developing a willow season 5 fict need advice

[cammy]

im gonna be starting a fict where willow is the one being brain drained by glory instead of tara anyone have any ideas on what kind of stuff i can put ive not seen a story where willow is the one taken i could use all the help i can thanks

[cammy]

did a redue cany figure how to deleate this

[Paint the Sky]

Cammy, the concept sounds ok in principle but there could be major pitfalls along the way, the first being

SLOOK: She's the new one among you. It wasn't hard to figure out. The glorious one will have found her by now.

Willow is not the new one, so first it would need to be established how she came to be connected with the scoobies. And how does Tara fit in, is it a case of complete role reversal in that she met Buffy in junior year etc.

Secondly, their fight was about Willow getting too powerful with the underlying subtext that she was already abusing the laws of magic and wicca. It was this willingness to circumvent a natural learning and development that leads to Willow being able to use the dark magics that made her a threat to to Glory.

How would Tara compromise her principals in this respect?

It's the dark magics and the need for vengence that make Willow powerful in her first encounter with Glory, I just don't see Tara in that scenario, not cannon Tara anyway.

It's also possible that that the encounter with Glory supplemented with this first use (or second if you include Angel's re-souling) of dark magic's is what makes Willow powerful enough to take her on in The Gift and enable her to brainsuck Glory and return Tara's sanity. Without compromising her faith and respect for wicca and magic would Tara ever be powerful enough to do the same that Willow did.

If you follow cannon and Buffy dies, and if Tara has been able to get Willow back, following cannon also, does Tara compromise herself further by being the only one with enough power to resurrect the slayer? Remember how she refused to help Dawn after Joyce dies.

In reading your post and your concept these were the first things that came to mind. I'm not saying the story couldn't be done, but it might be more involved and complicated than you bargined for.

I hope you don't mind the above thoughts, and they are not meant as a criticism but as a way of helping you look at the bigger picture. Hope they helped.

[cammy]

Willow: "S-O-R-T of. I mean, I just feel like the-the junior partner here. You've been doing everything longer than me. You've been out longer ... you've been practicing witchcraft way longer."

Tara looked upon her luver her eyes filled with a deep sadness

Tara: "Oh, but you're way beyond me there! In just a few- I mean ... it frightens me how powerful you're getting."

Willow looked back at Tara her own face frowning "That's a weird word."

Tara at Willows tone begins to smile nervously "Getting?"

Willow: "It frightens you? *I* frighten you?"

Tara jumps up from the bed "That is *so* not what I meant. I meant I-impresses - impressive."

Willow: "Well, I took Psych 101. I mean, I took it from an evil government scientist who was skewered by her Frankenstein-like creation before the final, but I know what a Freudian slip is."

Tara look upon at Willow her face showing increasingly upset.

Willow: "D-don't you trust me?"

Tara: "With my life."

Willow: "That's not what I mean."

Tara: "Can't we just go to the fair? "

Willow: "I don't feel real multicultural right now." getting up Willow begins pacing around the room

"Wh ... what is it about me that you don't trust?"

Tara: "It's not that. I worry, sometimes. You're, you're changing so much, so fast. I don't know where you're heading."

Willow: "Where I'm heading?"

Tara: "I'm saying everything wrong."

Willow: "No, I think you're being pretty clear. This isn't about the witchcraft. It's about the other changes in my life."

Tara: "I trust you. I just ... I don't know where I'm gonna fit in ... in your life when..."

Willow: "When ... I change back? Yeah, this is a college thing, just a, a little experimentation before I get over the thrill and head back to boys' town."

Tara becomes quiet and tears runs down her face

Willow: "You think that?"

Tara: "Should I?"

Willow: "I'm really sorry that I didn't establish my lesbo street cred before I got into this relationship. You're the only woman I've ever fallen in love with, so ... how on earth could you ever take me seriously?"

Willow walks to the door angerly

Tara: "Willow, please!"

Willow: "Have fun at the Magic Shop"

Willow walks out and heads to the fair her mind in a haze as she just sits down and watches all the happy people pass by when she feels a hand touch hers and turns to face it and comes face to face with the insane hell goddess Glory

Glory: "Is this seat taken?"

