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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 11 Jan)

Postby nothingtosay » Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:50 pm

actually i think they didnt embalm dead people then, cause i remember watching sleepy hollow and there was this one scene were j.deep asks people to dig out the body of a dead woman which was already buried for i think 2 days, then he examines the womb and out comes blood and dead baby...

wow...this is definitely wine. (the longer it takes you, the better it gets..)

where the hell did abraham get those men? and where the hell was croft when this happened!?!!!

giles gives the skull to ab, and the problem is drac, yet again, is raising his immortal-self-restoring-dead/undead army?but they cant find it cause ab hid it?..
and they need willow cause she has the memories to where ab hid it,when she was already dead when he went off?
Chap.5
“Wilhelmina Rosenberg will locate the skull for us…but she must be given the time and information to do so.”


but isnt it good that they cant find the skull?
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 11 Jan)

Postby Alcy » Sun Jan 13, 2008 7:25 pm

katjetson: Yep, congrats on the dibs and I am pleased that I managed to wrestle a girly squeal out of you, I myself would never be so undignified!
Wow... remember when Tara was shy?

I almost don’t, it feels like it has been forever since I wrote those first few chapters with her diary entries. It is definitely weird to create a character with such polar opposites…I agree, she is cruel and ruthless and did the vampirical equivalent of sleeping her way to the top. And I think she was still keeping up her façade when she growled at Angelus…especially given the fact that there is no love lost between the two of them.
Glad you love Abraham, I do too, he’s been fun to write but so stalwart all throughout his story arc…that changes so it will be interesting to see what people think.
Well, Eva Green has been deposed from my avatar but that does not make her any less gorgeous!

Zampsa1975: I’m sure Willow will be able to forgive Tara in the end…otherwise we won’t have our happy ending…which I’m sure everyone is looking forward to after all this angst.

Zooey’s Bridge: I don’t think you would want to be in any of these scenes! Nasty things would happen to you.
And for some morbid reason, I really liked the way you described, but didn't, Willow Van Helsing's corpse lying on the ground.

This isn’t normally a good point in a chapter but I’m pleased you liked it, it is a particularly awful scene to write so I wanted to do it well and be respectful to the character too.
Abraham has been so fun to write, the next chapters are a little harder and when you read them you’ll understand why.
Thanks very much!

taraslove: This story is rather tragic, I understand you pointing out the fact that Willow and Abraham did not get closure and this is especially poignant given the fact that they were so close before their fight. I don’t want to give anything away on this matter, but you can probably guess from my silence that something will be happening at some stage.
It is a rather striking thing to realise that a much loved character can be hated, although she was evil with absolutely no trace of good in her so I think its right to hate that version of her.
Yep, Giles is pretty damn old!
Good point about Faith, you’re right, her old role of protector has somewhat changed now that Willow can protect herself, I think their friendship is going to strengthen now though that they are really equals.

WillowRulez: Sorry you missed out posting feedback, I did post the last two chapters in quick succession!
Yep, Willow has some more information about Tara, but she doesn’t have the full story just yet….the kissing and making up will definitely come in time.
Glad you liked the memory thingee, it seemed a good way to be able to tell the story from the point of view of those who experienced it without having another little time travel episode.

vmpIrsIAr: Just a wee cliffhanger, I do love making everyone wait and see, the next chapter will end with another one!

dlline: Yup, Abe snapped, and we get to see the consequences of that in the next chapter as he lives his life without Willow.
ComboWillow and TurboWillow? Definitely some titles for a range of action figures there!! We could have a dress up doll with two different costumes.
Yes, you did spend the day writing smut didn’t you…and what fine smut it was!!

wimpy0729: Yep, Abe came to the rescue, heart-breaking that he was a good ten minutes too late.
And yes, I did feel a little generous and gave you all quite a but of information in this chapter, you should all feel spoilt!
Thanks very much for your kind words wimpy!

hermitstull: Glad you’re enjoying the twists and turns, it is kinda all over the place! Stay tuned to find out what happened to Tara and I definitely will rock on with the story.

WolfDragonGod: Yep, but I think that’s about as sad as it gets…although don’t quote me on that, there are some more gut wrenching parts coming up soon!

JujuDeRoussie: I’m glad you’re enjoying the little time travelling pieces, I find it so much more fun than just having Giles or someone tell a story.
And we are slowly getting all the information.
You're not going to stop with Abraham's point of view are you? We'll have Giles' and Tara's right? Please?

Possibly…
Well, we know at least that Abraham had the katana after Covasna, although where it is in the present I cannot yet say, you might have to wait for a while to find out. It’s nice that everyone asks about the sword, it is almost like a character!

Lestat Draconus: I used to watch Babylon 5 when it was on TV and almost enjoyed it as much as Star Trek…although not quite (being that Babylon 5 never had Seven of 9!)
Yep, Faith and Lara are back together, I had originally planned for them to stay estranged until the end but I couldn’t stand it any longer…and they’re my only chance to write smut at the moment!
You’ll find out what happened to Tara in the next two updates!

JustSkipIt: Hiya Deb, glad you enjoy the narrative devices, I’ve tried to keep things understandable so I hope all this skipping all over the placeisnt too hard to follow!
Yep, Abe had the skull and we’ll have to wait and see as to how he lets Willow know where it is.
Faith was great in this chapter wasn’t she? I find the only problem about going back in time is that she’s not there.

nothing to say: I remember that scene in Sleepy Hollow too, great movie.
I didn’t want to go into too many specifics about how Abraham got those men, I’d like to think of him pulling a few strings with the local army given that he used to be in the army himself. If you’ll remember back a few chapters, Christopher Croft was injured while out hunting and he is in hospital while all this is taking place.
Yes, not being able to find the skull would seem to be an inherently good thing from the point of view of Dracula not having it, but Giles has been working on a spell to destroy it all these years and now that his spell is about ready, they haven’t got the skull to perform it on…so therein lies the problem.
Thanks for asking some tough questions!


Next update should be up by the end of the week or maybe earlier, depending on how well I go. It's a tough one from a characterisation point of view so I want to do it well...and it also spans thirty odd years!
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 11 Jan)

Postby LittleBit » Mon Jan 14, 2008 1:18 am

Sorry I'm late to reply, but what a stunning update! Real edge of your seat stuff. I think I like where this is heading ... like Abraham had something to do with Tara feeling guilty!?!?!?!? :D
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 11 Jan)

Postby Alcy » Mon Jan 14, 2008 3:08 pm

LittleBit: You're never too late, I always seem to be early! Abraham definitely has a large part to play in the upcoming chapters around what happened to Tara, read on to find out...


Chapter 27 – A Man Changed



It was not easy for a man as handsome and as eligible as Abraham Van Helsing to remain unnoticed in a corner of a large celebration. However, for the past hour he had been content to observe from a distance the other revellers, all celebrating the wedding of Christopher Croft to a lovely but otherwise unremarkable young woman. The wedding was long overdue in Abraham’s opinion. Croft had courted the wench for three years and had been engaged to her for a further year before finally deciding that she was indeed worth marrying.

The wedding was relatively small affair, someone in Christopher’s line of work did not amass many friends and his family was quite small. However, those that did attend the earlier service and now the celebration held in the ballroom at Montagu House were a lively sort and the room felt just as busy as if there had been a hundred people in attendance rather than half that.

If Abraham was to turn his observations on himself, he would see that he had changed very little in the five years that had passed since his sister’s death. He was just as tall and broad shouldered as ever, with not even a speck of grey showing in his neatly queued red hair. If anything, the finely tailored, elegant cut to his clothes served to make him even more handsome than he had been when he did not care for such fripperies. He sipped the brandy he held in one hand and stared over the rim towards the man of the moment; Christopher Croft who was dancing with his bride. Although she was unremarkable, Abraham did think the new Mrs Croft was a least pleasant to look at and Christopher had done well. While the two of them had never become overly good friends due to their rather different personalities, Abraham did feel a certain kinship with the man given that he had saved his life many a time and vice versa. His gaze travelled past Christopher and fell upon a rather vibrant looking blonde woman who was dancing near Christopher and Sarah Croft and the corners of his mouth curled up into the trademark Van Helsing smile, a definite smirk of appreciation. Her blonde curls cascaded down her back, framing a face that was more than pleasant to look at with flashing brown eyes and full red lips. His gaze then moved downwards and he caressed her full and creamy cleavage with his eyes. He was about to set down his drink and move to steal her away from the dull bore who was currently dancing with her when he caught sight of Giles out of the corner of his eye.

Much like Abraham himself, Giles was trying to remain unnoticed in the crowd. However, if anything, Giles looked more than a little uncomfortable in such a large public gathering. He was wedged into a corner, almost standing behind a large pedestal with a bust of some dead Roman mounted on top. Abraham found himself smirking; obviously being over five hundred years old did not improve one’s social skills. He paused only long enough to pour a generous glass of brandy and top up his own before crossing the floor to join his friend and mentor.

“You look like you could use one of these,” Abraham held the glass out for Giles to take.

Giles accepted it but did not take a sip; he looked almost embarrassed that he had been noticed and stepped out from his corner. He managed to incline his head towards the newly married couple dancing in the centre of the room, “Is that not a fine sight…especially for two bachelors such as us?”

Abraham took a long swallow of the drink he held in his own hand. Since Willow’s passing, the relationship between him and Giles had not strengthened, if anything they had grown distant. The two of them did not often talk of matters outside those related to their work.

“It is indeed, although I would not wish to exchanges places with Christopher for all the tea in China.”

“You are happy being alone then?” Giles inquired, his curiousity piqued by the tone in Abraham’s voice.

The redheaded man turned to him with a knowing glint in his eye, “I am never alone Giles, just unmarried…and that is a state of things that I enjoy very much. Why be shackled to one woman when you can have your pick of many?”

Giles awkwardly set down the brandy on the corner of the pedestal beside him, “Shackled seems an odd choice of descriptor for a marriage, surely you should not speak unless you have experienced…”

“Well, I have had relations with a good number of married women who agree with me all too readily,” Abraham interrupted with a harsh laugh and another sip of brandy, “They cannot escape their shackles and make for my bed fast enough.”

Giles coughed uncomfortably; pleased he had not just taken a sip of his drink as he knew he would have made a frightful mess as it sprayed from his mouth. He turned his head to study the younger man but he already knew that there was no trace of jest in Abraham’s voice. It was only then that Giles saw the predatory glint in his eye as he watched a young woman on the dance floor.

