FF: Unexpected Consequences

[katydid]

Lisa, thats it, I have completely fallen in love with you now! You rock...more than I have words to express. You have a definate knack for W/T fic. The only thing this fic needs...hee hee...is some smutty goodness! I can't help it, I am addicted to smut!

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"She practically has 'genuine molded plastic' stamped on her ass.

[delany]

*ahem* let me just take this oppertunity to say that
lisa,
you frikkin rock!!!!
i love your fics and usually i have my sources that retrieve the chapters from the willtara group, and i get a whole gigantic novel. but this.. ooo.. loving the story so far!!
*smoochies* are garunteed for lotsa trademark angst with the very nice makeup at the end..

[Zippy_uk]

I finally got my new computer up and running (hurra!) and thought I'd catch up with the kitties, it been nearly 3 months without the abillity to go online.

I am so gald that this fic was at the top of the board, as it has made me remember why I have missed lurking around this board so much.

I really like the way you write Anya as well as Willow & Tara. I am interested in how things are going to play out with Rack and Amy out to cause trouble for our two (well three now ) girls.

Keep the extremely good work please

Zip

[xita]

Oh, I am hooked. I hate rack with a passion but I trust in Willow's resolve. I know you love the angst, but make sure we get lots of snuggles

[emily 'first']

You tell a good story,which I'm still reading...There's not really anything else to say...

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vive,valeque.

[scylla]

This is great! And let me just say that I breathed a sigh of relief when Buffy delivered to Tara that talisman (?) that Tara's mother gave her! At least she's not totally vulnerable to that evil Rack.

[Quill]

I'm loving this. Absolutely fantastic!

[Halcyon]

Heehee...peas for breakfast?

yay for the new fic and do pile on the angst and smoochies

[Lisa of Nine]

Good morning everyone.
Again, I am shocked and thrilled by the amount of feedback. WOW!
To everyone, thank you, thank you, thank you! It means so much to me that people enjoy what I put out there.
Okay, new chapters... same format in this reply as last time. I'll post the chapter site...and reply to each post below. Thanks again!
Lisa http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon05.html http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon06.html

Wigglestick:
Thank you! Your sweet compliments are gonna' make my head swell more than it already has! As it is, I can barely fit in my car. I'll try to live up to your expectations.
Seriously, thank you so much.
L
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Enigmatic:
I'm glad you're enjoying my plot. I've been wanting to write a Pregnant Tara story for some time. Please don't kill me when this one is over. (Is that a spoiler? Hmm... )
Yeah, the child is SO of the light, just like her mama Tara. Okay, so I have a crush on the character.
* note to mods... I said on the character... I am well aware she is played brilliantly by Amber Benson, who, since I do not know her, I can only say that I admire her work. (Plus she's a baby herself compared to me. LOL)
Back to Enigmatic... thanks for taking time to reply. I hope you like where I take the story.
L
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Robin:
Yep. I am gonna' continue this story to the very end.
I'll post two chapters a day.
Thanks for responding. I'm glad you like my plot ideas.
L

