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Re: First Fic - Mending Fences - Feedback & Update

Postby barnabasvamp » Sun Sep 22, 2002 7:18 pm

:cry Big fight..... Hope they get to make up soon? :eyebrow

Loving this story- keep the great stuff coming!

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

barnabasvamp
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences - Feedback & Update

Postby The Rose24 » Sun Sep 22, 2002 9:35 pm

I am so glad Tara is standing up for herself like she does in season sux.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.

Tara: Willow, I got so lost.
Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Willow: Hi, um Tara. I was wondering maybe you want to go out some time for coffee? food? Kisses and gay love?

The Rose24
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences - Feedback & Update

Postby JennY » Sun Sep 22, 2002 9:50 pm

I love this update. I totally agree with The Rose24... I'm so glad Tara stood up for herself. Its about time!



Great stuff again, Branny! More please. :)

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If we don't understand

What this life is made of

We learn the truth

When we find that kind of love

-"That Kind of Love" by Alison Krauss







JennY
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences - Feedback & Update

Postby mollyig » Mon Sep 23, 2002 1:43 am

Willow having another crisis of confidence now that she's Ethan's target. She thinks that she's weak because everyone has to protect her. I was pleased to see Tara so vehemently voicing her opinion. Willow needed to hear that.



Its also great to see the Scoobs all being so supportive, as it should be.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences - Feedback

Postby SlayerTazz » Mon Sep 23, 2002 8:48 pm

Ashley: Making up - OMG they were supposed to make up... races to the computer to pull up the story to verify what comes next. I agree that Buffy needs to recognize that Spike is helpful.



I haven't written them kicking Ethan's ass, but I'll definitely put that in the options column. ;)



Kat: Glad you liked the update sweetie!! I forgive you for spilling about the bday...couldn't stay mad at you if I tried.



Being watched 24/7 isn't all bad - if its by the right person :drool :whistle



barnabasvamp: Ashley was kind enough to point out that they were supposed to make-up...after checking my notes and what I have written - it does show a make-up scene in there - so soon!! :shy :grin



The Rose24: Yeah - Tara standing up for herself is nice to see.



Jenn: Glad you liked the update! I'm working on more -- its going slower than planned. :paranoid LOL



Mollyig: Tara and Willow fighting had to be one of the toughest scenes for me to write though...I don't like fights even writing about them made me sick to my stomach (literally).



As for the Scoobs - they seem to stick together like all true friends should!!



Ok, I'm off to try to write the next update.



:peace

~Branny

In my world there are people in chains, and we can ride them like ponies. ~ VampWillow in Dopplegangland

Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love...the clarity of hatred...and the ecstasy of grief.

SlayerTazz
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences - Feedback

Postby kathy94 » Mon Sep 23, 2002 10:54 pm

Quote:
Being watched 24/7 isn't all bad - if its by the right person :drool :whistle


:hmm You know, I think you're right. ;)







"Can you just be kissing me now?" Tara- Entropy

"She's my everything"
Willow-Tough Love

kathy94
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU)

Postby buffygirl4ever » Mon Sep 23, 2002 11:06 pm

I'm newly registered, but I've been reading this fic since the beginning, and I just want to let you know how much I'm enjoying it. Keep writing!

buffygirl4ever
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences - Feedback & Update

Postby tiredsoul » Tue Sep 24, 2002 1:54 am

Lucky me. Got 2 updates at once. Both were excellent of course. The soccer game scene cracked me up. Willow almost stepped in it, didn't she? And this Ethan stuff--it's cool how you're pulling the Eygon story back into it. Tara telling Willow exactly what was on her mind was good. I always like a stand-up-for-yourself Tara. I really like how everyone is supporting Willow. I can understand not wanting to be coddled 24/7, but hell, it is Tara that's offering to do the coddling. How can you argue with that?



And dare I say that I really like Dawn and Spike in this, but I do.



Looking forward to the next one.



