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New Fic - What Only The Heart Can See

Postby RedIshtar » Tue Jan 20, 2004 5:06 pm

Kayleen: Hey Kittens!! *waving* Here I am with a brand new fic for the brave enough to read my little crazy ideas. I know I have an unfinished fic, but well, this idea just hit me like a bulldozer and I couldn’t ignore it. *sheepish*



Dae: You better not forget about me *glaring*



Kayleen: Eh, well… um, ok. *blush* As I was so gently reminded, I’m not alone on this boat. My oh so dear little sister is helping me with the ideas, dialog, plot…



Dae: Basically, I’m doing everything while she’s being her lazy ass self. *ducking flying cushions* Well, it’s true!



Kayleen: Please, ignore her. *whacking her on the head* As I was saying, this smartass here is my little sister and she’s helping me with the fic when she’s not trying to drive me crazy *glaring*.



Dae: Ok, ok, no need to get large with the butch on me. *smirk* Well, the thing is that this fic is very different from what we’re used to read, so it should keep you entertained *channeling Anya’s best ‘spend-your-money-on-my-store’ smile*



Kayleen: This will be mostly AU, we will be changing various things about the characters, which you will have to find out reading the fic, cuz we won’t tell. So you’ll to bear with our evil schemes *grin*



Dae: And, of course, the main couple will be W/T, but there will be some minor pairings around. Oh, and they won’t be together yet cuz-



Kayleen: *closing her mouth* Stop giving the plot away! *grinning sheepishly* Sorry, Kittens, sis here just likes to talk a lot *glaring*. We better start this fic before they give up reading.



Dae: *biting down on her hand* So good reading, Kittens! *running away ducking baseball bat swings*



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Title: What Only The Heart Can See

Authors Kayleen & Dae

Rating: PG for now

Spoilers: Nothing really important

Pairings: Willow/Tara as major couple, you’ll see the others.

Summary: Tara McClay is a typical happy High School student, she has great friends, good grades, a nice apartment and a nifty little nightly hobbie of dusting the undead. Until a new mystery comes to Sunnydale in the form of a beautiful redhead.





Chapter 1 – Who’s That Girl?





Tara was pulled out of the worlds of dreams as the buzzing sound of her alarm clock filled the quiet apartment. With a groan of annoyance she hit the offending machine, instantly ending the irritating noise. She got up and stretched her sore muscles, yawning deeply and rubbing her tired eyes.



She had little sleep and her body was exhausted from overdoing her magic on patrol that night. Sure, she was used to patrolling Sunnydale’s cemeteries every night with her friends, but lately the city’s undead population has been more vicious than the usual. Or I’m just getting old.



She dismissed these thoughts and started her morning routine of showering, brushing her teeth and dressing for school. She put on a white halter top, a knee-length cream skirt and white sandals, pulling her long blond hair in a ponytail. It was a hot day and she didn’t want to boil underneath her clothes.



Tara went to the kitchen and found her uncle already up, drinking his usual morning tea.



“Morning, Uncle Rupert.” she smiled and poured herself a cup of tea.



“Good morning, Tara. How was patrol last night?”



“Tiring. The vampires are coming stronger than the usual, the demons too. And those disappearances… I don’t know what to make of it.” she sighed.



“Yes, indeed. I still haven’t found an answer to this phenomenon. There’s nothing similar to this recorded in the Watcher’s Diaries.”



“I take it there's a meeting in order, right?”



“Quite. We need to figure out if there’s any pattern on these disappearances, maybe we have a ritualistic background.”



“I’ll tell the others.” she offered, putting her now empty cup in the sink.



“Yes, do so. We better get going, Tara, don’t want to be late on the first day back, do we?”



Stopping a moment to scratch her cat behind the ears, she took her bag and followed Giles out of the apartment, making sure the door was well locked. You’re never too safe in Sunnydale.



*~**~*~**~*~**~*



“Scooby meeting after school, then?” Buffy asked from her usual seat between Tara and Xander.



“Yeah, we’ll have to be on research mode today.” Tara nodded.



“I’m sure we’ll figure this out.” Xander gave them his ‘cheer-up’ goofy smile.



“We better, cuz all this is givin’ me serious wiggins.” Buffy frowned pensively.



“Hey there, no gloomy faces on our first day as seniors!”



“Xander is right, maybe it’s not even that serious-“ Tara’s attempt at pep talk was interrupted as the teacher entered the classroom.



“Mornin’, class.” The teacher greeted and the students answered in kind. “I hope y’all had enough time to empty your heads, ‘cause I’m eager to get them full again.”



Some of the students laughed softly, others rolled their eyes at his joke. Mr. Taylor was a middle aged man with graying black hair and kind brown eyes. He was a pretty laid back teacher and the majority’s favorite, even if some dreaded Chem.



“This year we’ll be having a new student joining us in our little knowledge quest. Come in.” he motioned for someone at the door and the class fell silent as a girl entered.



Gorgeous was the only word that came to Tara’s mind to describe the new student. Waist length shinning red hair ran down slender shoulders, covering the girl’s ears and framing her pale face. She wore baggy black jeans, a dark red ‘Kiss Me, I’m Irish’ top and black shoes. Dark red wristbands on her wrists and silver cross necklace hung around her neck. The redhead’s eyes were totally covered by deep red sunglasses, giving her an aura of mystery.



“This is Willow Rosenberg, and as you can see,” Mr. Taylor pointed to the redhead top with a grin, “she’s from Ireland. Let’s make her feel welcome, eh?”



A chorus of ‘hey’s, ‘hello’s and even some cat calls filled the classroom and Willow nodded her greetings to them.



“You can choose one of the free seats.” Mr. Taylor smiled at her.



The quiet redhead scanned the classroom for a free seat and her covered eyes locked on Tara’s for a moment and the blonde shivered slightly under the redhead’s studying gaze. Willow gave her an almost imperceptive smile and took a seat beside the window on the front row.



Tara spent the entire class observing the redhead. There was something about her, besides her incredible beauty of course, that attracted her attention. Maybe it was the fact that Willow’s aura gave nothing away, just total calm and control. Or it could have been the little smile the redhead granted her when they locked eyes. It didn’t really matter, she was just plain fascinated by Willow Rosenberg.



The object of her attentions said nothing during the entire class, simply taking notes or idly staring out of the window as Mr. Taylor explained about complicated chemical reactions.



Tara was so engrossed in her Willow-staring that she didn’t even noticed her friend’s curious looks or the knowing smiles they shared. She was pulled out of the Willow-world when the bell rang announcing that they had to go to the next class.



“Welcome back to the living world, Tar.” Buffy smiled teasingly.



