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Re: Update Fic: Angels and Goddesses Chapter 3

Postby shootingstar » Sun May 19, 2002 2:37 pm

Brilliant update



'Willow took her courage and her grilled cheese and marched towards her waiting goal'



For some reason this line just made me smile big time, it's so sweet. I'll never look at grilled cheese sandwiches the same way again!



Looking forward to the next update.

***
'I know what it's like to want to die. How it hurts to smile. How you try to fit in but you can't. How you hurt yourself on the outside to kill the thing on the outside'
-Girl, Interrupted.

shootingstar
 


Re: Update Fic: Angels and Goddesses Chapter 3

Postby akira » Sun May 19, 2002 3:11 pm

í really like your fic the way willow thinks of tara...and that they both like grilled cheese ...great!

all i can say is:

angel doesn´t disappoint...and you don´t either

akira
 


Re: Update Fic: Angels and Goddesses Chapter 3

Postby Tiggrscorpio » Sun May 19, 2002 5:23 pm

Oooh, I had grilled cheese for dinner on Friday. This continues to be a lovely story. Can't wait to read more!

*****

She's my everything!

Tiggrscorpio
 


Re: Update Fic: Angels and Goddesses Chapter 3

Postby Blue77 » Sun May 19, 2002 5:32 pm

Oh, I'll have what they're having, give me a grilled cheese sandwich too!!!



You love Baileys, me too, maybe W & T should drink some and get friendly - hee!! Loved the update, it was very funny and well written ... the part where Buffy thought Willow was staring at a guy was very good!!



Blue :D



"She should have died hereafter: There would have been a time for such a word ...

...it is a tale, told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing."

Shakespeare/Macbeth

Blue77
 


Re: Update Fic: Angels and Goddesses Chapter 3

Postby Karzia » Sun May 19, 2002 5:35 pm

I am sitting here eating Grilled cheese and reading this wonderful story:grin Thanks for the update, when is the next one:D

Give into the sunshine....give into the W/T love..let it take over"

--------Sassette

Karzia
 


Re: Update Fic: Angels and Goddesses Chapter 3

Postby ExtraFlameyWT » Sun May 19, 2002 6:20 pm

Wonderful update!! :)



Quote:
Willow moaned, admiring her future lover bathed in brilliant sunlight.


I love how you put in the word "future" there..



I can't wait for more!!!



-Aimee :D

*****
"Pope John Paul today confirmed his opposition to gay marriages, said they're unnatural. Gay marriage is unnatural. Then he put on a pointy hat, his dress, and returned to never having sex at all." -Bill Maher

ExtraFlameyWT
 


Re: Update Fic: Angels and Goddesses Chapter 3

Postby The Rose24 » Sun May 19, 2002 10:04 pm

"Houston, we have made contact.":bounce :bounce :bounce



I am loving this story.



How soon are you planning to come back?

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

The Rose24
 


Update

Postby LeatherQueen » Mon May 20, 2002 1:58 am

You know, I've read A LOT of fan fic. Waaaaay a lot. :) But this story... there's just something about it that just draws you in, caresses you and leaves little tingly whispers of emotion all up and down your spine. And it's just beautiful. God, I could read this all day. I have to say that this is one of the best fics I've read. And that's only after three parts. :)



No, Angel doesn't disappoint. And neither do you. And neither does this story. Thank you for this. :D








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"But when they're playing your song on the jukebox in Hell, you might as well dance." - K. Simpson


"Futile... like a FOX, baby!" - Tara in The Late Shift by wiccachica

LeatherQueen
 


Re: Update

Postby mollyig » Mon May 20, 2002 5:54 am

I think that Willow turning to the books, her trusted friends for so long, to augment what she was feeling was typical of her.



And contact has now been made! Lovely!

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: Update

Postby pikescoob » Mon May 20, 2002 6:26 am

I can't find the right words this morning....but I love this fic. It's so cute and funny.....it just kinda leaves me with a warm fuzzy feeling b/c it reminds me of a couple years ago when I was in college.....admiring someone from afar and trying to get the courage to talk to them....lot's of nerves at work there and I usually chickened out.....the best part for me was imagining what he would be like and how things would be so perfect....unfortunately the guy never turned out as great as in my visions. I see in this fic that it'll be different for Will and Tara b/c the connection is so strong.....love it!!



--Michelle

pikescoob
 


Re: Update

Postby Jennpurr » Mon May 20, 2002 9:50 am

Awww.. Willow finally met her angel. Must have more of this soon. :D



Very cute. And I wish Tara wasn't so hard on herself.



