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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 26)

Postby Arwen276 » Wed Sep 24, 2003 2:14 pm



And the Winner of the "WOW" CATEGORY IS:



tadammmm

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HELLEBORE!



Chapter 26 also won, the "best dream sequence ever" award, the "most interesting chess game ever" award, and the "best geography lesson ever" award.



Oh and there's one more award that just got in! The "Best snuggles-before-sleep ever" Award!





Tune in for more awards and nominations next update!







~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 26)

Postby FIRESIGN » Wed Sep 24, 2003 3:25 pm

Absolutely OUTSTANDING!!!!



This fic never ceases to amaze me! Please - MORE???!!!!:applause :applause :applause :applause

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What a day!

Postby JustSkipIt » Wed Sep 24, 2003 3:39 pm

Wow, what a day for our girls. For a couple who orginally weren't going to make love until they reached a lodging, they sure do make a lot of wonderful love. How luscious! You do a wonderful job of writing it. I love the last best with together.



And you are doing a wonderful job of integrating the building tension regarding the weather and the danger as well as their playing what seems to me to be a form of chess? Gee playing chess with Willow or Tara in a caravan all day? Except for the chess part, that sounds like heaven to me...



Wonderful. Debra :clap :clap :clap

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"It is better to conquer yourself than to win a thousand battles. Then the victory is yours. It cannot be taken from you, not by angels or demons, heaven or hell." - The Buddha

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Great update!

Postby chilled monkey » Thu Sep 25, 2003 8:57 am

I don't suppose that you based the 'Amazon chess' part on one of Sassette's vignettes in which Willow and Tara play strip chess?



Great update. I love the first part, where Tara is explaining her dream, making sure that Willow doesn't misunderstand it. Very sweet and loving. Excellant! :applause

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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 26)

Postby 2DIAMONDS » Thu Sep 25, 2003 11:20 am

Mmmm yummy update! :drool



I don't want to get my hopes up...and I'm not sure if this is even possible in this fic...through some magic spell or something...Okay, I'll stop my mini-babble and get to my point: Tara's dream, is it possible that Willow and Tara can have a child? A little Willow perhaps? I know, I'm nuts. :(



I agree with Debra - For these two women to want to wait until they reach a more suitable and comfortable location to make love, they sure are making the most of their current surroundings. I hope that when they do reach an inn, there will be an entire, uninterrupted part of Willow and Tara making love, from beginning to end! No discussions of roads, weather, or what's for breakfast...



SIGH...DOUBLE SIGH - Sorry, I still have cherries on my mind. I haven't been the same since. Good job, Chris :clap



And I love that they finally made love to each other "together."



Beautiful update as always!



Helen

xoxo

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Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 26)

Postby Taras Shadow » Thu Sep 25, 2003 12:17 pm

Nummay



Chris, again, speechless, completely and utterly speechless. I don't know what to say anymore without sounding like a broken record. :grin



*awaits patiently for the next update*



Thank you and Take Care :wave



~Holly~ :heart

"I've got this ache, and I thought it was for sex, but it's to tear everything to fucking pieces." Ginger - Ginger Snaps

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Hellbore 27

Postby KatsMeow » Thu Sep 25, 2003 6:18 pm

:applause

Chris...



Your writing just keeps getting better...tighter! It's amazing how your style just keeps improving. I am just in awe of you Chris.



Amazing chapter. I actually saw this was posted last night and I made myself wait to read it until tonight so I could really enjoy it.



This story is absolutely epic and each chapter adds something unique. Adventure/Romance at it's absolute finest.



Bravo! Bravo!



Love,

Kats:kitty

KatsMeow
 


ahem...

Postby KatsMeow » Fri Sep 26, 2003 9:17 am

My last post was directed to chapter 26...not 27.



:boot Shame on me.



*evil smirk*



I'm just a big eager I guess.



:smug

KatsMeow
 


Re: ahem...

Postby Grimlock72 » Fri Sep 26, 2003 10:10 am

So they DO do other things in that wagon then.. : -->>:



It looked a bit like chess to me, in which I've never been much good either. That game did remind me that their journey is rather long and they're stuck most of the time in that wagon. Now I'm sure they like each other a lot but having other games to play is nice too :)



Very sweet how Willow woke Tara up, definitly good dreams... but Willow dreaming of singing mouse... not THATs scarey :)



I wonder if Willow packed any games or just books to read ? Oh yeah, thanks for the map... much appriciated!



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Edited by: Grimlock72 at: 9/27/03 5:46 am
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Re: ahem...

Postby HOPE REIGNS » Fri Sep 26, 2003 11:07 am

Chris,



Needless to say, another wonderful update.:thud



I'm thinking I want to be their wagon driver-hehe. You know that they can hear a lot more than they are letting on :wink .



at least until the next update.:glasses



Thanx,



Anna:p

Thank you Amber and Alyson!!

HOPE REIGNS
 


Re: ahem...

Postby sam7777 » Fri Sep 26, 2003 7:26 pm

Gosh I never knew a wagon ride could be so much fun. I'm not sure I want them to arrive anywhere at this point. Still I'm looking torward to seeing them deal with the rising evil. Great fic!!

Edited by: sam7777  at: 9/26/03 6:27 pm
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Re: Re: ahem...

Postby Artemis » Sun Sep 28, 2003 12:57 am

Thanks everyone :) I've just got a couple of details to work out for the next chapter, it'll probably be done tomorrow night (or, if I suddenly get the wrting bug, tonight, but I'm not promising anything).



sabina: You're looking forward to updates? That's so sweet, thank you :) I promise to keep you all well-supplied for the foreseeable future.



justin: It is chess - I originally meant Lycander to be an Amazon version of Sargon (as in the old chess program named after him), but he was kind of conquest-oriented, so I scaled that back. I also thought about having the Amazons use the variant I play, where a king in check can move like a knight, but I decided to keep it simple.



In case anyone's wondering:

Governor = King

Grand Mistress = Queen

Champion = Bishop

Huntress = Knight

Ballista = Rook

Warrior = Pawn



Arwen: Thanks :) I have no idea where that dream came from, it just, you know, suggested itself, and I went along with it. The 'geography lesson' was sort of inspired by Armageddon, of all things (guilty admission: I really like Armageddon), where Ben Affleck has animal crackers prowling around Liv Tyler's stomach, accompanied by a commentary in a Steve Irwin-esque voice. I plan to tackle other disciplines as the story progresses - astronomy is looking interesting.



Firesign: Thanks :) Of course there'll be more.



Debra: Yep, I wanted there to be some plot in this, not just medieval smut the whole way :) Seeing as they're currently moving through the most lawless part of the land, between realms, everything's a bit tense. But making love is always a good idea :)



chilled monkey: Actually the 'strip chess' idea came about by accident - I was enjoying showing Tara be tricky in the game, she's such a genuine person normally it's actually kind of fun to have her get all devious and cunning, and that's what chess is about, after all. So, she showed a bit of cleavage to distract Willow, and things progressed from there.



Helen: Well, that's forward thinking :) Female Amazon couples generally adopt (in some cases a surrogate, a priest of Elasia, is asked to impregnate one of the women, but adopted children aren't considered any different to biological children by Amazons, even in terms of continuing the family line, so adoption is more common). There are some magics that can manipulate and enhance life-force (variants of Necromancy), but there's no human magic that can create a soul, which would be necessary to magically create a baby. (I'm not saying it's *impossible*...)



And yes, I do intend to have at least one full chapter of making love and damn all else. Possibly more than one, we'll see.



Holly: Thanks :) You take care too.



Kats: Thank you. Actually I've been saving some of the more traditionally epic stuff for the sequel, particularly the world-spanning stuff - this is all happening in a fairly small area of Sanctuary. I'm glad it doesn't feel confined, though.



Grimlock: Willow didn't bring anything much to do apart from the books to read, but that counts as recreation for her :) Yeah, after a while being stuck in a wagon (especially when it's pouring rain outside) gets a bit dull if you can't think of anything to keep yourself occupied. Still more than a week's travel to Duncraig, and they can't just have sex *all* the way... I'd run out of ideas for making one scene different from the last, for one thing :)



Anna: I think, if their driver overhears anything, he'll just keep it to himself. It doesn't do to annoy warriors and mages, after all :)



sam: Thanks :)



Edited to say: Most of today got yummed up by going to see Lara Croft do her thing at the movies, so the next chapter will be tomorrow evening.

Edited by: Artemis at: 9/27/03 11:59 pm
Artemis
 


Hellbore...chapter 27

Postby KatsMeow » Sun Sep 28, 2003 5:12 am

Well...I have my evening planned!



*eagerly waiting for update*;)

KatsMeow
 


Re: Hellbore...chapter 27

Postby TareBearRS » Sun Sep 28, 2003 12:16 pm

I totally love this story!!!

The way you write Tara and Willow, how they discovered their feeling towards eachother and how you wrote them getting closer..sigh... Soo sweet and... not to forget HOT!!!

I need a very cold shower after reading the last updated..



Can't wait for more...



Renate

***I will make me a willow cabin at your gate and call upon my soul within the house... I rush into the secret house***

TareBearRS
 


Re: Hellbore...chapter 27

Postby Artemis » Mon Sep 29, 2003 11:54 am

Kats: Well, here 'tis :)



Renate: Thanks :) I'm glad there's cold-showerness coming through. It's definitely an important part of what I'm hoping to show with their relationship. Obviously the love, in every form, is most important, and I try to keep showing that in all sorts of ways, not just the bedroom action... but if I thought that Willow and Tara, in love with each other and stuck in a caravan full of comfy blankets and with nothing else to do *wouldn't* be all over each other, I'd be kidding myself :)

Artemis
 


FIC: Hellebore (chapter 27)

Postby Artemis » Mon Sep 29, 2003 11:59 am

Hellebore



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: NC-17

Summary: A headstrong sorceress and a young Amazon join forces to locate and destroy an ancient source of demonic power.

