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Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 5)

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Fri Mar 07, 2003 3:58 pm

Chris:



Things I so like about this fic:



*The setting of time and place: Early 20th century NYC provides a great atmosphere to explore character and motives. Afterall so many things we take for granted were "new-fangled" and mysterious - one could believe ANYTHING is possible (the natural seemed supernatural...what did that make the truly supernatural?).:glasses



*Willow as Imperfect Hero: Just as in "Lullaby" you really capture Willow's strength and integrity (and charm). Here her anguish over past actions and quest for redemption - as well as her belief that she deserves her isolation - is simply heart-rending. The trust she places in Tara could have felt premature but the way you handled it made it seem totally natural and authentic.:cry



*Tara in every way!: A musically-inclined Tara is a truly wonderful Tara...anything that reminds me of A.B.'s moving voice in OMWF is all to the good!:clap And your portrayal of her determination and courage is...well...thrilling!



*Finally - "The Shadow" homage: If that's what it is? I'm a total sucker for old-time radio...even have a few on tape from past road trips. This aspect brings back great memories!:)



Hope I haven't bored or exhausted you. I just wanted to let you know how much I sincerely dig this fic.



TY!^^^Suse

Edited by: Cindy Lou Who at: 3/7/03 2:04:04 pm
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Re: FIC: Shadows

Postby Artemis » Fri Mar 07, 2003 11:13 pm

Thanks all :)



justin: One of the things I had in mind when I was working out how the story should move was that the adventure and romance sides of it should be in synch, and peak at the same point.



Stroke of Luck: Yeah, well, doesn't the phone always ring at the most inconvenient time? I know mine always used to.



AntigoneUnbound: You give wonderful feedback, you know? If you're technophobic, though... eek, the next story I'm working on (called just 'TARA') might be a challenge. I'm glad you're enjoying the way I write - I've spent a lot of time over the past few years doing Warhammer adventure/romances, I guess I've found a rhythm that works without me having to think about it too much.



It was around about chapter 3 that I realised I needed to get inside Willow's head as well, in order to show that she *is* Willow, and not the Shadow persona. As it turned out, it became conveinent to alternate between following Willow and Tara through the rest of the story. And overall you've done a more coherent analysis than I did when I was writing this :)



The name Artemis is a long-running reference, that saves me having to be plain old Chris Cook. Originally I acquired it from Xena (the patron goddess of the amazons), then I used it in my Warhammer stories, then I kept using it *because* I'd used it in my Warhammer stories, and now I just keep it because, well, she's my kind of goddess, the Lara Croft of the Greek pantheon. I figured when I signed on here that my other frequent alias - Miss Kitty Fantastico - would probably have been taken already.



xita: I was a bit concerned about pushing the romance that quickly. But I guess I'm impatient :) I've got a vague idea for a long, detailed romance storyline (on Arrakis, of all places), but I won't be attempting that for some time.



Cindy Lou Who: It is indeed a direct homage to The Shadow. I like listening to the old radio plays (even the advertisements they play during them have a sort of nostalgic charm), and I actually thought the movie was decent, albeit needing more polishing. I think I mentioned this somewhere before: the idea of Tara as a singer was what started me on this story - the inspiration wasn't so much Willow as The Shadow as it was Tara as Margot Lane (but much better). And feedback is never boring or exhausting :)

Artemis
 


FIC: Shadows (chapter 6)

Postby Artemis » Fri Mar 07, 2003 11:15 pm

Shadows



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG-13 (mild violence)

Summary: New York, 1935. Who knows what evil lurks in the hearts of men? Nightclub singer Tara Maclay is about to find out.

Spoilers: Technically none, as this is thoroughly Alternate Universe. However, some events from the background of the characters are present, in altered form, so for safety's sake let's say a handful of things up to and including season six of 'Buffy' may be obliquely referred to in some form.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'The Shadow', created by Walter B. Gibson. Song lyrics are from 'Perfectly Happy' by Alisha's Attic, and 'It's Only Love' and 'What a Feeling' by Heather Nova. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Six

--



An unseasonal fog had moved over the city with the nightfall, and now held the sky firmly in its grasp. Willow frowned. The airfield a hundred metres away was a sea of landing lights, each one creating a sphere of yellow light in the gloom. She raised a pair of binoculars and scanned the ground once more, then hurried back to her car. Tara leaned out of the window.



"It's pretty thick," she said quietly, looking at the hazy silhouettes of the buildings beyond the field, "do you think they got diverted?"



"They're coming," Willow answered, "there's a pair of cars parked beside the big hangar, waiting. I saw someone get out and go into the hangar, then come back out. He probably called the tower to check the flight's progress. They haven't moved since then."



On the tail of her words a soft drone echoed through the air. Willow raised her binoculars again and scanned the sky. There was a faint glow in the clouds to the east.



"Here it is," she whispered to herself. She bent down and leaned through the car window. "Okay now, like we decided. Stay in the car."



"Of course," Tara said. Willow nodded, caught herself, and gave a mock-exasperated sigh.



"And keep the car out of trouble," she added. "I'll do fine."



Tara leaned across and brushed her cheek softly against Willow's masked face.



"See that you do," she said tenderly. "But if you do get in trouble-" she persisted.



"Alright," said Willow with a wink, "if I get in trouble, you have my permission to rescue me. Carefully!"



"As if you could stop me."



Willow stepped back from the car, waved a salute, and vanished in the fog.



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The moving glow in the sky resolved itself slowly into the landing lights of a passenger plane, steadily descending as it crossed the bay, nearing the strip of illuminated tarmac. The aircraft dipped lower as it crossed the shoreline, skimming the short stretch of grassland beyond the strip. Its twin engines droned louder as it tilted its nose into the air, all flaps down, and with a final lurch its wheels touched the ground, screeched, spun, and held as the plane taxied to the end of the field. The cars lurking in the shadow of the main hangar moved out to meet it as it turned slowly around and stopped level with the building. A pair of ground crew in dirty overalls pushed a set of steps up to the rear door of the plane as the cars drew to a halt.



The door was swung outwards by a flight attendant, who quickly vanished back inside. For a moment light from inside the plane spilled out, until a hulking silhouette blocked it. The man who descended the steps and walked slowly towards the two waiting cars was a giant, over two metres tall, broad across the shoulders, with a square face set in a permanent frown. The wash from the plane's idling engines rippled his short white hair and tugged at the edge of his suit jacket, but he seemed oblivious to it. A second man, dressed in a similarly expensive suit but of far less intimidating proportions, and with an air of subservience to him, descended from the plane carrying a briefcase, and fell in behind his master.



Two men, impeccably dressed but quite visibly chosen for their brute strength, got out of the lead car and stood waiting for their guest as he approached. They both took a step back to allow him to walk between them. A third suited muscleman got out of the back of the second car and held the door open for its other passenger.



She was tall, made taller by a pair of white high heels, and she held herself in the posture of a queen deigning to meet a commoner. She wore a long coat, lined with grey wolf fur, which flapped in the wind from the propellers, revealing glimpses of a skin-tight white dress beneath, covering her from neck to ankle. Her hair was blonde, so pale as to look silver, tied tightly behind her head. She stalked slowly towards the man waiting for her, and stood her ground proudly in front of him, almost matching his height.



"Lord Westen," she said in a clear, exact accent. She held out a white-gloved hand, palm down. The big man stirred, then slowly knelt and took her hand.



"My Lady," he answered in a formal tone, brushing his lips on her hand.



"You have the items I require?" she said as Westen got back to his feet. He nodded, and waved a hand to his servant, who stepped forward. One of the lady's men took a step closer to him, watching like a hawk. The servant held up the briefcase, facing Westen, and opened it. He reached inside.



"The Disquisitionum Magicarum," he said, producing a battered old leather-bound book, "and the Shard Wyrm blade," he went on, drawing from the case a dagger, its smooth silver blade mounted on a handle of flowing gold set with glittering jewels. He held the two items out, the dagger with its hilt facing the lady. She glanced at them, then nodded to the man who had held the car door for her. He took the book and the blade from Westen and handed them to a man in the car's front passenger seat.



"And your preparations, my Lady," said Westen, "are they complete?" The lady frowned, her icy blue eyes narrowing to slits.