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BytrSuite,
I loved OMWF, and especially Amber B's performance of "Under Your Spell." I couldn't let that beautiful, heartfelt song just fade into Buffy obscurity. Plus, well, the misuse of magic herbs is great fodder for fan fic!
This is the first time you've read a serialized fic? Yikes! I better not be late posting! *G*
Enjoy the torture, and thanks for replying,
L
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Kiwiccan:
Ah, we meet again, Octopaula. My NZ courtroom nemesis. Enjoy your RO victory while you can.I shall have my minion retrieve it!
As for 2 chapters a day... I know...I know... you are a demanding muse. So...get with the musing and you can see it ALL now!
Good to hear from you, Paula. Thanks for all the replies!
{{Hugs}}
L
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Rane:
My thoughts , as most, if not ALL of the board visitors and regulars, are with you and your mum. It is a huge shock. Give yourself time to adjust, and don't forget to take care of yourself through all of this.
As for my measly fic... Please! Your fics have given me hours of enjoyment. I am honored to return the favor in some tiny way. I'm thrilled to have infected you with the longer stories...hehehe more Rane-fic for me!
This new story is darker than any I've written. I'm still mad at myself over parts of it. Sometimes stories write themselves, and this one has kept ME on the edge of my seat.
Oh, and Anya? I adore her! Emma C portrays her brilliantly! I wish the show used her more.
Thanks again, and goddess bless you and your mum,
Lisa
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Kalita:
Yes, the baby IS fully human...and vulnerable. (Insert evil writer's laugh.)
Rack has a great deal up his tattered sleeves. Never fear, I like my stories to end with W&T goodness and a healthy dose of punishment for the baddies!
As for responding to feedback? Well, I try to always do that. My own email box has seen more crashes than a destruction derby. I lose at least 1/3 of my stuff. Grrrr. I reloaded more times than I can count. So, when I have a wonderful forum like this...where I can see EVERY message sent... I want to thank everyone. So... thanks!
L
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Kiwiccan:
Paula,
you? Push? Nev-ah!
L *G*
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Puff:
Hi Puff!
Long time no hear...errr...see... whatever! How are you? Hope you are well.
Great to hear you like the story do far. As for How sad?Um, it's gonna' be sad... but it will have my trademark happy slant on the ending. I'll prepackage hugs to send out with the final chapters. How's that?
L
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Kittyko,
I'm so happy Puff pointed my story out to you!
It's wonderful to hear from people who have read my stuff before. I'm anxious to see how folks like this one once it's finished. As I said, I've never written anything this dark.
The baby and the two mamas? I love the idea of sweet Tara being preggers. I'm a sucker for that stuff. But, I HAD to toss in a 'Hell Spawn" scare.
Hope you like the new chapters,
L
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Corto:
AH, mocking my name? That deserved the patented Klingon smiley! }}:-)
Check out my 7 of 9 stuff. My personal favorite is "She Who Hesitates" on the 7/Be'Ellana page. WARNING: "Seven Wonders" is unfinished and probably will be for some time. I write BtVS stuff pretty much exclusively.
Well, this post was OT for sure. LOL
Great to see another Trek fan. Thanks for replying,
L
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katydid:
you've fallen for me...AND I rock? Wow. Now I am getting a swelled head.
I hope you like the story as it progresses. Willow is in for some hardship. I hope you still think I rock after then. *G*
As for the smutty goodness... It's really HARD for me to write W&T scenes that are graphic. The characters are a lot younger than I am...and I feel like chicken hawk if I show too much. Go read my Trek stuff... SMUT galore!
But seriously... thanks for writing. There is W&T snuggles ahead. I promise.
L
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Delany:
Now I frikkin rock? Wow, everyone here is so wonderful.
Sources? You have sources? Are they minion?
It great to hear you like the story do far. This will end up a novel length when it's all posted. And YES, there will be a trademark makeup at the end... and maybe a makeout too.
Thanks for writing,
L
PS... I want those cute smileys! How do I get those?
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Zippy_uk:
Welcome back to the Net. I've been away too, but mine absence was due to school, work, and horses.
I personally love lurking around this board. It keeps my W&T goodness at its necessary levels.
Anya will have many Anyaisms in this story. As for Rack and Amy? They are evil. Evil is as evil does. (Wait, isn't an Anyaism...) Anyway, Rack has evil...evil...EVIL plans.
And our three girls? Well, you will have to wait and see.
Thanks for replying. I love how everyone here has welcomed me back. I swear, ya'll are cat's pajamas!
L
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Xita:
You are hooked? The wonderful mod/god is hooked? Well, my work here is done.
I hate Rack too, but he is fun to write. I swear, there's nothing that evil man won't do to get Willow back. As for Willow, I miss old hacker Willow. That's what I love about fan fic...I can give Willow her old resolve. I promise...many snuggles! Heck, some might be in embarrassing locations as well!
Thanks for replying, Xita, and thank you SO much for all you do with the boards!
L
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emily_first:
Thanks. You said plenty.
I appreciate every comment.
L
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scylla:
Just remember... just when you breath a sigh of relief... bad things happen. I learned that rule for Joss W.
Good thing Tara has that pendant... gee...I SURE hope she doesn't take it off... (heheheheh)
Thanks for writing. BTW, I share your hatred of Rack.
L
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Quill:
Thanks for taking time to let me know you're enjoying the story.
Hope you like the rest.
L
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Halcyon:
Yeah, peas...what was Willow thinking? *G*
I promise to pile on the angst...and if anyone is mad at me...I will send them to YOU!
I will also toss in plenty o' smoochies.
Thanks for the reply,

