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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby WillowRulez » Thu Nov 24, 2005 4:03 pm

Tara, the cat and cherry :-D What a cute trio!
I really felt Willow's despair in this update but also the love she has for Tara and the complete trust that she is alive and more or less well.
Cant wait for the bombardment! Uhm... does that sound wrong only to me?
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby sam7777 » Fri Nov 25, 2005 5:31 pm

I really like the interaction between Tara and Cherry. I fear the link between Tara's dreams and the aliens will prove an obstacle to her getting away. The bit btw Willow and Faith was touching as well. Great Update!!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Artemis » Sat Nov 26, 2005 8:14 am

I loooove Willow's tense vigil by her plane - it's so easy to feel how she's torn up inside, and the only thing that'll fix her is getting back in the air and going after Tara. But in the middle of a full-scale assault... that sounds risky. Even if planes are intended to land for refuel/rearm, I doubt the higher-ups will be expecting their pilots to go charging off into the ruins in search of their girlfriends. Not that that'd stop Willow of course... And Faith was very mature in the way she handled Willow - no talking down to her, no criticism, just understanding. Good on Faith.

As for Tara, I adore how resourceful and tough she is - she's a fighter pilot, and even if she's not used to survival on the ground and lacks experience, she's got the steely nerves it takes. Bad Giles for the malfunctioning self-destruct - that'd better have been to do with the crash, not an inherent weakness in the design. Can't have pilots blowing themselves up by accident. Great description on the ruined city - 'it had been someone's house once', very powerful, without being forced.

I like Cherry and Mrs Chippy. I can sympathise with the cat - a friend of mine took in a stray, a pure-bred Persian she named Mischa, which she took to the vet and everything, and believed to be a girl. Several months later, she found Mischa doing that thing cats do, where they lie on their backs and spread their rear legs and lick their groins - who said cats are dignified? - and she saw something which pretty much confirmed that Mischa wasn't a girl-cat... Anyway, I like them. Tara's automatic compassion is touching - she didn't think twice about handing over her food, even though she was hungry herself.

Naturally, I'm wary of the both of them - they could be some kind of genetically-engineered LGF infiltrator units. I know, I have a suspicious mind. Too much X-Files, no doubt...

Thanks for the great update, so soon after the previous one too :bow
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby gabbles » Sat Nov 26, 2005 7:41 pm

Good, GOD, Alce...well done!! :clap

This update was brilliantly written-filled witih tension and despair and such determination from both our girls.

I loved the scene with Willow and Faith. The fact that Faith new just how to handle Willow, not to push her or force her to much to snap out of it; yet knowing just the right amount of pushing to use.

“I guess we both have so many bad habits already that adding one to the mix doesn’t really matter,” Faith said quietly, trying to bait Willow into a seemingly innocuous conversation.


Hehe. Well handled.

Faith looked across at Willow and realised that she was crying, silent tears running unchecked down her cheeks. In the dim light on the deck, they lay wet and glistening on her pale skin.


That made my heart ache. That sitting on the deck, in the freezing cold (when it's been made obvious Willow hates the cold), she's crying and most likely barely notices that fact.

And I am loving Cherry and Mrs Chippy. It was such a Tara moment: offering all of her food up to the child and the cat. And when most military people would have left them to continue on their own, this wasn't even an option for Tara. This speaks volumes on her character.

I loved this update, Alcy. Damn you know how to leave your readers wanting more, dont ya? You must teach me how you do that! lol.

She was slammed back in her seat as the Guardian accelerated in the blink of an eye. It rocketed off the end of the deck and climbed into the red sky, a devil with a mission.


The imagery is amazing.

I'll say this: WOW

Thanks Alcy!

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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby pipsberg » Mon Nov 28, 2005 9:01 pm

Alcy,

Well, I held on! And it was a great ride. As in all of your other updates, I love the action. I feel like I'm in a comic book or an action film... it really comes alive. I also love the descriptions of Tara with the little boy. Very touching and humanizing. So wonderful to see another update!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby grimlock72 » Tue Nov 29, 2005 12:10 pm

I'm surprised the aliens have given Tara so little trouble since her crash. Clearly they were targetting her, maybe they're just overconfident ? They don't know about the planned bombardment after all.

Assuming Tara keeps up a brisk walking pace she should be well outside the bombzone, which is GOOD :). Glas for a cockpit is a bad idea, let them hurry with inventing see-through-plastic already :lol.

Good to read that Tara survived the crash more or less without injuries. Such an old-style plain is rather dangerous to crash-land under any circumstance, let alone in enemy territory. The cat was cute, don't quite know what to make of the kid/boy. How long has he been hiding in the house anyway? Invasion of those aliens has been going for some time now hasn't it?

I wonder why that mothership is so securely fastenend to the ground. The aliens can't be that stupid, not realising the risk of immobilising such a huge target ?? That 'target the vent' idea sounds kind of familiar, obviously Willow has never seen Star Wars so she's sceptical :lol. I would put more faith in the groundtroops, it seems the aliens are less strong on the ground compared to air. Air fighting is still in it's infancy on earth, while ground fights have been done for ages... in Europe anyway :lol.

There is a tiny problem with bombing the mothership itself; if Tara is captured that is the most likely location she'll be held. There is however no way for Willow to know any of that, must make it a difficult task to concentrate.

I liked Faith just offering support in a way Willow could accept it. Maybe Willow is just a little to stubborn/proud for her own good. Getting so cold isn't going to help her or Tara.

I'm not entirely sure what Willow thinks she is going to do on her mission. She seems to think that mission will somehow rescue Tara, but I don't see how? Willow can't just land and pick-up Tara. Best-case scenario would be Tara meeting up with groundforces or reaching NY City airport (that's "La Guardia" ??). Hmm.. on second thought Willow does help Tara indirectly by keeping the skies clear...

There's the nagging memory of Tara's nightmarish dreams though... :cry

Nice fast update, don't overwork yourself though!

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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Alcy » Thu Dec 01, 2005 2:34 am

Watson: You are damn right, having a cat and a kid in tow isn’t exactly conducive to escaping from a band of murdering aliens. Yes, let’s make Cherry’s family recent (but rich of course!) immigrants from Blighty! I’m so much better at doing British than I am at American!
I don’t think Pre-Tara Willow would listen to anyone, let alone someone telling her not to smoke! I mean, people didn’t realise how bad for you it was in those days.
I only hope that I can maintain the built-up tension throughout the action sequences to follow, which will be numerous of course!! Hold on for the ride!

tare bear: I hope you’ve managed to mop your mind up! I can’t guarantee safety…that’s no fun!

WillowRulez: My fics often lack for cuteness so I thought I’d throw in the cat and the kid in the same one! I love throwing our girls into sticky situations and seeing how well they come through it, although I have the whole fic planned out, I never exactly know what’s going to happen next. Bombard away!

sam7777: I’m glad you liked Tara and Cherry, I’ve never been good at writing kids, I make them too adult probably cos I don’t have any of my own, nor am I around any. The bit between Willow and Faith followed quite well, I enjoyed writing it with their banter about smoking. My partner smokes and I’ve been trying to get her to quit for ages because I hate it…trust me, it’s hard!

Artemis: Yes, although Willow hates the cold and she was freezing, where else would Captain Red go to console herself than her plane? You’re exactly right, you can definitely hear Boone saying just that, “There will be no charging off to rescue lost girlfriends!” but since when has Willow listened to anyone besides Tara…
Haha, I had a cat named Mischa! Well, there is a story about this particular cat. I’m a big buff when it comes to Antarctic exploration, my thesis is on Antarctic heritage so I know a bit about it. Anyway, on Ernest Shackleton’s Endurance voyage the carpenter had a cat named Mrs Chippy who was actually a boy. The sad thing is that Mrs Chippy had to be shot when the expedition ran into trouble and had to run for their lives…I named Cherry’s cat in honour of poor Mrs Chippy. And Apsley Cherry-Garrard was a member of Robert Scott’s fatal Antartic voyage who survived and wrote a famous book…so a few nods to some of my heroes!!!
Always suspicious…good on ya, I’m far too trusting.

gabbles: Faith is who she is but she gets Willow’s mood, probably because she too is feeling despair at Tara’s loss and knows how she would want to be treated if she were Willow. I think that Buffy or Alex would want to coddle too much.
Writing 101 - Always leave them wanting more! Well, I just made that up, but it does make sense…this fic is fast approaching its conclusion even though there are a few more chapters to go. I feel that its carrying me with its momentum…help I say!!

pipsberg: Glad to see you buckled yourself in…although I take no responsibility for any injuries caused! That’s exactly the sort of imagery I wanted to create, an old sci-fi movie, heavy on the visuals and spectacular action.

grimmy: You should know that all evil beings have plans! Yes, while plastic is a great invention, the planes of this era were still forced to rely on glass, very reinforced glass but it still shattered quite nicely.
I wouldn’t say that Cherry has been in that particular house the whole time, which is probably five months or so. He reminds me of Newt in Aliens before Ripley finds her. Little kids seem to be quite resourceful.
I’m definitely going to explain the fastening to the ground shortly! And no, Willow has quite a few years to wait until Star Wars comes out…although I love it, and this is my little nod to my favourite space saga! It can also be a hint that my next fic, while not based in the Star Wars universe, will still draw heavily on it.
Willow can only hope that Tara is nowhere near the mother ship, no doubt shes going to have some dilemmas shortly, the fate of the world…or her love??
And you’re very right with the ground forces idea…stay tuned for next chapter.
And yes, those dreams, the next chapter kicks off with one which will reveal a little more of what the frilly heck is going on!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby FineyMcFine » Thu Dec 01, 2005 4:46 pm

Hello, I just started reading today and am now in the middle of Chapter 11 (of your story, not filing for bankruptcy) and am going to leave full feedback once I catch up. However, I was chortling with laughter at this line:

"I'm sorry that you had to wait this long to find out that I'm crazy and that I'm a slut..." Willow mumbled.


HA! This is such a great read. Okay, more from me when I catch up to the most recent chapter.
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby RKT » Sat Dec 03, 2005 12:21 pm

What a fabulous story! I really love it. I hope we get to see an update soon. In the meantime, I'm going to read your other stories. If they are half as good as this one, it will be time well spent.

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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby ringwaldoeuvre » Mon Dec 05, 2005 8:52 pm

Since there have been so many chapters, and I'm really, really, really late to this party, I'll try to summarize the reasons I think this story is stellar:

The tone is excellent, and very reminiscent of the old war films from which you are drawing inspiration. Considering I've seen a lot of the old studio films from the 1940's, I could not help but feel like this fic was also trying to convince me to buy war bonds.

Your careful use of language really transports the reader, and I am very impressed by your ability to give a character depth in a single sentence. The dynamic between the characters is complex, and you've translated the canon players very well into the setting. Specifically, I really like Buffy/Willow conflict, and how it has progressed. It is an interesting twist, yet I feel like their emotional tie is very similar.

Your pacing is also great. The timing of the W/T didn't feel forced, yet did not drag. It very much felt as if their relationship proceeded at an appropriate rate.

That's about it. I'm sure I'll think of more, after your next post. Which will be soon, right? Regardless, excellent story. Very much looking forward to more.
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Alcy » Thu Dec 08, 2005 5:25 pm

SallyMcFine: Thanks so much for joining in! I did have a lot of fun in the early chapters with Willow’s past, I do miss the humour in this story sometimes…let’s hope I can have some black comedy as we near the end! I really have to write a comedy next…but I love angst so much!