"My preparations are well in hand," she snapped, "as if it is any of your business."



"It is my business," said Westen calmly, squaring his shoulders. "You have pledged a great many things in return for my services, and I am told you have failed to yet secure the crucial element for your ritual. If you should prove unable to fulfil your promises-"



"I will pay my debt to you in full," the lady said calmly, in a voice that chilled the air, "and as such I am under no obligation to endure your insolence. It may be some small amount of time before I can undertake the ritual, but be assured," she took a step closer, staring directly into Westen’s eyes, "even now I am beyond your reach. If, in spite of the services you have rendered me, I should feel that your conduct is unworthy, I would not hesitate to still the beating of your heart in a second."



The two remained still for a moment, their stares locked in mutual hostility. Then the lady turned, her attention suddenly elsewhere. Westen almost flinched, but caught himself when he saw the lady glare at her closest guard.



"We are not alone," she said quickly, "deal with it."



The guard nodded to his two companions, and all three drew flashlights and pistols from their jackets. They encircled the lady, and holding their lights and guns together they swept the ground around them. One spot of light flickered for a moment, but when the guard pulled his trigger the bullet ricocheted harmlessly off the tarmac. The guards moved as one, keeping their perimeter around the lady as she returned to her car, leaving Westen and his servant standing alone. The lady stopped with one hand on her car door, and turned to the leading guard.



"Kill her," she hissed. Then she held a hand up above her, and fixed Westen with a determined stare.



"Let there be light," she said calmly. From her hand a spark of pure daylight shot into the air. It rose far above the group of people until it burst, thirty metres straight up, into a coruscating ball of silver light that lit the airfield like a miniature sun. The lady ducked into her car and closed the door behind her as her three guards spread out.



"There!" one barked. Near the plane's steps a shadow was being cast on the tarmac by the brilliant light, marking the invisible watcher. It flitted away as all three guards opened fire. Westen and his servant, who had turned to board their plane, both ducked under the wing, Westen glaring at the lady's guards, the servant’s gaze darting around in panic. The lady's car started and drove calmly away from the gunfire. Two of the guards kept up their fire on the fast-moving shadow as it darted away from the plane towards the hangars. The third holstered his pistol and reached inside the second car, emerging again with a machine gun. He turned and levelled the weapon at the retreating shadow.



The shape on the ground fell flat as a hail of bullets whizzed above it at chest level. Willow appeared, rolling sideways as a second burst of fire struck the ground where she had dropped. Coming to rest on her back, her hand emerged from her coat holding a slim weapon from which flicked the twin vanes of a pistol crossbow. She fired the dart at the guards, vanishing again as it exploded in a cloud of dense smoke. The man with the machine gun fired through the smoke, missing Willow by metres. The other two jumped back into the open doors of their car, slamming them closed as the vehicle lurched into gear. Willow made herself vanish again as the car burst through the smoke. Her shadow darted from side to side as the guards leaned out of the car windows with reloaded pistols and fired at her. The car sped up, chasing her down. Faster than the driver could react to, the shadow changed direction, coming directly for the car. The guard leaning from the left window fired once, the bullet clanging off something in the far distance, before the car was almost on top of the shade. Willow emerged from her invisibility again, rolling sideways and kicking upwards as the car missed her by inches. The guard screamed as her boot smashed into his wrist, aided by the speed his vehicle was moving at.



Willow rolled to her feet as the car screeched around behind her, her gaze darting around. The glowing orb in the sky was starting to lose its brilliance, and the edge of the night was creeping slowly closer. A hundred metres away were the hangars, swathed in darkness, but with the guards' car in between her and them. Willow mentally tossed a coin, between trying to reach the darkness in open ground, or dodge the car and make it to the hangar, as the guards righted their spinning vehicle and accelerated towards her. She was about to vanish again when the roar of a second engine came echoing across the airfield. Willow broke into a sprint as her own car crashed through the wire fence surrounding the field and sped towards her.



Tara shot a look of equal parts relief and desperation at Willow as she leapt through the open passenger door and yanked it closed behind her. Willow elbowed the lever to open the window, reaching her other arm into the folds of her coat to find another crossbow bolt.



"You call this a careful rescue?" she yelled above the engine noise as Tara swerved out of the way of the oncoming car. She snapped a new bolt home into the crossbow and balanced the weapon against the open window.



"You call that doing fine?" retorted Tara. Willow fired the crossbow, then lost her grip on her seat as Tara spun the wheel. As the enemy vehicle swerved to escape the cloud of smoke that threatened to envelop it, Willow found herself lying stunned in Tara's lap. Tara pulled the wheel hard, straightening the car's flight, then found a moment to glance down at Willow.



"I'm not sure this is the best time for snuggles," she said evenly.



"Vixen," answered Willow, pulling herself upright. The other car was behind them again, and bullets were ricocheting off the rear window, which was beginning to crack alarmingly under the impacts.



"Ideas?" asked Tara, swerving from side to side.



"Hangar!" called Willow, twisting around to get at the back seat. Beneath it was a treasure trove of interesting weapons. Tara shrugged and steered the car towards the open front of the nearest hangar, with their pursuers right behind. As they were plunged into darkness beneath the hangar's roof, Willow looked up, startled.



"I meant go around the hangar!" she protested.



"This works too," said Tara, concentrating on seeing where she was going. A shape loomed out of the darkness at her, and she pulled the car around in a skidding turn, narrowly missing a parked biplane. She ignored the resounding crash as their pursuers took its wing off trying to follow her. Running parallel to the back wall, she looked for an opening between parked planes that would lead back out to the front. She spotted a gap and jerked hard on the wheel, scraping paint off both sides of the car as it clipped the wings of planes on one side and then the other.



"Who taught you to drive?" protested Willow, landing back in her seat with a thump, cradling a long steel crossbow loaded with a bulbous-tipped dart.



"Oh, you know," said Tara with forced nonchalance, "Keystone Kops movies." They shot back out into the night, followed by the other car, its bonnet battered by impacts.



"Go along the runway," Willow said, "give me five seconds without turning!" Tara nodded and steered the car onto the stretch of tarmac. She glanced over at Willow, who was leaning half out of her window, aiming at their pursuers.



"Come on," she muttered to herself, laying her head down against her shoulder, sighting along the barrel of the crossbow. Tara looked back at the other car, which was gaining on them, then ahead.



"Willow," she said, with a note of warning.



"Steady!" shouted back Willow. She lined up the other car, made a hasty guess at elevation, and eased her finger towards the trigger.



"Willow!" shouted Tara again, in rising panic.



Willow fired. For a moment she remained perfectly calm, ignoring the wind whipping at her hair and the bullets smacking holes in the tarmac behind her. She watched the bolt fly straight and true through the air, land on the bonnet of the other car, and splatter thick black paint over their entire windshield.



"Do not shoot at my girlfriend!" she yelled in triumph.



"Willow!"



"What?" Willow was about to turn when the tail of the DC3 flashed by her, going backwards. She bolted back into her seat to see the rest of the plane, taxiing along the runway, directly ahead of them.



"Turn!" she and Tara both yelled. Willow grabbed the wheel and hauled on it at the same time as Tara, their combined force jamming the car's steering as far as it would go. The car made a rapid right turn on two wheels directly behind the spinning propeller, scraped its roof on the underside of the fuselage, and shot out from underneath into clear space on the other side. Both of them looked back, between shock and amazement, to see their pursuers skid towards the plane, unable to see where they were going. The man leaning out of the side window sent one last burst of gunfire towards them before he turned and saw the plane's wing rushing towards him. He yelled at the driver, who veered away to the left, but too late. The propeller clipped the car's roof, its tip digging into the metal like a knife in butter, flipping the vehicle off its wheels. The man leaning out was thrown to the ground as the car rolled in the air above him, crashing down on his other side and coming to a slow, grinding halt a few metres further on.



"That was-" Tara began slowly, steering the car across the stretch of grass separating the airstrip from the far gate.



"Pretty cool," finished Willow, tossing the crossbow to the back seat.



"I was going to say 'close'," said Tara. Willow shot her a sly grin.



