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(and that is at least 6 hours away...so...I´ll just have to savour on this story for some time !!!!!!!)



PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon !!!



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Re: Feedback Replies

Postby JustSkipIt » Fri Dec 24, 2004 10:45 am

Well I'm shocked and appalled and horrified that I have feedback that's 6 months old! that I haven't replied to. I'd say that I thought I had replied to everything but that sounds just so lame...



Bare –Your depiction of your tries to read this cracked me up. I’ve had the same thing happen with certain stories. Everytime the link resets I click it thinking “maybe this one?” and then I’m like, “Arggghhh! Not that one!”
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Internet at home!!!! I can read all the naughty stuff I want without blushing like a complete jerk at work!!!
Actually it would be nice to just have the problem of blushing: at my work reading naughty stuff is grounds for dismissal. Needless to say, I don’t even navigate to the kitten board at work.



Anyway, I’m glad that you gave it a chance and continued reading and have put some thought into. It’s my observation (from the outside) that the BDSM culture and relationship is more complex than most people could imagine. My next update (whenever that finally happens) will be another one about that complexity. Thanks so much and next time I won’t take so long to reply.



thesongwriter – Don’t worry about it at all.



behindhereyes - :rofl . Very funny. Glad you’re enjoying.



Burn4her – I’m glad that you enjoyed it. Wow, you read in 2 days? That must have been a … ahem “busy” two days. :smirk Yes, I will continue with the series and have started the next update but it’s hard to write so it may take a while. I appreciate everyone’s patience.



Tempest Duer – Hey there. :wave Very funny. I’ll take that as good.



irishlassie101 – Glad you liked it and hope your shower helps.



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Please: The Series

Postby JustSkipIt » Mon Mar 28, 2005 7:16 pm

Title – Please Part 14B Switch

Author– JustSkipit - Debra

E-mail – No thanks. Post in the thread.

Feedback – Yes

Spoilers–None

Rating– Duh? What do you think? I’d guess NC-17.

Di – Willow and Tara and any other character that appeared in the syndicated television show “Buffy the Vampire Slayer” is property of Joss and Mutant Enemy, I’m only borrowing them and am not making any money off them Thanks.

Thoughts in italics!


The ride home was surprisingly quiet. By the time I got back to the table, Tara had told Anya and Buffy that we were ready to go. Despite her rather ribald and rabid display of heterosexuality, Buffy yawned and said she too was ready to go. The four of us stood in the parking lot as we waited for Xander, watching women coming to the club and others leaving in various states of inebriation. And honestly, none of them had anything on Anya or Buffy. If there’d been caveman mixture in their drinks, both of them would have been scratching and grunting with gusto.

Xander pulled up and got out of the car with a sideways look at Tara as if he thought she should have controlled everyone else somewhat. Of course she had certainly controlled me tonight. Mmm. And more later from what she said. Oh God.

“Xander,” Anya slurred, “I just stuck dollars in a lot of sexy men’s underwear. You need to take me home so we can have orgasms.”

He blushed and shrugged at the three of us. As usual, none of us even batted an eye. Anya was horny and inappropriate any evening so of course she would be even more so tonight. It was like Anya squared or maybe cubed.

“The woman does like her orgasms,” Buffy slurred. “Do I need to go patrol?” she asked as she got in the back seat of the Jeep.

Xander quirked his eyebrow as if to say, “what as drunk as you are?” and told her that he and Giles had taken care of it. As if in response, Buffy closed her eyes and started snoring.

“Bye, Xander,” I called as Tara and I got in the car. As Tara drove, I thought back over the evening. Her hand rested on my knee in a gentle yet firm way, showing the tenderness of her love for me, almost in contrast to our activities not thirty minutes earlier. Not that they weren’t loving but … getting fucked up the ass in a bathroom? Not exactly everyone’s idea of a romantic interlude. Nonetheless. Wow and did I mention wow? And she had teased me about doing the same thing again when we got home. Or punishing me. God, I was so gone. Hers. Completely. Totally. Hers.

I glanced over and she was driving with almost a smirk on her face. Adorable.