Willow "Oh yea I was waiting for someone of the non skanky variety so off you go now now"

Glory looking angerly at the redhead looks upon her with a look of faint hurt "Thats so uncaring I thought you goodys were suppose to be nicer I just came here to just hang out, you know just us girls. You like that sort of thing, don't you?"

Willow "I like a girl and shes not a total skank like you and by the way you really give skanks a bad name"

Glory angerly grabs Willow's hand and begins crushing it the sound of Willow bones breaking under the grip were deafening.

Willow gasps and begins to whimper as Glory looks around at the other fair attendees. The people walk around not seeming to notice anything oblivius to the terror happening.

Glory: "Nah. They won't help you. I'd kill them. You know that."

Willow begins to look around desperately her hand killing her as she holds tears in

Glory: "Your friend the slayer has my key and I want it back and she wont give it to me so I was hoping for that blond girlfriend of yours but I guess ill have to settle for you"

Willow: "Leave Tara alone you bitch"

Glory: "No can do but I guess its time to go I got friends of yours to kill and keys to find but before I go I have a present for you"

Willow looking defiantly at the insane goddess spits at her the spit hitting Glory right in the face and turning the lips of the insane goddess into a angry frown

Glory: "You'll pay for that"

Glory: "Think about it. You think your hand hurts? Imagine what you'd feel with my fingers wiggling in your brain. It doesn't kill you. What it does ... is make you feel like you're in a noisy little dark room ... naked and ashamed ... and there are things in the dark that need to hurt you because you're bad ... little pinching things that go in your ears ... and crawl on the inside of your skull. And you know ... that if the noise and the crawling would stop ... that you could remember how to get out."

With that Glory raises her hand and inserts a finger into Willows head a blue light coming from it as both Glory and Willow screams in pain

::Meanwhile at the Magic Shop::

Giles: "I hope this isn't a return. Everyone wants petrified hamsters and they're never happy with them"

Tara walks in her face full of sadness Giles looks upon her with concern

Giles: "You all right?"

Tara: "Yeah."

Giles: "Ah yes, because your good mood is both obvious and contagious."

Tara: "I had a fight with Willow. It was awful."

Giles: "Oh, I'm sorry."

Giles picks up the box and begins walking toward some shelves behind the counter

Tara: "Me too."

Giles: "You two don't quarrel much, do you?"

Tara: "Never. Until today."

Giles: "Well, now it's over."

Tara's face turns deathly pale and more tears begin to run down her beautiful face

Tara: "Over? How can it be over? I just found her!"

Giles: "The quarrel is over."

Tara becomes quieter and looks up with a soft voice

"Oh. Yeah."

Giles: "Uh, you'll feel better when you've made your apologies and you'll know that you can fight without the world ending." ::walks toward the rear door:: "I know it all seems bleak now, but as they say, this too..."

Giles opens the door only to discover one of Glory's demons, Slook, who was listening intensely at the door. Slook falls into the room.

Giles: "...shall pass."

Tara and Anya both stare at the ugly monster.

Giles grabs and holds the demon by the ear, dragging him into the shop and throwing him into a chair.

Tara and Anya rush quickly over to him.

ANYA: "Wow!"

Giles: "Now, what do we have here?"

ANYA: "Oh, he's one of those things that work for Glory! "

Giles: "Yes. How helpful."

SLOOK: "I do indeed work for the god. Let me go if you do not wish to incur her anger."

Giles: "Well, she's not here. What a marvelous opportunity for you and me to talk."

SLOOK: "I will not betray Glorificus. I will never talk, no matter what heinous torture-"

Giles: "Actually, you're talking quite a lot, just not about the right things. Tell us why you're here."

SLOOK: "No words shall pass my lips that will bring peril to Glorificus."

Giles doesn't take his eyes off the demon, but points with his hand.

Giles: "Girls, get the twine that's on the counter, let's tie him up."

Tara and Anya turn away. the girls hear some sort of rustling noise as Slook begins to sob. The girls turn back in amazement.

SLOOK: "No, no! I'll tell you! Anything! Please! Whatever you want! Just, I'll, anything!"

The girls walk back over to Giles.

ANYA: "What happened?"

Giles: "He changed his mind."

SLOOK: "I'm ... I'm supposed to watch. We're watching the Slayer's people ... while Glory fetches the key."

Giles, Tara and Anya's faces turns horribly alarmed.

Tara: "Glory knows who the key is?"