--celia

---------------------------------



"That was just rude. Now I forget what I was saying."

tiredsoul
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU)

Postby spazz07 » Tue Sep 24, 2002 3:00 am

Hey Branny, finally caught up and must say loved all the updates :) It was good to see Tara taking up her half of the relationship and bringing Willow back in line and well if the Spike in the show was half as good as yours he might still have a little credability :) Im gonna jump on the bandwagon with Ashley and Kat and get with the update plzzzzzz :) Just loving it :)



Cheers

Nath

Isn't it funny how you feel your most tired five minutes before you have to get up.

spazz07
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU)

Postby barnabasvamp » Tue Sep 24, 2002 9:49 am

:bounce :bounce

Glad to hear there is supposed to be a "making up" scene.

As Tara said "making up is the best part".

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

barnabasvamp
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU)

Postby MissQuirky » Tue Sep 24, 2002 12:54 pm

Quote:
Ashley: Making up - OMG they were supposed to make up... races to the computer to pull up the story to verify what comes next.


I know ur jokin! And I want some full and heavy make-upage got it, missy!! Or I will hafta turn... :evil



Quote:
I haven't written them kicking Ethan's ass, but I'll definitely put that in the options column.


U better, I want him beaten to a bloody pulp!! U can't say he doesn't deserve it!



~Ashley~

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

MissQuirky
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU)

Postby SlayerTazz » Tue Sep 24, 2002 1:28 pm

Ashley,



Quote:
I know ur jokin! And I want some full and heavy make-upage got it, missy!! Or I will hafta turn... :evil




Of course I was joking -- sheesh no need to get all :evil dat not nice!!



Quote:
U better, I want him beaten to a bloody pulp!! U can't say he doesn't deserve it!




I never said he didn't deserve it -- trust me he will pay dearly for messing with our girls!!



:peace

~Branny

In my world there are people in chains, and we can ride them like ponies. ~ VampWillow in Dopplegangland

Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love...the clarity of hatred...and the ecstasy of grief.

SlayerTazz
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU)

Postby MissQuirky » Tue Sep 24, 2002 1:35 pm

Quote:
Of course I was joking -- sheesh no need to get all :evil dat not nice!!


But will it be full and heavy make-upage! Smoochies r fine but r we gonna get a lil more? ;) That will make me a happy kitten! :grin



Quote:
I never said he didn't deserve it -- trust me he will pay dearly for messing with our girls!!


Well GOOD!!! :grin



~Ashley~

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

Edited by: MissQuirky  at: 9/24/02 1:59:39 pm
MissQuirky
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU)

Postby Tiggrscorpio » Tue Sep 24, 2002 2:30 pm

Hey Branny! I so loved this chapter, even if they did have a big fight. Strong Tara is just so yummy. Well, any kind of Tara is yummy, but strong Tara is extra yummy. I think I lost my coherent thought. Anyway, you know what I mean.



I have to figure out a way to still beta this, while I move. I like knowing before everyone else. Somehow, we'll work it out. Looking forward to more!

*****

She's my everything!

Tiggrscorpio
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU)

Postby eccentrictulip » Tue Sep 24, 2002 8:27 pm

oh, big, big fight.....but good for tara. i'm very proud :clap update soon? i love this story.....

*please use both hands....*

eccentrictulip
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU) Feedback

Postby SlayerTazz » Wed Sep 25, 2002 11:09 am

Just feedback at the moment - I will be working on an update to be posted late tonight or sometime tomorrow before I head to work. Sorry for the delay, but someone extremely important needed a little extra Branny-attention. Thanks to everyone for their kind words (yes Ashley, even you).



Kat: Caught my train of thought there did ya ;) :shy :blush



buffygirl4ever: Welcome O'Newly Registered One. I'm glad you decided to say HI after reading and that you are enjoying it. Means a lot to me to know that people are actually enjoying it.



Celia: Welcome back! Missed ya. Glad you liked the updates. Tara started to stand up for herself this year so it was only fitting there was at least one place in here that she did it again. I don't think there are going to be too many people that can argue the Tara-coddling aspect...:hmm nope really don't think so.



Oh, and you liked the D/S exchange - tee hee bonus.