Given that he himself was somewhat of an expert where longevity was concerned, Giles thought that Abraham had aged rather well. However, although he was still a strikingly handsome man, he had changed. Abraham’s face was harsher than it had been when his sister was alive, gone were the traces of mirth and humour which had often lingered there. Even in the midst of Croft’s wedding celebration, Giles suddenly felt saddened to realise that he knew the younger man only as an acquaintance or work colleague and no longer as a friend. Giles did not think that this was a fault on Abraham’s part; instead he berated himself for not spending more time with him in the years since Willow’s death.

Giles steered the subject away from the uncomfortable subject of Abraham’s myriad of affairs, “How goes your continued search for the demon?”

Almost immediately Abraham’s green eyes took on a steely glint and Giles wondered if he had brought up the wrong topic for what was supposed to be a joyous occasion.

“The treacherous demon-bitch has gone to ground, since that sighting in Paris last November I have lost its trail,” Abraham growled and drained the last swallow in his glass. “Truly this is a vexing state of affairs, it has been five years since I swore to destroy it and all I have done is let it lead me on a wild goose chase around Europe, catching nary but a whiff of her foul odour.”

“Well rest assured, Abraham, there is only so far she can run,” Giles added helpfully, feeling as though he finally needed the drink Abraham had brought him, “Sooner or later she will make a mistake, after all, vampires are not subtle creatures.”

“Dracula managed to avoid you for hundreds of years, Giles,” Abraham was obviously immune to Giles’s optimism, “Unlike you I do not have hundreds of years at my disposal, I must have my revenge within the short time that has been allocated to me.”

Giles sighed, although he too still mourned for the lovely young woman they had both lost, he was not about to let the rest of his life be consumed by the search for her murderer. Conversely Abraham did not seem to share his opinion. It was obvious that he believed a life without revenge was a life wasted.

“I think Willow would want you to live your life, to have a family…” Giles began awkwardly.

Abraham seized up the glass that Giles had set down moments ago and took a mighty swallow, “Giles, the cock-sucking bitch murdered her. How could I ever concentrate on anything as mundane as a wife and children while that demon is out there roaming free? I never could, she’s out there somewhere, probably laughing at me and spitting on the beloved memory of my sister!”

Abraham drew in a deep breath as though he finally realised that he was allowing himself to get swept off and carried towards the land of fanatics who could think of nothing but their vendettas. He drained the last swallow in the second glass and finally managed to calm himself.

With a shaking hand Abraham set the glass back down and turned to Giles with a forced smile on his face, “So Giles…how was your week?”

“Well yes, I did have a rather interesting week as a matter of fact,” Giles began, pleased to be able to steer Abraham away from topics which only served to anger him, “I have been working on a new invention for some time and I think I may have finally perfected a working prototype…still very much a prototype of course but I am rather excited, you see it is a circlet of sorts, it goes around the neck and suppresses the magickal talents of the wearer. A very dangerous piece of work but that is what makes it so exciting! I think if I can tune it correctly we may have a very useful apparatus on our hands…”

Giles continued on for several more minutes in the same enthusiastic manner before he finally turned and realised he was alone. He glanced out onto the dance floor and saw Abraham whirling around the dance floor with the young blonde woman he had been eyeing earlier in his arms and a smile on his face as though he hadn’t a care in the world. To the rest of the world it was a convincingly picture of a man in the prime of his life, Giles knew otherwise. It was an image carefully cultivated to conceal the seething anger that lay beneath, an anger Giles was increasingly beginning to think would destroy him.

Giles set his lips into a tight line and went to find himself a drink.

~~~~~~

1812

Young Benjamin Croft tried in vain to stifle a wide yawn but failed miserably and instead was forced to hide it behind his hand. He tried to erase it from his face before the tall, broad-shouldered man walking in front of him could turn around and catch him in the act. The young man managed to return his face to a mask of alertness before such a thing could happen.

Ben could hardly be blamed for being tired; he had not gained a wink of sleep the night before as he paced anxiously outside the room as his wife struggled to give birth to their first child. A small smile crossed his face at the thought of the fine baby boy, christened Jeremiah Christopher. His only regret was that his father had not lived long enough to see his first grandchild. Christopher Croft had keeled over unexpectedly a few months earlier and was dead before he hit the floor. It had been mercifully quick but Ben felt his loss keenly - although in truth his father had lost much of his sparkle ten years ago when his wife passed away after an extended illness. With the loss of his parents, Ben felt it all the more necessary to keep close his wife and now, his son.

With a newborn son, Ben knew he could had excused himself from patrolling the streets of London this evening, but Giles was travelling in places unknown and as capable as the man striding ahead of him was, age was creeping up on him.

Ben studied Abraham Van Helsing as he walked through the darkness, still retaining the powerful stride of his youth. He was however, growing somewhat thinner as the years went by and the red hair Ben remembered seeing as a boy was now all but lost to grey. His face was weathered from outdoor life, bearing a good number of craggy wrinkles. Although he had known Abraham Van Helsing for as long as he could remember he knew very little of the man that lay behind the public facade. Ben admired and respected the man immensely, but while Abraham was more than willing to impart all his knowledge to him regarding vampires and demons, he would say little of his personal life. He consistently seemed to have a young woman on his arm, even as he grew older, but it was rarely the same woman twice and they were never introduced to his colleagues. What little he had gleaned about Abraham Van Helsing, had been learned from Giles. It was from Giles he learned that Abraham had once had a sister, although he then made the mistake of asking Abraham himself about his long-lost sibling and he had been met with a stony wall of silence.

The only thing Ben did know for sure, was that Abraham’s sister had to be connected in some way to the vampire he had spent much of his life searching for. In the same way Giles searched for Dracula, Abraham searched for a female vampire he only ever referred to as ‘the demon.’ Ben was under the impression that this search had consumed almost Abraham’s entire life. Given the joy he derived from time spent with his own family, Ben often thought that the older man should just let his vendetta go after all this time…although he would never voice this opinion openly for all he would receive in return would be an angry snarl. He knew determination when he saw it, and Abraham Van Helsing was beyond determined.

Ben admired and respected Abraham Van Helsing…but he had never liked him.

He’s just too goddamn obsessed with his bloody demon, Ben narrowed his eyes as he stared at the man’s back, That and the fact that he’s an arrogant, grumpy old bastard.

Ben felt moisture tickle the back of his neck and he glanced upwards to feel rain on his face. His countenance soured as he realised that this was not going to be a pleasant evening’s hunting. He began to wonder whether he should have stayed home with Abigail and Jeremiah after all...in fact, he wondered whether he should opt out of the family trade and acquire himself some honest skills, like book-binding or perhaps even medicine.

It soon became clear, as the pair entered streets which were normally a veritable paradise for demons, that the creatures of the night did not much prefer the weather either and had obviously chosen to remain indoors. Even as Abraham remained alert just in front of him, Ben found his shoulders sagging.

Although Ben knew better than to let his mind wander while on a hunt, he suddenly walked into something solid. Even as he was fumbling for the crossbow strapped to his back he realised that the solid object was Abraham’s back. The older man was standing rock still, his gaze directed towards a nearby rooftop. Ben followed his gaze and frowned. Silhouetted against the already dark skyline was a figure cast completely in shadow. He could make out absolutely no details save for a swirling cloak which undulated around the figure. At his side however, Abraham was tense, as though poised for a fight.

“Van Helsing, what is it?” Ben demanded, slowly bringing his crossbow around in order to load it in front of him.

“Stay behind me,” Abraham commanded in a tight, urgent voice.

Ben could not see what had Abraham so rattled, although granted a shadowy figure standing on a rooftop was usually evil, there were two of them and the figure had lost any element of surprise. Or so Ben thought. A split second later the figure disappeared, only to re-materialise a moment later directly between the two men. Although he felt no blow strike him, Ben suddenly found himself flying backwards through the air. He continued in a straight line until he slammed into a wall. His crossbow clattered to the ground and he fell with the wind knocked out of him.

Ben lay with his cheek pressed against the wet cobbles beneath him, the rain continuing to fall down and seep through the coat he wore. Struggling to focus himself, he lay listening to the harsh voices he could hear being traded across the street.

“And just when I thought you were never going to show your face again!” Ben heard Abraham growl.

“You think I am afraid of you?” a woman’s throaty voice, unlike anything Ben had ever heard before.

“Well I seem to recall you and your Master suffering a rather embarrassing defeat at my hands the last time we met.”

“And I seem to recall running your sister through with her own sword.”

Those words were followed by a mocking laugh.

Ben had finally managed to drag himself up into a kneeling position as he heard those last words. He needed no more information to know who Abraham was facing…it was the demon that had killed Willow Van Helsing. He peered through the darkness and falling rain to see her outline but he could make out little more than a dark, cloaked shape. However he could see long hair whipping around her face, a face that was pale and shining even with no moonlight.

“Where is the skull, Abraham?” the demon demanded, her voice shrill with unconcealed longing.

“Why have you waited so long to ask me?” Abraham seemed in no hurry to answer the vampire’s question as he circled her warily.

She cackled, “The time is nigh and you are weakened by old age…the once strong Abraham Van Helsing is now but a shadow of his former self.”

Abraham narrowed his eyes, “Why have you come alone? Surely a matter as important as the skull would require the attentions of more than one lone vampire?”

The vampire snarled, “My reasons are my own, Van Helsing!”

Observing the scene, Ben wondered why Abraham made no move towards the stake concealed in his coat, or the sword belted at his waist. Instead he just kept baiting the creature, circling it even as it came closer. Ben was just about to shout a warning when the creature surged forward, its hand shooting out to seize Abraham by the neck. With inhuman strength, it threw Abraham back against the wall behind him and held him there.

“Where is the skull?” it yelled manically.

“You kill me and you will never know,” Abraham threatened.

She seized Abraham by his chin and slammed his head back against the wall before repeating, “Where is the skull?”

Ben did not wait to see if Abraham would answer; instead he dragged himself all the way up onto his feet and moved forward, stumbling awkwardly at first before managing to break into a run. He drew one of his own stakes and lunged at the demon’s apparently unprotected back. Even as he brought the stake downwards, she turned and whipped out her free hand, lashing Ben across his cheek. He reeled momentarily but managed to collect himself quickly and lash out with his own fist, catching her on the side of her head. She screamed in frustration and dashed Abraham to one side. Ben saw the man fly past his vision but he kept both of his own eyes focused on the demon. Now that her full attention was focused on him only, he could see her features clearly. Although her piercing blue eyes were wild and crazed, she was also strikingly beautiful. The hair that whipped about her face was so pale it was almost white. However, Ben had seen beautiful demons before and knew not to be fouled into thinking them less powerful for it. He watched her closely, trying to sense if she would use more of her foul magicks on him.

She bared her shining white teeth in what Ben supposed was a smile as she circled him. He kept the stake out in front of him, ready to strike at any moment. When she eventually did lift her arm to throw him backwards once more he was ready. He whirled around, low to the ground and brought his fist up before she could complete her movement, driving it directly into her stomach. As she stumbled backwards he brought the stake downwards once again. Both her hands shot out and caught his wrist, driving the stake backwards and away from her chest. Ben stumbled, his wrist was twisted at an awkward angle and he dropped the stake as he yelped in pain. She locked her icy fingers around his neck and drove him against the wall, even as he fumbled for the dagger he wore at his waist he found his windpipe being crushed in her terrible grip.

Even as he struggled to breathe he saw Abraham rising to his feet behind them both. Ben also saw his crossbow at the other man’s feet. Struggling valiantly, Ben managed to tear himself free of the vampire’s grasp and seize one of her wrists. As they struggled she stared into his eyes and there he found absolutely no mercy, nothing but pure, undiluted evil. .

“Abraham!” Ben cried, struggling against the vampire as she tried to wrench her wrist free from his grip, “For god’s sake man, just shoot the bitch!”

Ben waited expectedly to hear the quick flight of a bolt, the thud as it struck the demon and then the feel of her crumbling to dust in his arms. However, despite his pleadings Abraham did not loosen a crossbow bolt at the demon’s unprotected back and the only thing he did feel was an agonisingly sharp pain in his midsection. He immediately let go of the demon’s wrist just as she stabbed forward again with her other hand. Ben knew he ought to be screaming, the pain was so intense but his jaw slackened and no sound emerged.

The demon then stepped back with a smile on her face and Ben glanced downwards, he clutched at the hilt of his own dagger protruding from his body with clumsy fingers. As he sank slowly to his knees, he saw a blurry Abraham moving behind the vampire with something held in both of his hands that was most definitely not a crossbow. Before the vampire could turn, something was snapped around her neck. A spilt second after Ben heard the audible click; he heard a blood curdling scream from the vampire. She lurched in a drunken-like state and tried to tear it off. With her attention fully focused on the circlet, Abraham lashed out and struck her over the head. She too slumped to the ground.

With watery eyes Ben tried to focus on Abraham but he found he could not, even as the man knelt at his side and cradled his sagging body.

“You will be fine, son,” Abraham spoke quietly, gently.

Ben knew that was far from the case, he could already feel the life ebbing quickly from his body. A part of him wanted to curse Abraham Van Helsing to the very depths of hell for sacrificing his life for the sake of his revenge, but all he could think about was his family.

“Please…see that Abigail and my son are cared for…will you promise me that?” Ben pleaded even as the edges of his vision darkened. “Please?”

“I will,” Abraham replied quickly.

Ben clutched at the front of the man’s coat in order to demand a firmer response but it was too late. He gasped his last breath and then died, hoping fervently that the bastard would fulfil his promise.

Abraham sighed sadly; he deeply regretted the brave young man’s death. He believed he had the situation under control and cursed himself for missing the knife in the creature’s hand. Still, as he gently laid Ben’s body down on the rain soaked street, he knew that the young man had not died for nothing. The proof of that lay on the ground behind him. He stood and turned to gaze upon the crumpled, writhing form of the demon that had been Tara Maclay. She pawed weakly at the metal collar that encased her neck but of course found no clasp to undo.

Nor would she. The collar would bind her magickal powers until Abraham chose to remove it…and that was something he would never do.

Abraham closed his eyes and tilted his face upwards. The rain beat down on his face and he sighed deeply. Finally, after all this time he had the demon at his mercy, after years of waiting for his revenge it was shortly to be his. He spread his arms wide as though embracing the icy pellets that pelted his skin.

In the midst of this strange but simple act of celebration, Abraham Van Helsing suddenly realised that he was laughing.

