by Willow Rocks » Fri Jan 25, 2002 6:17 pm
by ShaggyKat » Fri Jan 25, 2002 7:20 pm
methinks you only want to read the part with the goddess's intervention is requested.
by Lisa of Nine » Fri Jan 25, 2002 9:40 pm
I'm in class tomorrow (yes Saturday...LOL) from 9-4, so any update will be extremely late. Thanks for your patience.
Lisa
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Okay, I'm really behind on replies... going back to...here:
FROM PAGE 11:
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Originally posted by nika:
Wow I haven't read such a perfect mixture of comedy and tragedy since my greek classics kick. Lisa you Rocketh much!!!!!
Nika:
That really is a fantastic complement. Thanks!
L
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kpmuse:
Hope you liked chapter 18! Glad you finally got it. BTW...all chapters are online...just change the # in the address. Well, except the chapters that aren't written yet...but wouldn't THAT be cool if I had a magical site that had chapters before I write them!
L
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Xita:
quote:
Originally posted by xita:
Lisa I may know where you are going with this and I know what you mean but then might there be more after this current story? Hmm..? I'll get back to you on this when you finish
I'm curious, did I take the story where you thought I would?
Thanks for all the input,
L
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scylla:
keep your eyes peeled. Jealous Willow will make another appearance!
I'm glad you got teary eyed. I've done my job!
Thanks,
L
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Pixie:
hopefully you are not as angst ridden since I've posted some happier chapters. Thanks for replying,
L
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katydid:
Since when did YOU get the rights to spicy Tara sand-witches? I own those rights! LOL
This story is running long, but it should wrap up very soon.
Thanks,
L
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kpmuse:
I was worried the Tara -vs- Demon/warlock scene would be too intense. I'm glad it effected you, but I hope it wasn't too extreme.
Hope you've gotten some sleep since then!
Thanks for replying,
L
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mini-alf:
Glad you like the story. As for saving the baby...depends on your definition of 'saving.' 
Thanks,
L
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Willow_rocks:
this is odd replying so late...
quote:
Originally posted by Willow Rocks:
She can't loose the baby! I don't know about anyone else but i can't live with out good old Willow and tara and baby blue eyes (cause we all know she'll have them!) and a happy ending
Well, she DID have blue eyes... and the end will be happy...
Hope you like the way I end the story.
Thanks for posting,
L
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Jenny Scott:
Yes, my real name is 'evil.' I just use a pen name.
L
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sparrow:
angst is the spice of life! And like chili... it can make your eyes water.
Enjoy the rest of the story,
thanks for the sweet comments,
L
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kilopto:
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Originally posted by Kilopto:
Okay....Just read the chapter. Wow. Hard to read, kind of draining...and now I'm kind of numb...But...wow. Lisa, this is amazing. It reads just like an actual episode, it's all there, I could see it all, and feel it. It may be dark, it may be painful as hell, but dammit this is amazing writing. And I admire that you've stuck by your original story, no matter how sad and dark it became...
I really am glad to hear you had this reaction. Writing this angst is draining, and if you feel that way when I am done, I did it right. I had the entire story plotted, and it's been difficult to stick to my guns with the sad stuff.
Thanks,
L
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Rally:
whining does help me write faster. You just have to do it in person!
Thanks,
L
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Jenny Scott:
I hate to see you cry!
I promise...it will end happily.
Thanks,
L
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katydid:
Yeah, there are sad parts...but it will end happy. Promise!
Thanks,
L
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Puff:
Your heart is broken now...but I swear it will be mended by the end.
And yeah..it's going long...LOL
Thanks,
L
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web warlock:
If I hated you... I would write unhappy endings.
Willow is holding her own very well. Now you have to see how Tara will react. *EG*
Thank,
L
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L
I will have a happy ending of sorts. I promise.
;-)
Lisa
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FROM PAGE 12:
MoMack:
I've had a lot of fun with Anya and Spike. Anya will have a few teary moments coming up. I actually got the sniffles while writing a scene today.
Hope you like it.
