FIC: Four Months After

[tommo]

Capt. - you know I love your stuff. The thing I can't get over is the way that you add the thought processes. Gah, I'm already revising and redrafting and thinking how shit my stuff is in comparison. You manage to capture the personalities and the feelings so intensely, I can see it all in my head.

This was just such a great story. So freakin' great. I LOVED it.

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"Bitter, party of one. Bitter, party of one." she muttered... ~ Four Months After by Capt. Murdock

[butch_grrl]

enjoyed your story very much, capt. you captured each individual perfectly.

[CaptMurdock]

Thank you all for your comments. "You've brought me fame and fortune and everything that goes with it, I thank you all!"

I went back and added one last paragraph to the last chapter. A minor plot point, but one that was bugging me.

Thanks again. Always nice to have an appreciative audience. Take care.

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"Good God, that's a lot of shake!"

[Web Warlock]

Read your addition, excellent.

I really enjoyed this fic. I especially laughed at the "white man's guilt" part. I had said something similar to a roomate on thanksgiving about 10 years ago!

Warlock.

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Web Warlock
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Tom Servo: Oh my God. They killed Black Leaf!
Crow: You bastards!
- MST3k: Dark Dungeons

[xita]

The addition is great, it means they have regained their trust.

[Dr.G]

Oh I *love* that ending. Perfect.
You really are a champion and if you will start quoting ABBA next I will have to stalk you, I kid you not.