“We were about to send a rescue party, you seemed to be a little lost in your -ahem- redhead world.” Xander grinned.



“I just eh… um.” Tara blushed deeply.



“No need to explain, the girl is hot.” the blonde slayer smirked.



“Yeah, everyone does a little ogling every now and then.” Xander bumped her shoulder playfully, making her blush harder.



Tara glanced again at the seat beside the window and found the redhead gone. With a disappointed sigh she followed her friends to their next class.



*~**~*~**~*~**~*



It was already lunch time and Tara hadn’t seen the redhead again. She was starting to get antsy, what if they hadn’t anymore classes together? For some reason she found herself missing the mysterious redhead.



This is ridiculous! I don’t even know her! Why is she affecting me so much? Why can’t I bear the thought of not seeing her again today? She’s so beautiful…



“Hey girls!” came Faith’s voice as she approached the group with Anya in tow.



“And guy!” Xander added pointing at himself.



“Nah, you’re just one of the girls, Xan-man.” the brunette grinned and sat on Buffy’s lap, giving her a kiss on the cheek.



“Hey! I’m a manly man, full of male manliness!” he protested in mock anger.



“Yeah.” Anya agreed sitting between his legs leaning on his chest, “I wouldn’t date a girl. Besides, he has a penis, so he can’t be a girl anyway.” she added, bluntly as always.



“Hey, what’s with the Blondie? She didn’t even blush with Anya’s ever-so-tactful talk.” Faith inquired looking at the blonde with a raised eyebrow.



“Oh, she’s like that all day.” Buffy said taking a bite off her sandwich.



“She’s thinking about sex.” declared Anya after studying Tara’s pensive look, “That’s definitely bedroom eyes!”



Both Faith’s eyebrows reached her hairline and she looked at Tara, who still hadn’t acknowledged her friends, then at Buffy, clearly wanting more information.



“She’s got a new crush.” Buffy explained, “A redhead Irish girl called Willow.”



“Oh, she’s in our History class. Creepy girl. Doesn’t talk with anyone. She looked at Faith funny too.” Anya frowned.



“Yeah. Strange girl, but she’s hot, so I guess it’s only fair Blondie is crushing on her. I bet all the male population is ogling her, even some females too.” Faith smirked earning a slap on the arm from her girlfriend.



“You better not be ogling her too, Missy.” Buffy chided sternly.



Faith kissed her nose playfully and whispered something that made the small slayer blush beet red and a goofy grin appear on her face.



“Hey, there she is.” Xander said spotting the redhead.



That immediately caught Tara’s attention and she snapped her head on the direction Xander was looking. And there she saw the beautiful redhead, sitting calmly under a tree. Her stance was so relaxed that she could be sleeping, but Tara didn’t know for sure because of the sunglasses that still covered Willow’s eyes.



Tara was mesmerized by the way the sunbeams reflected on Willow’s lustrous red hair, her serene expression making her seem like an angel. A beautiful fiery angel…



Then Willow looked at her and she felt like the redhead was looking at her very soul, assessing all her thoughts and emotions. Again Willow gave her that small, almost imperceptive smile and rose from under the tree, walking away slowly, leaving her wondering what happened.



“Go after her, Tar.” Buffy’s voice pulled her out of her reverie.



“What?” Tara looked at her in confusion.



“Go after her, Blondie. You got the hots for her, so why not see if it’s mutual?” Faith prodded.



“Yeah, maybe she can be your orgasm buddy.” Anya quipped cheerily.



“I… uh…” Tara stammered blushing hotly.



“Go ahead, Tare, we all can feel some sparkage between you two.” Xander added his two cents comment.



“But…”



“No buts, go and talk to her!” Buffy pushed her on the direction Willow went.



Seeing no other option and not really complaining, Tara went after the redhead hoping she just didn’t make a fool of herself.



It didn’t take long to find Willow. She was leaning casually against a wall in a desert part of the campus. Willow looked at her briefly half-smiling and Tara couldn’t help but smile lopsidedly herself. Maybe she was waiting for me?



“H-Hi.” she said nervously as she approached the girl. “I-I’m T-Tara.”



What’s this, McClay?! You haven’t stuttered for years!! What has gotten into you?! Geez!



Her internal rambling stopped when she noticed the redhead came closer, much closer. She was toe-to-toe with Tara and even with her face so close the blonde couldn’t see her eyes.



She stood there, studying Tara so intently that the blonde was starting to sweat. Tara was very tempted to lift her hands and just take off the sunglasses that covered the beautiful redhead’s eyes, but she knew she just couldn’t do that. Goddess… What is she looking at? And why do I suddenly feel so naked under her gaze?



Then Willow closed the distance between them to whisper on the blonde’s ear, their bodies almost touching. She could smell the redhead’s sweet-scented shampoo.



“Hello, I’m Willow.” she whispered with a strong Irish accent, sending a shiver up Tara’s spine.



Then she stepped back and took one of Tara’s hands and placed a lingering kiss on its back.



“Nice to meet you.” Willow purred and grinned fully at her, making her heart skip a thousand beats.



Just then the bell rang, announcing the end of the lunch break. Willow grinned once more before walking away, leaving Tara there grinning goofily as she stared shamelessly at her retreating behind.



*~**~*~**~*~**~*



Tara spent the rest of the classes with a dreamy look in her eyes, she didn’t even acknowledged her friend’s teasing questions and remarks, she couldn’t take her mind off the mysterious redhead.



She discovered that Willow shared her English and Physics classes and couldn’t help but stare at the redhead during the classes, earning herself scoldings from her English and Physics teachers and smirks from her friends.



You’ve got it bad, McClay. She told herself when the classes ended.



“You’ve got it bad, Blondie.” Faith echoed her thoughts, making her blush hard.



“Yeah, goo goo eyes and all.” Buffy nodded, always eager to embarrass Tara.



“Practically tearing her clothes off, I would say.” Anya added with a grin.



The Scoobies’ teasing fest was interrupted when the loud roar of a motorcycle filled the air. They looked at the school entrance and saw a biker parking there.



“Wow, that’s a Harley.” Faith whistled appreciatively and Xander nodded his agreement.



The biker took off his black helmet to reveal a guy in his mid-twenties with bleached blonde hair, sharp features and cool blue eyes. He scanned the crowd of exiting students and shouted at someone. They turned and saw Willow walking towards the blonde biker with a big smile.



Tara felt a sharp pang of jealousy when the biker hugged Willow and kissed her cheek, the redhead responding in kind. The biker said something to Willow that made the redhead laugh merrily and slap him playfully on the arm. The blonde man grinned and handed Willow a black and red helmet, which the she promptly put on before hopping on the Harley behind the biker.



