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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 04 Feb 2008)

Postby katjetson » Fri Feb 08, 2008 7:24 pm

Hi there!

Individual feedback responses in a sec, but I just wanted to let you know that I'm still pluggin' away. I'm going to start writing a shiny, new fic this weekend. I tinkered (love that word) with the idea of continuing on with the Willow and Tara at Dinah Shore, but I like them just where I left 'em. Any more of that story would seem forced to me. I love that you have no idea where they live, or what they do, or how old they are. Trust me, they live sexily ever after. That said, no title for the next short fic, but I've got some fun ideas. My fingers love to type sweet and sexy W/T lovin', so we'll keep on that path.

Feedbacks, yo!

Zampas1975: No more cave exploring. Definitely more smutty goodness. Thanks for all the support-o gal reading you do here.

dlline: Like I told you in PM, the "cheap shot" was inspired by you and your love of it. And, well, other things, but that's just cause your writing's an inspiration. God, that's so After School Special. Also, thanks again for your words o' wisdom. Gerunds need to go fly a kite... in HELL!

Zooeys_Bridge: F1, thanks for all that sweet FB. I love incomplete and wrong sentences from you 'cause they just seem endearing and cutesy. And, the elevator scene... I know, right! I made me woozy! And I really gotta look into that fantasy.

Paint The Sky: The only thing that would make gardening in the rain worthwhile would be if Willow and Tara were in their bikinis tending to the garden with you. The rain pelting down on them, water rivulets beading down into their cleavage, mouths agape as their fingers... Wow. OK. So...

chance: "Beating that muse into submission." You trying to turn me on? ;) It really geeks me out that people like I wrote. F'real. Thanks!

wimpy0729: My girlfriend tells me I'm a fine pussy... Kat, as well. I'll be sure to tell her others think so, too. Hee. And wimpy, perhaps I should venture into your head. You know, come up with some tasty W/T ideas? And you're right, they do have so much more. But hot sex any and everywhere really is a fine starting point, innit? Seriously, though, no matter how naughty it gets in my fics, there'll always be the tenderness between these two characters that I adore. Glad to hear that I walked the line just right.

taraslove: You know, ... this ... is all your fault. And I love you for it. I tip my SBCH to you. As for the t-word, I love Willow loving Tara's tits, and saying exactly as much. I mean, LOOK AT 'EM!

SJ: I hope the next one is great-er-er. Whee!

JujudeRoussie: I know, I know... If you don't know baseball, then a lot of meaning must've been lost on you. Sorry! But, you get the idea. I mean, you DID get the idea, right? :) It all comes down to them having crazy hot sex because of it. Well, not totally because of baseball, cause I'm sure they woulda found some (read: any) reason to get it on. Like, "Oh, today's Saturday. Let's do it."

MissKittyB": Provocative, huh? Shoot, then I've done my job. I also want to use the word provocative tonight in a sentence. I'll keep you posted. :)

taralicious: OK, your feedback oozed so much sex that I can't continue. My fic did that! Neat-o, daddy-o!

See on the flipside, kittens. Or, at the very least, page 2.

Ta-ta.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 04 Feb 2008)

Postby MsKittyB » Sat Feb 09, 2008 9:56 am

I'm going to start writing a shiny, new fic this weekend

New stories! :party Good for us that means more to come? Yep, pun so definally intended!
That said, no title for the next short fic, but I've got some fun ideas. My fingers love to type sweet and sexy W/T lovin', so we'll keep on that path.

:drool Hooray for that! Cant wait to see what the next story holds.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 04 Feb 2008)

Postby Alcy » Tue Feb 19, 2008 3:15 pm

Hi there Kat,

I've just managed to catch up on your wee short story and I'm very glad I did. It was great that my being neither a baseball nor spelunking afficionado did not inhibit my enjoyment of this fic.

It was funny, hot and exceptionally well-paced. Willow was pure spaz-Willow through and through...and Tara was just hot in all her full-breasted glory. I found myself chuckling several times throughout the fic at the cuteness, silliness and just pure good ole fashioned humour.

I would defintiely recommend that you try your hand at writing further fics, I know I would gladly read more of your writing.

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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 04 Feb 2008)

Postby katjetson » Tue Feb 19, 2008 3:55 pm

Pardon the fan girl in me while I say that, "Huzzah! You read. You liked. I'm psyched!" And that I made you chuckle? Seriously awesome.

You already know that I've read all that you've written and am a huge admirier of your fics. I'm pleased as punch I seem to have nailed down some Will-humor/Tara-boobage. What more could a budding Kitten writer ask for?

Also, this last bit of feedback was the little boost I needed to continue. So thanks for that, too.