Nath: Welcome back!! I'm so glad you loved the updates. Yeah in my story I'll give Spike a little more credibility than he had in the end of season six. As for jumping on the harassment bandwagon - remember there sweetie you have a story on this board too and that bandwagon is mobile. ;) :p



barnabasvamp: Can't have an argument without a make-up scene! ;)



Ashley: So smoochies are good, but a wittle something more would make you a truly happy kitten huh?! Well lets see - happy Ashley = no ducky doo...ok, I'll see what I can do to appease my loyal fans. ;)



Chris: You lose coherent thought at the mention of Tara's name ...ah crap, can anyone please reel her mind back here...Welcome back to this universe. :lol



I have a way to beta - I still send you the updates, you just read when you have time...that way you still know what is going on but you don't have to feel pressured to get me the input. ;) sound like a deal?



Eccentrictulip: Welcome my friend. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. There will be an update soon. If all goes well tonight - if not tomorrow morning.



~Branny

In my world there are people in chains, and we can ride them like ponies. ~ VampWillow in Dopplegangland

Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love...the clarity of hatred...and the ecstasy of grief.

SlayerTazz
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU) Feedback

Postby wiccanwiggle » Wed Sep 25, 2002 12:20 pm

Still no update, you're killing us here!! Not to worry tho' cause your updates are always worth the wait :D

Everybody's Gettin' Spanked But Me...!

wiccanwiggle
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU) Feedback

Postby MissQuirky » Wed Sep 25, 2002 2:06 pm

Quote:
Ashley: So smoochies are good, but a wittle something more would make you a truly happy kitten huh?! Well lets see - happy Ashley = no ducky doo...ok, I'll see what I can do to appease my loyal fans ;)


Hey i almost forgot bout ducky doo... thanx 4 reminding me! ;) Now i'm really lookin 4ward to this update since its gonna make me a happy kitten! IT BETTER BE HERE SOON OR YA KNOW WHATS COMIN!!- yes ducky doo! :evil

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

MissQuirky
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU) Feedback

Postby SlayerTazz » Wed Sep 25, 2002 4:45 pm

Ashley -

It'll be up either tonight or tomorrow morning. I don't know if I'm going to have time at work tonight or not. Its not turning out to be a hugs and puppies day - but I promise I'll try!!



:peace

~Branny

In my world there are people in chains, and we can ride them like ponies. ~ VampWillow in Dopplegangland

Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love...the clarity of hatred...and the ecstasy of grief.

SlayerTazz
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU) Feedback

Postby MissQuirky » Wed Sep 25, 2002 9:03 pm

Aww Branny no hugs and puppies day! :( *Walks over gives Branny a hug* Ok my :angel side is on tonight! :grin I can wait! :)



~Ashley~

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

MissQuirky
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU) Feedback & Update

Postby SlayerTazz » Wed Sep 25, 2002 11:46 pm

wiccanwiggle: Sorry for the delay – hope it was worth the wait.



Ashley: Thanks for understanding -- this update is just for you being sweet and thanks for the hug - needed it tonight!!





Title: Mending Fences

Author: SlayerTazz

E-mail: tazz72@yahoo.com

Feedback: Yes, please!

Distribution: Sure, just let me know.

Spoilers: Up to and including Season 6, this is mostly AU though.

Pairing: W/T

Rating: NC-17. Some chapters may increase in rating. Fair warning will be given.

Disclaimers: Joss and Co. own all. I'm just borrowing them for the time being...

Summary: Willow and Tara have broken up, Tara has moved back to the dorms - she's living in the room that we first saw her in (its AU, and I liked her original room), and Spike is remotely still one of the "good" guys.



Notes: All character thoughts/dreams are in italics.





Mending Fences



Part 13





Willow stared at Tara, wondering if she had truly messed things up again, wondering how she was going to make Tara realize she was truly sorry.



“Tara,” started the redhead. “I’m sorry. I know that doesn’t cover or excuse what I said, how I reacted or anything…” Willow now was directing her eyes and head towards the ground. She was for once truly ashamed of how she had reacted. Tara turned and slowly walked over until she was standing inches from the redhead.



“Willow, look at me,” Tara said in a soft voice. As Willow sheepishly raised her head she was greeted by Tara’s soft eyes shining at her. “I know your sorry, and I can only imagine now tough this is for you. Sweetie, you have to remember that I love you, and so does everyone downstairs, we just want you safe.”



