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Re: The Edge of Silence- Chap 6g - The Things I Cannot See

Postby xita » Mon Nov 04, 2002 9:10 pm

Tara's so wonderful, I love the way she didn't hesitate to state clearly that she had a girlfriend :) And how she rejected that girl but made it easier by making sure she wasn't lonely at the dance. Nice lesbians!

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Re: The Edge of Silence- Chap 6g - The Things I Cannot See

Postby darkmagicwillow » Mon Nov 04, 2002 9:19 pm

I like seeing Jo's first nervous steps to explore her orientation; she's more likable here than she's been in a while, but due to conservation of suspicion (an important physics principle), suspicious of Danielle...maye it was just her interest in Tara, but something didn't feel right about her.

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"Omnia mutantur, nihil interit. -- "Everything changes, but nothing is truly lost."

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Re: The Edge of Silence- Chap 6g - The Things I Cannot See

Postby Puff » Mon Nov 04, 2002 9:57 pm

Hey Great update Triscuit. I liked Liz handing out necklaces with crosses for everyone to take and that other woman who walked away from Jo is probably of the cold blooded variety :D I loved how Tara subtely brought up having a gf but still wants to let the other girl down gently. Thanks for giving us so many new characters to get involved in and care about :)



You know, it's a real deal relationship and that's why people can relate
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Re: The Edge of Silence- Chap 6g - The Things I Cannot See

Postby LeatherQueen » Mon Nov 04, 2002 10:01 pm

:grin Great update, Mel! LOVED the Jo bits. Heh. It was great seeing the others at the dance wanting to loosen her up and help her at her first dance.



And Tara was great... letting the other girl down nicely, but making it obvious that she had a girlfriend. :)



And the necklace bit was wonderful! Love the bits about the townies.



Oh... and the Canadian remarks were hilarious! :lol



Just lovely.





"We've got the only librarian who can rip off your arm with his leg. People respect that." - Terry Pratchett

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Re: FIC: The Edge of Silence

Postby LostSoul » Mon Nov 04, 2002 10:05 pm

Triscuit - Thanks for the update!



It seemed kind of transitional, not a ton going on. But, it was important to move the story along.



The dance did make Jo more likeable i think.



I want more Willow though :)



I can't wait for the next update.



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RE: Edge of Silence

Postby tiredsoul » Tue Nov 05, 2002 1:06 am

This was a nice transitional update though I can't help but wonder about where the Jonathan effect is going to come in. I always got to think ahead :p It's a curse.



I like how you portrayed Jo here. She's still nervous of course but at least she talked to a couple nice women before getting rejected by the vamp. BTW, that Parker sure got around a lot :)



And isn't Tara just the sweetest thing? She's so concerned about everyone else. Not many like her around.



I'm still able to avoid your new addiction you mentioned ... although it's getting harder to resist :eek



--celia



Edited to add: Okay ... resistance was futile.

Edited by: tiredsoul at: 11/5/02 2:26:05 pm
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Re: RE: Edge of Silence

Postby mollyig » Tue Nov 05, 2002 5:27 am

Jo using Tara as a role model - Shy Tara had come here - that was nice. Very clever of Liz to hand out crosses to all in attendance. You never know who may be lurking!



Typical Tara, so caring. First she helps out Jo, and now she takes Danielle under her wing too.

Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

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Re: RE: Edge of Silence

Postby barnabasvamp » Tue Nov 05, 2002 7:40 am

Poor Jo...*wishy washy me- first I didn't trust her and now I feel sorry for her :) * The first time for that kind of thing is always scary. However she does have Tara as a support person and we all know how caring Tara is.

*Sigh* everyone wants Tara(poor Danielle), even us! ;)

Great update

BV

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

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Re: RE: Edge of Silence

Postby Insanity » Tue Nov 05, 2002 1:59 pm

uuuhhh yeah.. I remember my first dance *gg*

I was so excited and nervous, and there were all these women...feeling (mostly?) the same way I do. uh-uh....but it was really worth it, to be a little scared *g*



Lovely update....Everybody loves Tara...