The blonde biker put his helmet back on and started the bike. Just before they drove away Willow looked directly at Tara, bowing her head in farewell, leaving a very curious and quite jealous blonde behind.



To Be Continued…



*~**~*~**~*~**~*



Dae: Yipee! First chappie done!! *jumping up and down*



Kayleen: I’m so proud of our work, sis. *wiping away a tear dramatically*



Dae: Yeah, well, it’s not Shakespeare but it’s the intention that counts. *grin*



Kayleen: So, Kittens, did you like our sexy mysterious Willow? I always loved her with long hair… *dreamily*



Dae: And the Irish accent! Yummy!



Kayleen: Can you guess who the blonde biker is? Oh, the surprises that we have in store for you… *grinning evilly* That’s why I LOVE AU’s!



Dae: We’re already working on the second chappie, so don’t worry, update coming soon!



Kayleen: Please, leave feedback! *pleading*



Dae: Yes, we’d love to know what reactions we’re causing.



Both: ‘Til the next update Kittens!





Kayleen & Dae Lee





When I’m lost in the rain, in your eyes I know I’ll find the light to light my way. When I’m scared, losing ground, when my world is going crazy, you can turn it all around. And when I’m down you’re there pushing me to the top, you’re always there giving me all you got… -- I Turn To You, Christina Aguilera

Edited by: maudmac  at: 1/23/04 11:25 pm
RedIshtar
 


Re: New Fic - What Only The Heart Can See

Postby ambersagoddess » Tue Jan 20, 2004 6:52 pm

::cocks head to the side and sniffs the air with quite a bit of interest:: hmmmm, what's this lovely little gem I've fallen upon.



I have this cooky thought running through my head. It involves a light sensitive, possibly blind Willow, hence the title, because she can't see out of her eyes and thus has to see out of her heart. The theory would also explain why she stood so close to Tara, if she couldn't see her, she'd have to feel her.



Mmmmm, enough rambling.



NICE girls, very nice, wish I could write like that.



I know I have a new fic to read, lets see if my friends feel the same.



::runs off to kitten chat to spread the word::



-Rei

Spero eorum amo donbit tu animus magnamus



Why yes, the rumors are true, I have patted the Great One's ass...

Edited by: ambersagoddess at: 1/20/04 5:55 pm
ambersagoddess
 


Re: New Fic - What Only The Heart Can See

Postby Footman311 » Tue Jan 20, 2004 8:07 pm

Hmmm... Tara related to Giles:hmm

Willow from Ireland:hmm



Defenatily something im going to keep up with:applause



Keep it up and update soon?:pray

Lifes a bowl of punch G'head and spike it-Nick Hexum

Footman311
 


Answers!

Postby RedIshtar » Tue Jan 20, 2004 10:24 pm

amberisagoddes: Interesting theory, but you'll have to wait and see if it's correct or not, we're not tellin'! *grin* Thanks you for the feedback *hugs* We're hoping to update soon enough, so look out for updates.



Footman311: Oh, there's more interesting relationships coming, we're working to get some :shock and :thud *grin* We'll update soon! Thanks for the feedback!





Kayleen & Dae Lee





When I’m lost in the rain, in your eyes I know I’ll find the light to light my way. When I’m scared, losing ground, when my world is going crazy, you can turn it all around. And when I’m down you’re there pushing me to the top, you’re always there giving me all you got… -- I Turn To You, Christina Aguilera



RedIshtar
 


Re: Answers!

Postby The Rose24 » Tue Jan 20, 2004 10:49 pm

Interesting little story you have going on here.



I hope Willow isn't blind though, but she probably is.





Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


The Rose24
 


Re: Answers!

Postby mxgirl314 » Wed Jan 21, 2004 12:21 am

hey Redlshtar great fic. I'm really loving it. Can't wait till next update hope its soon:pray

mxgirl314
 


Re: New Fic - What Only The Heart Can See

Postby taralicious » Wed Jan 21, 2004 12:32 am

If indeed Willow is blind, it only serves to prove my theory, even more conclusively, that no matter the variations of Willow/Tara's identities, circumstances will always adapt, shift, and change to allow them to find each other.

They only need make eye contact, a slight touch, and the sparkage recognition will have been established and they'll know their destiny lies with each other to become one.

No power, of either human or cosmic design, can keep Willow/Tara apart for long.

Nice job with what you've done so far.

I like the description of Willow as having long red hair and being from Ireland. I'll be one of the guys ogling her and wishing I had a chance.:peace :bigkiss

taralicious
 


Re: New Fic - What Only The Heart Can See

Postby sizzlersister » Wed Jan 21, 2004 2:03 am

What an intriguing start! Hot and mysterious strangers...always a good thing!

More please.

sizzlersister
 


Re: New Fic - What Only The Heart Can See

Postby sam darls » Wed Jan 21, 2004 3:24 am

Ooh..I love this so far :love . So great. Can't wait for more. Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

sam darls
 


Re: New Fic - What Only The Heart Can See

Postby irishlassie101 » Wed Jan 21, 2004 4:09 am

what a little gem to be found........



"Kiss me I´m Irish"...I like that, I´ve got one of them myself...does work BAHAHAHAHAAAAA:laugh :laugh :laugh



please update soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

irishlassie101
 


Re: New Fic - What Only The Heart Can See

Postby Red Jassy » Wed Jan 21, 2004 8:00 am

hey...

wonderful fic.. hmmm. first thing i thought.. the story is sexy with its mysterious atmosphere or may i say Willow's character and that red sunglasses yumm.. and of course let's not forget the Irish accent..hmm.. yay..



Cool fic. Can't for the next part.

thanks again.

humble reader, :flower

redjassy




Cause you were made for me/Somehow I'll make you see/How happy you make me


I can't live this life/Without you by my side/I need you to survive
So stay with me/You look in my eyes and I'm screaming inside/that I'm sorry. » Evanescence

Red Jassy
 


Chapter Two!!

Postby RedIshtar » Wed Jan 21, 2004 12:56 pm

Kayleen: Hey Kittens! We’re here again!



Dae: Wow! So many Kittens left feedback! *beaming*



Kayleen: Answering then:



The Rose24 – Thanks and you’ll have to wait and see. *grin*



mxgirl314 – Thank you for the feedback! Here is the update, didn’t take too long, did we?



taralicious – I agree totally with you! Willow and Tara are soulmates and no matter what, they’ll always find each other. I think just Joss fuckin’ Whedon can’t see that *grumbling*

Glad you liked ‘our’ Willow, we’d do a montage of her, but we’re disasters with image editors.