RKT: Thanks so much! I don’t want to compare stories, they’ve all been my favourites at one point or another…WYTN? is probably the easiest to read…and Worst Nightmare is the only canon fic I’ve written if you’re sick of all my AU.

ringwaldoeuvre: I’m a firm believer in the phrase ‘it’s never to late!’ Thanks so much, that was exactly what I was going for. This fic did end up with a little more complex plot than I originally wanted…those early films didn’t really have much in the way of plot!
I’m all for economy of words as well, if you can say something in one sentence then say it…although certain things need to be drawn out and savoured (ie smut!!!) In reading heaps of fanfic and writing my own, I’ve definitely come to realise that the art of doing this is vital to the reader’s enjoyment. And timing as well!
I’ve always liked the idea of Buffy and Willow as a dynamic duo, in this case a hostile dynamic, but see Rhyme and Reason where there are more of an actual duo. It’s fun to write.
Yep, I’ve almost done the next post…there’s a lot happening in it!

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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Alcy » Thu Dec 08, 2005 6:12 pm

Chapter Nineteen – “Hell Unleashed Part II”

At first Tara thought she was in total darkness. However, as her eyes adjusted she realised translucent pipes embedded in the walls gave off a faint, pulsating green glow. They cast the sickening colour over everything and also gave off a steady thrumming sound. The thrum grew to an incessant drone in the back of her head, as though it were invading her senses. Tara shook her head in a vain effort to clear it.

Her boot falls echoed off the cold metal floor, one after the other as she walked down the passage. She began to think it had no end until the light began to get brighter. Tara hugged the side of the corridor and kept her advance cautious even though she knew full well she was dreaming. This dream had visited her many times, always a long corridor…and at the end would be the room with the strangely shaped machine that made her skin crawl just to look at it.

Tara knew it was the machine Willow had described in her dream…but not once had she been strapped into it as Willow had described.

The light ahead changed slightly, a shadow passed in front of it. Tara narrowed her eyes to try and make it out. It appeared to be a figure, although it was much too slender and small to be an LGF. In this particular dream she had always been alone so she was curious to see what or who it was. As she came closer, light and dark separated to reveal it was indeed a human. Tara could eventually make out a woman’s curves, long flowing hair…and finally, her features. As they came into focus, Tara gasped in disbelief.

“Mom?” she asked in the barest whisper.

It was the one person who never appeared in her dreams…not even her ordinary dreams which were exactly the same as those experienced by ordinary people. Tara often dreamt of her father and brother. She imaged what they would be like if they were still alive today, or relived cherished moments from her childhood. In all of those dreams one much loved figure had been absent. She had missed her mother all the more fiercely because of this, wishing just once that she could talk to her in her dreams.

Now she was standing in front of her, as real as life. As Tara gazed at her in astonishment, she noted her mother had not changed a day since the last time she saw her alive, before the trip to Egypt from which she had not returned. Tara’s own vibrant blue eyes stared back at her from a face which was untouched by the passing years. Her wavy, dark blonde hair fell down over her shoulders, it fell over a simple white dress. It was almost as though Tara were looking in the mirror.

Diana Maclay wore a small but sad smile rather than the broad, carefree one she had constantly worn in life. Tara missed that smile, although at that moment she was contented to be able to see her at all.

“Mom,” Tara repeated, this time in a louder voice, “I’ve missed you so much…”

Tara made to embrace her mother but Diana held up her hands to indicate that she could not. Tara’s heart sank but she did not plead further, she knew how these things worked.

“As I have you, dear heart,” Diana’s voice was rich and throaty in its sadness.

“I was alone…for so long,” Tara ached anew when she thought of the brutal deaths of her father and older brother, “Dad…Donny…”

“I know…I know,” Diana consoled her from a distance, her hands still partially extended towards Tara, her voice choked with grief over the loss of her family.

“How? I mean, what happened to you…you just never came back,” Tara had so many questions that needed answering, they poured forth, “Mom, where are you?”

“I’m here,” Diana replied, her arms making a wide, encircling gesture at the space around her, “I’m a part of all of this…when they took me, it was all I could do to save a part of myself, stay free in a sense. Now I am just simply here…”

“As part of the dreamscape?” Tara asked hesitantly.

Diana shook her head, “Yes…and yet no. I can’t explain it, I’m aware of them but as far as I can tell they are not aware of me. I guess I have condemned myself to an eternity of limbo…I do not know…”

Tara was incredibly saddened at the thought of her beautiful mother reduced to haunting the dreams of an alien species intent on destroying the world. Painful tears stung her eyes and she fought to hold them back.

“Don’t cry little one,” Diana whispered in a broken voice, “Just please listen to what I have to say…I do not know how much time we will have together. It took me years of searching to find you and when I did your dreams were a vicious blend of their dreamscape and your own tortured visions…mostly of yourself and the beautiful redhead…”

“Willow,” Tara whispered, her voice lingered tenderly over each syllable.

“Willow,” Diana nodded, she had already heard the name in Tara’s dreams.

“I had to find you, I alone of all humanity know what has happened and is happening,” Diana managed to smile wryly, “If you could call my present state ‘human.’ I do not want to alarm you Tara…but everything depends on you…everything…”

Tara felt her shoulders sag already beneath such a weighty statement, even though so far she had heard virtually nothing.

She barely had the strength to speak again, “Mom, what?”

“They are the Juthungi, Tara. A race even more ancient than man…much more so. However, whereas humanity have also found art and culture, they have dedicated themselves to a civilisation of war. They are warriors first and foremost, which is why they are so very adept at killing. Yet, their greatest pleasure lies in the dreamscape…for killing things in the dreamscape is how they feed, they must do it to sustain themselves.”

“I often wondered the purpose of it,” Tara commented quietly, she was listening to every detail, “Then why the global war in the first place?”

“The Juthungi cannot simply draw everyone into the dreamscape, otherwise all of humanity would have long since been killed…without our technology and own weapons to aid us, we truly would be helpless. No, they need people like you…sensitives, who are in tune with the dreamscape and can therefore draw others in.”

“So if everyone like me were dead…they would leave,” Tara deduced.

Diana shrugged, a casual gesture for such a dreadful statement, “Perhaps…but there is another way to make them leave.”

“How? Mom you must tell me, is it something I can do?” Tara said in an urgent voice, she took a step closer to her mother.

Even a she spoke, a group of Juthungi emerged from a room behind them which Tara had not noticed until now. She looked urgently to her mother, wanting confirmation as to whether they could see her or not. Seconds later she knew, rough, huge hands grabbed both her upper arms. Tara struggled violently, even as her mother looked on with a sad expression on her lovely face. They began dragging Tara backwards into the room.

“Mom?” Tara watched Diana following them.

She continued to speak even as her daughter was dragged on her heels, “Tara listen to me, we’re running out of time. This whole ship…it’s a machine, bound to our earth and designed to draw everyone into the dreamscape, and to do that they need a sensitive to hook up to their dread machine, they have tried and failed with a few people already…you absolutely must be the next sensitive they use!”

“Then I’ll just draw everyone in!” Tara cried in exasperation, still struggling against her captors although less so as she realised it was futile.

They had now dragged her fully into the room. Hands still held her while another Juthungi moved in front of her. He leered at Tara in what she assumed to be a grin. Her insides crawled in the face of it. He withdrew a wicked looking blade from a sheath at his side and for a few terrified moments, even though she was dreaming, Tara thought he would plunge it into her body. Hands on either side of her tugged off her heavy flight jacket while the one with the knife slipped it under her jersey. Tara was forced to stand still as they stripped her down to her undergarments, removing her heavy boots as well. She stood freezing in just a woollen singlet and tights, her bare feet threatened to freeze to the floor.

“Mom?” Tara craned her neck over her captors to find her mother standing by the door, tears rolling down her face.

Juthungi hands thrust her backwards, Tara yelped as she fell through the air. She landed hard in the chair she had seen in her dreams. The one Willow had described her being strapped to. They immediately began attending to a complex series of straps which served to fasten her securely into the chair. Tara felt it’s cold metal mould to every curve of her body until it fit as though it were made specifically for her.

“Tara, listen to me…I can change it! I can make it so the Juthungi are trapped within their own dreamscape, their real bodies will be dead to our world. Humanity will be safe – never again to be drawn into that deadly world. By standing at the conduit between the real world and the dreamscape I can influence it because I am part of it. However, I need your strength Tara, there’s no way I am strong enough to do this alone. You and I share a connection that would make this impossible between any other two people,” Diana Maclay surged forward between the Juthungi so that she stood right beside Tara, her lips almost touching Tara’s ear, “Together, we can do this!”

Tara was terrified by the intensity of her mothers words as well as what she suggested. For the first time doubt crept into her mind as to whether she could trust this vision of her mother. The military training in her questioned everything, including whether or not all of this was a lie…designed to draw her back to the ship.

“Mom…I mean…how can I trust that what you say will happen? I don’t want to doubt…” Tara began, she drew a breath and asked the question she needed to, “Are you really my mother?”

“Tara, time’s almost up…I don’t know what to say to convince you…” Diana’s tone was urgent, her visage tortured with grief, “I knew you liked girls from the moment you gave Susan McNeil those flowers when you were just five…and you kissed her on the cheek at her birthday party. Seeing you and Willow together in your dreams, I know you’ve found the one woman who will love you for the rest of her life. Willow. You need to draw on that intense passion you feel for her in order to save her life…and the lives of millions of people…Tara…”

It was a dilemma that no one person should have had to bear…the fate of the world. At that moment Tara Maclay wished fervently that it were someone else, someone far stronger than herself. The metal pressed against her body, she was numb with cold, terrified. All she wanted was to be with Willow.

Willow…

They had come together despite the military, despite the Juthungi, despite the war bringing chaos to the world around them. For the brief months she had known Willow, Tara had been blissfully happy despite everything. She had always known that she would do anything to save Willow’s life…and if she could save the rest of the world as well, then why the hell not!

Tara realised she had all the strength she needed. She turned back to her mother, her face grim with determination. As she looked into Diana Maclay’s eyes her doubt faded.

“Yes,” she whispered.

At that moment a massive shockwave surged through her body causing her to spasm uncontrollably. Tara screamed…the pain was unbearable as she writhed against the straps which held her down. She arched her back upwards, instinctively straining to get away from the contraption which held her in thrall.

The pain abated for a blessed moment and through her glazed eyes Tara could just make out her mother. Tears continued to roll unchecked down Diana’s face. As she lay gasping for each breath, Tara began to realise exactly what would happen if she chose to follow her mother’s advice for real. She cried as well…


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Tara’s eyes snapped open and she lay absolutely frozen for a few moments before she realised where she was. She calmed instantly when she saw Cherry’s little face regarding her with a mixture of concern and fear. With a muffled groan, Tara sat up and rubbed her aching temples. At that moment she realised that her cheeks were wet with tears.

“Who’s Willow?” Cherry asked quietly, staring at Tara with wide eyes.

“What?” Tara asked groggily, trying to recollect her shattered thoughts.

“Just before you woke up, you called out for someone named Willow.”

Tara had no idea what she had said in her sleep for the young boy to hear. She hoped fervently that it had been safe for his young ears.

“Willow is…Willow is my girlfriend, my everything really,” Tara replied quietly, as she talked she began rummaging around in her pack for some food for the three of them, she fervently hoped they managed to meet up with the army soon, she didn’t have much food or water with her.