Giles: "Oh god." ::removing his glasses he begins to clean viciously::

ANYA: "We've got to call Buffy."

SLOOK: "Too late. Too late. Glorificus will find the witch, and there's nothing you can do to stop her."

ANYA: "Witch? What do you mean?"

Tara's face turns to a look of pure horrified "Willow!"

Tara turns to the door and begins to run out.

SLOOK: She's the smart one among you. It wasn't hard to figure out. The glorious one will have found her by now."

Giles: "Tara, wait! I'll go with-"

Tara: "No! Call Buffy a-and go look in Willow's room, I'm gonna check the fair."

And with that Tara runs out.

Tara: "Willow!"

Tara desperately begins running through the crowds.

Tara: "Willow!"

Willow and Glory are seated on the bench Willows face showing pure pain as she stares at the evil goddess.

Tara seeing her luver in danger runs toward them.

Tara: "By force of heart and mindful power, by waning time and waxing hour ..."

Glory puts her hand on Willow s head. As people keep walking past them oblivious of the pain on the young red heads face and blocking them from view so it's difficult for Tara to tell what's happening.

Tara: "I echo Diana, um, when I decree ... uh, what is it, what is it?"

Glory with both her hands on Willow's temples. begins to absorb Willows mind

Tara: "No! No!"

The light begins to stream out as Glory's fingers enter Willow's head. Both Willow and Glory cry out.

Tara reaches the edge of the path but is blocked by the Chinese dragon people and has to stop.

Tara: "That she I love must now be free!"

Willow with Glory's fingers still in her head and the light streaming out as Willow makes a pained face.

People continue walking past and blocking her from Tara's pained view as she trys to see what is happening.

Tara: "Willow!"

The crowd clears momentarily and we see Willow sitting alone on the bench with her head lolling to one side.

Tara: "No!!"

Tara runs over and sits on the bench, grabbing Willow by the shoulders. painfully Willow doesn't even react or look at her.

Tara: "Willow, Willow, are you okay?"

Tara: "It's dirty. It's all dirty. And all over me!"

Willow begins brushing at her stomach as if to brush off dirt.

Willow whimpers: "Dirty. Dirty. I'm bad. Bad."

Tara her face full of tears "Willow. Oh, I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry."

Tara pulls Willow's head down onto her shoulder and rocks her gently.

Tara grabbing her cell phone quickly calls the magic shop

"Buffy thank the goddess your there Glory got Willow shes just like Glory's other victims get to the hospital Willows hurt I think hands broken and who knows what else"

::Sunnydale Memorial::

Tara sits guardingly by her luv her blue eyes shot with redness from the endless crying shes endured since finding Willow at the fair

Tara: “Can she go home now?”

Doctor: ”Unfortunately, no. Hospital policy dictates we keep her for the night”.

Tara: ”But does she have to? I-I can take care of her at home.”

Willow: ”It's poisoned. Why don't I tell you that? It, it has to be checked, though”.

Doctor: ”She your sister?”

Willow: ”I-I-it has to be verified, of course. Anyone can tell you that. Of course. Of course, of course.”

Tara her face full of lost looks into the doctors eyes: ”She's my everything.”

Doctor: ”Well, you can get her released first thing in the morning. But she's gotta spend one night in the psych ward. Just for observation. We'll keep an eye on her, do a couple basic tests, then you can take her home. Does that sound fair?”

Tara nods at the young doctor

Doctor:“Well, sit tight then, and I'll send a nurse by in a few minutes to pick up Willow.”

Xander: ”Man, words cannot express how much I hate this place.”

Giles: ”It's dreadful.”

ANYA: ”It's like communism.”

Buffy runs in just arriving her forehead sweatining “Hey. Tara, I'm so sorry.”

Willow: "They kill mice.”

Buffy: “Tara I'm sorry it took me so long, but Dawn's safe with Spike, so I-I can stay as long as you need.”

Tara: “I'm so scared.”

A nurse walks into room and begins taking vitals on Willow "Willow here seems to be in good health is there a history of mental problems?"

Tara: "Not that I know of any"

Just then the doctor walks into the room "I'm afraid ill have to ask you all to come back tomorrow Willow here needs her rest"

Buffy: "Yea sure come on Tara you can stay at my place with the rest of us I don't want you on your own"

Tara: "Thanks Buffy for everything"

The nurse returns bringing in a wheelchair and begins gently helping Willow into it

Willow turns toward the nurse her face clearly looking upset “Don't! Please don't with that treachery!” turning her face toward Tara's looking like a child's “ I told the cat. And now I beg my mother sitting all alone.”