"Nah," she retorted, "happens to me all the time." She took off her hat and mask and let her hair down.



"Willow," said Tara after a moment.



"Hmm?"



"What y-you... I... girlfriend?" she blurted out at last. Willow looked blank for a moment, then her eyes widened.



"Oh, no, I mean," she said quickly, starting to lean towards Tara but stopping herself, "I didn't mean it like that, I, no wait, I don't mean that I wouldn't, if you wanted, I mean that's what I thought a little after, you know, before, at the house. But I didn't mean it as if I'm just deciding it for you, or anything, it's up to you totally, I just- well you know, heat of the moment, and plus I was kind of worried that whole time about you, not that you were doing anything wrong, you were great! Real hero stuff. And I just sort of said it without thinking, cause you know, them being bad guys, and me being the crime-fighter and protecting you and all. 'Cause we protector-of-the-innocent people have to do that, you know, say something punchy after we save the day, I think it's a rule or something." She glanced at Tara with a hopeful smile.



"But," she went on, "I don't mean I was just saying it. 'Cause I wasn't, I meant it. Not in a claiming-you-as-my-own sense, y'know, just, if you wanted to, then... I do." Tara pulled the car over to the side of the road and stopped the engine. Silence reigned for a moment.



"Y-you do?" she said at last. Willow nodded quickly. Tara turned to her and tried to speak, but couldn't find her voice.



"If you want to," Willow said, trying to fill the silence. "I mean, if not, it's okay, I promise not to be all broody night stalker or anything-" Tara gave up trying to find her voice, and just grabbed Willow's shoulders and pulled her into a full, passionate and very long kiss instead.



It was only several minutes later, when police sirens echoed down the empty streets from the direction of the airfield, that the car pulled slowly back onto the road and headed home.



Artemis
 


Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 6)

Postby justin » Sat Mar 08, 2003 5:35 am

Wow, that was some update.



You said you want to keep a balance between the action and romance. IMO you're doing that really well.



I loved it when Willow shouted "Do not shoot at my girlfriend."



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


justin
 


Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 6)

Postby Stroke of Luck » Sat Mar 08, 2003 5:48 am

:cry Ahhhh they did it :cry



Ups sorry i meen the kiss:p

Great great:love



And a lot of action! So Tara is the "Shadows" partner?! I meen her action partner okay and more!!:glasses



That was nice thanks for sharing Artemis:bigkiss



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



Man sieht nur mit dem Herzen gut, das Wesentliche ist für die Augen unsichtbar - Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 6)

Postby Puff » Sat Mar 08, 2003 10:14 am

Lots of action in that update and the mysterious woman as well who wants Willow dead. Loved the update it was very cool.



Grapes. Because who can get a melon in their mouth?

Puff
 


Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 6)

Postby funkyasian » Sat Mar 08, 2003 1:49 pm

now that was an action packed update...wow...the romance and adrenalin rush of being chased by gun fire...then kiss the damsel in distress...i'm all starry-eyed for the romance of old action classics now...



~steph

Nothing can cure the soul but the senses, just as nothing can cure the senses but the soul. ~ Oscar Wilde

funkyasian
 


Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 6)

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Sat Mar 08, 2003 3:13 pm

Chris:



This just gets better and better! All with the heart-thumping action and romance and...humor to boot!
Quote:
"Okay now, like we decided. Stay in the car."

"Of course," Tara said. Willow nodded, caught herself, and gave a mock-exasperated sigh.

"And keep the car out of trouble," she added.
And the exchange about "You call that being careful?" "You call that doing fine?" Hoot I say!:rofl



I meant to mention this before: Your "historical accuracy" (woo-woo what a high concept!) is stunning. Do you make a practice of doing exhaustive research or are you the quintessential example of a "walking encyclopedia?" I find this true of all your writing (that I've sampled anyway).



I can't wait to learn more about the identity and motives of the woman in white. I was worried that there might be some tie to her and the caring woman who helped Willow during her recovery from darkness. That would've been just too sad. But whoever she is methinks she's uptanogood.:paranoid (Yup - feel free to call me "Queen of Statements of the Obvious!)



Thanks for the updates! ^^^Suse

Edited by: Cindy Lou Who at: 3/8/03 1:17:07 pm
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Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 6)

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Sat Mar 08, 2003 6:49 pm

Artemis--I certainly loved the action of this chapter, but what I enjoyed even more was the interplay b/w Willow and Tara. Their exchanges, under heat of battle, were priceless. "You call that a careful rescue?" "You call that doing fine?" And Tara, driving through the hangar, as opposed to what Willow had in mind--all of those touches were really enjoyable. And finally, after all the hub-bub had dimmed, Tara asking (albeit none too eloquently!) if she were really Willow's girlfriend--that was a great way to end the chapter.



I'm really enjoying this, Artemis.



Mary

AntigoneUnbound
 


Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 6)

Postby TemperedCynic » Sun Mar 09, 2003 1:14 am

This update was gripping, with action to rival any Buffy episode for excitement. Mixing the light moments with the action was handled deftly, and btw, Lamont Cranston and Margo Lane were never this good at deadpan humor. "The Shadow" radio program was the most atmospheric and compelling of its time, and you have rivaled the great episodes of the past. I'm so waiting for Willow to use the menacing "Shadow"-voice, and whether the listener can tell if the speaker is male or female, we'll have to wait and see. Willow's "Shadow" uses intellegence rather than brute strength, and using black paint is more creative than a Tommy gun. I'm hoping to hear more about this era in history -Tara's Keystone Kops reference had me rolling! :rofl Update soon, and thank you for a rollicking AU fic.


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

TemperedCynic
 


Re: FIC: Shadows

Postby Artemis » Sun Mar 09, 2003 11:14 pm

Thanks all :)



justin: That line of Willow's was written purely in character, but when I came to re-read it... yep, that's probably my subconscious emphatically making a point.



Stroke of Luck: Yup, they did it. And now they're going to go off and do it some more :) And yes, Tara's a bit of an action girl. I like stories where Tara gets to kick butt a bit. I'm planning some action-y stuff for 'TARA' at the moment, and loving it. (And while I think of it: what does your signature mean? It's been too long since I spoke German.)



Puff: I like doing action scenes. I imagine a lot of what I write in a very visual manner, so it tends to translate well.



funkyasian: I like old-style 'serial' adventure stories, the kind that Indiana Jones and Star Wars imitated. I'm just not sure which one of them was the damsel in distress :)



Cindy Lou Who: That 'being careful - doing fine' exchange occurred to me while I was writing Willow and Tara's pre-battle lines, so I made sure I set it up properly. As for accuracy... I may be getting lucky, or just faking it convincingly. I'm not exactly a walking encyclopedia (well, if the topic is Star Trek I am, but not about New York 1930s), and my 'research' consisted entirely of having watched The Sting and Chicago many, many times. Oh, and an early draft of Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom let me know that DC3s were in use at the time.



About the woman in white - no, she's not anyone from Willow's (or Tara's) past. I've been tempted at times, but mostly I try to avoid introducing background for a character just in time to use it. Not that it has any bearing on the story, but the woman who helped Willow recover from her dark magic experience was The Girl from The Dumas Club (the book at the centre of Willow's library is The Nine Gates). It's really not important to the story, it's just me throwing in obscure references to amuse myself.



AntigoneUnbound: I felt it was important to lighten the mood of the chase scene, at least from Willow and Tara's point of view, I'm glad you enjoyed it.



TemperedCynic: Oops, I forgot the voice :) Willow's version of the 'Shadow voice' is the 'chilling whisper' she used in the first chapter, I suppose. That's one of the areas where she's more Willow than The Shadow, I don't imagine she does the terrifying her victims thing to the extent that The Shadow did. Her arsenal of crossbow-mounted weapons came about more or less by accident - she needed something to defend herself with, and I couldn't reconcile Willow's belief in not killing people with the Shadow's twin automatics. Crossbows seemed a goot compromise (and a Buffy reference), and they let you fit all sorts of interesting things to the bolts. I can't really promise much more in the way of 30s-era references - Keystone Kops is about as much as I know :)

Artemis
 


FIC: Shadows (chapter 7)

Postby Artemis » Sun Mar 09, 2003 11:16 pm

Shadows



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG-13 (mild violence)

Summary: New York, 1935. Who knows what evil lurks in the hearts of men? Nightclub singer Tara Maclay is about to find out.

