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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Mon May 15, 2006 4:24 pm

JustSkipIt: That truly is as great a crime as you can commit! I was eagerly hanging out for you to fill in your feedback and now it's up I can say thank you for such praise.
I love writing fight scenes for the fact that they are so difficult to write, some scenes don't flow at all well and I struggle with them but do far in Sin City they've been nothing but fun to write due to the fact that the action is so stylised and often just plain brutal. It's also interesting trying to work in the internal dialouge and associated issues, like when, and how much is too much...
(Just to clarify, they’re not in Tara’s room but rather the lounge/sitting room that Willow found Tara in the previous evening, y’know, the one with all the couches and stuff) One great drawback in this fic is that law school is a little different here in New Zealand, by age 19 I was studying criminal law at law school and am definitely no wunderkind when it comes to legal stuff! However, rather than get bogged down in too much school related stuff I just wanted to show that Willow may not yet be at law school, but she’s already started studying law so that when she does get to go, she’ll be a star!
You’re right in that she is more mature than Tara is many ways, while Tara has the street smarts and the tough shell, Willow has the emotional maturity. I look at it as though Tara’s growth was stunted in prison while Willow has been through so much and learnt from everything.
You do sound like a maniac regarding Spike! But I think I might jump on your bandwagon! Cheers Debra!
Highlandlass25: Gotta love nurse Willow, (my little nod to the joke in the Chaos Bleeds PS2 game) I find it easy to enjoy angst, but its difficult to read at the same time.

Dianneswillowtree: gotta love them cliffhangers! I tend not to make too much use of them, or else when I do use them they’re usually so obvious its not really a cliffhanger. This ones a little different, Tara could be wanting to say just about anything…

caz: Have a great holiday caz! Glad I could give you one last update before you go!
In regards to Tara’s showdown with the thugs, it was for the purposes of showing her in her element, an environment where she is in control and knows how to handle herself as opposed to having to sit down and talking to someone like Willow as an equal.
See above regarding Willow’s reading…and this is Willow we’re talking about, it’s believable that she would read law textbooks for fun, or at least her own edification!
And yes, I love writing fics complete with a resident nut job, it’s a good opportunity to unleash! As to whether she’ll get her hands on Willow or Tara…we’ll have to wait and see…but the ending will be big!

beanie: Thanks for coming to the party beanie, I always love hearing what readers think of a particular story and of course I’m thrilled you’re following it closely.
I think the "I love you" declaration is a little way down the track, at this point in the story it’s just not believable, and you’re right, too soon. I like drawing things out! One does get the impression that Willow is drawing Tara out of her shell far sooner than she would have emerged if left to her own devices.
I think Willow’s scramble was a little of both, especially given the fact that she was studying so early in the morning while everyone else was still in bed. She’s trying to show Tara she’s tough and street-smart, for some reason she felt that the books were not evidence of this (even though they probably were) but instead fitted with the image of old Willow that Tara carries, ‘the little bookworm.’
Good point, I was intending that Tara sobered up after her fight in the alley but to a limited extent it would be a combination of all three factors but with the an emphasis on the one we all know is true!
I had to incorporate Spike in here somehow, it will be an interesting character to write as I’ve only ever had him as a good guy.
I promise a very twisted labyrinth to come, check out the next chapter for another twist!

WillowRulez: While I would never leave you hanging for a long time, I do enjoy just a little bit of a wait, its good for building up the suspense…not to mention testing the patience levels of Kittens.

Wimpy: I hope I haven’t wrenched anything out of place!
I definitely have the hots for tough-fighting Tara so we’ll be seeing more of her, while at the same time having her opening up further to Willow, and possibly some of the other Ladies as well.
I love being evil thank you very much!
I don’t think Glory ever took my vote for favourite villain, that goes to Spike. Although I agree that she had some of the best lines and she was deliciously evil.

Darth Pacula: Yes, we open with Tara on one of the most important of all missions, getting herself trashed. You’re very right, while she wouldn’t pull a Hartigan and kill herself, dying in a alley fight would be an acceptable way out. Hence the fact that she’s gone out of her way to leave Old Town and place herself in very real danger. One gets the impression that the Ladies know everything that’s going on in their patch and they would intervene if thugs tried to ice Tara. And then there’s the fact that she finds dealing to thugs cathartic.

Haha, you do have a good point Paul mate…but I have my twisted reasons for Tara doing something so incredibly stupid. It’s a contrast back to the opening chapter where she gunned down Talbot’s thugs without a thought, Tara’s changed, she doesn’t want to kill them like her old self. I think she feels that if she has blood on her hands it’ll rub off on Willow. Subconsciously, she’s already starting to make an effort…towards what, you’ll have to wait and see in the next chapter. Oh, and the fact that shooting them is just too easy! And yes, you’re blood thirsty and ruthless, but we wont hold that against you!
I can’t stand smoking either, although I do use it quite symbolically in all my fics, I find it’s a fantastic metaphor!

Moving onto another contrast, and I love your analogy of the scab-picking, fantastic imagery there.
I’m sure the peroxided one can cook us up some delights of a less than culinary nature. You won’t have to wait too long for more, next chapter is shaping up nicely.

sacinema: Another Kitten saying I’m evil, I see a trend developing here, excellent.
While the Glory in this fic isn’t a god, she’s just as bad so I’m pleased to be able to deliver her in her full glory!


WillowsGirlXX: Glad you could join us too. Sorry to hear you were sick but I’m glad to provide you with some entertainment!

watty: interesting that Tara somehow manages to go straight to Willow when she is injured (no analogy with Robo-Buffy intended!!) and the fact that Willow could respond so quickly.
And I agree with the subconscious feelings, gotta love those. Because of Willow, Tara’s changing without quite realising it. One day, she might actually have to face up to her feelings!
While we are seeing more of who Willow is, she still hasn’t moved from her initial meeting with Tara and the affection she displayed, albeit ‘unwanted’ on Tara’s part.
I promise much butt-kicking…eventually and some rather nasty ends, I hope that’s not giving anything away, but this is Sin City so they have to be nasty. You can trust me that they will be tastefully nasty!

Willow Watcher: Thanks very much! I do aim for coolness but I’m sure I never quite make it! sorry I couldn’t belieavably put Willow in a little nurses uniform!!

soup-chef: Nice name! The soup-chef is one of my favourite L word characters!
I agree, while I love the movie, it was definitely lacking a Willow and Tara to complete it!!

Artemis: I agree, I’d definitely be all with the ‘oh my god, oh my god!’ if I was stabbed.
Great allusion to Marv, I wanted to capture his sentiment, without having their motivations being identical. And yes, Tara seems to be not too fussed whether she reaches to see her next birthday, it’s a dangerous way to behave.
Oh, my Spike is going to be far ruder, cruder and more vicious than he ever was on BtVS, let’s just say this is gonna be what it was like if BtVS was an R18. and given that Buffy doesn’t talk in this fic, I can’t see any romance happening! Thanks very much Chris

Del Whicker: Another Kitten off on holiday, I want a holiday dammit! Have a safe trip and thanks for stopping by to leave feedback first! In regards to what Tara was going to say to Willow…you’re going to have to wait til the next chapter!!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Mon May 22, 2006 1:20 am

Chapter Six – “Silver Screen Dame.”


Outside the window the night is a washed out black, moonlight rendering it less threatening somehow. Should’ve been spending the time sleeping, recuperating, but my goddamn nightmares won’t let up. I may not be spending the rest of my life behind bars physically, but my mind is sure gonna give it a good try.

I shift the slightest fraction and the wound in my side lets me know exactly how bad an idea that is. The stitches feel as though they’re trying to rip out of my skin. Even so, I sit up slightly, enough to feel like I’m sitting up instead of lying down. Lying on your back for an entire day isn’t my idea of a good time and I’m mad as hell. Although I’m not sure whether I’m angry or insane.

In my boredom my mind inevitably shifts back to the conversation I was having with Willow before I passed out. Although god knows why I want to torture myself with something I want so badly to block out. Damn kid almost had me being honest, baring my fucking feelings. I find myself wishing I could’ve retained consciousness a few minutes more, just long enough to set her straight. There’s knock at my door and I know it’s her. I invite her in, half-expecting to be presented with a ‘get-well’ card drawn in those damn coloured pens of hers.


Willow entered Tara’s room with a heavily laden tray rather than a get-well card. Carefully balancing it with both hands, she moved to the foot of the bed and stood a little awkwardly. She didn’t quite want to look up at Tara but nor could she take her eyes off her.

“I know this is a stupid question, you lying in bed with a stab wound and all, but how are you?” Willow spoke quietly but there was a definite effort in her voice to at least sound cheerful.

Tara watched the tiniest attempt at a smile flicker across Willow’s face. She responded with a weak one of her own, although tired, sore and starving, the smile came out more as a grimace.

“That is a stupid question…but thanks for asking,” Tara replied, eying up the tray Willow carried with barely concealed desire, “I’m better…good almost.”

Willow brightened as the answer seemed to please her, “I’m glad, because for a moment there I thought you were going to die, you know, blood loss and all of that. Although you were probably never in any danger, being so…strong and all…”

“I’ve had worse,” Tara pulled herself up a little further, defiantly ignoring the pain and determined to stop Willow babbling before she embarrassed herself, “And then been back out to work within a week. It’s nothing really. Whoever patched me up did a real good job.”

“Oh, we’ve got a doctor…well, he’s not ours as such, but he does stuff for all of us. Faith saved his life once. He was being beaten up by a couple of low-lifes for the fifty bucks he had in his wallet. So now he’s pretty much on call whenever we need him,” the tray was starting to get heavy and a yet as Willow shifted her weight slightly she seemed to have forgotten while she was carrying it in the first place.

Tara however, had most certainly not. Her stomach was threatening to tear its way through her skin and find food on its own as Tara seemed to be doing nothing to ease the hunger pangs. The situation was made all the worse by the fact that she could smell something rich and meaty wafting from a large bowl in the centre of the tray.

“Ah, Willow,” Tara asked cautiously, as though she were about to ask a huge favour.

