My (silly) poems :)

[pacou]

Hey Kitten



Okay So finally I have decided to post some poems here too Some of them are good, most are not, but so what? I think I should share them with you anyway

I know, they are not half as good as the poems out here but… I still wanna share. I guess I’m just a nice kitten



It’s a general poem about Willow and Tara and fits to all sweet moments actually, I think…

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Without you I am not.

A shadow, nothing is left of me



Everything is cold, empty.

Darkness



Depressing.

My breath

It’s empty.

I threaten to smother



But then you touch my hand.

I can breathe again



You fill my soul.

You turn shadow into light



I am.

Because you are

You are.

Because I am

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Okay, that’s it… Hope it wasn’t too bad and you didn’t fall asleep while reading…



Take care everybody



-Viv-

You wanna know what my new last name is?
Forgetful... and its the invention of my English teacher....

[The Pineapple Head]

Let me be the first to congratulate you on posting. It's a very sweet and emotional poem and I'm happy that you're posting.







Diana

Everyone in the house had heard that I was the "sex consultant" . I think they imagined that meant I stood over Gina and Jennifer with a riding crop, snapping, "Deeper , Harder, A Little to the Left!"
Susie Bright on the premiere of BOUND

[4evaWill]

Wowee, that was very good! Short, sweet and fits them perfectly I agree! Yay!

Cath

Tara: No, I-I understand. You have to be with the person you l-love.

Willow: I am.

[pikescoob]

Viv!! Awesome that you're posting your poetry! Very sweet poem...I hope you post more!



Michelle

[Tara22]

oh go you Viv!!!!!



You did it chicklet! I knew you could! ANNNNNND like I said many times! you are great!!



wonderful poem Viv!



Can't wait for more!!



*hugs*



Chel

***

"Oh, sorry. Uhh, I forgot that that doesn't seem normal, to the rest of society. It's just, we, well, we both really like cows. Really like them. To the extent of wanting to buy one, when we're older."- The Crying Game (by vix84)

[pacou]

Diana, Cath, Michelle, Chel!!



Thanks soo much, I hadn't thought I would have replies after a night of sleeping lol I'm still pretty tired and I've to go to school now



hehe lol Feedback is awesome



And I can reassure everyone, I'm planning on posting more



Thanks to all Kitten for reading and replying, you rock



-Viv-

You wanna know what my new last name is?
Forgetful... and its the invention of my English teacher....

[SJ]

Great poem

[bulldog tidnab]

wow Viv. this was lovely. really dug these lines:

I am./Because you are/You are./Because I am

kinda wish i'd thought of 'em myself

so nicve to see another kitten posting poetry around here. our numbers are growing. yay!

ahem... more soon yes? need my fixes regularly you know.



*woof*

"Usually when people are sad, they don't do anything. They just cry over their condition. But when they get angry, they bring about a change."

- Malcolm X

[angelatt]

hey baby,



I'm glad you finally decided to post one of your lovely poems . You know that I really LOVE your poems and I'm happy that you are sharing them with all the other kittens



love ya



angel

[pacou]

Hey Kitten



Thanks again for all your nice feedback, I really appreciate it Cos in fact I’m a feedback sucker *muahahahaha*



Thanks to:



Every kitten reading and replying! You are the best!



SJ Im glad you liked it



Andie Yup, Ill try to give you your daily fixes Im glad I've decided to post too Yay me, I'm a Kitten poet



and...



Angel Hey baby Thanks for posting muchly I know I keep repeating myself but I really am happy you posted Love you

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But okay, let’s go on with a new sweet poem… That’s the only reason why you’re in this thread It’s again a general poem, but I somehow I think it’s more Willow’s point of view…



Yeah Kitties, I’ll stop talking now, I have a problem with closing my mouth and shutting up actually but… the poem for you now





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You stand there

Embracing me with all your tenderness

Weakly I break down



As your body makes contact with mine

I cry

My heart races

I shiver

I think nothing



I am now.

Weak.

Vulnerable.

Fragile.



But as long as

You

Hold me

I

Can put up

With that

Easily

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Take care everybody



–Viv-

You wanna know what my new last name is?
Forgetful... and its the invention of my English teacher....

[Tara22]

ooh Vivlet!



Go you!



and YAY for another so soon!