Jen

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"It's good to be a chicken casserole," Tara murmured before passing out. -from "Answering Darkness" by Sassette




Tara: Can you just be kissing me now?

Jennpurr
 


Re: Update

Postby capricornmist » Mon May 20, 2002 9:57 am

Well the fanfic writers are certainly pulling out all the stops at the moment! This is fantastic!



Looking forward to more of this fic :grin

-------------------------

"Nothing like gettin your ass kicked, to make your ass hurt!"

Buffy Series 5

capricornmist
 


Re: Update

Postby jdcioffi » Mon May 20, 2002 2:28 pm

Nothing like that ever happens when I get grilled cheese.



Great updates ... more soon?



JD

"I smell the smelly smell of something that smells smelly!" (SpongeBob Squarepants)

jdcioffi
 


Re: Update

Postby The Rose24 » Mon May 20, 2002 9:31 pm

Ready for one of your fabulous updates. ;)



How soon are you coming back? Sorry, I am just anxious.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

Edited by: The Rose24  at: 5/20/02 9:07:29 pm
The Rose24
 


can't wait

Postby hopico99 » Mon May 20, 2002 10:53 pm

hi,



just wanted to add my praise to the chorus! You're doing a wonderful job and I really love the way your write, very clear and crisp. Hmm, yeah...okay.



i'm very excited for the update and thanks for taking the time to write some wonderful fic.



peace

;)

hopico99
 


Re: can't wait

Postby tommo » Tue May 21, 2002 12:35 am

I just read all three parts of this and laughed out loud at some of it. It's so cute; you really have Willow's adorable eagerness just right, plus the little meanderings her mind makes. That's great. I'm really enjoying this, thanks. :)


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"Smut now." - Dark Madfic Tommo

tommo
 


Re: Update

Postby lisa h » Tue May 21, 2002 11:43 am

Just caught myself recommending your story to a friend. It occured to me that I ought to let you know how much I'm enjoying it.



Thank you

Lisa

Edited by: lisa h at: 5/21/02 11:28:11 am
lisa h
 


Re: Update

Postby Jennpurr » Tue May 21, 2002 11:46 am

Lisa,



Awww, thank you. I really appreciate that. I'm glad you are enjoying it, and thanks so much for recommending it. WOW... that's very sweet. :love I should have more up soon.



Jen

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"It's good to be a chicken casserole," Tara murmured before passing out. -from "Answering Darkness" by Sassette




Tara: Can you just be kissing me now?

Jennpurr
 


Re: Update

Postby Blue Athame 1 » Tue May 21, 2002 3:18 pm





Uh?...huh?...Athame is scratching her head.



Jennpurr are you my new private secretary...or are you just hijacking my fic?



I think you may be a very naughty kitten...perhaps you should come up to my study so we can discuss this (wink,wink).



This tells me that I should formulate some responses for you all...I guess I left the nest unattended for too long. Kittens are coming and crawling into my basket. This is not really such a bad thing mind you...I rather enjoy the company. There are perks you know...all that licking, purring and rolling about.



So I will get back to you soon.



Still working on Chapter 4...probably a few more days until the update...may depend on how badly tonights episodes knock me on my ass. Took me a couple days to get back together last time...no telling what will happen after tonight. Kinda sensitive here.



So I will be back soon to talk...that is of course if Jennpurr doesn't continue to do that for me. :)



Yours,



Athame

Blue Athame 1
 


next chapter

Postby vmpIrslAr » Tue May 21, 2002 3:58 pm

Hi,

I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter to your story. It's so sweet with goodness like honey. I find Willow and Tara are the ultimate embodiment of true love. True love against all odds. Makes me go all goose-bumpy when I think about what they have.



Great fic... keep it coming please



VmpIrslAr

vmpIrslAr
 


Re: next chapter

Postby jdcioffi » Tue May 21, 2002 5:50 pm

*cough* MORE *cough*



JD

"I smell the smelly smell of something that smells smelly!" (SpongeBob Squarepants)

jdcioffi
 


Re: next chapter

Postby Jennpurr » Tue May 21, 2002 9:57 pm

Athame,



**BLUSHES** Oops.. wrong thread. Sorry about that. I really feel stupid now. :blush



OKAY... I'm running away now, to hide under my rock. Sorry again. But, I can still come up to your study though, if that's an offer. ;) Sorry, couldn't resist.



I don't know how I got the threads mixed up. Sorry for the confussion.