Ga, gush much? (Take that as you will.)
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Feb 2008)

Postby katjetson » Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:14 pm

Title: And Away We Go!
Author: katjetson
Disclaimer: The Purple Prose created the well-loved and highly-quotable, ooey-gooey monster that is Buffy the Vampire Slayer. I highly doubt my little fics are worth being noticed by some sue-happy lawyer. So yeah, just tinkerin’ here. Not claiming a damn thing.
Feedback: Still going with “That’d be nifty.”
Distribution: Not sure who else would want it, but it’s yours for the taking. Just let me know, ya?
Pairing: W/T
Rating: This first part is PG-13, bon't you worry your pretty little head, NC-17 is, uh... coming.
Summary: I don’t know what to tell you really. Willow and Tara are gonna eventually end up in the sack. I promise. Also, Tara's boobs will probably leave at least two characters speechless and create world peace.
Note 1: Even though this novella is gonna be in three or four parts, I’m keeping it in my Short Story thread. Just think it works out best that way.
Note 2: Many thanks to Diane for pointing out those little devils known as gerunds, and for offering to assist in my creative writing process. All the other thanks go to Jude. I don’t mind telling you again what an inspiration you are. X!


And Away We Go!

Willow sat in front of her computer furiously tapping at the keys. Her muse had hit her at a most inappropriate time; in the shower, mid-shampoo, but as much as she loved her computer, there were just some places the two couldn’t be together. The newbie writer would simply have to learn to deal with these in-opportune moments of literary clarity, so she quickly worked the lather through her hair and repeated the muse-induced intro to her story like a mantra—silently praying that the words wouldn’t slip from her brain. Losing them would be like starting from square one, and Willow didn’t know if she could bear to look at that blinking cursor anymore. It was mocking her; telling her that she just wasn’t cut out for the creativity that, well… creative writing entailed.

(It’s smutty, lesbian short stories. How difficult could it be? Lesbian? Check. Smutty? Ohgod, yes! Good with words? Not so sure about the ‘good,’ but definitely… wordy. Which is kind of ironic ‘cause, hello! Short stories.)

Whatever the case, she was on a roll, and her inspiration, no matter how ill-timed, was making for a rather steamy encounter with her fictional ladies. It was at this moment that Willow wished she hadn’t promised Buffy they’d meet for breakfast. But there was no getting out of it now; especially considering the last time she ditched her best friend it was due to her being “in the middle of the juicy bits” of character development.

(Not sure one can claim ‘juicy bits’ as an excuse more than once. Shame, really.)

Willow’s inner dialogue was interrupted when she felt a vibration on the desk next to her. She knew it was only a matter of seconds before the ring portion of her cell alert would kick in, and while she normally wouldn’t mind hearing 30 seconds of Salt ‘n’ Pepa’s intensely-underrated “Push It,” right now she couldn’t be bothered, and let the call go to voice mail. Almost instantly the phone began its song again. With an audible groan, Willow grabbed the phone and answered with a huff, “Hello?”

“Will?”

“Buff?”

“Are you up to no good in lesbo-land again?”

“I hope so. There’s no finer place to be…” Willow answered as she tried to hold the phone with her shoulder and continue to type at the same time.

“Well, think you can rip the girl’s bikini off quickly and get to Waffle House before the marathon sex in the hot tub begins? I’m starving.”

“Ohmygod! Buffy, you’ve totally just given me an idea for a story!” Willow stopped typing for a moment and grabbed at her notepad while frantically looking for a writing utensil that wasn’t a highlighter. “Girl-on-girl hot tub sex is definitely an idea deserving of, uh… further consideration.”

“Lucky for you Ms. Summers gladly accepts Visa, MasterCard and free meals of all kinds. Now get over here. You’re late!”

Willow looked up at the clock then down at her towel, “Shit! Buff, I’m sorry. I’ll be there in a jiffy. I just gotta put on some clothes.”

“I so don’t wanna know…”

Willow heard a click on the other end and hung up her cell with a snicker. She reluctantly put down her laptop, leaned over her desk to click the save button, and lost her towel in the process. She felt a chill that unexpected nakedness tends to bring and ran over to the closet where she pulled out a pair of chocolate brown corduroys and her favorite, faded Star Wars t-shirt (a gift from Xander.) Wiggling into her extremely well-fitting pants, she stood with her back to the mirror and looked over her shoulder.

(You’ve got a nice ass, Rosenberg. I’ll give you that much.)

Totally un-naked now, Willow was just about ready to roll. In a rush she grabbed the essentials; keys, iPhone, notepad and a mechanical pencil. The items were hurriedly thrown into her bag and she ran for the door where she snagged her jacket and helmet off the hook. Just as the door closed shut behind her, she snapped her fingers in the air and mentally chastised herself.

(I can’t believe I almost forgot.)

She put the key back in the lock and squeaked the door open just enough to take in the sight before her. “Bye, Jetson. I’ll be back later and we’ll got for a walk, ‘kay buddy?” The excited and goofy look on her dog’s face couldn’t have been more adorable, and Willow lost herself for a moment in his big ole black-and-white moppy-mutness. She made a mental note to get him another one of those squeaker toys he liked so much, even if he did tear out all the stuffing in 10.2 seconds.

Willow knew the extra Jetson-love was wasting time and she needed to get a move-on. With wide eyes she looked down at her watch and locked the door once again.

(I don’t even wanna know how many waffles this is gonna cost me.)