~~~~~~

“Mr Van Helsing sir, I am not quite sure I understand the exact nature of your problem.”

Abraham paused for a moment after activating the lever which triggered the door to his underground training room. He regarded the wiry, nervous little man standing in front of him through narrowed eyes. Although Abraham had extensive contacts in all the right places, finding an adept magic practitioner willing to help him had been something of a challenge. All his sources indicated that Rupert Giles was the man he wanted…but Abraham could not use Giles, not for what he was about to do. John Minto adjusted his glasses and stared back at Abraham, hardly convincing as a warlock of the same calibre as the librarian. Abraham sighed and entered the narrow cylindrical passage, leaving Minto to follow him, still waiting for his explanation.

Much like the librarian, Minto also wore eyeglasses…but that was as far as the similarities went. He was exceptionally short and thin, so thin it looked as though a stiff breeze would blow him away. His worn suit hung on his frame, just like the way his skin hung from his face beneath his wiry black hair.

“Mr Van Helsing,? Minto repeated as the pair of them descended the stairs and entered the training room.

Abraham walked purposefully straight towards a set of heavily laden bookshelves, much like those that had swung inwards to reveal the door they had entered a few moments earlier. He then indeed triggered a second door.

“Just what the devil is this place?” Minto demanded as he watched the section of bookshelf in front of him swing inwards to reveal a dark, narrow corridor.

“Mr Minto,” Abraham began as he moved into the darkness, “I have brought you here because I would like you to do something for me.”

Minto stared at Abraham’s back, now shrouded in darkness as he stopped a short way down the corridor. He studied the scene in front of him with fear written all over his face. When he finally started after Abraham, his fear was reflected in his hesitant steps. As he moved closer he saw a doorway to one side, iron bars across the entrance He peered into the cell, for that was all it could be called, but saw nothing but darkness. Beside him Abraham Van Helsing was as still as a statue and there was no sound save for his own hoarse breathing. A chill ran down his spine, something did not feel right about this.

As Minto was about to turn and leave a shape suddenly threw itself against the iron bars. The silence in the corridor was rent by the clang of the door on its hinges and a chilling snarl from the creature that emerged from the darkness in such a startling manner.

Reacting instantly, Minto let out an undignified yelp and pressed his back to the wall behind him. The still snarling creature lunged for him through the bars, fingers outstretched like claws. Her lips peeled back from her teeth to reveal a pair of what were unmistakably fangs. The snarl became a drawn out hiss and Minto contemplated running from the corridor. However, when it became apparent that escape was impossible, he managed to relax enough to gasp out a few words,

“Good god man, why are you keeping a vampire in your cellar?”

He turned to Abraham and saw the man had not moved a muscle since the demon rattled the bars of its cage. However, Minto soon realised that Abraham had moved but it was only the small but telling movements of his facial muscles that betrayed his emotions. The lines around both his eyes and upon his brow were deep furrows, his white lips were set into a tight line. Minto feared to reach out towards him lest he take sudden offence and lash out. Instead he turned back to the demon.

If Abraham’s behaviour was strange then the demon’s was just as confusing. As she completely ignored Minto to focus on Abraham, he was able to study the blonde vampire. Even with her white skin stretched over her skull and her hair lank about her face, she was hauntingly beautiful. Her intense blue eyes were focused on Abraham in an expression that went beyond hate. She gripped the bars in front of her with pale fingers as though she might tear them down. It was as Minto was studying her that he noticed a smooth collar of engraved silver encircling her throat. Although he could see no clasp or any other way to remove it, this had apparently not stopped the demon from trying. The skin beneath the collar was angry red and bore deep, bloody scratches and ugly welts.

“Abraham Van Helsing, have you finally found the courage to destroy me?” she purred in a low, sultry tone, “Or do you seek instead to find new methods of torture? I must say that so far you have been making a poor show of it indeed…although restraining my magicks with this collar was a rather clever idea, keeping me locked up in your basement hardly fulfils your task of making me suffer.”

As Abraham maintained his stoic silence, Minto pressed further for answers, “You did not answer my question Van Helsing, why are you keeping a vampire in your cellar?”

Abraham finally drew his attention away from the demon in the cell and turned to Minto, “This is the vampire that murdered my sister.”

The vampire responded with an immediate throaty laugh that had once perhaps been beautiful, “To kill someone in the heat of battle is not murder!”

His fury suddenly unleashed, Abraham whirled on the creature, his fist in the air, “You gained her trust and stabbed her in the back you foul piece of filth, if that is not the very definition of murder then I do not know what is!”

The creature shrugged as though she thought perhaps Abraham might have made his point. The contented smile did not leave her face however.

Minto nodded, he had to clear the lump in his throat before he could continue, “I have heard your sister was a brave woman, although I am too young to have known her personally, it is a testament to her that she is still sorely missed amongst our small community.”

“She is sorely missed indeed,” the vampire commented unexpectedly in a drawn out voice, “Even undead I still yearn for her touch.” She sighed heavily and pressed her forehead against the bars as she stared directly at Minto, “I thought that spending eternity as the Queen of the damned at Dracula’s side was worth killing her but now I fervently wish I had turned her…now that would have made eternity much more fun!”

The vampire closed her eyes and licked her lips as though savouring a taste on them.

Minto screwed up his face in disgust, “I can understand why you would want this demon to suffer but how can you possibly make her suffer enough to feel remorse for what she has done?”

“Ah, that dear Mr Minto, is where you will lend your services,” Abraham said quietly, a fierce light burning in his eyes.

“Mr Van Helsing?” Minto was only too happy to offer his services to a man of Abraham Van Helsing’s stature but he was distinctly unnerved by the sights he had witnessed and did not even want to imagine what was in store for the vampire who murdered Willow Van Helsing.

Abraham turned to regard the demon that had once been Tara Maclay through cool green eyes, his sister’s eyes, and then whispered in a terribly determined voice, “You will restore the demon’s soul.”


TBC in Chapter 28 – Tortured Soul
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby dlline » Mon Jan 14, 2008 3:28 pm

Oh, what the heck.

Dibs

Okay... I'm back now.

Alcy!

Great update. A man changed indeed. I know you were concerned that 30 years was a lot of time to cover in one update, but I’d have to say that you nailed it.
“The treacherous demon-bitch has gone to ground, since that sighting in Paris last November I have lost its trail,” Abraham growled and drained the last swallow in his glass.

Abraham seems a tad miffed. What a great way to set up his lifelong quest for vengeance, to have him refer to Tara as “it.” I find that more telling than his use of the term “demon bitch,” though I really do love that phrase.
…vampires are not subtle creatures.”

Well, no duh. Remember a while ago? The part with Willow and the Katana. Not very subtle.
“And I seem to recall running your sister through with her own sword.”
Those words were followed by a mocking laugh.

What a bitch! I love her. I want one just like her in my basement.
In the midst of this strange but simple act of celebration, Abraham Van Helsing suddenly realised that he was laughing.