“I know, I think I have some apologies to make downstairs…” Willow said as she stood up only to find that Tara hadn’t moved and they were now centimeters apart. Slowly Tara leaned forward, brushing her lips against Willows, gently pulling away and then brushing against them again. Both girls felt the passion growing, Willow wrapped her arms around Tara and pulled her into a deep hug. Tara wrapped her arms around Willow, they stayed there holding onto one another for several minutes, neither wanting to part, but both knowing they had to.



“Come on, lets go finish up downstairs, sooner that is done, the sooner we can come back up here and spend some quality cuddle time. I love you Willow, and I’m not going anywhere.” Tara said slightly releasing her hold on the redhead.



“I love you too Tara,” Willow said as she released her hold on Tara, but managed to capture her hand and entwine their fingers together. They headed downstairs to join the others.



**********



As everyone heard Willow and Tara coming down the stairs they couldn’t help but stare at them. Nobody knew what had gone on up there, and they weren’t sure what kind of a mood to expect.



“Hi,” Willow said as they walked into the room.



“Hey Will, everything ok?” asked Xander.



“Yeah, I owe you all a big apology. I was way out of line before, I never should have exploded or acted the way I did. I know that it was because you all care and that this doesn’t just affect me, it affects all of us.” Started Willow as Tara closed in behind her girlfriend wrapping her arms around her and pulling her close for support.



“Its ok Willow, we know that it has to be hard on you,” said Buffy.



“No Buffy, that’s just it…it isn’t ok. I was out of line. So I just wanted to say I’m sorry and whatever you guys come up with is fine – we’ll get through this together.” As Willow finished Tara placed a soft kiss on her cheek.



“Well why don’t we go over what we’ve thought up and you can tell us how you both feel about it,” Buffy started taking charge of the situation.



“Ok,” Tara said as she and Willow found a spot to sit together on the couch next to Anya and Xander. Tara shot Anya a look of thanks for reminding her that she needed to speak up more.



Everyone gathered around the table as Buffy laid out the schedule. Tara would be with Willow a majority of the time. Buffy would be home during the day to help Tara and then when Dawn got home from school her and Willow would sit down together and Willow would help her with her homework. This would give Tara time to take care of anything she needed to. Xander and Anya would come over after they got done with work and everyone would have dinner together and hang out. Buffy was going to talk to Spike to make sure that he could keep patrolling for the time being. Once Giles arrived they would adjust the schedule and things as needed. After some discussion, everyone admitted to be exhausted after the emotional strain this was putting on them all. Everyone headed to their rooms while Anya and Xander made themselves comfy on the air mattress that Anya had brought over not wanting to spend another night on the couch.



**********



“Tara,” Willow said in a quiet voice. They had made their way up to the bedroom and were undressing and getting ready for bed.



“Hmm,”



“Its going to be ok right?”



“Of course it is sweetie, nothing is going to happen to my girl,” Tara said as she pulled Willow into a gentle kiss. As their lips touched they both felt the passion and need grown. Tara ran her hands along Willow’s shoulder and down her back to her bra. With a quick flick Tara undid Willow's bra, slipping it off the girls shoulders and dropping it to the floor. Their lips still fighting for dominance. Tara ran her hands along Willow’s body, feeling her soft skin under her fingers. Tara cupped Willow breasts in her hands, eliciting a moan from the redhead.



Willow’s tongue probed Tara’s lips seeking access. Tara finally relented and allowed her access, feeling Willow’s tongue massaging her own. Tara let out a soft throaty moan of enjoyment. Willow began to run her hands along Tara’s body, undoing her bra and dropping it to the floor next to her own. Willow moved her hands to cup Tara’s breasts. She kneaded the soft mounds, rolling Tara’s now erect nipples between her fingers.



Tara broke the kiss tilting her head back, the sensation of Willow’s hands kneading her breast was turning her on more than every before. Willow took the opportunity of Tara’s exposed neck to begin kissing and sucking on her pulse points. Tara upped the pressure of her play with Willows breasts as she slid her right leg forward placing it between Willows. Willow felt the pressure on her clit and moaned into Tara’s neck. Both girls needing the other. Tara pulled her head forward and captured Willow’s lips again. Moving her hands from Willow’s breasts and slid them down to the band of her panties, Tara hooked her fingers around them she slowly started edging them down until there was no resistance and they dropped to Willow’s feet. Willow stepped out of her panties gently kicking them to the side.