“Ah,” Cherry nodded sagely, “I had a girlfriend once, Jemima Carrington-Jones, but I made fun of her hat one day and she never spoke to me again…I should very much like to find her again. What’s Willow like, I hope she doesn’t wear silly hats.”

Tara passed Cherry a pack of survival mix which was made up of nuts and chocolate before she replied, “No, Willow wouldn’t be seen dead in a silly hat, she has bright green eyes, even brighter than Mrs Chippy’s, perfect red hair and the cutest little nose. She’s the most beautiful girl on the planet,” Tara’s eyes were burning as a sure sign to stop talking before she burst into tears, she continued a little gruffly, “Hurry up with those, we’re moving out in five minutes.”

Tara tucked into her own packet, the dry food rattling around in her dry mouth and she took a small swig of water from her canteen. The food sat even worse in her stomach where it congealed and set into a hard lump like concrete. She barely finished half the packet and handed the rest to Cherry who accepted them gratefully.

They were back on the road less than a minute later, although as their feet took them closer to safety Tara knew she was going in the opposite direction from where she ought to. She looked ahead to Cherry who was struggling gamely over a pile of rubble. So far during their journey she had yet to hear one word of complaint from the boy. Her mouth set determinedly…she would get him to safety first.

*****

Despite the fact that her newly repaired Guardian handled sluggishly, Willow felt a surge of confidence running through her veins. She looked out to her left and right to see both Devil and Slayer squadrons fanned out in formation as they approached the mothership. It lay on the landscape like a giant pimple, each one of the pilots longing to squeeze and squash it completely like the disease it was.

As they approached, Willow watched swarms of LGF fighters emerge from the sides of the ship. The flying wings also fanned out in their own deadly formation. They rose quickly to meet the oncoming threat to their ship.

“Here they come, hold on to your knickers everyone!” Willow yelled over the com just as she slammed the thrust lever forward to dive into the middle of the approaching LGFs, there was no way in hell she was holding anything back today.

The Guardian’s engines gave a worrying cough of protest before they complied with their master’s commands. As Willow dived she opened fire at the first craft in her sights and watched it explode in a giant fireball which took another LGF craft with it. Willow flew through the debris of the destroyed ships and tore through the centre of the LGF formation. Her manoeuvre sent them scattering in all directions, right into the paths of the rest of the Devils and the Slayers.

In her bold move, Willow had torn straight through the defensive formation of ships and found herself on collision course for the mothership. She pulled up just before she slammed into its side and went skimming up over its surface at maximum speed. The vents were at the apex of the pimple-shaped ship…Willow could see them clearly.

“Why hello there,” Willow whispered, her face curling into an evil grin as she released two of her four rockets towards the target.

Both rockets slammed into the vent with a huge fireball as a resulted. Willow yanked her stick to one side and pulled a tight turn around to check on the damage she had done. As the smoke cleared she saw the heavy armour plating had been partially torn away from the opening…but the vent was still not clear. More firepower was needed.

“This is Devil One to all planes, this nut is gonna be tough to crack…use your rockets and be as accurate as possible. Cover each others attack runs…it’s like flying through a swarm of insects out here!” Willow said clearly and firmly, even as she pounced an unsuspecting LGF and let rip with a burst of cannon fire into its wing.

Willow accelerated back up into the sky, away from the ship where manoeuvrability was constricted. She glanced over her shoulder to see the sky a mass with craft, both going down in flames and tearing through the sky. The Guardians were clearly the superior planes…Willow fervently hoped that there were enough of them to win the day.

*****

Down on the ground, two figures far away watched the explosions with a mixture of excitement and horror. Cherry couldn’t contain a whoop of excitement as he punched his fist into the air with a primal cry. Mrs Chippy was not impressed with all the commotion, her little head peaked out of his coat with a worried frown.

“The assault,” Tara whispered, gazing skyward as she saw bright flashes of light erupt around where the alien mothership lay.

It was exactly where she needed to go…and yet she doubted whether she would be able to make it in one piece. A wry smile almost crossed her face, she would run the risk of being killed by her own squadron if she went anywhere near the ship.

The sounds that came from the ship were distant, mere muffled explosions. However, in the street where Tara and Cherry stood watching a louder rumble could be heard. It came from the direction of the ship but neither of them could see anything. Tara surmised that it had to be Juthungi from the direction they were coming. There was no alternative but to hide and hope they were passed by.

Tara dragged Cherry unceremoniously by the scruff of his neck, even as the small boy craned his neck to be able to see the approaching convoy. He scrambled to stay on his feet and followed her down into the building’s ruined basement. Tara continued to retain her hold on him until they had reached the darkest spot in the dank space. She crouched down behind a furnace which had long since ceased to burn and pulled Cherry down with her.

“You didn’t need to drag me so roughly, I wanted to see who it was!” he protested loudly.

Tara didn’t respond as the rumbling in the street drew closer to the building in which they were hiding, she just clamped a strong hand over his mouth. Cherry got the picture and promptly stopped trying to argue. Tara lowered her hand and gently shifted him behind her so that her body shielded him. She half expected him to go charging off and confront whoever it was himself with the foolhardy bravery of a child. With shaking hands she held the machine pistol out in front of her. She had never fired the weapon in anger. It was one thing to let loose with a battery of 20mm cannons by pressing a button in the cockpit…it was another altogether to pull the trigger of a weapon in her own hands.

Cherry in turn held Mrs Chippy tightly in his coat with one hand, if the kitten ran off, he knew there was no way he could follow her. Mrs Chippy however, seemed quite content to sit in the warmth and luxuriate in the fact that they had ceased running. She was unconcerned by her master’s heart thumping in his chest and was in fact…purring. In the other hand Cherry felt for, and found a small chunk of masonry. His fingers curled over it, he gripped it tightly in preparation to throw it with all the strength he could muster.

The barely audible thrum emanating from the kitten and the panicked breathing coming from Tara and Cherry were all that could be heard coming from the dark space. Outside however, was another story. The rumbling grew louder as it came closer, eventually the building began to shake. It showered them both in fine clouds of dust and stung their eyes.

Suddenly, Tara heard the distinct sound of heavy boots on the wooden stairs leading down to the basement. The thudded down in rapid succession, first one pair…then another and another…Even as she tightened her grip on her weapon, Tara knew there was no way that she could hope to fight them off.

A single beam shot through the darkness, illuminating the clouds of dust around them. Before Tara realised that it was simply torch light, it fell directly into her eyes and blinded her. Tara threw her hand up to shield her eyes even as she heard the most welcome sound she could possibly imagine.

“It’s a woman and a kid!” a strong Southern accent cut through the fog in her brain as he yelled to his comrades.

Tara blinked, trying to focus as the torchlight no longer shinned directly into her eyes. All she saw were bright spots for a few moments before she could make out the dirty face of the man in front of her. His earnest brown eyes stared at her from beneath his large helmet, she realised that his hand was extended towards her.

Tentatively, Tara reached out. As soon as she came into contact with his grimy paw, he secured a vice-like grip on her hand and yanked her up in one strong movement. Another soldier had already moved to help Cherry up and the boy beamed at his rescuer. The sudden movement startled Mrs Chippy and her small head peaked out of Cherry’s coat to see what was going on.

“Are you alright mam?” the soldier asked in a loud voice before he saw her flight jacket, “I’m sorry, sir!”

Tara just nodded, she extended her hand to Cherry who responded with the barely imperceptible but vigorous shaking of his head. Although he liked Tara a lot, Cherry didn’t want to be seen holding her hand in front of the battle-toughed soldiers. Even so, he remained close as he followed her stoically from the building.

Once outside she realised what the entire rumbling had been. Stopped outside the building, it’s engine still humming, was a massive tank. The tank commander gave them both a wave from the turret. Tara looked down the street to see another two tanks behind the first, a number of soldiers either stood beside them or clung to the sides.

An officer strode up to greet her with an extended hand, “Lieutenant Oates, third armoured battalion. You one of those pilots from the fleet?”

“Yes, Flight Officer Maclay, I was shot down a few days ago and have been trying to meet up with you guys.”

“We were heading for the front but have just been recalled to reinforce the rear, you guys sure are lucky we bumped into you, Maclay,” Oates nodded, agreeing with himself, “I’m guessing you’ll want to hitch a ride?”

“If it’s no trouble…” Tara began.

“Trouble? Most certainly not!” he turned to men sitting on the sides of the nearest tank and barked out swift orders, “Hey, you louts! Help the officer and the kid up!”

“We’re riding on a tank!” Cherry said breathlessly, he scrambled up the huge tracks on his own, even so, arms reached down to pull him up.

Tara found more than enough soldiers reaching down to help her up. She was hoisted onto the rumbling, metal beast and settled into a spot next to Cherry. Someone had already slapped an overlarge helmet on the boy’s head and he grinned at her from beneath it. Tara reached out and lashed the chinstrap up firmly for him, keeping it tight on his head.

Even as the tiny convoy began moving again with its two extra passengers, Tara’s gut began to ache. She couldn’t tear her eyes away from the mother ship, as far away as it was. Her mother’s words rang over and over in her head. She knew what she had to do but was terribly afraid to do it. Not for her own sake…but for Willow’s. Their tank pulled away last, there was nothing between her and the ship…except Willow.

Cherry was perched comfortably on the side of the tank, well, as comfortable as it was possible to be on the side of a lumbering metal giant. Mrs Chippy had taken this new development in her stride and was riding in his coat with her eyes on the road ahead. A firm hand slapped him on the shoulder and he looked up to see the tank commander smiling down at him.

“Hey kid, want a Hershey’s bar?”

Cherry could only nod enthusiastically and the soldier passed him down a rumpled but intact bar of chocolate. As he was peeling back the wrapper and tucking into his first bite, he looked across to Tara. She was staring behind them, at the perilous way they had just come. Her beautiful face had a pained expression as though she were longing for something. He thought perhaps she was missing Willow. He broke off a piece of his chocolate and tapped her on the shoulder, offering it to her. Tara smiled and shook her head.

“I’m not really hungry,” she replied, she turned around again and went back to facing their past.

He watched her face set in a fierce expression of determination. Cherry knew it well, it was what had seen them both through the past few days. She discreetly tugged her backpack back onto her back and checked her weapon.

Apsley Cherry-Garrard may have been just ten years old, but as he watched Tara he knew she was planning to do something quite rash.

“Tara?” he asked uncertainly.

Tara spun around fully to talk to the boy, she hunkered down slightly to meet him at eye level.

“Cherry, these men will take good care of you and Mrs Chippy alright?” her voice was firm and would brook no argument.

Cherry nodded, the chocolate became tasteless in his mouth as he realised she was leaving him. He carefully folded the remainder of the chocolate back into its wrapper and handed it to her. Tara took it with what she hoped was a reassuring smile. Without a further word she lightly jumped off the back of the moving tank. Within seconds she had disappeared into the rumble that littered the street. All Cherry could do was stare wistfully and eat the piece of chocolate he had broken off to give to Tara.

“Oi! Where’d the woman go?” one of the soldiers had just noticed Tara was missing and grabbed Cherry by the shoulder.

Cherry turned back to face him with an impassive expression on his little face, “She has something she needs to do.”

