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Suffocate Underground

Postby XXSuicidalMindDepressedXX » Sat Nov 22, 2003 9:15 am

Hi all:bigwave would you ppl de kind with me and tell if you want me to continue or not? and maybe tell if is good?:D



Disclamer: they not mine...but who said i can´t play with?

Rating: well lets say it will get R for violence and dirty words

this is pretty much AU...well this is complete AU actually.



Suffocate Underground

In one of sunnydale dead ends, Angel walk lost in his own thoughs when a voice makes he look at a shadow at his left side, the figure was lean in the wall looking at the ground.

“Hello my old friend” - the figure said as take a step into the faint light of the moon, showing a beautiful face, deep blue eyes and blonde hair falling in front of it, the figure was wearing a black large jeans and a belt with iron details, a scarlet top and a black leather coat.

“Tara?” - Angel asked as try to believe in his eyes. - “You already here?...but I send you a letter...- he was cutted by Tara. – “Just yesterday...I know, I got it yesterday night and come right away.”- she said smiling.

“I forgot how fast you can be...scary fast actually!”- Angel said similing too.

The two start to walk back to the street side by side in silence, paying attention in nothing aparently till both turn their heads, theirs bodys fowlling. Two vampires jump off the hoof above they and falling right in front they. Angel and Tara look at each other and smile, when they turn back to the vampires,both show their own game faces and attack the young vampires.

The four fight but the young vampires soon turn into dust.

“They don´t make vampires like in the old times.”- Tara said cleaning the dust from her coat.-“Do they always fight so bad?”

“You right...oh I miss the old times...”- Angel said

“You miss be a bad vamp ... been Angelus?”

“No I don´t miss be Angelus....mostly because he is still in me...everytime I turn in a vampire I turn in Angelus.”-he explain.

“I understand the feeling.”

Both old vampires walk down the street, talking about the old times and the new times.





Ducky.

[edited cause bad english mistakes :p ]

Edited by: maudmac  at: 11/22/03 6:01 pm
XXSuicidalMindDepressedXX
 


Re: Suffocate Underground

Postby ambersagoddess » Sat Nov 22, 2003 10:23 am

hey love, it was great! I loved the detail. You might want to try a beta though, just to fix up the grammar mistakes. Like maybe me Ask and you shall receive. Love you Baby



-Rei

Spero eorum amo donbit tu animus magnamus



Why yes, the rumors are true, I have patted the Great One's ass...

ambersagoddess
 


Re: Suffocate Underground

Postby Tempest Duer » Sat Nov 22, 2003 10:33 pm

Anything with Vamp Tara has the potential to be good... the only thing I can say is yeah, get a beta. Like her.

I believe in the madness called "now."

Tempest Duer
 


Re: Suffocate Underground

Postby jadeo0 » Mon Nov 24, 2003 5:41 pm

Nice start, Duck! Angel and Tara as old time vampire friends? Can't wait to see what happens. :D

A dose of Amber makes my day.

jess

jadeo0
 


Re: Suffocate Underground

Postby WintersDreamer » Mon Nov 24, 2003 9:10 pm

:applause

Love Vamp Tara! Thats two Vamp T fictions going on right now!



How did Angel contact Tara and why?



How did she get there so fast?



... and Tara being an old friend of Angel threw me for a loop, looking forward to seeing the story on that one!



Please update soon!



:read

WintersDreamer
 


Re: Suffocate Underground

Postby FIRESIGN » Wed Nov 26, 2003 7:42 pm

Nice job, Ducky! Looking forward to reading more! Keep up the good work!



Cin - aka FIRESIGN:cool

FIRESIGN
 


Re: Suffocate Underground

Postby Rachel o4 » Wed Nov 26, 2003 7:43 pm

mmm Tara as a vampire, great stuff. Looks like a good start to a great fic. Update soon ducky!

~Rachel

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Re: Suffocate Underground

Postby FlyingPoppy » Thu Nov 27, 2003 12:49 pm

I'm another sucker for vamp Tara stories, nothing to do with the leather possibilities....:whistle



Interesting that Tara seems to be an older vamp and has a past with Angel.