For a few minutes I tried to think of something to say. Something that would express what the evening meant to me. Something more so that would be appropriate to say with Buffy seemingly asleep in the backseat. Quickly I gave up and we rode home in silence. Tara woke Buffy who snapped to attention, fists curled before understanding that we were home. I wondered if she’d be asleep before she was even in bed. We followed her up the stairs and watched that she made it into her room. Then Tara nodded at our room and followed Buffy. Obviously she was going to take off the Slayer’s boots before joining me.

The detour gave me time to get into Kitten mode. I quickly used the bathroom and undressed, putting away my clothes before putting on my collar and kneeling in the center of the room. Since my eyes were down, I only heard Tara enter the room but didn’t see her. She didn’t address me but I could hear her slowly undressing. When she was finished she went into the bathroom and I heard the water running for a few minutes. Then I heard her footsteps padding softly across the floor and the sound of her lying down on the bed. “Join me, Kitten,” she commanded.

I rose and walked over before joining her on the bed. “Lie on your back,” she whispered and I obeyed immediately. Part of my mind wondered what might be coming. She started stroking my stomach lightly, allowing her fingertips to tickle at the base of my breasts. I closed my eyes and took a breath to force myself on the sensation and felt myself slipping gently into a more submissive space.

“You are such a wonderful, Kitten,” she whispered as her fingertips traced my collar. My collar. I loved wearing it so much. In just a few months I had gotten so used to it. It was something that just belongs on my neck. Something that says everything about my position and my love for my Mistress.

“Thank you, Mistress,” I responded.

“It’s all about power, isn’t it?”

“Power, Tara?” I answered, completely confused. I was even more confused as I felt her fingers pinch the clasp to release my collar.

“Let’s see,” Tara purred. I looked up to see her fastening the collar on her own neck.

“What, what, what… are you doing, Tara?” I asked.

“What have you learned, Willow?” Tara asked intently. She looked in my eye for a moment before looking shyly away.

My mind spun as I tried to understand what she was saying. Ok, not understand. My IQ is 178 and I scored a 1540 on the SAT, I think I can understand. But what am I going to do? Tara wants me to top her. What? No, really. I mean what?

I looked to Tara for some guidance but she had her eyes coyly demurely cast toward the bedspread. When I had come to the bed, she had been lying mostly on her front and a little on her side to reach out and pet me. Now she had moved her hands by her sides and simply waited for my word. For some instruction.

None. No instruction.

No…

Nothing…

Ok. Try to focus. I raised one hand and gently stroked Tara’s arm. So soft under my fingers and I reversed the motion. This time she shivered slightly. Really, what does she want? What would I want? I stroked her skin again, bringing my nails into it. She shivered at the touch. Again, I repeated the motion, a little harder and heard her moan quietly.

“What do you want, baby?” I whispered in her ear.

“Whatever you want, Willow,” she whispered back, seeming a little embarrassed.

Ok something to focus on. “What is your safeword, slave?’ I asked her. She needed to know that this was serious. To me the the collar is sacred as she well knows. If she wants to put it on, she will put it on.

“Handkerchief,” she giggled, “Mistress. Handkerchief is my safeword.” I laughed out loud at her choice, knowing how Giles’s habit of cleaning his glasses anytime anything sexy happened was funny to her.

Ideas crowded my mind. “We will start slow,” I whispered as I wound my fingertips in her hair. My nails continued their journey, marking her beautiful white skin with red lines. “Your skin looks so gorgeous like this, baby,” I whispered, “does it feel good?”

“Yes,” she moaned.

I continued stroking her back and ran my fingertips over the wisps of hair at the base of her neck. “We’re starting slow,” I again assured her as I ran my hand down her back until it rested on her ass. “Have I ever told you how much I love your ass?”

“No,…” a few beats went by as she obviously considered her next word. “Mistress.”

“Oh,” I smiled, “I like the sound of that. I’ll be your Mistress tonight and you can be my little slave.” My fingertips ran down the crack of her ass and I heard her inhale sharply. I gently tickled her tight sphincter with the tip of one finger. “Such a beautiful ass,” I murmured, “and virginal too.” As her first and only lover, I was all too aware of the virginal state of her tight ring. I felt wet just thinking about it. Would she safeword?

