I really hope to see more writing from you in the future if not a continuation of this story line. And if you need a beta reader, or just a critical eye, I'd be more than happy to help out. (I'm an anal-retentive, nit-picky wench when it comes to my own stuff so I think I'd at least be able to iron out the big wrinkles in yours.)
Keep up the great work, and thank you for sharing this with us!
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"You are the star for which all evenings wait."
~for Nicole~