Spoilers: None.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy the Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Diablo II' by Blizzard Entertainment. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Twenty-Seven

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Tara woke, yawned, and smiled down at Willow, who was pillowed on her breast and, even in sleep, gave every indication of enjoying her position. She wriggled slightly as Tara stretched, then opened her eyes and blinked lazily.



"'lo," she murmured.



"Hello," Tara replied, grinning.



"Wha' time's it?" Willow asked.



"Early," Tara said, "we're not moving yet."



"Oh, yeah. Raining still," she observed. She peered at Tara in the gloom of the unlit wagon. "What're you grinning at?" she asked.



"You must've been having a good dream," Tara said.



"I must've?" Willow enquired.



"My thigh's between your legs," Tara whispered, "it's, ah, pretty hot and wet down there."



"Heh," Willow chuckled, "yeah, guess it is..."



"Seems a shame to let all that lovely Willow-goodness go to waste," Tara purred, "why don't you bring it up here?" Willow looked hesitant for a moment, but at Tara's obliging nod she lifted herself up on hands and knees and straddled Tara's waist.



"Come on," Tara murmured, "don't be shy." Willow slowly moved further up, letting the blankets fall off her shoulders as she straightened up. Tara reached down an wrapped her arms around Willow's thighs, pulling her hips closer to her mouth.



"That's right," she breathed as Willow knelt on either side of her head, and gently lowered herself. "What a way to wake up..."



"Mmm," Willow agreed as Tara's tongue reached out and made contact with her sex, teasing her lips lightly. She held herself in position, her hands clutched around the front beam of the wagon, enjoying Tara's attention immensely but hesitant to overwhelm her in what was, she had to admit, an extremely vulnerable position. Tara substantially banished those doubts when her arms around Willow's thighs tightened, her mouth opened, and she firmly pulled Willow down onto her.



"Oh gods!" Willow gasped, barely able to stop herself from raising her voice to a pitch that would've had the whole campsite awake. "Oh I love you!" Her hips moved of their own accord, rolling her sex back and forth over Tara's lips as her tongue delved inside her. She still worried a little about pressing down too firmly on Tara, but with Tara not just allowing but downright insisting on such a strong contact, Willow began to let herself enjoy the moment, trusting to Tara to let her know if she needed to lift herself.



For Tara's part, she felt as if she was in heaven, with barely a moment since she had woken up, and already her lungs were full of Willow's scent, her mouth full of her taste, and her ears catching every sigh and moan that came from her lips. She felt Willow's thighs on either side of her tremble, and knew that her climax wasn't far away. Unwinding her right arm from around Willow's leg, she moved her lips up a little to her clit, nibbling and sucking with abandon while clearing the way for her finger to find Willow's entrance and slide into her.



Willow's breathing was fast and shallow, her lungs working to the rhythm Tara was setting within her. She let her head fall forward, staring down at Tara's eyes, which glittered with joy. Between Tara's lips on her clit and the thrusts of her finger into her, Willow felt as if she would either come or explode. Her breath caught, her body tensed and her sex tightened as she began to orgasm, and at that moment, on her last thrust, Tara drove two fingers into Willow and hit her sweet spot hard.



Willow threw her head back and opened her mouth in a silent scream of joy, feeling her insides flip over themselves as her climax began. As her sex began to spasm she suddenly needed Tara desperately, and lifted herself off her, kicking blankets out of the way as she moved her hips back to straddle her waist, grinding her wetness onto her stomach as her mouth found Tara's. She kissed Tara intensely, her passion only strengthened by tasting herself on her lover's lips, her tongue delving into Tara's mouth as she coated her waist with her juices.



Tara cuddled Willow and returned her kiss with matching passion, holding her as her body shook and trembled its way through the aftershocks of her climax. Willow's lips became softer, gentler and less insistent as her body relaxed, and finally she trailed downward, kissing down Tara's jaw and finally resting atop her, her lips pressed against her neck.



"A-are you okay?" Tara asked quietly. "That was kind of..." she paused and searched for the word.



"Wonderful," Willow finished for her. "I'm fine, baby, oh gods I'm fine."



"Good," Tara smiled, "I just... I was a bit, um, well, I came on strong a bit there at the end, I know."



"And I loved it," Willow said, pressing kisses to the side of her neck. "I don't think I'm ever going to sleep in again, if this is what happens when I wake up."



"You liked?" Tara asked rhetorically.



"Oh, baby, I loved," Willow enthused. "At first it was a bit, you know, strange to be... well, sitting on your face," she giggled. "But... oh, you make love to me so beautifully... a-and looking down at you, seeing you like that, enjoying me so much... I swear I could've come just from that sight alone." She smiled, then shifted up a little to bring her eyes level with Tara's.



"What about you?" she asked.



"Me?" Tara smiled, and then adopted her most sensual purr. "The first thing I did this day was to have my beautiful Willow come all over my face... and my stomach... and my leg, if you recall..." She grinned cheekily. "I guess you could say I'm well covered."



"Minx," Willow said, kissing her.



"It was exciting, hot... I felt really close to you, really... intimate," Tara said. Willow wrapped her arms tight around Tara and hugged her.



"I love you," she murmured. "Have I mentioned that yet today?"



"Yes you have," Tara grinned, "vehemently. I love you too, Willow. I love everything that you are, completely."



"You've got everything that I am," Willow promised, "completely. Ahhh," she sighed.



"I guess," she added after a moment, "one of us is going to have to go out in that rain and get breakfast."



"I'll go," Tara offered.



"No, I'll go," Willow insisted, "you went out last night, it's my turn."



"I'll change the blankets while you're out," Tara said.



"Yeah, we could probably use a new set," Willow mused, sitting up and reaching for the bag with her travelling clothes. "Oh, hey, how about you put a pan out on the front and catch some rainwater? I've got an itching to run my hands all over you, and a bath seems like a good excuse."



"Since when did you need an excuse?" Tara joked, sitting up as Willow dressed. Willow leaned over to her, cupping her left breast and squeezing firmly while her lips sought out Tara's mouth, opened it, and her tongue dove inside.



"I'm trying to be a modest lady," Willow said with a formal air, and a sly smile tugging the corners of her mouth, belying her claim.



"You're not trying very hard," Tara countered.



"No I'm not," Willow admitted. "Better put an extra pan out for water."



"Why's that?" Tara wondered. Willow grinned mischievously.



"Because," she explained, pulling on her boots, "probably about half-way through your bath I'm going to be making you all hot and sweaty again, and then I'll have to start over." She winked at Tara and disappeared out of the wagon, leaving Tara to smile after her.



When Willow returned, Tara was leaning out the back, with a cloak over her head to keep dry, attaching a sack full of blankets and other laundry to the outside of the wagon. Willow leaned under her hood and gave her a quick kiss, then gratefully scrambled back into the warmth of the wagon's interior, leaving her waterproof cape on a hook outside.



"What's cooking?" Tara asked, hugging Willow from behind and rubbing her arms, warming her quickly.



"Porridge," Willow said, uncovering the single large bowl she had brought back, releasing warm steam and an enticing aroma.



"Nice and warm," Tara smiled.



"Warm indeed," Willow agreed, leaning back into Tara's embrace and tilting her head to smile up at her.



"Eat up, vixen," Tara teased, picking a spoon out of the bowl and offering Willow a spoonful of the hot meal. Willow swallowed obediently, kissed Tara, then sat back and took her own spoon.



"I spoke to Tryptin," she said as they ate, "he said we'll definitely reach Harthim tonight. The north lookout saw that the weather at dawn looked lighter that way, he said. The storm's moving west by the look of it."



"I wonder how Kert's doing," Tara mused.



"Probably wet," Willow replied. "Shan just got back from checking the ford, he said the river's flowing high, so it's probably raining buckets up near the mountains."



"I hope he's okay," Tara said quietly.



"Yeah," Willow agreed. She glanced at Tara. "Fellow-warrior-type sentiment?" she asked with a half-smile.



"Something like that," Tara replied, an answering smile appearing on her lips. "He seems a good man, he takes his job seriously... No warrior really wants to be out there, alone, let alone soaking wet and miserable," she added with a grin. "We're taught, in training, that sometimes a warrior has to be alone, and when that happens, we recognise the courage it takes, and offer a prayer for her. Or him, in this case. I'll be glad to see him safe and sound when we get to Harthim. So long as we're on this journey together, he's one of us. I guess I've got that from Tryptin, wanting everyone to be safe and happy."



"No, I think you get that from you," Willow said softly. "It's just one of the many, many reasons I feel blessed to be loved by you." She leaned over and kissed Tara, gentle and tender, her lips soft as silk, warm as sunlight.



"My love," Tara whispered, her eyes still closed from the kiss.



"All yours," Willow said, "you'll never be alone. That's a promise." Tara opened her eyes and fixed Willow with a brilliant smile.



"Eat up," she said warmly, "I put the pans out on the front seat to fill with water, they're probably about full by now."



"Bath-time, then," Willow grinned, gulping down another spoonful of porridge.



"Absolutely," Tara purred, licking her lips.