Gettin’ your revenge on will do that, I guess. I love the picture of mania here. Well done.
“Good god man, why are you keeping a vampire in your cellar?”

Ummm… ‘cause she’s hot. Wait, that’s my answer. I just loved the question.
“She is sorely missed indeed,” the vampire commented unexpectedly in a drawn out voice, “Even undead I still yearn for her touch.”

Ouch! That’s gotta hurt. Poor Abe…he can pretty much be with anyone he wants, but the woman he once loved not only murdered, but still wants to do his sister. Bitch. Again, I love her.

Sorry, I was in a strange mood tonight. Glad you liked my smut. Thanks for that and the update. Nice job.

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby Zampsa1975 » Mon Jan 14, 2008 3:54 pm

Wow! Great update-y goodness... Pre-covasna Abraham was a really likeable guy but what in this chapter he definately has gone nuts... I hope that there is something that would bring back the joyful Abraham before he dies and I truly hope that he could make peace with Tara...
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby Zooeys_Bridge » Mon Jan 14, 2008 4:29 pm

Mmm. Angsty and action packed. Per usual. :P It's the best stuff, how can I complain?

Poor Abraham. Poor Abraham and Giles. It was only too natural for them to drift apart. Willow, even a broken and grieving Willow, was what held their little demon group together. Without her....well. We saw what happened.

Poor Christopher Croft. Poor Ben Croft. Poor Poor Poor.

I've said 'poor' so many times, it's kind of lost meaning and sense. It's so weird when that happens.

I'm really excited for the moment right after Tara gets her soul. Gonna be in.tense.

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 11 Jan)

Postby taraslove » Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:15 pm

A man changed, indeed.

Oh, Abraham, Abraham. Poor, sad, angry, crazed Abraham.

“Well, I have had relations with a good number of married women who agree with me all too readily,” Abraham interrupted with a harsh laugh and another sip of brandy, “They cannot escape their shackles and make for my bed fast enough.”


I loved this. He might as well have said, "I'm still in love with the memory of the evil undead creature of the night who murdered my sister in cold blood, and I hate myself for it." Brilliant!

Silhouetted against the already dark skyline was a figure cast completely in shadow.


Love this description!

The demon then stepped back with a smile on her face and Ben glanced downwards, he clutched at the hilt of his own dagger protruding from his body with clumsy fingers.


I can just see the evil look in those beautiful blue eyes. God. This is killing me.

In the midst of this strange but simple act of celebration, Abraham Van Helsing suddenly realised that he was laughing.


Chills, this gave me.

“She is sorely missed indeed,” the vampire commented unexpectedly in a drawn out voice, “Even undead I still yearn for her touch.” ... The vampire closed her eyes and licked her lips as though savouring a taste on them.


Okay, I know she's the walking undead and all kinds of evil, but how hot can one vampire be? Seriously.

I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Cannot. Wait. What Tara must go through when her soul is restored. This is painful. And I love every word!

I wonder, will there be any kind of "happiness clause" for Tara as the recently re-ensouled? God, I hope not. Getting the girls to reconcile is going to be difficult enough as it is, what with the "sorry about killing you back there" conversation that's bound to come up. Sheesh. What a crazy ride of a story. I'm totally loving it!
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby katjetson » Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:17 pm

Good golly!

My first thought after my read-through was, has Abraham become so deranged with sadness that he wants to restore Tara's soul so that he can finally have her for himself? Please don't let that be it. I don't want to dislike any more beloved characters. I mean, Abe was barking some vicious vile about "the demon," and has become somewhat of a (demon) playboy himself. He even said, "cock-sucking". Wow. I guess filthy language transcends time. :)

ETA: Wait, I get it. He's restoring her soul so that she can live forever with her guilt? Right? That's her punishment?

Really heavy update. But this gave me a chuckle:

...Abraham found himself smirking; obviously being over five hundred years old did not improve one's social skills.


Hee. I actually thought that about Angel quite a bit.

Clever collar invention you got there, Alcy. Very clever. I didn't give it a second thought when you had Giles first describe it, but go you on making it an integral part of the story.

As for Tara regarding kaput-Willow:

"Even undead I still yearn for her touch."


Is that right? I thought she didn't give a fuck about the skinny, little redhead? Tara confuses me. Do you think Tara confuses Tara?

That said, I can't WAIT to get introduced to Tara's "Tortured Soul." She's going to be pretty bummed once she finds out about that whole killing her lover thing, huh?

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby Cynthia Taz » Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:36 pm

I would say Tara did a good job in torturing Abraham, un-intentionally or not, running around Europe and not letting Abraham caught her. Nothing's more annoying that running after your enemy for so many years and still failed to even get close to it. Vengeance is a powerful thing, for Abraham to grief for so long, and to hate the woman she once loved so much, and it just served Abraham more pain to know the demon who murdered her sister was still out there. :paranoid

I have to wonder though why Tara took so long to finally go after Abraham for the skull; they knew he had the skull but it seemed none care to go after him 'til now... and there's tiny bit of me wonder though if he really gave a soul to Tara purely for the purpose of vengeance, given that he did love Tara once.

Can't wait for the next update... :pray
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby wimpy0729 » Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:41 pm

Oh, Alcy, so finally, we have it. Abraham did feel that the perfect torture for "the demon bitch" was to have her soul restored. I agree that this was the perfect thing to make her suffer. Well, the evil Tara deserves it, but he knows that for the old Tara with a soul, this would indeed be the perfect punishment. Oh, all this suffering by everyone is killing me!

Well, I knew Old Abe would be destroyed by Willow's death, but it sure shows here with his bitter attitude towards all relationships. His vendetta truly did change him from the man he once was.

“Giles, the cock-sucking bitch murdered her. How could I ever concentrate on anything as mundane as a wife and children while that demon is out there roaming free? I never could, she’s out there somewhere, probably laughing at me and spitting on the beloved memory of my sister!”


Yep, I'd say that sums up Abe's feelings pretty well.

I liked how you moved us through the years, shown by the passing of the torch from one Croft to the next, and I'm assuming it continued to be passed from Jeremiah to Lara. Very interesting family tree.

I'm curious now why Tara chose this moment in time to come to Abraham in search of the skull, and why she came alone. Seems very risky for such an important task.

Giles' little trinket must've gotten all it's kinks worked out because it sure worked on Tara, thank goodness. Cool little necklace there, for sure. Now Tara's all locked behind bars, clawing at her own neck trying to remove it, and still spouting evil words at Abraham. Her saying that she wished she would've turned Willow because she still misses her touch, etc. goes to prove just how evil she still is. I'm surprised Abe had the restraint not to just go ahead and kill her then. But then again, Abe is a man with a plan. And I sure can't wait to see what happens with his little warlock man, and what exactly happens with Tara.

Again, more answers, and it just makes me crave more and more.


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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby nothingtosay » Mon Jan 14, 2008 8:44 pm

like i said. WINE!
..You will restore the demon’s soul.”


aaah!! that was brilliant! like angel, his curse became his gift and the reason he could love again. so thats how she became human again.

and i presume that drac., spike and co. know that her soul was returned to her...

damn i was like woah ab has got nothing to lose now, his beloved sister is dead and he plans to never marry, thats one mother fucker you shouldnt mess with.
He glanced out onto the dance floor and saw Abraham whirling around the dance floor with the young blonde woman he had been eyeing earlier in his arms and a smile on his face as though he hadn’t a care in the world. To the rest of the world it was a convincingly picture of a man in the prime of his life, Giles knew otherwise. It was an image carefully cultivated to conceal the seething anger that lay beneath, an anger Giles was increasingly beginning to think would destroy him.


next episode Chapter 28 – Tortured Soul..im guessing much angst to continue, and please dont torture my soul, dont make me wait too much for the next update ;-)
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby hermitstull » Mon Jan 14, 2008 10:20 pm

:thud

What an update!

Fantastic description of the type of man Abraham has become. Still on the side of good, just barely.

And Tara so evil! Deliciously so.

I can't wait for the next installment. Woo hoo.

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby LittleBit » Tue Jan 15, 2008 5:53 am

Fabulous! It is a shame that Abraham suffered for so long with his revenge (and I know there must be more to the tale, so please keep it coming) but I do hope that eventually he finds some measurement of happiness or at least some some bit of contentment with his life.
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby WillowRulez » Tue Jan 15, 2008 8:17 am

“They cannot escape their shackles and make for my bed fast enough.”

I didnt expect him to be that kind of guy. I mean about the married women bit.
Tara's and Abraham's meeting... it was bound to happen, poor Ben though.
Hm, I wonder, is Tara wearing the collar still, in "the present"? Or could she remove it when Abraham died? Cuz why would he give her her powers back just because she has a soul?
I dont think it's just that she killed Willow, he must be pretty pissed cuz she was & is the only woman he could never had. :smash
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby JujuDeRoussie » Tue Jan 15, 2008 11:47 am

Hello Alcy :)

The sight of Abraham Van Helsing as you describe it is heart breaking. Poor Benjamin. Young and newly father. That sucks :( (but I love his son's name)

Errrr Tara as areal demon without a soul is... ya know.. disturbing.

I can't wait to see the restoration of Tara's soul.

And yeah, it is far better to "love" the past like this rather than to have Giles telling it.

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Jan 15, 2008 1:43 pm

Alcy, what a great update. First we have the setting of Christopher's wedding with the contrast of the opulence of the setting to Abraham and Giles being so dour and bitter. Giles seems to have a good handle on things but Abraham is out of his mind at this point.

Then the next...

Do you know that part in Princess Bride where Inigo Montoya finally finds the 6 fingered man? "You have an overdeveloped sense of vengeance?" I'd say that applies to AVH. Not only did he let Ben die in order to get Tara but he's been carrying around that collar from Giles for, what, 25-30 years?

And of course he wants her cursed with her soul. It was a stupid idea for Angel but maybe it will work out well for him... Sounds unlikely but this is the KB.
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby diamondforever » Tue Jan 15, 2008 4:32 pm

And it all comes together!

But how did she get a heartbeat?
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby Safuega » Tue Jan 15, 2008 9:08 pm

Hey there Alcy,

I can't think of a better homecoming than finding a bunch of your updates upon returning from vacation. You've made my return to the real world a less harsh experience, so thank you.

Since I'm arriving at the party fashionably late I'll just do some highlight commentary for now.

