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Re: Equilibration

Postby Willowfan » Wed Jun 11, 2003 12:02 am

I will admit, I passed this fic up a lot, thinking "Buffy and Trek crossover...oh PLEASE!" But, I decided, finally!!! to give it a shot..and I will say I am VERY i,pressed.



I would point out some of my favorite moments, but it would just be a rewrite of the whole darn thing.



I am gonna say, in all humility, I spotted Gunn from the transporter room...and I LOVE it! He is my fav AtS character! (Don't suppose you could toss in a Lorne character, could ya? Ok...it's your story;) )



and as for who can Willow talk to? Model it after relics (the book, not the episode) from ST:TNG. Use the holodeck and recreate the Hannibal from Willow's time and talk to her two best friends in the world!



As for this story..LOVE it and I can't wait to see more...soon please!



Willowfan:)

Willowfan
 


Re: Equilibration

Postby Kiwigrrrl » Thu Jun 12, 2003 10:58 am

Hey, how are you?



I've just read this fic from the start, and I'm really enjoying it.



It's a really great idea for a story, and it's also quite easy to follow (which is a surprise for me, as I have the attention span of a goldfish).



Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapter.



- Skye





"I am, you know"

"What?"

"Cheese."

Kiwigrrrl
 


Equilibration, Chapter 8 (continued)

Postby CaptMurdock » Sun Jun 15, 2003 3:41 am

Same disclaimers as last time



****



"Stay sharp, people," Faraday admonished as her group left the engineering complex and entered the main corridor that led to the operations center. Gunn took the lead, his phaser rifle at the ready, placing himself between Faraday and any potential threat. She gave him a look at his presumption, but said nothing, merely drawing her own phaser.



Willow and Tara walked in the approximate center of the group, the former taking readings and relaying them to the ship and to Kolrami while receiving data in return. They had not seen any other bodies besides the one Tara had come a cropper at the beam-down point, though they did find other signs of the battle that had surely taken place some hours before. Dark, carbonized scoring on the walls and ceilings of the facility gave mute testimony to the carnage.



"These blast patterns are from several different weapon types, Commander," Willow reported. "Types-two and –three disruptors, at least three kinds of phasers…pretty eclectic assortment of firepower, if you ask me."



"The Maquis tend to collect weaponry as they go, Lieutenant," the first officer answered. "So far, what we've seen has been consistent—"



Tara's sudden gasp made everyone stop in their tracks. Faraday swung around and stared into the blonde counselor's eyes. "Are you all right?"



Tara nodded, distractedly. "There's someone nearby," she said after a second's pause.



The other security man looked at his tricorder, shook his head. "I'm not getting a lifeform reading," he muttered, hardly bothering to hide his irritation.



"Neither am I," Willow added, then tapped twice on her device, "but there's a conduit five meters in front of us where oxygen is spontaneously turning to carbon dioxide." She cast a don't-teach-Grandma-how-to-suck-eggs look at the security man. "Lots of ways of shielding bioelectric signatures from standard scans, y'know?"



Tara didn't allow herself the luxury of looking vindicated. Instead she crossed over to a panel set in the wall down next to the floor. "He's behind here…"



"Hold on, Lieutenant," Faraday admonished. Gunn was already covering the panel with his rifle. "This could be a hostile…"



"It's all right," Tara insisted, casting firm looks at both Faraday and Gunn. The dark man didn't look convinced, but stepped back to allow her to loosen the panel to access the conduit, leaving his weapon ready to retaliate should she prove wrong. Faraday nodded her consent, signaling the others to hold steady and keep watching the rear. Willow bit her lip and consulted her tricorder again; she wasn't detecting a weapon, but that was not always definitive, given the diversity of weapon characteristics in this century…



Tara, on the other hand, had a pretty good idea as to the nature of the person hiding in the conduit. She pried off the panel and shone her hand beacon in…



"Oh, God!" It was something between a shout and a whimper, filled with terror and fatalistic resignation. "Please, don't…I—"



"It's all right!" Tara said, shining the light briefly on herself. "I-I'm Lt. Maclay, from the starship Hannibal. We're here in response to your distress call."



The relief from the man was almost palpable. "Oh, thank God. I'm Jeryn Newley, second technician. Listen, these people, they came in using falsified identities, then they started shooting up the place, and then they were herding everyone together, but I managed to hide in here…"



"Good idea. I mean, we almost missed you entirely. Are you hurt? Why don't you come on out, Jeryn? You'll be safe with us…"



"N-no….I can't." Newley shook his head miserably.



Tara crawled partway into the conduit. While it wasn't a tight squeeze by any means, she was still amazed that Newley had managed to stay in this small space for hours without getting a little claustrophobic. She stopped a meter away from him and assumed as sympathetic (but professional) demeanor as she was capable of. "I don't blame you. I-It's a little scary out there. These are all people you worked with, and you might be afraid to face them because you feel guilty—"



She finally realized that Newley was shaking his head and waving his hand in order to indicate how far off base she was. "No, no, no…it's nothing like that." His expression was, if anything, sheepish. "My foot's stuck."



Tara shone her hand beacon to where his pointing finger led, to his right foot which was indeed jammed in between an optical-data network line and an electro-plasma conduit. She had to nibble the inside of her cheek to keep from braying laughter right in Newley's face. When she felt that she had sufficient control of herself, she said evenly, "Why don't I give you a hand?"



"Would you, please?" Newley replied pathetically. "'Cause I gotta go to the bathroom something fierce."



****



As it turned out, that was probably the most excitement Team Two had in their mission, before they linked up with Thelvran's team in the operations center. From there it was a simple search to locate the bulk of Memory Alpha's staff, sealed in the main refectory behind phaser-welded doors. Most of them were unhurt, and the exceptions mainly had minor neural trauma from phaser-stun, along with a few sporting contusions and broken bones. Govarr and Sivek found it necessary to transport only a few cases to the Hannibal for more extensive treatment.



Tara and Dr. Devereux had their hands full debriefing the remainder of the staff, watchful for any signs of post-traumatic stress. A small part of Tara found it odd to have her comforting people who had many more years of deep-space experience than she had. Nonetheless, she felt satisfied putting into practice in the field what she had learned at the Academy or had used in the relatively controlled conditions of a starship.



Willow, too, was kept busy for quite some time, as the Maquis – the staff's descriptions of the marauders had confirmed the captain's suspicions – had blasted the computer consoles after they gotten whatever information they had come for…or not, as the case may have been. It was Willow's job, in conjunction with Kolrami and Thelvran, to determine whether or not the Maquis had penetrated the computer's security protocols and made off with any sensitive information. Also, working with Dr. Govarr, she was ordered to do a forensic analysis of the operations complex to pick up any physical trace of the intruders for the purposes of identification. Fortunately, she was able to recruit several science technicians from the ship to assist in what would be a back-breaking chore; even so, there was an incredible amount of information that Willow would have to sift through in a fairly short time.



Easy, Willow thought to herself ruefully, easy as…really hard pie.



She finally hit upon an idea to access Memory Alpha's computer: use the Hannibal's computer…



"We can sync our computer in parallel with Memory Alpha's core," Willow said in the conference back aboard ship, with Faraday, Kolrami, Thelvran and DaKar seated in the chairs listening to her brief presentation. "This ship has three computer cores, right? Drop one of the cores out, probably one of the ones in the saucer section, and have the other two take the computing load. I mean, even one core is enough for all essential operations, right?"



DaKar nodded. "Pretty much. The three cores operate in parallel, updating each other every forty-three milliseconds. We routinely drop them out in a cycle for routine maintenance about once a month."