In no time both Willow and Tara had polished off the remnants of their breakfast. Tara retrieved two water-filled pans from the driver's seat, holding the canvas flap in the front of the roof above herself to keep from getting wet, then sealing it securely shut to keep the rain out. She lay the pans on the flat, steady surface of one of the small crates lining the front of the wagon, and busied herself finding soap and washcloths from the baggage, while Willow laid out towels to keep the blankets dry.



"You first?" she asked when Tara looked back at her. Tara nodded and reached for the hem of her tunic, only to have Willow's hands beat her there.



"Lie back," Willow whispered, beaming. Her smile warmed Tara immeasurably, assuring her than nothing she could do would make Willow feel so content as to simply lie back and let herself be taken care of. Willow gently pulled Tara's tunic up her body as she lay down, pulling it over her head and off her arms.



"No underwear?" Willow asked slyly, undoing the cord of Tara's skirt to confirm that she was just as naked beneath her clothes below the waist as above.



"Didn't seem any need," Tara smiled, "you, ah, didn't exactly conceal your intentions to have me naked right after breakfast."



"No, I didn't, did I?" Willow mused playfully. "Better make good on those intentions, in that case." She slipped Tara's undone skirt out from underneath her and sat back on her heels to survey her naked lover. Tara, basking in the warmth of her gaze, stretched languorously, slowly reaching out her arms above her head as her legs flexed expansively, toes pointed. Willow bit her lip and leaned down to speak directly to Tara, staring into her eyes.



"You are, without a doubt," she said slowly, "the sexiest creature ever to walk the earth." Tara blinked slowly, a sensuous smile spreading across her face.



"And I'm all yours," she replied. Willow chuckled and kissed her, nibbling on her lower lip. She sat back and surveyed Tara again, her eyes following every curve of her body. She took a washcloth, wet it, and began rubbing soap into Tara's legs, lifting them from the blankets to work underneath them. Tara obediently held her legs up, one then the other, as Willow ran her hands up their length, starting at her toes and rubbing firmly all the way up her calves and thighs. She spent a while longer than was necessary running her hands over Tara's thighs, and the way Tara's breathing caught slightly each time her hands made their way up near her hips was not lost on her. With a smile full of promise she rinsed off Tara's legs and followed with her arms, soaping and rinsing while giving every indication of immense pleasure in touching her.



Tara sighed with delight as Willow, having dutifully soaped her stomach and shoulders, naturally came to her breasts and lingered. Willow took a breast in each hand and massaged steadily, establishing a rhythm where she would squeeze in with her fingertips as she pressed upwards, then stretch her hands flat and press her palms against Tara's nipples as she moved her hands down again. She paused a moment to quickly pull off her tunic and skirt, and straddled Tara clad only in her underwear, her bra slightly tight as she breathed deeply, and her briefs accomplishing nothing in terms of concealing the heated moistness that she settled on Tara's waist. Smiling down at Tara from astride her, she resumed her attentions to her breasts, slow and rhythmic, matching her motions to Tara's breathing.



Tara's nipples were already hard, and she began sighing and lazily tossing her head from side to side as Willow worked steadily on her breasts, massaging her with a determination that offered no respite for Tara to cool off or be distracted by other sensations. She closed her eyes and limited her world to only two sensations: one, Willow's hands on her chest, kneading her breasts in the most exquisite way, and two, the heat of Willow's sex, wet and inviting through the thin film of her underwear, pressed against her waist.



"You like that baby?" Willow murmured softly.



"Oh goddess yes," Tara sighed. Quite involuntarily she began arching her back, pressing herself into Willow's hands, unashamedly conveying the pleasure that Willow's touch was causing her. Willow got quite lost in her fascination with Tara's breasts, the way they moved, their softness, the sensuous way Tara moved when she squeezed them, the lusty way she would let out a long, deep sigh every time Willow rubbed her palms against her nipples. Without realising it she too began to move, her hips rolling back and forth, her sex pressing against Tara's stomach. She leaned forward, trusting Tara to support some of her weight, and angled her hips back to press her clit against Tara, the barrier of fabric between them inconsequential.



Tara opened her eyes and fixed Willow with a needful gaze. Willow leant further forward, her hands still massaging Tara's breasts as they kissed, and Tara's hands reached down to pull Willow's briefs down her thighs.



"You're so hot," Tara breathed, her lips still close enough to brush Willow's as she spoke. Willow moaned in reply, and Tara put one hand to the back of her head, drawing her into another, more intense kiss, while her other arm went around her waist, pulling Willow's hips back as she raised her thigh. Willow moaned again, louder, into Tara's mouth as she felt the firm contact, the lips of her sex spreading against the top of Tara's thigh as her clit pressed against her hip just above. Tara raised her thigh higher, and Willow, with her underwear still around her thighs keeping her from spreading her legs very far on either side of Tara, instead rested more of her weight on her hips, on Tara, bucking wildly as her clit ground against Tara's skin.



"Oh baby," she moaned as she came, "oh gods, oh gods, oh... gods... Tara..." She kissed Tara again, deeply, then took a shuddering breath and collapsed on top of her, all will to move momentarily abandoning her.



"My beauty," Tara whispered, "my perfect love Willow..." Willow opened her mouth to say something, though she couldn't imagine what, in reply, when she was interrupted by a creak from the front of the wagon, as someone climbed up and settled onto the driver's seat. Willow met Tara's stare, and both giggled like schoolgirls with a shared secret.



"Good morning!" Willow called.



"Morning miss Willow," the driver replied through the canvas screen between them. "Morning miss Tara."



"Good morning," Tara called out, glancing up at the canvas. When she looked back at Willow she giggled again, silently. Willow, with some effort, lifted herself up to once again sit across Tara's waist, taking a moment to free her soaked briefs from around her legs. She steadied the pans of water, making sure they wouldn't tip as the wagon lurched gently into motion. Then she made sure she had Tara's full attention, licked her lips, dipped her gaze momentarily downward, and put a finger to her lips.



"Shhh," she advised softly. Tara smiled and nodded. Willow got up on hands and knees, moving slowly and with rhythm deliberately to give Tara a delectable view of her pert breasts swaying beneath her, then settled luxuriously down between Tara's legs, her head pillowed on her right thigh. She reached out with her tongue and gave a long lick to the opposite leg, tasting her own wetness so recently spread there. With long, careful strokes she cleaned her arousal off Tara's skin, making sure she accounted for every trace.



Tara steadfastly resisted the temptation to moan when she saw, and felt, what Willow was doing. 'Licking her own juices off my thigh,' she thought, 'oh goddess she's sexy, I think I'm going to burst!' She bit her lip and endured the pleasurable torment as Willow's tongue slowly worked its way closer and closer to her centre, which was adding ample amounts of her own arousal to the bouquet her lover was tasting.



Finally Willow's tongue touched the base of her sex and ran up, the tip nudging between her lips, finally passing over her clit as Willow nuzzled into her dark gold curls. Willow lifted her tongue and returned it to the bottom of Tara's centre, repeating her motions again, and again, each long, firm lick following just the same path through her. Tara closed her eyes again, swallowing the urge to moan out loud as Willow patiently, sensually continued to lick at her sex, enjoying her like a gourmet with a fine desert.



Willow grew more bold, pressing her tongue down harder as Tara began to rock her hips in response to her attentions. She braced herself with her arms and moved her head back and forth, Tara's hips moving quite dramatically, both falling into a rhythm in which Tara would lift her hips off the towel beneath her with each stroke of Willow's tongue, as if Willow's caress was lifting her. In a strange, wonderful way Willow felt that Tara was making love back to her, her sex kissing her tongue, enfolding it in warmth with every stroke. She leaned further into Tara, her lips now pressing against her as well, paying closer attention to her clit with every thrust of her tongue. She could feel Tara close to climax, and wanted her orgasm to flow from this contact, this caress she had started, that had so beautifully escalated to the point where Tara was lifting herself up, pressing herself into Willow's mouth, freely offering her arousal, the warmth and wetness of her sex, with the utmost certainty that Willow would accept her, all of her, her warmth into her skin, her juices into her body, the total immersion of her senses into her body, just as freely.



Tara reached down and wound her hands into Willow's hair, holding her against her sex as she finally came. Willow opened her jaw wide, engulfing as much of Tara as she could within the warmth of her mouth, her tongue working up and down furiously, gathering the juices flowing from Tara and stimulating her clit, urging more from her. Tara's mouth opened in a silent exclamation of passion, and for a long moment she was motionless, hips held up in mid-air, Willow pressed against her, perfectly still as her insides roiled and surged with her orgasm. She made not a sound, until all of a sudden she went limp and thudded back to the towel and blankets beneath her, and a tiny sigh escaped her. She let her head fall sideways, to allow her to look down at Willow, who was slowly making her way up her body, her sensual gait on hands and knees, and the supremely satisfied smile on her face both reminiscent of a big cat, content to prowl and bask in the sunlight.



"You're amazing," Tara whispered as Willow lay down on top of her, kissing her chin and neck.



"How could I love you, and try for anything less?" Willow replied.



"Oh Willow," Tara sighed, "you're so... oh goddess, there aren't words. I love you."



"I love you," Willow repeated. "Heh, I was right," she added with a chuckle.



"How's that?"



"I am going to have to wash you again."



-----



Willow and Tara's bathing, with its accompanying teasing, touching and kissing, ended up taking much of the morning. With the rain keeping up a steady downpour outside, easing compared to the day before but still far more than would be enjoyable, even in a heavy cloak and hood, both then settled into the confines of the wagon for the day. Willow leafed through Ember's journal some more, finding a rough map of the area they were in, which Tara compared to what she remembered of Kert's map. While searching through Willow's satchels after lunch for a more detailed chart, which Willow was sure was in there somewhere, Tara came across a small set of pipes.



