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Interesting thing i just thought up...

Postby amberisadamngoddess » Sat Mar 23, 2002 11:47 am

I dont know why i thought of this coz its really weird but still... it makes an interesting opening to a story...


"Are you sure?" whispered Tara with a slight tone of concern in her voice. Willow, with her eyes closed due to her nerves, nodded uncertainly. She didn’t want to really, but felt she had to otherwise she would be judged. And so she followed Tara's instructions carefully, word for word, not wanting to do a single thing wrong. She inserted two fingers but was unsure of what to do with her thumb, but Tara showed her. It felt weird as she grasped it with her free hand, so rounded and smooth, not like she had imagined. Guided by Tara's hands, Willow pulled her arm back, then thrust it forward with sheer force – well, all the force she could muster anyway. Her fingers slipped out, and they both waited, listening intently for any sign... but none came. Slowly Willow opened her eyes and looked down. She could see the rift where it was meant to go, but nothing was there. Disappointment filled her as she realised she had done it wrong again. Despite the fact this was her first time ever, she just knew that bowling just wasn’t the game for her.

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Postby Katharyn » Sat Mar 23, 2002 11:57 am

Very nice little snippet that says all it needs to... I suspect that there is a subtext there but I, of course, am far to naive and innocent to know anything about that*S*

Katharyn

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Postby wiltar » Sat Mar 23, 2002 12:00 pm

LOL, that was just great!!!!! You cracked me so totally up!!!

Patricia

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Postby ForeverPiper » Sat Mar 23, 2002 12:12 pm

*howls with laughter* That was great!
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Postby JoeWithAnE » Sun Mar 24, 2002 7:57 am

that's great, i am still nearly crying with laughter, lol
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Postby Hanki » Sun Mar 24, 2002 8:01 am

quote:
Originally posted by Katharyn:
I suspect that there is a subtext there but I, of course, am far to naive and innocent to know anything about that*S*

hmmm, yes dear

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Postby capricornmist » Sun Mar 24, 2002 8:05 am

I suddenly feel the urge to go bowling!

Can`t imagine why!

I would quite willing put my......thinks *oh ok thats enough of that you sick, smut bunny!*

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Postby amberisadamngoddess » Sun Mar 24, 2002 4:09 pm

Well i do try with the humour. Not really one for the putting pen on paper tho, so thats probably the only thing youll be getting out of me

Sorry guys

Im no fun, i know this

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Postby tarabear » Mon Mar 25, 2002 10:05 am

oh dear god that was hillarious i almost fell out of my chair good job with it and as for the subtext *stops typing and just gets a evil grin*

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