Willow raised her eyebrows in anticipation, “Yeah?”

“Is it presumptuous of me to assume that’s my dinner?” Tara nodded towards the tray.

Willow’s eyebrows flew upwards in shock and she surged forward in her haste to deliver the tray. The contents of her tray mimicked her movements in almost sliding right of the tray and onto the floor. She barely managed to correct herself and for a second engaged in a comical balancing act which drew a suppressed snicker from Tara. Once the tray was under control Willow looked up with a sheepish expression on her face. Even so, she had not missed Tara’s brief display of mirth and it heartened her somewhat…even if it had come at her own expense.

Willow safely deposited the tray on Tara’s lap, her hairs prickling at their momentary close proximity. She drew away quickly, but not so quick as to be noticeable and took up a position standing next to the bed.

Tara barely stopped to take in what was on the tray before pouncing on the food. She did note that the large bowl contained a thick, hearty beef soup complete with large chunks of meat and vegetables. Next to the soup was a steaming loaf of bread, butter melting at its centre. There was a cup of black coffee, and a little oddly, a glass of milk. A separate plate held a large wedge of cheesecake, complete with yoghurt on the side. She tore off a large hunk of bread and sopped up as much soup as it could hold before cramming the oversized chunk into her mouth. Her jaws worked fiercely to stop herself choking on the bread and soup and she felt a dribble of gravy make its way down her chin. However, she did not pause until two more hunks of bread and several spoonfuls of soup had gone the way of the first. She followed it up with a gulp of the scalding coffee and perfunctorily dashed her fist across her chin to wipe away the mess.

Willow watched with a look that was somewhere between amusement and disgust. Tara looked up with no apology on her face.

“Fanks,” her mouth was partially full as she had popped another piece of bread into her mouth, she swallowed quickly and spoke a little clearer, “Did you make all this?”

“I opened the respective cans and boxes, and pressed the ‘start’ button on the microwave, “ Willow admitted honestly, “So if you could call that ‘making’, then yeah, I did. You were obviously hungry at any rate.”

Tara was scooping up soup as she retorted quickly, “Understate things much? Sorry, this is good though…but the milk?”

“Um, options?” Willow replied sheepishly.

“You want it?” Tara nodded at the milk, “Take a seat.”

Willow took up a perch on the edge of the bed and retrieved Tara’s unwanted milk from the tray, she took a long swallow before letting it rest on her lap with the support of one hand. They sat in silence for a while, silent except for Tara chewing with her mouth open and the scrape of her spoon against the bottom of the bowl. Willow tapped her heel on the ground and stared out the window, unsure of the best way to resume their conversation of the previous evening. Tara however, did not feel the need to talk. She was staring regretfully at her empty soup bowl. Her regret did not last long however, she fell upon the cheesecake with great gusto. Half of it was gone before she realised that she was poor company indeed. She pushed the tray toward Willow a little, nudging her with the corner.

“Want some?” Tara secretly hoped that Willow did not.

Willow’s attention was drawn away from the window and back to Tara, she shook her head politely. She continued sipping her milk, the question she was dying to ask Tara trapped on her lips.

The last of the cheesecake was finished in mere seconds; Willow picked up the tray and set in on the nightstand. She left Tara with just the coffee in her hands. The blonde burped slightly and lifted her hand to cover her mouth belatedly.

“Sorry,” she murmured embarrassed.

“No problem, I’m sorry I didn’t feed you earlier…I’m not a very good host I’m afraid. Too busy talking your head off and making an idiot of myself,” Willow dropped her gaze slightly.

Tara opened her mouth to rebut Willow’s words when her mind flashed back to the girl leaning all over her in the car, mere moments after their reunion. She reflected that the behaviour had been somewhat inappropriate, especially at the embarrassment it had caused…but she wouldn’t go as far as to say it was idiotic. Nor could she doubt the sincerity of Willow’s feelings for her.

I was almost justifying her behaviour…goddamn, next thing I know I’ll be flattered by her attentions…aren’t I already? I look at her and she looks right back at me, I know she’s thinking back to that conversation. I can see the yearning to ask me written plain as day on her face. I can honestly say that I would rather face another couple of those thugs in a back alley than sit for one more minute alone with this kid…

The silence was finally broken as both spoke at the same moment.

“Tara, I…”

“Listen, Willow…”

Both shut their mouths immediately and waited for the other to speak. Tara realised that Willow had no intention of speaking first and she sighed before opening her mouth once again.

“Listen Willow, I’m sorry I haven’t exactly been verbose since I got out of prison,” Tara began slowly.

Willow interrupted briefly, “Understate things much?”

Tara’s eyebrows rose slightly and Willow couldn’t tell if she was amused or annoyed at the interruption, she continued talking however.

“At any rate, I’m sorry. It’s a difficult transition to go from…i-in t-there to out here.”

Willow cocked her head to one side ever so slightly as she listened to Tara, she had never noticed Tara’s stutter before although as she reflected she remembered hearing it the previous evening. She had been so startled by what Tara had said that she had not noticed the manner in which it had been said, and the exact word over which Tara stumbled…love. She studied Tara’s face, seeing her vulnerability for the first time.

Tara saw the expression on Willow’s face and scowled angrily, “Don’t look at me like that!”

Willow fixed an innocent expression on her face, “Like what?’

“Like…” Tara stopped, Willow’s previous expression was nowhere to be seen in her now adorable gaze and her scowl deepened as a result of frustration, “Like whatever the look you had on your face before, two seconds ago, before you went all…”

Cute…adorable…it’s fucking impossible to stay frustrated at someone like her.

“Just don’t look at me okay!” Tara snapped.

Willow’s eyebrows raised sharply, mostly she asked herself whether Tara was intending that she take her literally. Her question was answered a few moments later when Tara looked her straight in the eye. She was biting her lip as though she were in deep thought. Willow found herself stealing small glances up at Tara, as though she were expecting another outburst.

“I-I…” Tara swallowed and began a new, “I had something I meant to say to you last night before I fainted.”

“Yeah, I did wonder about that a little,” Willow inwardly groaned at her understatement.

Willow studied Tara closely, saw the tightness around her mouth and her clenched fists. Whatever she had to say, she was struggling with some aspect, or perhaps all of it. Her bottom lip dropped slightly when she realised that Tara was poised for movement, as though she desperately wished she could disappear out the door. Instead she was restrained by her wound, unable even to face the opposition direction without irritating it.

“Look Willow, I’m really tired…” Tara began.

As soon as Willow realised that Tara was about to brush her off, her mouth dropped fully and she rose on two very firmly planted feet to stare down at Tara. She interrupted her without mercy.

“Oh no you don’t…don’t you dare go all avoidy on me right when you were about to speak your mind! Tell me honestly what you want to say to me…and don’t make up another excuse because I’ll see right through it,” Willow almost felt like shaking her finger at the recalcitrant ex-cop lying in the bed before her.

She managed to stop herself before she sank to using such an inane gesture, especially given the tense situation. Willow had finally come to the point to which she had been working and was not about to screw it up because she was pissed off.

Tara was every bit the petulant child as she stared at Willow from the corner of her eye to avoid moving her body for the second time in less than a minute. Willow confronted her with a steadfast gaze.

It’s always been too late for me…it’s been that way since I put slugs into Glory’s devil spawn eight years ago but I always felt safe in the knowledge that I could still save Willow. I saved her all those years ago and I could save her this time too…until now. I can’t save her anymore, I can’t save her because I’m going to drag her down with me, get her killed, all because I can’t keep my fucking dumbarse self under control. She’s looking at me expectantly, she knows it even if she doesn’t understand what it will do to her. She’s getting impatient, foot starting to tap on the ground. Fuck! I need more time to think, work out a plan so we can all be happy and get out of this alive…since when did I start caring about saving myself?

When Tara finally spoke, she spoke the words simply, “I feel something for you, Willow.”

While Willow had not been expecting a declaration of undying love from Tara, she had to admit that she was expecting a statement that carried a little more conviction than the one she had just heard. As it was, she was rather confused.

“I feel something for you?” Willow repeated, feeling more than a little stupid, “Tara, what the hell is that supposed to mean? You feel something for me as in the affection that you would feel for a little sister…or you feel hot all over like you wanna fuck…”

“Willow!” As she snapped at the capricious redhead, Tara rolled over to face her in a movement that caused a considerable amount of pain, “Stop deliberately provoking me!”

Willow raised her hands in placation and let Tara continue, albeit in a milder voice, “I’m not lying, I am really tired…and nor can I answer your questions…I just need a little…”

“Time,” Willow finished quietly.

The redhead took a few steps closer to the bed and reached out to take Tara’s hand in her own. Tara felt the small, warm fingers enclose her own in one gentle squeeze before she released them all too soon.

“Yeah, time,” Tara heard herself say.

