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New AU Fic: The Cellist

Postby Millerchip77 » Mon Jan 12, 2009 4:46 am

Title The Cellist
Author name Millerchip77
Rating This section G but eventually a lot naughtier ;)
Disclaimer I don't own Willow or Tara or anyone; they belong to ME etc
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Summary The story starts in Germany in the 19th century, it will span about 150 or so years and will eventually see W/T getting it on.
Notes This story came to me a while back whilst I was listening to music. Don't want to spoil story but as this is BETA if you wanna know where its going I'll tell you. This is my first AU soI hope you like it so far - it'll get really dark and gothic. Oh yeah, and if my Yiddish/German sucks I apologise and please correct me.

Chapter 1

She was born Esther Rosenberg in 1872 in Köln, part of the recently unified Germany, to a family of Ashkenazi Jews. Her father Ira was the finest violin maker in the city. He owned a workshop from where he made and a shop from where he sold his instruments. The Rosenberg’s occupied small living quarters at the back of the workshop. Young Esther loved her father very much. He always had time for his daughter, letting her sit in the workshop and watch him and his apprentice Moshe Bauman as they worked delicately on their craft.

Esther was fascinated by the process of violin-making and would sit mesmerised as her and father and Moshe turned blocks of spruce, poplar or willow into the instruments they were destined to become. She loved the smell of the workshop, the aromatic and slightly spicy smell as the wood was carved and shaped, the acrid smell of the hide glue they used and the rich, addictive smell of the spirit varnish used to carefully finish the instruments. The bows in particular fascinated her. She imagined the tailless horses from which the hair used to make them had been taken, could they still run without them?

Moshe would sometimes eat with the family after a day at work and after dinner he and Ira would play. Esther loved to hear her father play his violin. Moshe awould accompany him on the piano and Esther would drift away into her imagination, letting the music take her to places she had never been. They mostly played cantorial, Yiddish songs. Esther yearned to play but her father, though forward thinking in some respects, was adamant that playing was not a woman’s preserve and told Esther, “Tokhter playing is yidishlekh, tradition. It is only for mentshen”.

Though she loved all of the music her father and Moshe would play, Esther’s favourite piece was the Adagio from Beethoven’s Sonata for Violin and Piano in G Major. The slow, melancholic tune haunted Esther; hearing it brought her imagination to life. It stirred something within her, made her think of bravery and tragedy, of ancient sorrows long forgotten. It was a delicate, humble masterpiece. The rich melancholy of the Adagio was something she would come to appreciate in many pieces that contained it, and though she also loved the excitement of an allegro, it was always to the sorrows and subtleties of the adagio to which she was drawn.

Ether’s mother Sheila was not as gentle as her husband or her daughter. Beethoven bored her and she would sigh and throw her eyes to the heavens when her husband suggested to Moshe that they play it, “Ira, ikh bet dikh, not that dirge again, play something cheerful for once”. Sheila was often to be heard scolding her daughter when she failed to complete her chores or took too long to come home from school (“Esther, you are a dreamer. Your head is in the clouds, you need to come back to the ground”). Sheila had been unable to attend school, girls were not allowed to do so in her day, and so she couldn’t understand her daughter’s eagerness to learn, after all a woman’s place was with her husband.

Esther was a good pupil and loved mathematics in particular. Her head seemed naturally attuned to organizing numbers and her teacher marvelled at the way in which she was able to calculate even the most complicated of equations in her head. However school would be short-lived for Esther as girls were educated only until the age of fourteen, then they were expected to enter the domestic sphere and never leave. The injustice of this burned Esther and she began to resent the world in which she lived where women were not allowed to play instruments or go to school or do anything but marry and have children. The tediousness of it all stretched out before Esther like an endlessly yawning tunnel.