Looking forward for the next update



Insanity

"Nobody messes with my girl!" Tara, Bargaining

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Re: RE: Edge of Silence

Postby jdcioffi » Tue Nov 05, 2002 2:33 pm

I'm not sure how long this took, but I just started reading this ... from page one (actually, from the pre-story) ... I'm thinking it was a few days to get here.



And while I LOVE this story -- I'm so sad that I've caught up. I enjoyed knowing there was more ... lol ... so ... more soon?



JD

"Was there a voice unkind in the back of your mind saying, "maybe..." (Jeff Buckley - The Last Goodbye)

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Re: RE: Edge of Silence

Postby tkheaven » Tue Nov 05, 2002 2:47 pm

o/~ Go Jo, Go Jo, GO GO GO Jo!...~/o

ok, umm...sorry...continue :p

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"I've become really protective of her. I want to make sure if Tara comes back, it's for good reason." -Amber Benson

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Re: FIC: The Edge of Silence

Postby singgirl » Tue Nov 05, 2002 3:34 pm

Oooh, I see Jo has some takers. Good show. :) can't wait for the next update!

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Re: FIC: The Edge of Silence

Postby Vampivy » Tue Nov 05, 2002 7:02 pm

Oh Triscuit. I so very much agree with you on Tara’s “Yours” comment and the Superstar scene you mentioned. Absolutely beautiful.



I have to admit I am warming up to Jo. She’s actually starting to grow on me. I’m so glad to see that she has found something other than our girls to focus on. Thus giving them a little more breathing room. I can’t wait to see her reactions as the night progresses. Poor girl is so nervous, but it’s kind of funny. Danielle, Tara…Hmmm…Can’t wait to see what happens next.



More Please…. Thanx



Patty



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Re: FIC: The Edge of Silence

Postby TromDeGrey » Tue Nov 05, 2002 7:27 pm

I just so love this fic. All the little scenes that we couldn't see but get to enjoy now. *sigh* I'm glad Jo is finally losing the creepy stalker feel. :lol And Tara is just too sweet. But we all knew that, eh? Can't wait for more!







The ultimate lesson all of us have to learn is unconditional love,which includes not only others but ourselves as well." -Elizabeth Kubler-Ross



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Re: FIC: The Edge of Silence

Postby molsongrrrl » Tue Nov 05, 2002 9:40 pm

I just love this story! waiting (impatiently) for more!







"Who do you have to blow to get some pussy around here, you know? Enough is enough!" from "Kissing Jessica Stein"









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Re: FIC: The Edge of Silence

Postby The Big I T » Tue Nov 05, 2002 10:09 pm

Hey Mel -



This Sarah person? I'm getting a weird vamp-like vibe from her...I'm just hoping she keeps her distance from Tara.



Oh okay...and I hope she steers clear of Jo, too, cuz I have to admit, she is beginning to grow on me. Maybe just a little. Which perhaps has more to do with the fact that Tara seems to be inclined to give her the benefit of the doubt, not to mention loads of patience and some helpful guidance. If she's okay with Tara, I guess she's okay with me. Gotta trust Tara's instincts.



Still, I've got my concerns about that Sarah...weird, bad vibe I'm telling ya...



And as for Danielle? Gotta feel for her. But also gotta love the way Tara is always so careful and gentle with others' feelings. She really did handle that ill-advised pass rather wonderfully.



And hey, here I am going on and on about Tara again. :) Although I have to admit I am anxious for her and Willow to finish up with their separate plans and be together again. I am loving the timeframe of this chapter, though, since Superstar is one of my favorites -- just for the intimacy and tenderness and pure adoration that graces just about every look and touch that passes between the girls in that ep. *sigh*



Keep it comin' Mel. You are writing a fabulously insightful fic here. And I am loving it. Absolutely.



********



”How ‘bout them Broncos …” – some guy, saying something useful, in The Initiative

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hey

Postby Sleek » Wed Nov 06, 2002 6:41 pm

Triscuit,



Just wanted you to know how much I am enjoying this fic. It took me several days to read through your earlier updates, reading portions during work (which left me very much delightfully distracted), and I'm glad to have reached this part and knowing there is still more to come.