"I'm not sure as to whether this is an appropriate use of ship's resources, " Kolrami countered. "In an emergency situation, we might need the total computing power of this ship against a hostile force. We can still access the Memory Alpha data core remotely and use its own central processor to re-trace the Maquis' intrusion into the archives."



"But…with all due respect, Commander, that will take too long," Willow protested as gently as she was able. Taking a deep breath to calm herself, she continued, "Between the time-lag from the remote link, and the fact that Memory Alpha's CPU is far less powerful than the Hannibal's the process could take days!"



"It could mean the difference in catching the Maquis before they successfully carry out whatever plan they might have," Thelvran added.



Kolrami and Willow were both about to speak at this point, but were both stayed by Faraday's raised hand. "Normally, I'm loathe to supersede Gelfa's authority when it comes to coordinating this ship's departments and resources. However, Captain Murdock designated finding the Maquis, after caring for the Memory Alpha personnel, as our highest priority." She focused on Willow, her soft voice firm with command responsibility. "Carry out your plan, Lieutenant. Ensure that nothing you do will impair this ship's ability to function in a crisis."



Willow came to attention. "Aye, Number One."



Faraday turned to the others. "Gelfa, Jodell: you two work together to drop out one of the cores and place it at Lt. Rosenberg's disposal. I want Level 1 protocols in place; we don't want any little surprise viruses making us fly backwards. Dismissed." As her junior officers made for the door, she added in a quiet voice, "Commander Kolrami, a moment more, please." She waited while Willow and DaKar left the conference room, then turned to her colleague and friend. "Why do you dislike her so much?"



A less blunt person than Gelfa Kolrami might have prevaricated. Being who she was, however… "She thinks that she can just…pop in here, from her primitive century, and remodel from scratch every protocol on this ship according to her design. Merely because Lt. Rosenberg has some natural insight for science and technology, that doesn't mean she can reinvent warp drive." The Zakdorn sniffed in disdain.



Faraday crossed her arms and struggled not to laugh. "You're jealous of her!"



Kolrami did not even bother to deny it. "Why shouldn't I be? It's bad enough that she's nearly as intelligent as a Zakdorn – which is positively shocking in a human – but she is far more than I will ever be." The downcast expression on her puffy face was sad to see.



"I don't believe that. The captain knows that you make this ship run as well as it does—"



"It's not a question of how well I do my job, nor of your misplaced faith…however much I appreciate it, Olivia." Kolrami sighed. "My people are great natural collators, historians, cartographers and even strategists. But we have no creativity, as such. Concepts such as art, music, poetry…these things were virtually alien to us until we discovered other races." She looked at her superior officer and friend, a wistful countenance on her usually stern face. "Olivia…you humans have such natural disadvantages. You don't have outrageous mental faculties, you aren't as physically strong as many races, and you don't heal as fast nor live as long. But, sometime, long ago, you refused to accept your lot in life. You strived to be something more than you are…and against all odds, against reason itself, you succeeded." Kolrami shook her head. "Your people, unlike mine, learned to dream."



****



Willow was banging away – not literally, thankfully -- at the Science station on the bridge when Tara arrived there several hours later. The assistant counselor had spent hours with the Memory Alpha staff, not only providing emotional support but also trying to glean any information on the Maquis' plans.



"Willow," she said in greeting, squatting down next to the science officer.



"Hey. Where've you been?"



"Interviewing. Lots and lots of interviewing. After the first fifteen or so people telling you that they were frightened for their very lives, clinical detachment becomes much easier."



Willow grinned. "I'll bet. Did any of them have any useful information on our bad guys?"



Tara shrugged. "Only that the Maquis were definitely looking for a specific bit of information, as opposed to, um, trolling around for any good tidbits."



"Well, that checks out," Willow conceded. "From what little I've been able to get from, pardon my Fabrini, the antiquated piece of crap that Memory Alpha uses for a datacore, they were trying to break into one certain part of the protected files. Unfortunately, because they deliberately fragmented the file directory, I have no way of knowing exactly which files they tried to crack, or if they succeeded. Though I doubt that; the encryption on these files is primo."



"'Primo?' Is that a technical word?" Tara asked with a deadpan expression. She abruptly turned serious again. "Well, we kinda have to assume that they found something…otherwise, they would have headed back to the Demilitarized Zone, right? Uh, unless they did, and we can't tell because they covered—"



"No, no, we do know they headed in a completely different direction, even if we can't pinpoint it enough to plot a course. Unless, of course, they took the sort of scenic route, like, going from Earth to Vulcan by way of the Andromeda Galaxy."



Tara nodded. "So, if they did head somewhere else, someplace they knew to go to, and they weren't able to decrypt the files, how would they know?"



Willow frowned deeply in thought. Tara could almost see little indicator lights blinking on and off in her head. "So, they learned something about the files themselves, rather than the information contained within. Like, who wrote or collated the information…or where…" She broke off.



"Where the files were sent from?" Tara prodded gently.



Willow nodded distractedly. A smile broke out lightning-quick. "The navigational database!" She tapped in commands which were relayed through the link to the Memory Alpha computer. Within seconds, the information was displayed on the console. "This is it! The last record accessed in the navigational database, which according to the time index had to have been read while the Maquis were occupying the station! Tara, you're a genius!"



Tara put on a modest expression. "Aw, shucks, ma'm."



Willow smiled back. "Couldn't'a done it without ya." She studied the coordinates on the screen. "This is even deeper into Federation space…although a bit aways from the core worlds and the regular trade routes. Hang on, maybe I can cross-reference what files came from this location." However, she paused with her hands over the control pads, as if lost in thought.



Tara picked up something from Willow's mind that she had trouble articulating to herself. It felt like the sort of phantom itch one gets from an old experience, or like the proverbial bad knee on a rainy day. "Willow? Is something wrong?"



The science officer blinked, shook her head as if to clear it, then shook it in answer to Tara's question. She searched the Memory Alpha datacore using the navigational coordinates as a reference point. "Hmmm," she said after a short interval. "Seems we have a winner here. The files that came from this location…and wow, there are a lot of them…are all under the heading of 'Curator'."



"Curator? Like, as in, of a museum?"



"Yeah, I guess, but look," Willow said, putting up the index and pointed to the description of the planet, "there's no museum there. Actually, there's not much of anything there. The planet is uninhabited, it's the only one in its system, the star is way past its main sequence, it's just a dead world—"



All at once, a memory clicked into place for Willow. Part of it was the description that she heard herself say of the origin of the transmitted files. The other thing was the name of the collected information: Curator. Willow, with her unceasing fascination with logic puzzles, had been toying with the word as soon as she had read it onscreen. "Curator:" usually means custodian of a museum, but it didn't necessary have to. It's also another word for--



The wave of emotion that Tara felt from Willow was so powerful that for a few seconds it defied her ability to describe it. Only when she saw the blood drain out of her friend's face did she recognize the feeling as sheer horror. Perversely enough, there was also the strangest sense of nostalgia, as if whatever was causing Willow's fear also had a link to her past.



"Ooooh," Willow said, something between a whisper and a moan. "This is not good."



Feeling concerned and a little frightened herself, Tara gently gripped Willow's arm. "Willow? What is it? What's wrong?"



The young redhead looked like she almost wanted to laugh. "Wrong? I think we're beyond 'wrong' here…our next stop, 'catastrophic.'" She tapped her commbadge. "Captain Murdock, can you please, uh, come to the bridge. Thanks." Without waiting for an acknowledgement or a question, she closed the line.



A few seconds later, a bemused Murdock, followed by a curious Dr. Devereux, who had been briefing the captain on the Memory Alpha personnel, came out of the ready room and walked over the Science station. "Willow…and Tara, hello. Now, what can I help you with that Commander Faraday—" he indicated the first officer sitting in the command chair, "—isn't able to?"