Thank you so much for your coments!



sizzlersister – More you ask and more you shall have! Thanks for the feedback! *grin*



sam darls – Thanks for the feedback Sammi! It’s so good to see people like our work.



irishlassie101 – It works for us too! *grin* Glad you liked! Here’s the update!



Red Jassy – We liked this mysterious version of Willow, it’s good to know people share our opinion! WILLOW IS SO HOT!! Thanks for the feedback!



Title: What Only The Heart Can See

Authors Kayleen and Dae

Rating: PG-13

Spoilers: Nothing really important

Pairings: Willow/Tara as major couple, you’ll see the others.

Summary: Tara McClay is a typical happy High School student, she has great friends, good grades, a nice apartment and a nifty little nightly hobbie of dusting the undead. Until a new mystery comes to Sunnydale in the form of a beautiful redhead.





Chapter 2 – Of Scooby Meetings and Patrols





The Scooby Gang was assembled in Sunnydale High’s library trying to decipher the Hellmouth’s newest mystery.



“So what do we know?” Xander asked idly leafing through a Demonology book.



“That the vamps are attacking in groups of 5 to 10 and are fuckin’ annoying to dust.” Faith grumbles twirling a stake in her hand.



“Usually there’s always a demon or two after the vamps’ attack.” Tara added pensively.



“And there have been some strange disappearances. I mean, stranger than your usual ‘neck trauma’ victim.” Buffy rolled her eyes.



“This is all very strange, I mean, demons and vampires don’t usually band together.” Anya frowned.



“There must be some connection.” Giles mused, “Is there any similarity between the kidnapped?” he asked.



“Well, let’s see… Three young women, late twenties to mid-thirties and two children, a boy and a girl, both three years old.” Tara shook her head at the thought of children on some new Big Bad’s hands.



“Good Lord…”



“This is sounding very ritualistic…” Anya commented.



“Yes, but to know what kind of ritual it is we’d need more information about the victims.” Giles said, cleaning his glasses nervously.



“To get anymore information we’d have to get the police files and that’s very unlikely.” Buffy said.



“Or we could just beat the info out of one of them.” Faith grinned.



“Or Willy!” Xander quipped.



“Yes, indeed.” Giles put his glasses back on and sighed, “With so little information it’ll be difficult to discover something now.”



“Maybe we could see if there’s any supernatural phenomenon happening that could help in a ritual, you know, planet alignment, eclipse and such.” Tara suggested.



“You’re quite right, Tara.” Giles smiled, his feeling of hopelessness diminishing a little.



“So…we research?”



They spent the whole afternoon researching on magical phenomenon’s occurrence. Well, Giles and Tara researched. Xander and Faith had comics hidden in their books. Buffy and Anya were too busy bickering about Goddess-knows-what to research anything.



They found out that there would be an eclipse in two months, but there were just too many rituals and prophecies that involved eclipses somehow, so they’d just to get more information to discover what they wanted with the women and children kidnapped.



So it was decided that they would question Willy that night and if he didn’t know anything useful, well, the vamps wouldn’t be happy.



*~**~*~**~*~**~*



They entered Willy’s Bar, ignoring the stares they were receiving. As they strode confidently to the counter various ‘costumers’ decided that it was better not to know what the slayers wanted and (un)live to see another day. When they reached the counter the bar was already mostly empty, save for a couple of brave (or stupid) demons on the far end.



“What d-do you want?” Willy stammered nervously behind the counter, looking around frantically for an escape route.



“Well, Willy-boy,” Faith started, “it seems that we have a new Big Bad in town and you’re information boy, do the math.”



“I d-don’t know a-anything, I swear!” he started backing away when Buffy got him by the front of his shirt and shook him roughly.



“Now look here, we asked for the information politely, but I have no problem doing this the hard way.” she growled.



“Your choice, Willy-boy, you tell us what we want to know and keep all your bones intact or we’ll hang you on the ceiling and use you for a punching bag. You decide.” Faith smirked, she just loved seeing them squirm.



“I-I…I…”



They wondered how long it would take to Willy wet his pants, he was almost hyperventilating.



“You better find your words quickly cuz I’m loosing my patience.” Buffy warned and gave him a nice punch in the gut for good measure.



Willy double over as the air was punched out of his lungs. He knew there was no way in hell they would let him go until they got what they want. That was the problem with owning a demon bar, if he told all the information he got the demons would skin him alive, if he didn’t the slayers would punch the stuffing out of him.



“Ok, ok!” he panted, “I’ll tell you all I know, just let me go!”



“Spill your guts, Willy or we’ll make sure you do. Literally.” Buffy let go of his shirt but continued to glare at the cowering man.



Faith was having the time of her life watching Willy sweat under her girlfriend’s glare. Buffy had a way of making them speak. Faith herself would just pound them ‘til they sang like canaries. The little slayer did the interrogation with more style, she had to give her that.



The bar owner swallowed hard, he had no doubts that they would do as promised if he didn’t tell everything he knew.



“A g-group of vamps c-came here arguing a-about some job their b-boss gave them. Something about pregnant women and kids… I-I don’t know w-what for.” he added quickly, “T-They were bragging about working with demons a-and an order to t-turn whoever they a-ate.”



The slayers shared a look, trying to decide if that was all Willy knew.



“You know more, Willy-boy, you better spill it all or me and B will have some wicked fun with you.”



Willy gluped and took a deep breath. Oh, what the hell!



“Last night a couple of demons were complaining about three creeps beating and killing the rest of their pack for information, they were the only ones to escape. Said they were fuckin’ strong too. I thought they were some of your little group, but then you wouldn’t have come here for information tonight.” he said everything in one breath.



Both slayers frowned at this. Someone pounding demons for information?



“What more do you know about these ‘creeps’?” Buffy inquired leaning on the counter.



“They were two males and one female, they were arguing that they couldn’t possibly be humans. The demons said that they were wearing hooded cloaks, so they didn’t saw who they were. They must be pretty strong, the demons were huge and they were seemed really beaten up.”



“Is that all you know?” Buffy narrowed her eyes at the barman.



“You wouldn’t happen to know who is this boss of them, would you, Willy-boy? Who is organizing all these vamps and demons?”



“N-No! I swear, I don’t know!”



The slayers gave him scrutinizing looks, trying to see if he was lying or not. They looked at each other and nodded.



“Ok, Willy-boy, you seem to be telling the truth, so we’ll let you keep all your bones. Do us a favor and keep your ears open, we might have to come back to chat with you again later.” Faith smirked at the terrified look that appeared on the barman’s face.



“See ya, Willy.” Buffy waved sweetly as they exited the bar.