The redhead turned on her heels and ran, head down, for the exit--colliding forcefully with a golden-haired woman in the hallway . Willow gasped loudly and watched helplessly as the blonde jerked away from the hot coffee that splashed out of her cup and down the front of her shirt. “Ohmygod, I got you all wet! Coffee wet. Not like, good wet but…” Willow fell silent when the blonde looked up at her with an unreadable expression, and for reasons she couldn’t explain, the look made Willow feel nervous and shivery.

(Oh! She’s beautiful!)

Not having the time to comprehend what the other woman was thinking, Willow thought instead to make herself useful. She reached for the littered napkins on the ground and when she got to back on her feet Willow awkwardly began to pat dry the woman’s top. The cheap, coffee shop napkins weren’t exactly Bounty-material and Willow only managed to make more of a mess, leaving bits of white paper on the woman’s navy blue blouse.

Willow chewed at her bottom lip and focused solely at the matter at hand. “I’m not helping, am I? And look at your shirt! I’m totally making it worse. Let me get. These. Off…” Willow was mindlessly picking at the woman’s shirt, not even realizing that she was full-on fondling her breasts. The blonde was rendered speechless and began to blush. She stood completely still, simply staring at Willow’s hands doing… whatever it was they were doing. As unintentional and harmless as it seemed, there was only so much teasing a girl could take and she gently put her hand over Willow’s, moving it down and away. “I think I can get it from here.”

They stood there for a moment, simply holding hands. And once Willow got her first real look at the woman before her, she began to run her thumb inside the blonde’s palm.

(Stop staring. Stop staring. Stop, ohfuck… rubbing her hand?!)

Willow quickly let go and bowed her head in embarrassment, “I’m so sorry. What a cad! Here I am, ruining your shirt, spilling your coffee and feeling you up. Who knew I could do so much damage in so little time? It’s like, a personal best, or worst if you will, and there’s just nothing about this sentence that’s coming out right, is there?”

“It’s okay. I think I can get this out,” said the blonde, waving her hand in front of her chest. “You know, if I get to a faucet quick enough.”

Willow’s next idea, while unintentionally-flawed, was nothing short of earnest, “Oh, do you wanna come over to my place? Take your shirt off and, yikes! That’s not what I meant. What I meant was, you can borrow one of my shirts. I’ve got bigger ones for your, you know bigger uh… Either way, I take full responsibility for this awful mess. I’ll clean up your perfectly-fitting shirt. Or take it to the cleaners. And I’ll buy you a coffee. Like, a replacement cup of coffee, but also another cup later on down the road if you ever wanted, and.... It’s not just a one shot deal here. No siree, or in your case, m’am-a-ree. Well, now, that didn’t sound right either. I mean, mammaries, sure you’ve got totally ‘em, but that’s no reason to you call you by that…”

The blonde couldn’t stop staring. And smiling. “Uhm.” She cupped her hand over her mouth and desperately tried to suppress a giggle.

Unable to keep her own silliness in check, Willow began to laugh, as well.. “What?”

“Nothing, it’s just…,” she moved closer to the redhead and placed a gentle hand on her shoulder. Willow felt a sense of pride when she saw the other girl’s smile grow wider. “that was quite possibly the most words I’ve ever heard uttered in one single breath.”

“Oh, that’s because we’ve only just met. You should hear me when there’s money riding it. Or, grrr… talk of Republicans.”

Tara busted into full-blown laughter. “Well, the parts I could decipher sounded…Well, I’m not quite sure what they sounded like, but let’s start with names first, okay? I’m Tara.”

“Tara—by the way, that’s a really pretty name—again with the sorries.” Willow quickly realized that she loved how the name sounded falling from her lips, and decided then and there she’d say the woman’s name as much as possible. “I’m not usually this clumsy and awkward. Actually, that’s about 50% of what I am. It’s just… I mean, listen to me, I can’t even tell you my name without some babble-preface. It’s completely embarrassing and… I’m Willow.”

The blonde flashed her a reassuring smile, “It’s okay, Willow. I think it’s cute.”

Willow’s warm, green eyes twinkled and she bounced on her toes. “You do?”

“I do. And see,” she said pointing in the direction of her apartment, “I live just right at the end of the hall. Feel free to knock on the door and say a really wordy hello any time.”

“You mean it?”

“I do. And we’ll go out for that replacement cup of coffee--allowing you plenty of time to shoot for a new babble record.”

“But what about your shirt?”

“Don’t worry about it. I’ve got one of those stain stick things. Besides, with all the spilling and the rushing, it looks like you have someplace else to be?”

“Buffy!”

“Huh?”

“My friend.” Willow scooped up her belonging that fell to the ground during the coffee crash and cradled them into her arms. “I was supposed to meet her almost a half hour ago. She’s going to be waffle-impossible. You have no idea! For such a small girl, she can really pack away…”

“Willow?”

“Yeah?”

“I honestly could listen to this all day, but like you said, you’re gonna be late.”

With lightning speed Willow turned and raced toward the door. Tara tried to resist, but her eyes found a way down to the curve of Willow’s ass and she gave it an appreciative stare before she was broken out of her reverie by the sound of Willow’s voice.

“Tara!” The redhead bumped into a large plant and began to absently rub the leg that connected with the planter. “Tomorrow?”