Spoilers: Technically none, as this is thoroughly Alternate Universe. However, some events from the background of the characters are present, in altered form, so for safety's sake let's say a handful of things up to and including season six of 'Buffy' may be obliquely referred to in some form.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'The Shadow', created by Walter B. Gibson. Song lyrics are from 'Perfectly Happy' by Alisha's Attic, and 'It's Only Love' and 'What a Feeling' by Heather Nova. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Seven

--



Tara woke up slowly, and took a moment to figure out where she was. That wasn't her ceiling above her, and her bedroom had no window to let in the morning sun that was warming her. Not just the sun warming her, she realised with a pleasant start, but the body curled against her. Details flowed into place as the last vestiges of sleep melted away. The Shadow, the daring car chase, coming back to Willow's house... Willow, who was now asleep against her, one arm hugging her waist, one leg slightly bent, resting on top of Tara's, her head cradled on Tara's shoulder. Her girlfriend. Tara basked in the self-inflicted glow for a moment. Her girlfriend, her wonderful, beautiful, smart, crime-fighting sometimes-invisible girlfriend. She almost giggled at the last part, but contained herself, not wanting to wake Willow. A few more memories of the previous night surfaced, making Tara blush furiously at the same time as she grinned like a kitten who'd found the world's entire supply of saucers of milk. 'Did she... and I... really?' she wondered in some amazement. Willow shifted her head.



"Mmm, hey you..." she murmured, blinking slowly. Tara lifted her head from the pillow - not without effort - and returned her gaze.



"Hey you too," she said quietly. The two looked at each other for a long moment. Tara gazed adoringly at Willow, and saw nothing less in return in Willow's eyes. And, she realised, she hadn't even worried herself for a second. Not that she'd ever really been in such a situation, but Tara was well aware that her thoughts tended to be a little defensive, to the point of self-defeating at times. A few days ago, had she guessed what thoughts would run through her mind on waking up next to a beautiful woman, after a night of - another memory surfaced, concerning Tara being quite active and Willow being quite vocally appreciative, and she blushed again - well, Tara might have guessed that she'd worry about what might happen next, whether her affection might not be entirely requited, whether she had imagined more feeling than truly existed, whether, oh, any number of stray, disquieting thoughts. She hadn't. Not a single doubt had raised its head, and when Tara realised how content she felt, how certain she was of what she wanted, how right everything was - well, she just had to kiss the girl again.



-----



"The situation is not good," summarised Willow. She and Tara had finally overcome their mutual tendency to just smooch some more, and were sitting next to each other in the dining room, with the table around them piled high with books, folders of notes, and the remains of breakfast. Having amassed all the information that could possibly be relevant, they set themselves to the task of figuring out exactly what they were dealing with, with only occasional hands on each other’s thighs.



"First, Macauley Westen," said Willow, leafing through a file. "He handed over some powerful magical goods, and took a fair bit of sass in return. According to this, he's among the highest and mightiest of the British nobility, so I don't think he'd be used to being talked to the way he was last night."



"So he's afraid of that woman," suggested Tara, "or maybe he thinks putting up with her is worth whatever he stands to gain?"



"Probably a bit of both," concluded Willow. "He's not a novice with magics, so he can't be unaware of the value of the book, and that knife of his... here it is." She pulled a file from the middle of a stack, causing a mini-landslide of papers.



"The Shard Wyrm blade," she read, "said to be carved from the crystallised heart of a dragon. This file says its existence as more than legend hasn't ever been confirmed. It's said to be a means of safely wielding magic in large quantities. Probably what the Ice Queen wants it for, if she's got a big ritual planned."



"Which is worrying in itself," said Tara. "That spell she cast, I've seen something like it before. Did you see anyone else around her who might have been part of a ritual to cast it?"



"Perhaps there was someone still in the car," Willow mused, "but I don't think so. She seemed to just think it up and do it. I didn't really recognise it, I was always more into forces than elemental stuff like that."



"Th-that's definitely not good," said Tara grimly. "If it's like the spell I know, it normally takes three people to cast just a small one. For something like that, with that duration and intensity, maybe six or even nine casters, and ritual preparations."



"And she just pulled it out of thin air," murmured Willow, "we have got to find out who she is. If she's got that sort of power to burn, and now she's looking for more... I had Harris down at the precinct check the plates of the cars she used, he told me they both belong to Nathaniel Pryce. He's a businessman, very rich, has a small collection of potentially magical books and artefacts, but I've seen him now and then and I don't think he has any talent. If he's involved in this, he's just being used. He could be a good lead, though, and perhaps he knows who the Ice Queen is. I'll pay him a visit today."



"I've been thinking about the ritual she mentioned," said Tara, "you said she'd promised this Westen a lot in return for his help?" Willow nodded. "Well, I was thinking, that means it must be something that'll give her a lot of power, directly. A-and that doesn't quite fit with what the Codex Nocturnus is supposed to be about. I mean, it's full of all sorts of incantations and descriptions of the ethereal planes, but basically it's about the afterlife. If a very powerful witch used it, you'd think it would be to talk to the dead, or something like that."



"Maybe she needs information," suggested Willow, "something only a dead person knows?"



"But from what you heard, it sounded like the ritual was, well, the big deal. If she were using it to get information, to find out, oh, I don't know, where a powerful magical volume was hidden, or an ancient artefact, well, it could go wrong. Even though no-one's really done it in decades, there's plenty of reliable records from earlier that suggest that communicating with a, a soul if you like, someone who's part of an ethereal plane, is kind of subjective. The thoughts you hear might get altered by your own thoughts, or subtle shifts in the spells, or- well, all sorts of things."



"And Westen seemed to imply that if the Ice Queen didn't live up to her end of the bargain he'd come after her," offered Willow.



"Exactly," went on Tara. "Now, even if I were as powerful as she seems to be, I wouldn't trust my life to being able to do a spell like that without anything getting distorted. Unless she's just really arrogant, and thinks she won't fail."



"She's arrogant as the day is long, would be my assessment," said Willow, "but I don't think she's stupid. I think if she's certain she'll succeed, we can't count on her fouling it up. It's up to us to stop her. Whatever she's doing. What about Westen's book, the Magicarum?"



"I read everything that looked relevant," said Tara, pushing away a stack of volumes, "but nothing conclusive. It's more a scholarly work on magic than a book of power in itself. She probably wants it to help her use the Codex properly. Or maybe..." Tara stopped for a moment, and tapped her fingers on the table as she thought.



"Maybe," she went on, "it's because she's going to do something new with the Codex. I mean, spells and rituals aren't set in stone, they're just ways of formalising magic, to make it safer and easier. But no-one really knows what the basic elements of magic are, or how all the powers in the world are connected. Maybe she wanted the Disquisitionum Magicarum to help her sort of unravel the Codex, to get at the raw powers inside the rituals it describes... in which case, we haven't got a chance of figuring out what she's going to do."



"In that case," said Willow, "a practical approach would be best. Find her, get the books and mystic daggers and whatever else she's got away from her, and stop her doing whatever she's doing. I don't know of any way to bind a witch as powerful as she seems to be. Do you think it can be done?"



"Not easily," said Tara with a frown, "but I'll see what I can find. If there's a way, your library should have it. But it'll be dangerous, you'll have to get close. And I-I think she'll probably be able to resist your hypnosis."



"I'll take care of her," Willow said confidently, "Ive got a few tricks up my sleeve."



"Willow," said Tara. Her voice was soft, but the seriousness of her tone got Willow's attention.



"Be careful," Tara said to her, staring into her eyes. "She's powerful, and there's too much we don't know about her. And I- Willow, I don't want to lose you. Not after I just found you... not ever," she finished with a determined stare. Willow leant across to Tara, taking both her hands, letting her forehead rest against Tara's as their eyes closed.



"You won't," she whispered, "I promise." Tara nodded, and they drew apart just enough to see each other clearly. Tara's eyes were moist, but she smiled the most radiant smile Willow had ever seen.