Jen

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"It's good to be a chicken casserole," Tara murmured before passing out. -from "Answering Darkness" by Sassette




Tara: Can you just be kissing me now?

Edited by: Jennpurr at: 5/21/02 9:01:29 pm
Jennpurr
 


Re: next chapter

Postby Blue Athame 1 » Tue May 21, 2002 10:46 pm





Jennpurr..the only place you are running is up to my study...come on...I'll show you my etchings and try to assuage your guilt. Fear not....I find it all immensely amusing.



Athame

Blue Athame 1
 


Re: next chapter

Postby Jennpurr » Tue May 21, 2002 11:00 pm

**Takes off running to Athame's Study, getting there first** :grin **Looking around.** What a nice room? ;)



I'm glad you found that amusing and are not upset with me. I still don't know how I got my thread and this one mixed up. :blush



Anyway.. Study time it is. ;)



Jen

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"It's good to be a chicken casserole," Tara murmured before passing out. -from "Answering Darkness" by Sassette




Tara: Can you just be kissing me now?

Jennpurr
 


Re: Responses

Postby Blue Athame 1 » Wed May 22, 2002 9:45 am





"Behold The Power of Cheese!"....Grilled Cheese.



Thank you all so much for taking the time to post. You all are so sweet and thoughtful, your enthusiasm and encouragement keeps me going.



Snuggle 79- I am glad you liked our girls...I decided it was time to get them together. Did not want to tease too much.



Kathleen- I am always so happy to see you here...thanks for your thoughts...Buffy and Willow together unwittingly working things out just felt right to me. Friends do that sometimes you know, help without knowing.



Shooting Star- You know I don't exactly know why I chose grilled cheese. Maybe because it is one of those silly foods that is warm and powerful all at the same time. You know...tastes good while giving comfort. I'm glad you like...grilled cheese and stories that is.



Akira- Ahhh....thank you. One can never underscore enough the adoration Willow has for Tara. It is true...it is constant...it is always.



Xita- I'm with you...I always knew she would do her lesbian research, I am frankly quite surprised that we don't see that more.

You think I am funny? That is great. I think of myself as many things...but I have never thought of myself as funny. Maybe it is because I have to spend so much time being so serious. Now that I think of it though I do quite often make my clients laugh...even when they are very sad and have good reason to be. Hmmmm...thanks for the insight, I guess you are never to old to learn something new about yourself.



Tiggrscorpio- You see...grilled cheese is everywhere...it is universal. I will keep writing, if you keep coming to visit. :)



Blue 77- Hey Blue...you and me, a bottle of Baileys over on Smoochie Island (wink,wink). Come on...lets go...who can resist the two blues all lusty and liquored up...I'm sure the Captain wont mind. I'm glad you liked the update.



Karzia- Where is your lesbian? I thought you liked eating grilled cheese and lesbians. Don't you have one...maybe you should get one before the next seating. Wonderful huh? (Athame blushes...thank you.)



Aimee- You are ever faithful and true....you keep me going. :)

Promise me a bump this week (wiggles eyebrows), maybe a kiss and a tickle too?



Good God I am silly today....well, you all came...consider it the price of admission.



Rose- I will tell you Rose, between you and Jenn lobbying for contact you made me change my plans and brought the girls together sooner. I was gonna wait until the end of 4. Pretty shitty huh? Glad I didn't do it you old squeaky wheel you, thanks for saving me.



LeatherQueen- Dear LQ...wow...I don't know what to say. Your post made me cry. Really, real big tears...good cry, not bad...(I'm kind of the emotional sort if you all hadn't gotten that yet). I can not adequately express what your generous words meant to me.

PS....You and me over on Smootchie Island too...I'll wear my leather pants. Like Baileys?



Mollyig- I love how you always cut to the heart of it...so gentle...so wise...so insightful. Will you travel around with me and whisper in my ear...I could use some of that.



Pikescoob- When I was in college I fell in love with my Shakespeare TA. She made me absolutely stupid...I would linger waiting for glimpses of her. I would write her poetry, leave her roses and scones and yes...Baileys. She would find little presents in her pockets, her door, her mailbox and anywhere I could find to put them. Yes, hopeless romantic here...I wonder if we all have stories like this to tell. I know that one reason I love W/T so much at this time is the basking in remembrance of sweet new love...something I hope we all can relate too. Sigh.



Capricornmist- Glad I didn't disappoint. You never did tell me what kind of cream..."lesbians and cream" you said...oh...I get it...is it the kind of cream we ladies don't talk about?...Oh, I see....your secret is safe with me. See, I pay attention.



