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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 11 April)
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JustSkipIt: Congrats on the dibs Debra, yes, I have to admit that I’m a Hugh fan as well and I’m normally a Kate Beckinsale fan too but her horrendous accent in Van Helsing put me off!
Giles makes for a fantastic Q (we call a flashlight a torch here in NZ) and I’m hoping I can have him come up with other nifty little inventions from around this time period. I did have an interesting time writing the part with Sheila and Ira Rosenberg, I had their sterotypes mapped out so clearly in my mind that they just sort of flowed onto the screen all fleshed out. Mainly to show that Willow really doesn’t fit in at home nor in an appropriate social circle, she lives instead for her work and her colleagues there are her true family. Thanks Deb, keep loving it and I’ll be happy!

Endless Destiny: Yes, the dates are interesting and you can quickly see that it is impossible for the writer of the diary to still be alive as they would be almost 150 years old. So we definitely know something fishy is going on here and I look forward to sharing more of the story!

Dianneswillowtree: Thanks very much, intrigue is definitely one of my goals…its always fun to keep Kittens guessing!

PancakesinBellies: Hi Amber, I’m not a naturally patient person either so I know asking Kittens to remain patient is not very nice of me. Still, I hope it will be worth as the story unfolds!

viximon: Faith clearly thrives in all those dark places whereas Willow is more suited to her little office surrounded by books. There will be a scene in the next chapter that shows just how much he doesn’t like the supernatural aspect of her work! I want her to meet Tara too so this is torture for me as well, I want to skip ahead a few chapters but that would ruin the story so please bear with me and keep enjoying even though there is very little Tara.

drdj2006: Great speculating there! Of course I’m not going to say whether you’re right of course as that would give the game away.
I think the fact that marriage is an issue in both 1777 and 1897 highlights the fact that women had very little choices in life. As both the writer of the diary and Willow in the present are both from good families, they would have been expected to marry well. Although we do see in 1897 that Willow has the ability to go to university and get a job, we also see Cordelia as a secretary which would have been a plausible option for women at the time.
I never really thought much about Willow’s mother either, and other than brief mentions, she has never been a character in one of my fics. Both she and Willow’s father are being used as stereotypes of uncaring parents who don’t really know their children and nor do they want to.
And again, sorry for the lack of willowy Tara goodness! I’m feeling the absence too!

ZenMe: Thanks very much and I’m glad you like my idea, Im going to take it in some interesting directions so stay tuned!

WillowRulez: As much as I love the character of Lara Croft, this is very much a W/T fic and I don’t want her to steal any of their thunder!
I’m glad you’re enjoying all of the characters, I really did have fun writing Ira and Sheila and making them as extreme as possible but still realistic y’know? And Alex isn’t meant to be Xander sorry! I just thought that Alexander would be a good name for Willow’s brother.

diamondforever: I love the social politics of the time too and its really interesting to explore them in such a setting. Pay close attention to the letters, they form a huge part of the story!

Thanks for reading y’all…I hope to have the next update ready to post soon.

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 11 April)
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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 11 April)
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After reading this chapter I have 2 overwhelming reactions -- to hug Giles for inventing the torch and to strangle Sheila for being so insufferable. Oh, I want to smack Ira too for not stopping his wife from bullying his daughter and even taking his wife's side when his daughter was telling the truth. okay, in those days Willow's comment was out of place and rude, but still.

So Faith is heading out on another adventure.
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“Don’t you want to ride off with her?” asked Myles with clear longing in his voice, “Just once?”

“Absolutely not,” Willow replied promptly, “There’s more than enough adventure for me in here.”

I'm hoping you can get Willow out of Russell Square to experience some of the outside world. I'd love to see the "nerd becomes intrepid adventurer" story here.

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I barely had time to whisper a promise of a more intimate meeting before W too was summoned away by Abraham

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Same Abraham? How intriguing that Faith mentions how Willow resembles Old Abe. Now I'm not so sure whether the diarist is Willow or Tara. I'm still thinking the writer is a former version of Willow and W is Tara, but the tone of the entry isn't as Willowesque as the previous one. You're just messin' with us aren't you (in a good way)?
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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 11 April)
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Cool, it's the new Alcy story! This one seems close to the source material, yet totally different. I like that. We seem to have an interesting amalgam of fandoms here. Lara Croft (mind you, I think the dual Webley revolver might be a good choice for Lara in the time period, but that's just me thinking. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Webley_Revolver. Hey, Indiana Jones uses a later version, so it can't be wrong. :) ). I like her as Director. Kinda like a saucy version of the Smoking Man. :)

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Please tell me he doesn't even remotely resemble Hugh Jackman in the slightest. ;)

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“Well your father and I are not ‘everyone!’” Shelia replied shortly, for some reason she was pinching the flesh on Willow’s upper arm, “No parent in their right mind would call their child Willow.”


Hehehehehe. :smug

...that's what the nannies are for. Good god, it's neigh impossible to actually like Willow's parents, no matter the incarnation. Mind you, it's a stunningly accurate portrayal of Victorian parenting.

And then the match-making. Oh, painful, painful, painful. Good on Wills to tell them off, that's for sure.

Plenty layers to be found here. I'd love to see more!

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 11 April)
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Alcy wrote:

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While I haven’t expanded on Tara’s character (or even said that it is her!!!)


Tis true, but that is totally how the first installment came across for me and I won't be dissapointed if that's not the case. In fact, I can guarantee that I will be pleasantly surprised and appreciative of any plot twist you send my way. I'm easy that way when it comes to a well told story.

As for this second installment all I can say is, good lord Sheila Rosenberg is a harpy. Her current reincarnation is hideous physically and otherwise and it's hard not to cringe when reading all that detailed description of their dinner.

But for all the horror that Willow's home life must have been there is Giles who literally gives Willow light. Maybe I am reading more into it than you intended but I find the notion of Giles giving Willow light to be a beautiful and meaningful present on more levels than the literal one. I mean, Giles by advocating for her education has literally given Willow enlightenment that as a woman Willow would have been denied. And yet the scene with Giles casually handing a flashlight to Willow is so tender and caring that it's comforting to read that Willow was not completely alone in that wretched world.

This was a wonderful update and I can't wait to see what happens next. I saw Van Helsing and I laughed my head off throughout that silly movie, but I know that in your capable hands the story will be great.

Thanks for sharing,

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PancakesinBellies: As I’m about to deliver the next chapter, I hope I can live up to your expectations! Thank you very much

Watty: Hoorah to Giles for inventing the torch! I do love him and he makes for the perfect inventor type figure. Perhaps Willow could use her torch to smack her mother over the head, not that I condone violence of course! Willow was rude, but we get the impression that she’s so fed up with her family situation that she has to say something. Whether or not she actually intends to try and change anything is another matter.
Be rest assured, while I am not overly generous in giving away key plot plots, I will tell you that Willow will leave the hallowed halls of the British Museum at some stage during this fic…and she will go further than London.
And you spotted the repeated Abraham reference! Clever you, stay tuned for more little tidbits which will eventually betray his identity.
I’m definitely messing with the Kittens, although in a very nice and hopefully rewarding way!

Useful Oxymoron: Why hallo there UO, welcome along to the new Alcy story of course! I do enjoy the image of Lara, while she is definitely in more of a supporting role, I think it’s a fun one…and I like your choice of weapon for her.
And no, my Abraham Van Helsing does not resemble Hugh (although if I can remember his name in the movie was Gabriel Van Helsing to make it clear that he is not the Van Helsing from Stoker’s work)

I’m exceptionally glad that Willow’s parents are impossible to like, that is my intention. I have very little knowledge of Victorian parenting other than the stereotype that they were all sexually repressed (there must have been naughtiness somewhere, I definitely intend to portray it!)
Stay tuned for more, I will deliver shortly!

safuega: Well, regardless of who the mystery characters turn out to be, there will be plot twists a plenty until the end of this story.

Thanks for picking up on the illustration that I was conveying with Giles giving the torch to Willow, it was so very simple but I think that one little act shows he loves Willow more than her parents ever have (and it also indicates the importance of his role in her life)

Van Helsing was definitely not the movie it could have been, but I do love taking movie concepts and making them my own…maybe one day I might write another fic that isn’t based on a movie, one where Willow and Tara are just everyday people!
And no problem, I love sharing

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Note: Just a wee note before I embark on the next chapter. Setting this story in 1897 of course means that it is set at a time when lesbians would have been viewed by society as mentally ill or sexual inverts. However, this is a romantic (yes, there will be romance eventually!) adventure and I do not want to get bogged down dealing with this. However, while I chose to ignore the issue altogether in Captain Red which was set in the 1930s, I do acknowledge it in VR, especially in the chapter below, to the extent that it is necessary exploration of Willow’s character. Other character’s acceptance of Willow as a lesbian may seem unrealistic for the time but I do not think it is unrealistic given the nature of the characters. Thanks very much everyone.

Chapter Three

5th November 1777

I know I am getting ahead of myself but my mother is insufferable! She cornered me as I was reading in the sitting room this evening. In truth I was not reading at all although I am usually quite fond of the Bard’s work. I was engaged in the study of a small portrait I had tucked between the pages. I had been tracing the familiar chin and lingering over those perfectly proportioned lips which, though they were pursed together in a sombre manner, I imagined curling up into one of her fantastically warm smiles. For all the talent of the artist, the portrait could not do her justice. Her locks were not red enough, nor her eyes green or as sparkling as they are in reality. I have not seen her since September but her eyes burn as brightly in my mind as though I saw them just yesterday. (It is this horrid weather which keeps us all indoors and starved of parties or picnics, or any other opportunity I might have to see her!).

I was forced to snap my worn little volume closed as my mother approached without announcing herself until she was almost on top of me. Her immediate conversation came across a little forced. She inquired what I was reading, to which I replied, ‘As You Like It.’ I noticed her dismissive glance at the mention of the comedy, I suppose she would rather have me reading something dreary like ‘Romeo and Juliet.’ I rather wickedly added that I very much enjoyed Rosalind in her mannish disguise and her expression became distraught indeed. At that moment I realised what deceitful daughter I was, concealing the truth of my feelings for another woman from my own mother who has naught but my best interests at heart.