Willow knew she had committed a breach in protocol but was too anxious to bring it up. "Captain, I found out where the Maquis are going!" Briefly, she outlined the methodology she used to find the information and showed him the coordinates.



"Okay, then, good work, Lieutenant," Murdock said, nodding at her ingenuity. "So these files, under this 'Curator' heading, originated here?" He indicated the schematic of the system on the Science station screen.



"Yes, sir," Willow answered.



"Were you able to access the files?" he asked.



"Um, no, sir, the encryption is still in place. If you care to try…"



At Willow's suggestion, Murdock crossed over to the Science station. "If you two will excuse me a moment," he said to Willow and Tara, who moved a discreet distance away. "Computer, create a Alpha-1 secure link to the Memory Alpha computer."



"Alpha-1 security link established," the computer promptly replied.



"Computer, access all files under the Curator heading, authorization Murdock-delta-tau-seven, and transfer them to my ready room screen."



The computer whirred and beeped for a couple of seconds, then chirped disapprovingly. "Unable to comply. Access to files under Curator heading is restricted. Zeta Bravo clearance is required"



"Whoa," Devereux said, looking over Murdock's shoulder. "'Zeta Bravo' is the clearance code that Starfleet Command place on heap-big secret mojo. Like, the quantum torpedo research project, only higher." At Willow's quizzical look, Tara's equally inquiring brow, and Murdock's bemused expression, he added, "I have friends in low places."



Murdock turned back to Willow. "Lieutenant, do you think the Maquis was able to penetrate the security encryption?"



"I, well, I'm not sure, sir," Willow said, looking nervous, "but-but I doubt it. I think I could have detected that. In fact, I'm pretty sure."



"But…if this was what the Maquis was looking for, and they found out where it was without looking at the files, then maybe they don't know the exact nature of 'Curator,' whatever that is," Murdock mused.



"It's entirely possible that someone in the Maquis might have come across a passing reference to Curator in a relatively low-level communiqué," Devereux added. "If they thought it might be something worth going after—"



"Why would they want something to use against the Federation?" Tara asked. "Their enemies, primarily, are the Cardassians. We try to prevent them from violating the treaty, which they resent, but I can't imagine they would pursue an aggressive act against, well, their own people, even if they have renounced Federation citizenship."



Willow had been keeping silent during this exchange, growing more and more uncomfortable by the second. Tara noticed this due to her empathic senses but said nothing about it up to this point; eventually, Murdock became aware of her anxiety as well. "Lieutenant, something tells me you have a better idea about what the Maquis want with Curator than—"



"No! I mean, I don't know if they even know what Curator is, sir…"



"…but you do," Murdock finished as the science officer trailed off. "You don't need to read those files, because you know exactly what Curator is, right?" When Willow did not answer right away, he folded his arms and peered downward into her eyes. "What, are you falling asleep on m—"



"Captain, I can't tell you," was her terse reply.



Murdock looked about as flabbergasted as anyone had ever seen him. After several seconds of double-takes and jaw-droppage, he recovered and said, "In order to avoid some unnecessary silliness, I'm going to assume you mean that you do know, or think you know, but can't tell me for some esoteric reason. Am I in the ballpark?" Willow nodded, looking guilty but nonetheless resolute. "Go to my ready room and wait for me there." Looking like a shamefaced schoolgirl sent to the headmaster's office, Willow turned on her heel and went as directed. Murdock watched her go silently, then went over to the Operations station. "Gelfa, are there any Starfleet vessels near the coordinates Lt. Rosenberg retrieved?"



After accessing the Science station logs and cross-referencing them with Starfleet patrol assignments, Kolrami had the answer. "The Trieste, sir. It's passing through that sector in about two hours."



Murdock chewed his lip, thinking. "Send a coded message to the Trieste; my compliments to her captain, and inform him the Maquis are coming to town. See if he can hold them off until we get there. What's our best time?"



"At maximum warp, six hours. But, Captain, the Trieste is a science vessel, not heavily armed. They may not have sufficient offensive capability to—"



"Noted, Commander. Send the message anyway. Number One, let's rock and roll."



"As you wish, sir," Faraday answered. "Are we informing Starfleet Command—"



"No. Dr. Devereux, you're with me." As the first officer gave the orders to proceed at maximum warp, the captain went into the ready room with the chief counselor in tow. Tara, at the last second, walked in behind them. As the doors shut, Murdock walked towards Willow, who had been sitting on the couch and now leaping to her feet. He glanced at Devereux, noting for a second that Tara had come along for the ride, and turned back to Willow. "All right, Lieutenant. Since I've ordered the Hannibal to the coordinates you found, and therefore sticking our collective head into the lion's mouth, maybe you'll do me the courtesy of telling me what we might find at the end of this particular rainbow." Murdock's voice, starting out in a conversational tone, acquired a nasty edge along the way.



Willow took a deep breath, as there was no easy way to do this. "Captain, please believe me, I know I'm asking a lot on faith here, but I cannot tell you what I know."



Keeping a rein on his temper with great effort, Murdock made a conscious attempt not to grit his teeth. "Why the hell not?"



"I gave my word, sir."



"To whom?"



Willow was not able to meet Murdock's eyes. "Captain Francisco Cumberland."



Hands on hips, Murdock paced a step or two away from Willow. "Francisco Cumberland knew what this…Curator is, and he told you not to tell anyone?"



"Yes, sir."



Inhaling a deep draught of air, Murdock closed his eyes briefly, then opened them to spear Willow. "Cumberland's not your commanding officer anymore. I am. And as your CO, I am giving you a direct order—"



"Please, don't, sir." It was the plea of a child.



Murdock did not relent. "You are aware that if you don't tell me, you'll be disobeying a direct order of your commanding officer. That is a court-martial offense. So is potentially endangering the lives of your fellow crewmembers. Is that what you want?"



Tara could see Willow was wavering; however, she knew that trying to browbeat the information out of her was the wrong approach. Willow Rosenberg would throw away her career and her freedom to keep her word. "Captain, wait." She stepped between Willow and Murdock, forming a barrier between the two. "This isn't a question of trust, on her part. She sees a no-win situations and she's trying—"



"Lieutenant, you're here at my sufferance," Murdock cut her off, "and if you can't keep quiet, you can leave." The emotional flames that threatened to singe her mind mirrored the anger in his eyes.



Devereux stepped to Murdock's side. "You want to chastise my staff, Captain, fine. But you do it through me."



The captain swung on the older man. "I will 'chastise' whomever I wish, and in whatever manner I wish!"



Out of the corner of her eye, Tara could see Willow grit her teeth in disgust, a repugnance of the male ego that Tara felt as well. Seeing that her superior was about to retort angrily, she stepped in hard: "Gentlemen! Can we focus on the problem, please? With all due respect, sirs, you can whip 'em out later." Ignoring the double-take from Murdock and the bemused grin from Devereux, she turned towards Willow, stepping a little into her personal space. "Willow…I know that keeping this promise to Captain Cumberland is like having a little piece of him to keep for yourself. But if he promised you to keep this secret in the first place, then Curator, whatever it is, must be something…bad. Right?"



Willow shrugged. "Well, it's…dangerous, sort of."



"Okay. Then, if the Maquis get a hold of it, then it could cause a lot of, um, trouble…damage…loss of life…am I warm?" At Willow's nod, she went on. "I would think Captain Cumberland would want you to prevent that. I-I mean, based on what I've read about him…"



Willow's eyes seemed to fill with tears, but they didn't quite fall. "I suppose I knew it all the time."