A lot of writers here are good, with different expertise. I think you have struck the balance with molten mush, erotic love scenes and the excellent characterizations (your Anya is very much Anya) you've captured each characters motivations and issues very well.



Keep writing. It is a joy to read your work.



Much appreciation,



:clap Sleek

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Re: Update

Postby MadeinNZ » Thu Nov 07, 2002 3:23 am

Ah yes - the first 'outing' jitters. I remember them well. Mostly cause it was only a couple of months ago. You described the nervousness wonderfully. I have to give a shout out for Mei-Ling too. What a sweetie.



I also enjoyed the way you took a familiar experience and gave it a Sunnydale twist (crosses, vampires). And how, although its following the lines of season four, this story has taken on a life of its own.



I can't stop guessing who will be Jo's love interest. Don't leave us hanging too long.

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Re: Update

Postby willove1 » Thu Nov 07, 2002 8:07 am

I finally caught up with this wonderful fanfic, it's a masterpiece!!Thank you.

I totally can understand Willow ;sometimes those three small words (well,two small words in my language-ti amo-) won't come out even if they are screaming in your heart and in your mind.Go Willow!!!

Oh..I like Jo more now .What about Jo and Danielle together ?

So, thanks again and can I ask for more?

Ciao

Carmen

Willow: I don't know what to do.I want to know .But I don't



Tara: Do what makes you h-happy

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Feedback Chap 6g - The Edge of Silence

Postby Triscuit7 » Fri Nov 08, 2002 2:57 pm

Hey Kittens – I’m still working on the update, but it should be posted by evening.



xita

Hi sweetie. Yeah, she didn’t want to lead Danielle on, but the way she quashed Danielle was nice, wasn’t it? Thanks.



Darkmagicwillow

Hey. Jo is such an awkward girl, moreso socially than physically I think; I am glad you’re finding her more likeable. I really liked this
Quote:
conservation of suspicion (an important physics principle)
Hehe. Thanks for reading.



Puff

Hi there. Um, Sarah … is an interesting piece of work and well, you’re right, of course. So let’s see we have a student handbook “How to Survive UCSunnydale” and crosses at a social event. Boy, am I glad that the “townies” are looking at for the students. :grin Thanks again.



LeatherQueen

Hi sweetie. I knew my resident Jo fan would love this update, but it’s gonna get better – I promise. And yeah, Tara is easy to love. Thanks sweetie.



LostSoul

Yep that part was very transitional. Glad everyone is coming around to my way of thinking concerning Jo. Thanks.



tiredsoul

Hi Celia. Ooooh, so you want more Jonathan effect – patience. :) Jo has met some nice folks and avoided the evil undead. As for “chat” – come over to the dark side, we’re waiting for you : -->>: Thanks.



mollyig

Hey. I’m starting to repeat myself but, yeah, Tara is a sweetie. Truly a superb role model. Thanks again.



barnabasvamp

Hi. Oh, I’m so glad to have converted another Kitten to the Jo-side. I remember my first dance; that was intensely scary. Thanks for reading.



Insanity

Hey. First dance. First softball game. First trip to the bar. It’s possible to be nostalgic after the fact, during I just wanted to hide in a corner :) Thanks.



jdcioffi

Hi there. So you’ve read from the River on up to here, wow. I’m glad you’re enjoying and well there will be more for quite some time to go. Thanks for reading.



tkheaven

Hey. Well … yeah, watch Jo go. HeHe. Thanks.



sing girl

Hi. Jo has some takers – yep. I wonder who will win out in the end? :hmm Thanks again.



Vampivy

Hey Patty. Oh, another Tara-is-beautiful moment: when she’s welcoming Willow after Buffy ditches her at the Bronze (the night of the doll’s eye crystal). Thanks.



TromDeGrey

Hi. I’m glad you’re still enjoying this fic. There is so much to extrapolate in the W/T relationship in S4. Thanks for reading.



molson grrrl

Hey there. Glad you’re reading. There should be more shortly. Thanks again.