She then proceeded to drill me at length on Edward’s merits. By the end of her speech even I thought that he was some saint, perhaps George in his shining armour slaying dragons and winning the hearts of fair maidens. But as she continued, with fervour in her voice that frightened me, I began to see through her words for the fakery they were. It is a sad day indeed when a young lady realises that she can no longer depend on the council of her mother.

I began to see just how serious she was about the whole Edward affair when I dared question her careful plans. I merely suggested that Edward may not be the one for me and it was as though the very fires of hell were unleashed. She swiftly moved from exposing Edward’s merits to naming me an ‘ungrateful wretch.’ From what I could then gather of the torrent of words flowing from her lips, it was my duty to marry well in order to salvage the last scraps of the Maclay reputation. Her words did shock me somewhat, while I was aware that money was perhaps not as abundant as it ought to be, I was not aware that father’s debts had eaten into almost everything. Mother made it clear that my marriage to Edward was not just a formality, but a necessity. My duty was clear, when Edward asked me to marry him I would say yes. There was no other answer to give. Until then I would attend functions on his arm, hang on his every word and be in all outward appearances the model of a perfect young lady. Mother was in tears by the time she had finished and my own eyes burned fiercely. With W’s portrait concealed within my volume of Shakespeare, I made a hasty exit from the room lest I say anything that would cause my mother further heartache. As I made my way through the house I felt oppressed, as though the very walls were conspiring against me.

As I felt suffocated, I ran to my bedroom window and threw it open, shivering as a cold blast of winter air hit me like a wall. I gazed out into the darkness that surrounded the house and willed the wind to carry me away. I imagined soaring away from my mother and the walls of the house which I now saw as my prison, it would carry me over field, stream and wood until I reached Hagley Park. W would be waiting for me there. I would fall into her arms and never again dwell on the thought of being forced to marry Edward Walsh. It was a simple wish, just for two people to be together.

The harder that I wished this miracle would occur, the more freely hot tears splashed onto my cheeks. They lingered there for but a second before being driven away by the wind. It did not pick me up and take me away. I was left standing at the window with the curtains whipping into a frenzy around my body. I cursed my fate to be born into such a cruel world, a world that forced people to marry against their wishes and not for love. I curse the world still. More anon diary, for I cannot write another sentence on this night.


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Willow’s brow was furrowed and the very tip of her pink tongue protruded from her lips, both signs of intense concentration. Her white shirt sleeves were rolled back, up over her elbows and her waist coat hung open in a relaxed fashion. She worked a pencil across a sheet of paper in front of her, pausing every few moments to review her work before continuing. As the time passed, the lines spreading across the paper formed into a shape from her memory. It was an image that burned behind her eyes, even almost two months after seeing it for the first time.

Her furrow brow deepened when she was not happy with some aspect. She picked up her eraser and wiped a portion of the drawing from the page before continuing. Her pencil worked for a few more minutes before she held the end of it in her lips to free up her fingers and create shading. She smeared the pencil at appropriate points, the pencil between her lips swaying with her movements.

The tip of her index finger blackened, Willow retrieved her pencil from between her lips and added a few more necessary touches. A small smile spread across her face as the sketch neared completion. Willow paused again, drawn before her was an almost perfect representation of the woman she had seen in the park.

She could not begin to explain it, but even two months after their fleeting encounter she could not forget the pale stranger. Although had lasted mere minutes in one day of her busy life, Willow felt as though their meeting had some sort of significance. A week after the meeting she had tried to shrug it off with the simple explanation that the woman was exceptionally beautiful, why would she not create a lasting impression? Two weeks later and she was still on Willow’s mind, interfering with her research and whatever personal time she had. When she slept, she would see her face. In the absence of a name or a voice, her face was all Willow had. Two months later, her symptoms had not changed and the desire to know more was driving her insane.

Willow could not bring herself to develop the photograph she had taken of the woman on her Kodak. As much as she wanted to, she felt as though she had violated the woman’s privacy. Although at the same time, she could not bring herself to destroy the roll of film. It was tucked away at the back of the bottom drawer of her desk…hidden but not forgotten.

“Our intrepid adventurer returns!”

An irreverent yell burst through her concentration by scaring the living daylights out of her. Willow jumped sharply, stabbing the lead of her pencil down so hard that the lead snapped off. She stared with irritation at the resulting dark spot on her portrait but was thankful it had not been on the nose or anywhere else noticeable. As the whirlwind that was Myles Cavendish entered her office, Willow shoved the scrap of paper beneath a partially unravelled scroll. She turned and was pleasantly surprised to see a second person following the boy.

“Miss me?” Faith swept into the room, still clad in her dusty riding leathers and a badly rumpled travelling jacket.

“Faith!” Willow greeted her friend with genuine warmth even as she gave Myles an annoyed glare for his spontaneous and unannounced entrance.

She scraped her chair back and stood to join the others. Willow took one look at Faith’s dirty clothing and neatly sidestepped any potential embrace.

“I’m not touching you until you’ve changed!” Willow yelped as Faith back her up against her chair.

Faith glanced down. She was covered, as much as she could see, in dust as well as a generous splattering of mud. Her boots were caked in the stuff and small clumps had been tracked across Willow’s rug. When she glanced back up she was pleased to see that Willow was so pre-occupied with her return, she had not noticed the accompanying mud.

She did of course realise that much of Willow’s preoccupation was not to do with her own presence, but rather the satchel which was thrown over her shoulder. Willow had her eyes fixed on it, shifting from one foot to another as though she were about to launch into a dance.

“Before your head explodes…” Faith began as she swung the satchel from her shoulder so she could open it, “The library was mostly empty…”

“Empty!” Willow cried in despair, it was as though her entire world had just come crashing down, “How could it have been empty…was it cleared out by thieves or perhaps Dracula’s…I mean Vlad’s cohorts?”

“The church I believe,” Faith replied quickly, not wanting to prolong Willow’s distress, “There were several painted inscriptions on the walls to ward off evil spirits…I tried to glean additional information but there was little to be had other than that every scrap of parchment may have been burned almost 150 years ago. No evidence of fire with the actual ruins of the monastery itself, or the library so I would say they had it taken away.”

“They burned the books,” Willow whispered in abject horror, there was hardly a more heinous crime in her opinion.

Faith flipped open her satchel and withdrew an armload of leather folders and several books, “Will, calm down, all was not lost, I discovered a secret compartment and within lay these…I had not the opportunity to discern their contents but I hope they at least make up for some of your disappointment.”

Willow accepted the armload gratefully, “Well, I don’t know if any small amount of material will compensate for burnt books…but thank you.”

Willow scanned through the leather folders which all held sheets of parchment covered in a foreign scrawl. She instantly noted that most were in Latin, with a few more exciting prospects bearing the runic Rovas script native to Hungary. Those folders she set down on her desk and scanned the book titles. Of the four that Faith had brought back with her, two were account books, one was a library catalogue – a cruel reminder of what had been lost – and the other was an anomaly.

“It’s a diary,” Willow said with a small frown flipping the fourth book over in her hands

“I know, I had a quick look at it,” Faith nodded, “The initial text is in English and most of the dates I can make out are eighteenth century so I’m not at all sure how it even came to be at Tirgsor…not to mention hidden in a secret compartment with papers of real historical significance…just seems to be sentimental feminine rubbish.”

Willow was flipping through the diary as Faith spoke, scanning dates and noting that it was written in a clear, almost elegant hand.

“It mostly appears to be talking about marriage…as you would expect of an eighteenth century woman’s diary,” Faith continued with a dismissive shrug.

“A woman’s diary!” Myles craned his neck to catch a better glimpse of the worn volume, “Any naughty bits?’

“You wouldn’t know a naughty bit if I slapped you in the face with it, Myles,” Faith cuffed the lad lightly over the back of his head.

“I agree…although the text changes half way through and I can’t decipher it. It’s not any language I’m familiar with, or can recognise…which is strange as I can recognise most,” Willow voice betrayed her slight professional annoyance at not being able to recognise the script, There’s an address inside the front cover though...”

Willow flicked the pages aside and looked at the inside of the leather bound cover, it was more than a little strange. There was an address somewhere in Hampshire that she was unfamiliar with, it had been struck out with a single, heavy black line. A small inscription in the same hand followed.

“Dearest W, Farewell - May this token of me provide you some comfort,” Willow read aloud before squinting to read the single letter following, “And then what looks like a J…or a T perhaps.”

“How lovely,” Faith commented sarcastically.

“It sounds as though there are naughty bits,” Myles added hopefully.

Willow ignored them both and traced her fingers over a second address which followed the inscription. It was written in the same heavy black pen that had struck out the first address. It was an address in Bloomsbury, written in a clear and precise hand that Willow immediately admired for its penmanship. She set the diary aside, tossing it on one of her stacks of books that littered the floor before turning her attention back to the real gems Faith had brought.

“This catalogue could keep me going for months, Faith,” Willow ran her fingers over the tooled leather cover, “And it’s all in Latin, thank goodness, as my Hungarian is awful…”

The diary sat forgotten as Willow turned page after page of the catalogue and ignored both Faith and Myles. Faith was looking on indulgently while Myles kept casting covetous at the diary which lay within reach of his fingers. However, Faith was quicker and as he reached out to pick it up she seized his wrist and squeezed tightly.

“Ow!” Myles protested, “I just wanted a little look!”

Faith released her hold on his wrist and he rubbed it gingerly. She knew full well his intention had been to search out any so called ‘naughty bits.’

“Myles, it was written in the eighteenth century, I don’t think women in those days knew how to be naughty, let alone write about it so I assure you, you’re not missing out on anything,” Faith placed her hand on the young man’s shoulder and gently steered him towards the door, “I think Giles might need some help unwrapping the artefacts I found concealed in the ruins…there is a wicked looking gauntlet covered in spikes that I believe may have belonged to Dracula himself. Just don’t try it on…I think it has been bewitched with a possession spell.”