*****

Willow jammed her thumb down and watched as one rocket tore away from the Guardian and went soaring towards the vent atop the ship. Although she watched with satisfaction as the missile slammed into the port side vent and something erupted in a ball of flame, there was no second rocket that followed. She jammed the button again before peering out of her cockpit and down to see the second rocket hung up on its bracket beneath her wing. It dangled uselessly, neither secure nor about to fall off.

“Oh for fuck’s sake!” Willow slammed her fist against the side of the cockpit and broke of her attack run in the face of a furious barrage of cross fire from all sides.

As she pulled up and out of the most severe fire, she called out over her com to Charlie and Barrel, “Devils three and five, all set for your runs…I’ll draw fire.”

“Will!” Alex yelled from where he was circling, engaged at keeping enemy aircraft at bay, “Get the hell out of there, what else can you possibly do?”

“I make an extremely nice sitting duck,” Willow muttered, as she sped towards the target from the opposite side of the ship as Charlie who was making his live run, she was merely acting as a dummy.

Willow noted with satisfaction that the majority of the fire was directed at her as she ducked and weaved with all the urgency that she could muster. This in itself was an achievement in a plane which was performing worse with each passing minute it was in the air. She passed directly over the target without having fired just as Charlie’s rockets slammed home. Willow passed unscathed through the resulting fireball and back up over the other side.

“Nice shooting Devil three…they’ve definitely got something to think about now,” she watched as fires burned beneath her, licking over the surface of the alien ship, “All set Devil…”

As Willow was pulling back around for yet another dummy run, struggling to avoid fire coming from the ship, she was pounced by an LGF that had snuck through the Slayers protective circle. The engine coughed once more, losing vital airspeed. The Guardian shook as fire tore along its underside, raking it from nose to tail. Willow fought to level her plane out, her instrument panel lighting up like a Christmas tree with warning lights.

Even as she struggled with the controls Willow was fiercely angry, How come I’m the one who’s always getting her plane shot full of holes…I’m supposed to be good dammit!

There was an explosion behind her and Buffy’s voice came over the com, “It’s off your tail Will, you’ve done enough, land that crate before it lands you!”

“Thanks Buff,” Willow kicked the place into a right turn…or rather tried to turn, the Guardian refused to cooperate and managed only a weak bank to the right.

She was moving away from the scene, but at a snail’s pace and with barely any control whatsoever. If she ran into any LGF action she would be toast for sure. Luckily for her, they were all hanging around the ship trying to stem the main attack which, thanks to Willow’s leadership, was wrecking havoc.

A few minutes later, as she was still struggling towards friendly lines, Buffy’s voice called over the com again, “We’re spent, fuels low and ammunition is almost gone…we’ll be right behind you.”

“Outcome?” Willow asked through clenched teeth.

“Inconclusive,” Buffy replied, “The outside of it is all shot to hell but I don’t know what internal damage we’ve done or how many of them we’ve killed…let’s just hope the army has made some progress.”

Willow landed a few minutes later, it felt weird to be landing on solid ground instead of a carrier. While the Guardian was seriously damaged she managed to get it grounded without further incident. After all, she was extremely good at landing damaged planes.

Willow leapt down to the ground from her cockpit, feeling a slight jar as she did so but nothing serious. She flexed all her limbs to make sure they were still there. As she was doing so a pair of soldiers ran up,

“Sure is a nice plane sir,” one said, casting appreciative glances at the new-fangled aircraft.

“It used to be a nice plane,” Willow turned and surveyed the rather serious damage that had been done to her freshly repaired plane, “Is there someone around her who can start fixing her up?”

“The tech boffins are just being brought up from the rear now, shouldn’t be long before you’re back in the air,” the soldier replied confidently.

As Willow looked wearily at her plane she was suddenly aware of just how tired she was. Having no sleep in almost two days was fast catching up with her now she was back on the ground. Her limbs, which only a few moments ago had still been energized from flying, began to turn into jelly.

“Are you alright sir, are you hit?” the soldier asked, his hand shooting out to grab Willow as she sagged.

Willow shook her head, “I’m fine…just exhausted that’s all. I really need to grab a few hours sleep.”

The solider helped her to a cluster of tents which were serving as a field hospital. Willow gratefully slumped down into the nearest available cot and was asleep before her head hit the pillow.

*****

Willow awoke to something licking her face and for a few glorious moments she thought that it might be Tara. However, as she regained consciousness more fully, she realised that the tongue was much too small and too rough to belong to Tara…and she was also quite sure that Tara did not purr. Gradually her eyes opened and came to focus on a tiny, furry little face. She lifted her head from the pillow and lent back slightly to regard a skinny, little orange kitten that looked at her as though he expected thanks for waking her up.

“You’re Willow aren’t you?” a bright voice piped up from the bed next to Willow as she was still trying to gather herself together.

Willow lifted her head to see a small boy seated on the bed behind her. His wayward mop of hair half flopped over half of his dirty little face. He held a huge, steaming tin mug of hot chocolate with his much too long sleeves brought up to protect his skin from the heat. She regarded the rather queer sight for a moment before replying.

“My name’s Willow yes, how did you know?” Willow sat up a little further, propping herself up with her arms.

The cat meowed indignantly at being forced to shift as Willow moved. She absently reached out and stroked it as it settled into a new spot.

“Tara told me about you,” he replied simply.

Upon hearing that name Willow sat up in a hurry. She caused herself a massive head-rush which sent her head spinning and sent the cat leaping to the floor. She grasped her head firmly between both hands for a few moments to quell the sensation. Once the room had stopped spinning, she threw back the covers which someone had kindly placed over her.

“When did you meet Tara?” Willow asked urgently, managing to sit up fully and swing her legs over the side of the bed.

The cat stole the opportunity to return Willow’s lap and she absently resumed stroking it.

“A few days ago, she found Mrs Chippy and I hiding and helped me out until we met up with some soldiers.”

“Tara was with you when you met up with the soldier?” Willow repeated with a furrowed brow and the first glimmerings of hope, “Do you know where she is now?”

“Yes!” he replied enthusiastically, as though he were quite pleased that he could help but at the same time unintentionally exasperating Willow with the brevity of his replies.

“Where? Where is she…please?” Willow tried to keep her voice from sounding too desperate but failed miserably.

“The big ship,” this time he replied with much less enthusiasm, he ducked his head as though it were his fault that he had lost her, “She made sure I was safe and turned right back around again, saying it was something she had to do….but I don’t know what it was she had to do…but she was going in the direction of the big ship. I’m sorry.”

Willow’s heart sank and she lent her head in her hands, accidentally jabbing Mrs Chippy’s foot with her elbow. The cat meowed indignantly and leapt off her lap, having decided that he’d had enough of sitting on the volatile stranger’s lap. He returned to Cherry, rubbing himself against his master’s legs.

“It’s not your fault…” Willow realised she didn’t know the boy’s name even as her mood plummeted to the very depths, “What is your name?’

“Apsley Cherry-Garrard,” he reached out a hand and Willow grasped it as firmly as she could manage under the circumstances, “But everyone calls me Cherry…and this is Mrs Chippy of course.”

“Cherry…thank you very much,” Willow flopped back onto the cot, the springs protesting under her slight weight.

She lay there, feeling an unbearable emptiness and disbelief. Tara had been rescued and within mere miles of returning to her love but she had chosen to run in the opposite direction.

Cherry felt some of Willow’s pain, he missed Tara even though he had only known her for a relatively brief time. He knew just how wonderful Tara was…Willow must be feeling what he felt a hundred-fold.

“Willow,” he saw her blinking back tears.

She propped herself up on her elbows again, and felt reassured by the sympathy evident on Cherry’s face. It was clear Tara had an effect on him.

“Yes Cherry?” she whispered.

“Are you going to follow her?” he asked simply.

Willow’s eyes widened as she realised what Cherry was effectively saying. Why was she sitting around feeling sorry for herself when she could be going after Tara. Willow knew there was little time to waste. She glanced at her watch and saw she had slept for the better part of the afternoon; night would fall soon. For some reason, she couldn’t quite explain, she knew Cherry was very right when he said Tara was heading for the ‘big ship.’ Images of her dream flooded unbidden into her mind and she squeezed her eyes shut tightly, both to hold onto them and block them out.

“Willow?” Cherry asked again, perhaps the redhead had not heard him.

“Yes…I am,” Willow replied firmly before Cherry could ask the question again, finally managing to stand up.

Captain Red, fighter Ace extra-ordinaire, was about to become a foot soldier…

****

Tara slipped and tumbled down a pile of rubble. As she crashed down her world spun around her, she momentarily lost conscious as her head slammed against a concrete slab. When her eyes re-focused she had to stifle a terrified scream. She was face-to-face with a Juthungi on the ground beside her. Petrifying seconds passed before she realised that it was lying down in death, it’s sightless eyes staring at absolutely nothing. Once over her initial terror, Tara regarded it quizzically. In death, although the creature visage was hideous, it was nothing to fear. Instinctively, she reached out and placed her hand on its head, right between its two purple eyes. If she had been expecting to feel something she was disappointed. All she felt was a vague feeling of uneasiness that could have been coming from her own emotions.

Once done communing with the dead alien, Tara regained her feet and resumed her trek towards the mother ship. The closer she came, the more damage was revealed until she was its exterior was a mass of pitted, gaping holes.

At its base, it was connected to the very earth by a series of large tubes. They threaded their way downward in no particular succession, each descended underground. They pulsed like veins full of blood as though they pumped something into the earth. Tara could not get any idea of what it was through the opaque surface of the pipes.

She froze when she saw a small cluster of aliens barely fifty feet away from her. They stood quite impassively, almost as though they were waiting for something. Although she had seen them many times in the dreamscape, it was altogether different to see them real and alive. Fear and doubt resurfaced. What if they were to kill her on the spot? What if her mother had been wrong? Steeling herself for what was to come, Tara gathered a series of deep breaths. She composed herself through her breathing just as her mother had taught her so many years ago.

She was ready…

“I’m so sorry Willow,” Tara murmured as she emerged out into the open.

It did not take long for the Juthungi to notice her…

Tara drew in a deep, shuddering breath as moments later, rough, greasy hands claimed her flesh. In that moment she knew for certain what she had begun to realise in her dream…she would never see Willow again…


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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby grimlock72 » Fri Dec 09, 2005 4:21 am

Let's see.... we know Juthungi do most of their damage in a dreamworld. They even kill people there to sustain themselves. As such it's fair to assume they have some control over said dreamworld.

We also know Tara's mother was killed by the Juthungi one way or the other. So it's likely the Juthungi would know lots of details of Tara's life simply from her mother's memory.

So.... why does Tara trust a dream-image of her mother ?? It sounds just like a very clever trick to get Tara to come to the ship by herself. The cleverness itself is surprising though, since the aliens just don't come across as being very smart. Maybe a smart Queen Alien ?? :) There is nothing that Diana could say in any dream that would make me believe she truly IS Diana and not some fakery (simply because the aliens know all she ever did).

What does Willow think she will do once she reaches either Tara or the mothership? For some reason I don't think she has thought all that much ahead. Would be nice if she got some groundforces (Commando's preferably, close-quarters and all) to join her. Willow does have motivation going for her, thats for sure... it's just all the other skills she'll need on the ground and in the ship I'm worried about.

This ship is tougher than a certain DeathStar it seems, several bombs in the vent and it's still there. I think the aliens will simple block the ducts for the next run, surely they must have picked up on the attack pattern ?