Thanks,
L
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silverangel:
You only cried reading chapter 19...I had to plot it, plan it, and write it. I was a wreck when I wrote it. LOL
I used Anya and Spike to lighten some of the dark moments. Glad you liked it.
Thanks,
L
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kittyko:
that spell was indeed in Portuguese. I used the babblefish.com site to translate it. I know it was off and any suggestions would be appreciated. It's supposed to say, "Goddess above and below, seer of all that is true, this child was wrongly taken. Return her, return her, return her to those who love her above all else. She our my life, return her. "
hope you like the ending.
Thanks,
L
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Willow420:
thanks for posting the announcement for me.
I didn't want the kitties wondering why the update was late.
L
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sparrow:
thanks for the positive energy. The injury wasn't too bad. No surgery, but she'll be in a brace/cast for 6-12 weeks depending on what the MRI shows.
Thanks,
L
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Sheila:
Wow, thanks for posting the update for me. Luckily you and Sparrow got the word out. It means a lot that you took the time to do it.
Thanks,
L
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kittyko:
the ligaments are torn, but no surgery!
Thanks,
L
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Caro:
Glad my writing could make you happy by making you sad.
See above for the health update! (torn ligaments.)
Thanks,
L
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Puff:
My sister is okay, but can't do much. I'll be pulling double duty for some time. Updates on the last chapters will be slow.
Thanks for understanding,
L
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TashaR
My sister's okay. See above...
Glad you like the story. The ending will be plenty sappy!
Thanks,
L
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Pixie:
She'll be fine. (see above.)
Thanks for being so sweet,
L
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Xita:
well, this is a bit late...but don't worry... Tara and Willow will always find each other. I promise!
Thanks,
L
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silverangel:
That Anya speech was upsetting to write. I tried to use her reaction to Joyce's death as a guide. Hope it works.
As for publishing... its not legal to do so. Joss W owns all the BtVS characters...I'm just glad he allows fan fiction on the net! (As if he even see it...LOL)
Thanks,
L
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mollygig:
It will be much brighter...much much... I promise. LOL
It'll be sappy even.
Thanks,
L
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bobo's mom:
I wish I could post faster but I just haven't had time to write. As for the "They will always find each other," I try to use the show's cannon stuff and work from it. I am quite fond of action Tara. *sigh*
Thanks for the good vibes for my sister. She's pushing already...and refusing pain meds. LOL
I should sic action Tara on her!
Thanks again,
L
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Kalita:
you make a great Giles! LOL
Hope you liked the way that 'Tara won't leave' bit worked out.
Thanks for the good thoughts for my sister,
L
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kittyko:
Ah, sniffles... cool. Now I just have to inspire full blown tears!
Anya has a few more sniffle scenes coming. Keep the Kleenex handy.
My sister is doing okay, but no riding for a few months.
Thanks,
L
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boo:
Thanks for taking the time to write. I hope you like the rest of the story as well.
L
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katydid:
I worked a lot on Anya. I let her say all the gut wrenching stuff. She's got a scene coming up that really upset me.
Cliffhangers and fun to write and they do keep interest high. Of course, they are a teeny tiny bit evil.
Thanks,
L
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bearskeeper:
I think you secretly love cliffhangers... LOL... you really do. Just keep reading them and you'll learn to love them...
Hope you like how I worked out the Tara wanting to stay bit.
My sister is doing okay.
Thanks for the kind words and the good wishes.
L
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Sheila:
I tried to give Willow and Tara some bonding with Brianna. BTW...it was real, just not meant to be yet. It was a witchy preview!
I used Portuguese for the spell because I translated into several languages...and the Portuguese was the most beautiful. Lucky you!
I do like cliffhangers... guess you've all noticed. LOL
My sister's okay. Thanks for asking.
L
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Dave V:
Thanks, for your compliments and for the well wishes. Both mean a great deal.
Thanks,
L
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wiccachica:
LOL... I like your advice... maybe Willow should tell her to run from the light.
Sorry your hair hurts..I think there are wiccan herbs for that!
Thanks,
L
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lonewolf:
Glad you liked the update. My sister is okay, no surgery yet. Hope you like the rest of the story,
L
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Sassette:
I always thought Giles was smitten with Tara. (Not in a skanky way...) I think he wants to see Willow and Tara together and happy. He would So set Willow straight...so to speak.