Myles’ eyes widened as though he could not wait to get his hands on the gauntlet and do exactly what Faith had warned him against…trying it on. He mumbled a few nonsensical words, presumably excusing himself, and left the room at a dead sprint. A few moments later there was a very loud crash somewhere down the hallway and an angry voice condemning all boys who did not look where they were going to the depths of hell.

With Myles safely out of the picture in Giles’ capable hands, Faith could now focus her attention on Willow. Her friend had had returned to her chair while she had been talking to Myles and was now looking up at her with wide eyes. Faith quickly realised that Willow was not waiting for her to deliver any further information from her trip or simply have a friendly conversation. Willow was waiting for her to leave so she could get back to her work. She sat poised with her pencil in one hand and the other hand gently holding open a ratty looking scroll. Faith gave an angry snort and reached down to snatch the pencil away. When Willow made a desperate lunge, she hid it behind her back and out of reach.

“What have you been doing with yourself these past months, Will?” Faith asked in a distinctly motherly tone of voice, betraying her sincere concern for her friend, “You look bloody awful…and stop looking at my hand like that; you’re not getting your pencil back anytime soon!”

“I just haven’t been sleeping well lately,” Willow shrugged, “It’s nothing serious, my mind has just been working so much I find it hard to relax…it’s just a phase and will pass in time.”

Faith pursed her lips together, “And I’m sure you also haven’t been eating, nor taking walks outside…honestly Will, I don’t know how many times I have to tell you to look after yourself.”

“It’s nice to know you care…” Willow began, managed at small smile as she was truly touched by her friend’s concern.

“Damn right I care!” Faith interrupted, lunging forward to plant both her arms around Willow’s shoulders, despite her dirty clothing “Your parents don’t seem to give a toss…and you certainly don’t seem to care about yourself either.”

When Faith pulled back a few moments later, Willow’s cheeks carried a slight pinkish tinge. She was definitely unused to being embraced, even by her best friend.

“I’m fine Faith, will you please give the pencil back, I’m in the middle of something very important.”

“Only if you tell me what you’re working on?” Faith dangled the pencil within Willow’s grasp.

“It’s nothing,” Willow spluttered all too quickly as she retrieved her pencil.

As she moved, she lost her grip on the scroll and the paper snapped back into it tight roll to reveal what was hidden beneath. Willow could not recover the portrait before Faith spied it and snatched it away. Mortified, Willow leapt to her feet intent on recovering the drawing before Faith could examine it closely. A tussle began between the two as Willow tried to grasp at Faith’s arm. After avoiding Willow’s rather pathetic attempts, Faith reached out and grabbed Willow’s flailing hand with her left. In one swift movement she had twisted the small woman’s arm around her back.

Willow yelped in pain as Faith held her arm pinned at an uncomfortable angle. She had to cease her struggling or continue to feel as though her shoulder was being popped out of its socket. This left Faith free to examine Willow’s pencil sketch with impunity.

“Here I was thinking I’d interrupted some vital departmental research…and all you were really doing was drawing pictures!” Faith chuckled lightly and then let out a low whistle, “So who is she?”

No one,” Willow mumbled, feeling her cheeks flaming. In response, Faith cruelly twisted her arm a little higher up her back and she let out another yelp, “Okay, okay…it’s a woman I saw…”

“And continue to see?” Faith asked with excitement clearly registering in her voice.

“Saw…once!” Willow clarified with a strong emphasis on both words, “I just saw her once in the park.”

“You saw her once in the park and she made such an impression that you had to sketch her portrait?” Faith asked, this time in disbelief, “And exaggerated more than a little too, no one can be this beautiful…you’ve got rich tastes, Will.”

Now that she had her answers, Faith released her grip on Willow’s wrist. Willow reached around Faith and snatched the drawing back. She folded herself back into her chair and set her drawing back down on her desk. With her thumb she smoothed out the wrinkles in the corner where Faith had held it. One finger gently traced the curve of cheek she had drawn in exact imitation of the one she had seen that had remained fixed so boldly within her mind. Just gazing upon that face made her forget any anger she may have felt towards Faith for dragging the truth from her so cruelly. A small laugh even escaped her lips when she realised just how silly she was being.

When Willow kept her head down and did not speak, Faith’s brow knotted in concern. She feared that she had dreadfully wounded the red-haired girl’s feelings with her tactless and somewhat brutal questioning. Willow’s laugh she mistook for a choked sob.

“Willow, I’m awfully sorry, you know me…no manners or anything,” Faith felt ridiculous and more than a little stupid, “I’ll just go and leave you to…well, whatever it is that you were doing.”

“I did not exaggerate,” Willow replied quietly as she heard Faith back up towards the door, she swivelled in her seat, “Faith, she was undoubtedly the most beautiful woman I’ve ever laid eyes upon.”

Her smile had morphed into a dreamy sort of expression usually reserved for those smitten with a potential lover. Faith was a little unnerved at first; she had never seen Willow look quite so dopey. However, nor had she seen her look quite so tired and promptly decided that it was her duty to help her friend find this woman.

“I’ll help you find her again,” Faith promised, pausing in the doorway with one hand resting against the frame.

Managing to drag herself away from the portrait in front of her, Willow swivelled in her chair to face Faith. A sad smile flitted across her tired face.

“I don’t see the point,” she whispered, stifling a yawn that betrayed her exhaustion, “Even if I did find her I wouldn’t know what to do…and she certainly wouldn’t feel the way I do about her…”

“You want to have sex with her,” Faith added casually.

“Faith!” Willow hissed, eyes darting to the door as though every employee of the British Museum were standing there listening in on the most private conversation of her entire life.

Cheeks tinged with red to match her hair, Willow studied Faith’s expression carefully for traces of anything other that acceptance and friendship. She had never expected to tell another living soul of the way she felt about women, even her best friend.

“Faith, I would appreciate if you did not speak of my…inclinations to anyone, if my parents were to find out that I am a…lesbian…”

The word came out in a barely audible whisper and Willow’s cheeks flamed further.

“Would you really care if they did?” Faith interrupted Willow before she could continue with her awkward statement, it was obvious she was hardly surprised by Willow’s revelation, “You don’t depend on them for a thing…and you certainly wouldn’t miss their company.”

“I know,” Willow replied, biting her lip for a moment, “But they’re still my parents…and you really don’t care?”

“Why would I care Will? You’re the dearest, kindest, bravest soul that I know and the fact that you’re of the sapphist persuasion only serves to confirm all that…I love you, you know.”

“Faith, I’m not attracted to you…” Willow began slowly.

“You’re not? Why ever not?” Faith said in an incredulous and very serious tone, a split second later she burst out laughing, “I meant I love you in a strictly platonic manner…”

“Oh,” Willow muttered, quite embarrassed, “Thanks…”

“And don’t worry about your mystery woman. Such matters work themselves out…always,” Faith replied encouragingly, “Besides, if you find her and she tells you to bloody leave her alone at least you’ll be able to stop mooning about like a sick puppy and get a good night’s rest.”

Willow smirked with genuine mirth, “You always know how to make a girl feel better.”

“You have no idea,” Faith winked suggestively, laughing when Willow’s cheeks reddened for a second time.

“Why don’t you go home?”

Willow glanced at her pocket watch and her eyes widened in mock horror, “Leave work at 4pm? Gracious Faith, I don’t think I’ve ever been quite so daring.”

“Call it a start, you’re going to have to get a whole lot more daring in order to ensnare this mystery women of yours,” Faith fetched Willow’s satchel and coat which, in the absence of a coat stand, were tossed on a stack of books, “You didn’t catch her name did you?”

Willow allowed herself to be dragged up out of her chair. She held out her arms as Faith pulled her coat on and even moved to do the buttons up. Although it felt somewhat odd being buttoned up by another adult, Willow found it was comforting in a strange way.

“I’ve no idea, I feel as though it should be something grand and beautiful to suit her face…” Willow tried to imagine what a grand and beautiful name would be but she had no idea, “It is just as likely to be Jane or Anna.”

“Well, your first task is to find out her name,” Faith decided as she passed Willow’s satchel over her head and settled it at her side, “Once we know who she is and what kind of people she comes from...we can work out a plan of attack.”

What if I never see her again? was the only thought that ran through Willow’s head…although she could not bring herself to say it aloud and deflate Faith’s optimism.

With an air of finality Faith bodily shoved Willow out of her office. In order to ensure that her work-bound friend did not double back, Faith walked her all the way to her tram stop before leaving to return to work. She muttered something about reporting back to Croft. There was a wicked gleam in her eye not usually associated with reporting that made Willow suspect that Faith knew a little too much about the ‘sapphist persuasion’ she spoke of earlier.

Willow was left waiting for the next tram, never one to stand still and do nothing she began to feel antsy after only a minute or so of waiting. Although she now did not regret leaving work early, she was slightly miffed that she had forgotten to pick up a stack of papers or a book to while away her tram ride. Digging around in her satchel in the hope of finding something to occupy her mind, her fingers closed on a book spine. She drew it out to find the diary Faith had brought back from Eastern Europe. A small frown creased her forehead; she did not remember ever putting it in her satchel. Not quite knowing why, she flicked it open and found the same notations just inside the cover, the strange dedication and the two addresses. While Hampshire was much too far to walk, Willow again noted that the second address was mere blocks from where she stood waiting for her tram. As Faith’s challenge echoed in her head, Willow ignored the approaching tram and made what she thought was a very daring decision indeed.

After a quarter of an hour stroll, Willow had lost much of the rash impulsiveness that had led her to sleuth out the address in the first place. Actually standing in front of the house was an entirely different story. Willow gazed up at the generously sized townhouse towering imposingly above her head and immediately felt intimidated by the austere façade. The stone used was a steely grey and in the dull light of a winter’s afternoon it appeared almost black. There was little ornamentation of any form save for the ivy which dared to creep up the left side just above the ground floor windows. Three floors rose up from the ground before the sharply pitched tile roof angled away from her. Several dark gable windows punctured the roof’s surface. She imagined the writer of the diary to be inside, bent over a writing desk and still scribbling madly.