Willow backed away from the bed, a small but radiant smile of victory spreading across her face. She was still smiling when she turned and headed out the door. Her victory wasn’t over Tara. She knew full well she hadn’t beaten Tara at anything, but she had beaten back the demons…at least a little…

~~~~~~

The kid must have taken me seriously because it’s been a week and I haven’t heard a peep out of her, at least nothing to do with my feelings, fuck, what a stupid thing to say. I’ve been kicking myself all week about it. I’ve never been much of a wordsmith but that little bit of verbiage really takes the prize in the sappy crap sweepstakes. You’re losing it Tara, really losing it…

Still, she’s not much of a kid, not really. Especially not after I’ve just seen her show for the second time. I search her out across the floor of Kitty’s and her eyes meet mine. She’s standing next to Faith, a long coat thrown over her stage costume. The coat parts slightly as she lifts her arms to wave and I see creamy skin, creamy and bright even in the gloom of Kitty’s. I don’t wave back of course; it’s not my style. I nod…that’s what tough guys are supposed to do.

However, there’s a slight curl to my lips as I turn back to face my drink sitting on the bar in front of me. I think I’m a fool…


Tara let the cacophony of Kitty’s constant humming flow over her as she savoured the cool beer. She downed it in one long, slow drag and set the empty back down on the bar with a thud of satisfaction. Somewhere over her shoulder was Willow and Tara knew she was waiting for her.

Across the bar, Willow watched Tara down her beer and looked nervously to her own drink. Her show had finished at least ten minutes ago and she’d been standing at Faith’s side for most of that time, barely sipping her drink as she waited for Tara to cross the room and join them. However, just as it looked as though Tara was sliding the stool back to begin the rise to her feet a tall figure shrouded beneath an expensive and beautiful coat moved to block her path. Willow found herself watching the newcomer intently, the figure hugging coat outlined trim curves and coal black curls peeked from the raised hood. She noted that Tara did not look up at her although she would definitely know there was someone standing so close. Willow’s breath caught in her throat as the woman slowly peeled back the fur-lined hood of her coat. The movement appeared to be seductively calculated and turned more than one head in the bar. In fact, Willow noted, it turned almost every head besides Tara’s. She shrugged the coat off her shoulders and a man, who Willow had not previously noted, stepped forward to take the coat and fold it over his arm.

Willow watched as the woman then leaned down to speak softly in Tara’s ear, finally rousing Tara from her intent concentration on the beer glass in front of her. She continued to watch as Tara glanced up at the women and saw the resulting clouded look that passed over Tara’s face. The look spoke volumes, which was saying a lot considering that Tara was the queen of brevity. Willow then studied the woman’s face once more, knowing she had seen her somewhere but ultimately coming up blank.

“Who’s that?” she leaned over and asked in Faith’s ear.

Faith too had been staring at the woman. When Willow addressed her, she turned and regarded her with a wry but sympathetic smile that said she knew something.

“You spend too much time with your nose in a book kiddo, we need to get you out more often…say to a movie?” Faith suggested, knowing full well Willow loved her books, “Have you never heard of Evie Abernathy?”

Willow snorted, “Isn’t she an actress?”

“Yup,” Faith replied with a nod.

“What’s she got to do with anything…” Willow stopped short and she turned back to look at the woman once more, comprehension dawned, “That’s Evie Abernathy? Why the hell is a movie star talking to Tara as if she knows her?”

Willow narrowed her eyes suspiciously; Evie Abernathy looked as though she knew Tara a little too well.

Faith’s reply came out reluctantly, “Because Willow, Evie Abernathy is Tara’s ex.”

Despite the reluctance of Faith’s speech, the words shot straight towards Willow and hit her square between the eyes. Such was their impact that she almost fell backwards.

“Tara has an ex,” Willow whispered it out loud for the benefit of her own ears, “Tara’s ex is a fucking movie star.”

“It was in all the papers about ten or eleven years ago, I guess you were a little too young to be reading the scandal rags,” Faith let out an appreciative whistle, “Damn, they both look as hot together now as they did in all the photos back then.”

“They’re not together now,” Willow whispered between gritted teeth, slamming the palm of her hand down on the table.

“Will, I didn’t mean together as in ‘together together’, I just meant it as in seeing them standing side by side like that…Will?” Faith turned around in time to see Willow’s departing back passing through the back door towards the changing rooms, “Someone’s jealous.”

~~~~~~

I smell her before I even lay eyes on her. A hot, cloying scent that fogs my brain, gives me a headache and drives me wild all at the same time. She whispers in my ear, a tropical summer breeze that does not cool but is hot and suffocating.

“Got time for an old flame?”

Sure enough, I turn around and she’s standing right in front of me, looking exactly the same as she did ten years and nine months ago. This is a new development that I really don’t need…Evie Abernathy. Movie star, somewhat of a drama queen…but that little fact means very little in the face of the fact that she is just plain fucking gorgeous, and a dyke to boot.

Evie straightened herself to her full height to look down on Tara, “Well, well, well…I thought I read you were in jail serving a life sentence for killing a couple of people and kicking the shit out of Junior Talbot?”

Her voice has changed with the passing of time. It’s lost that girlish quality which limited her to the roles of ingénue or high school student. I often heard her joke that she’d spent several lifetimes at high school. It’s mellowed now, mellowed into something sophisticated and rich. It matches her scent perfectly. Last I heard she’d been nominated for an Oscar. How appropriate, the two of us always had been poles apart.

“I was,” Tara tried to keep her voice level and nonchalant, “But I got bored of it.”

“Same old Tara. So you just walked out of a maximum security prison?” Evie teased.

The star turned to the bartender and ordered a scotch and a double of Jack as Tara was still trying to sort out what was happening, the fact that Evie was really there in front of her had thrown her slightly and she quickly moved to recover by throwing her defences up once more.

“Yes, they were only too happy to let someone like me get out of their sight,” Tara replied, her voice dripping with sarcasm.

Evie just smiled and accepted the two glasses from the bartender, one of which she placed before Tara as she slid elegantly onto the dirty stool that stood empty beside her. She crossed her legs and somehow managed to sit on the stool as though it were a throne.

“I’m not here to bait you Tara, I know you escaped and I knew where I’d find you,” Her tone was somewhat apologetic, “Let’s just say a few of the Ladies are good friends of mine.”

Tara saw a smirk flicker across Evie’s face. She hadn’t changed one bit, still drawn to bad girls…as bad as they came by the sounds of it. Tara lifted the Jack to her lips and took a hearty swallow.

“What did you come here for then?” Tara asked bluntly.

“Nice to see that prison has made your manners even worse…I know you’ve been fucking awful, don’t you want to know how I’ve been?”

I’ve been away for too long and I can’t tell whether she’s serious or just trying to piss me off. I know exactly how she’s been…making movies, making millions of dollars and fucking scores of women, straight, lesbian and everything in between…what else is there to ask?

“How have you been, Evie?” Tara humoured her, the question emerging though gritted teeth.

“Swell! The movie business has been good to me, I don’t know if you’ve seen any of my latest flicks but I’ve established myself as the world’s greatest action heroine…Angie can only look at me and go green with envy, not to mention the two Oscars but who’s counting really? I’ve just purchased a house up in Sacred Oaks as well as the penthouses in New York and LA and the estate back home in England.”

Tara didn’t bat an eyelid, modesty had never been one of Evie’s strong points, “Why would you want to move back to Sacred Oaks, why the hell would you want to live anywhere near Basin City for that matter?”

“It has its good points…and I’ve recently discovered that despite all that I have, I miss the one thing I let get away. Tara, I realise now that I was a childish fool and it’ all so empty and positively boring without you in my life,” she finished with a grand flourish in her voice.

“Are you serious?” Tara shot back, her voice laden with scepticism.

“Honestly Tara, being involved with you was one of the greatest trials in my life, do you really think I’d miss the fact that you made me miss countless parties and benefits, or else I had to attend on my own, all because you threw a tantrum of some sort…”

“I never threw tantrums! That was your bag!” Tara protested indignantly.

Evie continued, “and not to mention the fact that you refused to move out of that dive you lived in and in with me. God knows why you preferred squalor to luxury…”

“I valued my independence,” Tara replied stubbornly, thinking back to her old one-room apartment.

“Yes, I know, you valued independence over hot-running water,” Evie replied dryly, she had never possessed any qualms about Tara compromising her independence.

Tara growled, she had qualms a plenty and most of them involved Evie Abernathy dictating her life, “Enough with the pleasantries, you’re pissing me off.”

“Fine then, small talk has never been one of your strong points anyway,” Evie took a long swallow of scotch, “I came to offer help, namely, to get you to leave town. Just say the word and you’re gone anywhere you want...the Caribbean, Australia.”

Although the situation hardly warranted it, Tara found herself laughing. Evie was staring at her as though she’d gone mad and she very probably had.

“What’s so funny?” Evie asked cautiously.

I’m thinking the exact same thing myself but the truth be told, I feel more like crying than laughing…although I would be dead before I ever admitted it. I sit staring at my Jack wondering just how much to tell Evie, how much of the pathetic story should I reveal and I make my decision quickly.

“Last week that was my plan…you were the ticket to my getting the hell out of here. It’s just that now that the offer’s on the table, I have to turn it down,” once it was out, Tara realised it had not been that hard to say and she was quick to respond to the perplexed expression on Evie’s face, “I have to stay, I owe these women my life, I can’t let them fight on their own….and there’s this girl, I made it my business to save her life once, I can’t abandon her now.”

Evie knew exactly who Tara meant but she clarified anyway, “The little girl you saved from Talbot?”

“She’s not so little anymore,” Tara replied in a heavy voice.

Evie’s next question was automatic, “You’re in love with her?”

Tara drained the last of her Jack and ground the remaining ice cube with her teeth. She eventually shook her head awkwardly in reply.

I’m not a liar…

Evie just smiled as though she could read Tara’s thoughts. There was always something more to it with Tara. Things were never that simple. However, she could not resist a jibe at her ex,

“You keep telling yourself that darling, might make you feel better,” she stood up as gracefully as she had sat down and gave Tara a cheeky little wave, “I’ll be off now, give you some time to think and maybe get all naked and sweaty with your little girlfriend a couple of times so you can decide if she really is worth the price of going up against the Talbots.”

Tara stood in one powerful movement and jabbed her finger angrily in Evie’s direction, “Too far, Evie, too far!”

Almost automatically, Evie’s bodyguard was at her side with the pretence of helping the star back into her coat. However, he kept his steely gaze on Tara, who he regarded as a bit of a loose cannon. Tara seethed inwardly for a few moments, her finger shaking in Evie’s direction before she realised how ridiculous she must have looked and lowered it. The object of her frustration flashed her a dazzling and very knowing smile. Tara had lost the round, completely.

Tara sighed, for all Evie’s faults, she had a heart of gold and coupled with the small measure of nostalgia for what they had once shared, this meant that Tara would hate to see something happen to the star. Although it infuriated her to have to admit it.

“She knows we were close, have those bodyguards keep an extra good eye out, even up in Sacred Oaks,” Tara kept her expression serious.

Evie laughed it off, “Tara, I’m a fucking movie star, no one’s gonna mess with me, especially not that bitch Talbot…frumpy, ugly tart that she is.”