How did Willow get permission to land on the airport with a (presumably armed) missle dangling from her wing by the way ?? :lol. Good thing that the next run proved that dangling missle wouldn't have made the difference.

Hmm... assuming this is indeed a ploy to get Tara in that awfull chair, what will Tara do once she realises that? Specifically, this worries me:
“So if everyone like me were dead…they would leave,” Tara deduced.
:cry :cry

I like Willow's gritty humor; "I make an extremely nice sitting duck," and " After all, she was extremely good at landing damaged planes." were fun :lol.

Indeed this is more complex story than you generally see in Alien Invader movies, heh. (woudln't fit in 90 minutes either way)

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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby sam7777 » Fri Dec 09, 2005 12:26 pm

Looks like both Willow and Tara will finally be together again. I wonder if it wiill in bosy dreams or both. This chapter nicely explainst the connection between Tara and the aliens and why dreams. I like the way you used Cherry as the bridge between Willow and Tara. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby caz » Fri Dec 09, 2005 1:00 pm

I really love this story (being a ex - military type myself). So, Tara is going to take on the LFG's - with the help of her mother. I can't see Willow standing on the side lines, watching her lover do all the work. I think we're in for the "Mother" of all fights.

Can't wait for the next update. :bounce

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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby watty » Fri Dec 09, 2005 6:43 pm

Though most of us would probably have acted the same under those circumstances, I'm kinda worried about both of them seem to be running off toward the Mother Ship on their own with no backup. Well intentioned, but rash. But then love really does make you do the wacky doesn't it.

I don't quite trust Tara's mom in this, is she saying Tara has to sacrifice herself to save humankind? There is some twisted logic in this, but it's also very trap-like.

Like how Willow instinctively interacted with Cherry and Mrs Chippy. Something else she has in common with Tara now.

I'm thinking it's Captain Red the foot soldier to the rescue! Things are heating up a lot. Now why do I have to go on vacation for 2 weeks? :P
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby WillowRulez » Sat Dec 10, 2005 6:13 pm

Tara sacrificing herself for the greater good. That is so like Tara... but Willow wont let her and that is what will allow me to sleep tonight ;)
Great update, keep em coming!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Artemis » Fri Dec 16, 2005 4:53 am

That's very Tara of Tara, to take the fate of the whole world on her shoulders. I see it runs in the family - keeping whatever portion of her psyche intact inside the alien machines for so long can't have been pleasant for her mother. And thanks to the Maclay women's self-sacrifice, there's a chance at bringing down the LGFs for good. I only hope Willow can get there in time to save the day - I mean, what good is Planet Earth without Tara on it? :D

That's quite an assault they've got going against the mothership, too - looks like the initial Martian strike wasn't as overwhelmingly devastating as it seemed. Sure they caused a lot of death and destruction, but they haven't put humanity out of the survival race, not by a long shot.

I just hope it all comes together - the aerial assault, Tara using herself as a Trojan horse, Willow conducting her Trojan horse rescue :lol Hopefully Willow will manage to get Tara out in one piece, Tara will manage to doom the LGFs in the process, and Diana Maclay can finally rest in peace. I'm looking forward to the undoubtedly explosive climax (and with luck, W&T can have one of those too, afterwards :blush ).
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby pipsberg » Wed Dec 21, 2005 2:15 pm

Hey Alcy. Thanks for another great round of action. I'm really enjoying the unfolding story and can't wait to see Tara put her plan in action. Great job!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Alcy » Thu Jan 19, 2006 2:35 am

Grimmy: Hiya Grimmy, I can't really get much past you can I? Which is a very good thing indeed...we can't have anything being taken for granted! Yes the Juthungi control their dreamworld and yes Tara's mother seems to hold all the much needed answers...I'd be suspicious if I were you.
Tara just being Tara, she's the sort of person who would freely give up her life to save even one person, so of course she would make that point.
Willow hasnt thought ahead at all. She's flying by the seat of her pants as she is want to do...but you'll see in the next chapter that she does enlist some help...
Although we have Death Star parallels here, it wouldnt do to have the damn thing blow up with our heroine onboard...this resolution is going to be a little trickier!
Captain Red is the sort of person who would laugh in the face of danger, and I do love writing humour no matter how bd things get!
And granted, this is more complex story than you generally see in Alien Invader, space serial type movies...but I couldnt bring myself to write something so completely devoid of plot! But we will stick to the action the the dramatic conclusion of that genre.

sam7777: I'm working on bringing Willow and Tara together for real in the next few chapters...although I haven't quite succeeded yet! It seemed logical to use Cherry to bring them together and I do like writing him!

caz: Thanks! Glad to have a little semblance of reality in this fic. I've always loved planes and flying so this has been really fun for me to write.Wild horses couldnt keep Willow away from Tara!

Watson: Well thought my friend...although Willow is going to enlist some help...not giving anything away though! But I like rashness a lot. Yes, you're absolutely right...it would be the mother of all traps won't it and the perfect bait really, using the person Tara cares most about besides Willow.
I felt that Cherry brought Willow and Tara together despite the fact they were still apart. And I had a lot of fun writing Cherry and his cat, hopefully we'll see some more of them before the end! Hold on, it's going be gettin' bumpy towards the end!

WillowRulez: I agree completely, that is what Tara would do (I myeslf would be scared shitless of course!) Thanks a lot and keep reading!

Chris: It's a mighty heavy burden but someone's gotta bear it and who else rather than a determined mother and daughter? It would be a pretty dull planet without Tara! The one thing you learn from watching too many crap disaster movies is that humanity always survives, be it Asteroids, Floods, Ice Ages or in this case, Martians, there's always a way...and there's always heroes.
Hopefully you'll be able to see everything making sense and gelling in the next chapter...it all comes to a point where they can't possibly turn around. It really is going to be a case of death or survival at the end.

Pipsberg: Hey Pips, thanks so much! Stay tuned for the unfolding of the plan!

I have a little more to write on the next chapter but it's shaping up really well. If I have a productive day tomorrow it might be up then! Stay tuned for the last two chapters (or three...haven't quite decided yet!)

Cheers
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Alcy » Thu Jan 19, 2006 4:11 pm

Chapter Twenty – “Beauty and the Beast.”

“Have you seen Willow since you landed?”

Buffy looked up from the first meal she had eaten in the better part of twelve hours. Even as her gaze found Faith, her stomach rumbled in angry protest when she put down her fork. The brunette was still wearing her disgustingly dirty flight suit, coated in a mixture of oil and dried blood. She strode over and took a seat on the bench next to her, a groan of exhaustion escaping her lips as she did so. With a filthy hand she reached out and claimed Buffy’s last piece of bread. In two quick bites, the bread was gone. Graciously, Buffy pushed the remnants of the rather awful stew that she had been devouring with relish in Faith’s direction. With barely a murmured thanks, Faith descended on the meal with great gusto.

“What about Willow?” Buffy asked as she watched Faith eat, the mere sight of it quite enough to put her off food for the time being.

“Haf oo een er?” Faith repeated with her mouth crammed full.

“I’m not sure but I thought between all the masticating I heard, ‘Have you seen her’,” Buffy said as she wrinkled her nose in distaste, “I have, she was sleeping in the hospital when I landed…I suppose she’s still there. I tried to wake her up but she was pretty much wiped out.”

Faith looked at Buffy sceptically even as she continued to stuff food in her mouth with barely a pause to chew, “Ah ya sure she still ere?”

“Why wouldn’t she be?” Buffy had no idea where this conversation was leading, if anything, it was serving to irritate her.

Faith had scooped up the last of the stew and with a hearty swallow she cleared her mouth, “Buffy, Willow’s girlfriend is out there somewhere and there is the slimmest of possibilities that she could be found…do you really think Willow is just going to sit here and wait for someone else to rescue her?”

“This is Willow we’re talking about here isn’t it?” The lights of realisation flicked on in Buffy’s mind and her face fell, “Then no…she’d take the first chance she got to go after Tara…and there is no way in hell her crate is going to be flying anywhere today, or this week!”

“She’d try though,” Faith growled.

Both Buffy and Faith sprang to their feet and made their way to the hospital tent. As they were heading for the large tent with its distinctive red cross, they were forced to fight their way through a myriad of troops and vehicles heading towards the front lines. While the pilots and their aircraft could not hope to harass the enemy constantly, the ground assault could. The distant rumble of gunfire created morbid background music for the human camp. It did not cease and would not until all of one side, human or alien, were wiped out.

Willow was not to be found on the cot where Buffy had seen her last. There was a heavily wounded soldier, swathed in bandages lying there in her place. The little boy whom Buffy had seen in the bed next to Willow was nowhere to be seen either. She hoped fervently that he had found somewhere safe to wait out the fighting.

“Orderly! Have you seen Captain Rosenberg?” Buffy inquired of a flustered young man passing by with an armful of blankets.

“She asked the direction to the supply tent…that was about half an hour ago,” he said briskly, without a further word he continued about his urgent business.

Buffy and Faith entered the aforementioned tent a few minutes later and discovered their quarry was indeed there. Willow gave them the briefest of glances when they entered and barely a hint of acknowledgement. Her face was grim and determined as only Willow’s could be.

“We saw your crate sitting on the runway, I hope you’re not planning to go back up in it…Willow…what are you doing?” Buffy asked suspiciously.

Willow was knelling on the ground, stuffing items into a standard army issue rucksack. A loaded Tommy gun sat at her side and a heavy pistol hung from a holster at her hip.

“More to the point,” Faith butted in, eyes narrowed at the sight of the backpack, “Where the hell are you going?”

Willow mumbled something under her breath that both Slayers took as an indication she did not want to answer either of their questions. Faith was not one to stand a ceremony. She reached down and grabbed Willow by the scruff of her jacket. With one swift jerk she yanked the redhead to her feet.

“We’re not leaving until you tell us what you’re doing,” Faith demanded, keeping Willow held secure at eye level.

“I’m going to find Tara,” was Willow’s unsurprising answer.

Faith grunted and let Willow go, “That was simple wasn’t it? Now we’re not leaving…we’re coming with you.”

“Speak for yourself!” Buffy looked slightly disgruntled but she agreed with a nod anyway.

Willow glared at the two women in turn. She was annoyed that they would attempt to intrude on her grief by making it their own as well. Although Willow was fully aware of the saying, ‘there is strength in numbers,’ she was determined to make this struggle her own. It had to be. They simply could not spare the manpower to go charging off searching for a single pilot who had probably been dead for days.

She studied Buffy and Faith’s faces and found exactly what she had expected. Stubborn, pig-headed determination and a blatant disregard for any opinion save their own. Tara had been their friend for a long time, long before she had met Willow. If Willow denied them her approval they would simply follow her anyway. They were all probably going to die…and any squabbling along the way would get them all killed much, much sooner.

“Get yourselves kitted up,’ Willow said gruffly, deep down she was grateful to have anyone coming along with her but she wasn’t about to admit that.

The private manning the desk in the supply tent was quick to respond to their requests. He loaded them up with light packs the same as Willow’s, as well as emergency gear and rations. Once their packs were sorted, he placed two Tommy guns down on the desk, along with extra ammunition. Buffy picked hers up and swiftly slammed a fresh magazine in whereas Faith just stared at it disappointedly. She looked up at the private.

“Have you got anything a little bigger?” she asked hopefully.