1777…even if they lived until the were old and wrinkled they’d be long dead…

Willow shivered, the house itself unnerved her despite the light shining from several of the windows. Although someone obviously lived there, Willow felt as though the house should be empty. She couldn’t quite place the exact feeling, but it was of one of emptiness…emptiness and waiting.

Just my luck that the person who owns it now will be one step away from the asylum Willow shuddered at the thought of some wizened old creature, starved of company, inviting her in for tea and never letting her leave again.

Willow was still plucking up the courage to approach and knock on the massive black door when she glanced upwards once more. A chill seized her entire frame. A pale white face stared at her from a dark gable high above. With her blood pounding in her ears, Willow fought for calm but it would not come. Although the glance lasted seconds before she wrenched her eyes away, Willow could not remember exactly what she had seen other than that she knew it was a face, and it had been looking directly at her. There was no question of her knocking on the door now…

Hello…I’m Willow Rosenberg, you don’t know me but is the ghost that lives in your attic friendly?

Before she knew quite what she was doing, her feet were pounding on the pavement. The chill did not leave her body as she ran the entire distance between the house and her tram stop. Even when she was on the next tram, her body pressed against a seat warmed from a previous body, Willow could not shake the cold fear brought about by the house. She immediately made up her mind not to tell Faith. To flee as fast as possible from a common, run of the mill ghost was a case for tarring and feathering in Faith’s book. Or even worse, she could have been running from the sight of a child playing in the attic. Willow felt exceptionally foolish and even more resigned to the fact that she was not suited to fieldwork.

Something crawled between her shoulder blades. Willow felt as though she were still being watched…although by what she had no idea.

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I thought I was never going to get this crappy wireless network to load!

Alcy, loving this. You've captured the atmosphere beautifully, I can just see the whole thing in my mind (and thank you for populating it with beautiful women).

I've been telling myself ever since the first post that the mysterious woman (Tara?) couldn't possibly be a vampire since she was in the park in the daytime. But I can't shake the possibility from my mind... and I don't want her to be! I want for W&T to be alive and have their HEA in the here and now (well, here and then). Anyway, can't wait to see what you do with this.

btw, I like the way you've portrayed Faith in this, and that she is Willow's friend. Willow needs to come down from her ivory tower and return some of the caring she's getting from Giles and Faith, and live a little.

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Wow, Alcy, great update.

I'm sorry I missed leaving feedback for the second update, but I did. It was great too. I found Willow's mother to be a completely pitiable character, but I have no affection toward her whatsoever.

This update was really good. I love the whole coming out to Faith thing, especially since Faith seems to be of the same bent. I think I know where this story is heading now, but I will reserve speculation and just let you take me by the hand and lead me there. I know it will be worth the trip.

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I'm stunned on the spot. I found that chapter so short. Want mooore.
Willow adventures, I can relate more than Faith's. Like it very much. Continue soon, please.


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Hey Alcy :wave Sorry for not leaving feedback for chapter 2, but I’m here for chapter 3. Really great so far. Every bit gets me more and more interested. I’m confused about the diary at the moment, but I know that my confusion will eventually be cleared up. Is it a past lives thing? I’m not really sure. Faith is great. She’s supportive and awesome. Just thought I’d tell you that. And Willow :) She’s such a bookworm. And so cute with drawing a picture of Tara but having the decency to not develop the picture, though in my opinion she really should. Couldn’t hurt to have a real life Tara picture to gaze at all day. Anyways, great so far. Looking forwards to more.

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I too dallied around and missed leaving feedback for the second chapter... sorry :pray But the plot's thicking but good now - if (as it seems) Willow and Tara are both quite a bit older than they seem, how can that be? Could Tara be a vampire not affected by sunlight (I think there are some traditions where that's the case), and Willow... what? But she's got a history as herself, in the present - could she be a reincarnation of 'W', rather?

I love the name 'Department of Oddities' - that, and Willow being 'Wilhelmina', are giving me a very League of Extraordinary Gentlemen vibe (as in Mina Murray, of course), which is awesome. And little details like Willow's book-laden coccoon of an office, with the bits and pieces added in by Faith, and they way they interact generally - I really like the feel of the friendship you're building between them, it feels like a very sincere and real 'odd couple' kind of thing. I liked Willow's horror at the notion of books being burned, too - very true to form for her. And not that I'm an expert on turn of the century London (I've read Flashman, that's about it), but the voices you're using for Willow and Faith sound very authentic to the time, while also being true to the late 20th/early 21st century incarnations we're used to.

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Alcy – This update was very good and at the same time seemed somewhat shorter than the previous. I actually can say that I feel sorry for Willow in this update. In the others she seemed somewhat out of place and lonely (and putting up with those parents would be a real hate) but here she seems down right underground sad and a little pathetic. She’s been tormented by that glimpse of “the blonde woman” (I’ll call her Tara if that’s ok with you) for two months? Wow! That’s some serious torment. Of course if this is like an Anne Rice novel, then Tara has been following her and turning up and allowing more and more glimpses of herself ever since then but somehow I don’t think that’s the case. Plus which the affection with which Tara addressed Willow as she ran just makes it seem that Willow is too precious to Tara for her to do that. She’s not trying to drive her to madness after all.

But let me back up. Tara’s diary. Oh god. Who among us hasn’t watched a movie or read a book and been sad thinking of what our life would be like then? No freedom, no ability to really be who we are? It’s overwhelmingly sad to think and that really comes through in Tara’s writing.

Faith’s return is of course glorious (I’m picturing her mud-wrestling right now which probably isn’t the best activity for the workday but…) Her love and affection for Willow is so apparent that it’s just completely endearing. And her blasé acceptance of what Willow thought a secret (btw: please help yourself to take whatever liberties you want with the time period. Something tells me that reading something more realistic would just be depressing and enrage me) is again adorable. I love Willow’s crushed reaction to the thought of a burned library and I can totally understand it.

Now the diary. I have so many questions about it including but not limited to how it got into that stack. Did Tara put it there for Willow to read or is it there as part of research on Tara herself? And then Willow’s attraction to the diary is lovely, inspiring her to go to that address where (I assume) Tara is watching her from the window. Tee hee: for the second time Willow runs away. Not cut out for field service indeed!

I am so completely enthralled and curious about this one. Keep em coming!

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If anything, I love the letters the most. They remind me of Sarah Waters - not her style, but just the Victorian setting. It feels so suffocating for a woman, but yet so true, and even though it's not something I can necessarily relate to now, it's something I've read about a lot, and you've captured it so well. It feels like duty - a woman's duty, and it's nobody's fault because it's simply what it is in that time.

I also like the way Faith takes in Willow's sexual orientation. The way she reacted really is of no surprise, being a hunter of the supernatural and all (do we get to see her with somebody too? :D).

And by the way, that was a sweet connection with the letters. I'm curious to see as to how you're going to connect the two centuries together. I have an inkling...but yeah, I'm excited to read the next chapter!

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oooh!

This story is very intriguing and suspenseful!

I feel like these guys are somehow doing a cross-time communication mishap or something, but I don't know for sure.

It is all very confusing, and intriguing!

Plus, Faith was really supportive and great and I don't care if it's true-to-life or the time period or what, It warmed my heart!

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A chill seized her entire frame. A pale white face stared at her from a dark gable high above. With her blood pounding in her ears, Willow fought for calm but it would not come.

My favorite lines of this update.
Cool, that Faith is back and pushing Willow a bit. So, I guess Tara lives there hm? Or is there a new player in town :rofl?
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Alright, I was way off base in my idle speculation and some version of Tara wrote the diary. And now a version of Willow is inexplicably drawn to it, with the same connection she has with the mysterious woman in the park. *rubs hands in glee* This is moving along handsomely. I think that Faith's easy acceptance of Willow's sexual orientation and friendship will prove important in bringing Willow out -- not only in the 'coming out' sense, she needs to get out from the books that she's been hiding underneath and live a little.
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Hee, I could hear the announcement being shouted out as she hurries down the corridors of the museum in her mud-stained clothing, satchel of goodies and an exhilarating expression.

I'm thinking Willow can't help but return to the "haunted" house. Perhaps with Faith. She does work in the Dept of Oddities. Intriguing and very very addictive story this is.
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I wonder when Willow's gonna met Tara...
More! More! Can't wait for more!!!
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omgogomg :bounce yet ANOTHER fantastic story to distract me from my studies! Suffice to say i'm quite chuffed :D!!

I'm not sure what it is about this, but every sentence i read gives me shivers. I think it's the whole, timeless tara, genious willow, 1800's love affair thing you've got going on.. *shivers* mmmmm.. yep thassit

*sighs* now to wait for another installment.... :sleepy

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spells42: Hi Anne, I’m so glad you’re loving this story…if there’s anything that I aim to get right in my fic writing then it is atmosphere. Its exceptionally important to create a believable universe in which to bring the characters to life…and yes, in this case it is a cast of beautiful women!

Although I can’t answer any of your speculations, I can tell you that Willow and Tara’s HEA will not be eventuating anytime soon…but I hope that the unfolding story will make it worthwhile for you to stick with it.

I’ve used Faith widely in each of my AU fics for the simple reason that I really like the potential of the character as a friend, even instead of Buffy (as you can no doubt tell!) Willow will get out and about in future updates, she has a lot of travelling to do before this story finishes.

dlline: No problem about not leaving feedback for the second chapter Diane, I’m pleased to learn you enjoyed it and that Willow’s mother aroused the appropriate reaction. It was quite hard to write Willow’s little coming out scene, I could have made it much more protracted than what I did but in the end I just wanted to move the story along rather than get bogged down, we all know that Willow is gay so why stretch that part out (and I do have my suspicions about Faith as well!)
The trip will be worth it, I promise!

vixmon: It’s funny how people thought this chapter was short, I guess because it was confined to just the one scene between Faith and Willow (My chapters usually run at anywhere between 5000-6500 words so I guess at 4500 this one was on the brief side!)
I promise many more adventures to come very soon!

tazraven: Hey there Sara, thanks very much for stopping by and I see that I have you interested and confused…excellent!
The diary does play a huge part in the story, so stay tuned to each update closely to read more about it. And I won’t forget the photo of course!