Without warning the room was plunged into darkness. Willow and Tara both jumped at the suddenness of it, and stared at the window which a moment ago had let in the sunlight from the garden. Now it was dark as night. Slowly, Willow got up and walked to the window, with Tara behind her, still gripping her hand firmly. The garden, the house's driveway, and the shapes of the buildings beyond the wall were all shrouded in blackness, lit no more brightly than at midnight on a new moon.



The sky, though, was not dark. Dark, angry clouds were swirling overhead, driven by fierce winds that pushed them towards the centre of the city, where they crashed together and rose in a mighty tower of storms, miles high. Forks of lightning flashed between the banks of storm clouds, their sudden, violent discharges tinged an unearthly purple.



"Oh Goddess," whispered Tara, "it's started."



Artemis
 


Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 7)

Postby Stroke of Luck » Mon Mar 10, 2003 1:13 am

Hi Artemis:wave



Great update and there comes angst?!:hmm

Nice that they were sleeping togther:lol



So our girls getting in trouble? Hope they will survive!



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



Man sieht nur mit dem Herzen gut, das Wesentliche ist für die Augen unsichtbar - Antoine de Saint-Exupéry



ps the signature meens

It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye. It´s from the book "Little Prince" I love it

Edited by: Stroke of Luck at: 3/9/03 11:13:45 pm
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Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 7)

Postby justin » Mon Mar 10, 2003 3:34 am

Wow, that was some ending to that update. I was :shock



I wonder what they're going to do now :hmm



justin
 


Re: Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 7)

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Mon Mar 10, 2003 3:52 pm

Chris:



That was a truly nice piece of exposition. Working through the details can come off arid or stilted sometimes. You made it feel cerebrically romantic.;)



I like what you said about being aware of introducing characters or events only as plot devices (re: the "Ice Queen" vs. the Woman at the Dumas Club). I fear this would be only one of my pitfalls if I ever dared to eat the fiction peach.:laugh Speaking of the Dumas Club and "Nine Gates:" I was probably supposed to *get* that reference wasn't I?:( I love lookin' dumb.
Quote:
"I'll take care of her," Willow said confidently, "Ive got a few tricks up my sleeve."
I'm all with the Tara big concern here. I hope Wil's tricks don't mean a reacquaintance with the dark.:pray



To say I'm breathless for more would hardly get there.^^^Suse

Cindy Lou Who
 


Re: Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 7)

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Mon Mar 10, 2003 7:53 pm

Now that's a great way to wake up--or to start an update. That was a great scene, going inside of Tara's head and letting us enjoy her recollections and dreams.



This Ice Princess babe seems like the kind of trouble that makes the Mayor-cum-Giant Snake look like gnats at a picnic. Her utter dispassion frightens me more than the sound and fury of the other Big Bads.



I enjoy how our girls can revel in each other's company and also get work done. Actually, my respect for Willow just grew even more: getting out of bed w/ Tara? That couldn't have been easy...



Nice work.

Mary

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Re: FIC: Shadows

Postby Artemis » Wed Mar 12, 2003 2:22 am

Thanks all :)



Stroke of Luck: Well, angst in a certain sense perhaps. Adventure story angst.



justin: Thanks, I like ending chapters on a cinematic note.



Cindy Lou Who: I'm glad the exposition worked, I'm always a bit nervous about that sort of scene. And I don't blame you if you missed the Dumas Club reference, I've sometimes made references so obscure and oblique that even I can't remember what they're from :)



AntigoneUnbound: I like working with villains, so it was fun to come up with the Ice Queen (which is just a nickname - she's not going to be throwing around ice blasts or blizzard spells or anything). I hope she continues to entertain. And no, I don't have a clue how Willow and Tara got out of bed, only that it took a while.

Edited by: Artemis at: 3/12/03 12:23:09 am
Artemis
 


FIC: Shadows (chapter 8)

Postby Artemis » Wed Mar 12, 2003 2:26 am

Shadows



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG-13 (mild violence)

Summary: New York, 1935. Who knows what evil lurks in the hearts of men? Nightclub singer Tara Maclay is about to find out.

Spoilers: Technically none, as this is thoroughly Alternate Universe. However, some events from the background of the characters are present, in altered form, so for safety's sake let's say a handful of things up to and including season six of 'Buffy' may be obliquely referred to in some form.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'The Shadow', created by Walter B. Gibson. Song lyrics are from 'Perfectly Happy' by Alisha's Attic, and 'It's Only Love' and 'What a Feeling' by Heather Nova. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Eight

--



Willow drove as fast as she dared through the streets of New York. People were swarming out of the buildings, but few were taking to their cars - most simply stood and stared at the chaos in the skies above them. Tara held on to the side of the car door to keep herself upright as they veered around parked and abandoned vehicles. Her gaze never left the book she was studying.



"Three blocks," reported Willow. Up ahead, outlined against the violent sky, she could see the shape of the Imperium Hotel. Nathaniel Pryce owned the top floor of the modern sky-scraper, and Willow was not at all surprised to see that the gathering thunderhead at the centre of the storm was positioned directly above the tower.



"Hell," exclaimed Tara, flipping pages rapidly, "did we bring athelas?"



"I think so," said Willow, "every spell component I've got is in the case in the trunk. It's a sort of emergency supply. You know, 'open in case of end of the world'." Willow took a quick glance at the woman beside her, and was relieved to see a smile break through her grimness.



"Okay, good," Tara continued, "I think I've got it figured out. This is going to be the most powerful binding spell I've ever cast. Actually the most powerful anything I've ever cast. Find the Ice Queen, and when I'm ready down here throw the powder on her. I'll be concentrating on you, so when I cast the spell will go to you, conduct through the powder, and bind her."



"How long do you need?" asked Willow, bringing the car to a screeching halt, half-parked in front of the Imperium. Tara clambered into the back seat and started laying out the beginnings of a ritual on a slim oak board they had taken from Willow's library.



"Probably about three weeks," Tara muttered to herself. She crushed a dry leaf in her fist and let the fragments fall on the board. A circle briefly glowed on its varnished surface.



"Okay, it's started,” she went on, "if I can't do it in ten minutes, I can't do it at all. Take this." She thrust a small pouch, full of grey powder, into Willow's hands. "That's the stuff. As soon as the spell begins this will start vibrating like crazy, that's when you throw it."



"Gotcha," said Willow, wrapping her mask around her face and reaching for her hat. Tara grabbed her arm and stopped her. She leaned over to Willow, pulled the mask down, and kissed her.



"Take care of yourself," Tara whispered. Willow nodded, breathless for a moment. Then Tara returned to her preparations, Willow replaced her mask, took her hat, and left the car.



The Imperium Hotel towered over her as she looked up, and beyond it a tower of bristling lightning and thunder reaching up into the heavens. Willow took a deep breath, concentrated on clouding the sight of the people around her, and strode through the open doors of the hotel. Inside, businessmen and other influential citizens were in a panic, haranguing their aides and each other with demands to know what was going on. Willow ignored them all and went straight to the elevators. One was waiting at the ground floor, but as Willow neared it a man darted out of the crowd and entered it. Willow let her shroud drop just enough to concentrate for a second on enhancing her strength, tossing the man out of the elevator before he could push any buttons. By the time he rolled over to look back, she was invisible again, and the doors were closing.



The elevator took her to the highest public floor of the building, but refused to go any higher. Willow glared at a slot, intended for a key, next to the button for the top floor. Glancing about for other options, she noticed a trap door in the ceiling of the elevator, and leapt at it. One hand punched the door open, allowing the other to grip the edge of the hole. Willow got a good grip with both hands and hauled herself up.



The top of the elevator shaft wasn't far away, and there was only one closed set of doors above her. Willow tested her grip on the thick steel cables supporting the elevator, and clambered up to it. She swung across and balanced on the thin ledge, jamming the heels of her boots into the corners to keep herself steady. She wedged her fingers into the rubber seal between the doors and pried them open a few inches. Beyond were several men, armed with machine guns, staring right at her.



"Aw nuts," she said as they saw the doors move and raised their weapons. She let the doors slam closed again and spun to one side of the ledge, as a hail of bullets punched holes in the centre of the doors. She let herself fall backwards, stretching out to catch the elevator cables, as the gunfire widened to perforate the entire width of the doors. The firing stopped, and there was a moment of silence as Willow swung wildly across the elevator shaft. She caught hold of an electrical cable welded to the far side of the shaft and steadied herself.