First, I really enjoyed the flirty exchange between Lara and Tara while Faith gnawed her teeth and barely contained her desire to kill Tara. :laugh

Second, masterful use of the 'skip it' line, especially pleased with the addition of the 'bloody' to it, quite right for the times and the circumstance. Although I seem to recall a certain fantastic fanfic writer telling not long ago that the prospects of the line being used were next to nil because it had been used already... :hmm

Third, evil Tara is, like, really evil. She may be bound and about to tear her neck out to pieces in her attempt to remove her collar, but she still has the gall to bait Abraham and the energy to put her little paw firmly inside the wound. What a marvelous depiction of the crazed and evil demon that our Tara has become.

Fourth, Abraham is a man changed indeed, he's become consumed by his desire for revenge and who could blame him. I mean the circumstances surrounding his tragedy are highly unusual to the say the least. He loses the woman he loved to his sister. The woman he loved is killed and becomes a vampire. Then he loses his sister to the vampire that the woman he loved has become. I'd go insane too!!

Fifth, very clever of you to create the magic neutering collar to apprehend Tara, no other way to deal with her when she has access to her magic, so I bow before your superior design.

Sixth, the scene between Tara and Willow was both terrible and sad. I especially liked how you managed to depict the 'weight' of what each of them was carrying. Tara the shame of having killed her lover and Willow the anger of not having been able to kill her lover. Ending the scene by both of them staring at each other barely standing and Tara retreating was incredibly well done. When I read that I thought that for Tara it would have been easier if Willow had killed her then and there. I get the sense that Tara finds that she cannot live with the weight of she has done without Willow forgiving her, but in a way, if Willow had killed her even without forgiving her, Tara would be released.

Seventh, Tara with a soul - I said it before in one of my crazy predictions, no worse way to make her pay for what she did. I mean, realistically there was no way to make a vampire suffer. Abraham could torture her physically but that would only be temporary pain, but having a soul and having to "live" with the knowledge of what she did is infinitely worse.

Eight, okay so now for one of my crazy predictions or plot requests as I like to call them. So, I'm thinking it's Giles who 'liberates' Tara after she has a soul. Giles finds out what Abraham has been up to and is horrified at what Abraham has done to Tara since she regained her soul. I'm assuming here that Abraham keeps Tara imprisoned even after she has a soul and what I am assuming her initial insanity at having it and the subsequent sinking in of the soul, etc. I don't see Abraham freeing Tara even with the soul, so maybe Abraham needs to die before Tara is released from her prison. Giles removes the neutering collar since as its creator presumably knows how to remove it. Once removed Tara is now released and enlisted as a double agent to help Giles and the subsequent Crofts. Under this scenario it makes sense for Giles to feel for Tara and how much she has suffered.

Last but not least, I don't know if you know about the anime character, Vampire Hunter D, but every time you write about Tara and her prowess and acrobatics as a vampire and her presence and such, I can't help but think about Vampire Hunter D. Tara as a vampire as depicted by you is so damn cool. Thank you for such delicious images.

I await with bated breath the next installment of this great tale.

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby db » Wed Jan 16, 2008 1:48 pm

Dag.

Life gets busy but the story does not slow down. Wow. I am begining to understand what has happened here, or think I am. I am saddened by Abraham and what has become of him ... the image of him with Tara imprisoned in his basement is noxious.... but I think it will lead to the tAra we now know, and so I am intrigued. I just hope that Abraham finds some peace before he dies. Dancing with pretty girls is nice (don't get me wrong), but he is not happy, and Willow would want a happy Abraham.

Great story Alcy, Really! I am so excited to read what happens next!

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby Alcy » Thu Jan 17, 2008 6:18 pm

dlline: Well done on the dibs Diane, yes, 30 years was a lot of time to cover in one update but I’m glad to hear from you that it worked out okay.
Yes, old Abe is a tad miffed hence the strutting around calling Tara nasty names and generally being a bad sport.
I loved your commentary on some of the lines from this chapter; you definitely are a funny one. Especially your reason for keeping a vampire locked in your cellar.
Bitch. Again, I love her.

Sums everything up nicely. Thanks very much for your witty comments.

Zampsa1975: Yes, Abraham has definitely changed, and I wanted to make those changes almost as obvious as possible to convey the extent of the changes that the loss of his sister has brought about. I won’t say anything about making peace with Tara…

Zooey’s Bridge: I think ‘poor’ everyone is a fairly accurate descriptor for this particular chapter, no one comes out well, it is kind of depressing but I hope that I can rectify things eventually. I think you will find the next chapter intense indeed!

taraslove: A very accurate assessment of Abraham, you can definitely tell that he no longer cares about himself, nor about what other people think of him.
I’m glad you think Tara’s hot when she’s evil, I guess I do too! Stay tuned for the next chapter and you’ll see what Tara must go through when her soul is restored. It is a crazy ride indeed but hopefully people will be able to stick it out!

katjetson:
My first thought after my read-through was, has Abraham become so deranged with sadness that he wants to restore Tara's soul so that he can finally have her for himself?

Given Abraham’s confession of love for Tara this does have to be sitting at the back of your mind when reading Abraham’s storyline but be rest assured, I will deal with everything tastefully.
ETA: Wait, I get it. He's restoring her soul so that she can live forever with her guilt? Right? That's her punishment?

This makes good sense.
It was a really heavy update, and I think the next one will be more of the same.
Thanks for the compliments re the collar, I borrowed the idea from a fantasy series I liked (Wheel of time) where one race of people use them to control magic users but adapted it to suit my own purposes.
I think at first Tara thought she didn’t give a fuck about Willow, but a few years have given her enough time to realise that she might have preferred turning Willow as opposed to killing her…she’s definitely a demon that wants everything!

CynthiaTaz: I agree, Abraham would have been more than frustrated with his inability to catch Tara, it’ all he can think about for thirty years. Therefore it is understandable that he is very hostile when he finally does catch her.
I have to wonder though why Tara took so long to finally go after Abraham for the skull; they knew he had the skull but it seemed none care to go after him 'til now...

Agreed, I think this comes down to what Tara said to Abraham, that he is now considerably older and weaker, given the fact that he is a particularly effective vampire killer, so in some ways it makes sense just from that perspective…although I think she underestimated him.
Thanks very much!

wimpy0729: These characters do seem to have the market cornered with suffering at the moment, it’s just one big suffer-fest! Hopefully I can find some happiness for at least some of the characters at some stage.
I thought the passing of the Croft torches was a good way to show the passing of time and that will also continue through the next few chapters.
I'm curious now why Tara chose this moment in time to come to Abraham in search of the skull, and why she came alone. Seems very risky for such an important task.

Partially answered in this chapter when Tara says that Abraham is getting old. and it will also be expanded upon further in the next chapter as well.
Abe is definitely a man with a plan, after waiting so long, he’s not going to blow everything by destroying Tara in a fit of anger.

nothingtosay: Yep, Abraham definitely has nothing else to live for, all he has is his revenge, and now that he has it within his grasp, he is not going to back down!
You are very right, there is more angst to come!

hermitstull: Very glad you enjoyed the update, I’d say Abraham is treading a very fine line between good and bad…but there’s no line with Tara, at the moment she is all evil!

LittleBit: There is definitely more to the tale (a lot more!), I will definitely keep it coming but I can’t say whether or not Abraham will ever find happiness.

WillowRulez: I definitely wanted to take all of people’s expectations around what a nice guy Abraham was and turn them upside down to create an entirely different picture of him.
Tara isn’t wearing the collar in the present, if you’ll remember that she has used her magic powers on several occasions and she wouldn’t have been able to do that while wearing the collar.

JujuDeRoussie: Poor Ben indeed, I was a bit reluctant to write such a short but tragic role like Ben’s but it was a good way to illustrate the lengths to which Abraham was prepared to go to catch Tara, including sacrificing a young father. Yep, I definitely like ‘living’ the past in this way, it’s far more fun than just having it told to you by someone.

JustSkipIt: Hi there Deb, thanks very much, I’m glad that you enjoyed the different settings of this chapter, it did roam both place and time to create a picture of what Abraham has become.
I like your allusion to Inigo Montoya from the Princess Bride, he and Abraham are definitely alike in the fact they have carried their vengeance for so long and let it develop to the point where it has consumed them.
And as for things working out with Abraham, well, in the 19th century Tara is still hanging around her love and Abraham is long dead…still, I don’t know if anyone is really going to come out well.

diamondforever: It’s slowly coming together, I’m going to be nice and let you know that the mystery of the heartbeat will be explained in the next chapter.

safuega: I’m pleased I was able to deliver such a good homecoming present to lessen the pain of coming back from holiday, I’ve just come back from holiday myself and I’m still not pleased about being back at work.
Yep, Tara is really evil and you can trust me when I say that she will continue to bait Abraham for as long as possible, more to come in the next chapter.
He loses the woman he loved to his sister. The woman he loved is killed and becomes a vampire. Then he loses his sister to the vampire that the woman he loved has become.

Despite all that Abraham has become, this clearly shows one tragedy after another piling up on the poor man, I am not sure that anyone would be able to stay sane in the same circumstances. I think he would be even less unhinged if he did not have did not have his vendetta against Tara to keep him on one path.
Whatever happens when Willow and Tara eventually meet up again, its going to be intense so stay tuned for that, there’s a lot of guilt on Tara’s part and a serious love/hate dichotomy on Willow’s part.
I agree with your analysis of Tara with a soul, I didn’t really think it would be realistic for Abraham to physically torture the pure demon Tara, instead he can restore her soul and let her torture herself.
Nice plot predictions, stay tuned to find out what happens!
I have watched Vampire hunter D so I at least know what you’re talking about, I’m really glad that my writing does conjure up such visual images as that is what I always strive for.
Thank you very much!

db: I agree, life definitely does get busy but I’m glad you could stop by and let me know that you’re enjoying this fic.
Abraham’s character has definitely changed a lot in even five years, and by the time 30 years has passed he is but a shadow of the former self that we all loved. Time will tell whether he ever is able to find peace.
Thanks for staying tuned.
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Chapter 28 – Tortured Soul



The silence that filled the tiny corridor following Abraham’s statement was complete. No one made a sound, not even Minto who was holding his breath. The vampire stared at Abraham as though her eyes were daggers and she was stabbing him repeatedly. Abraham appeared as though he were congratulating himself on formulating a plan of unsurpassed brilliance.

It was Minto who broke the silence, emitting a small gasp that gradually gave way to rapid breathing. So panicked was his struggle for breath, he was in danger of passing out and had to hold onto the wall to steady himself. When he finally calmed down, he found Abraham still standing quite still with a calm expression on his face. This was the complete opposite of how Minto felt.

“Are you deluded, Van Helsing?” Minto demanded, “That spell has been lost to the ages…and for good reason! A vampire with a soul is truly a godforsaken creature, an abomination!”