"Yes, but you had to struggle with it first."



Taking another deep breath, Willow looked at Captain Murdock, who had been standing against his desk. "Captain, I'm sorr—"



"Save it, Willow," Murdock interjected, though in a more conciliatory tone. "You were saying…?" he prompted.



"Well, the planet that we're heading towards, that is, Curator is actually, uh," Willow began, falling into babble-mode, "gosh, now that I think of it, you're probably going to find this hard to believe…"



"Chop it off and say it," the captain said in great exasperation.



"It's the Guardian of Forever."



The ready room was silent, except for the distant, almost subliminal hum from the warp engines. Murdock blinked, stepped closer to Willow, glanced at Devereux and Tara, and then asked, "The Who of What?"



_________________



"Honey, in case you didn't hear me the first six thousand times: no more teleportation spells."

CaptMurdock
 


Re: Equilibration

Postby skeeter451 » Sun Jun 15, 2003 7:56 am

Quote:
"It's the Guardian of Forever."




Way cool!

skeeter451
 


Re: Equilibration

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Sun Jun 15, 2003 9:57 am

What's hap'n'n, Cap'n? A lot, it would appear...



As ever, CM, I commend you on your ability to make a science/technology-based story come alive by way of its characters, thereby roping me shamelessly into the loop of devoted readers. I thought that the monologue by Kolrami was just wonderful, particularly the wistfulness of her later sentences. You also use very effective metaphors and analogies, such as likening Willow's initial reaction to what she was learning to the "proverbial bad knee on a rainy day." It just brought it home perfectly. Of course, I had to love Tara's gumption at inviting herself to the ready-room conference, not to mention her dictate (no pun intended) that they "whip 'em out later." It seems like it's easier for Tara to be bold in the service of others (esp. Willow) than for herself.



I also just love your humor; for example: "Willow was banging away – not literally, thankfully -- at the Science station on the bridge when Tara arrived there several hours later." Touches like that just make the story so warm and accessible, at least for me.



Finally, as I hope I've told you before, you have a great mastery of the fundamentals of writing. I think a lot of people forego attention to such basics as grammar and syntax, but for me, such things speak to the care an author puts into her or his story. So thanks immensely for this gem, CM. I'm truly relishing it!



Mary

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Re: Equilibration, Chapter 8 (continued)

Postby Captain Serek » Sun Jun 15, 2003 10:32 am

Captain, Once again, great..you even timed it like a commercial break break, making us, your loyal audience want more. It was like butter, creamy and delicious over warm sourdough bread. I also like the twists and turns, I will be interesting to see who from ours or the Scoobie universe turns up in your story. As always, looking forward to more.

Captain Serek
 


Re: Equilibration

Postby Willowfan » Sun Jun 15, 2003 1:07 pm

Holy Hotdogs and hamburgers! the Guardian of Forever!! That...oh my geez...Willow...Willow can go home! (cept for that pesky Starfleet protocol)...oh...and will Tara want to go with her? Will Willow even want to leave? Will they stop the maquis? It's all to confusing. I can't wait for more of this story....please write more soon.:bow



Willowfan:)

Willowfan
 


Re: Equilibration

Postby WebWarlock » Mon Jun 16, 2003 6:30 am

Again, to quote Stan Marsh from South Park, "Holy Crap Dude!"



My, my, my Captain, you are weaving quite the tale here.

Love the part where Tara got all large with the butch. Between that and Willow's little revelation, that must be the first time that Murdock has been taken aback in years.



The Gaurdian of Forever. Now that is cool. Somehow maximum warp doesn't seem fast enough.



Willow is certainly impressive. Even getting praise from a Zak Dorn. It's amazing what sort of story you can get from someone when they love the characters, and it shows.



Warlock

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Re: Equilibration, Chapter 8 (continued)

Postby TexanZeppo256 » Tue Jun 17, 2003 1:26 am

Howdy Capt. I’ve been reading your fanfic, and I must say that I am impressed; the detail with witch you describe the world around the characters is refreshingly deep, and you keep both the characters of Willow and Tara true to their Buffy counterparts. Your use of thinly veiled angst amongst the senior staff is also something to be commended, praised and envied, as I myself lack such subtlety in my writings.



[random thoughts from a geek]



However, I have two minor critiques: First, in the Star Trek universe, I believe that the predecessor to the Nebula class destroyer was the Miranda class destroyer (re: USS Reliant, NCC-1864) as both are defined by a primary saucer section with two warp nacelles attached directly to the ventral portion of said saucer section and a weapons pod attached to the dorsal portion. Second, perhaps I’m just too used to Picard and Riker, but I highly doubt that any starship captain, no matter how ostracized nor jovial, would conduct his ship in such a lax manner; the Hamilton may not be a Galaxy class cruiser, but she’s no garbage scow either.



[/random thoughts from a geek]



The Gaurdian of Forever: Wasn't that like a time or space portal of some kind that popped up during the original Trek Series?



Also, really liking the plot, but would like more Willow/Tara goodness even more!



Please keep the updates coming!

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T: Ego tam aberraveram...

W: Te repperi. Semper te reperiam.




(Translated from "The Gift")

Edited by: TexanZeppo256 at: 6/17/03 12:27 am
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Re: Equilibration

Postby mollyig » Tue Jun 17, 2003 2:05 am

Great how Tara didn't ask to be invited when Murdock wanted a private word with Lt Rosenberg. Her defence of Willow helping her self confidence as well as building more trust between them. I also like how she was able to convince Willow to explain what she knew of the Curator.

I say love will come to you. Hoping just because I spoke the words that they're true.

As if I offered up a crystal ball to look through. Where there's now one there will be two.
Indigo Girls

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Re: Equilibration

Postby bluewillowwitch » Tue Jun 17, 2003 2:49 am

:bigwave Capt,

:sh :bow Great Update! can't wait for more. I love where this seems to be going. The Gaudian of Forever MMMM?







bluewillowwitch :glasses :flower :fallen

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"Fate keeps on happening."--Anita Loos

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Re: Equilibration, Chapter 8 (continued)

Postby xita » Tue Jun 17, 2003 8:29 am

Captain, you've kicked it up now, the plot is in gear and I am intrigued. I am intrigued by what Willow knew so long ago and why it is coming into play now. I love seeing w/t working together too, they always make a good team :)

-----------------------------------
Leora......Leora....

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Re: Equilibration

Postby Kalita » Tue Jun 17, 2003 9:17 am

Hey, that was kinda cool. I thought of the GoF at the same moment Willow did, with all the 'curator' word-association fun. I guess I'm really showing my Trek roots now, eh?



Still more and more interesting. Can't wait to see the next part!

Kalita
 


Re: Equilibration

Postby jixer » Tue Jun 17, 2003 3:57 pm

Hello Kittens-



GLEEP! The Guardian of Forever? And Faith? Definite GLEEP.



But then there's Willow too. If ever there was a voyager torn betwixt then and now it's Willow.



Looks like its going to be a bumpy flight.



Jixer

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Re: Equilibration

Postby shuyaku » Tue Jun 17, 2003 8:51 pm

Great update Cap'n! I love Tara's assertiveness. Not once, but twice she proves that she is a valuable asset to the crew especially after losing her lunch in the last update. And Kolrami being jealous of Willow - how cool is that? Go Willow!! :bounce



The Guardian of Forever can only spell trouble :shock



Can't wait for more...

-shuyaku

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Yee-ha!

Postby notl33t » Thu Jun 19, 2003 7:25 am

I love you I love you I love you very much. This is a great story. I used to be a major Trekkie, but fell off the bandwagon when DS9 ended and Voyager took the helm. I couldn't bear Enterprise, though I found it amusing, and Buffy was always #1 or #2 on my priority list.



