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Writer's block

Postby Taralover » Sun Aug 31, 2008 6:49 pm

I know more or less what I want to write in the rest of my "Cloaked" fic but I'm having trouble acutally writing it. Any ideas for fixing the problem?

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Re: Writer's block

Postby jasmydae » Sat Oct 04, 2008 5:18 pm

Hey. I just started my own fic and am a terribly slow writer. When I'm having trouble with a chapter, I do this:

--- on PAPER ---

1. Write down a whole list of ideas for things that could happen. Whatever comes to mind, I write down.

2. Cull the list down to a few 'winners'

3. Put them in order, and try to figure out how they'll fit in with the major story arcs.

4. make a *very* rough draft, including general timeline, who talks with whom (and when), who thinks about what, etc. No specifics, yet.

5. double check foreshadowing/consistency.

6. Write out the dialog, in play form. I'm much better at writing dialog than I am at writing descriptive passages, so when I'm stuck, I stick with my strong points. I write out most of the talking parts on paper before I even think about sitting down at the computer.

Example, taken directly from my notes, copied verbatim:


G: Tempests
T: I'm sorry, what?
G: The name of the painting is Tempests
T: Did you do these?
G No. They are by a student in Mr ___'s class

Note: at this point, I don't bother writing in the characters quirks/inflections. It's just very very rough ideas for how the conversation will go. If you compare that bit to the actual discussion the two have in my fic, you'll see the difference. I polish it all when I sit down at the computer.

--- on the computer ---

Once I've got the whole chapter sketched out and the dialog drafted, I'll start writing, usually at the beginning. If I get stuck on a part, I start a timer. If I haven't written a paragraph in fifteen minutes, I'll just put a big flag in its place, and move to a different part, then come back later.

Hope this helps, somewhat. Feel free to drop me a line.

*peace*

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