“Just thinking about your white ass, has made me all wet, slave,” I growled.

“I’m sorry, Mistress,” she whimpered as I dug my fingernails harder into her skin. I stood suddenly and went to retrieve the box of toys from the closet, aware of the feeling of trepidation emanating from her. I pulled a pair of handcuffs from the box and waved them at her, motioning with my hand for her to roll over on the bed.

As I fastened her wrists to the headboard I whispered my instruction: “A good slave knows how to keep her Mistress happy.” I bent to gently kiss her before tucking a bell in her hand. “That’s your safeword,” I told her, “because your mouth will be very busy.” I gave her no time before climbing up to straddle her face. God, I was fucking dripping down her chin already. I’ll tell you what though, my lover is nothing if not a great lay. I mean what do you think got me so into her years ago? Ok, that and falling in love with her. But the moment her mouth hit my cunt the first time, I knew I would never miss boys.

And she didn’t disappoint this time. No. Not a bit. She slowly licked every millimeter of my pussy, soaking up my wetness before concentrating on my clit. “Oh God,” I moaned, “that’s the way, baby. Oh yeah, my little slave.” I’ve always loved when she talks to me during our play and this was at least as much of a turn-on. “Look at you,” I whispered, “tied to the bed. Sucking your Mistress’s pussy. Such a good little slave.” She redoubled her efforts, licking and sucking, thrusting her tongue inside until I came screaming, my hands clenching the headboard.

After I recovered, I leaned back on my knees and looked at her. God, she looked so amazing tied there, my juices running down her chin. I reached down and tweaked one nipple lightly. When she arched into it, I repeated the motion on the other side. “Oh,” I exclaimed as I began pulling and pinching on her hard nipples, “someone likes the feeling. Someone likes the pain.”

“Yes, Mistress,” she moaned.

“Is it a surprise?” I teased.

“Y-y-yes,” she stuttered and I knew I had hit on something very intimate for her. Would it be possible for her to use this experience to move beyond her past? I bent my lips close to her ear and whispered, “Would you like your Mistress to free you of your fear?”

Her voice cracked as she quietly said, “Yes, Mistress. Please.”

“Roll over,” I instantly commanded. She did with some difficulty. Her arms crossed as she did so and I left them that way. I did have her lift her hips so I could slide a pillow under them though.

I ran my hand over her ass before asking, “Now slave. Who does this fine white ass belong to?”

“My Mistress,” she said, trembling.

“Do you want me to spank it?” I asked.

“Yes, please,” she whimpered back.

“What?” I teased.

“Yes, please,” she answered. Apparently enjoying the game she continued: “Please Mistress. If you think this slave is worth it, please spank her white ass.”

I know my mouth curled into a smirk. How could it not? I had no idea this would be such a turn on. But God. I mean really… God!

“Mmm,” I hummed as I ran my palm over her cheeks. I leaned forward so that my mouth was up against her ear. “You were so naughty tonight, Tara,” I teased. I didn’t worry that she wouldn’t understand, but it was an excuse for what I was about to do. “I think you need a nice spanking for the way you acted at the club tonight.”

I could smell her wetness already. “Oh yes, Mistress,” she whispered, “please spank me and teach me a lesson.”

“There are many lessons you have to learn,” I told her. I surprised her with a quick snapping slap to her ass.

“One. Thank you, Mistress,” she said.

“Well,” I teased, “apparently you don’t need to be taught that lesson. You will always count and thank your Mistress unless told otherwise.” I spanked her two quick slaps to her warming skin.

“Two. Thank you. Three. Thank you, Mistress,” she said again.

Oh this was definitely fun and worth the effort. Quite fun times to be had for a time to come. The spanking and counting continued through four and up to ten. I ran my hand over her pink skin as I thought out loud, “I wonder if that is enough. What do you think?”

“W-whatever pleases you,” she answered. Oh, a mistake. You’d think she’d know better than that.