So imagine my surprise and delight when I started reading your fic! My face lit up and my fellow students even five terminals away watched me jump up and down with amusement and vigor. It's not that you've taken two things that I have loved for a couple of years and melded them in a creative way, it's not just that. You've managed to write a beautiful story with wonderful characters who support and drive the story, a plot that mesmerizes me and all while bringing two of my favorite characters, w/t, to life in this beautiful, almost tangible way.



Thank you.



-Noe:shy

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Re: Equilibration

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Jun 28, 2003 12:22 pm

I had to look up what the Guardian was: TOS: City on the Edge of Forever. Assuming the maquis know at least some of the details I can't help but wonder whatever they plan to accomplish by going there. It's not like they're better of without the federation :-)



I admire Willow's loyalty to her former captain, it's not entirely logical though. They ARE on a course to that location already, there is very little point in Willow NOT telling them what is there. They'll discover it sooner or later either way.



Of course Tara wanted to be with Willow when she was send to the captains room. Doesn't mean it's logical he didn't kick her out as soon as he saw her. I'll give her credit for courage and figuring out brute force wouldn't work on Willow anyway. Doesn't make me have a lot of faith in the chain-of-command though.



Should be most interesting to see if one can influence to what time the Guardian sends you. That would put Willow in not-so-nice position..hmm.... Faith and Warren stuck somewhere in WorldWar #2 suits me fine, it's also a nice choke-point... point phasers at the guardian-thingie and wait for the evil people to come back out.



Heh, Willow calling the Memory Alpha computer a piece of antique junk; either it's VERY old or Willow has adapted very fast to current technology.



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 6/28/03 11:26 am
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Re: Equilibration

Postby TareBearRS » Sat Jun 28, 2003 12:35 pm

Wow cool update.



teh guearian of forever huh.. i can't wait to see what that will bring..



Renate

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Re: Yee-ha!

Postby Willowfan » Sat Jun 28, 2003 12:44 pm

Quote:
Assuming the maquis know at least some of the details I can't help but wonder whatever they plan to accomplish by going there.




From what I understand, the Maquis have NO idea what they are going after. All they know is that is is SO top secret, it HAS to be something important that they can A) Use themselves. or B) They can steal and sell for financing.



I love the story so far, and Willow would want to maintain secrecy because it is ordered by starfleet. you don't break Top Secret protocol willy-nilly. There are reasons for everything, and Willow (I love her to death, but I have to point it out) should be AT LEAST reprimanded for breaching the protocol by telling what she was supposed to keep secret.



just my 2 cents.



Willowfan

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"Since before your sun burned hot in space..."

Postby CdrEnfield » Mon Jun 30, 2003 2:52 am

Still the best line ever uttered on network television.



Cap'n my Cap'n,



Thanks for the update. I miss the 24th century, particularly our version of it, so I am glad to get caught up again in the adventures of Lt. (j.g.) Willow Rosenberg.



I was wondering how you were planning on getting Willow back to the 23rd century (or, at least to make the attempt), and a dead world orbiting a dead star kind of cinched it for me, although I am not disappointed; far from it, I await the next installment with a worm on my tongue (baited breath).



This could make one hell of an epilogue and serve to bring two of my favorite characters back to give Murdock some heat; Dulmer and Lucsly from "Trials and Tribble-ations." This is if Willow goes and Tara decides to go with her. Just a suggestion.



On to other matters.



To TexanZeppo256



Quote:
However, I have two minor critiques: First, in the Star Trek universe, I believe that the predecessor to the Nebula class destroyer was the Miranda class destroyer (re: USS Reliant, NCC-1864) as both are defined by a primary saucer section with two warp nacelles attached directly to the ventral portion of said saucer section and a weapons pod attached to the dorsal portion. Second, perhaps I’m just too used to Picard and Riker, but I highly doubt that any starship captain, no matter how ostracized nor jovial, would conduct his ship in such a lax manner; the Hamilton [sic] may not be a Galaxy class cruiser, but she’s no garbage scow either.




If I get what you're saying correctly Texan, your first point is that the current Hannibal couldn't possibly be named after the classic Hannibal as the two aren't a match in configuration. Just to let others know, the original starship Hannibal was a Saladin class destroyer with only one engine nacelle attached to the ventral portion of its saucer section. In answer, we are not talking upgrade, like the Enterprises (original series, then A-E) we are talking a ship class that needs names and Hannibal was pulled out of the hat on this occassion.



The name Farragut is a good example in canonical Trek as it were. It started in Trek as a Constitution class, and was introduced at the end of Star Trek: Generations as a Nebula class. Same with the Intrepid (Voyager is an Intrepid class vessel) and a lot of other ships.



Second point, lackadaisical command style. I would have you refer, if you haven't already, to Peter David's New Frontier novels, starring Capt. Mackenzie Calhoun and his wild bunch. Captain Calhoun has a Mugato security officer ferchrissakes! He is also familiar with his crew to the same degree that Captain Murdock is with his.



Anyways, time to go sleepy by.



Enfield out.

CdrEnfield
 


Re: Equilibration

Postby Captain Serek » Mon Jun 30, 2003 9:20 am

Cdr Enfield. good to see you. As stated, besides Enterprise, there are several ships that have more than one class from it's previous one. The Defiant started as a Constitution class before it became the ships in DS9, Excalibur went from a Constitution to an Ambassador and is now a Galaxy according to the books (although I disagree with it's registry number and I've corrected it in my database), the aforementioned Farragut, which was also an Excelsior class as well as shown in DS9's Chrysalis, Inrepid, as mentioned before and my reseach showed that in The Voyage Home, there was a Miranda class Intrepid in spacedock that was disabled by the probe, it is in the widescreen version, the dialogue was removed but the ship is there. Needless to say, most of the original Constitutions are now very different classes in the 24th century. So the fact that Lt. Rosenberg came from the now decommissioned/destroyed Saladin class Hannibal and is currently acting as a mission specialist on the Nebula class Hannibal is not out of probabilty. There are many ship lists out there and I am in the process up updating mine. Sorry to go off topic but I had to put in my two strips of latinum.

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Re: Yee-ha!

Postby Willowfan » Mon Jun 30, 2003 10:35 am

Let's not forget the flagship of the fleet, good captians.



Enterprise, Enterprise-A: Constitution Class'

Enterprise-B: Excelsior Class

Enterprise-C: Ambassador Class

Enterprise-D: Galaxy Class

Enterprise-E: Sovereign Class



So I concur with the Captians...Willow serving on one class of Hannibal, then having a different Hannibal class is NOT improbible.



Besides...with Willow and Tara...didn't you expect the extraordinary...maybe a little magic...a lot of love...and, of course, the impossible, made possible. Our girls just kind of...make that happen, don't they?;)



Can't wait for more...

Willowfan:)



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Re: "Since before your sun burned hot in space..."

Postby CaptMurdock » Thu Jul 03, 2003 12:24 am

Ah, so wonderful to see so many people debating the merits of my stories, including my old friends CdrEnfield and Capta and my best (and most insightful) critic Grimlock72. Nice to know somebody's actually reading this miniature epic.