Tara: “Bye, Willow. I'll see you tomorrow. I love you.”

As the nurse begins wheeling Willow out Tara begins moving toward her

Xander: “Tara. No. It's just for one night.”

Tara: “Yeah, I-I know, but ... it's a whole night. I don't think I can sleep without her.”

ANYA: “You can sleep with me.” Everyone just turns and looks at the former vengeance demon with a mixture of confusion and terrifying “Well, now that came out a lot more lesbian than it sounded in my head.”

Buffy: “Tar, you just have to rest, okay? Right now there's nothing you can do.”

Tara: “Yes there is.”

Buffy: “No. No way. You cannot even think about taking on Glory!”

Tara: “You saw what she did to Willow! I can't let her get away with it!”

Buffy: “No, you *have* to let her get away with it. Even I'm no match for her, you *know* that!”

Tara: “But maybe I am.”

Buffy: “You're *not*! And I won't let you go.”

Tara: “This is not your choice, it's *mine*.”

Buffy: “This is *not* the time.”

Tara: “When Buffy? When is? When *you* feel like it? When it's someone you love as much as I love Willow? When it's Dawn? Is that it?”

Buffy: 'When we have a *chance*. We'll fight her, when we have a chance. You wouldn't last 5 minutes with her Tara. She's a *god*.”

Tara: “Fine. I'll wait.”

Buffy: “It's the only way.”

Tara: “Yeah”.

Buffy: “Can I do anything?”

Tara: “Just let me be alone.”

::Tara's dorm room::

Tara rushes in and beings throwing books around and from behind her bookcase she pulls out an old leather book

"Mommy please help me in my time of need"

Tara hears a knock on her door and peaks through the spyhole

"Mr. Giles hello"

Giles: "Tara I wanted to make sure your ok I know you must be under a lot of stress lately"

Tara turns her eyes sparkling with anger "You understand how I feel you don't have a clue Mr Giles Willow is hurting cause of that bitch I want payback"

Giles: "I know Tara I understand but you cant fight with dark magics you know better"

Tara: "Dark magics Giles I wont ever use dark magics not even at this time I wont go that way but maybe light magic could help us"

Giles: "Tara your knowledge and caring for both Wicca and magic is great and I will trust you to do the right thing for Willow"

Tara: "Thanks Mr. Giles I will do what I can"

[cammy]

sky thanks for replying let me see if i can give me thoughts and ideas

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Willow is not the new one, so first it would need to be established how she came to be connected with the scoobies. And how does Tara fit in, is it a case of complete role reversal in that she met Buffy in junior year etc. -

that part was a mistake i didnt work that out till late last night i am trying to put the acutall text of that ep in a diffrent light.

Secondly, their fight was about Willow getting too powerful with the underlying subtext that she was already abusing the laws of magic and wicca. It was this willingness to circumvent a natural learning and development that leads to Willow being able to use the dark magics that made her a threat to to Glory.

How would Tara compromise her principals in this respect? -

ur right tara doesnt have the darkness in her to do exactly what willow would do so i was thinking of tara using strong light spells in place of wilows dark spells she used to pound on glory i understand willow and tara are diffrent from eachother

It's the dark magics and the need for vengence that make Willow powerful in her first encounter with Glory, I just don't see Tara in that scenario, not cannon Tara anyway.

It's also possible that that the encounter with Glory supplemented with this first use (or second if you include Angel's re-souling) of dark magic's is what makes Willow powerful enough to take her on in The Gift and enable her to brainsuck Glory and return Tara's sanity. Without compromising her faith and respect for wicca and magic would Tara ever be powerful enough to do the same that Willow did.-----

tara is no weakling even though josh made her seem like that alot during the early seasons im gonna try to use her strgeths in my story

If you follow cannon and Buffy dies, and if Tara has been able to get Willow back, following cannon also, does Tara compromise herself further by being the only one with enough power to resurrect the slayer? Remember how she refused to help Dawn after Joyce dies. ----

[b]that is a part im having major trouble with and i hope to find a way to make it work out but not sure how ill be more than happy to take ideas though[/b]

[Paint the Sky]

A possible way around the resurrection of Buffy is to change the outcome of The Gift.