They laughed when they heard Willy muttering about ‘damn slayers and having to change pants’.



*~**~*~**~*~**~*



The slayers met the rest of the Scoobies outside and shared the information they got with Willy, Faith particularly emphasizing the barman wetting his pants.



After having a good laugh at Willy’s expense the Scoobies reflected on the new information as they walked through the cemetery.



“What could they want with pregnant women and children?” Xander wondered.



“Blood.” Anya answered somberly.



“What??” the slayers shouted.



“Blood.” Anya repeated, “The blood of the unborn and children are the best for black arts sacrifices.”



“Unborn babies and little children have the most strong life energy, their blood is pure. They make powerful blood sacrifices.” Tara explained sadly.



“So they will… bleed them?” Buffy gluped.



Tara and Anya nodded. The gang stayed silent, digesting what they found out.



“We might be dealing with a Dark Witch or Warlock, then?” Faith asked swallowing the lump that suddenly appeared in her throat.



“Yes.” Tara answered, “Light Witches would never make this kind of sacrifice, it’s against every one of their principles.”



Their discussion was interrupted when the slayers felt a group of vampires near. They motioned for the others to stay quiet as they scanned the area.



They weren’t at all surprised when a band of seven vamps jumped from behind a crypt and attacked them.



The slayers started fighting with two each, blocking and throwing punches with deadly accuracy. These vamps weren’t fledglings, they seemed to be experienced fighters, but the slayers had years of experience on the Hellmouth, so they were gaining advantage quickly.



Xander and Anya were trying to fight off two more vampires, Xander already having received some punches and kicks while trying to protect Anya. With some luck Xander managed to distract the vamps long enough for Anya to stake one of them.



Tara was having no such luck. Three vampires attacked her at the same time. She managed to do a fire spell and dust one of them, but the other two were faster and weren’t giving her much time to prepare another spell, so she settle to avoid them while she could.



Buffy and Faith had already dusted one vamp each. They got some hits, but were going well so far. They paired up against the remaining vamps, fighting in the perfect synchrony the Chosen Two were famous for.



Xander got the vamp he and Anya were fighting backed against a tree with wild swings of his short axe. Anya was on the ground after receiving a particularly vicious punch on the stomach.



The blonde witch was having a hard time with her vamps, she was getting tired quickly while they seemed to be in perfect conditions. She was tackled to ground with a yelp.



As she looked into the inhuman yellow eyes of the vamp all her life passed in front of her eyes. She couldn’t move and the vampire wasted no time in descending on her neck. Then he was dust.



She coughed and looked up, expecting to see one of her friends but instead saw a cloaked figure holding a crossbow, firing a bolt at the other vamp that she was fighting a minute ago.



Tara looked around and saw that her friends had already dusted their vamps and were running in her direction. She looked back at the figure and saw no one there. Her eyes widened when she saw what was left in the place of her unknown savior.



A perfect red rose was set on the ground.



To Be Continued…



Kayleen: We did it, yeah! *doing a happy dance* Second chap done, yes! WOO and HAAA!



Dae: Are you having a seizure? *raising an eyebrow*



Kayleen: Shut it! *slapping her arm* So, Kittens, what do you think? New Big Bad in town and unknown saviors! Things are heating up!



Dae: Yeah! Sorry there was no Willow in this chappie, we promise lots of redhead goodness in the next one! Oh, and before anyone ask, the rose thingy was kind of my idea, I always loved Sailor Moon.



Kayleen: *shaking head* See what I have to bear with, Kittens? It’s nightmare, I tell you.



Dae: Hey! Still in the room here!



Kayleen: *sticking tongue out* Don’t forget to leave feedback, ‘k, Kittens? We love to know our readers opinions.



Dae: Oh, and if you have any suggestion of a good way to kill my sister, I’m all ears! Bye!



Kayleen: ‘Til the next update if we don’t kill each other! *grin*





Kayleen and Dae Lee





When I’m lost in the rain, in your eyes I know I’ll find the light to light my way. When I’m scared, losing ground, when my world is going crazy, you can turn it all around. And when I’m down you’re there pushing me to the top, you’re always there giving me all you got… -- I Turn To You, Christina Aguilera



RedIshtar
 


Re: Chapter Two!!

Postby Arwen276 » Wed Jan 21, 2004 1:49 pm

OK, ok you bickering two!



First of all, your fic? MUCH WITH THE LIKING!

Then with Willow : I'm agreeing with some theories up there about her being somehow blind? maybe she sees everything in auras and such? but then if she only saw 'heart matters' how could she follow courses and copy from boards...

I think she was in that second part, being the cloaked person with the rose.

I also have a theory about Mr-blond-guy, does Spike ring any bells?

Anyway I can't wait to read more about it!!



~Arwen



Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


Re: Chapter Two!!

Postby sam darls » Wed Jan 21, 2004 2:10 pm

Ooh..great update..me liking this very much :flower Love sammi xx

"Sometimes things happen between people that you don't really expect. And sometimes the things that are important are the ones that seem the weirdest or the most wrong. And those are the ones that change your life." - Jessie Sammler (Evan Rachel Wood)

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Re: Chapter Two!!

Postby irishlassie101 » Wed Jan 21, 2004 3:30 pm

...getting better and better...a new gang in town...but who´s the third member ???????



don´t let us wait to long PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

irishlassie101
 


Re: Chapter Two!!

Postby Taras Shadow » Wed Jan 21, 2004 4:53 pm

Alright, I'm completely hooked!



Me loves muchly! You ladies are doing a wonderful job!! More soon? :flirt



Thank you and take care! :D



~Holly~ :heart

"I was born 'normal'...life made me strange." - Marina

"I am a tongue whore...you gave me tongue, what am I supposed to do...sit back and keep my mouth shut?" -Me-

"I know who you really are...you're the one who cries when you're alone." - Where Will You Go? - Evanescence

Taras Shadow
 


Re: Chapter Two!!

Postby ambersagoddess » Wed Jan 21, 2004 5:40 pm

whoo! update!!



hmmm, cloaked goodness. A pretty for Tara. I throw in a twenty on Will being Miss cloak-y!



I'm quite interested in this little plot device of yours, a new gang, sexy redhead, the return of Spike, this could be interesting.



So the third member's a guy, huh? Hmm, Angel possibly?



Meh.



Can't wait for the next update!! whoo!



-Rei

Spero eorum amo donbit tu animus magnamus



Why yes, the rumors are true, I have patted the Great One's ass...

ambersagoddess
 


Re: Chapter Two!!