RE: the command structure of the Hannibal: I will agree it's a far cry from anything you'd see under Jean-Luc Picard. That's because Ulysses Murdock is a far different sort of man. Just how different, some of you have gleaned for yourselves, or as in the case of my old cronies, have known for years. Plus, we are talking about Starfleet, which at best is a shadow of the current-day military organizations we are more familiar with. Some Trek writers have likened it more to the old French Foreign Legion, an organization where protocol and saluting were not a priority much of the time. Other writers, choosing to emphasize the original mandate of exploration in Gene's original concept of the show, compared Starfleet to Jacque Cousteau's band of explorers, who sailed dangerous waters to confront the Giant Man-Eating Foul-Tempered Bad-Smelling Exploding Octopus, jumping overboard to jab it in the ass with a turkey baster, whilst Jacque stayed onboard the Calypso and munched on a croissant!



(Sorry, I seemed to have channeled Richard Jeni in there...)



I am working on the next chapter, but it may be some time before I can put it up. Y'see, I'm undergoing something of a lifestyle change at the moment: Mrs. CaptMurdock and I have bought an RV, are selling our mobile home, and are preparing to tootle about the western United States. I will be checking in with this board from time to time, as the RV is equipped with a satellite dish that (hopefully) will interface with my new laptop and allow me to surf the Net a little. I hope to see you all again soon. Love you all!



:willow + :tara 4ever!



And, to leave you with another quote from the Guardian:



"Many such journeys are possible. Let me be your gateway."

_________________



"Honey, in case you didn't hear me the first six thousand times: no more teleportation spells."

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Re: Equilibration

Postby Willowfan » Sat Jul 19, 2003 9:06 am

I can't wait for an update on this story! It's wonderful...please...more soon?



Willowfan:)

Willowfan
 


The Return of the Captain

Postby CaptMurdock » Sun Aug 03, 2003 10:42 am

Hello there! Yes, I'm alive and well. The family is ensconced in our little (35-foot? Little?) motorhome, touring the highways and byways of America (at the moment, Las Vegas) and just generally having as good a time as possible in the process.



Unfortunately, the whole satellite-internet thing is not to be, as it is prohibitively expensive (hey, filthy rich, we ain't). Right now, I'm connecting from a dialup in the RV park we are currently at. I'm hoping to get a connection using my Sprint cellular phone -- it's just a matter of getting the right cable.



Anyway, I love you all, and I am working on the next chapter (on my new iBook!)



:willow + :tara 4evah!

_________________



"Honey, in case you didn't hear me the first six thousand times: no more teleportation spells."

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Re: "Since before your sun burned hot in space..."

Postby xita » Sun Aug 03, 2003 8:27 pm

Captain , I envy you I really do. I hope you are having lots of fun!

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"The suspense is terrible. I hope it'll last."


-Willie Wonka

xita
 


Re: Equilibration

Postby jixer » Sun Aug 03, 2003 10:32 pm

Hello Kittens-



New iBook?!? :drool



Ah yes, the family vacation. The perfect example of "no plan survives first contact with the enemy". Stout work on the keeping on with the story, and may the connections be kind.





Jixer

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Re: The Return of the Captain

Postby Kalita » Fri Aug 08, 2003 3:15 pm

IBook, cool!



I wish I was more of a Mac nut, I would have an instantly improved sense of style. Ah well, not to be.



Looking forward to more! Have fun on the road!

"Never doubt that a small group of thoughtful, committed citizens can change the world. Indeed, it’s the only thing that ever has. "

- Margaret Mead

Kalita
 


Re: "Since before your sun burned hot in space..."

Postby TareBearRS » Mon Aug 11, 2003 1:56 pm

The Guardian of forever.. ow boy the Maquis better not get their hands on that...



Renate

***I will make me a willow cabin at your gate and call upon my soul within the house... I rush into the secret house***

TareBearRS
 


Equilibration, Chapter 9

Postby CaptMurdock » Sat Aug 16, 2003 10:53 am

Title: Equilibration



Chapter Nine



Disclaimer: The characters of Willow Rosenberg and Tara Maclay, as well as Buffy Summers, Xander Harris, Faith, Warren Mears, Jonathan Levinson and Charles Gunn, or the reasonable facsimiles that I employ in this story, are the property of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy productions. The setting for the story is within the universe of Star Trek, created by Gene Roddenberry and owned by Paramount Pictures, Inc. No infringement of copyright is intended. The other characters are the creation of either myself or several colleagues who have given me permission to use them. In any case, I'm a firm believer in Kasden's Law ("If you steal from one source, it's plagiarism; if you steal from ten sources, it's research.")



Pairing: W/T (not precisely the Willow and Tara that we all know and love -- but close enough for government work.)



Spoilers: None (as this does not take place in the Buffyverse at all, we're all safe as far as that goes. As to Trek, this takes place mid- Deep Space Nine (call it third or fourth season).



Rating: PG-13.



Summary: A young 23rd-century Starfleet officer named Willow Rosenberg finds herself stranded in the 24th century. Ninety years later, Tara Maclay, an assistant counselor on the ship that rescues Willow, endeavors to help her with more than professional dedication. They both are newcomers to a somewhat eccentric crew, led by a captain who is a lot more than he seems. Meanwhile, the rebel group known as the Maquis, led by an unusual troika, are on a mysterious quest that may jeopardize the very existence of the Federation.



Feedback: CORRECTED EMAIL ADDRESS!! captmurdock@msn.com. Thanks.



Distribution: For God's sake, don't put this on a Trek board without asking me first! I'll lose all my street cred. :-)



****



Chapter 9



“As the duck once said,” Murdock remarked drily after hearing Willow’s explanation, “now I’ve heard everything.”



“Um...wow,” Tara whispered.



“I need a second here, kids,” Devereux said, shaking his head. “So on this dead planet is a sentient time-portal, which apparently has been there for billions of years...” he trailed off, looking at Willow in confirmation of his summation.



“Yep...I mean, yes, sir,” Willow attested.



“Said time-portal, or...what was it you called it?”



“The Guardian of Forever. Actually, Doctor, that’s what it calls itself. Or called itself, when it was discovered--”



“Ye gods, the damn thing talks,” Devereux said, shaking his head. “Anyway, this ‘Guardian’ was discovered over a century ago, and the Federation has been keeping it a secret ever since, right?”



Murdock shrugged. “Doesn’t surprise me that much. Back around the turn of the millenium, the United States government kept a secret base in the middle of Nevada, less than two hundred miles from one of the largest entertainment complexes in the entire world, and for decades no one but the government, and the incurably paranoid conspiracy theorists of the time, even knew of its existence.”



“I read about this, sir,” Willow said brightly, forgetting the urgent matters of the moment in her enthusiasm. “That was the place where they stored the bodies of the little green men who supposedly crash-landed on Earth after the Second World War--”



Tara sensed a certain discomfort in Murdock, as if a long-buried memory struggled to unbury itself in his mind. “Lieutenant, I’m not interested in green men, little or otherwise,”-- a single styptic blink seemed to interrupt his thoughts -- “at least, not at this time. I’d like to focus on our current situation.”



“Oh yes! Sorry, Captain. I know, I need to try not to go off on, well, tangents...”



“Like you’re about to now. Okay, so, I’m assuming there is some sort of scientific outpost on this planet, studying the Guardian. They’ve probably been filing reports for decades to Starfleet and various agencies, with encrypted copies of the reports archived at Memory Alpha. Now, the Maquis are on their way to the planet, maybe aware of the nature of the Guardian, maybe not. We’ve already sent word to the Trieste to intercept them, but we can’t be sure they’ll succeed. I've had Kolrami attempt to contact any scientific team on the planet, but we've gotten no response.”



Willow answered the unasked question. “They wouldn’t answer, sir. The outpost group, at least back in the old days, was under strict orders not to acknowledge any signals, emergency or otherwise, that doesn’t have the proper code heading. Security reasons.”



Tara’s brow knitted. “Wouldn’t the outpost have a large security force of its own?”