“What?”

“Can I see you tomorrow?”

(As much of me as you’d like.) “Yes, Willow.”

(She makes even an affirmative sound sexy…) “Is tomorrow night at 8:00 okay?”

“Perfect.”

“Great!” Willow was on the move now. “I’ll see you then, Tara.” She fumbled with the straps of her helmet and pushed the door open with a jut of her hip.

Tara found herself completely taken with the redhead and sneakily followed her to the exit. She smiled to herself and watched out the window as Willow kick-started a vintage-looking scooter and zoomed out of sight. “And away she goes.”

TBC
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby Zampsa1975 » Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:21 pm

Yay for another great story beginning goodness... Magical Tara-boobies have done it again :blush :party
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby katjetson » Wed Mar 05, 2008 6:03 pm

Oops! I completely edited this to post the real version and not the "working" version. Boo on me. Sor.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby Paint the Sky » Wed Mar 05, 2008 6:03 pm

I was just about to go to bed when i made one last stop over here, and yay, something to smile about as I go to sleep. You did say it would be fluffy goodness, but you didn't say it was going to be so damn funny!

Willow trying to clean up Tara's shirt had me giggling, and
No siree, or in your case, m’am-a-ree.
made me laugh out loud. and the bit where she was picking bits of napkin of Tara's boobs, made me laugh even harder.

I better make sure I'm not eating or drinking reading this one, don't want to choke to death as I'm laughing my ass off ;-)
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby wimpy0729 » Wed Mar 05, 2008 6:59 pm

Oh Kat! Good God woman, you had me laughing from the beginning until the end. Picturing Willow (or some other person perhaps) having their muse hit them at inopportune moments, and their desire to get their fic written that everything else is forgotten totally cracked me up.

Then, everything else was so perfect. Damn, how lucky to literally just run right into a hot woman, well even hotter thanks to the coffee. And I gotta say, after writing her lesbian erotica, her hormones were probably running rampant anyway. Not that I know anything about that. ;-)

And of course, the mammaries. ROFLMAO. My brain was already going there before I read it.

Can't wait to read what you have in store for these girls in the next part!


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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby Zooeys_Bridge » Wed Mar 05, 2008 7:28 pm

F2! This is somuchfun. You sure weren't kidding when you said no techie. It's nice to see Wills try the creative side of Sears once in a while.

Such a joy to read. All Willowisms made me smile, including the "shame I can only use that once..." and "How many waffles is this gonna cost me" line. Really smart stuff.

Although Wills mouth/blabbering seems to be at an all time embarassing high, her coolness factors(including her fashion sense: the cords and the Star Wars T?) have gone way way up. No more Bad Wardrobe for that kitten.

Really really just so much fun to read, even the parts where I was like "Willow. My God. Shut it." But she made it all the more endearing.

And it was fun watching out for little snippets of you in there as well. Jetson, iPhone, and retro galore? Sounds like fun, Katdog.

Mmm, mmm, mmm. Really just a pleasure to sit back and enjoy something on the KB that, for once, doesn't have massive angst. But for that, I suppose I only have myself to blame :P

Can't wait for 8:00!
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby dlline » Wed Mar 05, 2008 7:41 pm

katjetson wrote:Oops! I completed edited this to post the real version and not the "working" version. Boo on me. Sor.

Whew! You had me worried there for a moment.

Kat!

Well, we've been here already today, but I really wanted to comment on all the cool stuff you did , as well as to compliment you on the changes you made.

First, you write the best Willowbabble™ ever. I love all of it. And the little touches of her personality are great. Tripping over the plant, forgetting about Jetson, the ringtone, it's all just steaming heaps of fun.
The excited and goofy look on her dog’s face couldn’t have been more adorable, and Willow lost herself for a moment in his big ole black-and-white moppy-mutness.

Thank you for this. I love the picture of Jetson. He so sounds like Willow's dog (we won't tell Snickers this, agreed?)

So, I just wanted to jump in here in front of everyone and tell you how proud I am of you for what you've done here. It's a fabulous beginning, rich with details and all of the little touches that immediately pull the reader into Willow's head. It's a goofy place, that's for sure, and I'm dying to see what happens next. Thanks for thinking enough of what I had to say to take me seriously. That means so much, so just thanks again.

You totally rock!

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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby taraslove » Wed Mar 05, 2008 9:49 pm

Zooeys_Bridge wrote: "Willow. My God. Shut it."



Hee!


Kat, (shall I tell you again how much I love this fic?) you are so incredibly amazing. I could read the things you write all. day. long. I seriously cannot wait to see more fireworks between those girls. Fa' real.

ps. I knew the kittens would love ma'am-a-ree. It's golden.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby musicmad10 » Thu Mar 06, 2008 9:19 am

Really nice, so far. Looking forward to an update :party
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby Alcy » Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:57 pm

Hiya kat! Woohoo, another sweet ‘lil story to enjoy.
I love Willow writing, it’s almost like I’m reading a bit of myself in Willow (I don’t usually feel that because I’m not scatter-brained, inclined to babble, good with computers or red-headed!) I definitely agree with the literary muse striking at odd times, I often get inspiration in the middle of meetings and am forced to scribble ideas rather discreetly.
“Are you up to no good in lesbo-land again?”