"Are these yours?" she asked curiously.



"Yep," Willow confirmed with a glance. "My artistic side. I'm not that good, but I can carry a tune. Better than I sing, anyway."



"Would you?" Tara asked, offering the pipes to Willow, who accepted them with a hesitant smile.



"I might be a bit out of practice," she cautioned as she crossed her legs and raised the pipes to her lips. She blew a couple of random notes, bringing the tones of the instrument back to her mind, then smiled at Tara and sounded the first three notes of a scale, pure and gentle.



"Do re mi," Tara sang in reply. Willow smiled wider, then repeated her three notes, which Tara again echoed. Willow improvised a quick melody.



"Do re mi, do re mi, fa, mi, re," Tara followed. Willow repeated it again, then kept going as Tara followed her in time, two bars behind and harmonising perfectly. Willow let herself flow through the music, as she had occasionally used to do when the mood took her, now delighted to find this new way of bringing a smile to Tara's lips. She felt too a wonderful sense of contentment at her music joining with Tara's, the two of them creating something beautiful together, and it was with no small regret that she finally drew their melody to a close, scaling back to the simple sequence of notes that she began with.



"That was fun," she said, grinning.



"Yeah," Tara agreed, "you've got a good ear for music."



"Just not when I sing," Willow joked.



"Maybe," Tara said, "you never know. I didn't try singing until I was fifteen, until then I had no idea I'd enjoy it, or be any good. How would you like to try a duet some time?"



"For you, anything," Willow smiled.



-----



The caravan was within sight of the torchlights of Harthim when the sun set, and with their forward scout letting the townsfolk know they were on their way, and thus to keep the gates open, they entered the town just as evening was setting in. As it turned out the only inn was too small to accommodate more than a handful of the caravan's passengers, so Willow and Tara, along with the Amazons and most of the Duncraig ambassadors, stayed in their wagons.



"No great loss," Willow proclaimed ruefully, returning after fetching a hot dinner from the kitchen. "I had a peek in one of the rooms, the beds are tiny and they look kind of draughty." Tara shrugged and gratefully accepted a vegetable stew Willow had scavenged before the inn's cook had tipped in any bits of rabbit, which most of the other travellers were having. They sat down to eat outside their wagon, the caravan's wagons having been parked underneath a wide wooden shelter, somewhat like a barn, that served to keep the rain off the carts and baggage of visiting travellers.



"I was thinking," Willow said as they ate, "I might stitch an extra layer into my book pouch. Keep Ember's journal on hand, as well as our journal. What do you think?"



"Good idea," Tara agreed. "I was having a look through it this afternoon. She's certainly seen a lot of interesting things."



"Yeah, she used to be quite the traveller," Willow said. "She got a bit of a reputation as an adventurer in the Order. Some of the students said she only accepted the sponsor's position in the city because she'd run out of new places to explore."



"What's she like?" Tara asked.



"Oh, gods, where do I begin?" Willow replied. "She's... she has this sort of manner about her, it's like she knows everything. She doesn't go around spouting off knowledge like a walking library or anything, just... whatever's going on, or whatever's being talked about, no matter what it is, she's got this little smile, like she knows it already. She's kind of fun to be around, a lot more than most of the tutors anyway. Once she accepted me as her apprentice she'd take me all sorts of places, like the Zakarum city, and the villages far up the Argentek river - nothing to do with sorcery training, but she never explained her methods, just smiled and said 'it'll be fun'. I learned a whole lot without even realising I was learning anything."



"She sounds a good teacher," Tara observed.



"Oh, yeah," Willow agreed, "the best. Earlier, when we were all learning together, it was all about the theory of magic, how spells are formed, practising until we got it right... you know, the first three months I was with Ember, she never even tested me with spells? She'd just ask talk with me, about all sorts of things, like history and wildlife, and how the clouds moved, and what different kinds of rocks looked like... and, the funny thing, it wasn't just her telling me things, I'd always end up talking just as much as she did, and she'd always listen to me, like she was really interested, and never give me any indication I was babbling too much, or that she wanted me to keep quiet and learn."



"The other sponsors weren't like her?" Tara asked.



"Not exactly," Willow said, "it's pretty common for a sponsor and her apprentice to become good friends - I mean, you spend a fair chunk of your life as a trainee with them, I guess you either love 'em or hate 'em, and sponsors are always the love 'em kind. That's sort of a trainee joke," Willow chuckled, "we said that all the nice sorceresses become sponsors, and the ones that turn into crabby old bats become councillors. We never saw much of the sorceresses who actually run the Order, they were just these silent, stern-looking women who'd come by the training halls occasionally when we were practising and glare at us as if we weren't trying hard enough. Anyway... but yeah, Ember was pretty special as a sponsor. She was a bit like a mother, and a bit like a sister - sometimes I'd go to her for help about one thing or another, and she'd listen to me and give me advice, and it was like she was older and wiser, and I was this young thing listening to her wisdom. In a good way, I mean, it was comforting... she could be someone I'd look up to. And then other times we'd be talking and laughing and, it was like we were on the same level. She's about forty, but she could seem so young. And yeah, some of the other girls were a bit jealous of me, getting her as my sponsor... they'd have to practice creating fireballs and chain lightnings and stuff, and I'd be practising by making snowmen out of water, or we'd make little birds out of ice and fly them around the cloisters."



Willow's anecdotes about her training kept Tara entertained until both their plates were empty, and she offered to take them back into the inn. When she returned Tara was still outside the wagon, arms crossed, staring uneasily out across the town's main square. The gates on the other side, only their covered torches plainly visible through the rain, were closed. Tara could just make out a handful of figures moving slowly back and forth.



"Kert hasn't come in yet," Tara said quietly. "Shan just went out to go up into the tower and see if he can see him. Not much chance, in this weather."



"He's probably just running late," Willow said, "what with the heavy rain out to the west..." She put an arm around Tara's shoulders, and together they stood silently for a while, watching as Shan returned from the gate, shaking off his wet cloak once he reached the shelter of the wagon enclosure. He spoke with a young sergeant, Kert's second-in-command, then paced restlessly back and forth as the sergeant made his way towards the town sheriff's office.



Without any conscious intent, a small group of people formed near the wagons, sitting on stools around the warmth of a fire that had been started, staring silently into the flames, and occasionally glancing up at the closed gates, barely visible in the gloom across the square. Shan checked the view from the watchtower again, before giving up and returning to his pacing. Tryptin sat by the fire, staring off into the night. Gerrid drifted out from the inn to join them, his restless manner clearly showing his unease. Kert's sergeant, Grant, joined them, staring into the fire for the most part, every once in a while stoking it idly with a stick, or fetching a new log to keep it going against the night's cold. Melcan appeared with some drink, and bread still hot from the kitchen's oven, which was eaten in silence. Tryptin asked idly a while later if Tara had brought a Command set, and played a game against her, with Willow, Shan and Grant watching, though always glancing over their shoulder every now and then.



A short while later Gerrid asked if there was any chance of going out to look for Kert, but Grant said quietly that, between the dark and the rain, they might ride right past him without knowing, and carrying open flames ran the risk of attracting any animals prowling the night. A long silence fell, during which Gerrid stood at the edge of the enclosure, his cape keeping off the occasional gust of wind that blew some rain in, and Willow and Tara sat together on the tailboard of their wagon, close enough to have a view of the square but well out of the rain, both huddled in a blanket around their shoulders.



"Thank you," Tara said quietly, out of the silence.



"What for?" Willow asked.



"Just... being you," Tara said, glancing at Willow with the ghost of a smile. "Sitting up with me, without question, just because a soldier neither of us really knows is out there somewhere."



"I'm worried too," Willow said softly. "And hey, it's not like I could just leave you and go to sleep inside. You're here, so I'm here, and that's how it is. Wouldn't have it any other way." She gave Tara's shoulders a squeeze, getting a smile out of her, then with her free hand took Tara's, and rested her head on her shoulder, staring out with her into the night.



"When I was old enough," Tara said quietly, "Eponin told me about my parents. So I'd know what they died for, so I could sit memorial properly for them. I wasn't born on the islands, it was on the mainland. My mother and father were living in a town not far from the coast. There was still a lot of unrest, because of the Reckoning. Evil creatures, packs of demons and monsters, all through the mainland jungles. Not long after I was born a huge wave of them came down out of the mountains and swept through the jungle. My parents brought all the people from the town to the shore, got them onto boats, including me, and then they went back. My mother was a warrior, and my father was very strong, and very brave. Once I was safe they went back, them and two other Amazons, my aunt and another woman, to bring more people out, to get them from the villages around the town to the boats.



"All through the night the boats waited, and every now and then a group of people would reach the dock and board, and they'd tell the master of the boats that the Amazons were still out there, making it safe for more people to reach the road to the shore. They kept waiting as long as they could, even when they could see the jungle on fire on the horizon, this glow in the night sky. But then no more people came, and just before dawn creatures started coming from the edge of the jungle, trying to get across the docks and onto the boats. They fought them off for as long as they could, with longbows and crossbows, shooting them down as they tried to get across the dock, just... trying to wait one moment longer. But eventually there were too many, and the boats had to leave.



"And that was it," she finished. "They sailed to the islands, and I was taken in by Eponin's family." She shrugged, and Willow hugged her tighter.



"I-I'm sorry," Tara said, "I don't mean to be all depressing..."



"It's alright," Willow said, with absolute conviction. Tara nodded her thanks, and hugged Willow in return.