“Well, I can’t assign you anything bigger than a Bren gun…but with all due respect sir, I think you’d be much better off with the Tommy. She packs a pretty good punch and the Bren…is a little hard to handle for a…um, for a…” He was about say to ‘woman’ but instead withered beneath Faith’s resulting angry glare, “Um, I’ll just go get you one.’

He returned with the much larger machine gun and handed it gingerly to Faith, who accepted it with a broad smile on her face, “Much better thank you private.”

The flaps of the supply tent parted to reveal a rather disgruntled group of pilots. The three women found Alex, William, Charlie and Barrel standing with arms crossed and resolute expressions.

“Going somewhere without us Captain?” William asked with an arched eyebrow.

“Tommy guns all around!” Buffy signalled to the flustered private before turning to Willow who was tight-lipped with her appreciation, “The more help the better I figure.”

The seven-strong squad moved out under the fast fading light that evening. Their weapons clinked softly as their boots padded out of the human encampment. They made their way out into the devastation that had once been a great city.

Willow stared up into the early winter sky to find that the stars still twinkled despite all that was going on beneath them. With each foot forward she took a step closer to finding out whether Tara was dead or alive…if she managed to find her at all. She was grateful to her friends around her for their support, even if she was leading them all to their deaths.

“Will!” Alex hissed in her ear, trying to keep as quiet as possible, “Have you got a plan?”

“No,” Willow whispered in reply, “I haven’t got a clue either…just a whole lot of hope.”

“Well…” Alex replied grudgingly, “That’s better than nothing…although a plan would be really good!”

*****

Tara floated on the edges of consciousness. She was aware enough to know that she was sealed up in a bare metal cell and that she was freezing. They had left her lying in only her undergarments, just a thin layer of wool separating her skin from the ice cold metal.

As time passed in her delirious state, images and memories had begun to flash before Tara’s eyes to the point where she could no longer separate hallucinations from reality. Each memory came unbidden, but in chronological order like a filmstrip of her life. It was as though someone or something was trawling through her memories at will.

Most of her life passed before her in the blink of an eye, something which Tara thought was appropriate as she was going to die. However certain memories were lingered over. Tara experienced each with all the richness of reality. She had no idea why they were chosen and she was powerless to do anything except relive each one.

”Two cups of flour and one cup of sugar.”

As six-year-old Tara listened carefully to the instructions, she looked up to see her mother standing over her. Diana Maclay held no recipe book and she had never needed one. On short legs, Tara reached up and scooped the ceramic cup into the flour bin. She carefully brought out a heaped cup. Despite the care she took in pouring it into the mixing bowl it still managed to spray a fine layer of powder over the counter top and her face. Tara sneezed loudly, sending little puffs of powder into the air around her. Dianna laughed and patted Tara’s cheek, leaving behind a small patch of skin.


Even as she lay shivering violently, a small smile crossed Tara’s face as she brought her hand up to touch her cheek. For a few blissful moments, she felt the heat of her mother’s kitchen and smelled the aroma that wafted from the oven. She had forgotten that smell…

Another cup of flour, added with even more care this time so there was no accident. The cup of sugar flowed in easily, the little crystals standing out from the flour lying around them.

“Two eggs…watch me do the first one, you give it a good tap on the side of the bowl,” Tara loved listening to her mother’s voice, no matter what she was talking about.

Tara watched as her mother gave the egg a solid but controlled tap on the side of the ceramic mixing bowl. It cracked neatly and from then she deftly separated the two halves and let the contents fall into the bowl. It looked so simple. Diana handed Tara the next egg and she cradled it carefully in her hand just like her mother had done. She then whacked it against the side of the bowl, completely misjudging the amount of force that was necessary to crack the shell. Egg and shell went flying in all directions, several dollops of yolk landing on Tara’s face but mostly it collapsed into a runny mess in her hand. Tara looked up at her mother with a pathetically apologetic look on her face, expecting a frown of disapproval. Instead, Diana chuckled and fetched a towel from nearby.

“That was…not bad for a first go,” she said diplomatically as she cleaned the mess from Tara’s hand.

However Tara was a precocious child and she wrinkled her small nose in disagreement, “I’m a bad cook, Mommy.”

Diana chuckled, “You can say that when you’re thirty years old, not six.”

“I will then,” Tara replied simply.


If she had been anywhere else, Tara would have laughed at the memory. In hindsight, her six-year-old self had been exactly right and she was still a terrible cook. No wonder she was in the military, she wasn’t at all fussy about her food.

“It’s s-so c-cold,” Tara whispered to herself, mostly to discover whether she could still speak.

Her voice sounded oddly detached, as though she were not the one speaking the words. As she could not feel her lips, this seemed entirely possible.

“W-Willow…I need you,” the words were meaningless, Tara knew she was never going to see Willow again.

Tara struggled to bring an image of Willow into her mind and retain it there despite the intrusions inside her mind. She mentally ran her thumb over Willow’s ruby red lips before moving it to caress her silky smooth cheek. Tara grunted in frustration as something tried to rip that image from her mind. All she could do was scream out in protest as she was forced back into her memories.

The bare grey walls were not unlike the cell in which her real body was lying. However, they were terribly familiar rather than alien. The room was not empty but rather there was a simple cot against one wall and a plain chest of drawers with a precisely placed mirror hanging above it. There were no openings save for one heavy door which, as Tara already knew, was locked. It was a room that Tara knew all too well.

Tara Maclay was a prisoner, and she was just eleven years old.

The door clicked once and swung open with a creaking of its massive hinges. Tara half expected men with wicked looking guns but what she got was a tall, bespectacled man in a white coat. Despite her terror, he did not appear threatening in the least. Rather he smiled warmly.

“How are you Tara?” his accent was unmistakably British, his tone unmistakably sincere.

Tara looked at him as though he were joking, she frowned and replied as though she were stating the obvious, “I’m locked up…why am I locked up?”

“Tara, it’s for you own protection at first, after a while the door will be unlocked and you will be free to walk around the school, and outside in the grounds with supervision,” he could see that his words were having little compensatory effect, “I truly am sorry Tara, this room really is dreadful…I hope to be able to arrange something better for you soon. Just hang in there okay?”

“This doesn’t look like a school,” Tara replied quietly.

She sighed and sat heavily on the small bed behind her. The springs creaked in protest, hinting at just how uncomfortable the bed would be to sleep on. Everything was closing in on her at this point, her entire life had become a nightmare from which she desperately wanted to wake. Her beautiful mother had gone to Egypt and would never return, keeping part of Tara’s heart with her. The rest of her heart had been ripped from her chest when her father and brother were murdered in their beds. It made Tara violently ill to think that she had been responsible for their deaths. Now, sitting in that awful room, she was sure that thing beating in her chest was no longer her heart. She might as well be dead.

“Tara, you are safe here. You must know that,” the white-coated man tried to console her.

“Where are my things?” Tara desperately needed something from her former life, if only to run her fingers over it and reassure herself that she had once lived that life and had once been an incredibly happy and blessed little girl.

The man’s face fell as though it was a difficult question, “I’ll see what I can do to get them to you. In the meantime, would you like some lunch?”

Tara shook her head deliberately, “I’m not hungry. I just want a photo of my family.”

“I’ll get it for you,” he promised sincerely, “My name is Mr Giles, Tara. You can call me Giles.”

Giles went to leave, it was not until the door was almost closed that Tara said anything,

“Bye Giles,” she whispered in a small voice.


Tara knew that Giles had been the one person who had been truly good to her in that awful place. He was her only friend until she met Buffy and Faith many years later.

”Tara, for goddsake cut back on the throttle!”

Even though he was screaming into the com, Tara’s instructor sounded as though he were miles away. She barely registered his terrified voice sounding over the crackly connection between the two cockpits. Tara couldn’t care in the least, she threw the biplane around the sky as though it were one of the best planes money could by. The little craft flicked over into a roll and back up into a steep climb that made her whoop for sheer joy. All of this was done with the throttle slammed forward as far as it would go. The daring young pilot was squeezing every once of power out of the pathetic excuse for an engine. The machine coughed and spluttered violently in protest at the way it was being treated. Normally the biplane flew along at a steady, sedate pace under the shaky control of a trainee pilot. This routine only varied when the terrified pupil was instructed to bank into a turn.

Tara, however, was no terrified pupil. Despite having just five hours flying time to her name, she handled the plane as though she had been born in the cockpit. This flight had started like every other, Tara following the careful directions of the instructor sitting behind her as she guided the plane through its paces. Bored of the simple manoeuvres, Tara ignored all further instructions and flew on instinct. The result had the instructor in a blind panic and Tara having the time of her life.

As she was hanging upside down in a barrel roll Tara knew that this was what she wanted to do for the rest of her life. For those precious moments in the air she could forget about who she was and her traumatic past. In the air the only thing that mattered was the bond between herself and the aircraft she was flying.

As the plane levelled out, the stick was violently wrenched out of her hand.

“I’m taking over!” the instructor bleated over the com.

“Fucking pussy,” Tara muttered just loud enough for him to hear, her foul language learned from her newfound friends at Air Academy.


Inside her frozen exterior Tara was oddly smug. She remembered that she had been taken off the rickety old biplanes the very next day, promoted to training on Air Commands newest monoplane fighter aircraft which had been even more fun.

”Willow.”

Tara said the name again, this time however it felt as though it was for real. Willow was really standing in front of her in their cramped little cabin on the Odysseus. Every detail stood out on her face, right down to the adorable little cleft in her chin. Somewhere deep down inside of her Tara knew that she was still reliving past events…but she didn’t care. Especially as moments later Willow began peeling both hers and Tara’s layers of clothing off as fast as humanly possible.

“Oh god,” Willow breathed between mouthfuls of Tara, “I need you so much…been in fucking training all day long…”

Tara arched one eyebrow naughtily as Willow crouched down to unbutton her pants, “Fucking training Will? Do you need some extra lessons?”

Willow glanced up at Tara in confusion partway through wrestling her pants to the ground, “No…no extra lessons, I’ve never needed extra lessons in my life…well, unless you count the tuition I had in eighth grade to catch up after being off school with pneumonia for a month but extra lessons implies that I find it difficult, which I don’t…” Comprehension finally dawned, “Oh! I can be pretty stupid at times huh?”

“Not stupid, just overly literal…but I’m interrupting you, please continue,” Tara was standing with her pants half way down around her legs growing colder by the second without the heat of Willow’s body next to hers.

“Yes mam,” Willow eagerly continued her duties.

The offending pants were stripped clear, leaving Tara completely naked. Willow admired her body as she finished her own disrobing. Tara ruined this by leaping into their narrow bunk and hiding beneath the covers, peering out from the warmth as Willow hopped about the small room trying to remove her socks. Finally naked, Willow padded the few steps across the floor and leapt into the bunk.

The bed springs protested as the two bodies began writhing in their own version of keeping warm. Willow forced Tara’s head deep into the pillow beneath the ferocity of her kiss. She devoured every bit of Tara’s lips, exploring them over and over just in case there was a tiny spot she had missed. She jammed her thigh fiercely between Tara’s and forced her legs apart. With forceful but careful strokes she ground herself against Tara’s centre, feeling it throbbing against her skin.

In desperation, Tara wrapped both legs around Willow’s back. She drew her lover as tightly to her as possible, needing to feel the reassurance that Willow needed her just as much. She tore her lips away from Willow’s.

“Inside me…now!” Tara commanded breathlessly.