“Oh, sweetie,” I said, “I can’t believe you forgot to call me by name.” I began peppering her gorgeous bottom with slaps as I told her, “I had been planning to stop at ten. But you forgot a rule.”

“Oh God. Sixteen. Thank you, Mistress,” she whimpered.

“Or maybe you didn’t forget at all…,” I teased.

“Seventeen. Thank you,” she said. I could feel her relaxing into the pain. Relaxing into my control.

“Maybe you just wanted to make your Mistress spank your pretty ass more,” I continued.

“Eighteen. Thank you,” she said with a hint of excitement in her voice. Oh yes, this was more like it.

“Is that it? Were you trying to trick your Mistress into a spanking?”

“No, Mistress,” she whimpered, “Nineteen. Thank you.”

“But you did want more?”

“Y-yes,” she whimpered, “yes. Mistress. Twenty. Thank you.”

A few more and she would be coming on the pillow. I didn’t want that though. Not yet. I added three more spanks with her counting and thanking me for each. “Who does this ass belong to, slave?” I asked her on the next spank.

“You, Mistress. Thank you. Twenty-four,” she gasped. She was grinding her hips into the pillow. If this wasn’t her first time, I would definitely forbid that as she had forbidden me to do it in our play.

“Such a pretty ass,” I commented as I ran my hand over the now reddened skin. It didn’t quite burn to the touch but it was definitely warm. She would need some TLC and lotion when we were all done. In the meantime. “One more,” I said smirking.

“Thank you,” she nearly shouted, “Mistress. Twenty-five.” I could hear the desperate need in her voice as she said the final number.

“Roll back over love,” I commanded in a soft loving voice, puling the pillow from under her as she did so. I noted how tender her bottom obviously was by the way she gently allowed it to touch the sheet. As soon as she had rolled over, I began stroking her skin. I placed soft kisses on her neck and lips. “I’m so proud of you, love,” I told her lovingly. “You took that spanking so well for your first time.”

“Thank you, Mistress,” she moaned.

“I think you deserve a reward, slave,” I said as I lowered my fingers to her soaking wet pussy. “Tell me what your Mistress is responsible for,” I said, knowing that my ending a sentence in a preposition would make her crazy and not really caring.

“M-my punishment and my p-p-pleasure, Mistress,” she moaned as I filled her pussy with three fingers.

“Mmm,” I whispered, “so wet. So ready for your Mistress.” I pumped my fingers rapidly in and out feeling the tell-tale signs of her impending orgasm. Knowing it was near, I slowly pulled entirely out. “Oh,” I teased, “was that too quick?”

“As you wish, M-mistress,” she stuttered. I could feel the tension in her body as she attempted to control her breathing. I slowly slid down her body and began kissing her thighs, licking up her delicious juices. She was absolutely soaked, breathing heavily, clenching her teeth to keep from screaming. And I hadn’t even touched her clit yet.

I ran my tongue from the bottom of her cunt in a long slow line up to her clit avoiding the sensitive nub, then repeated the action on the other side. I could hear inarticulate moans and grunts and knew it was time to reward my slave while showing her what it means to be mine. Gently I flicked the tip of my tongue against her clit. As I did, I took the three fingers which had been in her cunt and lowered them to touch against her sphincter. Her juices transferred easily onto her hole which tightened at my touch. I knew she was nervous about this. How could I not have known after all these years? “Do you want to make your Mistress happy?” I whispered as I continued brushing her clit with my tongue.

“Yes,” she nearly screamed, “Please Mistress. Do whatever you want with your slave.”

At her final word, I slid a finger into her ass. Oh god, I nearly came myself as I felt her tight smooth opening taking me in. I would do everything with her. Everything for her. I sucked her clit as hard as I could and felt her coming, her ass tightening on my finger, her pussy bucking against my soaking chin.

Long moments or seconds or minutes later, we lay cuddled on the bed. She had a look on her face of languid peacefulness that I knew well. I unbuckled the collar for her and kissed her over and over. “I’ll be back in a second, love,” I whispered. I returned with a washcloth and lotion and gently cleaned her up before asking her to roll over so I could lotion her reddened bottom.