The Big I T

Hi sweetie. Uh, you’re probably right about Sarah, but rest assured she’s not going near Tara. I love her too. Superstar is fun to play with although I must admit that it’s not one of my fave eps and that’s mostly due to the scenes at the Bronze (and for one other reason, but later for that). I don’t like swing or jazz or blues, so that whole bit just makes me grit my teeth. The actual W/T moments are beautiful ones. Glad you’re enjoying. Thanks.



Sleek

Hi. Thanks :blush . I feel that if distracted is a good thing, then delightfully distracted must be better. Thanks for reading.



MadeinNZ

Hey Nicky. I remember the first time jitters and it’s been years ago. I can get nervous just thinking about it :eek Jo – never fear. I won’t leave her (and the Kittens) hanging too long. Thanks sweetie.



willove1

Hi. Yes, those three words are the hardest to say in any language esp. when you’ve been hurt before. As for who will be Jo’s gf? :grin Thanks again for reading.



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I brought marshmallows!

Edited by: Triscuit7 at: 11/8/02 12:58:35 pm
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The Edge of Silence - Chap 6h: The Things I Cannot See

Postby Triscuit7 » Fri Nov 08, 2002 6:13 pm

Hey Kittens - Here is the promised update.



Rating: PG-13 to R



No health or angst warnings in effect.

Violence rating - about a 7 on a scale of 1-10



Hope you all have fun.



****



The beat of the music that had been muted from outside the room now pulsed and throbbed around them as they stood just inside the doorway, letting their eyes adjust to the lower lighting.



“Tara! It’s been such a long time! How are you?” The woman at the door abandoned her post and came around for a proper greeting.



She smiled and surrendered herself to a hug. “Hi Liz. I’m f-fine.”



“So where have you been?” Liz asked, not releasing her arms.



“Um, W-Wicca group, mostly. There always s-seems to be a conflict between that and this. Oh – Liz, I w-want you to meet Danielle. She’s been here a few times.” Tara introduced the two women.



“I remember.” Liz’s face had a peculiarly pained and guilty look on it. “I’m sorry, but I just ….”



“It’s done. I’m a fool, just like you said.” Danielle’s voice was harsh.



“But if you want to talk …?” Liz offered in a soft voice.



“Talking won’t fix it. Nothing can.” Danielle glanced at Tara. “I’m going to get a soda.”



Tara considered following her, but glanced Liz’s way when she heard the woman sigh deeply.



“If only ….”



“If only wh-what, Liz?”



“Nothing.” Liz frowned in the direction Danielle had gone, then turned back to her, her smile back. “You look good.”



Tara ducked her head.



“So … you ARE seeing someone,” Liz chuckled.



She met the other woman’s eyes and nodded emphatically. “Yes. She’s really … great.” She felt her love for Willow explode through her body.



Liz smiled. “So when are the two of you going to come to a meeting or a dance?”



“I d-don’t know – I’ll have to see.” She answered Liz’s smile with one of her own. Suddenly she shivered. Turning around, she saw a woman in black looking her over slowly and very obviously as they walked up.



“Sarah! No. Wait.” Danielle caught up with them.



They stopped, one glaring in anger, the other – the one in black – smiling cruelly. That one was the one who spoke in a low voice. “Well, well.”



“I’m …. You don’t need her .…” Danielle floundered.



“I don’t need you, little girl. I told you that the last time. I had you and, well, … you’re nothing.” She laughed mockingly and rested her hand lightly on the arm of the other girl. “This, though, I expect to enjoy … quite a lot. I did the first time.” She guided her companion out of the room.



“No. I ….” Danielle’s voice was a whisper, but she didn’t follow after them.



“D-Danielle, um, ….” Tara had to wonder – What exactly could she say?



The brown-haired girl barely looked at her before staring angrily at Liz, eyes brimming with tears. “Are you going to lecture me again?” Not giving her a chance to reply, she whirled and stormed off.



“No.” Liz shook her head, and caught Tara’s arm when she tried to follow. “Don’t. Just give her some space.” She waited until Tara finally nodded and dropped her hand. “I am going to get that bitch banned from here, so help me God.” She walked back to her post.