Willow shook her head. “I don’t think so. The planet is way off the beaten path; most of the trade routes pass far away from it, and there isn’t an inhabited world for over twenty parsecs. Nobody goes there. The only reason that it was discovered at all was because the Guardian was emitting, I don’t know, some kind of temporal harmonic, that was disturbing the fabric of local space. But it never happened again after that, so it must have been some sort of transient effect.”



“Like hiccups?” Devereux suggested.



Murdock shot him an annoyed look, which the counselor answered with a shrug, then turned back to Willow. “There is one question I have to ask you, Lieutenant: if this Guardian has been such a secret for so long, even back during your former era...how is it that you know about it in the first place?”



Willow cringed, looking so woebegone that Tara, already sympathetic to her friend’s situation, felt her heart leap out of her chest in Willow’s general direction. “I was afraid you were going to ask that, sir...”



“Well, you can stop living in fear, kid. Start talking.”



Willow took a deep breath, not so much as a stalling tactic as she really needed the oxygen to fortify her brain. “Well, it had to do with these guys, okay, some of them were women, but you get the idea, we weren’t really sure where they came from, and by ‘we’ I mean Captain Cumberland and the rest of the Hannibal crew, but I think they were some sort of time-travellers or dimension-travellers, the name we eventually stuck to them was ‘The Revisionists’ --” Willow stopped as both Murdock and Devereux reacted to the mention of the name. “You’ve heard of the Revisionists, sir? Sirs?”



“We got wind of ‘em,” Devereux replied dryly.



“I haven’t heard of them,” Tara interjected, a slight pout at being left out of the loopcrossing her features. Willow took a half-second to regard the blonde’s expression, deciding it was adorable.



“It’s a long story, Counselor, and right now we have enough of those,” Murdock said, not unsympathetically. “Anyway, Lieu-- Willow, you were saying Captain Cumberland had encountered these Revisionists, and?”



“He wanted to find out if there was some method of correcting any damaged they might do to the timeline, so he asked me to find out if Starfleet knew of anything like that.”



“Okay. What made him think that you, in particular, would be able to accomplish this?”



The redhead gave a self-effacing grin. “Oh, uh, gee, uh, he, that is, the captain, he knew about certain, um, talents of mine, y’know, with computers and such...”



Tara piped up suddenly. “Does this have to do with how you managed to get yourself , Buffy and Xander assigned to the same ship right out of the Academy?” Willow’s immediate and remarkable blush was more than adequate testimony to the question. Devereux looked at Willow with fresh appraisal, then smiled at Tara for her observation.



Murdock, too, was seeing Willow as if for the first time. “Multi-talented, aren’t you? So, in other words, you hacked into the Federation archives or whatever, and found out about the Guardian. Then what?” Willow looked askance, then was about to plunge in when the captain reconsidered. “On second thought, don’t. Unless you think that whatever happened ninety-odd years ago has anything to do with our current situation...”



“No. I mean, no, Captain.”



“Then we’ll leave that sleeping dog alone. If at any time you feel that the situation warrents it, however...”



“I’ll publish it in paperback, sir.”



“Just the Cliff Notes will do fine, Lieutenant,” Murdock said, smiling. “One more thing...given all the circumstances surrounding this mission and your own personal situation, I suppose it’s understandable that you would be reluctant to divulge any information as sensitive as this. But in this future, I do hope you would give me the benefit of the doubt and put your trust in me a little more readily.”



Willow nodded, chastened. “Yes, sir. I’ll remember.” She hesitated as a new thought struck her, then added, “Captain, I know it’s not my place to ask this, but about the Guardian...it really is kinda dangerous, in the whole rewrite-history-even-if-you-don’t-intend-to sense, and the more people who know about it...”



“Noted, Lieutenant,” Murdock said, cutting her off. He considered the matter for a second, then stated, “Protocol demands that, as first officer, Faraday needs to be told about this. Otherwise,” he glanced over at Devereux, “we’ll keep this on the QT. Maclay, I don’t need to tell you to keep mum on this,” he noted Tara’s slow nod, “so I won’t. I’m just going to tell the rest of the senior officers that the Maquis are something unspecified, and let it go at that. Since we are assuming, with some justification, that the Maquis themselves don’t know what they are after, this is a fairly safe course of action. Dr. Devereux and I will brief Commander Faraday, then we’ll convene a meeting of the senior officers. The two of you are dismissed.”



Tara and Willow got up from the couch and had walked to the door of the ready room when Murdock’s voice stopped them. “Oh, Lt. Maclay? Ten more seconds, if you please.” Tara looked puzzled. Willow smiled encouragingly at her friend and exited the readyroom, leaving Tara to turn around to face the captain again.



“Yes, sir?”



Murdock folded his arms and regarded his junior officer. “Tara, you have been a splendid addition to this crew since you’ve come on board.”



Tara dimpled and ducked her head slightly. “Thank you, sir.”



“That’s why I’m going to led that ‘whip them out’ comment slide by, and just remind you that that is not the usual language of Starfleet officers.”



Fighting the urge to lower her gaze to the deck entirely, Tara gulped and replied, “Aye, sir.”



“Dismissed.” As soon as the ready room doors shut on Tara’s departing figure, Murdock allowed the grin that he did not want her to see bloom on his face. “’Whip ‘em out.’ Good for her!” He looked over at Devereux, who had been having trouble holding in his laughter and now was letting loose. “Protocol or no, it’s nice to know that she will stand up to me under the right circumstances.”



“Yes, it is good to know,” Devereux agreed, regaining his composure. “And quite frankly, Sam, you had it coming.”



Murdock gave him a wan smile and a sarcastic ha-ha. “Thank you very little, Charlie.” Hitting his combadge, he intoned, “Number One, please report to the ready room.” Closing the comline, he added, “Now the real fun begins.”



****



Several hours later, as the Hannibal raced towards its destination and the impending confrontation with the Maquis, Tara ran across Willow again in the library. “Hi!”



“Hey,” Willow replied, her concentration shifting momentarily from the console display she was working on to Tara and back again. “What brings you to the Black Pit?” She noted absently that Tara was holding a PADD in one hand.



“I was doing, um, a little research,” the blonde responded diffidently. Willow arched her eyebrows at the somewhat mysterious undertone. “N-nothing important, really, just something that’s been, well, bothering me.”



“Well, dig out the crayon marked ‘intrigued’ and color me with it,” Willow said, indicating the chair next to her for Tara to sit down. With a huff, she did. “Now, what’s caused the grand opening at the Curiousity Shoppe?”



Tara rolled her eyes. In the manner of most obsessions, to an outsider this would seem so trivial... Yet, Willow had always been open with her about all sorts of matters; to prevaricate in return would be, well, rude. “It’s about Char-- Dr. Devereux. I had some questions about him that I needed answered.”



“What kinda questions?” When Tara did not immediately reply, Willow’s imagination went transwarp. “Omigod...is he some kinda spy? Maybe, maybe he’s secretly one of the Maquis! He-he could be feeding them information--”



“Willow!” shouted Tara. “Stop. Dr. Devereux is not a Maquis spy.” Pause. “At least, I-I don’t think he is. Dammit, Willow, now you’ve got me wondering!”



The science officer could not help but giggle. “I’m sorry. My brain is dangerous, and must be contained at all costs. What were you wondering about Dr. Devereux?”



Tara paused for a second, taking a moment to organize her thoughts. “Did, um, did you know that he wasn’t always a counselor? Dr. Devereux, I mean.” Willow’s headshake prompted her to go on. “I’ve been researching his Starfleet record. He used to be in the command division, taking on lots of high-profile assignments and stuff.”