Ira was known around the Rhineland as a fine maker of violins. One of his most loyal customers was the conductor of the Köln philharmonic, Herr Pfaff, who ordered the orchestra’s violins from the craftsman. Ira could have been a musician himself but he was too shy, preferring to play only in the comfort of his home. Herr Pfaff was a generous man and always gave Ira two tickets when a performance was taking place. Sheila Rosenberg found the performances to be boring, they always went on for too long and besides, she had chores to do. Therefore Esther would often accompany her father in her mother’s place and quickly developed a real taste for music. Music made sense and she began to understand how it was put together, not unlike algebra really; all of the sections of the orchestra had to blend perfectly in order to achieve the right sound. She especially enjoyed the music of the Romantic Movement. She would get lost in her thoughts, and would be transported to places far away from the violin shop in Köln, places full of adventure. She imagined herself as a romantic hero, rescuing fair maidens and then claiming them. She knew instinctively that these particular kinds of dreamings should be left unspoken, after all before long she would be married and rescuing was also not a woman’s preserve.

As Esther grew older she grew more beautiful and, by the time she was twenty she was considered one of the most beautiful and sought after girls in the Jewish quarter of the city. Her red hair and green eyes were enchanting and she was intelligent and polite to match. She was slight, her limbs long and slender and her body boyish. Her father had many offers for his daughter’s hand, but always turned them down. He wanted the perfect boy for his Esther, and he had yet to appear.

Esther herself had very little interest in the young men who came to woo her; she wanted more from life than simply to become a wife and a mother, she wanted things that she couldn’t articulate. She longed to travel and would listen attentively to Herr Pfaff as he told her father about the orchestra’s latest trip to London, Paris or Rome. How she wished she wasn’t a woman, then she would be free to explore the world, to see all the places she'd imagined.

In the October of her twentieth year a woman came into her father’s shop. By now Esther helped her father, sweeping the floors in the workshop, serving customers and bringing her father and Moshe food and coffee. It was late afternoon, around five o’clock and already it was dark outside. The Autumn air had begun to bite and soon the city would be covered in a snowfall that would linger until February.

Moshe and Ira were busy stringing the set of violins that Herr Pfaff had ordered some weeks ago for the orchestra’s return to Köln when they heard the shop bell announcing a customer. “Esther tokhter, see who that is for your father”.
“Of course, tate”, she replied leaving the workshop.

“Guten abend, kann ich ihnen helfen?” Esther said, noticing that the customer was a woman and that she had her back to her. It was unusual for women to be alone after dark. The woman turned around, Esther was transfixed. She was tall for a woman, and slender. Her red dress was corseted at the waist and this accentuated her height and bosom. The woman’s hair was mostly hidden under her hat, but a few strands had come loose and Esther noticed that it was dark brown, almost black. The woman’s eyes were also dark brown and they regarded Esther, seeming to cut through her, they were cold and dangerous and the most exciting eyes Esther had ever seen.

The woman spoke, “Ja bitte. I have come to buy a violin. A contact I have in Prague told me that Ira Rosenberg’s violins were the finest in central Europe”. Prague. Another place Esther longed to see. The woman spoke German with a Czech accent and Esther surmised correctly that she was from the western part of Bohemia, where the people spoke German as well as Czech.

The woman spoke again, “Well young woman, as I assume that you are not Ira Rosenberg, are you going to fetch him for me or stand there all evening?”
The words snapped Esther out of her daydream and she replied, “I-I’m sorry. Zayt moykhul, I mean entschuldigung bitte. I will go and get my father for you. He…he’s in the workshop, I won’t be a minute, well actually I may be a little longer than a minute but I won’t take too long, at least I’ll try not to but Moshe is there too and they’re smoking and drinking coffee and stringing violins and I'm told that these things take time”. Esther turned and started her walk towards the workshop.

Wait.” The woman spoke the word like a command, Esther had no choice but to obey and she turned to once again face the woman. “What is your name?” Esther obeyed the woman’s command and turned around, “I-I’m Esther, gnädiges Fraülein, Esther Rosenberg”. The woman regarded Esther once again with her penetrative stare, seeming to take in the younger woman’s whole body. Esther felt the woman’s eyes all over her; they seemed almost to touch her as they moved from her feet to legs that were hidden by the work dress and apron she wore. She felt the woman’s eyes move over and linger upon her breasts and finally come to rest on her face again. Esther grew suddenly hot, she felt her cheeks redden and heat in places that were, well, private. The woman grinned before saying softly “You don’t look like an Esther, Fraülein. You look like a Wiedenbaum, a willow tree. Now go and get your father for me”.
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Re: New AU Fic: The Cellist

Postby Hemiola » Mon Jan 12, 2009 7:44 am

Oh my, I really can't wait to see where this story goes, both because of the very authentic German/Yiddish language details, and because of the fact that I myself am a classical musician (although I just happen to be a keyboardist ;-) ).