Artemis: The plot in this wee story is very thick indeed and I’ve worked long and hard to make it as thick as possible.
Some nice speculations there Chris, although I’m not letting anything away other than to say that I’ll answer all of them eventually.

Thanks for the thumbs up for 'Department of Oddities' and as for Willow being 'Wilhelmina', I didn’t actually think of League of Extraordinary Gentlemen or Mina Harker in Dracula until after I’d written the chapter. You would have gathered after chewing through so much of my writing that I love detail, so its important to me to get things in this world feeling right. And that includes the friendship between Faith and Willow, I like your description of them as an 'odd couple', it definitely fits the picture of them I have in my head.
I’m not sure if the voices I have my characters using are 100% authentic but I’ve been endeavouring to avoid 21st century dialogue in any form. It’s something I’ve been working really hard on so I’m pleased it’s coming across well.

JustSkipIt: Heya Deb, you’re right, it was about 1000 words shorter than my usual length, but I’m making up for it with the next chapter.
I appreciate and agree with your description of Willow, she’s definitely one of those sad little people who can’t see out of their own little world, and it’s a standard fic plot to have them gradually emerge from their shell. I hope that I can do it in a convincing and maybe a little interesting way. Torment is a great word for what Willow is going through, I just wanted to convey the strength of the attraction she feels for the mystery woman (after the next chapter you’ll know exactly what to call her!), despite whatever distances (temporal, spatial whatever) that separate them. I really haven’t read any Anne Rice novels but I think I watched Interview with a Vampire once. In the next chapter Tara’s character will be revealed a little more, although I’m afraid it will yield few immediate answers.
I’ve wondered many times what my life would be like in the 18th or 19th centuries and, I no doubt would have ended up as a frumpy middle class married woman with six children with suppressed longings that I could never explain!

Hmmm, Faith mud-wrestling, great image, I might have to write that in. I like writing great friendships and I’m pleased that the one in this fic is working out. I will take liberties with the time period, there’s going to be enough angst without homophobia.

This is the first time I’ve written a fic where some form of writing has playing such a pivotal plot point and I’m having great fun with it. It’s raising a lot of questions amongst kittens.
Thanks very much Deb, I surely will keep ‘em coming.

diamondforever: I love writing the diary entries so I’m glad you’re enjoying them and the setting is a little reminiscent of Sarah Waters. It was very much as it was at that time, and with the female characters in this story, I have tried to push that stereotype as much as possible.
I could drop a little hint that you might see Faith with someone!

db: Great to see you find the story is intriguing and suspenseful, those are two things I definitely aim for. There is definitely something fishy going on with our time periods in this fic, and I look forward to explaining everything…at some stage.

WillowRulez: Glad to see you liked my little bit of horror writing, although its really hard to do! It seems so much easier in movies where you can convey everything in a split second with a glance and scary music.
I’ll explain who lives in the house at some stage, it could be Tara…or maybe not…

watty: Idle speculation is always great watty, lord knows I’ve made some crackers in my time…and I think its all up to just how nasty the writer is feeling…unless they have a genuine motive for confusing people, which I may or may not have.
‘Moving along handsomely’ is a great phrase and I’m more than happy to accept such grand praise! I will thank you by letting Willow live a little in the next chapter!

The "haunted" house will definitely feature in upcoming chapters, I could hardly introduce it without drawing upon it for future twists and scares. Nice to have you addicted watty!

Cynthia Taz: I’m sorry to drag out the meeting between Willow and Tara but they will get to know each other slowly. I promise to deliver more very soon.

Belli Bear: I sometimes think that Kittens deliberately write great fanfic to distract other Kittens from their jobs, homework studies etc. Anyway, I don’t feel the slightest bit guilty about distracting people, I’m just glad you’re enjoying it!

I hope it’s a good thing I’ve got going on, I’m having fun with it so as long as that keeps up I think the updates are going to be interesting and worth waiting for! And you wont have to wait too long for another instalment!

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CHAPTER FOUR

26th November 1777

This should have been one of the happiest days of my life, of any young lady’s life…so why then do I feel a melancholia settling over me like a cloud? Right from the very moment Edward stepped across the threshold I knew why he had come. The atrocious weather has kept all other guests away this past week, but not Edward. I knew there was only one reason even he would have braved the weather. He was typical of his sex, mind made up he could wait no longer. I was on the landing when I heard the butler greet him at the door and for some reason I was not surprised to see him. As I moved cautiously down the stairs I saw my father arrive to greet him warmly and usher him into the house proper. No doubt straight in the direction of his study with its roaring great fire. Edward glanced up at me as he passed, with his dark hair whipped across his cheeks and eyes sparkling with the exertion of riding through the rain I could see the man that he is. Tall, handsome to a fault and powerfully built and yet it is all superficial. I know what sort of man lies beneath that flawless exterior, the sort of man that I can not spend the rest of my life with. Most women will not look farther than outward appearances and social position, but I crave companionship, mutual trust built on love and conversation of which I will never grow tired. I have found all that, and it is not with Edward.

Mother summoned me down half an hour later, a half hour which I had spent in front of the mirror composing my reactions to Edward’s question. While a simple ‘no’ came all too easily in just my own company I knew that I could not afford to give such an answer to Edward. I rehearsed surprise and embarrassment but would not let tears fall because I knew they would not be in jest. I was whispering W’s name as I rose from the seat at my bureau and made my way downstairs with tremulous steps.

Edward was waiting for me in the blue sitting room, his hair tousled and partially dry. I could tell he was nervous, for all his handsome appearance he is no great conversationalist. I think what happened next unfolded according to every girl’s dream. I remember a folded knee, his hands clasping my own and an awkward but no doubt sincere confession of his undying love for me just before the words slipped out of his mouth in a great hurry. ‘Tara, marry me,’ although it sounded more like one word than three. All my rehearsals before the mirror counted for naught as I reverted to my painful stutter. As I tried to formulate an answer, I was nothing like the composed and elegant young woman I imagine myself to be. I could not, would not, utter any of the simple words of agreement that would have sufficed but nor could I tell him I loved another. Imagining it was W down on one knee in front of me did not improve matters in the slightest and I almost began to weep.

He took my choked silence to mean that I was overcome with emotion. Displaying an incisiveness that I had not previously credited him with, he apologised for expecting a swift answer from me. He then went on to say that he did not expect the fairer sex to be capable of marshalling their wits following such a proposal and promised me time enough to arrive at my decision…adding that he expected it to be ‘yes.’ I believe he thinks me an insipid fool, incapable of making a decision – the exact sort of wife that all men aspire to obtain. He begged his leave without stopping for tea and I was immediately accosted by my mother demanding an account of what had transpired between us. While I had thought she would be vexed at my lack of a definite answer, she acted as though I had sad yes and was quite beside herself for the rest of the day.

I retired early to write this diary entry and now that the words are on the page I can see clearly what sort of predicament faces me. I do not want to join the ranks of women who suffer in marriages without love, but I cannot see a way to avoid it. If only I could see W.


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With no small amount of satisfaction, Willow deposited the wretched little diary back in her office the following morning. Her encounter, or whatever it had been, the previous evening had completely ruined what was supposed to be a relaxing night. It had left her unable to sleep soundly or do anything remotely productive. She jammed the leather book beneath several, much larger volumes and returned to her desk. With a slight exhalation of breath, she withdrew the picture she had drawn yesterday from beneath the scroll. The woman’s serene face stared back at her and Willow could not help but think she was mocking her irrational infatuation. With a sigh, she tucked the picture within the pages of a first edition copy of A Treatise on Witchcraft and turned to library catalogue that Faith had retrieved from Tirgsor.

She was still ensconced with the catalogue almost three hours later when Faith burst into her office, chest heaving as she struggled to draw a breath. Willow was about to make a rude remark regarding the number of times she seemed to be interrupted, when Faith reached out and dragged her to her feet by her shirt collar.

“Faith! Unhand me this instant!” Willow demanded, struggling against her friend’s firm grip on her clothing.

“You’re coming with me, Rosenberg,” Faith replied with determination in her voice, “And grab your coat, it’s cold out.”

Faith offered no further explanation and Willow was forced to lunge backwards and snatch her coat from the back of her chair. She almost stumbled as Faith dragged her out of the room and down the hall in the direction of the exit. When it became obvious that she was following along, she felt Faith release her hold on her garments. Willow straightened her shirt and jacket as they walked, a slight huff escaping her lips.

“We just received reports of something nasty in a warehouse down by the river, the owner was running an inventory when he saw a shape move in the darkness,” Faith’s voice was as rushed as her walk, she swung open the elevator door with a loud crash and pushed Willow inside the cage.

“That’s nice,” Willow said sarcastically as she narrowly avoided a collision between her forehead and the cage, “It was probably a thief…since when are we responsible for cleaning up crime?”

“Thieves generally aren’t blue with foot long spikes protruding from their heads,” Faith gave Willow a calm glance and began checking each of the weapons she had strapped about her body.

“Well, demon or no, I still fail to see why you’re dragging me along!” Willow protested as they reached the ground floor, “Would you care to explain.”

“Because I thought it would be good for you,” Faith smirked at Willow’s horrified expression for a moment before wiping it off to show that she was quite serious, “Willow, I have no idea what sort of demon is blue with spikes coming out of its head let alone how to kill it!”

Willow’s eyes narrowed in frustration as they passed out of the Employee’s entrance and straight into the waiting carriage with its stomping black steeds and drawn curtains. She waited until she was seated in the dark interior to give the woman sitting opposite her a piece of her mind.

“It’s a Atramen demon you idiot, it was one of the demon’s I listed in a report I filed six month’s ago, you should have read it,” Willow folded her arms across her chest, tapping her figures impatiently as she waited for Faith to respond.

The brunette appeared nervous, furrowing her brow as though she were trying to remember. Her concentration did not last long and she simply shrugged her shoulders much to the annoyance of her friend. Willow moved to the edge of her seat as though she were about to launch into a lecture but Faith was quick to cut her off.

“Willow, you file a report each week and I simply don’t have time to read each one, especially not when I’m travelling. And I don’t remember what I had for breakfast yesterday let alone something I may have read six months ago.”