Just like Willow, I love being up to no good in lesbo land!

Okay, I just had to spot another element of myself in Willow…finding it difficult to go out and leave my dogs at home. Their big ‘ole eyes just stare up at you saying ‘how could you leave me here?!’

I love Willow and Tara’s meet, it’s such a classic, the coffee spillage, it never fails to work! I loved her full on babble fest (something I could never identify with, I’m very economic with my words) and I can’t wait for further cuteness to ensue. I’m sure Willow will have more to do than just write about being no good in lesbo-land.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby spells42 » Thu Mar 06, 2008 4:17 pm

Kat
The smile is still lingering on my face, left over from the full on lol your story prompted. I love your Willow babble - it isn't just endless, it's very clever: definite thought progressions showing even if said progress is in a zig-zag not usual for most people. Very Willow.

I loved the line.
No siree, or in your case, m’am-a-ree.


I'm looking forward to more.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby SJ » Sat Mar 08, 2008 2:57 am

Great story.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby JustSkipIt » Sat Mar 08, 2008 10:56 am

Well, it says something about my level of busy-ness that it took me days to finish this update. Really, days. But it's adorable and wonderful. It has a good amount of Willow-babble but not like an insane amount. I love the way they are so instantly attracted to each other. I can't wait for more.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby PolarBear » Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:29 pm

Now I finally had enough time to read your new update in one sitting. Where does all the time go nowadays?

Really amazing job again. You made me laugh so many times, and you write really impressive Willowbabble™. Looking forward for more...

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I was a bad kitten and didn't leave any comments on last two or so updates. Sorry about that, they were great too :)
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby katjetson » Sun Mar 09, 2008 10:42 pm

Hi Kittens,

Just jumping in here for a moment to leave some feedback response.

Also, I wanted to… I dunno, wear my heart on my sleeve here a little? You see, the pooch here in my story; Jetson? He’s mine. And no, I’m not some ego-ick naming my dog after myself. I actually named myself after my dog. So yeah, I bring this up because my dog means the world to me (we’ve been best buds for nearly 10 years), and today I had to bring him to the emergency. He’s been having some sort of seizures, so I guess I’m here being needy or something (desperately wanting to get my mind off of things a little, too) and asking you lovers of pets to silently wish the big guy some good luck for me. I want him to live long in this story, but moreso, live long in my life.

Ain’t trying to bring down the room, just you know… it feels kinda like a family here, ya? Also, I’m here to tell you that I’ve been working on part 2, and hopefully it’ll be just as fun. I like making Buffy loveable, so look for some quality W/B banter. And of course, more coffee/less spill.

In the meantime, I’ve got some feedback love to attend to. Thanks for the ear and shoulder. With hearts, Jetson the Girl.

Paint The Sky: It kinda means everything to me that something that I’ve written can inspire laughter. Also, I’ve actually found myself in Willow’s position once or twice--picking bits of fuzz off of a girl’s sweater in the boobie area. Not a bad place to find your hands. And yes, the m’am-a-ree bit seems to have received a positive, thumbs up response. It’s always the lines that literally fall from your fingtertips that have the most impact. There was no pre-thought to that at all.

wimpy0729: Oh wimpy, it’s true; boobies DO rule! FYI, in the shower, mid-shampoo? That is the exact place bits of this story hit me. I won’t say for sure if the towel fell when I was at the computer typing, but you know… perhaps.

Zooeys_Bridge: F1! With my fun and your angst, we could write some crazy story, huh? It’d be like, the fictional equivalent of PMS.

It's nice to see Wills try the creative side of Sears once in a while.


What you just said right here? Pretty stellar. I’m smiling even reading it for a third time.

And you’re not the only one--I can’t wait for 8:00, too! I’m sure Will won’t shut it, but damn if that’s not part of her charm.

dlline: Really, if you come right (write?) down to it, you’re the reason this story came out better. I wanted to make you proud and show you I’m a good student and took notes (with my mechanical pencil, even!) All the little details were actually fun to write. And really, couldn’t you picture Willow “dancing” with that plant that she knocked into?

Best Willowbabble? YESSA! I almost don’t even know if I should admit that maybe I’m so good at it because I’m just as likely to do a bit of it myself. Still, I think there’s some valid and sincere points in all that wordage of hers. And she’s always just so adorable when she’s stuck in the middle of it.

As for Snickers... I’ll keep it under my hat. Although, you know, he IS a hero!

taraslove:
I could read the things you write all. day. long.
And you do, don’t you? And with all the conversing we do during the day, seems kinda funny leaving feedback response to each other, huh? Still, I love that you do. *

musicmad10: One update coming this week. If nothing else, just so I can look at your cute li’l avatar of Aly’s profile some more.

Alcy: I’m goofily thrilled that you’re here reading my words. F’real. It’s so… neat!

I’m sure Willow will have more to do than just write about being no good in lesbo-land.


Boy, will she! I’ve actually written the “all-good no-good” part of the story. Just working on all the fun getting to that point.

spells42:
I love your Willow babble - it isn't just endless, it's very clever: definite thought progressions showing even if said progress is in a zig-zag not usual for most people.