Willow buried her face in Tara’s neck, one hand moving downwards over the curve of her shoulder and finding her full breast. She grabbed it in a savage handful, pinching the nipple between her thumb and forefinger. Tara yelped and bit down hard on Willow’s shoulder.

“Tara…” Willow hesitated, speaking softly between trailing little kisses along Tara’s jaw line, “You aren’t ready…”

Tara growled in exasperation and dug her nails hard into Willow’s back, “For fucks sake! I’ll be the judge of when I’m ready!”

Willow moved her hand from Tara’s breast, over her taut belly to the mound of curls at the apex of her thighs.

She kept her face buried in Tara’s neck and whispered in her ear, “I love your fire…but you are a little demanding!”

Tara let out a laugh which quickly merged into a gasp as Willow parted her outer lips with skilled fingers and found her clit, “It’s because I know I can get away with it…oh god, Will!”

Willow’s fingers slid all too easily into Tara’s moist folds and she giggled in delight at what she found, “You weren’t exaggerating…”

“I’m always ready for you,” Tara forced the words out between clenched teeth.

Willow stroked Tara’s clit lovingly, lavishing all her careful attention on the hard little nub. She teased it with the tips of her fingers and rolled it gently between her thumb and forefinger. Alternatively, she stroked it repeatedly with the full length of her finger…moving faster until Tara was writhing beneath her. Her grip on Willow tightened until the redhead could barely breath. She didn’t care, breathing was secondary compared to pleasuring the beautiful woman she held in her arms.

Willow settled into a brisk rhythm, grinding her tight against her hand which in turn stroked Tara’s centre. She loved the feel of Tara’s breath coming hot and fast in her ear. This close, it was deafening.

Tara’s nails dug into Willow’s back once more, “Inside…please!”

Willow didn’t need to hear the command a third time. With a gentle movement, she quickly thrust two fingers up into Tara’s passage until the palm of her hand ground against Tara’s sex. She repeated the movement, straining to force her fingers even deeper with each thrust.

Tara cried out and arched her back, rising up to meet each thrust. Willow’s thumb ground hard against her clit but she wanted more.

“Goddammit Will…harder, fuck me as hard as possible!” Tara wheezed in her lover’s ear, biting down on the ear to make her point clear.

Willow growled and poured everything she had into her joining with Tara’s body. Her spare hand roamed over her slick flesh before slipping beneath Tara’s shoulders and around them. She used her hold to draw Tara as close as possible, holding them both firmly together. Willow’s body was soaked with sweat due to her exertion, every muscle strained to the absolute limit. Her breath came in ragged gasps, each one a struggle.

Tara had her arms wrapped around Willow’s back. She dug her nails in to retain her hold on the slick flesh. Even as her mind swarmed with sensations of pleasure she was aware of the body moving with her and in her. Through hazy eyes she saw flashes of red head and the creamy cheek of her lover.

This is the woman I love…

She sank back into the blissful oblivion of pleasure just as everything threatened to burst. Tara was whimpering against Willow’s cheek…whimpers which gradually became louder until they were cries. Suddenly, her cries of pleasure became cries of pain as something sharp jabbed impatiently at her mind, it felt as though it were being torn apart. Memories were flying everywhere, a jumbled mix that she could not distinguish apart.


Tara’s eyes flew open despite the chaos in her mind. She realised what they were doing…the Juthungi were trawling through her memories, probing what secrets she held, if any. Tara gritted her teeth. She had everything to hide. The most vital secret she possessed had nothing to do with what had happened during the past twenty-six years of her life but rather what had happened within the last day. If they found out…everything would be over. She’d be killed…and Willow would die along with everyone else on the planet. Tara forced herself to hold onto those last memories of Willow, the last moment she had spoken to her love before they had taken off that last time.

Think about Willow! Tara urged herself, holding onto the image of her lover like her life depended on it...which it did.

On the deck of the Odysseus, in the midst of all the chaos that was going on around them, Willow and Tara shared one last kiss before they took off. Neither woman knew it was their last and it was just a small kiss on the forehead.

“That’s all you get,” Tara watched the look of protest creep onto Willow’s face, “We don’t want to start a wolf-whistling frenzy now do we.”

Willow shook her head, “No, I’m not feeling like an exhibitionist and besides, we’ll be back in no time and I get kisses then don’t I?”

“You most certainly do,” Tara tucked Willow’s silk scarf securely into her jacket, straightening it tenderly, “Go get ‘em Captain.”

Willow left Tara’s side and clambered up the ladder standing beside her plane, before she swung herself into the cockpit she looked over her shoulder and whistled at Tara as she was walking away, “This is all terribly exciting isn’t it?” Willow was all confidence.

“Shut up and get in your plane show off,” Tara laughed before breaking into a jog towards the other side of the deck where the Slayer aircraft were parked, she gave Willow a last wave…a last wave…


Tara held onto the last look on Willow’s face. The redhead’s adorable grin and that flash of excitement she held in her eyes. Tara knew that look of pure excitement was reserved for just two things in Willow’s life…flying and lovemaking.

Over and over that same look flashed across Tara’s mind, she recalled every single time she had seen it. Tara held onto each memory like a hellion, refusing to let go of it. She needed to hold onto Willow…

“Willow!” the name erupted from her throat like a primal war cry.

The single scream sapped any remaining strength Tara had and she lay on the floor. As time went by she was able to feel less and less of her limbs as the succumbed to the cold. In time, she was just a disembodied consciousness, capable of just one coherent thought. Her lips moved of their own accord. They formed a soundless word, over and over…

“Willow…Willow…Willow…Willow…”

*****

Willow crouched low in the rubble surrounding the LGF ship. Carefully she peered over the rubble parapet and studied the massive vessel illuminated in the moonlight. Its menacing, squat presence dominated the devastated skyline. As far as she could see there was no obvious way in save trying to blow a hole through into the interior. Despite the fact that the situation seemed hopeless, she knew she had to get in some way or another. Over three days had passed since Tara had left for the ship according to the little boy, Cherry. Willow had no doubt that Tara had reached her destination but where to from there, she had no idea. One of the few things she was sure of…time was running out for all of them.

“Well?” Faith whispered from where she crouched next to Willow in the darkness, “I’d say we blow a hole in the side of it with explosives.”

The brunette’s face lit up at the prospect of fire and loud noise but Willow was shaking her head.

“You do that and we’ll have every LGF inside that thing coming down on us with everything they have! We wouldn’t last two seconds!” Willow hissed in reply, “No…there has to be another way!”

High above them sounded the shrill whistle of incoming projectiles. Every member of the group looked skyward to see streaks of fire heading towards the Martian ship. With deafening explosions they smashed against the side of the structure and Faith got her wish. Willow ducked just as a piece of debris flew directly at her, threatening to decapitate her.

“It’s us!” Buffy yelled excitedly above the cacophony, “Yay for us!”

“Not yay!” Alex yelped, cowering behind a half-destroyed wall, “They’re gonna kill us! Call them off!”

The fire created by the missiles lit up the night up, Willow bravely entered a crouch and watched exactly what was happening to the ship. She watched huge holes tear in its exterior structure with the impact of thousands of pounds of explosives. Huge clouds of smoke were being generated and they quickly obscured the ship, leaving no way to tell just what effect the bombardment was having.

Showers of dust and debris sprayed the companions. They were forced to cower behind any available shelter, powerless to take advantage of the havoc the assault was wrecking. Suddenly a wall behind them shattered with a direct hit, sending a cascade of flying masonry down on them. It was chaos in the darkness with no way to avoid the falling bricks except sit tight and pray. The moment the missile had hit, Faith had thrown herself over Willow. She slammed the redhead down just as the heatwave poured over them.

Jammed beneath Faith, Willow squeezed her eyes shut and pressed her hands tight against her ears. She heard someone cry out in the darkness, a shrill cry that was instantly cut off and her heart sank. The thought of any of her friends dying while following her was foremost in her mind.

Moments later, the debris was settling all around them. The weight pressing down on Willow was gone and she rolled over to find Faith shaking chunks of dirt from her hair.

“Thanks,” Willow had never realised what a valuable friend the brunette was, she could see why Buffy kept her around.

“Don’t mention it,” Faith replied gruffly, “Besides, this whole thing will be in vain if you go getting yourself killed before we even find Tara.”

Willow sat up, explosions still lighting up the sky, and peered around her as the dust settled.

“Is everyone alright?” she called into the darkness.

“Bloody hell!” William muttered angrily upon finding his last packet of cigarettes completely mangled, he tossed the packet away with a loud growl.

One by one they sounded in until just Barrel and Charlie were left, Willow called out again, “Charlie, Barrel?”

Barrel finally replied in a gruff voice, “I’m here…but Charlie ain’t…he got half a house in the chest.”

“God…” Willow scrambled across the rubble to where Barrel was sitting next to his friend’s body.

Willow glanced down at her fellow Devil, his body almost completely covered by bricks and mortar. There was no doubt that he was dead. She looked up to Barrel to see him sitting with a stony look on his face. Willow then saw the big pilots shoulder and gasped. Protruding from his flesh was a large stake of wood which had embedded itself there.

“Barrel, you’re hurt…just sit there,” Willow turned over her shoulder, “Who’s got the first aid kit?”

“Here!” Buffy responded quickly.

Before Willow could turn back around, there was a muffled grunt from behind her. She spun around to find Barrel sitting with the bloody stake in his hand…he’d already ripped it out of his chest.

“That’s a mighty impressive splinter,” he muttered and tossed it aside, “Gonna patch me up or what Captain?”

Buffy moved quickly over with the first aid kit and set to work with William’s help. Meanwhile, Willow could only stare at Charlie’s blonde hair beneath the rubble, almost black from all the dust. The realisation that she was never going to fly with him again dawned on her. He’d followed her and he’d met his end in the dirt rather than the sky like it should have been. More than anything she regretted denying him that. She gazed skywards and hope fervently that the rest of her friends would live to feel the joy of soaring through the air once more.

“Captain…” Barrel interrupted her anguish, “He respected and admired you, Charlie did…don’t insult his memory by turning turkey on us now, we need you to lead us.”

He nodded towards the dead pilot and seconds later Willow replied with a firm nod of her own. She had led them all this far, it seemed pointless to back out now. Willow rolled over and crawled to get a better view of their destination. While the dust wasn’t clearing, it did part long enough for Willow to spy a breach in the hull of the mighty ship…a breach large enough for a person to crawl through. She decided that they would make for it as soon as Buffy was done patching Barrel up.

However, adding to the sounds already filling the air came something which turned her blood to ice. She knew that sound all too well as it had been ever present in her life since she first engaged the LGFs in combat. It was the whine of their flying wing aircraft…although multiplied many thousands of times. High above the group saw black shadows passing overhead, each one an LGF aircraft. Wave after wave flew on until it seemed as though the swarm would be never ending. It seemed as if the cavalry had arrived…but not for mankind.

On the ground below the six pilots wished anything to be airborne in order to fight back. Even though such a wish would have been truly futile. Any attempt to stop them would have been overwhelmed in seconds.

“Oh my god,” Buffy whispered, “How stupid we were to think we could win against them. They’ll be on our front lines in a matter of minutes, pounding everything into dust.”

Willow found herself nodding in agreement. The shadows obscuring her bright green eyes bore right into her soul. Everything had been going so well, they had been winning against all odds. The Guardians were turning the tide of the war in favour of the humans. Now there was no way they would be enough. The odds had just turned against them…and it didn’t look as though they would be swinging back anytime soon.