“There was one who had the spell,” Abraham replied quietly, with one long look at the demon, he turned and made his way from the corridor out into the training room, he stopped next to a table laden with books, glassware and a package carefully wrapped in leather, “And it was my good fortune that he also saw fit to give me this…”

With great reverence, Abraham untied the cords that held the parcel closed and then peeled back the leather to reveal the small object held within. Minto gasped when Abraham withdrew a shard of blue crystal the size of his hand. The shard was transparent blue the colour of sapphires, smooth on all sides save one where it appeared to have been torn off from a much larger crystal. He held it out to Minto but the small man shook his head furiously and refused to accept it.

“The price?” Minto whispered in horror, “You cannot possibly ask me to pay…”

“I have already paid the price,” Abraham replied simply, “And it time, it will claim me…but it was a price I was more than willing to pay in order to obtain this.”

Abraham pressed the crystal forward again and Minto drew in a deep breath. This time he reached out to receive it, his hands trembling as he did so. As soon as his fingers closed over its surface, his entire body jolted as though he had just received an electric shock. His initial fear subsided and he fondled the crystal almost lovingly between his fingers.

As he watched Minto with the crystal, Abraham saw the man begin to transform slowly but surely. His hair was no longer so wiry, his skin no longer sagged from his bones and instead appeared firm and young. Minto’s eyes shone with an intense brilliance and excitement where he had seen only fear up until this point. Upon witnessing its power, Abraham was satisfied that the crystal could indeed do what he had been promised it would do.

Minto finally tore his gaze away from the crystal, “Van Helsing, I am curious, the price he asked of you…what was it?”

“Enough questions, Mr Minto,” Abraham spoke quietly, shards of sadness piercing his deep voice, “You will be handsomely compensated for your services so I expect nothing but your full co-operation. Will you assist me?”

“V-very well,” Minto whispered, clutching the two objects to his chest, he managed a nervous smile, “Being a magick practitioner, or at least an honest one, is not as well paid a job as you m-might think so I suppose I could certainly use the money…my preparations will take me some time however…”

“Obviously,” Abraham replied, “You will find everything you need on the table just beyond the door…call me when you are ready and I will bring the demon.”

Minto nodded quickly and ducked his head. He then backed out of the narrow corridor, refusing to turn his back on the demon even though her magicks were bound and her physical body was behind bars. With the little man gone, Abraham turned his full attention to the pale face that stared at him from behind the bars of her prison.

If the demon had been hostile earlier, she was now livid with anger upon hearing of her intended fate. She gripped the bars in front of her with bone white fingers as though she were trying to tear them down with her mind. Abraham knew she could do nothing of the sort and taunted her further by leaning casually against the wall behind him.

“I will take much pleasure in ripping your throat open, Abraham Van Helsing,” she snarled, rattling the bars of her cage.

Abraham coughed out a small laugh, “Ah, yes, considering you are in there and I am out here…I would say your plan is flawed, demon!”

She screamed in a terrible sound of rage and frustration. Just beyond the corridor Abraham heard Minto take fright and drop something that shattered on the ground.

“You think that pathetic fool will succeed in restoring Tara Maclay’s soul?” Tara growled, thrusting her chin forward defiantly, “He will fail and you will be forced to destroy me!”

Nonplussed, Abraham cocked his head to one side in an expression of curiosity, “Answer me this, why did you come searching for the skull alone?”

The demon appeared disgusted, “You think I would actually answer that?”

He shrugged, “I do not care one way or the other…I just thought it was an incredibly foolish move on your part to come alone when you could have had several minions at your back,” Abraham frowned suspiciously as he saw an uncomfortable expression settle on her face and he had a nagging revelation, “Unless the whole point was to succeed on your own…ahhh, I see now. Deliver the skull to your master single-handed…or even seize it for yourself without his knowledge.”

She squirmed and released the bars, backing away into the shadows.

Abraham smirked, “That is the problem with power, once one has had a small taste you will forever crave more.”

“You know naught of the matters of which you speak!” the vampire responded in a sullen voice.

Abraham felt an immense amount of satisfaction when he realised that all her words and chin thrusting added up to naught but empty blustering. He could see straight past this façade to the terror that lay beneath at just the mere thought of being ensouled. Even if Minto failed to restore her soul, the whole endeavour would not be a complete waste of time. However, Abraham knew that this terror was nothing compared to what she would feel if the spell was a success. He could already hear her screams of pain and anguish echoing within the confines of her tiny cell.

The demon had one last card to play, and she played it to the best of her ability. When she emerged from the shadows there was a vicious smile on her face.

“Abraham Van Helsing you are a fool if you believe this little scheme of yours will work, even in the event that you do restore her soul, you will find yourself completely unable to lift a finger against the woman you once loved,” Tara paused as she watched a flicker of emotion pass over Abraham’s face, she smiled, “Ah, you think she did not know about your little infatuation…how could she not? The way you doted on her, she could see your eyes roaming her body, wanting what was not yours.”

Abraham swallowed, blocking her words from his mind, She is trying to provoke you…you must not listen, think only of Willow and what this creature did to her!

“You may have a soul but you will never again be Tara Maclay,” Abraham found it difficult to even choke out her name in the presence of the demon, but he continued strongly, “I have absolutely no qualms whatsoever about your torture.”

“You will cave in the moment she starts screaming,” the demon predicted, she slid her tongue across her lips, “And I think that you are not man enough to take what I know you want…to finally lie with the woman you never stopped loving.”

“Silence!” Abraham growled.

“Would raping her truly fulfil your promise to make me suffer?”

Abraham cried out in frustration and slammed his fist against the bars of her cell door. Such was his ferocity that the creature stumbled backwards and almost fell to the floor.

“You are a foul, despicable creature!” Abraham hissed, spittle erupting from his mouth, “Enjoy your last moments of guilt-free existence…for very shortly you will know exactly what it feels like to have killed the one you love and I will be there to watch that moment of realisation dawn on your face!”

Abraham turned and strode out of the corridor with the obvious intention of going to check on Minto’s preparations, this concealed his real intention however which was hiding the small traces of doubt which had crept into his well laid plan. Although he had been anticipating the demon’s ensoulment for decades, he truly could not say what his reaction would be when happened. For all intensive purposes, the creature would once again be Tara Maclay, or as good as…and Tara Maclay was not the person who murdered his sister. Abraham exited the corridor and shut the bookcase behind him; he sat down heavily in a nearby chair and watched as Minto sifted through various books, furiously scribbling notes without looking up once.

After a few moments of watching the man at work, he shifted his gaze to the center of the room and the well worn training pads that covered the floor. It required hardly any imagination at all for him to recall Willow lightly stepping across those pads, her feet moving gracefully as she worked on her footwork or learnt a new technique. Her red hair would be bound up out of her face, but small strands were always bound to escape and caress her pale cheek. She would laugh all too easily, especially if the butt of her humour was her brother. When Abraham re-opened his eyes he realised that he was crying.

His mind was set; he would not allow himself to be swayed by any tricks the creature could play on his mind. Willow deserved retribution…and she would get it.

~~~~~~

Thump-thump, thump-thump, thump-thump…

The steady sound was overwhelming, filling her entire head as though trying to make her skull crack and burst. She opened her mouth as she struggled for a breath but found even more pain. Air burned her throat as it forced its way down to her chest. As her lungs inflated she desperately needed to scream but she collapsed into a coughing fit. She lay on the floor, her back arched as she struggled to just breathe normally…

It is breath, you need it to live…, she paused, struggling to make sense of this, If I need it, why does it seem so foreign?

Gradually the breaths did come easier and she tried to rise once more, instinctively feeling as though there was something or someone near her that she needed to escape from but she could see nothing in front of her eyes but white spots. Panic gripped her, whatever it was, it meant to harm her!

It was too much, everything slowly faded to black and with a sigh she slipped backwards, unconscious before her head hit the floor.

As Tara finally lay motionless on the floor in front of him, Abraham stared in disbelief. He whirled around to face Minto and saw that the small man had collapsed in the middle of the training room, still surrounded by his chalk scribblings. The crystal in front of him bore a thick crack and from it blood seeped in large quantities, creating a pool around his semi-conscious form. Abraham picked the dazed man up by his shoulders and held him upright. As he shook the poor man he gradually came to his senses, enough at least for Abraham to demand answers.

“I didn’t tell you to bloody kill her!” Abraham growled, shaking the still limp Minto.

Minto eyes opened, at first they were out of focus but eventually he brought them to bear on Abraham Van Helsing. He glanced first from the angry face in front of him and then down to the limp form of the vampire.

Minto drew in a deep breath in the face of Abraham’s anger and stated the obvious, “Mr Van Helsing, she was already dead.”

Abraham let another growl, “You know what I mean, fool!”

“I-I do not know,” Minto stuttered, slowly edging towards the vampire. His eyes widened when he saw her chest rising and falling, “but it appears that she is breathing.”

“Your powers of observation astound me!,” Abraham replied, his voice dripping with sarcasm, “You haven’t just restored her soul…you’ve restored her…humanity?”

At that point, Abraham’s jaw dropped and his face sagged in horror. If his first impressions were correct and the idiot Minto had somehow managed to restore the demon to the person she once was, all his careful plans and sacrifices would have been for nothing. As twisted and revenge-driven as he was, even Abraham could not see himself torturing a young woman…and one he had once loved.

“Perhaps not,” Minto whispered quietly as he studied her unconscious face.

Slowly he crossed the floor of the training room and selected a small dagger from the weapons rack. He then tentatively moved closer to the unconscious form. With a trembling hand, Minto drew the knife across his forearm and blood very quickly welled from the shallow cut, running over his skin. He knelt and held out his arm towards the vampire. There was no change in her condition as the first few drops of blood splashed onto her closed lips. However, he gently parted them with his fingers and let the blood fall directly into her mouth. Barely a split second later her back arched and she sat up with a start. Minto had to scrambled backwards to avoid clashing their heads. She stared at him through wide eyes for a few seconds before desperately scrambling away on all fours. Seconds later she was crouched under the book laden table with her back to the two men.

Abraham hunkered down stared at the demon huddled beneath the table, as her back was to him, he could clearly see the rise and fall of her shoulders as she gasped for air. While Minto’s little experiment had made it clear that she was still a vampire, clearly not all had gone to plan.

He swivelled on his heels and faced Minto once more but kept one wary eye on the vampire. Even in her current state, he did not want to let her out of his sight. The thin man was clearly struggling to stay upright. The effects of the crystal were long gone; instead he appeared as haggard and drained as he had when Abraham had first met him.

“Just what did you do?”

“I-I am not entirely sure what I have done, Mr Van Helsing,” Minto stammered weakly, “It would ah…appear that I have restored a few ah…um…other things along with her soul.”