Thanks for the good vibes. My sister is doing okay,
L
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Sparrow:
Hey, that dreamland is cool. I wonder if I could vacation there?
have faith in W&T!
Thanks,
L
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Tara's Psychic Fairy:
LOL... I'll tell Tara you told her to go back!
Thanks,
L
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Caro:
Well, the next chapter revealed... Tara came back. Are you happy?
I based that Anya rant on her reaction in the body. I wanted to show that she learned to understand Joyce's death, but that a child's death sent her spinning just like the scene in the body. Thanks for noticing!
Rack and Amy will get what each deserves.
Thanks,
L
PS. My sister is okay...no surgery, but she'll be laid up 6-12 weeks depending on what the MR shows.
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Dice:
Glad you like this fiction.As for Willow's salary offer... no that was correct. LOL I wanted to show how nuts she was... she was in panic mode... scared to death and afraid 120,000 wasn't enough to even feed Cletus!
Thanks for the good wishes.
L
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Italiangirl:
I won't tell about your Anya crush if you don't tell about mine.
I think Anya and Willow will always have tension over the Xander fluke, even after Anya kicked ass to save Tara... trust me... I will address this.
Thanks for the concern about my sister. She's doing okay.
I'm writing every chance I get. (I've already spent 2 hours tonight with replies...LOL..so when I get done...I'll have dinner and then get back to writing.
Thanks again,
L
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Kendahl897:
Thanks for the wonderful compliment. Missy Good is incredible. BTW... I doubt Joss W reads fan fiction... there is probably a big 'you stole my idea' issue and he's safer avoiding it. Most TV shows will not even open unsolicited materials...you must have a literary agent for them to even consider it. But if he does... HELLO JOSS AND/OR AMBER ET ALL! PLEASE READ MY FIC AND USE IT! I WANT W&T TO BE MOMS!
Okay, that said...thanks a lot!
L
PS...any literary agents on the board? I would love to chat with you...
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Puff:
Well, this late...all the bits you mentioned have been resolved...LOL... I hope you like the way I resolved them.
My sister's okay. No riding for several months.
Thanks for the good vibes.
L
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kilopto:
Wow, I guess you liked it!
Yeah, a Missy Good comparison... I am shocked and thrilled.
Gosh, don't even suggest I might surpass Missy...she's a freakin goddess!
Thanks,
L
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Pixie:
I hoped that scene with Will/Tara/& Brianna would ease the pain of the loss.
Giles is the Scooby daddy...
I have more planned for Anya...she gets more tears.
BUT...there will be a happy ending...I promise.
Thanks,
L
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Illusia:
Thanks for the Missy info. She is great.
I hope I can keep you hooked through these last few chapters.
Thanks for replying,
L
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Sassette:
you...must...resist....the...haiku.
L
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jomarch:
I love "extra-flamey. It's fab!
It's great to hear someone new has been brought into the fan fic masses.
Glad you've enjoyed the angsty ride. I can't promise a sequel... I start classes tomorrow so I'll be swamped again.
Thanks,
L
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Mollygig:
aaaaaaaah... coffee. I love coffee. The goddess invented coffee.
Sniffles are good... and there is more of the rat and cat show to come...
Thank,
L
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kittyko:
Silly. Of course Tara came back!
Thanks for the reply,
L
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delany:
I guess given your description...you REALLY like my writing... LOL
My sister is doing okay...not great but okay.
Thanks,
L
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bobo's mom:
well, good morning to you!
You caught my 'bookend' technique? Good eye! Glad it worked for you.
Thanks,
L
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Puff:
I wanted everyone to be clear that Brianna is happy and loved with her grandma while she waits... that makes the loss a little easier. If only real life losses were that simple.
Rack's time is coming! I've foreshadowed it in dialogue way back... we'll see who catches it.
I might upload pics... we'll see. I will work on the new chapter tonight...after replies...