“She’s a powerful woman, Evie,” Tara continued to urge Evie despite the flippant brush off she received, “You may be famous but she thinks she’s a god.”

“Well, it’s high time someone took her down from her pedestal,” Evie replied as though it would be a relatively easy task, “Looks as though that job’s fallen to you…so I would say ‘see you later’ but I don’t know how much longer you’ll be around.”

Tara swallowed, her throat was already dry and she needed another drink, “See you in hell would be more appropriate.”

Evie smiled and turned to leave Kitty’s, as she did she spoke over her shoulder, “You’re too fucking virtuous for hell, Tara.”


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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Darth Pacula » Mon May 22, 2006 3:28 am

Dibs!

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Um ... better late than never, right? Sorry I took so long to get back, but I'm running behind on a whole pile of feedback. Meh.

Righto then, feedback. Tara's little comment in her voice over, regarding her mental imprisonment, as opposed to her physical, was profound. I've heard that is a very real issue, especially with long-term inmates. I don't have any experience with it myself; I've managed to get away scott free from all of my atrocities. :p

Mayhaps it's just my rampant paranoia, but I wonder about this doctor who's on retainer to the Ladies. Certainly, he's only mentioned in passing, and he hasn't done anything to deserve such distrust, but I'm curious;
Spoiler:
might his name be Ben perhaps?
(Note the spoiler, if I'm right, I'd hate to spoil the surprise for anyone. In the more likely situation that I'm way off target, well then it doesn't matter. :grin )

That was so Willow-ish to completely forget to give Tara her dinner, and then almost lose it when reminded of it. That sounded like a nice meal by the way, but I have to admit I've never heard of serving cheesecake with yogurt. Maybe it's just me, but I'm glad Tara didn't bother with decorum when demolishing her dinner.

Hmm, some progress on how things stand between them. Tara's at least 'fessed up that she feels something for Willow, which is a victory of sorts for Willow, even if it's not quite what she was wanting.

Evie wasn't what I was expecting when you wrote "a tall figure shrouded beneath an expensive and beautiful coat". I was expecting someone blonder, and less female if you get my drift. :grin

That being said, Willow can't be blamed for her reaction, especially given Tara reluctance to view Willow as the sexy young woman she is.

As for Evie herself, well, she might be (in Tara's own words) "just plain fucking gorgeous, and a dyke to boot" but she also seems to be more than a little bit of a bitch.

And given her disdain of Glory, I'm thinking she can expect a visit from Spike before too long.

Great stuff, Alcy!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Boadecia » Mon May 22, 2006 3:56 am

Once again bravo! gritty and realistic, apart from the movie star deal lol
I like it when willow snaps out of the pouting and doesnt take taras crap.
Looking forward to the next installment
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby PancakesinBellies » Mon May 22, 2006 5:39 am

Oh, what a good update! Now I want more! Willow is so adorable, first when she doesn't take any of Tara's crap, then when she gets all jealous over Evie. Yay, now there's going to be Angry!Pouty!Willow. That's always a favorite. ;) The characters just develop more and more as you continue, and I'm liking Tara even if I think she's being an idiot by staying away from WIllow. But I'm sure that will change in time. ;)

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby caz » Mon May 22, 2006 12:26 pm

Hi Alcy :wave I'm back off my holidays, just in time for another update.
I had a great time in Italy. England is cold and wet so I'm not exactly glad to be back!

Excellent update. Gotta say that Tara eats like a pig. I Imagine that she acquired that lovely habit in prison - eat the food as fast as you can before someone takes it off you.

I'm glad that Willow forced Tara to admit feeling something for her. It wasn't much - but it's a start.

Jealous Willow - I can't wait to read the next update! I think that Tara is gonna get a hard time off the redhead.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby WillowRulez » Mon May 22, 2006 4:56 pm

Haha, really enjoyed Willow telling Tara to be 'straight' with her. These kind of things make Tara see she IS dealing with an adult and not that little kid she is still picturing in her mind.
Btw, I watched the movie a few days ago. Really cool! Can't say it has spoilered me too much as to what will happen in your story... I like that. It's like you based them on this movie and take them into the general direction the movie provided but changed the depth and so on. Did that make sense? Well, what can I say? I'm tired :)
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby sinkinghearts » Mon May 22, 2006 4:58 pm

wohooo!! yada yada!! great update! :D

Jealous, jealous, jealous willow... C'mon, tara better make willow feel that she is THE ONE for her now. I hope this time Tara will properly talk to Willow... Talk, talk, talk! (Tara, don't be the rock that you are are just induldge in the emotions)

Loving this fic more n' more n' more Alcy.... Again, great piece of work! :)

More updates, please? *puppy eyes*
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby watty » Mon May 22, 2006 5:46 pm

Bravo Willow! Refraining herself, acting only in the best interest of Tara. How can Tara not admit there is something, albeit very reluctantly and probably to her chagrin.
Cute…adorable…it’s fucking impossible to stay frustrated at someone like her.

Yep, she's definitely being pulled in seventeen different directions inside. I'm also glad that she's gradually getting over her ingrained "Willow = child" perception, I suppose that is the initial thinking process behind every relationship where there is a significant age difference.

I don't like Evie Abernathy (though I love typing out "Abernathy" I don't know why :P). She seems very predatory, though it may be because of who she is and the business she is in. I'd be interested to read about her and Tara (off the KB of course, I know the faqs). Anyway, I think that her arrival and provocation provides just the right reason to push Tara closer towards Willow.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby wimpy0729 » Mon May 22, 2006 9:31 pm

Oh my, another wonderful update!

So much going on and we learn a little more about Tara's past. Tara was strong and independent with her ex. Seems to be a hard habit for her to break. I was glad to see she at least admitted to Willow that she did feel something for her. And now she feels like she has to stay and help the girls since they saved her. I see lots of action ahead.

But Tara's warning to Evie seems very forboding. I have a feeling the nasty Glory will be paying her a visit soon.

Oh, and next there will be dancing. I'm visualizing it will be of the lap variety. Maybe just wishful thinking. ;-)

Can't wait to see what's next!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Tue May 23, 2006 9:26 pm

Darth Pacula: Another, another guilty of dibsing and not replying! You naughty one you!

Boadecia: Movie stars are never gritty and realistic! But I though it would be fun to throw one into the mix for a bit of fun. Thanks!

highlandlass25: angry pouty Willow is fantastic but I think its going to be quite nice to contrast what Tara had with Evie and what she’s going to have with Tara…and the fact that Tara will quite easily choose Willow over a movie star…well, maybe not easily, but we’ll get there eventually!

caz: glad to hear you had a great time in Italy, although that hardly surprises me, I would think it would be easy to have a great time there!
Prison eating habits aren’t at all pretty but I’m not worried, adds to the realism, although I honestly never would have imagined BtVS Tara eating like a pig!
Yup, Tara’s got some serious talking to do in the next instalment, but it’s gonna be exciting.

WillowRulez: Glad to hear you watched the movie, I’m still waiting for my share of the royalties, and I agree, no spoilers to be found really but it does give you a good idea of the tone I’m going for. Sin City the movie, although seemingly quite rich, is simplistic due to the fact that its based on a comic book, writing prose gives more space to add the layers and extra detail that I love.

shane: thanks very much! Everybody seems to be enjoying jealous Willow which is cool! I promise not to keep her jealous for too long!

watty: You’ve noticed it, Tara is slowly coming around, although in doing so she’s being torn in dozens of different directions.
I’m actually having fun with Evie, I’m not sure whether I like her as a character, I am having fun writing her simply because she is seemingly perfect and superior. Haha, maybe Chris will let me post an additional excerpt from the Tara/Evie story over at ‘Through the Looking Glass’, would be interesting to write a little more background. And you’re right, Tara can see what she had, and knows she doesn’t want it anymore, and that’s gotta be good tonic for her. Willow very quickly moved into a state of jealousy but it’s believable due to the fact that she thinks this woman is so perfect and that she has already had Tara.
Yes, next chapter will provide much drooling material, I promise!

wimpy: I think she feels more comfortable around Evie and therefore retains her usual confidence, she knows this woman and who she is.
I love foreboding warnings, we’ll have to wait and see if anything comes of this one!
And yes, there will be a wee bit of dancing in the next chapter…no promises what sort of course but it will be good.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby sinkinghearts » Tue May 23, 2006 9:39 pm

ohhh... dancing in the next part? will willow be dancing again? yay!! better make tara drool now :P
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Darth Pacula » Tue May 23, 2006 9:55 pm

Dagnabit!

Missed you by that much! (Said in my best Maxwell Smart imitation.)

Another, another guilty of dibsing and not replying! You naughty one you!


Not so, mon ami! You just responded while I was composing my feedback. It's there now!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Artemis » Thu May 25, 2006 10:18 am

Okay, I admit it, when Evie said "Just say the word and you're gone anywhere you want...the Caribbean, Australia." I was all "Yes, say the word, come to Australia! Pleeeease!" Well, she could bring Willow with her, obviously... okay, never mind :blush

Intriguing interaction between Willow and Tara - as you said in your replies, Tara's emotional growth has been stunted somewhat by her time in the big house. Not that she's not capable of mature thinking, it's just that it's not necessarily her first instinct, especially when confronted with a situation that hasn't come up in eight years time - someone she cares about deeply confronting her and bringing up mixed feelings. She's clearly had her share of confrontations in jail, but evidently more of the sort where if you sleep to soundly you wake up with a shiv stuck in you. That's clearly left its mark on her - one can only imagine what it'd be like for anyone, let alone a cop, to spend eight years in a Sin City prison. It's a testament to Tara's force of will, and sheer stubbornness, that she's still above ground and kicking, even if she is having to deal with more than her share of nightmares from the experience, and the lingering feeling that she's not worth anyone's time, let alone Willow's.