Wow. That was succinctly put. I literally couldn’t have said it better myself, and wonder if you wouldn’t mind maybe writing a whole bunch of the story for me. I kid, I kid!

Thanks for dropping by. I hope to continue put smiles on faces. That’s some kinda power.

SJ: {{bows}} Hope to make it greater-er!

JustSkipIt: Oh, hey! Thanks for taking the free minutes of your days to read my little bit in little bits. I love the instant attraction, too. I definitely felt it on the show, and really wanted to show that here. I know it’s just a light and airy piece of writing, but there’s a bunch of heart behind it. You know I’m megawatt fan of your words, so it’s super cool to “see” you here.

PolarBear: No worries on the lack o’ feedback (hey, that rhymed!) I’m just happy you’re here and enjoying. Getting a few laughs while you’re at it? Total icing on the cake!
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby taraslove » Mon Mar 10, 2008 4:55 am

You know, I just can't help but send my Jetson well-wishes again.

I just want him to be okay so much.

Hang in there, kay?

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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby Zooeys_Bridge » Mon Mar 10, 2008 5:29 am

I'm sending happy healthy waves west-ward. Here's to a long lasting Jetson life!

My sister had some nasty seizures when she was little, so if the stubborn irritant little sucker can do it, so can your pup.

*huggage*
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby SJ » Tue Mar 11, 2008 2:05 am

Sending get well wishes to Jestson!
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 05 Mar 2008)

Postby MsKittyB » Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:09 pm

I hope Jatson is going to be okay. SO my best wishes go to him.

I'm really loving your new fic too. I dont know why but every since I've read this fic I cant stop saying boobs? Yes, I am weird. :lol Cant wait for your next update :D
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 15 Mar 2008)

Postby katjetson » Sat Mar 15, 2008 6:31 pm

Hi all.

One last bit of feedback and away we go with And Away We Go! pt. 2.

MsKittyB: So nice to see you here. If it makes you feel better, I can't stop saying "boobs" no matter what!" (Probably Wimpy, too!) It's a titsease, I'm telling ya! ;)

ALL: Truly and sincerely, thank you for your well wishes here (and in PM) for my pooch. He's ... ah, it's still not good, but we're doing all we can. And when stuff we can't explain isn't going on, he's a completely happy and smiley dog. Thanks for Jetson hugs!

---

All the disclaimer stuff is the same.

Pt. 2 Rating: Hmm... PG-13 to R? I guess?
Pt. 2 Summary: Buffy eats Willow's food. Willow and Tara get crazy from the heat. Kat hates writing summaries/love talking mammaries.
Note 1: Thanks again to Diane for ch-ch-checkin' it out, and pointing out all my POV foul-ups. I left a few wrong ones in there, but that's cause I didn't want any of you to thinking I was perfect. Hee.
Note 2: Jude: I'm being good. *


And Away We Go! (part 2)

Willow stared absently as Buffy reached over to jam her fork into the last bit of Willow’s pancake, swirling the buttermilk goodness through a puddle of syrup before popping it into her mouth. “Yum.”

“No, go right ahead.” Willow pushed her plate towards the human food receptacle that was Buffy and continued with her good-natured confrontation. “Really. It’s not like I wanted that last bite for myself. Or, for that matter, any of the other food on my plate.”

“The way I see it,” the blonde challenged, defiantly poking the food-less fork in Willow’s direction, “you owe me. Making a growing girl wait for breakfast like that…”

“Buff, you’re 28. So, unless you have some super powers, other than your uncanny ability to interrupt well… just about everything at extremely inappropriate times, you’re not growing anymore.”

Buffy waved off the friendly jab, and decided instead to venture onto an entirely new conversational path. “Will, what is it that goes through that smut-filled brain of yours all day long? Does it go something like ‘boobies, boobies, boobies, and oh, while we’re at it, I’ll take a side of boobies?’”

Willow rested one arm on the gold-flecked Formica table and leaned in close to her best friend. She peeked incognito-like over each shoulder, checking to make certain no 12 year olds or grandmas were listening. “Actually, Buff,” she said with a sly whisper and a wicked gleam in her eyes, “I like the word ‘tits,’ better, but you know…”

“That’s twice today I’ll go with the not knowing.”

Willow laughed softly as she leaned back into the booth. She took great pride in verbally disarming her friend with sexual bluntness. It was definitely one of the perks of her ‘job.’ “Sorry, it’s just I had a major writer’s block breakthrough this morning, and I’m kind of immersed in all things girlie.”

“Must be tough, huh?” Buffy picked up her coffee mug and swirled the remaining contents before downing it one gulp, making an “ick” face as the lukewarm liquid washed down the last bits of breakfast. “I haven’t decided yet if that query is laced with sarcasm.”

“Either way, the answer is still, strangely enough, yes. You wouldn’t believe how difficult it is to write about all those body parts I love!”

“Oh, I get it! It’d be like me struggling to write beauty tips. I mean, just look at me – I’m a total dish!”