~~~~~~

Tara was lost in a maze of corridors; with each turn she took she grew more and more confused. Something about the corridors was familiar and she felt that they ought to be comforting, but she could not shake off the deep set feeling that something was very wrong.

Gradually, as her thoughts became more coherent, she began to recognise things. A painting there, a tapestry here, she knew where certain rooms led…and she knew where she needed to go. Almost breaking into a run, Tara lifted her skirts and headed down the corridor ahead of her. Her heart was beating quickly as she found the door she was searching for…if anything, what she found inside that room made her heart beat even wilder.

In the middle of the room stood an all too familiar four posted bed of the type favoured by young ladies of good breeding, complete with fine lace hangings and pristine white sheets. However, sprawled in the midst of the bed was a young lady who could not possibly have been of fine breeding. She was stark naked for want of a better term, her arms were stretched out behind her head to give Tara a full view of a fine pair of breasts. Her legs too were spread, offering a view of a treasure of a different kind, dark but exceptionally inviting. Tara glanced from the offerings on display to the face of the woman in question. She found herself staring straight into the dancing and highly mischievous eyes of one Miss Willow Van Helsing who apparently was not a lady of good breeding as she appeared to have no qualms whatsoever about baring absolutely everything.

“There you are!” she purred, “You kept me waiting so long I almost started without you!”

Tara stared as Willow moved one of her hands down from where it lay above her head to trail downwards. She watched it glide over the pair of breasts and down over the creamy white stomach before coming to rest lightly atop the mound between Willow’s legs. One finger moved further downwards, slipping beneath the mound and into the dark slit beneath. Tara saw Willow’s eyes half-close in anticipation.

“I want your fingers here!” Willow pleaded, even as her fingers lightly stroked the flesh beneath them.

“W-Willow…” Tara whispered, her voice quite numb, lacking any emotion.

She made no move to do Willow’s bidding and instead stood frozen in the doorway.

“That is not quite the reaction I was hoping for,” Willow said softly, her fingers coming to a halt and sliding out from the folds between her legs.

Tara ducked her head and bit her lip, straining to try and remember something which last just beyond her grasp, “I-I am sorry, Will...I just feel so…lost.”

“Tara?” Willow quickly lost the smouldering expression on her face as she gathered her limbs together and sat up, swinging her legs over the side of her four-posted bed, “Why do you feel lost?”

”It seems an age since I saw you last,” Tara whispered in reply, taking a few cautious steps toward her naked lover, “I cannot remember when…”

Willow frowned slightly but offered something to jog Tara’s memory, “Well, it has been a few weeks, not since Sunday last, after church…when you and I shared a rather naughty carriage ride together.”

Tara remembered. Willow had begged Abraham to walk the three miles back to Hagley Park in order to let the two women ride alone in the carriage. No sooner had they folded themselves within its confines, Willow had drawn every curtain closed and set about undoing the laces on Tara’s bodice. Moments later her other hand had somehow found its way up under her skirts and beneath the laces of her drawers. A few moments after that Tara had her legs up on the seat opposite her receiving the enthusiastic attentions of her lover. A wanton and blasphemous Willow had whispered in her ear that she had spent the entire church service imaging just what she would to do her when they were alone once more.

The heat rose quickly in her cheeks and also in her loins at the memory. She allowed Willow’s small smile to relax her to the point where she could no longer resist crossing the room to her naked lovers side.

Willow stood before Tara reached her and gently threaded her arms around her waist, drawing her in close. She stroked Tara’s back and felt her relax gradually, her breathing slowed and she nuzzled into the nape of her neck.

“You gave me a scare, Tara,” Willow whispered quietly, drawing back so she could stare up into her liquid blue eyes. She reached up and trailed several fingers down the side of Tara’s face, the blonde smiled and lent into the touch. “Are you quite sure you feel well?”

“Yes,” Tara replied slowly, “I am sorry Will…I did not feel quite myself for some reason.”

“I could make myself respectable and have Nancy make us some tea?” Willow offered helpfully.

Tara flicked her eyes down over Willow’s naked body, her previous unease almost forgotten, “We could…but it would be a shame to waste your careful plans.”

Willow’s eyes shone once more with a mischievous glint, “It would indeed…what do you propose Miss Maclay?”

“You could…you could return to your previous position,” Tara suggested hopefully.

“Yes ma’am,” Willow moved to comply and a few moments later she was once again spread eagled against the pillows behind her.

Tara could not remove her own clothes fast enough. Naked, she joined Willow on the bed and their limbs threaded together in a manner that meant they belonged together. With her thigh moving slowly against Willow’ centre, Tara bent to kiss her. A small sigh emerged from her throat which gradually became a drawn out moan as one hand closed over Willow’s nearest breast. She massaged the tender flesh, teasing the nipple until it was rock hard beneath her fingers. Her attentions moved to the other breast, teasing it for several minutes until she broke the kiss, trailing her lips down over Willow’s chin, her neck, her collarbone, to her breasts. Hungrily she took first one, and then the other in her mouth in turn, lavishing attention on the sweet flesh as Willow squirmed beneath her. Even as Tara was busy with her breasts, her thigh continued to move against Willow’s flesh.

Gradually Tara became aware of the slick moisture between her thigh and Willow’s centre. She realised with a fierce jolt that Willow was more than ready for her. Her fingers trailed over Willow’s flesh, eagerly moving downwards. In moments her fingers slipped between the same folds that Willow herself had stroked to tease her earlier. She ground her fingers against the tender, slick flesh, her touch rough but gentle.

“Inside!” Willow gasped, desperately thrusting her hips forward against Tara’s hand.

In response to Willow’s demanding gasp, Tara thrust two of her fingers up inside her. Willow was more than wet and the fingers entered quickly. Tara ground forward with her hips as she thrust her fingers as deeply as possible.

Willow groaned, continuing to thrust her hips forward in time with the fingers that were filling her passage. She searched and found Tara’s lips once more, claiming them fiercely for a moment before breaking the contact long enough to whisper in Tara’s ear,

“Say we can stay here forever,” Willow pleaded, “Please.”

“Of course, Will,” Tara replied quietly, “Forever.”

Tara gazed down at the woman spread beneath her as she arched her back in the throes of passion. Her head was tilted back as she strained to hold herself together, baring completely the creamy expanse of her white neck. Tara thrust forward again to feel Willow’s already throbbing cunt suddenly spasm violently around her fingers as she orgasmed. The redhead opened her mouth in a silent scream, her head digging back further into the pillows behind her.

As the woman bellow her writhed in the exquisite agony of her climax, Tara simultaneously thrust forward one last time and lowered her mouth to Willow’s throat. She felt her own shudders of fierce pleasure as soon as she bit through Willow’s soft skin and into the veins beneath.

Willow’s silent scream of ecstasy became one of vocal pain as Tara drank deeply and savagely, tearing at the flesh to expose more of the sweet liquid. Her veins continued to pulse, spewing forth her lifeblood over her sweaty chest and onto the tangled white sheets beneath her. Tara continued to thrust forward as she drank until she had ridden out the last waves of her climax. With the pleasant, damp warmth still clinging to her thighs she emitted a small growl and dove forward with an increased determination, needing to taste as much of Willow as possible. Although she drank deeply and fiercely, she still craved more. Willow thrashed beneath her but she kept her body weight securely stop her and pinned both arms back against the bed.

In time, the cries and the struggling stopped but Tara continued to drink from the lifeless body beneath her.

Willow’s sightless green eyes stared at the ceiling, the white sheets beneath her were no longer white but stained entirely red with her blood.


“Willow!” Tara desperately gasped out the name as she jerked her body upwards.

She was enveloped in complete darkness, unable even to see the hand she waved in front of her face. With cautious hands she reached out and felt her surroundings, a few feet in every direction she found nothing but cold, damp stone of the floor on which she sat. Eventually she came to a wall that was just as cold and damp as the floor. Even so it gave her some sense of stability and she curled up against it with her knees tucked up under her chin.

Crouched there in the darkness Tara felt only the chill of her own body and the steady thump-thump of her heart it her chest. It was almost like being in the womb…although completely lacking the warmth of a mother’s body. Her thoughts were scattered, although she could remember her name, there were very few other solid pieces of information that she could grasp a hold of. Just as she was grasping at the edges of understanding where she was, she was interrupted by a screeching rasp and the sound of surfaces grating against one another. With the sound came a shaft of light, small at first and then growing quickly until she could see the stone walls that hemmed her in.

Eventually Tara had to turn her head towards the wall and close her eyes in pain as the influx of light overwhelmed her sensitive eyes. She heard booted footsteps echo on the stone floors as someone came to a halt nearby. Slowly, only able to see through barely open eyes, Tara turned towards the light. Beyond the heavy bars of a cell door, she saw a man’s tall figure staring in at her. As her eyes gradually adjusted to recognise who he was, she realised that her heart was beating all too quickly in fear. So intense was the experience, she had to press her hand to her chest for fear of the organ thrusting through the skin.

As she clutched her heart she remembered the dream, while there had been fierce love making involved, Tara could only concentrate on one thing…the blood. Willow’s blood. She squeezed her eyes shut once more as a plethora of images filled her mind, this time not from the dream but from a reality that might as well have been a dream.

The image of fucking Willow up against a wall was quickly replaced by one of a sword in her hand. Moments later she thrust it into Willow’s unprotected back and watched her collapse to the ground, watching the life ebb from her body. Keeping one hand pressed against her heart, she pressed the other to her mouth to stop the sobs from emerging. She could not however hold back the steady flow of tears.

“It hurts to be alive does it not?” was the soft question.

Tears streaming down her face, Tara turned to face the man standing in front of her cell. Abraham Van Helsing. His weathered and lined face bore absolutely no trace of sympathy.

“I killed Willow,” Tara whispered, the very words sounding so incomprehensible to her ears.

She thought perhaps if she spoke them aloud she would hear just how ridiculous they were and know it could not possibly be true. Instead she felt the truth of them pierce her beating heart. She tore her gaze away from Abraham and pressed her cheek against the cold, damp stone behind her, grinding her skin against it as though that would erase the memories. However, she already knew that she could bang her head against the stone a million times and it would not change what she had done.

“Yes you did,” Abraham agreed in a chillingly quiet voice, “And that is something you are going to have to live with…for a very long time.”