The first of the armed men opened the elevator doors and swung his machine gun around to cover the space beyond. He barely had time to look down before Willow, gripping the bottom of the ledge, swung up and kicked him in the face. She vanished as she landed, and was gone in the instant it took the other men to aim at her. Two of them fired anyway, killing the unconscious guard before he had even collapsed. The force of the bullets pushed him back towards the open elevator shaft. He began to fall, snagged on his weapon which was wrenched out of his hand by an unseen force, then toppled over the edge.



"There!" yelled one of the men, aiming at a shadow on the opposite wall of the corridor. Willow, holding the machine gun, faded into view just long enough to smash its butt into his forehead. The other guards opened fire, but the corridor was empty again, and their bullets only tore up the far wall. A hail of gunfire answered them, and they ducked to the ground, taking what cover they could behind doorframes and side tables. In the time it took them to realise the invisible gun wasn't aiming for them, three of the electric lights had been smashed by bullets. The remaining pair quickly followed, plunging the corridor into total darkness. There was a muffled sound, and the thump of a body hitting the carpeted floor. One of the remaining guards fired briefly, illuminating the scene with the strobe-light from his gun's muzzle flashes. Another man was on the ground, unconscious. A dark shape was next to the firing man, just for a second, then it vanished and the firing stopped. All that remained was the terrified gasping of the last guard. With a sharp smack and a thump, it became the slow breathing of unconsciousness.



Willow took a moment to concentrate, then kicked in the door at the far end of the hall. There was a man inside, sitting at a large antique desk. Willow recognised him as Pryce. He was alone and unarmed, so she allowed herself to become visible. He leapt to his feet at the sight of her.



"What's the meaning of this!" he barked. "Who are-"



"Shut up," said Willow, grabbing him by the neck and slamming him back into his chair. "Where is she?"



"I don't know what you're-"



"Where is she?!" Willow yelled right into his face. Pryce's eyes darted one of the other doors leading from his office. Willow released him and headed for it.



"You'll regret this!" Pryce yelled after her, his voice shrill. "When she rewards me for my help, I'll be-" Willow yanked open the door and slammed it behind her, cutting Pryce off.



-----



She was waiting there. Her coat was draped over a chair that had, along with all the other furniture in the room, been pushed up against the walls. She was kneeling within a small circle drawn in red powder on the polished floor. She wore only the tight white dress - her hands and feet were bare, and her silver hair fell around her shoulders. She looked up at Willow with infinite, cold calm.



"I expected you sooner," she said. Willow levelled a pistol crossbow at her, with her other hand concealed within her coat, feeling the weight of the satchel of powder on her belt.



"Traffic was a bitch," she replied, staring down the sight of the crossbow.



"Bravado," said the woman icily, "quite unnecessary. I am quite aware of your abilities, so you need not put on a show of heroics to impress me. And I must assume, given the display I have caused outside, that you are not unaware of the extent of my powers. Surely you cannot hope to match me."



"Who says I have to?" said Willow, keeping her weapon level. "I heard you last night. You don't have everything you need for your ritual. You can put on a show for the people outside, but we both know you're going to fail." It was a calculated risk - Willow had no way of knowing whether the woman had acquired whatever it was she needed since then, but she had to keep her talking.



"I presume you heard all that was said last night," the woman went on airily, "so no doubt you have drawn some shallow conclusions from that, and now believe you can stop me from attaining any power over you. You are quite mistaken."



"Don't bet on it," retorted Willow, pacing around the perimeter of the circle. The woman remained kneeling at the centre, tilting her head to keep Willow in view.



"You refer to your brief dalliance with dark magic," she replied, quite unfazed, "I imagine you felt quite powerful. Particularly when you killed that man. I know very much about you, you see. What you were, and what you have become. An interesting power you have developed, passive yet effective. I imagine your experiences have left you with quite a distaste for more… forceful magics."



"Bet your life?" taunted Willow.



"Oh, I am sure there are circumstances in which you might feel justified in taking a life. Once you have tasted that power, the temptation always remains." She dropped her gaze back to the floor, as Willow passed behind her.



"I know all about killing," she went on, "I have made quite a study of it. But unlike you I never let petty notions of revenge or justice taint my judgement. I have killed eighteen people with magic, every one of them carefully chosen, meticulously studied. They were all powerful, some as powerful as you. Their powers are now mine."



"You're lying," said Willow instantly. 'Come on,' she thought. The satchel on her belt remained steadfastly inert.



"You say that merely to reassure yourself. You know nothing. Their deaths were slow, carefully prepared and, aha, executed." She allowed herself a cold smile. "And when they died, their souls and all the powers within them were not allowed to merely vanish into the ether. They were contained. Within me."



The woman stood up slowly, brushing her hands down her sides to straighten invisible wrinkles in her dress.



"You may go now," she said, turning to Willow, "I have no need of you. And the spell you are waiting for will not eventuate." Willow's blood ran cold.



"I don't know what you're talking about," she bluffed.



"Of course you do," the woman replied, "your friend outside, the witch. She is gone now."



Willow fired. The crossbow bolt whipped through the woman as if she were mist, and thudded into the opposite wall. She turned to look at it, then back to Willow.



"How decisive," she commented without feeling. Willow stared at her, then swore and kicked at the dust on the floor. As the circle broke, the image of the woman vanished. Willow hurled her empty crossbow at the vacant space where she had been, then spun around and ran to a window. Yanking it open she leaned out, peering down at the street below. The car was gone. Tara was gone.



Artemis
 


Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 8)

Postby Stroke of Luck » Wed Mar 12, 2003 6:28 am

Who was that unknown woman? Have I lost something on this fic. Was it that woman a few chapters before?



Hope Tara is save where ever she is!:hmm

You like the angst don´t you and you like to tease us:angry



Hope Tara will be back really soon and without any harm.



CU:wave

SoL/Natti



Man sieht nur mit dem Herzen gut, das Wesentliche ist für die Augen unsichtbar - Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

Stroke of Luck
 


Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 8)

Postby TemperedCynic » Wed Mar 12, 2003 10:39 pm

The ol' "bait and switch"! - suckered into believing what she saw and unwittingly leaving her beloved defenseless. Was Tara the Ice Queen's target all along? Is Tara the final piece in her diabolical scheme? Does Pryce know the clues to solving this puzzle for our heroines? Tune in next time, Kittens!



Ah, 1935 - The Golden Age of Hollywood in the heart of the Great Depression. Cary Grant, Clark Gable, Gary Cooper, James Stewart, Katherine Hepburn, Betty Davis, Joan Crawford, Carole Lombard. Fred Astaire and Ginger Rogers dancing away the blues in Art Deco splendor. Ziegfield Follies and Busby Berkeley - the list goes on. And, hopefully, so will this AU arc. Maybe in multiple segments for years to come. Brilliant!


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

TemperedCynic
 


Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 8)

Postby justin » Thu Mar 13, 2003 1:12 pm

You've certainly captured the spirit of those old serials with this story.



I can't wait to see how Willow will rescue Tara, or what the next cliffhanger will be. :D



I understand, you should be with the person you l-love


I am


justin
 


Re: FIC: Shadows

Postby Artemis » Fri Mar 14, 2003 7:08 am

Thanks all :)



Stroke of Luck: The woman was the one from the airfield (I really should have given her a real name, 'Ice Queen' is too much a nickname to use outside dialogue). As for Tara... well, she's got a superheroine coming to rescue her.



TemperedCynic: I think you know a lot more about 1935 than I do :) All I'll say for now is that Pryce isn't (nor has he ever been) anything but a minion. As for more Shadows after this one - it's possible. The characters and setting are there, so if I happen to think of another plot and villain, why not?



justin: No more cliffhangers, it's showdown time :)

Artemis
 


FIC: Shadows (chapter 9)

Postby Artemis » Fri Mar 14, 2003 7:10 am

Shadows



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: PG-13 (mild violence)

Summary: New York, 1935. Who knows what evil lurks in the hearts of men? Nightclub singer Tara Maclay is about to find out.