Thanks,
L
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Aladdin:
Thank you so much. I'm glad I touched you. I hope some of the tears were happy ones.
thanks again,
L
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Rocketdyke:
my apologies if you are a lawyer. It was meant in jest... actually that was specifically for 'crazedattorney.'
I have a degree in criminal justice and considered law school... I respect lawyers but they are so easy to poke fun at, (joking)
L
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kpmuse:
see? I said it would look up from here on out. Happy scenes with Cletus... it's all good. ';-)
Yeah, Amy is getting what she has coming. She has a bit more on the way,but she's not evil.
I wanted the waiting place to be nice enough that W&T would know Brianna was happy. Hopefully it worked.
Things are busy for me, but all the well wishes help,
Thanks,
L
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sparrow:
Yep. They're back. The rat, the cat, and the evil warlock will all be dealt with. Hope you like the big finish.
Thanks,
L
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silverangel:
I really wanted Tara and her mom to get a chance to bond... glad you liked it. OH, and crying is good. It cleans the eyes! There will be more to the cat and rat show... TBC...
I'm still pounding out pages... we'll see how long it runs. I want to make rack and Amy really suffer!
Thanks,
L
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shaggykat:
I'm with you on Amy. She's a junkie... not true evil. I've tried to make her punishment... quasi humorous. We'll see if it works once I post it.
re: Tara's pregnancy... I too wish it were that easy.
For Brianna to return... they must both be the mommies. They know the spell now and can use it when they are ready. (And Tara's healthy again)
Thanks for the questions and the sweet comments,
L
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Pixie:
Willow & Tara as mommies... always a sure bet!
Poor Amy has some rat-ly adventures ahead...
Glad you like longer stories... LOL
Thanks,
L
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Sassette:
Ah the two mommy effect.... it's pure evil.
You are correct on the Brianna's soul returning rules. They will have goddess intervention... so it will be a mini-willtara.
Thanks,
L
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nika:
Thank you. I am running out of ways to say thank you. Everyone has been wonderful. Thanks for replying,
L
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willow_rocks:
I will keep working every spare minute...
Thanks for the post,
L
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Shaggykat:
Sassette isn't the only one who wants to read about goddess intervention. I think it involves sand-witches!
Thanks,
L
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Okay...I am caught up!
Thanks for being patient!
Now I have to catch up on my replies to the willtara board...and THEN I can get to the story!
Thanks!
Lisa
by ShaggyKat » Fri Jan 25, 2002 10:04 pm
I would just like to thank you for not only your beautifully crafted stories, but for your thoughtful and time-consuming replies.
I am sure many other kitties share my opinion.
Thank You,
ShaggyKat
ps. I think perhaps everyone likes sand-witches
by rocketdyke » Sat Jan 26, 2002 5:35 am
michele
by KittyKo » Sat Jan 26, 2002 7:32 am
"Goddess above and below, seer of all that is true, this child was wrongly taken. Return her, return her, return her to those who love her above all else. She our my life, return her. "
"Oh Deusa de acima e abaixo, óraculo de toda a verdade, esta criança foi erradamente tomada. Retorna-a, retorna-a, retorna-a para quem a ama acima de tudo. Ela é minha vida, retorna-a."
There, well, hope it helps. Have a nice weekend. ^____^
by Puff » Sat Jan 26, 2002 10:06 am
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“I…I love you. I just…I just don’t want to be afraid anymore. I want to feel like I am living again.” Legends of the kiss by Mariacomet
by Quill » Sat Jan 26, 2002 2:27 pm
The last four chapters took me right out of my skin. In a good way, of course. I think I was walking that fine line that exists between where words are transformed into images in our minds, and I felt completely helpless as I watched each scene play out. That takes skill...or a lot of very illegal drugs...which I haven't done recently so I'll just go with skill. *grin*
I especially enjoyed the child-spirit limbo. I had to fumble for a box of kleenex when Willow was inspecting Brianna'a features in the meadow. *deep sigh* Alright, I'm going to leave it at that for now, cause I think my ass has fused with the fibers of my chair.
You bless us with every word Lisa, thank you.