Please continue. Although you have stated that this is AU, I can't help but wonder how or if you will be bringing any other characters from the BtVS universe into the tale.
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Re: New AU Fic: The Cellist

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Mon Jan 12, 2009 8:23 am

I'm guessing this is sort of like a Prologue.Good one.
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Re: New AU Fic: The Cellist

Postby Millerchip77 » Wed Jan 14, 2009 1:46 pm

Thanks for reading guys - gonna post story on Pens now...

Hemiola - thanks for comments, might try and weave a few other characters in, not sure how yet though...
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Re: New AU Fic: The Cellist

Postby Nenyath » Fri Jan 16, 2009 8:07 am

Hi Millerchip,
I read your first chapter on pens yesterday and it is a really strong beginning! I wonder if it is too late to get the pleasure od beta-ing this wonderful story to be? I'm no good with Yiddish and not very well with German, but I am on my 4th semester of studying English ;)
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Re: New AU Fic: The Cellist

Postby Millerchip77 » Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:02 am

Nenyath wrote:Hi Millerchip,
I read your first chapter on pens yesterday and it is a really strong beginning! I wonder if it is too late to get the pleasure od beta-ing this wonderful story to be? I'm no good with Yiddish and not very well with German, but I am on my 4th semester of studying English


Hey there - I'd be happy for you to BETA the story - as well as anyone else who wishes to. I'll post chapter 2 later today (hopefully).

Thanks again for reading...
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Re: New AU Fic: The Cellist

Postby Nenyath » Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:09 am

Awesome!
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Re: New AU Fic: The Cellist

Postby Millerchip77 » Wed Jan 21, 2009 2:09 pm

Title The Cellist
Author name Millerchip77
Rating PG maybe...
Disclaimer I don't own Willow or Tara or anyone; they belong to ME etc
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Summary The story starts in Germany in the 19th century, it will span about 150 or so years and will eventually see W/T getting it on. - we have to wait a while for this though...
Notes This story came to me a while back whilst I was listening to music. Don't want to spoil story but as this is BETA if you wanna know where its going I'll tell you. This is my first AU soI hope you like it so far - it'll get really dark and gothic. Oh yeah, and if my Yiddish/German sucks I apologise and please correct me.

Chapter 2

The woman watched as Esther turned and once again made her way to her father’s workshop and if you’d listened closely you might have heard her exhale with a, “Hmmm”. Soon a middle-aged man with a greying beard and hair entered the shop through the curtain that Esther had disappeared through.

Ira Rosenberg was struck as his daughter had been by the woman’s beauty, by her porcelain skin and dark, intriguing eyes. He smiled as he said, “Gnädiges Fraülein, my daughter tells me that you wish to buy a violin?”
“Yes. It should be made of willow and I wish that it be finished in a week. I will send a carriage and your daughter will bring it to me. It does not look good you understand, for a single woman to receive gentleman callers and I do not have time to collect it myself, I leave for Prague next Friday and I have much to prepare”.
“Ye, of course fraylin. A week today. Esther will bring it to you”.
“Dankeschon mein herr, send the invoice along with your daughter”.
“Ye, ganz wie Sie wünschen, Fraülein”.

From behind the curtain which separated the shop from the workshop Esther listened to her father’s conversation with the beautiful stranger, and for reasons she couldn’t explain, her heart pounded in her chest.

Esther could barely wait for the next week to pass. She helped her mother prepare Shabes and when it came she sung the akdomes with her usual level of reverence. Once Saturday was over she resumed the chores she did for her father in the shop. Her head however was full Thursday and she could not wait for it to arrive. When it finally came she wore her best clothes (‘Tokhter the Fraülein is a gentlewoman, you have to look your best’) and spent the morning polishing the violin, it was one of the most beautiful her father had made and she wanted the woman to appreciate it.