Willow’s mouth was set into a tight line. Faith had unintentionally managed to dismiss her beloved job as unimportant and bureaucratic and it did not sit well with her at all. However she managed to keep a level head, predominantly due to the fact that she knew her job was without doubt the most important in the entire organisation. Without her carefully conducted and presented research, everything would fall apart.

“You never eat breakfast,” Willow stated matter-of-factly, “And my report examined recent Atramen sightings in Glasgow, Brighton and Watford and concluded that someone or something may have several under their control…which is relatively easy if you have mastery of the correct spells of course.”

“That’s a conclusive report,” Faith replied with a wry twist to her mouth, eyes sparkling in the dim light of the carriage, “I’m sorry I missed it.”

Willow couldn’t help but smile in return at Faith’s brazen sarcasm, but she was quite serious as she continued, “Honestly Faith, reading reports could save your life…what if I wasn’t around to tell you how to defeat the foes we…or rather you, come up against?”

“But you’re always around,” Faith noted simply, “So how do we defeat this thing?”

Willow shrugged, “If you had read the report then you would know that I have no idea.”

Willow and Faith extracted themselves from the carriage ten minutes later to find themselves in front of a rather non-descript warehouse. There was not a soul to be seen, no doubt the owner had made him scarce after a fleeting encounter with the netherworld that he would be only too happy to deny ever happened.

Willow felt rather under prepared as she glanced across at Faith and saw the vast array of weapons she carried about her lithe frame. Strapped around her waist were two matching, beautifully tooled belts with silver inlays. Hanging from one, on her left hip, was a slender sword with a practical, no-nonsense hilt and leather grip. On her right was a long dagger, also meant for business rather than show. She grasped in her capable hands the self-loading crossbow which Giles had recently invented for her, fully loaded with ten silver bolts. Willow knew without looking that she also had a dagger concealed in each of the leather riding boots that reached almost to her knees. The leather pants she wore clung to her thighs almost scandalously, and the jacket and shirt she wore also left little to the imagination as they hugged her figure.

Glancing down at her own rather drab attire, one of the two three-piece suits she owned, Willow wished she could wear the same scarlet hue of which Faith’s jacket was made but at the risk of looking completely silly she continued to wear dependable greys and blacks. As Faith moved towards the building, she knew she ought to start worrying about the Atramen demon and the fact that she was completely unarmed.

“Um, Faith, I don’t need to come in do I?” Willow asked nervously, “I mean, what would I do if it rushed at me?”

“Absolutely nothing,” Faith replied in a low voice, stealing stealthily inside the door which was slightly ajar, “You can be bait.”

“Spiffing,” Willow noted in a high-pitched, panicky voice.

Once they were both inside, Faith motioned for her to be quiet and lifted her crossbow to her shoulder as she went down into a stealthy crouch. Willow followed suit, but felt incredibly silly as she inched along behind Faith. As much as she tried to look the part of an intrepid demon hunter, she felt like a fool…and an unarmed fool at that.

The warehouse was eerily silent, and all too dim for Willow’s likely. In the gloom of an overcast winter’s day, shadows crept between the mountains of crates stacked within. Any one of those shadows could have concealed something sinister, biding its time to do them some harm and Willow imagined shapes moving everywhere.

“Faith!” Willow hissed urgently.

“Shhh!” Faith growled low in her throat.

“I’d feel better if I had a knife or something!” Willow continued.

Faith glanced over her shoulder at the researcher, somewhat amused to see her skin had gone a nasty shade of green, “You wouldn’t know what to do with it…anyway, nothing’s gonna happen to you with me here…”

No sooner had the words left Faith’s lips that an inky black shape engulfed her, knocking her straight to the ground. Her new-fangled self-loading cross bow clattered to the ground and slid several metres away. As she leapt to her feet and drew her sword, she got an eyeful of what it was they were up against. By itself, the Atramen was of similar height and build as a man, however, foot-long spikes added to its height and gave the impression that it was much taller than it actually was. True to the warehouse owner’s word, it was a dark blue in colour…almost the colour of ink. Its shiny skin rippled between blue and black as it moved. Willow backed away a few steps as it turned to face her, giving her full view of its massive white eyes and lipless mouth. She almost wet herself when it bared an array of spiked teeth.

“Ahhh, Faith…” Willow whispered, continuing to back up.

With a cry to turn its attention towards her, Faith surged forward with her sword raised. The Atramen turned its attention away from Willow and towards the real threat. They began a deadly dance across the warehouse floor, each slice Faith made with her sword was deftly sidestepped by the lightning fast demon. Her fingers curled around the hilt of her sword and she brought it to bear once more, stepping forward in a determined series of slashing attacks. The demon caught her with several solid punches to her face and she stumbled backwards.

Willow was looking on helplessly before she realised that Faith’s cross bow was lying mere metres from where she stood. She scrambled to pick it up and lift it beneath her arm into what she hoped was an appropriate firing position. With very little in the way of aim, Willow jabbed her forefinger on the trigger and absolutely nothing happened. She tried several more stabs but the crossbow remained lifeless in her hands.

Oblivious to Willow’s struggles with the crossbow, Faith groggily shook her head and regained her stance. Unbalanced by her quick revival, she caught the Atramen off guard and the tip of her sword sliced through its chest. A thin line of skin burst and spewed forth a thick, blue liquid. Faith was determined to press home the wounding move but as her sword sliced through the air in another stroke, the Atramen seemed to regain its strength and caught her fist in its own. Faith looked surprised for a moment before it wrapped a single hand around her neck and hurled her several metres through the air. Her body slammed into several stacked wooden crates which smashed beneath the weight and collapsed around her.

Willow waited for Faith to exact herself from the crates but seconds went by with absolutely no movement. When the Atramen spun around and hissed, she knew it was coming for her. With no weapons and no clue, Willow could see no alternative but to turn and run like the coward she was. She had barely made several metres when a dark shape passed over head. The Atramen had leapt over her and no stood directly in her path. With no further warning it sprung and slammed her back against the ground beneath its body weight. With one hand, it ensnared both her own and held them above her head even as she squirmed and writhed in disgust.

Trapped beneath the demon and staring up into its white eyes, Willow felt as though it ought to be sightless. However, judging by its reactions to both her and Faith, she knew that was not the case. It had parried Faith’s every move and now Willow could not even think about trying to hit it with both arms trapped over her head and the creature’s disgusting face hovering just inches above her own. It seemed to be smiling at her discomfort, at least that’s what Willow thought it was baring its teeth for…it could have been about to bite her head off. A great gob of saliva dropped from its mouth into her eyes and she squeezed them shut as it burned fiercely. The Atramen hissed in short bursts, a sound which Willow quickly realised was its laughter.

She twisted and struggled as her eyes remained shut, burning fiercely. Something warm and sticky slithered up her neck, trailing a path up over her jugular and onto her chin. Willow tried to wrench her head aside, desperately trying not to imagine what part of the demon was touching her face. She let out a sudden screech that continued until she realised the weight no longer pressed down on her. The demon was gone and her hands were free. Willow urgently scrubbed at her eyes, having to practically claw the sticky substance from her face. As she writhed on the ground she could hear the sounds of a struggle in the background. Then there was the sound of a decidedly feminine grunt, Faith was back. Willow opened her eyes the merest fraction as she lay on her side. She saw a blurry figure standing in front of her but even with her impaired vision she knew it was not Faith. Her friend was wearing red…the figure standing opposite her almost melded with the shadows in black clothing. The only parts of the figure that stood out were a pale face and long, white-blonde hair. It was her…

One word entered her consciousness at that moment, Fire.

“W-who…” Willow tried to reach out a hand towards the shape when a solid object slammed into her body.

Willow was sent flying, rolling over several times before she hit a crate and came to a halt. Someone bent over her, their hoarse breathing sounding loud in her ears.

“Sorry Will,” Faith sounded exhausted.

Willow was picked up by the scruff of her shirt and dumped on her feet. She wavered a little but managed to grab onto the crate beside her and remain standing. Her vision had cleared somewhat and she could see Faith grab and wrestle the demon by its spikes. As her senses cleared, she remembered her hazy view of the blonde-haired figure. Something already told her that she would be gone but Willow looked for her anyway. She was gone. The word ‘fire’ still rang inside her head, and it was only after staring at the fight taking place between Faith and the demon that she realised what it meant. She turned and staggered away from the wrestling pair, searching for something, anything which catch fire. It was a task made all the more difficult by the darkness in the warehouse but Willow spied a kerosene lantern hanging near an exit door. She snatched it down and was patting down her pockets for something to light it with when she remembered she didn’t smoke. An image of Faith puffing on one of her disgusting cigars popped into her head.

“Faith!” Willow moved a little closer to the two combatants, “Do you have a matchbook?”

Faith glanced up from where she had the Atramen in a headlock, her expression clearly annoyed, “Of course I’ve got a bloody matchbook, now’s not the time to take up smoking, Will!”

“Stop your whining and give it to me!” Willow snapped, even as the Atramen gained the upper hand and flung Faith to the floor.

As the demon pressed down on her, Faith reached into the pocket of her scarlet jacket and pulled out a small cardboard box. With some difficulty she managed to toss the little box to Willow who scrambled to retrieve it when it landed short of where she stood.

Placing the lantern on the ground, Willow struggled to light it with a match. The first two broke in her trembling hands and the third went out as she lowered it to the wick.

“Bloody heck, get a grip, Willow!” she growled at herself, even as she heard a cry of pain from her friend.

She glanced up to see Faith clutching at her shoulder, her hands bloody. Hands shaking even worse, Willow willed the next match to light. She successfully lowered it into the glass and the wick caught. As a warm glow filled the space around her, she picked up the lantern and loosened all the screws sealing the fuel holder shut. Although the Atramen had been closing on Faith, it suddenly glanced at Willow and its eyes seemed to bulge when it saw the flame. An awful screech tore from its throat and it hurled itself at Willow.

