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A beta for a junior writer?

Postby Red Ink » Mon Mar 25, 2013 2:06 pm

Hello everyone !
I have this little bit of a story (21 pages, really) but I would like help from a beta to see if it's okay (clear enough, interesting,etc...).
So if there's anyone interested just be warned that it's kind of angsty and twisted. It resolves around one of the character's point of view and I'm working very closely on it's psychology, but of course when you write it, things seems to run smooth but it's not always the case. English is not my first language either, so I may have made some mistakes.
(I'm drifting away from the point here, but it's hard because you have to translate the pictures you create into your first language automatically, then your second language...)
Anyway, I also need to know if I respected the FAQ.

It's about horses, too.

Thank you,you who just read my post!
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Une fleur qui ressemble à mon rouge idéal."


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Re: A beta for a junior writer?

Postby Azirahael » Sun Jun 16, 2013 5:16 pm

Sure, if you're still looking, i'm free :)

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