Lisa h- Glad you stopped by and thank you so much...I do appreciate the feedback. Any thoughts from your friend?



VmplrslAr- eek did I get that right? I agree with you...they make me all goose bumpy too. I'll have an order of goose bumps all around. Thank you for your kind words. Honey huh, perhaps I can use that...hmmm "words dripped from her lips like honey, oozing only syllables sweet". Food again...I'm telling you...oral...oral..oral. A new fiction is rising.



JD- You are so good to me...always nudging me along. I love the attention...and what about those bribes you promised (waggles brows)...So whatcha thinking....what exactly do I get for this next chapter? Hmmm?



hopico- Thanks hopico...clear and crisp...if you only knew...you should see the mess I make when I am writing. I just let it spill out everywhere and then edit it back. This is always with pen and paper first...upside down...right side up...in the margins...it is just silly. To make matters worse...I am embarrassed to say I write like a doctor, mostly illegible to those who try to read it. This is great of course when people are nosey but not so great when I cant even read it. One has to wonder how any of this ever reaches the board. Chapter 2 was a trial with a lot of cutting and pasting. Clear and crisp...yay! This is a triumph.



Tommo- I am so pleased you are enjoying this. I respect your opinion and know you will tell me true. I just love writing Willow... she is just so...well...you know...Willow. I suspect you love writing her too...it shows in your fics. I can't wait to get to Tara...there is something deep and beautiful. Thanks for the encouragement.



Jennpurr- Back to the study with you, you are still naughty!

While you are there take a memo:

"Dear readers, thanks for coming, thanks for reading, thanks for sharing." Athame.



Oh and Jenn...while you are at it...send them all some candy and flowers so that they understand the depth of my affection and appreciation.



I'll be right up...I think I have a few more etchings to show you. :)





Love to you all...be back soon,



Athame











Edited by: Blue Athame 1 at: 5/22/02 11:42:04 am
Blue Athame 1
 


Re: Responses

Postby Jennpurr » Wed May 22, 2002 10:03 am

**Running back to Athame's study**



I know.. I've been very naughty and should be punished. :grin :grin ... I'm in a evil mood this morning. Hee... Anyway... thanks for understanding about the mess up.



**Sending flowers and candy to everyone**



I think I should say that I appreciate this story very much, and all the fiction out there right now. I hate that re-runs and fan fiction is going to have to keep us happy right now. It's so frustrating.



I'm really enjoying your story and can't wait to see what happens next for our girls. More, Soon? Please??



I'll be waiting patiently.



**Everyone please accept the flowers and the candy from Athame on behalf of her (?), I don't want to get that wrong, sorry - on behalf of her appreciation and love for you guys. ;)



Jen

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"It's good to be a chicken casserole," Tara murmured before passing out. -from "Answering Darkness" by Sassette




Tara: Can you just be kissing me now?

Jennpurr
 


Re: Responses

Postby mollyig » Wed May 22, 2002 10:07 am

Wow Athame, that's some invitation!

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: Responses

Postby Blue Athame 1 » Wed May 22, 2002 10:32 am



Jenn...I'm with you...there is so much good fiction out there right now...and we need it all. Write...write... write I say...read...read...read some more and feel better. My prescription for the day.



Thanks for sending the flowers and the candy. I love it when you are naughty...I think you just need to live in my study where we can just look at etchings all day when we are not reading...writing...eating grilled cheese and drinking Baileys. I'm in heaven.





Mollyig- Oh yes....I meant it. You, me, world travels...be my muse. Jenn can stay home in the study...she will keep things going, and I will find her some other kittens to keep her company until we return....we will bring them lots of presents from far off places...Lets go!

Edited by: Blue Athame 1 at: 5/22/02 1:25:00 pm
Blue Athame 1
 


So it's come to bribes, has it?

Postby jdcioffi » Wed May 22, 2002 10:34 am

Alrightee then ... all you can eat ... grilled cheese. :grin



Name it ... it's yours ... I need to feed my addiction. There are no depths to how low I would sink ... be wary, my friend. :evil



Update now? *holding grilled cheese tied to a stick in front of Blue's nose*



JD

"I smell the smelly smell of something that smells smelly!" (SpongeBob Squarepants)

jdcioffi
 


fic-Angels and Goddesses

Postby fidds » Wed May 22, 2002 10:35 am

very sweet fic - can't wait till the next update :)



*Hannah*

fidds
 

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