And yet, the urge is there for her to give in and let her adult, emotional side come out - it's not expressed, but it's clear as daylight in the fact that, in spite of all the reasons and justifications she keeps stating and thinking for why she and Willow are never going to be together, she's still there. This Tara isn't a woman who could be cajoled into staying if she really wanted to go - she grumbles, she debates with herself, she goes off on half-baked visits to bars and gets beat up by thugs... but in the end, she stays, and you just gotta figure it's because part of her wants to stay.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby cantbefredless » Wed May 31, 2006 1:47 pm

i printed out all the updates i missed which is 20pages in size 8font.... so i will leave you a reply after i read them so maybe friday if not then tuesday... but hehehehe i know its good
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Willow Watcher » Wed May 31, 2006 5:13 pm

Great update! Sorry for being late on the feedback. I've been totally busy. This story totally rocks! When is Tara gonna wake up and smell the Mocha on Willow's lips? I mean c'mon! If Tara wasn't well, ya know Tara I would have to smack her in the head and say, "HELLOOOOO! Hot cute sexy redhead and you still act like she's a kid! Wake-up call Maclay!"

:pray I have faith that things will happen soon...I have faith that things will happen soon....I have faith that things will happen soon. :pray It's a mantra thing I've been working on.

Looking forward to another update. :peace
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby JustSkipIt » Wed May 31, 2006 6:20 pm

Ok... I actually remember writing the feedback for this. Did I leave it on a different computer? E-mail it to myself? Now I've got to find it or write some more. Geez, brain.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby sacinema » Thu Jun 01, 2006 5:50 am

Again I have to say: What a great story. And a great writer. This includes also your other stories. Only today I realized that the person who writes this story not only has written "Captain Red" and the ongoing "Rhyme and Reason" (both wonderful on their own). You also have written the nightingale story. It was already completed when I read it on Through the looking glass. It doesn't belong in this thread but I have to say it: Loved that one, too. Very much.

Okay back to WT's Sin City. I already said that I love the concept. That includes the new opportunities you are taking the characters to. In Captain Red Willow was supposed to be the main heroe and to save Tara. In this story it is vice versa. Tara is the main character, the hard boiled former detective who saved once – and I'm sure – will save again her Willow. Meanwhile it's Willow's duty to show Tara that love is worth a while. Nice.

Willow is so Willow in the whole story but especially in this update. Just in the beginning she lost track of the tray by babbling on and on. And after Tara's sensual question she nearly spilled the contents. It's Willow. She is cuter than words are able to tell. Only Willow can mix meat-soup, coffee, cheesecake with yoghurt and a glass of milk on one tray and to make it look like the most perfect dinner you've ever seen. It doesn't match but made with all her love. That's what makes it perfect. I was really tempted to grab Tara's arm during her hasty meal and shove some of the soup into my mouth. And I'm a vegetarian, never ever eat meat.

Mixing the story's forthcoming with Tara's thoughts makes her character more understandable. It's really hard for her to accept the fact that she feels something for someone at all and that she is falling in love with someone she has last seen as a 12 year old. But I think she should discard (hope this is the right word) her attitude by referring to Willow as a KID. At least she starts to get a clue in the second part of the update.

I feel sorry for Tara. She is struggling so hard and you describe it so well. But Willow is just to "cute and adorable" to withstand – and sexy as hell. I think Tara doesn't know it by now but she is already falling hard for this redheaded "KID". Some stupid sense of honour bars her from revealing her true feelings. Come on Tara. It's Willow's decision to make loving you and going down with. You are not dragging her. And there is something you don't know but we do: You are not getting her killed. In the end you will live happily ever after. Because this is the Kittenboard.

Evie Abernathy – despite this name – I really like her. In the beginning I pictured her being played by Angelina Jolie but you made it clear that I was wrong. Even she knows how deep Tara's feelings are. She should be more careful. I have a bad feeling about her and Glory Talbot. Hope she will not be the victim. Anyway why can't she offer to take Tara plus Willow out to the Caribbean, Australia or … Germany? We would find a nice place for both. Okay, she won't do that and the both wouldn't go. Because otherwise the story would have a matutinal end. And who wants that to happen? I don't. I'm looking forward to the next update. Keep well so long, Alcy.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby cantbefredless » Sat Jun 03, 2006 3:16 pm

i do say it was rather great i have to say!!! hehe loved it made me want to watch Sin City but then i think oh wait Willow and Tara arent in it then suddenly i get sad. but love it :Dance
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Wed Jun 07, 2006 2:32 pm

Darth Pacula: You’re forgiven Paul, I’m constantly running late with all the feedback I mean to give so I understand!

I have never been to prison either, so my perspective is solely gleaned from prison movies and I’ve seen just about everything as my partner loves prison movies with a passion that’s not quite healthy! Anyway, I love exploring this particular concept and hopefully its something Willow can help her get over.

Hmmm, you do have some interesting speculations regarding our wee doctor friend, you know I can’t confirm or deny but I do like to keep people on their toes.

Yes, that meal was something only Willow could concoct. I love cheesecake with yoghurt! Probably because I don’t like whipped cream or ice cream. I didn’t think that Tara would be standing on ceremony when it came to her dinner and its always nice to be reminded that our heroines are completely human when it comes to having bad table manners. The ‘fessing’ up was never going to go as far as what a lot of people would have liked, mainly because its not time yet and I had to introduce Evie first in order to further confuse poor Willow…cos I’m mean. Interesting that you were expecting Spike when Evie showed up, although I wouldn’t put it past him to walk brazenly into Kitty’s and confront Tara. Evie is like sex personified, and definitely, while Willow is struggling to get Tara to see her as the sexy young woman she is the appearance of Evie does not help matters.
And yes, Evie is a movie star through and through. Although I have never met one, it seems to me that even the nice ones can be divas (if there is such a thing as nice movie stars!) I’m certainly planning to include her in future chapters so we’ll just have to see where she ends up! Thanks very much Paul!

Shane: Yep, there will be dancing, and I promise drooling from both Tara and Kittens!

Artemis: I had to throw in Australia for all you Aussie kittens! While I didn’t explore Tara’s time in prison too deeply (simply because it could have taken up a whole fic on its own) I have endeavoured to show that its impact is going to be profound and lasting. Even someone as strong as Tara is going to struggle to overcome eight years in prison, although in terms of Sin City, it serves to give her the hardbitten exterior that its heroes usually take.

I agree, if Tara had really wanted to leave, she wouldn’t have even stayed the first night in the Palace, she’d be long gone despite her lack of resources (on her way to Australia). Its also a testament to how damn sexy Willow is! Hell, I wouldn’t be going anywhere no matter who was after me! Cheers Chris

Willow Watcher: Thanks very much! Tara’s gotta notice those lips at some stage, otherwise I would think she was blind, not to mention deaf and dumb as well. But don’t worry, things will happen soon enough because this is the Kitten and we’ve got to have yummy W/T goodness at some stage…and I wouldn’t be mean enough to leave it until the last chapter (or would I?) Another update shortly.

JustSkipIt: I’m always emailing feedback to myself and saving it on different computers and managing to lose it so I can understand, thanks for stopping by anyway!

Sacinema: You’re making my head swell but thanks very much. Yes, that is my portfolio as it stands so far, although there’s one more fic in the archive, my first one called ‘Worst Nightmare’ which is also my only canon fic to date so far (and given my penchant for AU, it will probably be the only one I write).

You’re exactly right, while Captain Red was essentially Willow’s story (with a lot of Tara thrown in!), Sin City is Tara’s story. Not quite sure while I like to write different fics for each of them but the next one I’m working on is back to Willow again. I like to be able to maintain a sense of who the characters are despite the different environments they live in. Glad I could make you appreciate meat even though you don’t eat it!

With each passing chapter, Tara’s understanding of just who Willow is grows and develops into something that we might just be able to get a realistic relationship out of…she’s slowing getting a clue! While the fact that the will live happily ever after is always a constant presence at the back of my mind, I like to create as much angst as possible along the way because nothing should ever be too easy, especially not in Sin City where the heroes usually end up dead.

I do like Angie, but in my mind Evie is someone different…not quite so whacky or bisexual! Despite the fact that she is a diva, I really enjoy writing her and have endeavoured to at least make her a little likeable. She will be in future chapters so you’ll have to wait and see where she ends up. Thanks very much for leaving such kind feedback!

cantbefredless: Thanks very much and I’m glad you enjoyed it. Yes, Willow and Tara aren’t in the movie but its still a pretty good film anyway so you should give it a go.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby witchfu » Wed Jun 14, 2006 2:10 pm

completely loving the concept and playout. No one ever pits Tara as the bad ass, something to forgive, type.
rock on.

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Sun Jun 25, 2006 9:04 pm

witchfu: Hi Mary, thanks so much for stopping by. I love writing Tara as a bad arse, it's challenging to retain aspects of her canon character as well as moulding her to the environment she's in.

Everyone: The next chapter is almost done, just in the final stages of editing and what not so watch this space for some arse-shaking!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Alcy » Sun Jun 25, 2006 10:04 pm

Chapter Seven – “Dance for Me.”

I watch that goddamn broad, Evie Abernathy, leave Kitty’s. Her arse moves seductively even beneath her coat and I know she’s intending it to be a reminder of what I missed out on, what I could have had if I wasn’t such a head case. Goddamn woman can taunt me all she wants, I know she doesn’t really want me anymore. Even though my current status is just about as bad arse as you can get, I’m even more of a head case. Not to mention the fact that I definitely don’t want her. I smile and my gaze drifts back across the room to where I had last seen Willow talking to Faith. I frown, the redhead is nowhere in sight and there’s just Faith staring at me over the rim of her glass. Her gaze isn’t as hostile as it has been in the past…a fact which doesn’t exactly have me feeling warm and fuzzy

Not wanting to appear too desperate to learn Willow’s whereabouts, Tara waited what she thought was an appropriate five minutes before crossing the room to join Faith. It was more like thirty seconds. She didn’t take a seat but instead remained standing to indicate that she was serious about wanting to know Willow’s whereabouts to seek her out.

“Nice chat with Ms Abernathy?” Faith asked placing her empty glass on the table in front of her and stroking its length as though she were stroking flesh.