“Wh-Who was that?” Tara tried to find Danielle in the crowd.



“Trouble. New woman, Sarah, and her girl of the evening, a transfer student named Kat,” Liz replied with a sigh, resting her elbows on the table. “It didn’t used to bother me. One night stands, I mean. I must be getting old. This is the semester’s third dance, and Kat’s her fourth girl – that I know of. Her second time with Kat, I think. Pardon the crudeness, but she’s very much a member of the ‘fuck’em and leave’em’school.” Liz thought a moment, “Afterwards, well, she’s incredibly rude to her previous ‘date’ as you just saw. I think your friend Danielle was her second girl. And in spite of that scene just now, she still got a bit better treatment than the first one. Security found that one sobbing in an alley, but she wouldn’t say boo when questioned. I tried to talk with Danielle at the last dance, and you can see how well that went. She did something stupid, and on top of being dumped hard, was embarrassed. Tonight just makes that part worse.” Liz shrugged.



“Hmm … and being r-rejected so p-publicly probably makes it hurt even more.”



“Yeah,” Liz agreed. “You don’t know her well?”



Tara shook her head. “No, sh-she’s just in my Wicca group. First time w-we really spoke was tonight.”



“Okay, I’ll keep an eye on her. She’s been to the meetings, so I do have some info.” Liz nodded, plans clearly forming in her head.



Tara nodded, somewhat reassured, and looked away from Liz, searching the crowd for her next-door neighbor.



“Oh, your Jo’s here. Mei-Ling and her posse are making sure she has a good time, just like you asked. She’s a nice girl. Two left feet, but a nice girl.” Liz snickered, her good humor apparently returning.



“I take it you danced with her?” Tara asked with a grin.



“Oh, yeah.” Liz’s expression was rueful. “We’ve been keeping her to the medium to fast dances, which saved my feet a bit. Tori had the best idea, I think.”



“She w-wore her boots?” Tara’s eyes crinkled at the memory.



“Uh-huh.”



“I should go f-find her. Let her know I’m here. See you.” She nodded at Liz as she headed off.



“Later.”



Tara eeled her way towards the refreshments and smiled. The chips and pretzels were long gone, of course. She grabbed a bottle of water and pulled out her apple. Munching on it, she surveyed the crowd, finally spotting her neighbor dancing with Mei-Ling’s girlfriend, Tracy. She watched as Tracy adroitly steered Jo around the dance floor, dodging occasionally as Jo’s feet came down too close to hers. She deposited the core in the trash and licked the juice from her fingers.



“You should be careful doing that in public, especially in this crowd.” Tori’s voice came from her left.



Tara turned towards her, feeling her face heat, but refused to duck her head. “Hey, sweetie.” She accepted a quick hug.



“It’s been quite a while. The gossip I hear true? You’ve got a girlfriend? What’s her name, what does she look like, and why isn’t she here? Spill.” Tori crossed her arms and tapped her foot.



“Her n-name is Willow, she has red hair and green eyes, and she h-had a prior commitment t-tonight.” Tara smiled, aware that she was glowing with pleasure from just talking about Willow.



“Oh, you sweet thing. You’re head over heels!” Without asking, Tori snatched her bag from her shoulder and dropped it behind the refreshment table. “Sally, watch that, okay? C’mon. I get a dance, ’cause I told you this would happen.”



Tara laughed but let herself be led out among the dancers. The song had just changed, and was a lot slower, but Tori ignored convention as usual, and they danced apart or just touching hands while other dancers snuggled close. She’d forgotten how much fun it could be to dance with the short-haired woman.



“Okay, my turn,” Mei-Ling interrupted as the song ended. Tori ceded her immediately and the Asian woman spun her around to the beat of a faster song. “I’ve missed my favorite dance partner.”



Tara chuckled. “Your f-favorite after Tracy and Tori and Liz and any other available w-woman.”



“Not true.” Mei-Ling’s eyes sparkled. “So when do we meet her?”



“You just w-want to dance with her.”



“Of course I do. When?” Mei-Ling persisted.



“The next d-dance maybe?” Tara offered.