Postby The Rose24 » Wed Jan 21, 2004 7:24 pm

I'm curious about Tara's savior as well. Could it be

Willow? :hmm



I see there is another fic with B/F paired. Sorry, I have always had a problem with that.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


Edited by: The Rose24  at: 1/21/04 7:22 pm
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Re: Chapter Two!!

Postby Tempest Duer » Wed Jan 21, 2004 9:15 pm

Cool fic! Totally cool fic. Let's see, Willow's Irish, Buffy and Faith are an established couple and Willow appears to be wicked strong. I can't wait for more.



I'm assuming Willow was Tara's rescuer. The whole red rose thingy...

Willow: Hey Buff. One more thing. Buffy: Yeah? Willow: I’m gay. Buffy: Okay, Will. Xander owes me ten bucks.

~Remember to Breathe by Yellow Crayon

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Re: Chapter Two!!

Postby xmadxcowx » Thu Jan 22, 2004 12:21 am

:sheep



pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

must have more!!!!!

and soon!!!!

:banana

xmadxcowx
 


Re: Chapter Two!!

Postby Red Jassy » Thu Jan 22, 2004 6:00 am

oooohhhhh.... s0 cool:glasses .

want more ..yay!!!

heheh.. thanks for the update..:applause

uhuh.. the rose. how sweet. hmm. who's the third?:confused

thanks again for sharing the fic :kiss

humble reader,

red jassy




Cause you were made for me/Somehow I'll make you see/How happy you make me


I can't live this life/Without you by my side/I need you to survive
So stay with me/You look in my eyes and I'm screaming inside/that I'm sorry. » Evanescence

Red Jassy
 


Re: Chapter Two!!

Postby taralicious » Fri Jan 23, 2004 1:50 am

I'll throw my lot in with the Willow as Tara's saviour crowd.

Cloaked crossbow wielding mystery figure goodness has me on the edge of my seat.

The single red rose was a nice dramatic touch.

Can't wait to see who's behind all this, who's pulling the strings of the vampire/demon alliance.

Let's hear it for Willowy goodness in Chapter 3:applause :peace

taralicious
 


Update!

Postby RedIshtar » Fri Jan 23, 2004 10:10 pm

Dae: HIYA KITTENS!!!



Kayleen: Someone is a tad too perky today…



Dae: And someone is just as grumpy as always! Geez, you need to get laid!



Kayleen: You really don’t want me to say what do you need. *glaring*



Dae: Ok, ok! Jesus! Sorry Kittens, she’s a bit moody today. Guess she didn’t get any last night. *ducks a flying shoe*



Kayleen: You’re insufferable! *growling*



Dae: But you love me anyway! *winking*



*silence*



Dae: Let’s just start the fic, ‘k?

       

Kayleen: *grunt* Whatever…



Dae: And by the way, thank you very much for the feedback Kittens! It really inspire us!





Title: What Only The Heart Can See

Authors Kayleen and Dae

Rating: PG

Spoilers: Nothing really important

Pairings: Willow/Tara as major couple, you’ll see the others.

Summary: Tara McClay is a typical happy High School student, she has great friends, good grades, a nice apartment and a nifty little nightly hobbie of dusting the undead. Until a new mystery comes to Sunnydale in the form of a beautiful redhead.



DETICATORY: To Kay's best buddy and my surrogate brother (and two years Lurking Kitten), James! We love you Jamesi!





Chapter 3 – Curiosity Killed The Cat





Beautiful. The word ran through her head as she observed the captivating redhead seated near the window, concentrating on taking notes as Mrs. Garrison, their Physics teacher, explained something she was sure she should be paying attention to.



It was already five days since she first saw Willow and she still couldn’t take the girl out of her head. Besides, she didn’t really want to. She was enchanted with the quiet, intelligent redhead.



After their first encounter, Tara was determined to get to know Willow better, to at least be friends with her. So she started talking with her on lunch break and free periods.



At first the redhead was a little unresponsive and secluded, but she quickly warmed up to the blonde and they started talking, building some sort of connection. Tara soon discovered that Willow wasn’t very keen on talking about her life; every time the blonde tried to know a bit more about her she would close down and make up some excuse to run away. So Tara simply settled to talking about school and her friends (in the non-Scooby sense, she just wasn’t ready about the things that go ‘bump in the night’ with the redhead yet). She even got so far and introduced Willow to the gang.



The Scoobies tried to be as welcoming as possible, but Willow still seemed to be uncomfortable around them, being quiet most of the time or settling for monosyllabic answers.



On the other hand, she and Tara were getting along pretty well and as long as Tara didn’t ask anything about her life she they would talk non-stopping.



Tara discovered that Willow loved school, she could babble for hours about a subject, especially Physics, one of her greatest passions. The blonde witch found endearing how Willow would ramble about some law or theory without even pausing to breath.



But even then, Tara was getting anxious, wanting to know more about the redhead. She knew she should give her time to talk about her personal life, but found herself hungry to know everything about Willow. She just couldn’t get enough of her. Talk about obsession.



Then there was the fact that everyday that same blonde biker picked Willow up from school. She had to admit, she was jealous. Jealous of how he hugged and kissed Willow’s cheek every time they met, of how Willow would be so carefree and touch-freely around him. She never asked Willow who the guy was, to tell the truth she was afraid of the answer. He’s probably her boyfriend anyway…



But then, that wouldn’t explain the way Willow acted around her. How she would sometimes just look at her silently and smile that cute little grin that always melted her heart. How she would briefly hold her hand or touch her arm. Those small subtle clues you drop when you are in love. Then again, it could be just my wistful thinking…



She looked up startled when the bell rang, announcing the end of the classes for the day. She realized that she spent the entire Physics class thinking about Willow. Again. She had to stop doing that or her grades would drop and her uncle wouldn’t be pleased.



Tara shook her head and followed her friends out of class.



Today they didn’t have a Scooby Meeting. They had already gathered as much information as they could; now they were researching separately to discover what kind of ritual was being prepared, where and by whom.



Another thing that they still had to figure out were the ‘Three Musketeers’, as Faith called the three cloaked figures that appeared now and them when they where patrolling, never saying anything, just helping and leaving afterwards. It was really starting to tick them off, especially because every time after they left there would be a deep red rose set on the ground next to Tara.



They only knew what they observed from the fights. They could see clearly that all of them were very skilled fighters and seemed to be very in tune with each other, making an amazing team. But they also noticed that the female favored the hand-to-hand combat, while the males preferred using swords and battle axes.



They were all strong, but Tara could see much more power flowing through the female’s aura. She moved fluidly, calm and precise, always two steps ahead of her enemies’ every move. She was definitely the leader.



“We’re going home now, Tar.” Buffy’s voice pulled Tara out of her musings.



