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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby terra21 » Wed Feb 08, 2006 9:20 pm

Disclaimer: All BtVS characters belong to Joss Whedon, etc. I own nothing, please don't sue me.
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Rating: PG (for now)
Spoilers: None
Genre: Alternate Universe
Distribution: Ask first, thanks.
Summary: In post Civil War Alabama, Tara Maclay tries to retain her cotton farm by hiring two Confederate soldiers working their way back home.
Notes: I did research for this fiction. Yes, I did. I spent many hours on the Smithsonian website and several others perusing the Civil War section of my local bookstore. But, alas, I found a novel in the romance section, “Love Me Tonight” by Nan Ryan (copyright 1994) that aligned with the ideas and atmosphere I wanted to write about. I have adapted the basic storyline in this book to fit Cotton Fields. Therefore, this fiction is based on Ms. Ryan’s novel but has been adapted to capture the dynamic between our beloved Willow and Tara.


Chapter 3

Tara gave neither Will nor Xander time to reply. She left the crop bin with haste.

The soldiers stood dumbfounded looking at one another.

“Well, I suppose I won’t be going into the main house no time soon,” Xander chuckled, his wavy brown hair fell forward into his eyes as he picked up one of the boxes to move to the other bin. Will walked to the doorway in time to see Tara hike up her skirts and trot up the back steps, “me either.”

“So, you gonna tell her?” Xander asked.

“Tell her what?” Will questioned as he moved out of the doorway to let his cousin through.

The dark haired boy stopped and put down his box, “That you’re a confounded Yankee! What do you think I mean Willow? They’re gonna find out sooner or later that you’re a gal.”

The redhead’s eyes grew wide, “Shhhh, somebody might hear.” She stuck her head out the door and looked both ways to make sure nobody was around then swooped back in, “The Navy never found out, what makes you think Miss Maclay will?”

“Look, the war’s over Willow. You don’t hafta cover it up any more.” Xander reasoned as he put his hands on his cousin’s shoulders.

Willow looked him in the eyes, “It’s too late, they already think I’m a man,” the redhead began.

“Boy.” Xander corrected and popped Willow in the back of the head playfully.

The girl rolled her eyes, “The point is that if they find out that I’m a girl then they might think I can’t pull my weight in the fields. Plus they’ll think I’m a liar, then we’ll get fired. Therefore, we make no money and we don’t get home and you don’t get to marry Anya and it’ll all be my fault.”

“Breathe.”

Willow inhaled deeply, “I just don’t want Miss Maclay to think I’m bad person for posing as a man before she even knows why I joined the military.”

Xander consolingly patted his cousin on the back, “Fine, we won’t say anything then.” He returned to cleaning out the bin and thought about the day he turned 18, the day he was drafted. When Willow woke him that particular morning, she had lopped off almost all of her hair. She proceeded to take some clothes from his closet and went with him to join. There wasn’t much he could do, when that little redhead got something in her mind, she could be as stubborn as a mule. Furthermore, rebel numbers were dwindling fast and the recruiters didn’t put much research into the volunteers as long as they were ready to fight. Xander vividly remembered Willow claiming she was doing it for the adventure, but she finally admitted to him in their last battle the real reason she signed up. It was to protect him.

Willow ruminated on her decision too as they cleaned out their new bedroom. She really didn’t regard joining the military as much of a sacrifice. She had nothing but her southern aristocratic parents at home. Not that she didn’t love them, she just wasn’t about to let her best friend and cousin die in this silly war. Moreover Xander had Anya, and they were supposed to be married as soon as he returned from combat. Willow felt she had no other choice. Her cousin was special to her and he had always needed her to look after him.

So, for the past two years Willow Rosenberg disguised herself as a man in the Confederate Navy to make sure Xander returned safely home to marry Anya.


~


Tara heard the jingle of the dinner triangle from Donnie’s old room upstairs signaling that breakfast was being served. She removed the patchwork quilt her mother had sewn from the four poster bed and carefully folded it up before moving to the window to watch the soldiers exit the barn. The boys had now shed their overcoats and had the sleeves rolled up on their white uniform shirts. Tara took one look at the wool trousers they wore and made a mental note to go through her father and brother’s unused clothing. It was simply to hot for them to continue to wear those pants. As she looked down at the two approaching the house, she tried to visually size them. Xander was closely proportionate to Donnie, but she would definitely need to taper any of the garments to fit the more slender Will.

The blonde let her eyes rest on the redhead as he walked across the high uncut grass. There was something about him, something in those emerald green eyes that she wanted to get to know. Her gaze moved up his lean legs to his trim waist, then on to his slight shoulders. She had never been attracted to anyone before, she had never given a man a second thought, until now.

Of course, Tara had many men who had tried to court her, but she had no interest. Her best friend, Buffy Anne, told her that she was going to be an old maid if she kept turning down all the suitors that were trying to gain her attention. Tara wasn’t quite as outgoing as her friend, and although Buffy Anne had tried to fix her up many times, the shy blonde would always refuse.

Now, Buffy Anne on the other hand had courted half of Butler County trying to get a proposal out of one Riley Finn. The good Sheriff Finn held fast to his old fashioned ways and had tamed Buffy Anne, somewhat. He was satisfied that he at least had talked her into dating only him.