Spoilers: Technically none, as this is thoroughly Alternate Universe. However, some events from the background of the characters are present, in altered form, so for safety's sake let's say a handful of things up to and including season six of 'Buffy' may be obliquely referred to in some form.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy The Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'The Shadow', created by Walter B. Gibson. Song lyrics are from 'Perfectly Happy' by Alisha's Attic, and 'It's Only Love' and 'What a Feeling' by Heather Nova. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Nine

--



Willow burst through the doors of the Imperium Hotel onto the street, visible and uncaring of who saw her. All around her was panic anyway, people running for cover. She looked up - the turmoil above the city was increasing, and no longer centred above the hotel.



'Of course not,' thought Willow bitterly, 'she's not here anymore. It's following her.' But try as she might, Willow couldn't see where the storms were coalescing now. The thunderhead above was collapsing violently, tearing itself apart with cyclonic winds now that its core was gone. Pressure waves were lashing out across the sky, tearing through the ranks of black clouds lining up across the city, lightning stabbed the tallest towers again and again. Amid the chaos, there was no way to see where the nexus of the storm was re-forming.



'Willow...'



She stopped dead in her tracks, staring around wildly. But Tara wasn't there. The voice had been as soft as snow falling, would have been inaudible above the havoc on the streets, except that it came to Willow’s mind, not her ears. She held on to the memory of the voice like a drowning sailor clinging to a piece of wood. It was there - ever since that night Tara had saved her, and taken care of her, she had felt a sense of, of... she didn't have the words for it. Her world had been more alive. And now she felt it still. Willow closed her eyes and concentrated on nothing but the memory of that angel's voice in her mind. Those few observers watching this strange masked figure gasped as the very air around her rippled. Leaves and sheets of newspaper, blown by the gale, dropped to the pavement as they neared her, and everything around her became still and silent.



Willow opened her eyes. The wind suddenly whipped at her coat again, and the noise of the gale howled in her ears, but she didn’t notice. She glanced quickly around the street - a policeman on a motorcycle was trying to direct traffic, as people took to their cars in blind panic. She sprinted across the street, ignoring the cars that screeched to a halt, horns blaring, and touched his shoulder. He closed his eyes and slumped into her arms, and she carefully let him down to the pavement. She swung her leg over the bike and roared down the street.



"I'm coming baby," she whispered.



-----



Willow followed her instinct, never questioning or doubting it. The thought of Tara led her across the city towards the sprawling mansions of the wealthy and powerful. She steered the bike between cars jammed in traffic, down sidewalks when the cars were too crowded, across the park, keeping to a constant line. Tara was alive. She knew it, and now she just had to find her.



She came at last to a huge, stately mansion surrounded by high stone walls topped with iron spikes. Glancing up, she saw the first hints of the storm clouds beginning to centre overhead. The main gate was closed, but unguarded. Willow took a few steps back, ran, jumped, grabbed the bars and flipped herself up and over the rows of spikes, landing on her feet in the driveway and causing a shower of gravel as she shifted her momentum into the air around her. Her feet crunched in the gravel as she stalked up towards the house's main doors, so she ignored her visibility and concentrated instead of preparing herself for the challenge ahead. The clouds were actually reaching down, towards the roof of the mansion, like a tornado spinning in slow motion. Already the tiles on the roof were beginning to rattle, and every few seconds one would break loose and crash to the ground below.



Willow kicked the doors in, her anger amplifying the blow enough to break the hinges. She stalked through the entrance hall, through another set of doors into a narrow corridor, and came at last to a set of thick double doors, the old wood blackened with age, bound at the edges with iron and brass. She put her hands on the doors - she could feel the magical power seeping through from beyond - and pushed them open.



The room was huge, fifty metres across, reaching up through the mansion's second storey to a great glass dome. The walls were polished marble, white and deep crimson, with recesses containing statues of hooded, robed figures. The floor was a mosaic, composed of miniscule tiles, swirling in geometric patterns to the centre of the chamber. There was a circle of candles, at least a hundred, their flames flickering in the disturbed air. From the perimeter of the circle, sheets of pure magic were rising, rushing into the air from below, stretching skyward. At the very centre stood the woman in white. Her composure was perfectly serene, as always. Her arms were bare, the sleeves cut away, and her dress had been slit by jagged cuts running up both sides to her hips, revealing her legs. On her legs, arms, even her face, were long, flowing markings in blood, cut with delicate care. Instead of running from the wounds, her blood glowed in the cuts, like magma beneath a crust of rock. Her hair was streaming out above her, as if the winds of magic rising around her were a physical force, and when she moved she left a wake in the air, clinging to her, a glittering curtain of light like liquid diamonds. In front of her, kneeling, eyes closed, was Tara.



"Hey, Ice Bitch!" yelled Willow. The woman looked at her for a moment, then smiled without warmth.



"My name is Miranda," she said softly, her voice echoing through the chamber on the wave of the magic she was feeding on, "though perhaps you might think Prospero more appropriate, under the circumstances. Do you still wish to challenge me, now that you know what I am?"



Willow drew both pistol crossbows from her coat and aimed them directly at the woman's head.



"Lady," she said, "I've known what you are since I first laid eyes on you. Let. Her. Go." In response, the woman drew a knife - the Shard Wyrm - from behind herself and gazed at the unearthly light reflecting from its silver blade. Ripples of energy began to rise from the ground, passing through Tara and the woman as if they were ghosts.



"If you hurt her," yelled Willow, "I'll see you burn in every hell there is!" The woman looked at her with an expression of contempt.



"You have no idea what I am doing. Be silent." She flipped the knife over in her hand, aiming it at her neck. The pulses of energy were becoming more rapid, and every time one passed through her, the knife in her hand flickered, and for an instant seemed to be made of blood-red crystal. She slowly brought the point to her, and began to slice through the material of her dress, until she had opened it from her neck to the centre of her chest. Willow watched in horrified fascination as she gripped the blade with both hands, aiming at her own heart. The pulses of energy were almost continuous now, and the blade was pure crystal, casting a savage red light that throbbed as if it were alive.



The woman thrust the blade into her body. It cut with no blood, only a line of pure red light around the blade. When she reached the hilt she released her nearest hand and continued to push with the other. When that touched her skin she moved it, bracing her palm against the end of the knife. With a final shove the blade vanished completely. Her alabaster skin sealed behind it, with no trace of a wound. The diamond light rippling around her blazed suddenly, unfurling like a cape in the hurricane of magic, turning dark red and glittering like a sea of rubies. From her legs, arms, back and head it flowed up into the air as she walked around Tara, watching Willow’s stunned expression.



"Now," she said, "I shall begin. You may watch, if you wish. There is no way for you to alter what will now happen. Watch as the dead rise."



Willow staggered as faces began to appear in the sheets of magic bursting like a volcano from the floor, wretched, twisted faces, souls in pain. The magic began to bend inwards, and Willow swore she could hear the screaming of the souls increase in pitch as an invisible force drew them towards the woman. Lightning crackled in the storm clouds above, twisting and lashing continuously in the sky. Slowly the column of souls bent, ever lower, until at last they touched the woman.



The chamber exploded. The glass dome ruptured outwards, letting in the fury of the storm. The marble blocks lining the walls cracked and shattered, spraying dust and debris over the mosaic floor. Huge chunks of stone and brick swirled up into the sky, leaving the remnants of the chamber at the centre of the gaping crater in the mansion. The river of souls was flowing quickly now, too fast for Willow to even see the faces within it. It stretched from the ground, through Tara, into the woman. She grinned icily.



"Now do you understand?" she said. "The souls I have taken were merely a tool, a device to fuel this ritual, my ascension. Every one of the billions of souls, from every ethereal plane, is being drawn into me. Their power is becoming my power. Billions upon billions, stretching back to the dawn of time. All mine. And it will not end there. I am becoming all heavens and all hells. Every destiny will end in me. Every human being on the face of the earth will be mine, for the rest of time. For who can resist death? And beyond death, there will no longer be judgement, punishment, reward or peace. Only me."