TBC in Chapter 29 – The Last Van Helsing
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby Zooeys_Bridge » Thu Jan 17, 2008 9:18 pm

dibs!

oh wow wow Alcy. that was magnificent.

not that you haven't done this earlier in previous updates, but i love how you've made the seperation between Tara and the demon that inhabits Tara.
“You will cave in the moment she starts screaming,” the demon predicted, she slid her tongue across her lips

it's like it's not a Vampire Tara story but a story about a vampire who stole Tara's body. I know that's what you're trying to get at, and my wording makes them sound identical, but they're not. and it comes across perfectly.

Damn, that demon really knows how to press Abe's buttons, doesn't she? Enough to make a man who has been planning revenge for thirty years have a moment of doubt. Yikes.

But good for Abraham calling Tara out on her thirst for power. She seemed to like that too much.

And wow, what a comeback for Tara's soul. My goodness what an absolutely terrifying dream. I was all like "la la la, what a pleasant memory" and then I shrunk back in horror when Tara went for the throat. Boy, did those fuzzy feelings flee fast.

Egad, that nightmare. It was sick how Tara was still thrusting while sucking Willow's blood. I find myself angry that Abraham realized Tara Maclay would be returning and she was not the one who killed Willow and yet he still went through. Reguardless whether or not Minto restored her humanity, Tara's soul is still the one being punished and she didn't do anything. Gah. I'm still processing. And I think I've edited this post like three times now. It's not so eloquent, therefore suffice to say you've reduced me to rambles.

And neat with the whole "I may have restored a little more than her soul". I can't wait to find out what Tara actually got that allows her to be all 'whooshy' and heart-pumpy.

“It hurts to be alive does it not?” was the soft question.

Gosh, I wonder if Abraham is speaking to himself now or to her. :(

Magnifique! Can't wait for the next one!
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby dlline » Thu Jan 17, 2008 9:54 pm

Hey Alcy!

Another great update. While I'm not filled with the silliness that seemed to infect my last feedback, I am intrigued by everything that you've just given us. Yes, it would seem that ensoulment (word?) is a painful process, and Tara really has some pretty nasty thing to come to grips with. The dream sequence was painful, albeit kinda hot, so good on you for that. And the breathing and heartbeat stuff is fascinating. Minto's mistake, perhaps, or something else entirely? I'm not sure, but I'm confident that you'll let us in on it soon enough.

Another great update. I still want her in my basement, soul or not.

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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby taraslove » Thu Jan 17, 2008 10:19 pm

Wow.

I just feel so... wow. Poor Tara. The real Tara, I mean. It's interesting that you had VampTara talk about HumanTara like she's a totally different person. And Abraham acts like he's sure that she's still not the real Tara Maclay, even though she has a soul, but the unexpectedness of the restoration, what with the humanity giving and all... I'm wondering if he will eventually see that she is the same Tara and regret his decision to torture her. Just a bit o' speculation.

With this background revealed, I'm curious to see Tara and Willow face off again. Methinks it will be more angsty, knowing what I know.

Ooooh, and I'm also wondering who enchanted the mirror and if s/he knew that it would merge the Willows.

Great chapter!
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby Safuega » Thu Jan 17, 2008 10:36 pm

Alcy, Alcy, you only get better and better with this story. This update is devastating. Abraham's pain (double and triple for reasons already spelled out in my previous feedback) is so vast and deep that he has completely lost all his bearings -- human, moral, spiritual and otherwise. He has been broken and twisted by the pain as to imagine that Willow would have wanted him to obtain retribution for her death. It's unspoken but this particular retribution he has conjured feels to me as retribution against himself for having failed both Willow and Tara. Willow for allowing her to die alone and Tara for not having saved her when she was alive. In more ways than one he is punishing himself for having survived them both.

And Tara, poor Tara -- talk about best laid plans! Not only her soul restored but more than her soul, her breathing and god knows what else. I mean even dim Minto knows that a vampire with a soul is a most wretched creature, but Tara got a little extra to make her 'life' her own special living hell. If we went with the standard soul-restoring lore it would have been bad enough that the demon would be circumscribed by the soul and had to co-exist with it, but this sounds like Tara became more human than demon. Oh the godforsaken creature indeed.

And this line embodies the depth of desolation that is Abraham's life:

“It hurts to be alive does it not?” was the soft question.


Softly spoken as one who knows all to well what it means to be wretchedly alive and carrying the memories of the dead like a yoke. He can even allow himself a moment of sympathy before delivering the fatal blow:


“And that is something you are going to have to live with…for a very long time.”


Sigh. Sad, so sad.

Okay for my wild predictions and plot requests, Abraham's price for the mojo ? his life, of course. To make it his soul would be too terrible and I don't think you'd do that to him after all he's suffered. If more than just the soul has been restored as you suggest, then Abraham won't be able to bring himself to torture Tara physically. I am thinking he won't be able to bear it, he has already borne too much to add this to his load. So, he might just choose to keep her imprisoned and leave her to her darkness -- physical and otherwise. He's already pretty old by now and I'm thinking that the 'price' for this little feat has become due, so Tara will remain imprisoned for a relatively short time, long enough to let her adjust but not overly long so that she cannot begin her life as a double agent. I mean, based on your chronology of events Tara goes on to 'live' a hundred plus years afer so I'm thinking the imprisonment is not overly long. Don't get me wrong, it will still be terrible, possibly the most terrible time of her life as realization dawns, but in the larger scheme of things -- short. Hope that makes sense.

Also, very nifty that Tara is a bit more than just ensouled b/c it allows for an avenue for Willow and her to be together in the future. We need to have more than a 'leashed' demon in order for Tara to find redemption in this story and you are paving the way nicely for that redemption. And by redemption I mean Willow's forgiveness. There has to be more of Tara for Willow to love again and forgive otherwise it'd be too hard a road for Willow to travel after being killed by Tara.

As I write this I think that Tara has kept herself alive all this time just to seek Willow's forgiveness or Willow's revenge. I'm thinking that Tara is thinking that it would only be fair that Willow kill her if Willow cannot forgive her. Tara keeping herself alive must have been no small feat considering that as a result of the ensouling she got other bits that look suspiciously like weaknesses (i.e., breathing and having her breath knocked out of her).

One last thing - I don't know if when you wrote about the beating heart you envisioned creating in the reader an awareness of his or her own beating heart. If that's what you intended then I must say you did a masterful job since you totally made me aware of my heart as it actually hurt when I read this update. Nothing like pain to make you aware of a part of your body that you ordinarily take for granted.

Great update. Great writing. Great revenge. Every bit just great. Oh yeah, kuddos to covering great stretches of time in such succinct but thoroughly satisfying updates. Amazing.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Safuega

ETA - I believe you that the next W/T encounter will be intense. In fact, after this update I'm willing to bet that you are going to bust the intens-o-meter. God help us all b/c your brilliant but mad gift for storytelling might just kill us before this tale is through.
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby wimpy0729 » Thu Jan 17, 2008 11:02 pm

Oh my God, Alcy! It's finally here. We finally get to see her soul (and other things?) restored. And it seems the wizard doesn't even know exactly what happened with the spell.

But OH, the coming back, Tara just trying to remember how to breathe, and realizing it didn't feel right, just the whole process was so amazing. And THEN, when she realized things looked familiar, and she still knew where to go, where her beating heart led her -- still to Willow. Oh, that was so cool, and they were just like they used to be and then WHAM! The rug just got pulled out from under her and us in a horrific way. Oh, what a horrible way to come back and realize what she's done. We knew it was coming and you sure didn't disappoint.

It's hurting me already just to feel how she's hurting over her memories, even if it wasn't really her but the demon. That just doesn't seem fair that she has to be the one to suffer. But I'm guessing you're going to give us some hugs and puppies eventually to make up for all this suffering, right? ;-)

Truly amazing tale, and I really can't wait to see what's next.


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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby Foomatic » Thu Jan 17, 2008 11:50 pm

Alcy,

Please understand that no amount of my blabbering can show how much I enjoy reading your fic. The last two updates were so edge-of-your-seat gripping . . . I loved it! What a way to make someone suffer for eternity. Well written and as fabulous as ever. You've got me seriously hooked; I've got one of those mobile broadband sprint cards for my work laptop, and at least 4 times during work I check to see if you've updated. I'm a field techician, and when I have time in between jobs I like to indulge my W/T obsession. :) But don't tell my boss.
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby katjetson » Fri Jan 18, 2008 12:33 am

Dear Alcy,

I love you.
I love this fic.
I love your hair.

Actually, I'm not 100% about that last part, but I'll bet someone who writes this good must have a fierce hairdo.

Also, don't tell my girlfriend about that first declaration.

We're definitely a go with the that second part, though.

Seriously, where on Earth are you pulling these wonderful words, images, ideas, (sex scenes) from? It's a truly inspired piece of writing, and I'm so positively under the spell that is the epic tale of Van Rosenberg.

In one update you gave us our last COLD. HARD. look at VampTara (wow, she was pretty fuckin' demonic (and luscious)) and took us straight to the, uh... heart of (mostly) old Tara. I swear I kinda choked up a little when Tara said those words out loud, "I killed Willow." What a horrific realization for someone with a beating heart and soul and ... other things.

I love how VampT called out Abe on his lust for Tara. Whoknewsheknew? And, god... Did I already mention that I love you? I did, huh?

So now we're left with 100 years of sad, lonely and painful ground to cover and a future encounter between Willow, who isn't exactly the Willow that Tara once knew, and Tara, who isn't exactly the Tara that Willow once knew. Anyone else think there can never be enough Willow...z or Tara...z. ?

Sha-fuckin'-zam!

ETA: Have we ever in this fic seen Willow fuck Tara? We haven't, have we? Their first time was O.G.T on the couch doing dreaded things to Willow's back, their second time was VampT doing dreaded things to Willow ass against the wall and this most recent time was DreamT doing dreaded things to Willow's neck on the bed. Hmph! (Not that I'm complainin', just observin'.)
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Re: Van Rosenberg (Updated 15 Jan)

Postby Belli Bear » Fri Jan 18, 2008 1:06 am

katjetson wrote:
Dear Alcy,

I love you.
I love this fic.
I love your hair.

Actually, I'm not 100% about that last part, but I'll bet someone who writes this good must have a fierce hairdo


:lmao amen to that. I’ll bet Alcy sports a wicked doo. :P

In response to the updates posted since my last feedback, I'm afraid I can't be of much use to you as a writer, it is after all, extremely difficult to critique the work of a genius :P. However much my feedback lacks by way of assessment I hope I more than make up for it in praise :D. For you can be rest assured that somewhere out there in the squiggly blueish black of the cosmos… there is a girl (or four thousand) who checks this story for updates every hour on the hour! :laugh obsessive you say?? I’d like to think of it more as appreciative :D………

*watches you from your kitchen window with a camera and a lantern*

now remember, the word is appreciative, say it with me :|

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