"Two hundred and thirty-seven people were on the boats," she said after a moment. "Ninety-two of them arrived after the first group, when the town was evacuated. Every year, I sit memorial for my parents. My aunt and her friend, too, but they have other loved ones who sit memorial for them. It's not a ceremony or anything, just on the day they gave their lives to save those people, I sit for a moment and remember what they did, and remind myself that I'm proud of them. Is it after midnight, do you think?"



"Definitely," Willow said, "at least an hour." Tara nodded, and gazed up at the sky, such as was visible through the rain.



"Mom, dad," she whispered, "thanks. I'm proud to be your daughter." She sniffed quietly, and Willow saw a single tear fall down her cheek. She reached up and tenderly brushed it away before resting her head back on Tara's shoulder.



"I love you," Tara said simply after a moment.



"I love you too," Willow replied. They both looked up as a shout echoed across the square from the gate. Gerrid hurried out into the rain with Grant, while Tryptin and Shan stood at the edge of the enclosure and watched. The town gates swung open a little way, enough to admit a man on horseback before they were closed again. Willow and Tara both recognised it as Kert, from his clothes and the gear on his horse, before he got under the shelter of the enclosure and dismounted, casting off his rain-soaked cloak. Gerrid was at his side talking quickly, while Grant followed a few paces behind him, waiting for orders. He spoke to Tryptin and Shan briefly before heading towards the inn, but as he went he caught sight of Willow and Tara sitting outside their wagon, and inclined his head with a brief smile. Tara nodded in return, and then he was gone, headed towards the warmth of the inn's kitchen, and Willow was stretching her legs off the tailboard.



"Come on," Tara said sleepily, "let's go to bed." She and Willow climbed into their wagon, undressed, and burrowed together underneath their blankets, quickly warming each other and their bed against the chill of the night. Willow snuggled back into Tara, and Tara stretched and curled herself around Willow, enfolding her in her embrace.



"Love you," she murmured, "goodnight."



"G'night," Willow yawned, "love you too."



Artemis
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 27)

Postby sabina » Mon Sep 29, 2003 12:30 pm

:thud :thud



That was a hot update :applause

And it was sweet too... I think I have already said this before but you really write W/T beautifully :)



Keep them coming ;)




"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

sabina
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 27)

Postby Arwen276 » Mon Sep 29, 2003 1:37 pm

:clap :clap :clap :clap





Just Beautiful!

and what a way to wake up I might add!

I loved how Willow sat with Tara waiting for Kert, it was also beautiful when Willow was telling Tara about Ember, and then the memorial thing...



More please!!!



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 27)

Postby justin » Mon Sep 29, 2003 3:48 pm

that was a great update :applause



You really capture the characters well. the insights into both Willow and Tara's pasts were ver interesting.



I have to admit to being a little worried about Kert :paranoid



And once again they're denied having a room of their own



Looking forward to :read more



Anya in a wimple...I'd pay full admission for that. Gods Served And Abandoned - by Antigone Unbound

justin
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 27)

Postby KatsMeow » Mon Sep 29, 2003 6:59 pm

:applause





Verrrrry nice!

KatsMeow
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 27)

Postby willowfan13 » Mon Sep 29, 2003 9:19 pm

Chris,



This was downright sexy! I don't think I've used that adjective yet. Very sexy & Tara is just soooo sweet with worrying about Kert & then the story about her parents & just saying "thanks" to them.



Awesome update! Thank you!



jackie

willowfan13
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 27)

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Sep 30, 2003 6:17 am

Well done. Of course the NC-17 is wonderful. But I really love the connection of their talking and sharing about the people in their lives (or not in their lives I guess). Willow talks so warmly about Ember and Tara understands. Then Tara's story is so touching and her memorial. Wonderfully done.

JustSkipIt
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 27)

Postby Taras Shadow » Tue Sep 30, 2003 11:12 am

Simply Beautiful :heart



Not mention HOT! :love



And I can't wait for more. :grin



Thank you!



~Holly~ :heart

"I've got this ache, and I thought it was for sex, but it's to tear everything to fucking pieces." Ginger - Ginger Snaps

Taras Shadow
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 27)

Postby Grimlock72 » Thu Oct 02, 2003 7:07 am

Yep, plenty of sexyness in there... but for some reason the story of Tara's parent struck me. Touching moment there, nicely done... (good timing from Kert to arrive back in town just at the end too :-)

--
"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 27)

Postby Artemis » Sat Oct 04, 2003 8:39 am

Thanks everyone :) I've got the next chapter half-written... I may finish it tonight, or I may leave it until tomorrow. I just got back from seeing As You Like It, and it didn't quite have the intended effect - i.e. I'm mopey - and I don't really like to write romance while I'm mopey... but on the other hand, there've been times when writing this story has actually cheered me up so that, after a few lines, I don't *have* to put it off until I'm feeling cheerier. We'll see.



Incidentally (trivia alert) the melody that Willow played and Tara sang was from an episode of Deep Space Nine called 'Chrysalis'. It's a really pretty scene, and the young woman who sings the lead in it has a wonderful voice.



sabina: Thanks :) Keeping them coming as ordered.



Arwen: I enjoyed writing those more reflective moments. Tara surprised me - I hadn't intended for that night (or rather, the day after it) to be the anniversary of her parents' death, and right up to the point where she looked up and wondered if midnight had passed, I was writing it as I'd planned, that she was just relating it to Willow to explain why she felt the way she did while they were waiting. She's got a mind of her own - both of them, in fact :)



justin: I know, if it's not one thing it's another, eh? :) Still, they'll get their room sooner or later, and I'll do my best to make it memorable. I was a bit worried about Kert, too - I don't always know whether a character in a situation like that is going to survive or not. Indeed, I'm not even sure how the choice is made.



KatsMeow: Thanks :)



jackie: Thanks. I'm glad it's sexy, that's what I'm hoping for - I mean, it's Willow and Tara, it *should* be, so I guess I'm doing it right :)



Debra: Thank you. I spend a lot of time trying to strike a balance between the making love and other aspects of the growing relationship - I occasionally worry about the sex overbalancing things (but then, I worry about everything, all the time). I'm glad when I find ways to have them draw closer in other areas, like sharing their pasts and the things that have made them who they are. Ember, particularly, is an interesting character, and we haven't quite seen the last of her yet. She is in some ways an older version of Willow, though there are diferences - she never settled down with anyone (though she hasn't exactly been celibate :) ), and she's seen some pretty daunthing things in her time.



Holly: Thanks :)



Grimlock: It was good timing on Kert's part :) I did wonder about putting a little more time in there, but it seemed right to play it the way it did. After all, if things are *completely* random, the way they seem to be for real, what's the point of writing a story at all? I allow myself convenient coincidences now and then.

Artemis
 


FIC: Hellebore (chapter 28)

Postby Artemis » Sat Oct 04, 2003 11:09 am

Hellebore



Author: Chris Cook

Rating: NC-17

Summary: A headstrong sorceress and a young Amazon join forces to locate and destroy an ancient source of demonic power.

Spoilers: None.

Copyright: Based on characters from 'Buffy the Vampire Slayer', created by Joss Whedon and his talented minionators, and 'Diablo II' by Blizzard Entertainment. All original material is copyright 2003 Chris Cook.

Feedback: Please. Here, or to alia@netspace.net.au



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Chapter Twenty-Eight

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Willow poked her head through the flap in the wagon's rear and squinted in the sunlight, still rubbing the sleep from her eyes.



"Sorry to wake you," Tryptin said, standing outside and looking none too rested himself, "breakfast. We're setting off in half an hour or so, but we'll be stopping for lunch today."



"Thanks," Willow said, accepting the covered dish and flask Tryptin offered. He left, and she ducked back inside, putting the food and drink aside for the moment on top of one of the crates.



"Wassat?" Tara murmured from beneath the blankets.



"Breakfast," Willow said sleepily, crawling back under with her. She rolled over and nestled her back up against Tara, smiling and wriggling gently as Tara's arms went around her and pulled her close, her palms pressing into her stomach and waist.



"Should get up?" Tara asked with a yawn.



"No need just yet," Willow replied, "it'll keep a few minutes... and I don't know about you, but I don't really want to move just now."



"Good," Tara said, tightening her hold on Willow, who chuckled.



"Feels nice," she murmured, "I love the way you hold me... makes me feel safe... warm all over..."



"All over?" Tara asked silkily. "Or anywhere in particular?" One of her hands strayed up towards Willow's chest, while the other remained tight around her waist.



"Woke up frisky, did you?" Willow teased.



"And why wouldn't I," Tara countered, "when my sexy sorceress snuggles up against me... mmm... your legs are trembling... are you cold?" Tara whispered, right into Willow's ear, "I should keep you warm..." She slid her leg over the top of Willow's, pressing her thigh down on her legs and rubbing her calf against Willow's shins. The shudders running through her body had nothing to do with cold.



"Oh... sexy legs..." Willow murmured with a smile.



"You like my legs, baby?" Tara asked sweetly.



"Oh yes," Willow said, "I love them... strong and curvy... and soft... can't get enough of them..." Tara grinned and pulled her thigh up close to her chest, her leg draping over Willow's waist.



"There's that Amazon flexibility, too," Willow said appreciatively as she leaned down to kiss Tara's knee, both her hands running up and down her calf and back over her thigh, squeezing her muscles fondly. She laughed quietly to herself.



"What's that for?" Tara asked fondly.