“Words between old friends,” Tara replied tersely, not about to be drawn into the brunette’s little game.

Faith raised her fist to her mouth and coughed lightly, “Everyone knows Tara Maclay and Evie Abernathy were much more than friends…I remember, I don’t know if you do, the rather naughty shot published in all the papers of the two of you splayed against the window of Evie’s apartment. You should’ve really shut the curtains you know.”

Tara fought the urge to growl in return but she clenched both fists instead. Of course she remembered that photo, taken by an unscrupulous tabloid photographer with a high-resolution lens. It had been published at a time when their relationship was still a relative secret and had predictably led to subsequent media frenzy. The media could apparently not get enough of stories concerning the famous lesbian actress and her lover, the dark, unknown detective. While the constant attention had done wonders for Evie’s career, it had almost ruined Tara’s.

Faith just smiled at Tara’s discomfort and continued, “Well…I should say almost everyone knows, a certain redhead was too young at the time...she knows now though.”

I groan inwardly, there was no telling what Willow had deduced from what she had seen, let alone what Faith might have said to her. I struggle to keep myself from leaping across the table and smashing that smug smile from Faith’s face…not exactly the best move to make on the boss of a gang whose joint I’m standing in.

Tara had to content herself with simply voicing her anger, “What the hell did you say to her, Faith?”

Faith’s expression immediately changed to one of affront, “Nothing! Well, nothing that wasn’t common knowledge, I mean, its not like I even knew you back then…what Willow chooses to draw from the fact you were talking with your incredibly glamorous, famous ex-lover is completely up to her.”

Tara’s eyes darted around the bar but it was exceptionally crowded due to the fact that the most popular dancer was on the bill for the night. She couldn’t spot the redhead anywhere in the throng and her eyes went back to Faith.

“Do you see where she went?” Tara asked urgently.

“Why?” Faith replied brusquely, searching Tara’s face for a hint of her intentions, “Why do you care where she is?”

“Because…” Tara swallowed awkwardly, she was hardly about to tell Faith things she would not even admit to herself, “I don’t want Willow to get the wrong impression.”

“Fine,” Faith replied, although she did not seem entirely impressed with the brevity of Tara’s answer, “She went out the back door, she’ll either be in the dressing rooms or taking in some air out in the back alley.”

Tara frowned, “In the back alley? Alone?”

Before Faith could say anything further, Tara made a beeline for the back door. She made it to the dressing room but none of the other dancers had seen Willow enter so she continued out into the back alley.

She sniffed at the gloom that met her as she made her way out into the space behind Kitty’s. Although wide, the walls on either side rose high into the air, effectively blocking out any light from the moon that shone high above. There were several people gathered around the entrance, Kitty’s workers on their cigarette breaks and a few other loiterers whom Tara eyes sharply. Sure enough, one of them was a small redheaded woman. Tara narrowed her eyes and saw that it was Willow, her coat drawn up around her face. Tara started after her, although she had not gone more than a few meters after Willow when a small hand darted from the shadows and latched onto her elbow with a vice-like grip. Tara spun to find herself face-to-face with the steely gaze of Buffy, the silent, samurai sword wielding woman who managed to frighten even Tara. Tara immediately mistook the cold stare on Buffy’s face for one of displeasure.

“I just want to talk to her,” Tara said insistently.

Buffy shook her head just as insistently in reply. Although Tara had taken this as sign that Buffy didn’t want her anywhere near Willow, the petite blonde then inclined her head towards a moving shadow that hugged the alley walls just behind Willow.

Tara narrowed her eyes to pick out more details in the gloom and it was not until the figure peeled itself away from the wall that she could make out who it was. She saw the swirl of a long, black leather coat falling down to their ankles. It rose to a high collar turned up around the stranger’s face. Although Tara saw a hint of pale, almost white skin, too white to be hidden in shadow and peroxided hair atop their head. As they walked, Tara came to the conclusion it was a man. Her eyes narrowed when she saw that he was definitely following Willow, in fact he was closing in on the little redhead. Tara turned back to Buffy and saw her hand go to one of her katana at her belt. Risking her hand being sliced off cleanly at the wrist, Tara reached out and laid her hand on Buffy’s forearm. The blonde tuned to regard Tara with a curious expression which Tara couldn’t label as threatening or neutral.

“I’ll take care of it,” Tara said quietly, hoping that Buffy would not feel her place had been usurped.

Although Buffy was obviously the protector of the group due to her rather unique skills, Tara had the sudden and insistent urge to step in where Willow was concerned. As she stepped out in the alley and Buffy did not make any move to prevent her, she felt as though Willow’s safety concerned her personally. Tara realised as her eyes narrowed on the strangers back that she wanted it to be her role permanently. The thought of anyone else looking out for Willow, no matter how good a job they might do, was difficult to accept.

I study the guy following Willow, it always pays to you’re your target as much as possible even though there’s only so much that can be gleaned by observation alone. He’s powerful, no doubt about that in his stride and carriage. I bet he’s as lean and hard as a rock under that leather coat. Coat’s expensive as well, although that doesn’t help me much, could be that he stole it…or just as easily, he could be a dealer. I move in until I’m just behind him and its right now that I feel naked despite the clothes I’m wearing. I don’t have a single weapon on me, not the comforting presence of a pistol snug against the small of my back…or even a nail file in my pocket for god sake! Still, I have my mits…small as though they may be, they’re still capable of doing some damage. I’m so close behind him now that I could reach out and clip him over one ear. If he’s noticed I’m here, he’s not showing any sign.

“Can I help you?” the tone of Tara’s voice, although quiet, meant serious business.

The man turned to regard the interruption Tara presented. His movement, although brief, was fluid and stealthy, enough to indicate to Tara that he would be difficult to handle if events did take a turn for the worst. Tara was determined not to resort to using her mits, for any reason…although given that Willow’s safety was on the line, she was not sure just how concrete a resolution this would prove to be.

Tara met his steely cold, almost mocking gaze with a calm, expressionless one of her own. She studied his face intently, it was almost starved of flesh, all hard planes and angles that made it appear as though he had been chiselled from a slab of pale rock. His lips, thin and cruel, curved up into a sardonic little smirk. She glanced over her shoulder, a few meters ahead Willow had obviously heard Tara speak and had stopped to face the pair standing behind her. Her confusion at the scene unfolding mixed with an obvious twinge of heartache when her gaze fell upon Tara.

“Not that it’s any of your business, but I was just gong to offer the little lady a cigarette,” he spoke in a dry voice with an unmistakeably English accent.

Tara felt her stomach churn into a painful knot at the suggestion that it was none of her business. She realised that she was determined to make anything to do with Willow, her business...especially when it involved a creepy Englishman stalking her in a darkened alley.

“It is my business…and she doesn’t smoke,” Tara didn’t buy it for one second, it was all too obvious he was looking for trouble, of exactly which kind Tara did not care enough to find out, “So I’d move along if I were you.”

He raised his eyebrows as though Tara’s rather low-level threat amused him. Tara couldn’t care less whether he was enjoying this or not, she was fully aware that Buffy was stalking them from the rooftop high above. At any sign of trouble, the deadly little woman could pounce with her katana and the intruder would be sushi within a matter of seconds.

“You are a feisty lady,” he drawled in reply, “If I were you I’d mind your manners in the future, a little politeness can go a long way in our game.”

Tara tried her best not to look confused as she replied in a confident voice, “I don’t know what the hell kind of game you’re playing, but I sure ain’t joining in.”

He chuckled and glanced slightly upwards in Buffy’s direction, as though he were fully aware that she was there. When he met Tara’s gaze once more, his eyes spoke of even further knowledge, knowledge that was dangerous. Tara struggled to keep her expression level even as a myriad of thoughts ran through her mind.

I keep my eyes locked with this nancy bastard despite the fact that it’s not as easy as it sounds. I look into those flint-like orbs and see nothing except an uncompromising evil that I know sure as hell ain’t normal. While I need to know who he is and what he wants…for the moment I don’t care, I just want him as far away from Willow as possible.

“Tara?”

Tara could tell that Willow was trying to keep the fear from her voice, but it was there in spades. Her voice trembled slightly. Tara was keenly aware of the fact that the stranger stood between her and Willow. He could move at Willow with malicious and all she would be able to do was react a split second later…a split second too late.

“It’s alright, the gentleman was just leaving,” Tara said loud enough for all of them to hear clearly, even Buffy atop the roofline.

“I was under the impression that the Ladies could be called upon to bestow their considerable attentions on gentleman with money…it could be that I’ve got some,” his lips curled up into a smirk.

“Well it could also be that neither of us are interested in your proposition,” Tara shot back coldly.

It was clear that he was not about to be put off by one refusal, he spun slowly on his heels so that his back was to Tara. He faced Willow down with the same cool gaze he had given Tara, only the young redhead could not respond with Tara’s calm, collected gaze. Her mouth dropped slightly in fear and when he took a step towards her an audible whimper escaped her lips.

“I was asking the little lady here,” he let out a chuckle at the response he provoked, “She looks like she could use a real man."

A heartbeat later Tara moved. She covered the ground between her and the intruder in a few powerful strides and then with a heavy plant of her booted foot, stepped in front of him to block his path to Willow. At the edge of her vision she saw Buffy drop down to a fire escape just above his head.

Tara stood facing him. The blood pounded against her skull, her anger boiling and furious as it strained to be released. Her anger was written all over her face and the intruder knew it. His only response at first was to grin as though he were egging her on. When she failed to respond to the immediate taunt, he continued with his choice of words.

“You won’t give me what I want…what’s to stop me from just taking it then?” his smile had morphed into a sneer, “You? Little girl playing cop…wait a minute…or ex-cop, I recognise your picture from somewhere…”

He was lying and Tara knew it. There was no expression of sudden recognition on his face. Apparently he was not as good an actor as he thought he was. He already knew exactly who she was before his forced exclamation and this troubled her more than his rather hollow, lecherous threats towards Willow. It was this realisation, that and the fact that Buffy was poised about to carve his head like a melon, which kept Tara’s anger in check

“Murderer,” he whispered as though it was the dirtiest word he could utter.