Go get ‘em Captain Tara’s vibrant sounded in her mind, recalling the last moments they had spent together before the ill-fated flight.

Willow set her jaw firmly, she repeated Tara’s words out loud, “Go get ‘em.”

Willow crawled further forward until she was poised on the brink of the last cover available before the open ground surrounding the ship. For the last fifty meters, there would be no cowering behind anything, just an all out sprint.

“What did you say?” Buffy had put the first aid kit back in her pack and Barrel was flexing his body beneath the bandages.

“We’re moving out. There’s still a chance and I’m going to take it. Are you with me?”

“What, the six of us?” Buffy inched up to lie beside Willow although she was looking behind her at their bedraggled little group.

“And Tara,’ Willow replied, looking towards the gash torn in the side of the ship…their ticket in.

“You really think she’s the key to all of this?” Faith asked, crawling up to rest on the other side of Buffy.

“I don’t know how or why…but yes,” Willow replied in a firm voice, checking she had a firm hold on her weapon, “Tara felt that there was something she had to do…and whatever it is, I don’t want her to be alone.”

“We’ll get you to her Will,” Alex joined the three of them, paused to make the dash across to the ship.

Barrel grunted and moved up next to Alex, “Let’s go get some LGF! I owe them one for Charlie.”

“And I’m just pissed off,” William muttered, already feeling the burning desire for a cigarette.

Willow steeled herself before leaping swiftly to her feet. Her muscles gave a twinge of protest as she burst into full speed ahead but she kept her eyes firmly fixed on the opening some six feet above the ground. Beside her, the other five followed and fanned out around her. Each sprinting their heart out, even Barrel was keeping up despite his wound.

At every moment Willow expected to feel the sharp bite of something tearing into her flesh as they were spotted. However she made it safely to the side of the ship and slammed into the cold metal, hugging the side tightly as she waited for the others to join her. They worked swiftly helping each other up. Luckily the missile hit had left plenty of ruptures in the ships otherwise smooth hull to serve as handholds. One by one they climbed up into the ship, Faith led the way, followed quickly by Buffy. The two women turned to help Barrel up while Alex and Willow gave the big man a boost from below. William watched their backs.

“Ouch!” Alex protested beneath Barrel’s weight, “You have got to lay off the cake mate!”

Barrel turned to help Alex up with a grin on his face, “Are you trying to tell me I’m fat?”

“No, just awfully heavy!” Alex replied as he scrambled up into the ship, once safely inside he gave an involuntary shiver, “This place gives me the heebie-jeebies and we’re not even fully inside yet.”

Willow propelled William up next, she would be the last to enter. As she was waiting for William she kept an eye on the surroundings, so far they had managed to slip in unnoticed. The size of their group was an advantage, she suspected the LGFs were concerned only about large numbers of troops.

“Up you come Will,” Faith extended her hand down to help Willow up.

As Willow was halfway up, her hands gripping the bottom of the opening, there was a sudden burst of steam from her right. She glanced across to see a huge metal plate moving towards her and closing the gap at an alarming rate. In mere seconds she would be either shut outside the ship or squashed flat as the gap sealed. Even as her legs worked furiously to get herself up, she felt Faith’s grip on both her forearms. With a mighty heave from the brunette she was propelled inside. There was barely anytime to spare, Willow’s backpack and Tommy gun were ripped from her back as she squeezed through the rapidly dwindling opening. Willow fell forward just as the gap sealed itself completely and landed unceremoniously atop Faith.

“Will, you don’t need to thank me like this,” Faith found herself face to face with the redhead, closer than either of them had ever been to each other before.

“Thanks anyway,” Willow scrambled backwards onto her haunches, allowing Faith room to stand up.

“Close shave?” Buffy patted her firmly on the back.

“Yeah, you don’t really need to get any skinnier Will,” Alex quipped before looking around, “Um, any ideas on where we’re going?”

Willow stood up on shaky legs and scanned the space in which they now found themselves. It was all too eerily familiar because she had been here before. It was the same place which had haunted her dreams of late…however it was ten times as worse in real life. She saw the translucent green tubing pulsating along the walls. It cast a green glow over each of them and made them appear as though they were dead. The tubes disappeared into the darkness ahead, flowing on to their destination. Willow knew exactly where they were going.

“Just follow the green lights,” Willow commanded, stepping out into the lead.

Willow withdrew her remaining weapon from its holster on her thigh. She glanced down at the little Webley pistol and felt that it would be little more than a popgun when fired against an LGF. Still a weapon was better than nothing. The others fell into file behind her, weapons at the ready and eyes scanning for any sign of their enemy.

“Just like the Yellow Brick Road,” Alex said, training his Tommy gun on any shadow that looked remotely menacing.

“Only I don’t think it leads to Oz,” Faith added dryly as she brought up the rear.


TBC in Chapter Twenty-One – “Endgame.”
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby WillowRulez » Thu Jan 19, 2006 6:38 pm

Waaaah, I think it's time for W and T to come back together... which will happen in the next update, right? :-D
I've come to the point where I think LGF is a real scientific term... good or bad sign? Hehe!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Useful_Oxymoron » Fri Jan 20, 2006 4:52 am

Wow, I'm so glad I found this story. I always love these kinds of Alien invasion stories. I've spent many times playing UFO : Enemy Unknown and reading Harry Turtledove in the past. I always fall in love with these kinds of stories. :bow

Ironically, Mars Attacks! was on the tube last week. I doubt the Juthungi are as cute as the martians in that film are, though. :)

The use of the dreamscape is an original variation of the classic alien invasion story, which I really enjoy reading about.

Willow as a hard-nosed pilot is definitely a mental image that sticks, that's for sure. I hope Willow and Tara will be reuinited again soon. They could certainly use some :wtkiss right about now. :D
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby caz » Fri Jan 20, 2006 2:35 pm

Excellent update!

Poor Tara - the LGF's are a pack of bastards. At least Tara knows what they are trying to do to her. Hopefully her memories of Willow will keep the important stuff hidden.

Glad to see the rest of the gang pitching in to help Willow. I can just see Faith with her large machine gun. And now they are all in the Mothership - let the arse kicking begin.

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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby sam7777 » Fri Jan 20, 2006 2:50 pm

Well it's awful that Tara is being kept in a cold dark cell and effectively and having her memories explored. Still nice opportunity to sneak in a but of W/T smut and reinforce their link to each other. Their dream sharing should give Willow and edge in negotiating the alien ship. can't wait to see how it all shales out. Great fic!
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby sabina » Sat Jan 21, 2006 4:48 pm

Hi :)

Well, lately I haven't been leaving many replies, which is bad of me I know :ashamed, but this update and the nearing of the end of this wonderful story made me want to de-lurk :)

It's always with a bittersweet feeling that I read the last couple of chapters of one of my favourite stories. Because if on one hand I can't wait to know how it ends on the other one I'll never have new chapters to read again and those unique incarnations of W/T will be in a way lost to me. And you write them so well...

Now on to another subject (the story, lol). First I want to tell you that I really love your story :applause

I was really happy to see Buffy, Faith and the rest of the pilots join Willow on her rescue mission. I have a feeling that she is going to need all the help she can get now that she's finally inside the belly of the beast.
I was sad as I read about Tara lying on the cold ground, losing touch with her physical self and trapped within her memories, forced to revive them as the aliens analised and descarted each one. It kind of made me think of Glory.
I'm hoping that the strength of Willow's image will prove to be too much for the aliens to handle and their heads will explode in a cloud of grey and red :devil Hum... No? :blush

I'll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter :bounce and hum... hoping that it won't be the last :pray
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby grimlock72 » Sun Jan 22, 2006 1:38 pm

I'm wondering if that memory-scanning can be used against those alien critters. Obviously the entire ship and alien-crew will have to be destroyed for having Tara sleep in a cell on a cold metal floor :smash.

The ship seems to be alive but doesn't have very good external sensors :). Faith walking around on the inside somehow makes me think of really strong antibiotic medications, heh. The private was right when he handed Faith the bren, it's really not suited for precies or close-quarters battle. You can wreck a large area pretty good with it though :lol. I wonder how well those small alien vessels can fly if their mothership were seriously damaged...

I'm sort of waiting for Willow to 'hear' Tara calling out for her, can't imagine those pesky aliens masking her calls. Then again, maybe they want them together ?? No, they wouldn't have shot down Willow like that then.

I'm sorry about Charlie not getting the chance to at least die in battle. Willow shouldn't feel too guilty though, he choose to follow her. Still sucks to lose someone from your team.

Who-ever decided to have Tara placed in a locked room at age 11 without as much as a photo or a semblance of normal life should be crushed under the mothership. That phase in Tara's life is over, but it still makes me angry to even read about the idea... an 11 year old girl forcably enlisted in the army, great idea... NOT.

Cute to see some good Tara/Diana moments to. I'm still not much with trusting any Diana in the current time though.

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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby Artemis » Mon Jan 23, 2006 5:27 am

I'm all tense, the big finale is so close! Yay for Faith, Buffy et al joining Captain Red in her one-pissed-off-woman assault on the LGF mothership. I wonder how many of them will be coming back out again? They've lost one already, and I doubt that's the last sacrifice that'll be made.

Tara's got a truly Herculean task ahead of her, defying the mental strength of a whole species to keep them from finding the secret she's keeping. Lucky she's got the idea of Willow to fixate on, and so many intense memories of her - if they'd just been playing Scrabble, the world may have been doomed. Didn't I say at some point W/T smut would save the world? I'm sure I did.

I really like the sense that Willow and Tara are with each other: even though Tara doesn't expect to be coming back, she thinks 'I need you Willow' - she needs the strength that comes from her love for Willow to resist the aliens messing in her memories, and she has it. And Willow seems to have Tara giving her the resolve to get into the LGF ship and rescue Tara. They're a great team, even when they are separated by half a spaceship and a lot of aliens.
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Jan 24, 2006 12:13 pm

I've been quite behind on this story. First it was off for a while and then you came back and I started reading and couldn't remember what the whole story was so then I reread the entire thing. Very very well done. I have to say that reading the whole thing, I'm again very impressed by your depiction of the emotions in this story. Your depiction of W/T's love seems substantiated (not always true in W/T fic). Their passion is engulfing. Also very substantiated are the other relationships in this fic: Buffy/Willow, Buffy/Tara, Willow/Faith, even Willow/Tad and Willow's squadron. I'm quite excited by Tara's mother's appearance to her but scared for Tara at the same time. We're reaching the climax it would seem. More soon?
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Re: Captain Red and the Denizens of Mars

Postby watty » Fri Jan 27, 2006 3:35 am

I'm so behind on reading and fb it's unbelievable. RL (and most importantly, work) can do that to you.

So very sad to see poor Charlie killed, but it is a war with dreadful casualties, at least he would have known that he was cherished and appreciated by his colleagues and his Captain grateful that he joined her. Willow need not feel guilty, she herself would have done the same for any of her team -- followed them in search of their loved one.

Scary of the LGFs to be trawling through Tara's mind and memories like that. I'm full of admiration for Tara to be able to ground herself with thoughts of Willow.

“W-Willow…I need you,” the words were meaningless, Tara knew she was never going to see Willow again.

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This is building up to a tense, nail-biting climax. I'm sure the reunion will be emotional, poignant .... and (I hope) very hot. EIther way, thanks for sharing.
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