"Oh, just thinking," Willow replied vaguely. "A couple of weeks ago I was sitting in this very wagon thinking that I'd have nothing to do on this trip except read... and now here I am, with the most perfectly beautiful woman in the world... quite literally wrapped around me," she added with a grin over her shoulder at Tara, "and feeling like I'm in paradise every moment."



"Two weeks," Tara mused, "feels like longer."



"Well, two weeks, two-and-a-half days," Willow clarified. "It does, doesn't it? I can think back to when I was in Kurast and it doesn't seem so long ago, but when I think about being without you... it seems like it's someone else's life I'm thinking of." She took hold of Tara's hand, which was hovering around the bottom of her breasts, and brought it to her lips, kissing the palm tenderly.



"I love you," she whispered, and Tara saw there were tears in her eyes. "I love you so much, I don't want to ever be without you..."



"You never will," Tara promised. "I swear to you Willow, on my honour as an Amazon, I will love you always." She stroked Willow's cheek affectionately. "You got me, and you're stuck with me," she added with a grin. Willow glanced over her shoulder, her yearning expression giving way to a smile which became a full-bodied laugh.



"Funny," Willow said, "from where I am, it looks like you've got me." Tara gave Willow's waist a squeeze.



"I have indeed," she said in a low murmur, "but the question is... what am I going to do with you?"



"Ooh, I know that tone of voice," Willow grinned.



"And what tone of voice is that?" Tara murmured.



"The one that says I'm about to get ravished," Willow gasped, as Tara's hands both reached for her breasts, fitting around them perfectly.



"Very observant of you," Tara whispered in her ear, as Willow moaned and writhed gently in her grip. "You like this, my sweet Willow?" she purred.



"Oh gods yes," Willow sighed.



"I know how much you like touching my breasts," Tara went on, squeezing Willow and rubbing her nipples between her fingers. "How you love feeling them... soft and warm in your hands... but it's my turn now... how does it make you feel, Willow? Tell me."



"H... hot," Willow gasped, "so hot... oh gods..."



"And...?" Tara prompted, gently giving Willow's nipples a particularly arousing pinch.



"Oh! Oh... gods... wet," Willow said, "wet..."



"Tell me," Tara whispered.



"I... I want you, soooo... much..." Willow managed between moans. "A-all the... time... but when you... touch me... oh... gods... it's too much, I can't... stop myself... I just want you, a-and... oh... need you..."



"I want you too, Willow," Tara murmured in her ear, "I need you too..."



"Oh gods," Willow whispered, "oh, touch me, please, please Tara..."



"I would," Tara said, "but I like where my hands are now... and I think you do too?" Willow moaned in response, as Tara flexed her fingers.



"Yesss," she hissed.



"Touch yourself, Willow," Tara breathed, "just... softly... and slowly. That's right," she urged, as Willow's hands crept tentatively down her body, "yes... just touch your lips... good..." Willow gasped involuntarily as she felt her own sex. Somehow, it was very, very much more than all the times she had touched herself before.



"Oh gods Tara," she whimpered, "how...?"



"Because I'm touching you," Tara replied softly, "it's not you doing this... I'm the one who decides that your fingertips are going to part your lips... aren't they?"



"Oh yes," Willow said, her hands complying without her even having to think about it.



"If I tell you to," Tara murmured, her tongue darting out to tease Willow's ear, "you'll keep yourself on the edge forever... aching, needing... until I let you come."



"Yes," Willow repeated.



"Move your fingers," Tara instructed, "up and down... gently... that's it... feel how wet you are. You're very wet, aren't you Willow? So very wet... and so desperate for release... that it would just take a touch, in the right place. Isn't that right?"



"Oh gods," Willow sighed, her fingers teasing her, completely beyond her conscious control. She felt as though they were truly Tara's hands on her sex, Tara's fingers stroking through her wetness. All the while, Tara was cupping her breasts, squeezing and stimulating, sending little shivers through her each time her fingertips closed on Willow's nipples and gently tugged them.



"Yes," Tara whispered, "just a touch... but not yet. First, let me taste you..." Willow brought a trembling hand to Tara's waiting mouth, her eyes following it in fascination all the way. Tara closed her lips around the offered fingers and stared at Willow as she sucked the juices from them.



"Divine," she whispered at last, releasing Willow's hand. "I think you're ready. Do you want me to make you come, my sweet Willow?"



"Yes, gods yes," Willow pleaded.



"Oh, yes," Tara purred, "you're definitely ready... touch yourself for me, Willow... part your lips... tease yourself... just the tips of your fingers..."



"Yours," Willow gasped.



"Yes," Tara smiled, delighted at how Willow was becoming absorbed in their play, "my fingers... teasing you... giving you just enough to whet your appetite... to wet your sex... you want more, don't you? You want me to go deep inside you... get ready, Willow... it's close now. Get ready..." Tara was breathing heavily, as Willow writhed in her embrace, every inch of their bodies pressed together and moving.



"Now," Tara breathed. Willow jolted almost out of her grasp as she plunged her two fingers into herself, her climax starting the instant her fingers reached their depth and her palm flattened against her clit. Tara held on tight, moaning as her own body responded to the way Willow thrust her hips, worked her legs, forced her breasts into Tara's hands, and tossed her head back, eyes closed, mouth open, gasping with release. She kissed along the back of Willow's neck, licked her earlobe, nuzzled into her hair, anything to convey her love as Willow slowly relaxed and settled back, almost entirely lying on top of her.



"Oh baby," Willow sighed, "oh... oh you are so wonderful..."



"I'm not sure how much credit I can take," Tara murmured, as Willow slowly rolled over to face her.



"Hmm?" Willow enquired.



"Well," Tara pointed out, "it wasn't my hands... apart from up here," she added, tickling the sides of Willow's breasts, pressed against her, before wrapping her arms around Willow's back and hugging her.



"I know," Willow grinned, "but then again, it kind of was, wasn't it? I mean, you told me what to do, a-and you know, I really felt as though it was you touching me, because... it's so much more, when it's you. Heh," she chuckled, "I don't think I'll ever be able to be satisfied masturbating again."



"Are you sure?" Tara said with a smile. "Even if I was there, and telling you how unbelievably aroused I was getting from watching you?"



"Oh, well," Willow conceded, wide-eyed, "that's different, of course... Gods, are all Amazon warriors as sexy as you?"



"I don't know," Tara said with a straight face, "maybe you could try some others sometime and find out?"



"Nah," Willow countered with a knowing smile, "why would I waste time even looking at anyone else when I've got you?"



"Mmm-hmm," Tara agreed, "right answer." Willow laughed.



"Keeping me on my toes, eh?" she said.



"They're such cute toes," Tara mused. Willow rolled off to lie beside her, stretching expansively.



"Breakfast's here," she said, "can I tempt you?"



"You could tempt me in your sleep," Tara replied, touching the tip of her nose to Willow's, which made her giggle as she sat up and reached for their meal. "What've we got?"



"Omelette," Willow said, lifting the cover off the dish, "not quite piping hot, of course..."



"Doesn't matter," Tara replied, sitting up, "I think the delay was well worth it."



"Absolutely," Willow concurred, passing Tara a robe and pulling her own around her shoulders to keep warm. Tara handed her a pair of lacquered wooden plates and mugs from her baggage and Willow divided up breakfast and poured Tara some fruit juice. As they were eating they heard Shan outside calling the caravan to order, and their wagon lurched into motion.



"Oops," Tara said with a grin, "we missed seeing a whole town."



"Yeah," Willow smiled, "what with one thing and another... who knows, maybe we'll come back this way some day? See what the place has to offer. Sorceresses are kind of expected to travel wherever they want, and Ember was definitely a mentor along those lines."



"Heh," Tara chuckled, then grew speculative. "I thought this journey was a special assignment?"



"It is," Willow explained, "but in any case, if I'd concluded my apprenticeship the normal way, the next stage would be to just up and travel for four years. You know, see the world, find out where we belong... I guess I got a head-start on that," she added with a wink at Tara, who blew her a kiss.



"And sometime during that four years, you work out what you want to do, and settle down to do it?" she asked.



"That's the idea," Willow agreed. "It wasn't always that way, of course... I mean, up until the end of the Reckoning, the life goal of a sorceress was to refine her battle magics as much as possible, and then pass on that skill to the next generation of sorceresses. Ever since the Order was established we've had Oracles who could see parts of the future. It's something that happens, very rarely, to lightning sorceresses. They can learn to sense the part of their energy that exists outside time, that sort of... powers time, moves it forward, from the outside. I'm not really sure how to explain it... well, no-one is, except the Oracles themselves. They tune their sight to that energy, instead of seeing the normal world - they're blind, always, once they become Oracles - and they can see things to come."



"Priestesses of Zerae sometimes get visions of the future," Tara said, "but nothing that specific. They're always... symbols, and feelings. They write them down, and then spend most of their time trying to work out what they mean. But I've heard people say that they're blind while they're having visions. It doesn't last, though, they can see again when it's over."



"It might be similar," Willow mused, "Zerae's your lightning goddess, so she would understand its power... perhaps she grants it to the priestesses briefly, when it's important. Oracles are tuned to timeless energy permanently, and lose their sight forever. I guess it's a sacrifice they're willing to make... not that it's crippling to them, of course, but... well, it must be a tough decision. How did I get onto Oracles?" she wondered aloud.



"The Reckoning?" Tara guessed.



"That was it. Yeah, ever since the Order was established, the Oracles we've had predicted that the Prime Evils would rise again, even though everyone thought they'd been defeated once and for all in the Sin War. They called it the Time of Emergence, because it would be the emergence of evil, and the time when we - sorceresses - would come out of hiding and fight the Prime Evils. Until then we'd always stayed remote, travelled in secret, and just about no-one in the outside world knew we existed as an order. So whatever servants the Evils had wouldn't know about us until we were ready to fight them."