Just after lunch Esther heard a carriage outside the shop and when the bell rang and she entered the shop with her father, a young man bowed to her and said, “Fraülein Rosenberg?” Esther nodded in response, “Fraü Novak is waiting for you”. Esther was surprised an inexplicably disappointed to hear that the mysterious woman was married but, as she bid her father farewell with an “a gutn” and received his “a gut yor tokhter” in return as she climbed into the carriage, pure excitement took over.

They soon arrived at a grand town house in the richest area of Köln. The driver helped Esther down from the carriage and led her into the house. They climbed a flight of stairs and reached a grand oak door. The young man knocked and Esther heard the woman say, “Být zvolen, bring her through”. Esther was ushered into the room beyond and the young man closed the door behind her.

The room was sumptuous. Decorated in white and gold it was candle lit with heavy red curtains shutting out the light. In the centre of the room the woman sat at and was playing an elegant grand piano. Esther recognised the piece as part of a Bach duet for piano and violin. She stopped playing and, smiling, turned to face Esther. “I didn’t introduce myself to you the other day Fraülein; I am Eliska, Eliska Novak”. She held out her hand and Esther took it, and, noticing how cold it was, shook it.

“Forgive me for the darkness Fraülein, I have a condition and cannot bear the sunlight”. If Esther had not been so enchanted by Eliska she would have remarked that the day was cold and overcast and that there was no sunlight; as it was, she was simply glad to be back in the company of this enigmatic woman.

Eliska fixed Esther with a stare, once again seeming to strip the young woman bare with her eyes. Esther’s cheeks reddened as she blurted out, “I…I have the violin. It’s made of wiedenbaum, just like you asked. It’s one of the most beautiful my father has made a-and he’s made a lot ‘cause…well that’s his job and he’s good at it. He makes violins for the orchestra and…”
“Shhh child. I can see you have the violin. However the only thing of beauty I see in this room is you, my little Willowtree. Now take a seat, let me pour you some wine and then you can tell me about yourself”.

“Entschuldigung Frau Novak, but I do not drink alcohol; my father forbids it for I am a woman.” Eliska continued to pour the second glass of wine as she spoke, “You are indeed a woman and an exquisite one at that. Let me ask you something Willowtree. May I?” Esther nodded her consent, “if I could take away all of the restrictions of your sex, all that prevents you from living as you wish, what would you wish for?” Esther’s face contorted as she thought about Eliska’s question.

Eliska watched transfixed as Esther’s eyes sought out her imaginary, as she grasped that which lay beyond her reach. The younger woman blinked and then regarded Eliska, meeting her gaze with force as she replied, “I am unable to answer your question. There is so much that I wish for and more that I wish not to be. I wish to play an instrument, to attend university, to travel. I wish not to marry and I...I feel like I’m not a woman like other women. I…” Esther’s monologue was cut short abruptly as Eliska, in one seamless movement, stood, moved to where the younger woman sat, cupped her cheek with her hand and pressed her lips to Esther’s.

Eliska’s move shocked Esther and the younger woman tried to twist her head out of the older woman’s grasp. Eliska tightened her grip, bringing her other hand to Esther’s face as she rasped, “I see what you are Willowtree, I see through you. I see your boredom and your frustration, I see your desires, the pleasures you crave but fear to articulate. I can give these things to you…” Esther couldn’t take her eyes away from Eliska’s, she felt light headed, dizzy even, she thought briefly that this is what being drunk must feel like though she had not touched the wine that had been poured for her.

The older woman continued, “I can take you away from this life, show you all that you wish to see. I could make your body sing and we would dance to its tune every night. I have another question Willowtree, may I ask it?” Esther could do nothing but once again nod her consent. “In order for me to do this you would have to leave all that you know behind and come with me. Could you do this?”

Blood pumped through Esther’s body. She had never felt anything like it, she felt it course from the heart nestled in her chest to her head, from the tips of her fingers to the soles of her feet. She felt every vein, every capillary in her body surge with the force of it. She heard it rushing past her ears; it was deafening. Eliska still grasped her face, her eyes cloudy with something Esther had never seen in another woman before; desire.