“Real fast-track kind of guy?”



“Um-hmmm. After he made lieutenant commander, he was seconded to Starfleet Intelligence for some, uh, covert operation stuff.”



Willow grimaced. “Are we talking ‘I’d tell ya but then I’d have to kill ya’ territory?”



Tara smiled in spite of herself. “Maybe I can just ask him to give me the highlights, and just kick me in the shins!” She sobered abruptly. “Anyway, it was on one of these, um, missions, that his wife died.” She sighed.



“Did they have any kids?” Willow asked.



“No, at least not as far as the record shows. After he found out-- see, he was out of normal communications for several months -- he took a medical leave for--”



“For what?” Willow prodded, when Tara didn’t continue.



Tara shook her head. “I think I’m getting into areas covered by counselor confidentiality. I’m sorry, I-I didn’t mean to lay this all on you...”



“Hey, c’mon, what are friends for?” Willow smiled back.



Friends, Tara thought, what exactly does that entail, and more to the point, not entail? She pushed that notion out; now was not the time to drag that discussion up. Deliberately, she changed the subject. “Wh-what are you working on?”



“Oh, this is just that analysis of DNA fragments that we picked up on Memory Alpha,” Willow replied, turning back to the console, a little guiltily. She felt that she really should have had this finished hours ago... “Lucky for me, I had the services of a whole bunch’a science grunts to do the collection and collation. All I’ve needed to do was eliminate all the Memory Alpha personnel and Hannibal crew from the Great Nucleotide Stew. It was easy...easy as, well, really hard pie.”



“I would have thought that you could do this in one of the science labs.”



Willow nodded. “I could, but the technicians...they’re nice and all, but they always ask me silly questions about where I came from: what we did for entertainment without holodecks, and did we have replicators, and what James Kirk was really like. Like I knew him.



Tara smiled. “Did you find anything interesting?”



“Oh, definitely!” Willow tapped a retrieval command into the console. The screen changed to show a particular set of DNA codes, cross-referenced to a Starfleet service record. A visual document also appeared, showing a young male human with pale skin, close-cropped black hair that seemed plastered to his skull, wearing a Starfleet operations division uniform and a rather pinched expression on his face. The legend above the service read LEVINSON, JONATHAN X.



“He was in Starfleet?” Tara asked, almost instantly regretting such an obvious question.



Willow either did not notice the self-evident nature of Tara’s question or chose to ignore it. “Yep. It says here that Jonathan Levinson went AWOL about eight months ago. There’s a notation that Starfleet Intelligence suspected that he defected to the Maquis. Well, I guess we can tell them that he’s definitely on the Bad Guy list.”



“Or at least cancel his subscription to the official Starfleet newsletter,” Tara quipped.



Willow swung around, amazed. “We have one of those now?”



“N-no, sweetie...I was making a joke. Or, trying to.” The crestfallen expression on Tara’s face made Willow grin sympathetically.



“I found this one genotype that seemed a little weird, the science officer said, calling up one particular DNA profile. “I mean, baseline, it’s human, female,” Willow indicated a single sequence in the DNA fragment, “but this here, I’ve never seen a nucleotide sequence like that before. I really don’t know if it means anything, but there we are.



“Anyway, I was just about finished, when I found this DNA set here,” Willow added, calling up a third record. “There seems to be some kind of ribocyatic ‘tags’ attached to the main nucleotide strands. I was wondering if it was some sort of exotic disease, but these extra sequences are far too orderly.”



“Then they were placed there deliberately,” Tara concluded. “Why would someone do that? I mean, if they were trying to disguise their DNA, they should have known that a detailed analysis would blow their cover...”



“’Blow their cover.’ That’s it,” Willow muttered, entering another command in. “Now, eliminating the extra DNA tags should reveal that this guy is...”



The two young women stared at the screen, which showed the unaltered DNA profile, and the legend right above the data.



“Great Googly-Moogly,” Willow stammered.



“Th-this might explain certain things,” Tara added. “I think we need to talk to the captain.”



“Right. Uh-huh. Gotcha.” After several seconds, Willow shook herself from her reverie and transferred her findings to a PADD. As she finished doing so, the lighting in the library changed subtly, and the computer voice rang out: “Yellow Alert. All hands, go to Yellow Alert.



“What’s going on?” Tara asked.



By way of answering, Willow called up the bridge log on her console. “We’ve dropped out of warp. I think we’re in the system where, uh, you-know-what is.”



Tara stood up. “Let’s get to the bridge.”



****



“Sir, we are at one-half impulse,” said the ensign at the helm. He was not, however, the usual conn officer on duty during this shift.



“Acknowledged. Full scan,” Murdock said, sitting in his captain’s chair.



The crewman at the Tactical position, who was not Thelvran, read the displays and reported, “Captain, I’ve located the Trieste.



“On screen,” Murdock ordered the officer at the Ops console. Again, it was not Kolrami. The science vessel appeared in the center of the viewscreen, in orbit around the ash-grey planet. “Any sign of other vessels?”



“Nothing definite, sir, although there are indications of particle trails, possibly from vessels that have left the area.”



“Understood. What is the Trieste’s condition?” he asked the Ops officer.



“It’s taken some damage, sir. I’m reading massive fluctuations in the primary and secondary power grids.”



At that moment, the turbolift doors opened, admitting Willow and Tara to the bridge. They strode straight to the captain, Willow holding the PADD out to him. It was only after he asked why they were on the bridge, and had taken the PADD with a vaguely irritated air, that Willow and Tara noticed the lack of the usual personnel at the bridge stations. Given that the ship was on Yellow Alert...



Murdock read the findings of Willow’s DNA-fragment analysis. His eyes grew somewhat bigger than usual, but Tara could feel how surprised he truly was. “Now, that’s an interesting twist,” he finally said, handing the PADD back to Willow. “Take your station, please.” He turned back towards the viewscreen.



“Captain,” Willow began, “what’s with all the--”



“Not now,” he cut her off. “Ensign, assume standard orbit and bring us within five thousand kilometers of the Trieste. Lieutenant, open a channel.”



As soon as the Ops officer opened the channel and Murdock identified himself, a voice came over the audio, almost drowned in static: “Hannibal, we’re in serious trouble! We’ve sustained major damage and our warp core is highly destabilized! Recommend immediate emergency transport! Our transporters are out, and we have heavy casualties--” The voice suddenly cut off.



“Willow?” Murdock turned towards the Science station. “What’s it look like to you?”



After consulting her console, she replied, “There’s a lot of subspace fluctuations, that might be caused by a warp core about to rupture. But I can’t tell for sure--”



“Noted, thanks,” came the off-handed reply. Willow glanced over at Tara, who had sat the usually-unoccupied Mission Ops station, and conveyed her confusion by her expression (unnecessary, as Tara could read her disquiet empathically). What’s going on? Tara could only shrug in reply. She could also read the apprehension, and a strange sense of resignation, from Murdock; if she were to articulate it, she would put it as him saying, “Well, here we go.”



“Alright, lower shields and prepare to transport the Trieste’s crew aboard,” the captain was now saying. Willow looked at him again, noting for the first time that, like all the rest of the personnel on the bridge (with the exception of herself and Tara) he was wearing a phaser...



Her console bleeped for attention, and what she saw caused her to shout, “Captain! Multiple transporter beams coming from the Trieste! Decks 4, 8, 15, and--”



Over a dozen columns of fiery sparkles appeared, carrying armed intruders onto the bridge.



TBC

_________________



"Honey, in case you didn't hear me the first six thousand times: no more teleportation spells."

Edited by: CaptMurdock at: 8/15/04 6:21 am
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