She stalked around Tara, standing directly in front of Willow. The river of souls curved around Tara's still, kneeling form, passing through her back now and emerging through her chest, to remain centred on the woman. Willow aimed both crossbows at the V-shaped split in her dress and fired at her heart. The bolts burned out of the air inches from her skin. She paid no attention to them.



"Even you will be mine," the woman hissed at Willow. "I could kill you now, but there is no need. You cannot cheat death, and I will be patient. Eventually age and time will hunt you down, and you will lay your weary, wrinkled head down and die. And I will have you. Consider that, when you think back on your arrogance in challenging me."



She turned her back on Willow and walked away from her. The souls continued to curve through Tara and into the woman’s body.



"Your friend here," she said, looking at Willow over her shoulder, "will be spared, if you can call it that. Communion with the afterlife requires a certain degree of innocence, and I am sure you would be quick to point out I have little of that. The union I have created between myself and the ethereal planes is ultimate, so it requires perfect purity. Hers. When the ritual is complete her soul will simply cease to exist. Perhaps you will take some comfort in that. I care not."



Willow ran two steps, leapt over the souls streaming through the air, and lashed out with all her force in a kick aimed straight at the woman's head. The woman raised a hand, almost lazily, freezing Willow in mid-air. For a moment she hung there, unable to move, then the woman flicked her hand. Willow shot away from her, crashing into the remains of the marble wall twenty metres away. It took all her concentration to shift away the massive force of the impact, to avoid shattering her bones. She fell to the floor, dazed, only to be caught by an invisible force and dragged towards the circle, towards Tara and the woman. She slid to a halt in front of them.



"Do you still not understand?" said the woman, looking almost incredulous. "I have planned this ritual my entire life. Do you think I would permit you to disrupt it like some rogue piece on a chess board? You are a pawn, nothing more. You have moved as I wished, when I wished. I arranged for you to be distracted by this girl, to waste time protecting her from me, while I went about my business sure in the knowledge that you would bring her to me when I required her. Whatever preparations you might have made to face me now, you left undone. Your part in this is over. The pawn cannot attack the queen. There is no power in you, in her, in this world that can rival me."



Willow gazed at Tara. She was perfectly still, her expression serene, at peace. Her chest was rising and falling slowly, as if she was in a deep, restful sleep. She had never looked to beautiful to Willow. The woman came to a halt directly behind her, and gently placed her hands on either side of Tara’s head, her fingers brushing against the sides of her face.



"Tara," gasped Willow. The souls were flowing through her like an inverted waterfall, so fast as to be a mere river of light, any details indistinguishable.



"It nears completion," said the woman. She smiled thinly at Willow. "If you have any last words for her, speak them now."



"Tara," whispered Willow, staring at her closed eyes, "I love you."



Tara's eyes opened.



She blinked once, as if clearing away the remnants of sleep, then looked straight at Willow. Seeing her fallen on the ground before her, she leant forward, reaching out to hold her. Tara moved to kneel beside Willow, gathering her into her arms. Willow simply stared at her.



The river of souls did not move with her. When Tara moved the souls suddenly struck the woman behind her with their full force. She screamed abruptly, the curtains of blood light streaming behind her shattering into a million tiny filaments that thrashed around like reeds in a storm. Tara jumped at her scream, clutching Willow tight. Her fright brought Willow out of her near-trance, and she pulled Tara away from the circle. Together they scrambled to the edge of the room, only then stopping to look back.



The woman was floating above the ground, at the centre of a cloud of souls that whipped around her like a swarm of wasps. The strands of magic flowing from her body were stretched tight, pulled out around her like an aura, slipping out of her as the light seeped out from beneath her skin. In an instant the ruby-red was gone from them, revealing again the cold diamond light shining from her. She threw her head back and howled as more and more souls escaped her, swarming around, tearing at the power flowing from her. Light streamed out of her mouth, flying up into the thunderous sky like a beacon.



Lightning flashed down the connection, blinding Willow and Tara. There was a deafening crack, then silence. When the two women finally blinked away the ghostly images in their eyes, they saw the centre of the mosaic floor burned black by the discharge. There was nothing else left. Willow let out a shuddering breath, and began crying softly in Tara's arms.



"Shh," Tara whispered automatically, "it's alright. It's over." Willow wrapped her arms around Tara and kissed her hard on the lips. When she drew back Tara moved with her, keeping their lips together. Finally they ended the kiss.



"Tara-" began Willow.



"I know," said Tara instantly, "I heard you. I love you Willow. I love you."



Overhead, the storm was retreating, leaving the sun to warm the city again.



-----



"Life is only half-way in our hands-"



The patrons of the Hurricane Club fell silent, abandoning even their lively discussion of the lightning storm two days ago. Tonight, no-one was talking during the songs.



"-years have passed while I was making plans."



Tara was wearing her simple, elegant white gown, not the cold white of ice, but the glow of pure light. Her voice was strong and sure, giving the melody a life of its own.



"And I could never find the words,

I always felt absurd, always outside."



Her audience, which included several regulars, all felt that she was on rare form tonight. Those of a musical persuasion compared her to the conductor of a symphony, so immersed in the music that it became part of her. Those of less cultured experience simply concluded that they hadn't heard anything like it.



But she sang only for one person, who sat near the stage, resting her elbows on the table and her chin on her folded palms, gazing at her endlessly with deep emerald eyes.



"But now I know I shouldn't care,

there's a song already there,

waiting inside."



And Tara gazed back at her, and sang with all her heart.



"Oh, what a feeling..."



THE END



Artemis
 


Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 9)

Postby Stroke of Luck » Fri Mar 14, 2003 12:41 pm

Great part.



I see that this 3 words "I LOVE YOU" are really powerfull:glasses



But that story ends to soon:sob Will Willow be the Shadow etc. Don´t you want to write a sequel????:pray



Great work.



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti



There are two kinds of tears, tears for those who leave you, and tears for those you never let go - Xena/The Quest

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Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 9)

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Fri Mar 14, 2003 4:48 pm

I agree...there should be a sequel. :grin But, even if there isn't...this was amazing. :) Thank you so much for a great fic. I really loved it.



Aimee :D

It's hard to be precise, though. Alternate universes don't stay put. Sending him to a specific place is like, like trying to hit a puppy by throwing a live bee at it. Which is a weird image and you should all just forget it. -Willow in Triangle

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Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 9)

Postby Cindy Lou Who » Fri Mar 14, 2003 10:38 pm

Chris:



I wish that it could go on...but it ended beautifully...with the Tara singing thing again. So good.:love



It never fails to astonish me when I read an exquisitely crafted line or paragraph. By you or so many on this board. Through your careful use of imagery and metaphor I see what you write. I saw Tara as the conduit to those sorry manipulated souls. And the Ice Queen's malevolent grasp for power that was ultimately repelled by the one true thing. It pulled on me. That can't be an easy thing to achieve.:thud



And that true thing: the simple phrase "I love you" and the power it holds. It reminded me of "The Dark Rose." It is reviving and revivifying. It is the gift that gives most and costs least went given honestly.



Boy oh boy I hope you write more...in any genre you pick!:party



~Suse

Edited by: Cindy Lou Who at: 3/14/03 8:47:55 pm
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Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 9)

Postby TemperedCynic » Fri Mar 14, 2003 10:58 pm

The Ice Queen meets her match - love is the answer in all its forms. Willow and Tara overcome what magic cannot. I hope you experiment with this AU again.



As for knowing a lot about 1935, heh, I watched a lot of old movies when growing up. This era is still my favorite. I still love watching Astaire and Rogers films.


More than any other time in history, mankind faces a crossroads. One path leads to despair and utter hopelessness. The other, to total extinction. Let us pray we have the wisdom to choose correctly. Woody Allen (1935 - )

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Re: FIC: Shadows (chapter 9)

Postby daydreamer » Fri Mar 14, 2003 11:30 pm

Great update, Artemis. :applause :applause :applause It is just so sad that it has to end. I like the action and I like the idea of Willow as a superhero and still remains the Willow we all know. Will there be a sequel? I really hope so. :D Please keep your stories coming. I love all of them. :applause





daydreamer
 


Re: FIC: Shadows

Postby maudmac » Mon May 05, 2003 1:24 am

New to the archive. You can leave feedback! :)


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