“Okay. You write it on your calendar. March 25. That’s the Saturday after your Wiccan thing. I made sure there was no conflict for that dance, even though having the full moon for the walk home would have been romantic.”



“I’ll t-try. She m-may not w-want to,” Tara hedged.



“Then you tell her she has a choice. She comes to the dance or the dance comes to her. Okay?”



Tara smiled in reply. Arguing with Mei-Ling was futile, but sometimes changing the subject worked. “So, h-how is my neighbor?”



Mei-Ling laughed. “Two left feet. And yes, I think you’ll get a toaster oven for her. Now pay attention, this is a new move. You learn it from me and you can teach it to your girlfriend at the end of the month, okay?”



Tara sighed in resignation and nodded.



****



Sometimes it was so easy. Sarah pulled Kat into the shadows for another series of kisses and some heavy petting.



“Ohhhh, Sarah, please. Let’s just go back to my room,” Kat begged.



She smiled, pleased by the girl’s eagerness. Sometimes she would go with them, when she was in the mood to play. That was fun – taking a girl repeatedly over the course of a weekend. But Kat would never be a toy, not with her past history with her – not with how they’d spent the hours after the Valentine’s dance. Kat was merely dinner.



She’d been surprised to see her most recent toy at tonight’s dance. The stricken look on the girl’s face when she’d seen her with Kat had been … delicious. That one had been quite enjoyable.



Her hands roamed over Kat’s body as she tongued her mouth. She did try not to take the same girl twice, but tonight it was this one for a second time or risk not having one at all. Her first choice turned out to have a date for the night. The second one – she would have been perfect. New, knowing no one at all, but she’d been wearing a cross. She snarled inwardly at the memory of it.



So she resorted to taking this silly girl a second time, just so she could eat. She pressed the girl up against the wall and kissed her thoroughly, running her hands up under the cat sweatshirt as she did so.



“But you like that, don’t you? You want it.”



“Yessss,” the girl hissed, partly in pleasure and partly due to the coldness of her hands. She moaned as Sarah played with her nipples.



“I’m gonna do you, kitty-Kat. Going to do you here, just like I did before.”



Sarah heard the woman whimper and dropped her mouth to Kat’s neck, kissing it until she found one of the scars she’d left the first time. Morphing, she bit hard and was rewarded by the girl’s arms pulling her close. Here was as good a place as any. She pressed her leg against the girl’s crotch and let her ride it as she fed and bit and fed again.



She was a careful feeder. She’d take what she needed and a little bit more to incapacitate the girl. The weather was warm enough in Southern California that there was never a risk of hypothermia when she left them. So Kat would wake up sometime tomorrow, bruised and well-used. And that would be it. There would not be a third time with this one even if she had to go hungry.



She heard the noise behind her and was ducking even as she shoved her victim away. The clawed hand that would have decapitated her missed completely.



Well, it missed her, at least.



It slammed full force into Kat’s face and neck as Sarah scrambled hastily out of the monster’s way. She hadn’t lived for over a century by getting between something and its dinner.



She licked Kat’s blood from her arm as she watched the monster from the shadows. Damn, she’d have to leave Sunnydale now. Too many people had seen the girl leave with her. The monster was very quick, and very thorough. She doubted it would leave much, but it wasn’t likely that it would eat the girl’s wallet. Cash would make leaving easier, and a new ID would be useful too. She crouched down to wait, patient.



****



“H-Having fun?”



Jo glanced at Tara, who had finally escaped from the dance floor and retrieved her bag. Flushed, happy – no, radiant was a better word – Tara was almost bouncing as she stood beside her.



“Yeah, I am,” she replied. “There’s no pressure, just fun.”



“Uh-huh.” Tara nodded in agreement. “So, h-have you asked anyone to dance?”



“No, not yet.”



“See anyone you m-might like to ask?” Tara hinted, a lopsided grin tugging at her lips.



“Well, maybe a few. Like, uh, her.” Jo pointed towards a tallish brunette.



“Oh.” Tara’s brow furrowed momentarily and then her grin widened. “She’s in my W-Wicca group. Her name is Danielle. You should go ask her.”



“You think so? What if she turns me down?”