I'm looking forward to more. :)



poppy x

Life can suck, but at least there's chocolate - Cicca

FlyingPoppy
 


Re: Suffocate Underground

Postby TaraBaby77 » Thu Nov 27, 2003 4:36 pm

Hey, not bad.... not bad at all.... there are a few things i would probably fix, such as the grammar and wording. All in all, sounds promising. Lets see some more, kay??? =)



Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

Edited by: Warduke at: 11/27/03 4:53 pm
TaraBaby77
 


PART 2

Postby XXSuicidalMindDepressedXX » Mon Dec 01, 2003 10:58 am

Hey everyone:bigwave ....thanks to everyboby:D ...i´m not good with individual replys but i may post some later....anyways here is part 2..is kinda small....but...well i have part 3 done and just need V to beta it to me....btw thanks the advice of getting a beta...my english sucks...







PART 2





“You and a Slayer?”- Tara asked not believing – “That is

something I did never expect.”

“And what about me?”- Angel said sarcastically.

“It’s funny ... in a very twisted way...” – Tara said in

a low and playful voice.

Both kept walking slowly, enjoying the night.

“Does she know about you being a vampire?”- Tara asked

without turning her head.

“Yes...she didn’t take it so well but things work out....you

know, love is strange.”

“Love is blind...but so is a bat and it still finds his

way in the dark.”

Angel chuckled -“Nice one!”

“Haha...mock me!....but I’m not the one in love here.”-

Tara sent a sarcastic smile in his direction.

“Now you’re the one mocking me! Tricker!!”

“No. I’m a joker...and only when I want to.”- Tara’s face

showed a serious and a little worried expression -“Plus it is

true...and I know it...I loved many times...and many

times my heart was broken....because love had made me

blind. I don’t want you to hurt Angel, you are after all,

like a brother to me...your pain is mine as well.’

“She loves me and I love her ...”- he was interrupted by

Tara -“ You love a Slayer....love between humans are

already hard....between humans and vampires are

worse...and between Slayers and vampires are

impossible! Slayers are meant to kill vampires...to hate

them...”- she finished, whispering.

“I know that... I think about that everyday and every

night...”- he sighed sadly, then went on – “But I can’t

help it...”

“I can’t change your mind...and there are some things you need to

figure out by yourself.”- Tara said seriously and added -“I

want you happy, and if the Slayer makes you happy, you

have my blessing and as always my help whenever you need it for, no matter what.”

Angel looked into her eyes, and in them he saw the true

feelings of the words, Tara had blessed him and sworn to protect his relationship, but her earlier words had

truly affected him, she was right, Slayers are meant to kill

vampires, not love them.- “Thank you...for all.”

“No need to thank me.” – Tara said smiling.

“I know you are right about the Slayer thing and

love...but I guess I will need to learn all that the

hard way.”

“You don’t need to learn it, I don’t really want you to... it’s good that you believe in love and hope things

can work out for a vampire and a Slayer... after all one

of the most precious loves was born from the hate between two

families. And I got hurt many times, I guess that’s one of

the reasons I don’t really love...or I never meet anyone

that would make me fall in love.”- Tara had faint

tears pooling in her eyes, but fought against them, not

letting them fall.

“You will...someday you will.” – Angel said softly and

rested his left hand over Tara’s shoulder.

Both started walking in silence again, lost in their own

worlds.

Tara saw her metallic dark blue Honda resting quietly

in the side of the empty street, Angel saw the

motorcycle too and commented in a playful voice:

“That was the closest and most modern version of a horse you

could find?”

Tara smiled as she got the dark blue helmet of the Honda and, then,

she sat on the motorcycle while putting it on, finally starting the engine and looking one last time in

Angel’s direction and, waving her hand goodbye, she then drove the

Honda down the street and disappeared in the dark

horizon.

Angel smiled once again and started his walk to the

cemetery where he would find Buffy to help her on the

patrol. In all his walk the conversation between he and

Tara would pass over and over in his head.