Willow crumpled up her napkin and playfully tossed it at her friend. “Seriously, Buff. At least for a minute. I kinda bumped into someone and I can’t stop thinking about her.”

Buffy’s eyes lit up like a Christmas tree. It had been months since her friend even mentioned someone other than one of her fictional girls. “That’s great Will! I’m so happy for you!” Her friend excitedly rubbed her hands together, in anticipation of the scoop. “So, bumped into where? Like, at like a club or …”

“Actually, more like literally bumped into someone.” Willow smacked her hands together in the air. “I crashed, boomed, spilled, stumbled, inappropriately groped, babbled…”

“Oh.” Buffy scrunched up her nose a little. “You really did all that? You know, that might be a Willow record.”

“See, that’s what I said to her, too!”

“Wait, she actually wanted to speak to you after all that!?”

“Even better.” A wide and excited grin played over Willow’s lightly-freckled face. “We’re going out for coffee tomorrow night. And Buff? She’s gorgeous and sweet and sexy and I think… that is, if I haven’t busted the hard drive on my gaydar, she might have even been flirting with me.” Thoughts and images of this morning’s exchange with the-girl-down-the-hall began to deliciously invade Willow’s brain. “One thing’s for certain, she was definitely checking out my ass.”

“Well, even a breeder like the Buffster can appreciate the perfection that is your firm little toosh.”

“Aww, thanks. You’ve got a cute ass, too. Not that I ever really, uh…. looked, and can we please go back to talking about less-confusing Tara-things?”

“Sure,” Buffy shrugged her shoulders. “I guess. But whenever you want to return to the topic of my fine ass, just say the word.”

“Buff…” Willow folded her arms and gave an exasperated sigh, “seriously. I need help.”

“Sorry, you’re right. Girl-to-girl-on, uh –girl talk. Will, you just have to get back out there. I know your last relationship sucked.”

“Yeah, sucked like a vampire! Seriously, Tracy was fucking every woman in Los Angeles with the exception of me! And you know how I totally blow it when it comes to simple conversation with someone I want to have lots of mind-blowing sex with.”

“Will, you’re talking about number 112 on the list, and you’re at like, number seven. I say coffee--maybe in a sippy cup for your sake--and mega doses of that Willow charm.”

“Yeah, but what if I…”

“Give her a chance, Will. She obviously knows a sweet ass when she sees one, and that’s like, 75% of the equation right there, right?”

“Buff?”

“Yeah?”

“I love you.”

“I know.”

If Willow was the betting kind, she’d place it all on black that Buffy wasn’t about to leave it at that.

“Will?”

“Yeah?”

(Here it comes.)

“Enough to buy me dinner next week?”

(Oh, Buffy…)

Willow shook her head and smiled, “And the week after that…”

---

“I know we’re in sunny California and all, but this is pushing Mother Nature’s legal limits of hell on Earth.” The triple-digit heat was getting the best of Willow and she simply couldn’t contain her internal diatribe. “Stupid sun; showing off with all its blazey sunbeams! And look at you, poor freckly skin of mine, you just don’t stand a chance. I can almost hear the sun beating down on you with a crackling fury. Do you hear that freckles? It’s the maniacal laughter of that fireball in the sky.”

Even with her skin on high alert, there was just no way Willow was gonna layer up for protection. She would just have to take the chance. Besides, “red” jokes were nothing new.

Wearing only a pair of short, jean cut-offs and a tight, ribbed tank top, Willow walked towards her scooter and plunked down on the curb outside her apartment. She carefully placed the ice-cold Corona on the grass and reached for her ratchet set. “Now what’s wrong with you?!”

She removed the cowl in order to get a look at the Vespa’s little two-stroke engine and found nothing glaringly wrong. Brushing a few strands of hair away from her glistening-with-perspiration face, she fiddled with some of the wires and grabbed for the rag behind her. When she looked up, her eyes made it only as far as the black heels walking her way and she caught herself audibly gulping. Her gaze followed upward until the figure stopped right in front of her.

(Look at all. those. legs!)

“You’re dirty.”

Willow shaded her eyes with one hand and looked up to see (the rest of) Tara, who was wearing, quite possibly, the shortest mini-skirt known to Victoria Beckham and a very low cut, very see-through white, button down blouse.

“Well, I’ve definitely had my fair share of naughty and illicit thoughts, but I wouldn’t go so far as to call myself dirty. I mean, when you say it like that it sounds…”

“Your face… Grease?” Tara leaned over and didn’t wet her thumb so much as she full-on sucked the digit into her mouth. “Here, let me.”

At the feel of Tara’s moist digit brushing the side of her cheek, Willow unconsciously let her eyes fall shut and leaned into the touch; effectively rubbing the side of her face against the blonde’s hand. The needy reaction was not lost on Tara and a knowing smile played over her face. Once Willow’s eyes fluttered open, her gaze went directly to the perfect view of Tara tits.

“Something of interest down there?” the blonde said with a smirk. Tara called her on it, and Willow was completely, uh… busted.

“Erm,” the redhead squeaked, “well… you see, this actually might be one of those times where ‘you’re dirty’ would work.”

“Do you like them?”