Willow took the opportunity of the slight distance between them to remove Tara’s panties with one hand, moving her other hand to the back of Tara’s neck and pulling her deeper into the kiss.



“Show me how much you love me,” whispered Tara into Willows lips. That was all the encouragement Willow needed, she led Tara over to the bed, never breaking the kiss. Breaking the kiss Tara climbed onto the bed and laid on her back, Willow slowly and seductively crawled up Tara’s body from the foot of the bed. Their eyes locked to the others. Gently, enticingly, allowing her body to rub against Tara placing one leg between Tara’s and one of Tara’s legs between hers. As Willow’s hips met Tara’s she thrust them forward, Tara’s hips jumped off the bed. Willow grinned at how strong the desire was between the two of them.



Leaning forward applying more pressure to Tara’s hips and beginning to rock into them Willow held herself up limiting the contact of their bodies. Tara longingly looked into Willow’s eyes and slowly, brought her tongue out and wetted her lips. Willow felt her breath catch as she watched Tara, not being able to take it much more, Willow leaned forward and captured Tara’s tongue in her mouth before Tara could retract it. Both girls groaned at the surge that went through their bodies. Tara reached down and cupped Willow’s ass in her hands as they continued to bump and grind together. Becoming lost in the fight for dominance between their lips and tongues, they both moved in sync together. Willow placed kisses along Tara’s jaw line and down her neck. Tara raised her head and began kissing Willow’s neck and shoulder, both of their breathing was becoming erratic. Both nearing the edge various “yes,” and “oh god’s” could be heard muffled into the others body.



“Oh…baby…come with me…” panted Willow as she neared the edge. Staring down into Tara’s eyes Willow felt Tara tense below her, they both began to grind their hips together faster, never breaking eye contact. Then feeling the rush of orgasm surge through their bodies they came together. Both panting heavily, Willow leaned down and placed several soft kisses on Tara’s lips before sliding off her and landing on her back. They lay their next to each other – one hand clasped to the other, never being apart for a moment. After several minutes their breathing became a bit less labored, both turning their head to bask in the beauty of the other.



“That was, um wow,” panted Willow still catching her breath.



“I love you,” panted Tara squeezing Willow’s hand.



“I love you too.”



Once their breathing had returned to normal they cuddled up together and drifted off to sleep. Both knowing that they were going to get through whatever Ethan had in store for them together.



**********



Morning came quickly for the group. Tara and Willow awoke entwined together, exchanging soft kisses and smiles. Tara got up, put on some clothes and grabbed her robe, Willow let out a whimper of discontent at losing her snuggle buddy, but she quickly followed suit and joined Tara is putting on clothes and heading downstairs. Once in the kitchen Tara started to make breakfast for the group, Willow sat and watched the graceful movements of her love. Every so often Tara and Willow exchanged soft kisses, neither accepting that they had to be apart for any length of time.



Buffy and Dawn showered and got dressed – smelling the food cooking both their stomachs chimed in telling them to head downstairs. Xander and Anya were awakened by the aroma of Tara’s cooking. Every headed into the kitchen to join the blonde and redhead.



“Morning,” Willow said as she smiled and waved to the famished group as they walked in.



“Mmmm, Tara is smells excellent in here,” commented Xander as he sat down at the counter.



“Thanks Xander. I figure the least I can do is keep everyone fed nicely while we all work through whatever it is that Ethan is up to.” Tara said as she finished making the last of the pancakes and put them and the sausage on the counter in front of the drooling hoards.



“Wow, not that I like the idea of someone I love being in trouble, but Tara I can definitely get used to this,” said Dawn.



“I’m going to second squirt on that and Willow kiss the chef for us,” laughed Buffy. Willow was more than happy to fill that request as she slid over and planted a sensual kiss on Tara’s lips and pulled her into a hug.



“Why don’t you ever kiss me like that,” Anya snipped as she smacked Xander on the shoulder.