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"My faith in love is like blood...I spill it freely."
by FrenchRose » Sat Jan 26, 2002 4:08 pm
Well, let's stop here or we'll enter crazed fangirl territory.*g*
Hugs to your sis, a couple of'em for you, and also - how much do I not like Amy ? ( just goes to show how well you get her...*g*) Done with the tangent, can't wait for the big resolution, thanks so much for this.
Rose, who's had people looking at her way weird because she keeps talking about that Cletus person...
by lisa-anne » Sat Jan 26, 2002 4:51 pm
by willow_thebadasswitch » Sat Jan 26, 2002 5:45 pm
Ack! What the frilly heck is Rack up to now?? Is there gonna be a big fight scene? Hmm... me thinks Amy doesn't deserve to get eaten by the cat. Me thinks Anya should have her way with Amy.
Oh I noticed it too. I mean, you replying to each and every feedback. That takes patience... much admired.
~Caro
by Jenny Scott » Sat Jan 26, 2002 5:46 pm
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"The worlds about to be destroyed and i'm stuck in a traffic jam!"
by Kalita » Sat Jan 26, 2002 5:51 pm
I don't think Tara's family deserves to be a part of her life, especially for the hell they put her (and, clearly, her Mom) through. Her dad's comments about "not hiding it" were in response to the uber-wiccaness of her room, as if her magic is something to hide away and be fearful of.
I'd still like to see the response from Willow's parents when they ask who the father is...
by AutumnT » Sat Jan 26, 2002 5:53 pm
quote:
Originally posted by Kalita:
My guess is that Willow is out to her parents by now. Even if they haven't met Tara, she's likely told them she's gay.
And her mother has either already forgot or thinks she's dating someone named Tamera or Laura...
quote:by Jenny Scott » Sat Jan 26, 2002 6:16 pm
EDDITED TO ADD: I'm a cool fighting monster now!!!!!! (Dancing about the room happy, while the lesbian gay type lovers scoff at my puny 125 posts...)
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"The worlds about to be destroyed and i'm stuck in a traffic jam!"
[This message has been edited by Jenny Scott (edited January 26, 2002).]
by Kalita » Sat Jan 26, 2002 6:26 pm
quote:
Originally posted by Jenny Scott:
Yeah, but i always though, "not trying to hide it anymore," had a double meaning.
Well, the whole wicca=lesbian metaphor was still going a bit then, so they may have been digging at it.
Still, a direct read of the scene indicates it's the magic, not the sexual orientation.
quote:by AutumnT » Sat Jan 26, 2002 6:28 pm
quote:
Originally posted by Jenny Scott:
Yeah, but i always though, "not trying to hide it anymore," had a double meaning.
I totally agree. And I think it was obviously the writer's intention as well.
Autumn
quote:by xita » Sat Jan 26, 2002 6:36 pm
Found it! It's from ign.scifi.
"And ultimately, what was interesting about that show [is that] we played the entire show as about being gay -- it was very strange to play a gay metaphor about somebody who's openly gay! It was interesting to work it on the metaphorical level, but it became less preachy that way. And more open to other interpretations."
[This message has been edited by xita (edited January 26, 2002).]
by Jae » Sat Jan 26, 2002 11:41 pm
I continue to adore your story, Lisa. Your writing strikes a deep chord within all who read it, or at least, within me. I'd say all based on the other's responses, though. You have a wonderful ability to draw the reader in and make us believe that the characters are real. Beautiful, simply beautiful. It's enough for me to forgive you for being so darned evil
Oh yeah.. ummm, just wanted to say I think it's awesome the way you take the time to reply to everyone who posts a comment. It's such a nice warm fuzzy to see it, it shows that one's comment is valued and read and all that good stuff. So thank you for the warm fuzzies, the story, and for sharing both with us. It's at a point where I'm sorry it has to end because that means I won't be able to look forward to the new chapter(s) each day.