It is the presence of Doc on the tower that leads to Dawn's blood being spilled to open the door between dimensions, so if you have Spike throwing Doc off the tower before he bleeds her then no portal will open and no need for Buffy's sacrifice.

In terms of your plan to use light magics as Tara's offence against Glory, I'm not sure they would be enough.

I still think that the dark magics are the key for Willow's strength against Glory, and you would have to find a plausible way for Tara to involve herself in their use.

We know Tara would do anything for Willow at this stage of their relationship, so you could use that angle for her to compromise her principles.

If you were to begin with leaving out the first attack on Glory and concentrate on Tara's pain and sense of uselessness after Willow gets brain sucked. You could put in parts were she and Giles examine the routes were light magic's could take them in their quest to return Willow's sanity. The fact that none would be powerful enough to help in the fight against Glory add to Tara's pain and frustration, leading her to a path she would not normally follow. Try and show the crisis of conscience she faces in having to make her discision. During this period show her interaction with Willow. Show the pain and the hurt, these are the things which influence the change. Use Tara's sense of weakness that has been instilled into her by her Father and brother, bring her anger to the surface, make years of being told your weak and useless the catylyst.


As I said Tara would do anything for soul-mate, remember, she helps, reluctantly, to raise Buffy, so there is a precedent there. And, if you go back to when Dawn wanted her to help with the Joyce thing she knew why it was dangerous thing to do. Is it possible after the death of her own Mother that she considered doing the same thing? She did tell Buffy that she had gone off the rails at that time. Could that mean she dabbled in the dark side and then came to her senses?

Having Tara go to the extreme of compromising her principles, doesn't neccessarily have to lead down the same road as Willow went. Tara is more aware of the seductive elements within dark magics, so you could have her, Willow and Giles head to the coven in Devon after the defeat of Glory and set up a story within the coven where Tara is helped to deal with the outcome of actions, guilt and remorse etc, and find her way back onto the path of light.

I really think there is a good story in having Tara be the one to save Willow in this context, but it needs to be well thought out, particulary the changes in cannon, and be plausible.

I wish you luck with it.

[cammy]

thanks paint for ur help

i edited the chapter what u think

[Paint the Sky]

I still think it's a story that need to written with care, not just substituting Tara for Willow. Willow's dialogue was written for her character, and some of it will seem very out of place being spoken by Tara. For instance, her interaction with Buffy at the hospital - Willow could get away with that given her long relationship with the slayer. Would Tara really have said that at that point in her relationship with Buffy?

I see you've already posted the first part on pens and people like the concept, but I would take on board the feedback that 'script' format may not be the most comfortable way for people to enjoy your story.

Personally, I avoid any fics that are written this way no matter how good the plot and dialogue are, and I would imagine there are others who feel the same. But, it's your fic, so again good luck with it.

PTS

[cammy]

i got first part out of way hopefully things can look better ill do some beta posting in future showings but im doing all i can and this isnt an easy story to write

[cammy]

::Buffy's home::

A car pulls up and out steps Buffy, Xander, Tara, and Willow

Tara rushes out of the car and gets a wheelchair from the back of the car and rolls it over to Willow's side

"Come on baby we are home lets get you out of this cold wind" Tara walks over and with Buffy's help pick up and put Willow into the wheelchair. Tara bends over and kisses Willow's blank faced forehead gently.

"But the kitty's have all gone flying home i want to see the kittyroo's" Willow said grabbing Tara’s hand.

Buffy walks slowly over to Tara and Willow's side and takes over the wheelchairs bars. "I'll roll her in, come on i got you both all set in moms room your staying here with friends"

"Thanks Buffy we better hurry its almost time for Willows bath and med's we've got a schedule to keep according to the doctors."