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Thanks again to everyone! Enjoy today's post!
Lisa

[AutumnT]

Lisa,

reading this story led me to read your others and I have to say they gave me a lot of enjoyment - esp Reward and Reprisal. I really am enjoying the idea of Willow's making Tara "complete" led to her getting pregnant. I have to say it was easy to imagine hearing Tara say "I'm pregnant" as one of those shocking end of the episode spins Joss loves to do so much. Anyway, thank you for the obvious time and care you put into writing. It's hard work I know, and it is much appreciated.

Autumn

[Puff]

Hey Lisa I am fine, have I mentioned how pleased I am to see you writing again? You know me I always like to recommend your fics to other people because I love to read them so much myself. Oh and hugs with the last few chapters? yay me

Halycon I am with you, peas for breakfast? Lol, flustered Willow is so sweet. Oh and hopefully Anya's prediction will come to pass soon

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Bloody hell, sodding, limey, shagging, knickers, bollocks...oh God...I'm English

[Willow Rocks]

How the hell am i meant to make it 24hours with out another chapter? This is like a book u can't put down except we have to!

[katydid]

*swoons* It only gets better. The more you write, the more I fall in love. As for smutty goodness...it doesnt have to be graphic. The "love" scene in your last W/T epic was one of the hottest I have ever read. Still one of my all time favorites! Just some scenes with the girls "barefoot" would be enough for me! hee hee I do remember that little conversation we had in the willtara chat room.

I love kick ass Tara! The interactions are so true and sweet. *sigh*

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"She practically has 'genuine molded plastic' stamped on her ass.

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[Kilopto]

Okay so this is just awesome! You're so talented!!! And I have two things to thank you for now, first thank you for writing this story!! And second thank you for posting updates everyday!!

This is just amazing. Usually I stay away from fics that involve W/T getting pregnant but you do this so well! I love it!

Oh and I just finished reading all of your other stories yesterday (I just found your work, boy was I missing great fanfic!!) and they are all amazing! Very very nice stuff!

[Enigmatic]

Peas huh? See that's humor, I just cracked a smile at that one. It's so like Willow to do such thing.

Well I have to say, this is the best W&T story I've read since...Bound!! That one was great too...you are a exellent writer.

I know I'm pushing it now, but please write some more...soon...

And by the way...I love kick-ass Tara!

-Enigmatic

[emily 'first']

Green pea's for breakfast...I'll try that with Lucy,see if she thinks it's as funny as I did! (What a great moment).
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This is so good...Gettin' very involved with it now...
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vive,valeque.

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[willow_thebadasswitch]

Great update, Lisa. That was a very funny breakfast scene. I was lmao at 4am... too loud apparently cuz it woke up my bro who was in the next room.

Oh I also like how you write Anya.

More soon? Please? But I'm not pushing... just giving ya puppy dog eyes.

[KittyKo]

Aww, this update has such sweet parts. I loved Willow and the peas. *giggles* That whole scene made me giggle so much.
As for Rack and Amy *shivers* I wonder what are they going to do.
And kick-ass Tara, woohoo, you go girl.
While this fiction is such a great work it also shows Willow and Tara re-connecting in such sweet and tender way, and I also like the way you placed Buffy in all of the action. I'm really enjoyig this Lisa.
Please keep up the great writting.

[Quill]

I loved this update. Your ability to weave an enthralling tale astounds me. I also appreciate the fact that you really aren't downplaying the other characters. You portrayal of Anya's character is particularly entertaining. Take-charge action Tara was wonderful: it really goes well with her blossoming maternal instincts. *sigh* Now I'm gonna go find the rest of your stuff to keep me occupied until the next update. *skips away humming happily* lalala lalala lalala...