Then I lay on my back and gathered her tired body in my arms. “I love you so much, Tara,” I murmured into her hair over and over, feeling her arms wrapped around my middle as we both drifted into sleep.

"It is better to waste one's youth than to do nothing with it at all- Georges Courteline
"Censorship, like charity, should begin at home; but unlike charity, it should end there." - Chare Booth Luce
My latest story: Survivor - Ash Island

Edited by: JustSkipIt at: 3/29/05 2:23 pm
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Re: Please: The Series

Postby Artemis » Mon Mar 28, 2005 10:19 pm

:thud



No, okay, wait... I've got coherent stuff to say... :thud



Really. Like how Tara... and Willow... :thud



:drool



Okay, so not big with the coherency, wonder why? What really struck me was "Would you like Mistress to free you of your fear?" That was about much more than just playing around. Obviously Tara's had some pretty miserable experiences with pain in the past. But this time it's her choice, that's what I figured made all the difference. Physically a spanking is a spanking, but coming from Willow, who she loves and she knows loves her, I'm guessing that maybe washes away some of the power of her bad memories.



And it was a really sweet expression of their love for each other, and how that and their trust runs both ways. Tara's nervous about being topped, but she's not afraid to put herself in Willow's hands. :heart



And forget the Bunnies picking up the smut slack for Survivor :D 'Please' ought to be standard reading at the Ministry.



So, to sum up: :bow And one more :thud for good measure.

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Smut Bunnies!: Saving the world, sexily!

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Re: Please: The Series

Postby hidden watson » Tue Mar 29, 2005 9:09 am

I have been reading this from early days, but I hadn't delurked then, hence the disgustingly lack of feedback from my side. Strange how a few months can change one's life, I can't imagine not commenting anymore.



I've always viewed Please as an education. It introduces me to activities that barely hover above the boundaries of my imagination. I don't view it as abuse or degradation or just sex, yes they have entered into a contract, I think that's the right term for their play, but what you have made very clear throughout the 14 parts is the extent of their love for each other, and the incredible trust that is absolutely necessary. I'm in awe of the amount of imagination you have, and the research you've done (surely not all personal experience :P ? and I'm infringing into your privacy, apologies).



Specifically to this update. I didn't expect the turnaround, not even with the title hint. I've always thought (just to show how little I know) that tops and bottoms are rather set in their role. That within one relationship / contract, switching is unusual, but then again it may be just switching inside a scene is rare. I'm probably talking nonsense.



What I want to say is how well you managed the switch here. Willow's care for her slave and Tara taking 25 spanks! That's a lot for a first time, right? And I think this was a typo but I loved it
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Suck a pretty ass,” I commented as I ran my hand over the now reddened skin.
Is Tara's safeword of handkerchief really just a throwback to Giles' glasses cleaning habit and not a reference to the "hanky code", where one indicates preference by where a handkerchief is worn -- left is top, right is bottom?



Yes, reading Please has prompted me to do a bit of research. No, I can't imagine ever doing any of these truly hot and extremely arousal-inspiring activites myself, but I can read, and imagine, and fantasize ... and for that I have to thank you sincerely. Plus, wow! I made it onto the recommendation thread! Wow, and more wow! Thank you, Debra.

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quiet thoughts

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Re: Please: The Series

Postby GayNow » Tue Mar 29, 2005 1:40 pm

I've read the first three on a different board. Didn't know that there were more to the series. Now I know. So I'm reading again from the beginning. At this point, the only feedback I can leave is as follows:



:thud



I am hoping when I finish reading the entire series, I will have something far more eloquent to say. Though, somehow, I'm not sure that my brain will be functioning at higher levels. But I will try.



A curse upon being at work right now. Otherwise I would be able to read read read. But, as it is, I will just have to wait until I get home...to the privacy of my basement...where I have lots of towels.



Carleen:wave

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Re: Please: The Series

Postby terra21 » Tue Mar 29, 2005 6:05 pm

I think I stampeded over a few smut bunnies last night to get here and read this update. I've haven't read any of this fic on DCP, it's always been another board. And never given feedback, so here goes...



The uh, dirty talk and um, the kitten, er, about the mistress, um *faints*





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