“Huh?”



“Yeah, you’re staying, Blondie?” Faith smirked, jerking her head in the direction a certain redhead was seated under the usual tree.



“Eh… um, yes. I’ll stay and… wait for Uncle Rupert.” Tara said lamely.



“Sure, we’ll pretend we believe it, Tar.” Buffy winked.



“Me and An are going home to… go through some of the books Giles gave us.”



“No, we’re going to have sex.” Anya corrected bluntly as always, earning blushes from Xander and Tara and laughs from the slayers.



“An…” Xander groaned embarrassed.



“What? It’s the truth. And let’s go, you owe me orgasms.” then she grabbed his arm and dragged him out of the school much to the others’ amusement.



“She’ll never change…” Buffy shook her head giggling.



“I guess not.” Tara smiled lopsidedly. “You two gonna make up an excuse too?”



“Nah, you know we’re gonna fuck each other’s brains out anyway.” Faith shrugged and put her arm around a very red Buffy.



“I don’t know who is worse, you or Anya.” Buffy grumbled half-heartedly.



“But you love me anyway.” she grinned.



It was then that Tara saw Willow moving out of the corner of her eye. She looked at the school entrance and saw no sign of the usual blonde biker on the Harley. Willow was going home alone today. She made a hasty decision.



“Look, I’m going now, ok?” she told the slayers quickly. “I’m just… going. Bye!”



She ran off leaving two very confused slayers behind.



Tara followed Willow out of the campus after casting a quick invisibility spell on herself. She kept herself within certain distance, so that Willow wouldn’t notice her following, she knew the redhead was very perceptive.



She began to notice that they were going through a slight familiar path, but couldn’t quite put her finger on it. Her eyes widened as the Magic Box came to view. All her illusions about this being just a coincidence vanished as the redhead entered the shop as if she did that everyday.



Deciding that it would be better to not push her luck she waited for Willow outside the shop, her mind going through all possible explanations for this fact.



She was pulled out of her thoughts as Willow exited the shop carrying a bag full of what could only be magic supplies.



Tara continued following Willow, barely noticing that she was being led to a deserted street. When Willow stopped walking she knew that something wasn’t right.



“Why are you following me?” the redhead asked without turning around.



Tara was shocked beyond belief that Willow had noticed her even with the invisibility spell. She remained silent hoping that Willow would dismiss the thought and continue walking.



“I know you’re here, Tara.” Willow turned looking directly at her. “Why are you following me?” she asked again.



“I-I… um, I…” she stammered, dropping the spell.



“You…?” Willow prodded arching an eyebrow.



“I… I…” Tara took a deep breath a started again in a small voice. “I was curious. I… just wanted to know more about you…” she dropped her eyes waiting for the worst.



Willow came closer to her, standing toe-to-toe with her, just like that first day. And like in the first day, Tara’s heart was thumping wildly in her chest.



The redhead cocked her head to the side, as if contemplating something. She lifted her hand to the blonde’s face but changed her mind, dropping her hand with a sigh.



“Come with me, Tara.” she said stepping back.



“Huh?” Tara asked, confused.



“Come with me.” Willow repeated, turning around and walking on.



“Where are we going?”



“To my home.” the redhead answered simply.



They stayed quiet the entire time, Tara because she was afraid and embarrassed for being caught, Willow was just being her usual quiet self.



Tara’s eyes bulged out when Willow stopped in front of a big old mansion. She turned to the redhead with an incredulous look.



“You live here? Alone?”



“Yes and no.” was all that Willow answered as she led Tara inside the mansion.



Tara didn’t have much time to look around as Willow ushered her up the stairs, but she caught a glimpse of a fireplace with comfy looking couches and an armchair around it and some of the furniture seemed very old. The whole place seemed ancient.



They stopped in front of a redish brown door with the words ‘Little Tree’ neatly carved on its surface.



“My room.” Willow explained, opening the door and stepping aside for Tara to enter.



Tara gasped.



The room decoration was fairly simple, the walls and ceiling were painted dark red, there was a queen sized bed on the left side, a shelf full of books and other items and an old wardrobe on the right side, a small table with a chair beside the bed (probably used for study) and various paintings on the walls. But the moment she entered the room she felt a sudden surge of magic hit her; the room was giving off so much magic! She wondered how she didn’t felt it from the outside. If she had any doubts about Willow being a witch they’d have ended now.



“It’s a spell.” stated Willow sensing her friend’s doubt. “There are too many magical items in here. I did a spell so they wouldn’t attract any unwanted attention, warding the magic in, if you will. This room is also where I do my craft. Spells leave a magical signature once you cast them and if you do a lot of them in a closed space they can produce a strong aura like this.”



Tara pondered this information, looking around. She could feel the strongest aura coming off the books on the shelf, no doubt all were magical books, she had a few herself.



“So… you know about… the things that happen here? In Sunnydale, I mean.” she asked uncertain.



“You mean the Hellmouth thing? Yes, I know. I know about vampires, demons, witches and slayers, although I was quite surprised to see there are two of them now.” the redhead smiled slightly.



“How-“ Tara blinked. “How do you know about them, the slayers?”



“Their energies are different from other humans’. The same thing with witches. I have knack for feeling energies and auras.”



“So you knew all along? About me, Buffy and Faith?” Tara asked wide eyed.



“Yes.” Willow sat down on her bed, motioning for Tara to follow suit.



“And you knew I was following you from the beginning, didn’t you?” she continued when Willow nodded. “Then why did you let me follow you? Why bring me here?”



“Because you’re different from everyone I ever met, Tara. And I think you should know about me.”



Before Tara could say or do anything Willow rose from the bed a pulled Tara up with her, holding their hands together between them.



Then Willow’s hands started glowing, her own hands with them. Tara gasped as she felt Willow’s power through their linked hands. She let her power mingle with the redhead’s, offering her energy to help her with whatever she was doing, for some reason she had total trust in the redhead witch.



Tara’s head was swimming and her heart thumping from the strength of the connection she was feeling. She had done magic with other witches before, but never had this sort of connection. And judging by Willow’s ragged breath she was feeling the same.



She realized then that Willow had been repressing her aura all this time, because now she could see all the swirling colors of the redhead’s emotions, there were so many hidden feelings that she couldn’t figure what the redhead was feeling now.



Their energies blended and expanded, the pulsating glow concentrating on their hands between them grew. Then with a final wave of power the glow was subsided and disappeared.



Tara blinked. She looked at Willow, then at their hands and blinked again.



Between their hands there now was a single red rose. The same rose she’s been seeing set on the ground every night after…



She looked at Willow in shock.