“Ow, probably because you hit me like that,” said Xander in defense hoping not to get hit again, and as everyone in the room started to giggle.



“Anya, don’t be mad at Xander, I’m sure he’d have kissed you like that had you had a night like ours,” said Willow as Tara started to blush and buried her head into Willow’s shoulder. Willow whose back was still to the group wasn’t sure what made her say that, but she knew part of it had to do with the rivalry between her and Anya.



“Oh great, they get to have orgasms and we don’t. I’m going to find this Ethan guy and kick every square inch of his ass. This isn’t fair…why do they get to have orgasms and we don’t?” protested Anya.



“Thanks Will,” said Tara into Willow’s shoulder. “You may have had your last orgasm for a while too,” added the blonde. Willow let out a whimper of defeat, getting one up on Anya definitely wasn’t worth losing anything from Tara.



“Hello, teenager still in the room here people, can we get it out of the gutter and up onto the curb,” Buffy voiced as Dawn began to smile.



“Buffy really, its not like Tara and Willow are THAT quiet,” Dawn said somehow thinking this was going to help the situation. Willow and Tara both turned a new shade of burgundy, as the rest of the room started to laugh.



”Point taken, but still.”



“Ok, can we please get off our sex life,” Willow said turning around hoping to change the subject and walk out of the room at some point with her dignity intact.



“Geez, Willow. I never noticed how your face and neck turn the same shade of red when you blush. Oh and look so does Tara’s. Isn’t that cute – they match,” laughed Anya.



“Ok, well you guys eat, I’m going to shower,” Tara said trying to make a hasty exit. Willow grabbed her hand and started to leave with her before being stopped by Buffy.



“I think she can shower alone Will,” laughed the Slayer.



“Yeah, but if someone is going to have to baby-sit me when I take one anyway – this way we save time.”



“Um, er, ok, fine – just no hanky panky,” Buffy said defeated. Willow smirked and left surprised that it had worked.



“You think we should give them five or ten minutes and then start flushing toilets to chill the water for them?” joked Xander.



“Tempting, but no.” Buffy said wishing she had thought of that idea herself.



**********



Darkness encompassed the room as the lone figure stood there staring at pictures on a wall. Snapshots taken from different angles, in different places. Each one labeled carefully, placed with precision. The figure slowly walked along the wall, staring at each and every picture.



“Ripper may cherish each of his Scooby’s, but that is what makes him weak,” said Ethan with a laugh.



Two hooded figures walked into the room and bowed to him. One offered a scroll, the other awaited his turn with patience and fear. Ethan took the scroll opening it and grinning widely as he read it.



“Ah yes, soon, very soon we will be able to open the Hellmouth, enter the nether realm and bring into this world the great Jackal demon to wreck a little havoc on Sunnydale.”



“Master, what do you wish us to do?” said the second hooded figure.



“Let me think,” Ethan said as he started to pace back and forth glancing at the pictures. “Bring me Rippers little clerk. We’ll start with her. She isn’t much leverage, but a good place to start nonetheless.”



“As you wish sir,” they said and quickly exited the room. Ethan continued to pace, very pleased with himself.



“Soon Ripper, and you have no clue what is coming,” Ethan maniacally laughed.



**********



TBC…



:peace



~Branny

In my world there are people in chains, and we can ride them like ponies. ~ VampWillow in Dopplegangland

Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love...the clarity of hatred...and the ecstasy of grief.

SlayerTazz
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU) Feedback & Update

Postby kathy94 » Thu Sep 26, 2002 12:12 am

**runs over and pushes Ashley away and takes over hugging Branny** My turn!!



Oh yeah, that was some making up they did!!! :drool



The kitchen scene was funny!!! Anya and her orgasms!!!



Can't wait for more!!! :bounce :bounce







"Can you just be kissing me now?" Tara- Entropy

"She's my everything"
Willow-Tough Love

kathy94
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU) Feedback & Update

Postby MissQuirky » Thu Sep 26, 2002 12:17 am

Awww, Branny LOVED it!! Willow and Tara are all w/ the happy, makes me happy! :D Whatta a make-up seen :thud , definitely more than smoochies, me liked!! :grin



And yes takin showers together definitely saves time and water! Very good idea if they need to keep an eye on her on her 24/7! I think Tara in there w/ her would be very close watch! ;)



Ok Ethan is totally in need of an ass kickin!! :evil Nice to c what his big plan is and it will be a kick watchin him fail it, which he totally is, right?!?! I know u wouldn't let him get away w/ anything! But I do know there's angst ahead, so i think i'm ready 4 what yer gonna do! Hopefully!