Tara met his cruel smirk impassive and unimpressed. She knew exactly what had happened on that fateful night eight years ago and there was nothing about it that troubled her conscience or kept her awake at night. Each of those men had deserved to die, she only regretted she hadn’t managed to dispatch Tommy Talbot along with them. What kept her awake at night were the consequences.

If he were thrown by her lack of response and his failure to provoke her into anything other than a passive rage, it did not show on his features.

“Well then, I’d see to your little girlfriend then…she obviously needs to get it from somewhere and I suppose it’s gonna be you,” he looked over her shoulder in Willow’s direction and smiled broadly, “Don’t cry now little one...no one gonna get hurt…today.”

Tara turned on her heels so she was standing side on to both Willow and the intruder, she turned her head slightly to confirm that the redhead was okay. Tara was relieved to see that although she was visibly shaken, she did not appear to be on the verge of tears at all. She smiled in reassurance before turning back to face their foe…only her was gone, vanished into the darkness of the alley. Tara frowned and peered upwards to see Buffy had disappeared too, no doubt she had followed the stranger to either dispatch him quietly, or ensure that he left Old Town.

“Fine, run away with you tail between your legs then,” Tara growled into the night, but it was more for her own benefit than his.

Assuming a confident posture with both hands relaxed at her side, Tara turned back to Willow whose small face was marred by a deep frown.

“Okay, I totally missed what all that was about,” Willow could not help but have noticed the rather eerie nature of his departure, “Was he trying to sell me drugs or something because I don’t…”

“I think he was something much more than a drug dealer, Willow,” Tara interrupted in a dark voice, wishing the situation were that simple.

Tara had loved dealing to the dealers during her employment as a cop, there was something inherently satisfying in cleaning at least some of the scum that clung beneath the rim of the toilet that was Basin City. It would have been simple, she could have delivered him to the doorstep of the nearest precinct…or confined him to the bowels of the nearest dumpster. However, from the look in the man’s eyes and the way he moved, Tara suspected that she had better be on her guard least she be the one composting in a dumpster. Tara was still buried deep in reflection when she finally noticed a small hand tugging on her sleeve.

“Tara, are you alright?” Willow asked quietly, “You’re worried about that white haired guy aren’t you?”.

“What?” Tara forced herself to turn her attention back to Willow, “Um, yeah, of course I’m alright…and no, he was just a low-life, scum that’s all he was.”

Willow frowned, not about to be put off so easily, “But you said before…”

I growl inwardly, yeah, I know what I just said before but you shouldn’t have to worry your pretty little head about that guy…that’s my job…and I’m fucking worried…I quickly change the subject, replacing it with something else that I would rather not talk about…Evie.

“Willow, there’s nothing going on between Evie Abernathy and I…it’s ancient history,” Tara blurted out, blunt and straight to the point out of necessity.

If Tara had been seeking to draw Willow’s mind away from her stalker, she succeeded in spectacular fashion. The look that settled on to Willow’s face indicated that she had suddenly remembered her reason for sulking alone in the alley. Her expression flickered from anger to one of forced resignation which Tara suspected was purely for show.

“I don’t care…I mean…” Willow huffed loudly and ended up repeating herself, “I don’t care.”

“Really?” Tara asked in a deliberately surprised voice, “So you’d be fine if Evie and I got back together?”

Willow’s face coloured, “Like hell I would! You can’t get back together with that skanky woman stealing whore!”

With Willow’s little outburst, Tara was proved right. There was no way in hell Willow would resign herself to anything so quickly, even if she were fighting over the same woman with a movie star.

“Who’s she stealing me from, Willow?” Tara asked quietly, softly, “I’m not with anyone.”

Tara kept a calm gaze on Willow, the younger woman was anything but calm. Tara could have sworn she was one movement away from stamping her foot on the ground like a small child who was not getting her way.

“From me!” Willow spluttered, “From me, you great big dummy! I’ve been sending out every signal I know, pretty much screaming that I want you and now you go and let that movie bimbo in straight away…just like that?”

“Willow…” Tara tried to interrupt in a quiet voice.

If Willow had not been so seriously angry, Tara would have laughed at the comedy of the situation and Willow’s irrational fear that all her hard work in ‘softening’ up the ex-cop had just been thrown out the window. As it stood however, Tara was acutely aware that she had to put Willow out of her misery.

“What?” Willow growled.

“I wouldn’t get re-involved with Evie if she were the last dyke on the face of the planet.”

It took a few moments to register but eventually Willow ducked her head, realising how juvenile she must have sounded to Tara. Allowing herself time to compose herself, she lifted it once more and studied the blonde’s face. She was surprised to find traces of amusement there, especially given the fact that she had never seen Tara smile. An embarrassed grin spread across her own face.

“That was ridiculous of me, I have no right to even think like that,” Willow replied honestly.

Tara took in a lungful of air and replied quickly before she lost her nerve, “Maybe you do.”

Willow frowned, “Tara?”

Any further conversation was thwarted when, with barely a sound, Buffy dropped down into the alleyway from where she had been stalking along the rooftops above. Her katana was still at her belt, and quite bloodless as far as Tara could tell. The assassin nodded in the direction of the City to indicate that he had left Old Town. Tara did not bother pressing her for more information as she suspected that she would get none.

Buffy then reached out and propelled Willow in the direction of Kitty’s with a gentle nudge to her shoulder as though reminded her she had better get back inside.

“Oh shit!” Willow hissed, drawing Tara’s attention back to her, “I’ve still got another show to do!”

“Okay, Buffy, show her back inside,” Tara ordered swiftly, matter-of-factly, “I’m going to take another look around out here just to be on the safe side.”

Willow’s face showed a momentary flicker of disappointment as though she thought Tara may miss her show.

“I’ll be inside in a few minutes,” Tara added, trying to sound as though it wasn’t entirely for Willow’s benefit.

Buffy and Willow left her alone in the alley. By now the smokers who had crowded around the back door of Kitty’s had too moved inside to secure their seats for Willow’s next show. It was something Tara would have much rather been doing instead of prowling and poking around in the cold darkness outside…no doubt she would be ten times warmer inside for a very good reason.

She thought back to Willow’s earlier show and the rather discreet glances that were all she had allowed herself to see of Willow’s gyrating form. While it had almost killed her not to look…she knew it definitely would have killed her to look. So as she patrolled the alleyway, the thought crossed her mind that she ought not go back in at all. Eventually however, after spending one cold minute too many outside, she found herself drawn back to the door that would take her into Kitty’s. From the appreciate hum and whistles that emitted from within, she guessed that Willow had started up with her next routine.

Tara slipped quietly in the door and took up a position leaning against the wall with her arms stubbornly folded across her chest. There were few people around her as the vantage point offered a very poor view of the stage. All she managed to see were glimpses of pale flesh and flashes of trailing red hair

I think I’m content standing at the back of the bar, and probably safe too given that I can see very little of the action up on the stage. However, I can sense it all around me. The air is charged with excitement and a sensual, sexual essence so foreign to me, so buried in the annals of my past that it is almost beyond recognition. The fact that it emanates from that kid…that woman, dancing on the stage, is still difficult to accept. Although I can’t quite decide whether this is because of the effect her dancing has on me, or the fact that she’s dancing up there at all. I chide myself inwardly, I have to accept that the dancing is Willow’s choice.

In the brief glimpses I manage to catch through the crowd, I see someone who can move as though born to it. Like the moth to the flame, I am drawn through the crowd. As I thread my way through, I have eyes only for her to the point where I am barely aware of my body brushing past others. I can see all of her now, up there on that stage for everyone else to see as well. There’s not much to her but she seems to fill the stage with her presence. I struggle to reconcile the woman she is on stage with the awkward, babbling kid that I can’t stand to be around…and can’t stand to be without.


If Tara was surprised to find herself at the front of the crowd, near the base of the stage, it never fully registered. The rest of the crowd and their accompanying noises disappeared for her. All she saw was Willow, illuminated in the spotlights. Beneath their glare her hair was a fiery mane flowing around her and her skin was burnished to a golden sheen. They stood in sharp contrast to the green dress that she must have hastily dragged on after the leathers she wore during her earlier show. As the short slip of a thing swirled about her upper thighs, Tara knew she preferred its soft lines to the hard black leather.

With one hand wrapped casually around the pole beside her, Willow tipped backwards with a graceful arch of her back. With her head tipped backwards, her upside down eyes locked onto Tara. Willow allowed herself a smile at the sight of the ex-cop’s awkward pose. Her arms folded stubbornly across her chest, legs soldier straight as though she would not allow herself to relax and respond to her emotions. As Willow pulled herself back up to hug the pole she kept her eyes locked on Tara, determined to force a reaction.

In fact, that would be the focus of the rest of her performance. The whole routine, every sensuous movement, would be calculated to drive Tara wild. She would imagine that her cold metal pole was Tara’s body, and each caress would strive to bring warmth to that icy exterior. Although Kitty’s was packed, as it always was for one of her gigs, every other face in the bar was erased. There was only one person in Willow Rosenberg’s audience.

She flaunted the smooth lines of the green dress she wore…while she still wore it at least, for her next trick would see it removed completely. Willow stalked the pole with all the confidence and seductive guile that she lacked in everyday interaction with Tara. In her stage environment, Tara was seduced with ruthless effectiveness…or at least the pole was. She progressed with brutal caresses of her arms, legs and entire body that left little to the imagination. As soon as she spied Tara’s lips part, even only a fraction, Willow knew her dance was having the desired effect. She knew that she was dancing as she never had before. With sudden deft movements, she peeled the little green dress away from her shoulders. It had hung there so precariously in the first place that it slipped over her arms and down her body as though it were water. Like a green puddle, it pooled at her feet and she stepped out of it, kicking it away like a discarded rag.

Willow was left dancing the skimpiest of underwear sets but her only concern was Tara’s reaction. Even as she gyrated about the pole with her almost naked body, she watched the blonde for any hint of disapproval, or even revulsion and anger. There was not a trace of any, nothing except for the continued parting of lips and a pair of very wide eyes.