As Eliska’s eyes bore into Esther two lives flashed before her. In the first one she married, her father was proud and her mother satisfied. She bore two children and her husband was a good man. She was bound to him and cooked for him, cleaned their house and tended to her children. She died an old woman weary with lifes hard work. In the second life she saw the world, she lived through generations. She left Germany and travelled to places that scarcely existed yet. She played the piano and danced all night to music not yet written. She saw someone; a woman with fair hair, that woman loved her…

Esther’s head swam as images flashed in her mind, faster and faster they came until she no longer knew who she was, who she wanted to become, where she wanted to go. Still Eliska looked into her; her hands still grasping her face. Esther opened her mouth and before she had chance to control her response, she spoke, “I will come with you”.
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Re: New AU Fic: The Cellist

Postby Hemiola » Wed Jan 28, 2009 11:20 am

An excellent second chapter--please continue.

A couple of points about the violin:

1. Willow is not a good wood for stringed instruments--the acoustical properties aren't good. It should be made of spruce or something like it (there are, of course, a few stringed instruments that have unusual inlays, such as ivory or mother-of-pearl for decorative purposes).

2. Since it can take a year, or even many years to make a fine stringed instrument (it's a question of drying the wood and applying the varnish properly), Eliska should say something like "I want the finest of the instruments you are currently finishing up" or "the finest completed instrument you have on hand" or some such thing. It would just be more authentic. ;-)

Question: I take it that Eliska is a vamp. Will this be a "vamp Willow" story or she going to be rescued by Buffy or Tara? I'm just curious. :)
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Re: New AU Fic: The Cellist

Postby Millerchip77 » Thu Feb 19, 2009 1:35 am

Hemiola - thanks for the comments, sorry I didn't get them in time before I posted the story on pens.

I'm afriad Willow will have to rescue herself...see below...

Chapter 4

London in the late nineteenth century was a vast and growing metropolis made up of two cities. The West End was prosperous, a playground for the rich with lavish theatres and eateries dominating its wide boulevards. It would be easy to think that its streets were indeed paved with gold as the fairy tale suggested.

The East End by contrast was a wretched hovel. Its desperate and impoverished residents; whores, hawkers, drunkards, villains and oversized families were crammed together, their combined stench hung in the air like a fever, permeating every nook and cranny, every gully and crack in the pavement.

Willow, as she came to be known, and Eliska were not bound, like many women of their time, by the confines of their sex and enjoyed the best that London had to offer. They spent their days in a lavish house in Knightsbrigde and were waited on by Petr, Eliska’s boy servant, the same one who had driven Esther to Eliska all those years ago in Köln. They would hunt at night in the East End, even the police were afraid to venture there and no-one cared about a missing pauper. The slums were a smorgasbord for creatures of the night.

Where the duo lived, in Knightsbridge, was also the home of the Royal Albert Hall, a fantastic music hall from which the two vampires heard many concerts. Willow further developed her fine musical ear and loved the music of Schuman, Mozart and the Mighty Handful; Balakirev, Cui, Mussorgsky, Rimsky-Korsakov, and Borodin. She particularly loved to hear Rimsky-Korsakov’s Scheherazade, and would drift far away from the prison her sire kept her in. The music would take her across the seas, to adventure, danger and love.

She was unable to listen to Beethoven though, and she would not understand why for many years to come.

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Eliska had wished to possess Esther from the moment she saw her. She found intelligence in the younger woman’s eyes, and sensed the frustration she felt at the life that was mapped out before her. Eliska had longed for many years for a companion, someone with whom to rampage through the hours of darkness. However Eliska found her creation to be more wilful than she would have liked.

Firstly there had been the matter of her name. She insisted on being called Willow. Eliska thought that this lacked elegance. But Willow had chosen her name because although she was no longer Esther she was also not Eliska’s possession, her Willowtree. She was something between the two and so she chose to be known as Willow.

Then there was the violin. Eliska had wanted the violin for Petr, they were to duet together. But when Eliska had seen Esther she had changed her mind, and had the violin made for her companion. However Willow refused to play it, saying that she ‘didn’t want to be reminded of the fool who made it or of the fool I used to be’. And so the instrument remained in its case, the dust gathering atop.

