FF: Unexpected Consequences

[ForeverPiper]

That was SO good! I loved what you did with Anya. That was perfect! I can't wait for the next chapter. Take your time...as much as it pains me to say...I can wait.
I have a question...after your finished writing the story, are you going to post it on Extra Flamey or Wiccan Ways? Please do! That would be great!

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[KittyKo]

Amazing has ever Lisa.
I'm curious as to what Tara is about to do to Rack.
Well, I guess I'll have to wait paciently for the next update. ^^
Take care, and have pleanty of rest Lisa.

[nika]

I keep getting a message that says that the page has moved and to check the url, what's that about, waaaah I want my update!

[Lisa of Nine]

Nika...
I checked...it comes up fine. ????
Try again and make sure you've got the URL correct. http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon22.html

If that doesn't work for you, email me privately and I'll email it to you.
Lisa

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Originally posted by nika:
I keep getting a message that says that the page has moved and to check the url, what's that about?, waaaah I want my update!

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[Lonewolf]

Lisa of Nine: Please, please tell me everything is going to be OK with Tara, don't let her die, she and Willow have a life to build and what about Brianna.

Lonewolf

[ShaggyKat]

So do they figure that Tara's a mage next section. Cause the reader gets clued in pretty much when Diana asks about mages.

Don't worry kitties I have total faith that Tara survives. Perhaps goddess intervention of a different kind will be involved.

So the refero spell. Do you suppose if the parent (or one dies) the soul of the child has to wait until the parents souls are reborn. Meet in the next life(or the next) and conceive a child. Or if a parent dies the childs soul moves on to the waiting queue to be reborn anywhere, to anyone? Or does the soul stay in limbo forever? Or perhaps go to heaven or hell (sin of birth thing...read Piers Anthony...very cool writer)?

Just wondering about the consequences of such a spell on reincarnation and fate and all.

Love the story.

[Sharri]

WOW - in the biggest capital letters possible!

Tara is SOOOOO going to give it to Rack - he has ZERO idea of what he's in for!! Can hardly wait to see him get his. Karma - it's a beautiful thing!!!!!

[Kendahl897]

I printed this up on my computer at work and its over two inches thick, and that's with the last 3 chapters left to go...You Rock....Can't wait for the rest....

[Kalita]

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Originally posted by Kendahl897:
I printed this up on my computer at work and its over two inches thick

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I could not imagine printing out fics... I would go through SO many trees, I'd have a horrible guilt trip...

Thankfully I'm comfy with reading whilst online. And, I read fast.

Just prattling while waiting for Lisa's next... quote:

[Lisa of Nine]

Hi guys,
Here is today's chapter.
I am gonna' be in class all day, but I will work on the LAST chapter between classes.
I am behind on posting replies. Thanks for your patience.
You've all been great through this posting experience. Sorry it got slowed down by real life, and thanks so much for all the support on that front as well!
Lisa
FYI... this chapter is un-betaed...but I will edit it after I get the section back from my editor Lea tonight! I figured you wouldn't want to wait. http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon23.html

[Pixie]

Rack finally got what's coming to him!!! Very satisfying. Will Amy stay a rat, or will this be what she needs to convince her to stay away from dark magic? I can see either option happening, but if it's the latter, I still wouldn't trust her. I know Tara will be okay, because you have assured us of the (less un)happy ending. I hope that we will see Willow and Tara grieving together, because, even though they said good-bye (rather, see you later) to Briana, this still feels unfinished. Thanks for the update, and I hope your sister is recovering.

[MoMack]

Holy s**t! I mean, woah! Wow...I'm gonna go read it again.

[mollyig]

Was just about to leave for the evening and spotted this update. Its happily spewing from my printer now for me to read on the bus.

And I freely admit to having read the whole story again today

Thanks Lisa

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Now that I know there's something to know, I can't *not* know, just because I'm afraid
somebody'll know I know, you know?

[Kalita]

Wahoo! Go, Magey-Tara...