“It’s you…” she breathed.



Willow gave her a little smile and nodded, letting go of her hands, leaving the rose with Tara.



“You saved me that first night.” she stated, stepping close to the redhead. “You’ve been helping us all this time.”



“Not just me, but yes, it was me.” Willow ran a nervous hand through her long hair.



“Why?”



“I… I…” Willow took a deep breath. “I don’t really know. I couldn’t let you get hurt, I guess.”



Tara put the rose on the table nearby and, in an impulse, reached for Willow’s sunglasses. She needed to see her eyes. She paused, waiting for any sort of reprimand and when she got none she finally took the shades off.



Her breath caught in her throat as she gazed into the most beautiful eyes she’d ever seen. They were a bottomless emerald green. She studied the emotions shining unguarded in those brilliant eyes. She didn’t see the strength or the calm confidence she expected. Instead she saw a myriad of emotions, mixed feelings of insecurity, sadness and fear.



Vulnerability. She wasn’t expecting that.



Then she realized that those eyes were also vacant and glazed. Those same eyes that showed so much emotion were, in fact, unseeing.



“You’re blind…”



To Be Continued…





Kayleen: Yay! Third chapter complete!



Dae: Now who’s perky?



Kayleen: Can you blame me? Willow and Tara goodness does the trick for anyone!



Dae: You should read and write more then. *sticking tongue out*



Kayleen: Not a bad idea. *grinning* Ok, about the chapter: almost all of you knew that Willow was blind, we should have thought of a less obvious title. Oh, well.



Dae: Pity, I would like it to be more of a surprise. *pout*



Kayleen: Now we can’t do nothing about it. *shrugging* Well, Kittens, I know most of you had guessed about Willow, but we still want to know your opinions on the matter, eh?



Dae: Yeah, we accept praising, complaining, tomatoes, onions, cabbages…



Kayleen: Ok, no need to list the entire market! They got the point!



Dae: Yeah, um, well. So, in the next chappie Willow will tell a bit about herself, so we’ll get a little witchy bonding. Maybe even smoochies. *grin*



Kayleen: We were thinking about putting the next chapter from Willow’s POV, what do you think? Should we?



Dae: And about the third member of the Three Musketeers, well, you'll see on the next update, but I think most of you would have guessed by now.



Both: Feedback pretty pleeeeaaaaase! *innocent batting of eyelashes*





Kayleen and Dae Lee





When I’m lost in the rain, in your eyes I know I’ll find the light to light my way. When I’m scared, losing ground, when my world is going crazy, you can turn it all around. And when I’m down you’re there pushing me to the top, you’re always there giving me all you got… -- I Turn To You, Christina Aguilera



RedIshtar
 


Re: Update!

Postby Temptation Waits15 » Fri Jan 23, 2004 10:12 pm

Okay.. um i dont usually leave feedback, 'cause.. well who knows..lol



But I really..really like this fic, and I didn't to much think Willow was blind.. i'm slow that way, but the fics.. just basically started but I kept checking like every few hours for the update, which you did and I guess I could just say I like it alot..lol

Edited by: Temptation Waits15 at: 1/23/04 9:14 pm
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Re: Update!

Postby The Rose24 » Fri Jan 23, 2004 10:38 pm

Well, I was hoping Willow wasn't blind, but what do I know?



Great update although I still can't quite tell where you are going with this. I look forward to it.

Tara: My heart doesn't stutter.


Tara: Willow, I got so lost.

Willow: I found you. I will always find you.


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Re: Re: Update!

Postby mxgirl314 » Fri Jan 23, 2004 11:53 pm

Wow great update. I did the whole :jaw thing when i read the last part. I wasn't expecting that lol. Can not wait till the next update. Hope its soon:pray

mxgirl314
 


Re: Re: Update!

Postby Red Jassy » Sat Jan 24, 2004 12:57 am

oh...:glasses great update.. but hmmm sexy willow and blind.

gotta say things are going great..hehehe.. sweet willow. i like



thanks again..

red jassy.




Cause you were made for me/Somehow I'll make you see/How happy you make me


I can't live this life/Without you by my side/I need you to survive
So stay with me/You look in my eyes and I'm screaming inside/that I'm sorry. » Evanescence

Red Jassy
 


Re: Re: Update!

Postby Arwen276 » Sat Jan 24, 2004 6:52 am

I absolutely positively love it!



Okay although I knew about Willow being blind...It's still sad to read about it.

hmm about the other members : how about Spike and Oz?

or Spike and Angel?

and about writing in Willow's POV...she doesn't have any View to be POV-ing about it... KIDDING!! please ignore my lame side's outburst, it's been doing that all day, I must be studying too hard for my finals.

It'd be great I guess...anything would be great, so just do your magic girls!! *makes shooing motion*



UPDATE SOON!!



~Arwen

Hear That Baby? You're My Always... Willow

Arwen276
 


heh heh heh ::smug grin::

Postby ambersagoddess » Sat Jan 24, 2004 9:21 am

heh heh heh, I'm tooooo good



Very sorry for mentioning the possibility of a blind Willow and ruining all your thunder.



Just wanted to say that I got that smirk on my face after I read this chapter. You know, that smirk you get when you're done reading the latest chappie of your favorite fic and it's ready to be mulled over in your head.



Anyway, about the Willow's POV, were it not for Arwen I wouldn't have thought about a blind POV. I could be cool, hell, it would/will be cool. All she can do is feel, and feeling is a very intimate thing, I'm seeing goosebumps and shivering on Tara's part.



A thing on copying notes, she can hear the squeeks of marker on board contact, correct? Well, then she can make out the sound of the sqeeks and come up with letters, hence her sitting in the front of class.



Alright, I'm ranting again, Point Blank: I love the fic, keep writing, don't think of abandoning this one, and hurry with the next chapter.



If you're quick, I'll give you a cookie each.



Happy Writing

-Rei

Spero eorum amo donbit tu animus magnamus



Why yes, the rumors are true, I have patted the Great One's ass...

ambersagoddess
 


Re: Re: Update!

Postby Renee85 » Sat Jan 24, 2004 9:27 am



This is a really great fic! The whole Willow being blind thing was a complete surprise to me, the title didn't even give me a clue. :p



But it's a great twist in all respect, so much so that I'm hooked on this fic already. Kinda reminds me of that movie with Mira Sorvino and Val Kilmer At First Sight... Anyway, I can't wait to read what happens next. So update soon, okay? Great job!





-Renee-:flower





"The moment you have in your heart this extraordinary thing called love and feel the depth, the delight, the ecstasy of it, you will discover that for you the world is transformed." -J. Krishnamurti

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