“Relax. You w-won’t know unless you ask.” Tara nudged her with an elbow.



“I guess you’re right.” She started off, then turned back. “Should I tell her I can’t dance very well?”



“Go. Relax.” Tara waved her in Danielle’s direction.



Jo tried to walk smoothly over to the brown-haired woman and somehow only tripped once.



“Hey.” She found herself gazing into a pair of brown eyes. “Uh, I was, uh, wondering if you’d like to dance?”



“Why?” There was an edge of anger and a fair amount of hurt in the soft voice. “Did Tara send you over?”



“Uh, no and yes. I wanted to come over, and she said I should?” Jo ended the statement as a question because now she really wasn’t certain that she should have.



“Oh. Why?”



“Why what?” Jo was getting a little annoyed. This was like any number of conversations she’d had this week with Willow – all snarky, all the time. Maybe she liked snarky women – ooh, now that was a scary thought. She took a deep breath. “Look, let’s start over.” She paused. “Hi, my name is Jo. I think you’re cute and I want to dance with you.” She held out her hand.



“Oh.” The brown eyes glanced down at her hand. After a moment, she reached out and took it. “My name is Danielle.”



“Dani or just Danielle?” Jo cautiously led her to the dance floor.



“Mostly Danielle.”



Jo tried to find the beat. “Uh, I should warn you, “Mostly Danielle”, that I’m not very good at this. You might want to watch your feet.”



Her partner smiled slightly. “Oh, you can call me Dani, if you want. That’s better than “Mostly Danielle” – and I think you’re doing fine.”



“That’s ’cause you haven’t had me dance on your feet yet.” Again the smile, which Jo was finding more and more attractive. She should do that more often, she thought. The music trailed off into something much slower and she came to a stop.



Brown eyes held hers. “Stay?”



“Uh, I haven’t danced slow yet,” Jo apologized.



“Stay. I’ll show you how.” A hand reached for hers.



Soft, warm, it pulled her into an embrace that was even softer. Jo felt her heart climb up into her throat as Dani positioned their hands, adjusting their embrace. It felt … wonderful.



“Jo, breathing helps.”



****



Tara stood near the doorway, watching her neighbor slow dance with a woman for the very first time. Willow. She closed her eyes and imagined how it would be to sway that way with Willow.



“Yep, you just got yourself a toaster oven,” Liz commented, grinning broadly. “And you should go to your girlfriend. I’ll keep an eye on her. On both of them.”



She laughed softly. “Well, I really sh-should go.”



“Be careful, okay?” Liz admonished.



Tara nodded and left. She glanced at her watch. Almost midnight. It might be too late to call Willow. She bit her lip as she thought about it; maybe it wouldn’t be if she hurried. She ran up the steps two at a time.



She left Collins with a group of students, but quickly outpaced them. She ran-walked the entire distance to her dorm. Dashing down the hall, she arrived at her room out of breath.



She swung the door open and stopped in her tracks.



“Willow!”



“Uh – Surprise?” Her lover was just dropping her coat into the chair. “This is okay, isn’t it?”



“Oh, yes!”



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Re: The Edge of Silence - Chap 6h: The Things I Cannot See

Postby jdcioffi » Fri Nov 08, 2002 6:29 pm

Weehee! Another post!



I'm really itchin to see if Willow ever meeting the Lesbian Alliance ... that would be one hell of a funny and/or nerve-wracking update.



Whatever you have in mind, however, I look forward to. You have yet to lead us astray ;)



JD

"Was there a voice unkind in the back of your mind saying, "maybe..." (Jeff Buckley - The Last Goodbye)

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Re: The Edge of Silence - Chap 6h: The Things I Cannot See

Postby darkmagicwillow » Fri Nov 08, 2002 6:39 pm

I loved seeing Tara glow as she was talking about Willow and it was great Willow using her key at the end. Is she coming over to help Tara put up her Jonathan collage though? (-;



I'd started thinking Sarah was a vampire pretty early in the episode; you did a very nice job of hinting at that.