The Amy/Caedo stuff was cool, too.

I've just got to hope Willow gets Tara back. She did it before, and we know they always find each other...

[nika]

Lisa thank you so much for sending me p.22 and p.23 was excellent, I loooooove kick-ass Tara giving Rack a taste of his own poison is such a fitting punishment. I love this story more and more with each part.

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"Eat lot's of applesauce, preferably fed to you by attractive young lesbians." Amber Benson

[Bobo's Mom]

For the first time today I'm happy to be too sick to go to work!

Another great update, Lisa. Your writing gets tighter and tighter with each chapter. So many things to comment on...

I love "Action Tara" killing Rack with kindness. She's such a polite woman. And attractive too. I'm really into the way your writing her...really.

I'm also enjoying the contrast between "Witch Amy" and "Rat Amy." Both characterizations are self centered and motivated by simplistic desires, but Rat Amy seems more like the girl from season 1. I also think she's more intellegant as a rat...a result of being removed from the source of her addiction?

Why do I think you're setting up a Willow in shining armor moment? I love this story. It's making me think, and makes me wonder where it's going.

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TARA: Willow and I always know how to find each other!
ANYA: With yoga?

[Time]

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"Oh, I have plenty more." "You wanted to taste my power?" "You wanted to know what I am?" "Do I taste like strawberries?"

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Lisa, I think I love you.
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[katydid]

Excellent chapter Lisa! I really can't wait to see how you go about the next chapter. I hope it is a long chapter...so you can tell us about Brianna when she is really born. If not, then I will bug you for the rest of your life....until you write a sequel.

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"She practically has 'genuine molded plastic' stamped on her ass.

[ForeverPiper]

That was...WOW! With capitol letters and everything! That chapter rocked beyond belief! Rack finally got what he deserved. *evil grin* I can't wait for the next part!

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Poor Watcher. Did your life pass before your eyes? Cuppa tea, cuppa tea, almost got shagged, cuppa tea. - Spike

[Kittie17]

Lisa i have to tell you this is one of the best fic i've ever read. I love it!
The way you write all the characters is amazing
Good job!
I'm looking fordward to the next chapter

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Todo lo que necesitamos es sentido comun y eso no puede ser enseñado

[wiccachica]

Is there going to be a de-tox area for us when you finish?

(must have chapter...must have...chapter...)

Whatever will I hope to see when I log on each day?

(sigh)

Great job, Dear. I can't wait to see what you have in store.

[willow_thebadasswitch]

Love it! Love it! Love it!!

~Caro

[bearskeeper]

You know, I think you're right - I do secretly love cliffhangers. But only because you write them so well!!!! Goddess, I can't wait for the next (and, b:: final) part.

[Puff]

I'm so incredibly happy that Rack got what was coming to him. I'm sure Tara will be ok, right Lisa? Well I hope Tara will be ok.

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“I…I love you. I just…I just don’t want to be afraid anymore. I want to feel like I am living again.” Legends of the kiss by Mariacomet

[Sassette]

Your haiku taunts me.
Guess I'll watch the ep instead.
Mom made spaghetti.

-Sass

[Kiwiccan]

The one sad thing about Lisa going back to school is that stories will take longer to write and longer periods of time between stories.

Ok that was 2 sad things...

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Paula
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May the Amber Force be with you.
Keeper of my own insanity

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[Charlie]

Too wonderful for words... Lisa, you're a goddess!

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[delany]

lisa, i bow down and prostrate myself before you..

i can't wait till the next bit!
and just a quick question.. any plans to write another after this? i think i read somewhere that this was your last..

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[Willow Rocks]

Just a couple of things i have to say 1, u are one of if not the best fan fic writer i have ever read, and 2 u r stories are better written and a better read than most the proper Buffy books out and i hope u plan to write fan fic long after the show is over to keep our fav characters alive

[Kendahl897]

Where's the next chapter? I'm dying from the suspense. Can you do an epilogue where Willow and Tara have Brianna? I love red-headed babies.