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"I'm a very self-centered poet...all of my poems are about 'I'. I can just picture it now, the title of my first book of poetry will be: 'An egocentric book of self-centered poems by someone arrogant enough to think someone would want to spend money on a book of poems about her selfish, boring existence'."
~"Josephine"

[Kalita]

I just have to say, kick-ass Tara is so damn hot.

Thank you.

[Tempest819]

WOw Lisa. I sent you some feedback on the will/tara list, but maybe my computer went wonkey and it didn't get to you. Either way one never has to worry about giving you too much praise for your stories. My mouth was on the floor and my heart was in my throat after the first chapter.

Then came the second chapter and I was like
"Oh S$%t!" This is gonna be one hell of a story. Of course that's not saying much since all your stories are incredible. But boy the this in gonna be a heck of a winding road.

I have to agree with everyone else, I'm loving your depiction of Anya. But I really like seeing the friendship aspect between Tara and Buffy. You don't get that a lot in fics so it's really cool watch that unfold in your fic. Okay I've gone on enough. Welcome Back!

[TashaR]

Lisa --

You. Are. A. Goddess. I LOVE your fic, I've read everything on your Willow/Tara page...*sighs happily* Tell me, will there be more parts after Rewards and Reprisal? Hehe...I'm such a fic whore, update this, write that...*bats eyelashes* Please????

I can't wait for more...of ANYTHING! LOL

[xita]

Ahh another update, I am just happy I am going to have fic for the next week or so I like "large with the butch" Tara and I like little sensitive Willow.

[willow420]

I love the whole idea behind this one. Wonderful work.

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A.K.A. Liz
"What the frilly heck is going on?" Willow in After Life

[Bobo's Mom]

Lisa,

Good story so far. I've read all of your fiction (including the Star Trek stories) and have always looked forward to a new story.

I'm happy to have this forum to finally thank you for sharing.

I look forward to the next update,
BM

[Kiwiccan]

Well Lisa,
How 'bout if I resume my Muse duties with the next story? I mean, you are just about finished with this one now. I muse best when I muse from the beginning of a story. LOLOL

And your minion will never find the restraining order, I have hidden it. Anyway that ended ages ago. I doubt if I still need one. That is unless you are planning a trip to NZ soon.

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Paula
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Amber FanGirl #1a; May the Amber Force be with you.
Keeper of my own insanity
"I love being a girl, having a girl.." ~as sung by Amber Benson in the UK

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[delany]

i think i like your fic best when i read it all in a big bunch.. all this reading two chapters then having to wait a WHOLE day for the next 2 chapters is killing me!! so i'm gonna collect, yes i am.. then read all together. and yes..yes i do have minions.. you can have minions, so i have minions too..

[nika]

Lisa you never cease to amaze me, there are so many things about this story I love I forget to list them all. The Willow mom panic mode is too cute and funny for words, I mean ppeas for breakfast? *lol* Kick ass Tara *swoon* Anya's comments *lmao* And Buffy's ideas of what's cool around Dawn...And just about everything else line for line. I bow down to your talent whilst taking off my hat and laying my unworthy pen at your talented feet.

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"Eat lot's of applesauce, preferably fed to you by attractive young lesbians." Amber Benson

[mollyig]

I've just read all the parts in one go.

Wonderful writing, as usual.

You've made me very happy, and for me to be happy on a Monday, that's some accomplishment!

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[Pixie]

Lisa -

I started reading this, and then in my desparate need for more I tracked through previous threads and found all your other fic. I couldn't stop - spent many happy hours in front of the computer over the weekend reading it all!! lmao and startled the cats!

Your writing is fabulous! I have to comment on a few things, sorry to other kitties if this has already been said.
- loved Maggie Doyle! I always wanted to know more about her. and Kate!!
- loved Jenny's return!! so bittersweet!
- loved the progress in W/T relationship throughout all your fic.
- okay, and what's with W/T being constantly interrupted? There was barely a snuggle scene that didn't have someone walking in on them. or being affected. Pretty funny!!
- I would also love to see a sequel to Rewards and Reprisals.

I just have one question - does this story fit into the timeline of your previous work at all, or is it completely separate?

Thanks for the "keep us on the edge of our seats" story!!!