With fuel leaking from the lantern, Willow picked it up and hurled it directly at the creature bearing down on her with a war-like cry. The lantern smashed across the creature’s chest and kerosene splashed over its skin. As the flames caught hold, Willow scrambled out of its path. She tripped as she tried to move but Faith was there to drag her to a safe distance. Both women watched the creature burn, its hissing anguished cries doing little to move them to sympathy. As its body burnt, it did not char, rather it melted. In less than a minute the Atramen demon was reduced to an ink-like puddle on the warehouse floor, feeding a spluttering little blaze.

With their foe no longer a threat, Willow disentangled herself from Faith’s hold and moved towards the spot where she had seen someone standing moments earlier.

“Was there anyone else in here besides us?” Willow stopped short of disappearing into the shadows that filled much of the warehouse, “I mean did you see anyone else?”

“Just him,” Faith pointed at the scorch mark on the floor, the fire had gone out and it was all the evidence that remained of the Atramen demon.

“No…” Willow whispered, stopping short of saying who she thought it had been, a few moments later she shook her head quickly to indicate that it didn’t matter, “Don’t worry, no doubt it was hallucinations brought about by terror…seriously Faith, were you hastening to my aid or taking your time?”

“Hastening of course! Do you really think I wanted him to rip your head off?”

Willow flexed her neck and realised for the first time just how painful it actually was. Then she glanced down at her front to find herself coated in sticky blue Atramen blood from her shoulders downwards, her favourite grey suit was ruined.

“Great, I have no visible battle wounds to prove just how much mortal peril I was in and a ruined suit…heavens, I think I will have nothing to wear to work tomorrow,” Willow groaned at the thought of wearing a dress.

She then glanced across at Faith to see her friend flexing her arm, wincing as the deep lacerations made their presence known.

“Oh Faith, I’m so sorry…” Willow felt ridiculous for lamenting her dirty clothes and lack of wounds when her friend was clearly in pain.

Faith shook her head, “Tis nothing, I’ve had worse accidents getting out of the bath.”

Faith then moved to retrieve both her sword and the crossbow, sliding one back into its sheath and tucking the other beneath her arm.

“That thing’s bloody useless, I’m going to give Giles a piece of my mind when we get back to work,” Willow muttered, eyeing the crossbow as though it were out to get her.

Faith glanced down at the weapon, she fingered a small lever on the side and then looked up at Willow with a small grin, “Safety latch is still on, Will.”

“Oh,” Willow flushed a burning red, making a mental note to not mention that little fact to Giles.

Faith slapped her on the back and it was forgotten, “Let’s get out of here, I need to report back to Croft and get a team sent here to clean up this little mess.”

Willow immediately began to berate Faith for not cleaning up her own mess as she helped her from the warehouse. The thought that there were people in the organisation who ran around secretly cleaning up mess from dead demons was a surprise to her. Faith noted that she would be sure to bring a mop along on her next mission as long as Willow brought a bucket of soapy water.

As the voices of the two women faded from the room, from the shadows emerged the woman Willow had glimpsed earlier as she struggled with the demon. Her pale face was impassive as she strode into the centre of the room and knelt elegantly, directly beside the scorch marks that were apparently all that remained of the demon. She withdrew a small stopper bottle from within her cloak and uncorked it. A smooth, barely whispered incantation flowed from her lips and moments later the scorch marks came alive. The burn seemed to lift from the floor and merge to form a tarred and blackened ball hovering at the height of the bottle. The shape seemed reluctant to move further but a curt word from the woman sent it flying into the bottle like liquid moving in the wrong direction. With the stopper replaced, it appeared to be little more than common ink.

The bottle tucked safely within her cloak, she reached out to touch the empty floorboards where just moments ago Willow had lain, fighting to get the demon off her body. The very tips of her fingers traced the bare boards as though that small touch afforded her some sort of contact with the young woman. Her facial expression slipped for just a moment to reveal an inherent sadness, the sadness of loss and absence.

“Don’t tell me you’re trying to kill her now?” a cold voice sliced through her thoughts.

She stood, her cloak rustling slightly as she did, and turned to face the speaker. It was a tall, broad-shouldered man with his handsome, chiselled features twisted into an approximation of amusement. His brown hair curled down around the collar of his finely tailored suit. He moved powerfully, taking just a few steps to cross the floor to her side. The woman was forced to look up at him, her white neck craning proudly as she met his gaze.

“Don’t be ridiculous Angelus, if I was seriously trying to kill her she would be dead already,” her voice was cold and without emotion of any kind, the sadness she had felt moments before was already suppressed.

Angelus let out a mocking laugh before he replied, “After witnessing that little episode, you would have fooled me. You know he wants her for himself…as soon as she leads him to the skull, our master is going to split the redhead open and drain her dry…he’ll drink his fill of her blood and his wives will bathe in the remnants.”

Angelus wrapped his large hand around the back of his companion’s neck, stroking the soft skin there as though he were lulling her into a false sense of security just prior to snapping her neck. She tensed slightly as his thumb pressed into her skin.

“That’s not going to create a problem for you is it, Tara?”

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No one else would dare rest their dirty boots on Lara Croft’s desk, other than Lara herself of course. However, as afternoon was about to give way to early evening, Faith sat back in Croft’s chair with her riding boots sitting comfortably on the edge of the desk in front of her. She held a fat cigar between her lips and was sending rings of smoke in the direction of the ceiling. The heavy office door swung inwards and Croft entered, her expression remaining unchanged even as she laid eyes on Faith.

The Director of the British Museum was as elegant as ever, clad in an austerely elegant dress of scarlet that matched Faith’s jacket. While the garment concealed almost every inch of her skin, it did nothing to hide her luxurious curves. Instead, it accentuated her swaying hips, flat stomach and ample bosom. She did not miss the barely veiled look in Faith’s eyes as she limped across the floor to sit on the corner of her own desk.

“What makes you think you can get away with this sort of behaviour?” Lara reached across the desk and, with her thumb and forefinger, grasped the cigar in Faith’s lips.

Faith parted her lips slowly, curving them up into a smile as Croft removed the foul smelling cigar and deposited it in a half empty tea cup sitting on her desk. She swung her booted feet down from the desk and slid the chair forward in order to prop her elbows on the desk and bring her face closer to Croft’s. The two women found each others eyes and the air around them smouldered with the sensual meeting of two confident gazes. Faith retained the cocky grin and in response the barest smile grazed Croft’s lips before disappearing to be replaced by a severity that was entirely false.

The palpable and almost overwhelming tension between the two women was broken when Croft slid from the desk and limped around to the window. Faith glanced down discreetly as she knew it pained the Director to appear crippled in front of anyone, especially her employees. She was now standing directly opposite Faith, with nothing between them. Faith kept one elbow on the desk and swivelled slightly so she could watch the Director as she gazed out on Great Russell Street down below.

“Look at them,” Lara whispered softly, eyes on the countless people as they scurried about their business, “If only they realised the sort of danger they were in everyday.”

Faith was quick to respond, “Then we wouldn’t be doing our job properly.”

“True,” Lara nodded curtly, she turned to Faith and furrowed her brow as though she were trying to remember exactly why it was she had summoned Faith to her office.

Faith recognised the look and added helpfully, “My report?”

Lara shook her head in response, “Your report can be delivered in writing, I wanted to see you for another reason.”

“Oh?” Faith inquired hopefully.

“I need you to keep a close eye on Rosenberg for me,” Lara replied quietly.

“Oh,” Faith repeated, although this time her voice betrayed disappointment, “Such a request hardly needs be spoken…I sometimes feel as if I live to keep an eye on Willow, platonically of course.”

Faith chuckled to herself as she remembered Willow’s awkward response to her declaration of love the day before.

“Is it funny, Winters?” Lara had obviously missed the joke.

“Ah no,” Faith shook her head, “But I’m not quite sure I understand why you’re asking me to do this specifically as Willow’s my friend, watching over her comes naturally…and for you to ask me that would lead me to believe she’s in some sort of danger?”

“The truthful answer to your question is I don’t know, she could very well be and yet at the same time it could all be a ridiculous mistake. However, until I find out otherwise, I’m treating it very seriously.”

“That task would be made easier if I had more information,” Faith dropped the rather obvious hint.

“That I cannot give you,” Lara turned away from Faith and resumed watching the passers by outside, “Just protect her…especially from herself.”

“I will,” Faith promised, gently sliding the chair back and moving to her feet, she moved to stand behind Croft and lowered her voice, “Is there anything I can help you with before I beg my leave, Lara?”

Lara turned her head slightly so Faith could make out the curve of her lips, “I can think of a number of things…but I have a lot of work to do before the end of today and I must ask that you leave me to attend to it.”

“As you wish,” Faith murmured, speaking close enough to Lara’s neck to allow the hot air from her mouth to fall on it.

Faith slipped out of the room in time to miss the reluctant sigh that escaped Lara’s lips.

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Myles allowed himself to feel a little thrill at the thought of being the sole person on the basement level of the British Museum. Giles had departed minutes earlier, leaving him to finish polishing the long rack of swords laid out in front of him. There were at least twenty of varying shapes, sizes and metals. Massive double handed broadswords stood next to delicate rapiers with elaborate handles. Some had blades of the finest folded steel, while others were made entirely of silver for the sole purpose of killing vampires…and the thirty-two other types of demon who also had problems with silver. Myles ran through all thirty-two demon types in his head as he worked on Faith’s second favourite blade, a rare Japanese katana given to her by a samurai warrior. Her favourite blade, of course, never left her side.

With no one else around, Myles was quite happy speaking to himself as he recited his demon list,

“Fumian, catellus, sicarius…ummm, lemures demon…” Myles screwed up his nose as he tried to remember the book on demonology he had been discreetly reading in Willow’s office, “No, they can’t be killed by silver – just beheading…Utionis,I think…damn, I wish Willow were still here so I could check my answers!”

Myles replaced the rapier carefully and drew out the last sword in the rack, a short steel baselard which Faith was fond of carrying concealed when she was forced to wear a dress. He whistled happily as he ran his cloth over the stubby little weapon, carefully holding it at the hilt and tilting the blade away from his body. He liked the feel of the sword, probably because it was so small, and it swung easily through the air. His eyes darted around the workshop and in the direction of the door as though to confirm he really was alone before he set aside his cloth and stood. Still holding the sword he moved to a clear space in the room.