Oh…my…fucking…god. As I stand watching I desperately want someone to drag me away from what I’m seeing up on that stage. But no one does…and she continues to drive me wild.

Still moving around the pole, Willow’s hands left it to trail over her body, fingers moving lightly over her taut stomach, hips and down over her thighs before back up to her breasts. She traced the outline of the perfect features in turn with the tip of her index finger before caressing the nipple beneath the scrap of fabric that covered them. Staring directly at Tara she slipped each hand beneath the bra to cup both breasts, fingers moving beneath the fabric teasingly.

I feel my palms slick with sweat and a fire between my legs as I continue to watch her dance. The green dress is gone and in its place are two matching scraps of fabric that barely pass for items of clothing. A stringy affair covers her breasts, while a pair of just as stringy underwear cling to her hips. She turns, revealing those fabulous arse cheeks. Very little is left to the imagination but mine runs wild anyway. She’s working that pole as though it were born next to her and her hands are stroking her body as though they belong to someone who loves her fiercely. Fuck I wish they were mine! When she straddles the pole with both legs, sliding to the floor and back to her feet again, I nearly keel over.

The music was in to its final flourishes before Tara realised that the dance had to end. She knew that she could have stood watching Willow for hours to come. However, as she brought herself back to reality, back to the noise and smell of Kitty’s, she saw the fine sheen of sweat that coated Willow’s body and the gentle but insistent rise and fall of her chest that indicated just how much the dance had taxed the redhead.

She watched Willow raise her leg, wrap it around the pole and fly around it one last time to finish with her body horizontal, supported by her leg and one arm holding the pole. Tara ran her eyes over the taut lines of Willow’s body, realising just how finely toned the young woman was. She eventually lowered her legs to the ground and moved away from the pole as the enthusiastic Kitty’s crowd started up with applause punctured with catcalls and shrill whistles.

Willow was smiling broadly but staring straight at Tara as though she were expecting something. Almost of their own accord, Tara’s feet began moving until she was in a position to lever herself up onto the stage. Willow reached out with both hands but her hold was more for the sake of guiding Tara to her than helping to haul her up. Tara found herself moving forward into Willow’s body, folding the sweaty girl into her embrace. Willow peered up at Tara, her face shining with exertion and abandon.

“How’d I do?” she asked, just loud enough to be heard over the crowd.

“You were fucking amazing,” Tara whispered in a choked voice, “You can certainly dance.”

“I know I can dance,” Willow replied firmly, although exhilarated and slightly out of breath she kept her eyes on the woman holding her in her arms, “I don’t need you to tell me that…although thanks.”

Tara frowned in confusion, “Willow, what else am I supposed to say?”

The redhead unleashed a positively evil smirk which astounded Tara with the clear implications behind it, made all the more worse when Willow nudged one thigh between the folds of Tara’s coat and between her legs. The little vixen them grabbed Tara’s arse with both hands and pulled her close, thigh jammed hard against Tara’s now aching sex.

Tara heard her own breath catch, although she had absolutely no control over it. She followed it up with a low groan that escaped through gritted teeth.

“How did I do?” Willow repeated, moving her thigh in a discreet rhythm against Tara’s body.

I could barely hear her over the blood pounding in my ears but I could see her. Green eyes in the middle of that pale little face, still flushed with sweat, staring up at me like they’re about to swallow me whole…something is gonna swallow me up after what I’m about to do, although in all likelihood it’s probably gonna be hell…

Tara stooped slightly, her cheek coming to rest against Willow’s as she whispered in her ear, “I think this answers your question.”

She then pulled back, but only far enough to find Willow’s lips and smother them with her own. The redhead’s lips parted almost instantly, an indication of her readiness, and Tara’s tongue disappeared within that heavenly warm space between them. There she found Willow’s tongue and explored it with firm, lavish caresses that sent shivers down both their spines.

Neither women were interested in the fact that they were standing in the middle of a stage, or that their kiss had obviously attracted catcalls from the crowd who were no doubt pleased at the additional show. The only thought that was running through Tara’s mind was sweeping Willow up into her arms and finding the nearest bed, or couch…or chair.

It was a good thing that they were interrupted when they were, just as Tara was about to force her hand beneath Willow’s bra with the intention of getting her hands on the holy grail that lay beneath.

“Hey Maclay!”

Tara broke the kiss abruptly as she recognised Faith’s angry sounding voice. She turned immediately to face the interruption but kept both her arms defensively around Willow. As Faith vaulted up onto the stage Tara fully expected her to lash out physically. Instead, the other woman’s face remained seriously stony and she kept both hands at her sides. Whatever the reason for the interruption it became clear that it had nothing to do with her spontaneous lip lock with Willow.

“Faith?”

“Sorry to interrupt, but we’ve got some serious trouble…”


TBC in Chapter 8 – “Seige.”
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Darth Pacula » Sun Jun 25, 2006 10:25 pm

Dibs!

Okay, so four days later ... this is becoming an embarrassing habit.

Great googly-moogly, that was .... smoking hot! The dance that is, not the stalking bit, which was good, just not hot in the same sense.

In regards to Tara's past relationship with Evie, can I just say: bloody paparazzi! Damn vultures.

That was a delightfully sinister way to introduce Spike, and even kept him in character while removing the vampire aspects of his identity. It was a nice nod to his cannon counterpart having him stalk his prey first, indulging in a little off-putting banter rather than just attacking straight off the bat.

While he might have gone without a fight, I'm glad Tara's instincts are telling her things aren't over. I really doubt that things will go so smoothly as to have Spike meet a sticky end at the end of Buffy's katana this early in the story.

“I’m going to take another look around out here just to be on the safe side.”


And she still does this even after her earlier musing about how she lacks even the most insignificant of weapons. Tut tut, Ms Maclay. Sloppy ... but then again, love makes you do the wacky, right?

As for the dance itself ... wow, will you look at that! I think I spontaneously combusted!

Great work, Alcy!

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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby sinkinghearts » Mon Jun 26, 2006 1:22 am

BURN BABY, BURN! That was HOT!

I love that update. Good to know that Tara's starting to open up a bit. Willow deserves such attention from her. I do hope this continues and that the barrier that she has put around her crumbles down... They deserve to be together after all that they've been through :)

Great work Alcy! Keep it up :D
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby sacinema » Mon Jun 26, 2006 1:43 am

Woohoo. You got me in trouble too. Where the heck is the next cold shower when you need one? This was just totally hot. The air between those two is so thick with Erotic you need really strong scissors to cut inbetween.

I have the sneaking suspicion you like to load up the sexual tension between two people (especially Willow and Tara) until it can't be prevented from ending in an explosion. A spontaneous heavy outburst. Don't get me wrong. Not complaining here. I love how you describe the rising passion. But maybe it's better Faith interrupted. What would have stop them to do it right than and there regardless of the crowd rounding the stage?

Wonder who this guy was. Hope it's not that child molester. Tara has to be more careful otherwise the Bad will recognize Willow for who she is.

Willow is adorable. So young and unspoiled. I think - apart from being sexy as hell - that's what makes her irresistible for Tara. Willow isn't capable of hiding her feelings. She is anything but cold and hard-boiled. Her soul seems to be unscarred. Although she had to go through some pretty tough situations at a very young age.

Buffy is hilarious too. Is she even capable of speaking? Nice modification to the bully Buffy of the TV-Series.

Thanks again for this wonderful update and hope to read more soon. My best wishes go with you.

Edit: I had to because the latest modification after previewing the quote weren't changed.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Thianne » Mon Jun 26, 2006 6:55 am

wow.....that was seriously hot
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby Willowtree252 » Mon Jun 26, 2006 7:11 am

:pinky whoooo gga;jgoiuqqqupqa;l;hgg7q9pnn sorry i could not think there whoooo THAT WAS HOOOT shower hell i need to find a room and be alone. Little girl willow has left the building and tara has finally got her head together to quote a song i heard shes is geting some, she bout to get the girl that make your toes fry hehe!!!!!!! :kdevil :kdevil :kdevil
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby beanie » Mon Jun 26, 2006 8:03 am

Um . . . uh . . . umm . . . uh . . . I'm sorry I see to have difficulties getting my tongue back in my mouth . . . (hehe much like Tara in that last scene!)

:party WOOPDEEDOOOO!!

I am in complete agreement with sacinema though. I mean the sexual tension not only exploded (or um, climaxed shall I say?), it yanked those two together with a force stronger than something incredibly strong. And the way you just built that up with the dance. I was totally feeling the whole "universe melts away and there is only Willow dancing on the stage" space that Tara was in. That's pretty much how I feel every single time I read an update from this story or Rhyme.

The introduction of Spike into this scheme of yours was very creepily done. Congrats! I laughed when you brought in all characters Spike was trying to play in his creepy banter with Tara. Is he a drug dealer, a child molester, an evil bastard sent to torment and kill Tara and all those she loves? Yes, yes, big questions. I'd love to see a matchup between silent and deadly Buffy (who I finally realized is so much like the Primitive) and nancy boy Spike. Reading your description of his evil self is really contrasted with the Spike I've been seeing while re-watching Season 6. It's so funny how he goes from like malicious and funny bastard to just funny. I just hope the news Faith brings isn't that Spike mauled Buffy. That would not be cool.

So in conclusion: yay for Tara and Willow. Boo for Spike.
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Re: Willow and Tara's 'Sin City'

Postby caz » Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:45 am

Hi Alcy. :wave

Spike had better keep his filthy mitts off Willow. He wont have to worry about Tara cos I'll rip his spangles off! Seriously though, I'm not too happy at Spike getting involved. We all know that he's a vicious git - I just hope that he doesn't get his hands on Willow. I think that Tara will need lots of back up if she goes against him.

As for the dance - Woo Hoo, I think it had the desired effect. Tara was on the verge of dragging Willow off somewhere to continue in private.

Not looking forward to this next lot of 'serious trouble'.

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