The first kill as a creature of the night usually left one exhilarated; but it had made Willow feel hollow. You see in her hurry to possess the young woman Eliska had not drunk deeply enough to remove every trace of the young woman Willow once was. She still had the ability to empathise, something most vampires lacked. Though bound to her sire Willow hated Eliska for forcing her down this dark path and was sickened by her sire’s violent antics.

Eliska liked to torture her victims, to drink from them until they were almost drained of life. She would listen to their pleas and take delight as they begged for their lives. She would hush them, comfort them and promise to release them, watching in fascination as the light of hope returned to their dying eyes. Then she would finish them, sink her teeth into them and drain them of every drop of life. She would bid Willow join in and for a time she did, out of necessity rather than pleasure.

In the small hours of a cold, December night four years after she was turned, Willow’s resolve was broken. Eliska had hunted down a young man of about twenty years. They had stalked him through one of London’s many East End slums and had eventually cornered him.

Eliska had gotten to her favourite part of the kill. She was covered in the young man’s blood and had released him, waiting for him to beg for his pitiful existence. “Well young man, I wish to kill you. Shall you not beg for your life?” Eliska snapped at him. “No. I ain’t beggin’ for nothing ‘cause I ain’t got nothing. Kill me if you like – just do it quick. Be done with it”.

Eliska was furious. This was not the way it was supposed to be, she kicked him as he lay curled on the floor and elicited from him a loud moan. “I said beg me boy, now beg me!”
“No!” He replied, “never…I won’t…” Willow had seen enough. She was tired of following her sire around and longed to be free from her clutches. “Eliska!” Willow snapped, “leave him be”.

Eliska was outraged; she turned away from the boy who was trying to stem the flow of blood pouring from his neck wound. “Wie bitte? Let him go? How dare you speak to me like that…” Whilst Eliska ranted Willow had positioned herself in between her sire and her victim. “Enough Eliska. Let the boy go”.
“Or what? What will you do? You are nothing. I regret the day I ever stepped into that filthy violin shop. I bestowed upon you a dark power; we were to walk the night together, hunt together…”
“Well you were wrong. You tricked me a-and in your greed to have me you didn’t drink deeply enough; you left too much of Esther inside me. Now let him go”.
“Wiedenbaum if you don’t move I will go through you. He’s meat, that’s all, just meat. Eliska stepped towards Willow but Willow was too fast. Her instinct took over and she kicked at Eliska’s knee hard, relishing the crunching sound as her sire’s knee dislocated. Eliska screamed in pain and dropped to the floor. Willow wasn’t finished and she brought her boot-clad foot down onto Eliska’s skull; she knew it wouldn’t kill her sire but it would slow her down for a while.

Eliska lost consciousness with a groan and Willow went to the boy. She saw him lying there and for a second she thought he’s so vulnerable, and you are hungry…finish him…But then he opened his eyes and looked up at her with a gaze full of sorrow. Willow pulled him to his feet and hissed at him in her broken English, “Leave. Now. Get out of here before she vakes up”. The boy looked at his flame haired savoir and whispered, “Thank you ma’am” before running away from her as fast as he could.

Willow stepped over the fallen form of her sire and walked into the darkness. She was free.

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He walked the streets of the slum looking for pudding. He had already consumed two whores and a hawker but he was still peckish and fancied a last tasty treat before the sun came up. He wandered down a filthy back alley, noticing a pile of rags at the end of it.

He sniffed the air, and recognised the damp, mossy smell of one of his own kind. The pile of rags was now beneath his feet, only he noticed that the pile moved, and groaned. He knelt down and flipped the form over. She was tasty, very tasty. Her dark hair and pale skin was accentuated by the blood that had dried on her delicate chin. He scooped her up into his arms and as he stood said, “Well pet, we’d better get you indoors before the sun comes up, eh?”
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Re: New AU Fic: The Cellist

Postby Hemiola » Fri Mar 06, 2009 9:51 am

Excellent update, Millerchip. Please continue.

I wonder who this new male character is?
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