"And now that it's over?" Tara asked.



"We're still working that out," Willow said, "mostly by following the Vizjerei methods. They're the closest of the other clans to us, most of the other clans sort of flipped a bit when we showed up during the Reckoning. They weren't sure what to make of us, and I guess we scared them a bit - well, the whole world was under threat from hell, and suddenly these women no-one's ever heard of show up, hurling meteors around, freezing whole tribes of demons in one blast, casting lightning strong enough to break open a boulder like it's nothing. It was probably a bit of a shock to them... um, no pun intended," she added as Tara rolled her eyes. "Anyway, during the Reckoning a lot of sorceresses ended up fighting alongside the Vizjerei, and when it was all over, I guess they reported back to their masters, and their clan accepted us pretty easily, when the others were still wary of us. And we adopted a lot of their ways, now that the Emergence was all over and done. I mean, there was no point anymore in secluding ourselves and training for a battle that's already finished and won, so we had to figure out how we were going to fit into the rest of the world."



"So, court mages?" Tara asked.



"Often," Willow agreed, "the Vizjerei are really the only clan to pay much attention to the Western Kingdoms and send their mages here, but there's never enough of them to go around, so there's lots of courts and rulers who want a mage on hand. A lot of the older sorceresses, those who haven't stayed with the Order as teachers or administrators, have settled down at courts all over Khanduras and Entsteig. Not so much Westmarch yet, seeing as it's the furthest away from Kurast, so, hey, I guess I'm one of the pioneers." She grinned.



"Is that what you'd like?" Tara asked. "Become a court mage?"



"Well, it goes without saying that I'm not settling down anywhere you're not happy being," Willow replied, earning an adoring smile from Tara. "There's a lot of other options, especially now that we're not just concentrating on battle magics. For generations the Order's goal was to be the best battle mages in history, so we perfected our control of the elements pretty much always with a view to using them to blow demons right back to hell. But elemental magic is much more than just firepower... or ice-power, or lightning-power or whatever. We've got the skill, the talent to wield massive amounts of elemental magic, now we're learning how much we can do with it. Apart from blowing things up. Lightning mages, even if they're not Oracles, can develop prescience and clairvoyance, plus there's telekinesis - that used to be just a battle skill, but now they're training to use it in all sorts of ways. Elemental fire has a lot of healing properties, not just battlefield stuff, but against diseases and so on. That's why we established the presence at the Hospice in Entsteig, to develop those skills, as well as make use of the library." She shrugged ruefully. "They've probably finished rebuilding it by now," she added. "And a talented cold mage can do all sorts of things besides just shielding herself and tossing icicles around. They say lightning is the most versatile element, but cold actually has a whole load of secondary effects that you can work with. Condensation, for example, drawing water out of the air - I could make it rain, as if we didn't have enough rain already. But anyway, there's all sorts of applications for our magic, and of course there's all the magical theory we know, aside from just elemental magic. Some sorceresses travel with big caravans, as advisors, or work with architects on construction. That dock we saw back at Kingsport, that was probably built with a Vizjerei mage's help, but a sorceress could do the same thing. Or just travel around researching magic and sending reports back to the Order every now and then. Lots of options."



"Any preferences?" Tara asked.



"You know, a while ago I didn't really think about it," Willow said with a grin, "but just lately, I've been thinking... after we're done travelling, of course, do you suppose the Amazon Nation could do with a resident sorceress?" Tara smiled, then leaned over and kissed Willow lightly on the lips.



"If that's what you want," she said softly, "I have it on very good authority that you'll get the highest recommendation."



"Thank you," Willow whispered.



"You're welcome, my love," Tara replied. "Besides, it's not just a matter of me doing anything to see that you're happy. You're a brilliant mage, you've got a wonderful mind, and I think the Queen's court would find you invaluable."



"Aw," Willow blushed, "now you're making me shy... Queen, huh? So I'm going to be a court mage after all. And among the Amazons, no less! Gods, the girls who trained with me are going to be so jealous. Especially if we ever meet any of them and they get a look at you," she added with a sly grin.



"Flattery will get you... well, kissed and cuddled as soon as we finish breakfast," Tara admitted with a smile. "You'd really like to live on the islands? It's a long way from your home... you know you don' t have to just for my sake."



"There's plenty I'd do just for your sake," Willow countered, "but I've thought about it seriously, aside from that. The way you talk about it, the way you get that ‘this is my home' smile... I know you want to go back there one day. And I can't think of anywhere I'd rather go. I never saw myself settling down with the Order, so... yes, it's really what I want. When you go home, I'll be at your side, and it'll be my home too."



"Willow?" Tara said softly.



"Yes?"



"Come here, my love." Tara pushed her plate aside, and as Willow came within reach she enfolded her in a warm, tender embrace and kissed her.



-----



Tara looked around curiously as, outside, the order to halt was called down the length of the caravan, and their wagon slowed.



"Oh, I forgot," Willow said, "Tryptin mentioned we'd stop for lunch. I guess the road's safer from here on."



"Probably," Tara shrugged, "we're in Duncraig realm now, it's likely that bandits would prefer to work beyond the borders rather than within them. I don't know about these Carvers, though."



"They probably go wherever it seems most lawless," Willow mused, "they're dangerous to travellers, but a trained army would wipe them out pretty quickly. The ones that are left are probably the ones that preferred remote areas, even if they are less travelled than the roads within the larger realms."



"Well, whatever the reason, it's just as well," Tara said with a lop-sided grin, "the rain's stopped, I could use a bathroom break."



"You're not the only one," Willow replied, "chalk up one big disadvantage to living in a wagon. I'll go see what's for lunch first, meet you back here?"



"Okay," Tara agreed, pulling on her boots.



Willow gave Tara a quick kiss as they both jumped down to the ground, then they went their separate ways, Willow towards the supply wagon to see what was on offer. When she arrived, Kert and Tryptin were already there, in conversation.



"...probably a good choice," Kert was saying, "the roads were in a sorry state, especially from the crossroads up to the mountains. Hello, Miss Willow."



"Hello Kert," she replied.



"Good morning. Did you see any hostiles?" Tryptin asked, turning to Kert again.



"One band, far off on the first day. I rode around the back of them, but I think they were watching the road. Didn't seem to be too many of them, but in that rain, who knows? There may have been others. The ones I saw were small, rags for clothes - probably those Carvers you spoke of?" he asked Willow.



"Sounds like them," she agreed.



"All in all, best we avoided the mountains," Kert went on. "When I spoke with Master Gerrid last night, he said he'd have a word with the Duke about improving the roads up to Jesram. Maybe some soldiers, too, to see if they can't get rid of these creatures for good..." His voice faded away as Willow returned, parcels of food in hand, to the wagon, just in time to meet Tara returning from the edge of the forest across the road.



"My turn," Willow said, handing Tara the parcels. By the time she got back, Tara had unpacked them and was sitting on the tailboard of the wagon, just about to bite into a bread roll filled with cheese and tomato slices. She handed another to Willow before starting, and Willow relayed to her what Kert had been saying.



"Sounds like he's right," Tara said, "seeing as he wasn't in danger, it was best we didn't all take the detour. Even if the Carvers weren't around in great numbers, they could've caused some damage if they surprised us, especially in bad weather, and with the wagons moving slowly."



"All's well then," Willow concurred as they ate happily, enjoying the sunny calm the break in the rain was allowing.



"It's your turn," she said to Tara after a moment, "I've told you what I'm looking forward to, after all our travels are over and done with. So what's the most beautiful woman in the whole world going to be doing in five years' time?" Tara grinned at her.



"You'll be lying on a bed, with soft silk sheets," she purred, "writhing and moaning as I make love to you."



"And what I'll be moaning is how much I love you," Willow grinned. Tara smiled and bit her lip lightly, which was too adorable for Willow to resist leaning across and kissing her, brushing the tip of her tongue lightly across Tara's lips for an instant.



"Seriously," she said, "once we go home, to the Amazon Isles, what do you see yourself doing?" Tara smiled at Willow then leaned back, gazing thoughtfully into the sky.



"I occasionally wondered what I'd do, if I didn't join a warrior pride," she said. "I think perhaps, I'd become a priestess."



"There isn't a vow of celibacy attached to that, is there?" Willow asked with a raised eyebrow.



"Not in the slightest," Tara grinned. "I think... five years? I think I'll be a priestess... a priestess of Athulua. I've always felt closest to her. Apart from the priests and priestesses who maintain her temple in Tran Athulua, and the smaller temples in the other cities, her devotees live among the people. They... well, they listen to people, listen to their problems and worries, and try to help them, to give them good advice and guidance."



"Yeah," Willow agreed, "I can picture that. You're the most compassionate person I could imagine." Tara smiled her thanks.



"When I was a child," she went on, "sometimes I'd stay with Jenavria, Eponin's eldest daughter, when Eponin had to travel to one of the other cities. Before she married her husband, she lived in a little house on the eastern edge of the city... it's right up against the edge of the lakes, and it's the only place where Tran Athulua comes right down to ground level. The house is empty now, but still in Eponin's family... I'd like to live there with you. We'll get an architect and some builders and expand it into a proper home for both of us."



"Our home," Willow smiled, "wow..."



"I know," Tara agreed, "it's a lot to think about... and I know we're still newly in love, and we'll come to know each other a lot better as we travel. But I know at the end of it, we'll be in love just as much as now, if not more. I've never been more certain of anything in my life."