I love it and my favorite part was the end

Quote:

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But as long as

You

Hold me

I

Can put up

With that

Easily

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thanks for that

***

"Oh, sorry. Uhh, I forgot that that doesn't seem normal, to the rest of society. It's just, we, well, we both really like cows. Really like them. To the extent of wanting to buy one, when we're older."- The Crying Game (by vix84)

[4evaWill]

Ooh, another sweet poem! I have to agree with Chel, my favorite was the end part... Great!

Cath

Tara: No, I-I understand. You have to be with the person you l-love.

Willow: I am.

[SJ]

Excellent

[pacou]

Hey kitties!



Wanna thank:



Everybody reading and replying! This really means a lot to me



Chel Thanks for replying girl! Vivlet Cracked me out laughing



Cath Thanks, I'm glad you liked the end part, I do too



SJ Thanks for replying, I'm always happy about replies even if they are short



I hope there's a new poem up tomorrow But I wont promise lol



-Viv-

You wanna know what my new last name is?
Forgetful... and its the invention of my English teacher....

[pacou]

Good evening Kitties lol Or good morning, whatever



Okay, so here is a new poem, I hope you like Enjoy!



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I shiver

As she caresses my skin

It’s just a touch

But it’s filled with love

And that touch will never end.

So won’t my love.



My knees are weakening

As she grins at me

It’s just a smile

But it’s filled with desire

And that desire will never fade away

So won’t my desire.



Every inch of my body trembles

As she winks at me

It’s just a gesture

But it’s filled with faith

And that gesture will never cease

So won’t my faith.

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Take care everybody

–Viv-

You wanna know what my new last name is?
Forgetful... and its the invention of my English teacher....

[Tara22]

ooooooooh Vivlet Vivlet!!



I liked that!!



I loved the way you ended each verse with a 'so won't...'



lovely lovely wonderful



Thanks for that!

Chel

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"Oh, sorry. Uhh, I forgot that that doesn't seem normal, to the rest of society. It's just, we, well, we both really like cows. Really like them. To the extent of wanting to buy one, when we're older."- The Crying Game (by vix84)

Edited by: Tara22  at: 1/25/03 12:32:21 pm

[pacou]

Okay Kitties and moderators too



I'm sorry that I had no disclaimer in the last poem I thought it wouldn't be that important... Im know I'm bad



It was (and actually still is) a general one between those too, maybe a little more naughty, dont know... Somehow I still didnt manage to write a poem to a certain moment... damn...



I will do the disclaimer thing from now on again, now that I know its important



Thanks for telling me maudmac



And thanks to Chel for replying You rock girl



-Viv-

You wanna know what my new last name is?
Forgetful... and its the invention of my English teacher....

[SJ]

Like that poem a lot,very emotive

Hope that reply wasn't too short

[pacou]

Okay, hello Kitten



Here finally a new poem, hope you like



Thanks to SJ Nope that reply was perfect Thanks



And the new poem fits to all nice moments between our favourite girls, this time maybe more to the, um, closer moments





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Feeling your heart and pulse beating

Kissing and tasting your red swollen lips

Touching your bare skin

Touching your silky hair



Feeling you inside me

Drinking from you

Sipping at you

Tasting you



Loving you

Makes me

Feel.



Love.

Strength.

Beauty.



Loving you

Makes me

Feel.



Alive.



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Hope you liked



-Viv-

You wanna know what my new last name is?
Forgetful... and its the invention of my English teacher....

[Tara22]

Vivlet!!!



UH HUH!! I sure did



GO YOU!!



I particularly loved the repitition of the lines

Quote:

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Loving you

Makes me

Feel.

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Thanks for that!



Chel

~*@.......We are the weirdest person in the world.......@*~

[SJ]

Excellent

[elessar007]

Let me start off by saying thank you. Thank you for sharing your poetry with the rest of us kittens.



I really enjoyed the last poem you posted . I may be reading it entirely different from the way you intended but I got a sense of urgency as the poem progressed. It was almost as if the words were coming out in between panting breaths. I may be misreading you but if that is the case then let me be wrong.



elessar

***

"Hey, Will. This is me. It doesn't all have to be 'good' and 'fine.' This is the room where you don't have to be brave and I still love you."

[The Pineapple Head]

*bows head in shame* I am so sorry. I cannot believe that I have missed three of your gloriously wonderful poems! Can you ever forgive me? Seriously, I don't know which one I loved more, but they are all fabulous and so are you.