Absorbed in counting the days until Buffy Anne returned from her cousins house in Atlanta, Tara was caught off guard when Will noticed her standing in the window. She locked eyes with the redhead. Will held the stare for as long as Tara allowed before stepping away to catch her breath. Although her heart raced as she stood clutching the quilt to her bosom, she did not regret the inappropriate stare. Tara quickly busied herself by putting the coverlet in the cedar chest at the foot of the bed, then stripping the sheets from the mattress, all the while trying to forget about the green eyed stranger she had employed.

It was going to be a long summer for Tara Maclay.

TBC
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby sacinema » Thu Feb 09, 2006 2:40 am

Hey, you are back :bounce :bounce :bounce. Thanks. I'm sorry for never leaving feedback before. But I always looked for an update. Crossdressing and history - I so love stories about that. And also the Gone with the wind touch. You get the time very well - I think. Even without me knowing the south oder the Civil War times. You make it so easy to dive into the story and the time.

Loved how you described everything and also the dialogue. Tara as the shy spitfire. Wow. And I definitly understand why she is so attracted to young Will. Hey this is Willow crossdressing. Must be gorgeous.

Please go on soon. But I will wait patently because it must be hard writing about the heat in midwinter season.
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby tarebear » Thu Feb 09, 2006 5:40 am

yey! the long awaited continuation is here! i've read the first chapters over at the Looking Glass and i've been interested ever since...

tara has a crush on the redhead :bounce :bounce :bounce how will she react when she finds the truth though? will she find out before willow gets the guts to tell her? oh definitely something to look forward to!

willow is soo sweet... trying to protect xander to make sure he comes home safe to anya... aaawww!

so buffy anne will make an appearance soon? can't wait to find out what sort of havoc she will play between our girls... err girl and boy hehe... will she still insist on fixing tara up with some guy or will she see tara's attraction to will[ow] and will therefore take it upon herself to play cupid? oohh! can't wait!

i'm really glad you had time to go back to this story! i love it!
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby willowtree114 » Thu Feb 09, 2006 10:34 am

i first spotted this story on through the looking-glass and i just had to come here a tell u how much i love the story and can't wait to read more.
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby caz » Thu Feb 09, 2006 10:49 am

Pleased to see an update on this one. Interesting times ahead - I think!

Update soon please!

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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby sam7777 » Thu Feb 09, 2006 11:17 am

Great update! Now we know why Willow is in disguise. Love the details with the quilts and clothing. it's like being there. Thanks.
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby FineyMcFine » Thu Feb 09, 2006 12:11 pm

Yay terra! Bad me, I have been reading Cotton Fields since the beginning but had never left feedback. Spank me later, okay? This update is great - we know why Willow is in disguise, and we see the attraction between Tara and Willow. I am a sucker for someone-in-disguise fics, as well as magnetic-love-that-can't-be-denied fics. So yay for the update, and I can't wait for the next installment!
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby watty » Thu Feb 09, 2006 5:21 pm

Hey tk (guess where that came from, heehee), great update. Yes genteel. Also kindly and full of charm. Kinda hard to reconcile with boobiesboobiesboobies. :-D

Nice reveal about Willow and Xander, very moving with W joining the navy to protect her cousin. Sounds like X will do the same thing for her, I think those two always have this close bond and it's great to see it in this fic. W has a good reason for continuing the disguise, and yay! for more subterfuge. It'll be *very* interesting to see if T spots it first, or if W makes an indiscretion. Good story potential. LOL at using Buffy's full name, gives her a southern belle feel.

Although her heart raced as she stood clutching the quilt to her bosom, she did not regret the inappropriate stare.

ooooo, attraction.

I know you're busy, so I'm very appreciative of the time you've taken out to post this update. Keep up the good work, buddy.
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby AlysonGoddess » Fri Feb 10, 2006 12:22 pm

whew definitly liking this story so far! haha willow is pretending to be a boy and tara really thinks she is haha thats awesome. plz update soon!
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby Artemis » Mon Feb 13, 2006 7:54 am

Welcome back fiesty belle Tara! :x

And more details on the Willow/Will situation - it's good to know that Willow is indeed Willow, and has the correct Willowy bits, for Tara's perusal later on :D And wow, there was some serious staring going on there! Sparks a-flying, no doubt about it. And I can totally see Willow joining up to keep watch on Xander - I'm sure 'resolve face' was used.

I liked 'Buffy Anne' too - interesting background to Tara and her friend, and also I just like how you used the canon names and came up with a very authentic-sounding Southern belle name. It's strange how easily the name 'Buffy' seems to fit in.
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby Nika » Mon Feb 20, 2006 9:16 pm

Great fic. I just loooove period pieces like this one. I hope you'll update soon.

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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby sinkinghearts » Mon Feb 27, 2006 5:55 am

still waiting for updates... :impatient :lol
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Re: Cotton Fields

Postby PancakesinBellies » Fri Jun 16, 2006 11:17 am

Update soon? Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease? *begs*

Am hooked. Have enjoyed your other stories to date. Now I NEED an update to this one. I really like the 'Willow in disguise' aspect that will need to be dealt with. And soon. So they can make with the :wtkiss . ;-)
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