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a buffy/naurto fict idea need input

Postby cammy » Thu Sep 18, 2008 12:33 am

i thought of this at a whim while just reading some w/t goodness and watching a naurto epistote need some feedback this is just a quick roughdraft.


My beloved Tara is dead shot by a bullet and the hellmouth is trying to open so Giles have sent me home I know I wasnt ready to come home but the darkness has left me thanks to my magic being delt with. Sorry gang but i cant live without my baby so im going to make a sacerfice and close all the Hellmouths at once and have my life as payment I love you all. Love Willow

Willow walked softly through the cemetary keeping an eye out for Buffy and for vampires who may be around and heads toward the grave of her love Tara

Willow began putting out supplies and takes out an asthmane and cuts her hand letting the blood hit the ground and in latin she speaks.

"Let my sacrifice take knowtice to the powers to be and with my life close the mouths of hell that threaten my love ones so mote it be"

The air begins to rise with energy and in a flash of white light the form of Willow Rosenberg dissapers and accompanying her the body of one Tara Maclay follows.

: feudal Japan :

a young blond walks up towards a young red headed girl sitting alone by herself

"Gaara its time to go we need to head to the hidden leaf village soon the high master wants us to go their it seems trouble is brooing and we are to talk to their hykogie about it"

the red headed girl stood up without a word and grabs her giant gourd and puts it over her back"

"whatever is needed Temari all is needed is to fight"


:: the hidden leaf village ::

a young blonde girl walks through the halls of the high hokgees home her eyes gentle as she walks into the room

"ah Tara good your here I have a training for you and the others but i wanted you to know you have been selected along with Naurto and others to be named later to team with the ninjas of the land of wind. I want you there to"

"yes master Hokogee"
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Re: a buffy/naurto fict idea need input

Postby jasmydae » Sat Oct 04, 2008 5:25 pm

Hello. I don't actually know a thing about Naruto, so I'm not sure that my response will be at all helpful, but I'll try anyway.

The idea of Willow sacrificing the rest of her life to somehow close the hellmouth(s) because she no longer has Tara...then Tara's soul(?) following her...it's an interesting start to a story. I kind of like it. ^_^ It's got that "whatever comes next, we'll face it together" feeling.

At that point, though, I'm not sure I follow what you're suggesting. Do they end up in feudal Japan? Why? How does it happen?

I'd be happy to help you talk things out, if you think it'll be useful.

*peace*

~ Megan
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