“En guarde!” Myles stood in the manner he had seen Faith use many times in training, before lunging forward to make a stabbing motion at an imagined foe, “Ha! Don’t even think about trying to get past me.”

Myles swung heartily, slashing the air in front of him with what he thought were well timed strokes. His feet moved lightly across the floor as he duelled with his imaginary opponent. His stabbed his blade forward in a finishing stroke and grinned.

“You’ll rue the day you met Myles Cavendish!” he announced, flourishing the sword several times.

His foe defeated, Myles reluctantly returned to his polishing. He was about to sit back down on his chair, when every single light in the workroom blinked out in an instant and he was left in pitch black. The sword trembling in his grip, Myles gingerly felt around on the desk in front of him for the object he remembered seeing there just moments earlier. He knew it was somewhere just in front of him. He had ‘borrowed’ it from Giles’ workroom earlier in the day, just to take home for the evening and show his younger brothers. Myles breathed a sigh of relief as his fingers closed around the cylinder and moved the switch forward with his thumb. The space immediately in front of him was illuminated with a weak yellow light from Giles’ new invention. Just as his breathing was calming he heard footsteps in the hall beyond, in the direction of Willow’s office. A wry smile crossed his face as he suspected it to be the researcher. No doubt leaving early had not agreed with her and she had discreetly returned to work.

Using the beamlight to guide him to the door, Myles made his way through the obstacles in his path. As he approached the door he realised that he was thinking the possibility that it might not be Willow at all. The short sword was still firmly in his grasp and he pointed it out in front of him now. He reached the door and moved the light to his sword hand as he grasped the knob. He could no longer hear the footsteps, all he could hear was the rasp of his own breath. The door opened with the awful screech of un-oiled hinges. Myles winced as any hope of stealth was ruined.

He poked his head out into the dark corridor, keeping both the light and the sword out in front of him. He shone the light first right, and then left, seeing nothing but an empty corridor in both directions.

“Willow, is that you?” he kept his voice low, not daring to speak louder, “Faith?”

Myles moved out into the corridor and in the direction of Willow’s office, all the while feeling as though the temperature had dropped several degrees. His hair stood up on the back of his neck. Most irritating was the fact that he could not hold the sword straight without its blade moving in his trembling hands. The flashlight also wobbled from side to side. He made it to Willow’s office, the door was ajar and no one seemed to be inside. Standing in Willow’s office, he glanced around but everything was such a shambles, he could not tell if something had been disturbed.

His fear gradually became embarrassment. Most likely it had been the caretaker in thinking no one was down here had turned the lights off at the main switch by the elevator. Myles made up his mind to speak to no one about his little episode in the dark. As he turned to leave the office the beam of light in front of him was swallowed by a darkness standing in the doorway. It was darkness with a pale chin protruding from the cowl of a deep hood. The sword and light slipped from his fingers at the precise moment the shape surged forward directly at him. Myles stumbled backwards and the last thing he saw before his head collided with the corner of the chair behind him were a pair of brilliant, burning blue eyes.

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Yay wooow. What a intense chapter. I have loved it very very much.
The plot development is awsome. You didn't dissapoint me. Yays for this fic. Keep it up and update soon. The mistery is cool. I can't wait for more.
Besides, Tara is moving. Big bads on the way (or it seems so) ...


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Mmm. What a very lot to think about here. Tara's diary in the "ago" is progressing nicely although it leaves us with a sort of waiting for the two stories to colide effect. Or perhaps that shouldn't be "although" but "yes!" So I'll say this: I love the way I'm left waiting for the Tara from the diary to collide with her destiny or at least her future in the person of the Tara from now.

And Faith. Hubba and also hubba. Your descriptions of her leave me thinking of her as a superhero but I think she's just a regular person who has kind of found her calling as a demon hunter. More importantly, she loves Willow and that's just wonderful. I love that they have the kind of a relationship where she can be so honest and joke and tease Willow but they still know that they will do what they can to save the other. Willow did great with her courage considering the lack of time she had to prepare for facing a ... whatever demon. And a big shout-out to Tara for showing up and telling Willow how to defeat said demon.

But now I'm totally concerned about Angelus and his talk with Tara and her acquiesence (sp) and his mention of their master and said master's intentions for Willow . Eek. Perhaps even more disturbing is Croft's concern about Willow. She doesn't seem to be someone who scares easily. Speaking of which: thanks for the mental image of Lara Croft and Faith.

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Wowweeeee! So what is Tara then? This is getting complicated, but beautifully so. Loving it, as usual. I'm absolutely psyched for the idea of Lara/Faith. I'm sure that's a fantasy many of us have had many a night. :)

Awesome chapter -- loved the action. Eagerly awaiting the next one, as always!

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 24 April)
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Ok, Alcy... you've got me again. Nothing new there.

I think I have a few things figured out, so I'm gonna borrow db's Magic Speculation 8-ball and give it a twirl.

Tara from the diary is Tara of present day, but now she's a vampire. Angelus is exactly who we think he is, and the Master is just ewww. Creepy stuff. I'm still knocking my head against the wall trying to piece together the Willow of the present with "W" in the diary. But, I'll calm myself and let you do your voodoo with the story. I know I won't be disappointed.

I'm also gonna call Deb's "hubba hubba" for Faith and raise you a "yow." I never fail to really enjoy the Faith that lives in your head.

Thanks for another great update. I'm terribly excited about this story and the way it's playing out. Well done.

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 24 April)
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really loved the update can't wait for more...of your great story.

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 24 April)
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mmmFaith. She's just like a slayer. No, more because she doesn't have superpowers. Dispatched that demon real good, and she is a worthy successor in the sexy intrepid adventurer department to Croft. For a moment I thought Willow was going to discover hidden magic powers, but it was Tara who is the mysterious party here. Enjoyable fight, did I ever mention how much I like your action scenes? And now Tara (of the diary? Special human? Vampire? Demon?) has appeared and a Black Hat to boot. How will these threads come together? Intriguing.
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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 24 April)
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Angelus let out a mocking laugh before he replied, “After witnessing that little episode, you would have fooled me. You know he wants her for himself…as soon as she leads him to the skull, our master is going to split the redhead open and drain her dry…he’ll drink his fill of her blood and his wives will bathe in the remnants.”

Pretty image :sigh
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Faith slipped out of the room in time to miss the reluctant sigh that escaped Lara’s lips.

So funny to try and visualize Angelina doing that... I know I know, actors arent their characters but I cant help it.
:pinky Waiting for more :smash

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 24 April)
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viximon: Thanks very much for enjoying this story, especially the plot development, I’ve worked very hard on it so it’s nice to have it noticed. And yes, things are definitely afoot…more on the bad guys plans soon…

Debra: Heya, yes, heaps of little things to notice in this chapter as there will be in the next few to come as well. There will definitely be a collision of sorts with the diary, a minor one in the next chapter and a much more momentous one in about ten chapters which will see the diary become the main element of storytelling for that portion of the story…crikey, I think I’m giving away too much information!
I’m definitely enjoying writing Faith, I’m writing a particular scene at the moment for chapter six which I’m finding interesting to write and you will no doubt enjoy.
There are also plenty of disturbing events in this chapter and on the horizon. We’re just beginning to see that Tara has her ‘own team’ so to speak and it’s not the one Willow’s on. Thanks as always!

diamondforever: Complicated? Tell me about it, VR definitely makes my head hurt…although in a good way. I’m very glad that you’re enjoying the Lara/Faith interaction, I might just have to write more of it.
Thanks very much!

dlline: Hi Diane, that’s a mighty potent magic 8 ball you’ve got there! There’s definitely more voodoo afoot as you put it, and I’ll leave the mysteries in this story for you to mull over carefully.
The Faith that leaves in my head definitely isn’t the traitorous criminal from the show, and I like her better. I’m glad you’re excited, that means the story is coming along nicely and we’ve barely even started!

WolfDragonGod: Welcome to VR, I’m really glad you’re enjoying it so far!

watty: Hallo there watty, yes, I do kinda have a picture of Lara in my head as a little older, at one stage she obviously had Faith’s job…and to a large extent it pains her that she isn’t still out doing it. This is probably why they’ve gravitated together (or maybe its just because I wrote them that way!)
Willow with hidden magic powers? It’s a possibility…
Tara’s world is gradually creeping closer to Willow’s, at first she was just a stranger in a park, now she’s helping her out in a tough spot (if you can really call that helping!), who knows what she’ll be doing in a couple of chapters! Here’s me hoping to keep you intrigued!

WillowRulez: Yes, it was a rather nice image wasn’t it. I figured if this is a Dracula fic then I’d better start throwing in some scenes of blood etc.
I know what you mean, but I always have mental pictures of the actors in my head when playing out a scene, makes things so much easier!

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 Post subject: Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 24 April)
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Well crap. Not only am I *late* to the party but Diane went and stole my magic 8 ball! (it is in my mind, so anyone is welcome to it anytime, really):-D:

dlline wrote:
I think I have a few things figured out, so I'm gonna borrow db's Magic Speculation 8-ball and give it a twirl.


Can I still play? Can I can I can I?

Gunna do it anyway!

So. This is what *I* was going to say (and it is remarkably close to Diane's statement, so I think she really *is* using the magic 8-Ball o' specualtion from my mind).


I think Tara is maybe a Vampire (I mean, ok, she's pale and with Angelus and there's the loooooong time thing -- plus the story's called Van Rosenberg... so.)

BUT

I don't understand the park thing. Tara was in the park. How was Tara in the park if she all Vampire-y? Was it dark? It was lunch-time-be-damned, right? Tara looked at Willow's lunch box! There was a park bench and picture taking.

Anyway. It's all very confusing... but I still think that somehow Tara's a vampire or not (see items o' speculation above)

If she is, I think that maybe ms. pale face in the window that creeped Willow out so was maybe possibly Tara. Dunno. It was something pale and had portents of something or another.

I am still very confused -- but the interest and intrigue is compelling me right along!

Great update Alcy.

(sorry I was late)

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