Willow was still inappropriately staring at the bountiful bosom in front of her and began licking her lips. “God yes! I mean…” her eyes darted up and looked pleadingly into pools of blue. “I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to stare.”

“Yes you did.”

“Huh?”

“Will,” Tara stood upright and placed her hands on her hips, “what’s going on here?”

“Oh, well you see, Moxie here… that’s what I call my Vespa… It means ‘the ability to face problems with spirit.’ Neat, huh? Anyhow, she’s being a temperamental little lady and won’t start so I’m switching out the old spark plug to see if she’ll fire up. If not, I might have to take a look at the magneto and…”

“Will?”

“Yeah?”

“That’s not what I meant and you know it.” Tara moved close and took one of Willow’s hands in her hers--rubbing small circles into her palm and playfully running along the length of her fingers.

“Oh. It’s the babble, isn’t it? It’s always the babble. I know it’s distracting and all but…”

“Actually, I haven’t heard a word of what you've said.”

“You haven’t?”

“Not at all.” Willow’s eyes grew impossibly wide as the nearness of Tara was becoming increasingly difficult to ignore. She found that her nose was scant inches away from the blonde’s pussy and allowed herself a moment to inhale the hot sweetness. When she looked up she saw Tara’s eyes, darkened with lust, gazing down at her. “Actually, I wasn’t listening because all I can think about are those hands of yours fucking me.”

“Wake me up before you go-go, don’t leave me hanging on like a yo-yo…”

“Muther-effer!” Willow reached for her iPhone and frantically turned off the morning alarm. She was seriously considering throwing it against the wall--if only the thing hadn’t cost her half a month’s rent. “I hate you Wham, exclamation point!”

As bits and pieces of her dream came charging back to her, Willow found herself getting entirely freaked about her date tonight with Tara. “Please don’t wear a skirt, please don’t wear a skirt… No wait, what am I saying? Of course I want you to wear a skirt. I mean, I think I want you to.”

She sat up and looked over at her dog laying on the edge of the bed; seeking out a second opinion. “Jetson, what do you think?” The pooch perked up at the sound of his name and then groaned when he didn’t hear the words, ‘walk’ or ‘eat.’ “Could your mommy even handle her wearing a skirt?” Willow didn’t wait for an answer and instead, with an exasperated sigh, threw herself back onto the bed and let the image flood her.
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 15 Mar 2008)

Postby Zampsa1975 » Sat Mar 15, 2008 6:52 pm

Yay for great update-y goodness... Liked the Dirty Willow part... Next time a smutty date update-y goodness?

I really hope Jetson will be alright...
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 15 Mar 2008)

Postby FiestySunnBust » Sat Mar 15, 2008 7:28 pm

I'm enjoying your story greatly. Thanks for sharing.

But I also wanted to comment on Jetson. I know what it's like to care for a dog so much, you'd go into debt for their welfare. Been there, still paying that. You both are in my thoughts and prayers.

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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 15 Mar 2008)

Postby dlline » Sat Mar 15, 2008 7:45 pm

Wearing only a pair of short, jean cut-offs and a tight, ribbed tank top...

I'll be back to leave proper feedback later, but I just had to take a moment to express the profound joy and happiness it brought me to think of Willow in Daisy Dukes.

Thank you.

ETA: Well, it took me a couple of days, but lots has been happening. First, and I know I've already told you this, I'm so sorry about Jetson. I'm not good at words when beloved pets are lost, so I'm sorry will have to suffice.

Second, this story totally rocks. I love dream sequences. They're lots of fun to play with. I love your version of Willow, but you know that I have a soft spot for Horndog Willow in whatever version she appears. I always saw her on the show that way, so it's fun to keep playing with that.

Lastly, you know I love the details that you include. The gold-flecked table, the scorching hot sun and its effects on fair-skinned women, Willow in Daisy Dukes (I know, I said that already, but...), all of it is great. Again, thanks for allowing me into your world. It's a really cool place.

Keep up the great work,
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 15 Mar 2008)

Postby spells42 » Sun Mar 16, 2008 3:48 am

Kat
That was going so well... too well, really. I knew it had to be a dream, it was too perfect. Loving the story.

Hope your pooch is getting better.

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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 15 Mar 2008)

Postby musicmad10 » Sun Mar 16, 2008 5:17 am

Very good update. Lots of comedy moments :party

I really like the interaction between Buffy and Willow, it's cute and funny at the same time. Good work :peace
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Re: Short Story Thread - katjetson (updated 15 Mar 2008)

Postby wimpy0729 » Sun Mar 16, 2008 9:42 am

Hey Kat!

Oh Yay, another lovely update. But man, you got me with that dream. Damnit!

“Will, what is it that goes through that smut-filled brain of yours all day long? Does it go something like ‘boobies, boobies, boobies, and oh, while we’re at it, I’ll take a side of boobies?’”


You totally cracked me up here, because this is what it's like in my head the majority of the time. And Willow so got her back with her preference of the word "tits". Oh, now that does sound dirty, and very hot.

Okay, I'm waiting patiently (not) for the NC17 stuff. But I love how you're building up to the moment.

Good wishes and hugs your way!


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