So, to conclude? You rock! *nods sagely, thinking I need to use a more creative phrase than that*
by Sharri » Sun Jan 27, 2002 1:57 am
Have to admit that I wasn't sure about Willow and Tara at first - nothing to do with Tara or the lesbian side of things - more because I've been a fan of BtVS so long and loved Oz's character. I also think that they are only now starting to scratch the surface of Tara's character, which has been frustrating. Joss doesn't seem to have characters with no purpose, and there were plenty of hints about how intuitive etc Tara is, and now things are really starting to become clear. I think that the love Willow and Tara share is wonderful, and shows total devotion and being in synch with one another (except this last little while - but things will get back to normal soon - I hope)! :-)
Your book is amazing! No other word for it. I'm hooked and I'm finding it hard to keep in mind that it's NOT part of S6!!!!! Wouldn't be surprised to see YOU'RE name on the credits soon!!!
Can't wait for the next installment!
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Connect and heal - be true to yourself.
[This message has been edited by Sharri (edited January 27, 2002).]
by fell » Sun Jan 27, 2002 2:21 pm
The link Xita posted above to IGN reminded me of how much I miss Sarah Kuhn's wonderful column. That was the only reason I ever visited that site, along with about half of the rest of their traffic. What were they thinking??? I did notice that Drakan, one of the few action type games I ever bought is being re-released on PS2. I don't know what that'll be like, but the original was actually less sexist than Tomb Raider, plus you got to fly around on a dragon and fry monsters with fireballs- good fun, reminded me of many pleasant hours spent on Pern.
Reading Joss' thoughts about Tara and Family once again brought up the whole Tara's history quandry and made me wish I could ask him how Tara's mom died. I've spent WAY too much time thinking about this. Almost makes me wish they'd stuck with the woodsprite idea. I keep hoping we'll get some more background. I love what Lisa's done in this story, though, with the passed-on knowledge. Too bad Tara's mom didn't have a Willow of her own.
by Lisa of Nine » Sun Jan 27, 2002 8:18 pm
by Kendahl897 » Sun Jan 27, 2002 8:25 pm
by Kalita » Sun Jan 27, 2002 8:31 pm
quote:
Originally posted by Lisa of Nine:
Don't worry... I'm shaving time from sleep so ya' won't be left hanging!
You're just too much of a giver, Lise. Thanks!
As ever, the patented cliffhanger. I trust Tara 'giving herself' to Rack will be far more than he can handle?
quote:by Pixie » Sun Jan 27, 2002 8:34 pm
Okay, breathe. Recite the thread mantra: Trust in Lisa, Lisa loves Tara, Willow, and the kitties.
Lol at the Dr. Suess line, and hell yes Amy, karma does suck!
by xita » Sun Jan 27, 2002 8:53 pm
One small quibble, if you are setting this in the current time, Tara has turned 21 so is much older than 19.
by Puff » Sun Jan 27, 2002 8:55 pm
And a massive woo hoo for karma, let's here it kitties
Thanks for the update Lisa and take care to get some sleep, as much as it pains me too say it we can wait for the next chapter.
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“I…I love you. I just…I just don’t want to be afraid anymore. I want to feel like I am living again.” Legends of the kiss by Mariacomet
by willow_thebadasswitch » Sun Jan 27, 2002 9:11 pm
I'm eager to read the next chapter, but make sure you don't over tire yourself. Sleep is essential.
That's so sweet of Anya... not wanting Cletus to be cold and all that! Yeah, I imagine she'd be thinking of that. Great update, Lisa.
~Caro
by Bobo's Mom » Sun Jan 27, 2002 10:11 pm
There are so many good things about this chapter! I think in terms of style it's my favorite so far. Your use of small details to add depth to the character's is excellent; I especially liked what you did with Anya. I look forward to reading the rest.
BM
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TARA: Willow and I always know how to find each other!
ANYA: With yoga?
by kpmuse » Sun Jan 27, 2002 11:25 pm
Wow Lisa! Tara's siren call! My heart sped up here. These 3 lines sum it all up for me. True love here!
How I loved Willow misunderstanding the How and When question that Buffy asked her! hehe
Anya, man, those scenes are so emotional. That woman has some deep feelings.
Please let Tara come back safe and sound. They have a future to plan you know! Thank you!
You are so sweet considering us kittens and not wanting to leave us on this amazing cliffhanger for too long. Thanks again! But please do get some great sleep. There is a Full Moon on Monday and we all need extra rest! Take care,
kris
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