Inside Tara and Buffy began heading to the bathroom and began helping to remove Willows clothes, Willow began looking at her best friend and luver with a childish interest and began trying to grasp at the washrag and began whimpering “The ducky is fluffy"

Tara and Buffy began cleaning the redhead off and with Buffy carefully keeping her eyes averted from Willows privates as Tara began cleaning Willow with a carefulness and luvingness that only she herself could ever manage

Buffy looks at Tara "i can see you really care for her I'm sorry i never saw it really before I'm glad your here and i can see u would do anything for Willow"

"i would Buffy shes my heart my soulmate"

Tara turns and looks upon her luver with tears running in her eyes "Come on baby lets get you into bed its nighty time"

After giving Willow her med's, helping her into her night gown, and finally putting her into bed Tara walks softly out of the room and goes into the living room alone and cry's herself to sleep

Giles walks through the door waking Tara from forced sleep and walks over to her

"Tara we will find a way to help Willow i promise you"

"What happens if she doesn't get better that she stays in this state i want her in my life but is it right when shes just a child now"

"Do you want to walk away"

"No never shes my baby and i will take care of her no matter what"

"I've looked over your mothers book of shadows there may be some spells in it we might use against Glory"

"i cant do it tonight I'll look over it later"

“Go on go to bed Tara you look exhausted things will look better in the morning”

“Yea your right” Tara gets up and heads up to her room and cuddles into bed with Willow who whimpers in her sleep

“You're my always.” Tara kisses Willow on the forehead. And in Willows sleep she smiles

Later that night Tara wakes up sweat running down her face and she turns to the sleeping heavily medicated form of her luver

"I'm going to get back at Glory i promise you may the goddess and all forgive me for what i must do"

Steeping gently out of the bed Tara and begins looking over a few pages of her mothers book and begins reading over some gray area spells she knows isn't good but not black ether "Hard times makes hard choices i know I'm going against my faith but i don't see any choices so i must do what i have to"

Tara looks over to Willow and kisses her gently "i love u Willow and i always will" and with that Tara heads out the window and takes off

::Glory's apartment::

Glory paces around her apartment "You know, i think I'm still a little buzzed from eating that witch! What a mind she has. Mmm, nummy treat."

Jinx the ugly minion of Glory looks upon her: "Is your grace not the slightest bit concerned about-"

Glory laughs evily "What, about the Slayer? Don't be stupid. i know I'm closing in. The key's as good as mine. Girl like Buffy's got just so many friends. All i gotta do it rip through 'em one by one until i finally..."

Glory stops as the walls begin to shake and rattle. Knick-knacks on the walls begin to fall over and smash into pieces.

Glory and her demons look around the room in confusion.

"Did anybody order an apocalypse?"

The door suddenly flies open, revealing Tara looking extremely pissed. Her hair fluttering in the wind she's generating and power crackling around her

Tara walks in towards Glory like an angry tigress "Kali, Hera, Kronos, Tonic...Air like nectar, thick as onyx...Cassiel by your second star..."

Glory overcoming her surprise looks upon the white witch "Ohh! It's the lover. That's so cute."

Tara with her hands open wide "Hold mine victim as in tar."

The air around Glory shimmers and the hell goddess realizes she suddenly cannot move forward.

She looks upon Tara in surprise.

Tara "i owe you for what you did to Willow" "Shatter"

The mirrors in the room all begin to shatter and the glass flies toward Glory, slicing through her dress into shreds but not doing a bit of harm to the hell goddess.

Glory brushing off the glass "Is that it? Is that the best you can do? You think i care about all this, the apartment, the clothes?"

Glory walks over and backhands Tara, who goes flying backward and topples over a sofa, landing on the floor.

Glory smiling evily: "Now, sucking on your girlfriend's mind? That was something to treasure."

Tara gathers herself up and uses a spell to move her bag toward her

Glory her face amused looks over at the injured Tara "What's this? Bag of tricks?"

Out of the bag a bunch of power burst forth and begins bursting into fire

Tara her face full of anger: “This is dragons flame and I'm gonna make you pay"

The flames burst toward Glory, who just stands mockingly and lets them hit her and burn but show no damage to her

Tara begins chanting and sends forth a burst of pure light energy

Glory taking the spell head on just stares at the young witch "Now this is getting weak."

Glory rushes forward and grabs Tara by the throat and tosses her hard against the wall

"And so are you, honey. Aren't ya?"

Glory begins stalking over to the injured witches form

out of nowhere Buffy jumps in kicking Glory in the back and begins fighting viciously against the hell god

Tara who just beginning to shake off the dizziness looks over at the battle and begins casting a spell "Hold"

Buffy holding her ribs races toward Tara and grabs her "Lets get out of here and Tara your in deep trouble when we get home"