Can't wait 4 more! :)

~Ashley~



Quote:
**runs over and pushes Ashley away and takes over hugging Branny** My turn!!


Hey now, I can share her! No need 4 pushin!! :grin

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

Edited by: MissQuirky  at: 9/25/02 11:25:13 pm
MissQuirky
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU) Feedback & Update

Postby kathy94 » Thu Sep 26, 2002 1:21 am

Quote:
Hey now, I can share her! No need 4 pushin!!:D




Share??? :hmm Sorry Ashley I don't really wanna share.











"Can you just be kissing me now?" Tara- Entropy

"She's my everything"
Willow-Tough Love

kathy94
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU) Feedback & Update

Postby mollyig » Thu Sep 26, 2002 2:50 am

Wonderful how Tara's confidence is growing. Willow needs her to be strong - nothing is going to happen to my girl - her conviction and repeated assurances that she's not leaving are necessary to her.



Loved Willow's reasoning for showering with Tara - can't argue with logic!

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

mollyig
 


Re: First Fic - Mending Fences (AU) Feedback

Postby barnabasvamp » Thu Sep 26, 2002 4:46 am

"OK kathy94", BV says as she taps her foot impatiently....

"I'm not much into the sharing part either, but I have been begging Branny for some W/T make up time and I finally got it"! :drool

Just waiting in line to give Branny my thank you properly ;)

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

barnabasvamp
 


THAT WAS FUNNY

Postby peggy of sunnydale » Thu Sep 26, 2002 7:23 am

it was so funny loved the interaction in the kitchen with willow bieng so bold with the sex talk and tara telling her to cool it in her own words,and the smoochie time was wonderfull you captured their essence perfectly i like youre style of writing and this story





thank you

peggy of sunnydale
 


Re: THAT WAS FUNNY

Postby Urn of Osiris » Thu Sep 26, 2002 8:28 am

Quote:
“Geez, Willow. I never noticed how your face and neck turn the same shade of red when you blush. Oh and look so does Tara’s. Isn’t that cute – they match,” laughed Anya.
LMAO, that was so funny. Wonderful kitchen scene. I just love the way Tara brings the gang together. mmmmm warms my heart.



Starts my day with a grin.

Oh Jackal headed god? Hmm intrigued I am......



Chow for now



Edited because with a name like Urn of Osiris I should be able to spell Jackal headed Anubis. Big Spaz!

Urn of Osiris
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— George Washington Carver

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Edited by: Urn of Osiris  at: 9/26/02 7:31:20 am
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Re: THAT WAS FUNNY

Postby Tiggrscorpio » Thu Sep 26, 2002 9:56 am

Great make up scene, Branny. As I told you in my e-mail yesterday, I love where this is leading up to. Keep going my friend. You've created a wonderful story here. I don't think I'll have a chance to talk to you before I leave in a few hours, cause I gotta disconnect the computer. Cynthia is gonna hook me up with her laptop while I'm in the hotel, so I'll let you know when I'm back online. Would like to stay ahead of the crowd with your excellent story. I'll be in touch soon! Love ya!

*****

She's my everything!

Tiggrscorpio
 


Re: THAT WAS FUNNY

Postby MissQuirky » Thu Sep 26, 2002 12:54 pm

Quote:
Share??? :hmm Sorry Ashley I don't really wanna share.


Hey Kathy, don't be a Branny hogger! :no



Quote:
Just waiting in line to give Branny my thank you properly ;)


BV u might not get the chance to w/ Kathy here in control of the Branny hugs. ;)



~Ashley~

Willow: We can come by between classes. Usually I use that time to copy over my class notes with a system of different colored pens. But it's been pointed out to me that that's, you know... insane.
Tara: I said quirky.

MissQuirky
 

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