Diana

"No, I'm not cold. I can engrave glass with my nipples, but I'm not cold."
Me

[pacou]

Okay, hello Kitten



A new poem (yay ) hope you like



Actually I’m quite proud of myself about this one cos it’s the first one that I managed to write for a certain moment from a special point of view Yay me



And thanks to all people reading You are the best, kitties *runs around and puts a bowl of milk in front of every kitten * I hope its yummy



Hehe thanks Chel I decided to call you not Chellet since its just not funny anymore if you’ve called me like that (kinda ) before too And I wanna have a weird name for you :P So, from now on, you are *drums* Chellolino Isn’t that great? Yes, I know Or you’d rather be Chellolina? Choose



Ohh and SJ my dear, love your short reply of course No, seriously thank you, I’m such a tease sometimes… sheesh…



Thanks ellessar007 Thanks that you felt the urge to tell me your point of view Well, yeah now that you say, in between panting breaths… That’s just… naughty Not that I complain But it a nice idea… Thanks for reading



Aww Diana, of course I’ll forgive you But now you can be grateful A joke, dont worry I’m glad you loved all of them Wait till you see the next :P Cos I think that one is good… And the poems are soo me? *thinks* I guess they are



Hope i didnt forget anyone If I did please forgive me, my head is like a sieve, seriously



So, the new one… NEW MOON RISING when Tara sits alone in her dark room, BEFORE Willow arrives poor Tara



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My room

Dark

No light now

I couldn’t bare it.



My room

Cold

No warmth here

I miss the warmth of you



My heart

Full of empty love

No love here now

I told you to choose with your heart



My heart

Warm

No regrets now

I think about how I told you to do the right thing



For you



I suffer

For you



It’s your decision.

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Again, kitten, thanks for reading! It really means a lot to me



Jeez, I dont know how often I have previewed that post now and had to correct mistakes afterwards... I'm so dumb



–Viv-

You wanna know what my new last name is?
Forgetful... and its the invention of my English teacher....

[elessar007]

This is great I love how you portray Tara's love as selfless.

Quote:

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It's your decision.

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She would do what Willow wanted simply because Willow wanted it.

I want to thank you again for sharing.





By the way, don't call me elessar007 please. That name is for the cold and soullesss computer. If you will, please call me Scott.

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"Hey, Will. This is me. It doesn't all have to be 'good' and 'fine.' This is the room where you don't have to be brave and I still love you."

[pikescoob]

Viv! That made me sad, but only cuz it was written so well, so it's a good sad, or something like that Excellent poem! Take care girl!



**Michelle

[SJ]

Great poem,very emotional

[pacou]

Okay, hello Kitten



Wow, a new poem Sheesh, I’m soo good :P



It’s from Willow’s point of view in RESTLESS when she watches Tara lying almost naked on the bed… and looks out of the window



It’s quite good I think



Thanks for reading everybody



Okay Scott, now you’re Scott for me Hey and may I defence myself a little? How can I know your name when you don’t tell me I got a point right? Thanks for reading



Thanks Michelle Hey girlie *hugs* I’m glad you liked it as a good sad poem



And SJ my dear Thanks for reading, I really appreciate it Damn, that sounded cheesy now But thanks for reading my poems





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What is it?

I look outside

And I feel strange



What is it?

I look at you

And I feel home



But no matter what I do

No matter how home I feel with you

I know outside

It is still strange



What is it?

The darkness out there

I turn away



What is it?

The light around you

I am drawn to you



And no matter how strange it is outside

No matter how dark it is

I know inside

It is still home



I’ll face the outside

With you

For you

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Thanks for reading and take care everybody





–Viv-

You wanna know what my new last name is?
Forgetful... and its the invention of my English teacher....

[Tara22]

oooh Vivlet!



yet another great poem!!!



I loved the repitition of the line

Quote:

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What is it?

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great poem! and thanks soooooo much for posting more!!!



and I missed one!! *sobs*



it's fantastic! I loved the line

Quote:

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it's your decision

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*looks sheepish*



I am so sorry I missed it before!



Mwa!

Chellolina

~*@.......We are the weirdest person in the world.......@*~

Edited by: Tara22  at: 1/30/03 1:44:21 pm

[pikescoob]

Viv!! Another excellent poem! I'm not just saying that cuz I consider you a good friend, although I do I'm saying it cuz it's true, you kick ass! The end "with you...for you" *sniff* soooo damn sweet! Can't wait for more! *hugs* talk to ya soon!



**Michelle