Lastly, I want to blame you for the untidyness of my apartment and how far behind I am on my chapter revisions for The Dark Rose. I haven't found the exact post yet, but I'm sure you recommended David Weber to me .... I've read five of the Honor Harrington books this week and I really want to start number 6 right now, but I'm trying to show a little bit of willpower.





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"Omnia mutantur, nihil interit. -- "Everything changes, but nothing is truly lost."

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Re: The Edge of Silence - Chap 6h: The Things I Cannot See

Postby LeatherQueen » Fri Nov 08, 2002 7:43 pm

Oh, lovely, Mel! More Jo. :) And she's found a girl to dance with. :grin I love it!



And ooooh... Willow was waiting in Tara's room for her. Even better!



Great update, Mel. Can't wait to see where you take Jo next. ;)





"We've got the only librarian who can rip off your arm with his leg. People respect that." - Terry Pratchett

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Re: The Edge of Silence - Chap 6h: The Things I Cannot See

Postby barnabasvamp » Fri Nov 08, 2002 8:32 pm

Finally, Jo has found herself someone...But I wonder just what the other thing was that Danielle did.

And Tara having love written all over her face, so sweet!

BV

"In front of total strangers won't you kiss me, Flowers for no reason but you miss me - OOH, I wanna be in love"

Melissa Etheridge-Skin

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Re: The Edge of Silence - Chap 6h: The Things I Cannot See

Postby xita » Fri Nov 08, 2002 9:36 pm

Jo went for it hee. And Tara's just glowing with Willowness, funny she can't admit Willow is IN THE CLOSET!!! BIG TIME!!! But Willow's dying to be with her baby, she was right there at the end of the day :)

-------------------------------

Buffy?

Let's change it, the Discovery channel has koala bears.

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Re: The Edge of Silence - Chap 6h: The Things I Cannot See

Postby MadeinNZ » Sat Nov 09, 2002 4:06 am

Oooh - that was jam-packed with chocolatey goodness (without the chocolate).



The Sarah/Kat scene was very dark and scary (just as it should be). I like the idea that Sarah had no feeling for Kat - she just waited for her to be killed violently and then stole her wallet. Like the idea - cause that's what a souless vampire would do. It was totally in character.



And the Jo/Danielle scene was just so darn cute. I have officially crossed over into Jo fanhood. Its been a long time coming but she's finally won me over.



And Willow waiting in Tara's room. So sweet and kinda sexy. It is sexy right? Sex will be following? Don't make me beg.









Edited by: MadeinNZ at: 11/9/02 2:09:58 am
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Re: The Edge of Silence - Chap 6h: The Things I Cannot See

Postby Insanity » Sat Nov 09, 2002 5:05 am

Breathing helps *lol*



YAY! Great update...



Waiting for the next one....Willow waiting for Tara *g*



Insanity

"Nobody messes with my girl!" Tara, Bargaining

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Re: The Edge of Silence - Chap 6h: The Things I Cannot See

Postby hondosfirst » Sat Nov 09, 2002 9:21 am

Ah Most smutty yet tasteful writter,

I must say,I rather enjoyed this update.Im hopiing that there will be a new one soon,possibly while your out browsing your computer you might find an update, perhaps,lying about, unposted?If not maybe you can spured on by tretorous urging?(and tretourous spelling on my part.Please rip out my inadiquite spell check) So what was it that holds up your updates?Is it your BETA?Just tell me who it is and i will bring you the limp and beaten body of your BETA!!Just let me know.

Triscuitiucous 7 Fic minion

Sorry had to do it.

Tex Rose

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Re: The Edge of Silence - Chap 6h: The Things I Cannot See

Postby mollyig » Sat Nov 09, 2002 1:32 pm

So lovely that the dance worked out well for Jo and Danielle. Didn't really work in Kat's favour though, despite her obviously knowing what Sarah was. I'm curious about this Kat-eating beastie now. Also curious to find out if Danielle will own up to knowing Sarah is a vamp. I'm a curious sort!



And I love how this chapter ends with our girls together, meaning perhaps that the next one starts with them? Okay, I'm greedy too!



Adding up the total of a love that's true, multiply life by the power of two
Indigo Girls

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