********* again thanks everyone for reading and THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR THE FEEDBACK!!!!!...PLEASE MORE FEEDBACK TO THE INSUCURE KID HERE:pray :whistle :p



Ducky

- You love as you hate, with passion-

XXSuicidalMindDepressedXX
 


Re: PART 2

Postby TaraBaby77 » Mon Dec 01, 2003 11:34 am

WOW, that was deep!!! Tara finding Angel like a brother, that is awesome, sweet even. Great stuff. If you got more, don't be a meanie and not share, heehee. Keep them coming!!! Once again, great job. A lot easier to read and follow. Keep it up. =)

Aaron

'TaraBaby77'

"It's about two people, regardless of sex, who love each other and treat each other with compassion and respect."

TaraBaby77
 


Re: PART 2

Postby Willowtara19 » Tue Dec 02, 2003 11:08 am

:bigwave , little sis!!



I just wanted to tell you how much I love your fic! It's just great!! :clap



As some of the kittens said before, the idea of vamp :tara is really good....and that Honda....vamp :tara with a metallic blue Honda....:thud :eyebrow :glasses



And :tara and Angel being like brothers? That's just soooo sweet :heart



Update soon, pretty please? :pray :D



Willowtara19 :kitty

Willowtara19
 


PART 3

Postby XXSuicidalMindDepressedXX » Mon Mar 01, 2004 7:06 am

Here it is part 3.....finally i made myself post it....uh next part is being made in my head.....gotta explain how Angel and Tara meet...plus willow and the rest of the gang gonna be aroud next update too...uh i hope...:P



PART3



Tara stopped in front of an old abandoned house in the

far ends of Sunnydale. She got down from the motorcycle and

walked into the house taking off her helmet. Then, after

putting it on the wood box in the dusty ground she grabbed a

blood pack, ripped the package and drank the blood. After she finished, her face was turned, her forehead was just

a deep frown, making her look angry, her eyes still had

the same blue shade but where the white part of the eye

was, there was now a deep black, and her fangs were just the same

as the other vampires. She threw the empty package in

the ground.

She walked till a broken mirror in the corner of the room,

deformed images were reflected, small faces and bigger

faces mixed in an organized chaos. She turned her face back

to normal and stared into the mirror, looking each small

image, remembering each piece of past her eyes had seen

and ears had listened to, and each word that was spoken

by her mouth. A rush of fury consumed her and her

right fist met the cold glass breaking the mirror in

millions of pieces in the ground, and as she looked at

the still visible images in the ground staring a her, a

blue flame started to grow in her left hand, in a fast

movement the flame was sent to the ground turning the

glass into crystalline dust and a hole was made in the old

fragile wood ground, damaging it even more. She closed her eyes and then

opened them slowly, still looking to the just burned hole,

smoke coming from it edges. She closed her eyes again

and turn to the stairs. She opened them, and everything looked as new as it was long centuries ago: a small kid run down the stairs, passing by the vampire and not caring about or not

seeing it. The small blonde haired girl run to the

kitchen, soon followed by a bigger dark blonde haired boy,

the boy hugged his sister and kissed her right cheek as she

smiled and hugged him too. Tara closed her eyes once again

and turned her head to the ground. Opening them once again, she

saw the dusty wooden floor again, then looked to the stairs, they were old

and had holes and some missing steps, so different from the seconds

before. Tears run down her cheeks freely, she didn’t

bother or care to try and stop them, she looked up, shaking her head to clean her mind. Standing up and walking to a rusty spring-mattress, lying on the uncomfortable bed and looking at almost crashing down ceiling.

-‘I really need a better place to stay.’- she thought as closing her eyes and hoping a nightmare free night.

************

Blood and scream, children and elders running, fire and smoke.

Tara woke up with a start, she was sweating and trembling. Was still dark outside, she stand up and went to the bathroom, washing her face with a dirty water.

Walking back to the living room, she take a violin from a beautifully worked wood case. A slow sad melody float in the old room. The sun started to rise , making it´s way inside the room of the old house.





feed back please?:whistle :D .....now i good run and hide:yikes ....what i´m blushig like hell here!

Ducky:crash The master of Yahell....MUAHAUAHAUHAUHAUA*flames echo and pose*:governator :wtf



XXSuicidalMindDepressedXX
 


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