"I..." Willow started, "I... I can't think of anything to say but I love you, a-and I wish I could, I wish I knew some way to, to tell you what I'm feeling, because it's so wonderful..."



"You don't have to say anything," Tara replied with a smile, "I know. I... every time I look at you, or touch you, or even think of you, I know."



-----



The caravan got underway again soon, and Willow and Tara passed the time leisurely as the train of wagons ambled along the road towards the night's camp site. Tara unpacked her bow, and Willow's, and both spent some time working bramble oil into the wood, talking aimlessly about sorceresses and Amazons, and all the things they might on day see and do. There was just enough light, when the caravan halted, for them to bathe quickly in a nearby stream. With a rock wall some twenty feet high on one side of the stream, and a clump of trees on the other, they were secluded enough from the activity of the caravan, within easy earshot if they had some reason to call out, but with enough privacy that, after a glance over her shoulder to confirm that no-one else could see, Tara slipped her robe off her shoulders and strode naked into the stream.



"Join me?" she asked in a low voice. Willow, eyes riveted on Tara, quickly divested herself of her own robe and stood in front of Tara, her arms around her waist.



"What if someone sees?" she asked half-heartedly.



"No-one will," Tara replied with a serene smile, "they know we're here, and they won't risk offending the ladies by coming to the stream until we're done. I think we can afford a moment or two for... whatever we want." Her smile turned seductive, and Willow grinned in reply.



"So..." she murmured, "what *do* you want?" Her hands moved down Tara's back, cupping her bottom and squeezing playfully.



"Mmm," Tara purred, "well... I think, I want you to make love to me."



"Here?" Willow asked, caught between discretion and desire.



"Right here," Tara said, "right now."



"Well then," Willow grinned, "how can I refuse?" Tara draped her arms over Willow's shoulders, leaving her body quite unprotected as Willow wrapped one arm around her waist, and her other hand traces a path around her hips towards her centre.



"Yes," Tara moaned as Willow's fingers brushed through her curls, "yes... just you and me... nothing else in the world." Willow kissed her deeply, as her fingertips touched her wetness, and poised themselves at the entrance to her sex.



"Ready?" she whispered, her lips still touching Tara's.



"Always," Tara whispered, "always, my love, every moment I exist, I'm yours."



"I love you, my Tara," Willow whispered in reply, as she gently thrust two fingers into her, catching her lips in a kiss as Tara's hips shuddered down against her hand, and her eyes fluttered closed in bliss. She knew they couldn't afford to spend too much time indulging their desires, in the middle of the countryside no less. Her thumb stroked across Tara's clit, not quite pressing as hard as she might, but nonetheless urging her towards a climax that would not be long coming. Her fingers inside Tara's warmth found the special spot that made her moan and quiver, and touched it with every thrust. At the last, Willow buried her fingers in her lover's sex, her fingertips stroking back and forth as her thumb worked on her clit, and she held Tara's waist in a firm hug, their bodies pressed tightly together, as she moaned with her orgasm. A second later Tara's mouth found hers, and they kissed for a long, long moment, both completely open to the other's advances, as their tongues danced in the blissful aftermath of their greater pleasures.



Afterwards, neither of them said anything - Tara's sensual smile, and Willow's gleeful grin, spoke all the words they needed. They quickly washed and retrieved their robes from the edge of the stream, and, with matching grins of a shared moment away from the rest of the world, returned to their wagon for dinner.



Later, naked and cocooned in warm blankets and the warmer contentment of each other's arms, Willow lay beside Tara, one arm around her waist, her head cushioned on her chest. Tara looked down at Willow's adoring gaze, and stroked her hair gently.



"In five years," she said quietly, "the sunlight will come streaming in through the windows of our bedroom, and we'll wake up, with you cuddled in my arms, like this." She rolled onto her side, and Willow nestled up against her, smiling blissfully as Tara's arm went around her, holding her.



"We'll wake up," Tara went on, kissing Willow's hair lightly, "and I'll kiss you, and tell you how much I love you, every single day. We'll get up and go out to the lake, which will be right up next to the house, and we'll bathe and play in the morning light. We'll dry each other off and have breakfast, and then you'll go off to the Queen's court to meet whoever you're meeting that day, or to study in one of the libraries. I'll have a place near the palace where people can find me if they need my help, so at lunch I'll come and meet you, and we'll eat in the gardens, and laugh and I'll stroke your hair like this, and... well, there are a few spots in the palace gardens that are pretty secluded," she said with a grin, teasingly licking Willow's earlobe.



"Once we're done having lunch, of whatever we get up to, you'll go back to the court, and I'll go back to being a priestess, and in the afternoon we'll meet up again, and go to the market, or take a walk in the forest below, or meet some friends. We'll go back home in time to watch the sunset, lying together in a chair on the balcony. Then I'll help out while you cook a delicious dinner, and we'll eat in front of a great big fire in the hearth. And then, we'll go to bed, and make love, and eventually we'll fall asleep, cuddled together. And I'll thank all the heavens that my time in this world is spent with such a goddess as you." Tara kissed Willow on the back of her neck, then frowned as she heard Willow stifle a sob.



"Willow?" she asked.



"I'm-" Willow choked back. She rolled over, and Tara saw, through the tears on her cheeks, the most beautiful smile she had ever seen.



"That's so beautiful," she tried again, "I... gods, how could I deserve something so wonderful?"



"Do you trust me?" Tara asked gently.



"Completely," Willow replied without hesitation.



"Then trust me to know that you deserve every happiness I can give you," Tara said. Willow nodded, and smiled up at Tara.



"I do," she said, "I don't know how, but I do... oh gods, Tara, you are... the most beautiful, lovely, wonderful, heavenly, divine... I love you. I love you, I love you I love you I love you..."



"And I love you," Tara whispered, "with all my heart, with everything that I am and everything I will ever be. I love you, Willow. And we'll have our home together one day."



"Yeah," Willow agreed, "and you'll always be my home. Now and forever."



"Now and forever," Tara echoed.



Artemis
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 28)

Postby Insanity » Sat Oct 04, 2003 11:40 am

Quote:
"In five years," she said quietly, "the sunlight will come streaming in through the windows of our bedroom, and we'll wake up, with you cuddled in my arms, like this."

"We'll wake up," Tara went on, kissing Willow's hair lightly, "and I'll kiss you, and tell you how much I love you, every single day. We'll get up and go out to the lake, which will be right up next to the house, and we'll bathe and play in the morning light. We'll dry each other off and have breakfast, and then you'll go off to the Queen's court to meet whoever you're meeting that day, or to study in one of the libraries. I'll have a place near the palace where people can find me if they need my help, so at lunch I'll come and meet you, and we'll eat in the gardens, and laugh and I'll stroke your hair like this, and... well, there are a few spots in the palace gardens that are pretty secluded," she said with a grin, teasingly licking Willow's earlobe.



"Once we're done having lunch, of whatever we get up to, you'll go back to the court, and I'll go back to being a priestess, and in the afternoon we'll meet up again, and go to the market, or take a walk in the forest below, or meet some friends. We'll go back home in time to watch the sunset, lying together in a chair on the balcony. Then I'll help out while you cook a delicious dinner, and we'll eat in front of a great big fire in the hearth. And then, we'll go to bed, and make love, and eventually we'll fall asleep, cuddled together. And I'll thank all the heavens that my time in this world is spent with such a goddess as you."




Awwww.. soo cute... and what a wonderful future together..



I can SO see them...



Insanity



"Nobody messes with my girl!"Tara, Bargaining

Insanity
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 28)

Postby Grimlock72 » Sat Oct 04, 2003 1:01 pm

Oh I liked both girls thinking about their future together. The background information didn't hurt either. Hmm.. without that Reckoning it's unlikely Tara and Willow would ever have met, both their people being kinda isolationist.



I agree with Willow in them moving to life on the amazon isles. It's obvious that Tara really likes her home and wants to be there. Willow doesn't seem that attached to her home-land per se, to some people there sure... but not the location itself. More like a travelling mage then :) .



I'll bet they need lots of bathing if they keep waking each other like that. No complaints from me though, no sireee.... heh :) .



Is it just me or was this a rather looooooong update ? What with Willow telling lots of stuff about her people and how were trained for combat solely initially. I wonder if Willow was still trained for combat and if not if she was trained for anything specific ? If I were to guess I would say Ember probably didn't steer Willow into any single direction but let her figure it out herself, would be more her style I think.



I like what I call 'background information', not entirely sure thats the proper english word for it. It makes it appear like this story plays in a larger world, fills it out so to speak.



Grimmy

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"You hurt Tara," Willow said too calmly. "The last one who tried that was a god. I made her regret it." -- Unexpected Consequences by Lisa of Nine

Grimlock72
 


Re: FIC: Hellebore (chapter 28)

Postby sabina » Sat Oct 04, 2003 1:12 pm

Hi Artemis :wave



I loved this update :applause

The future they imagine for themselves is just so sweet :)

When will they reach the next town?



Keep them coming :bounce






"I know I was born and I know that I'll die.

The in between is mine.

I am mine!" - Pearl Jam

sabina
 


Re:

Postby chilled monkey » Sat Oct 04, 2003 2:58 pm

Sorry I missed the last update.



This latest part was really good. Willow and Tara are so loving and warm; it's beautiful to see them talking about their lives together.



I was very interested to read more about Willow's order. At first I thought that their 'elemental only' magic seemed somewhat limited (compared to what Willow and Tara can do in BtVS), but know I understand that it has a lot of possible applications.

chilled monkey
 

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