FF: Unexpected Consequences

[WiccansIllusion]

Nah, not insane. Hell I'd put money in!

[silverangel]

Let's face it, we're all a bunch a junkies. *grin*, of course, we're the best kinds of junkies... that is, if there can be a good kind of junkies. And if there was, we'd be it! Yeah, that sounded stupid... What I meant overall, was yah(!) for the t-shirt idea! and... Lisa where are you?? Going into withdrawal, and frankly I'm starting to worry about my girl Tara. Technically she's Willow's girl, but you know what I mean, right? Okay, I'm gonna shut up now, and keep waiting patiently. *Checking my watch*

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Willow and Tara's Love

[This message has been edited by silverangel (edited February 23, 2002).]

[Sassette]

Yay for t-shirts! And Puff, I did ... but ... good lord, I want my Unexpected Consequences update more than I want to finish my story, dammit!

-Sass
Demanding little thing, aren't I?

*holds hands with the mittens and starts singing 'Kum-By-Yah'*

[ForeverPiper]

Okay...I'm about to go nuts! I've suffered from withdraw for a couple of days now because I've been wondering about the next part 24/7! I want...no need to know what happens. Willow getting the dark magic eyes. Yikes! I want to know what everyone's reaction is. And I for one am now officially pissed off at Cassie and Diana, and if they were real people, I would personally go over to their house and kick their wicca butts. Of course, after Willow's finished with them I'm not sure they're be any butt left to be kicked.

[WiccansIllusion]

Sass- See!! withdrawl does exist for stories

[Thanatopsis]

The withdraw is starting to get to me. The shakey hands, the sweaty palms. Oh woo is me. The pain. The pain. Though maybe a T-shirt would help, cause what's the point of being a mitten, if you can't have a shirt to proclaim it? Did that make sense? I feel the withdrawl slowly taking away my sanity.

[Pixie]

*clutches hands to her heart and sings a la Barbra*

Lisa, can you hear me?
Lisa, can you see me?
Lisa, can you find me in the niiiight?
Lisa, are you near me?
Lisa, can you hear me?
Lisa, can you help me not be frightened?
Looking at this board I seem to see a million fics, I just want yours!
Where are you now that chapter 28 has waved goodbye and closed it's doors?
The night is so much darker
The wind is so much colder
The angst I feel is so much greater now that I'm alone.
Lisa...how I love you.
Lisa...how I need you.
Lisa...how I miss you...giving me (fic) deliiight!

Whew! I'm kinda out of breath. So sorry to Barbra Streisand for mutilating her song - all for a good cause. Hey, you guys said I wasn't insane...whaddaya think now?

[silverangel]

Encore! Encore!

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Willow and Tara's Love

[Lisa of Nine]

Pixie...I hear you...
I just finished chap 29... it LONG... longer than most... but my editor is already in bed...and I am so tarr'd (that's 'tired' for those who can't understand Californian gal drawl) I can't even see straight. Wait... I can't EVER see straight. Give me time to do a few read throughs for the worst errors and then to upload... oh, and I need coffee too...

Thank you to everyone...y'all have been so sweet and cute and mitten-rific!
Oh, Paula... you always like it when I make it last... errr...umm... I of course mean my long stories...
Lisa

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Originally posted by Pixie:
*clutches hands to her heart and sings a la Barbra*
Whew! I'm kinda out of breath. So sorry to Barbra Streisand for mutilating her song - all for a good cause. Hey, you guys said I wasn't insane...whaddaya think now?

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[Kiwiccan]

Nice save Lisa. Of course you meant the story. But I'm still looking into that telepathic sex trick.

Right after you quickly edit go to bed and get some rest. That is an order. hehehe I'm so butch, just like Tara.

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Paula
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May the Amber Force be with you.
Keeper of my own insanity

[Web Warlock]

Huh Pixie, first read that and thought it was The Who's song "Tommy Can you Hear Me". must need sleep cause that was funny to me.

As always, Lisa, we are looking forward to the next update!!! Glad to know that it is there, just waiting to land.

Guess we will have to wait to find out if we should feel bad for Diana and Cassie, or feel bad that Buffy doesn't get to them before newly evil-eyes Willow.

Quicknet should put ads on their 404 page as many times as well all hit it hoping to find an update.

Warlock

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[Lisa of Nine]

Okay!
Here is the unedited chapter... *I am SO dead when my sweet, luminous, magnificent editor sees that I sent it here before letting her fix it.*
I'll edit it ASAP and make the changes to the posted chapter.
Enjoy. I am going to sleep...ah...sweet sleep... the mistress long absent from my world... the Tara to my willow... (Okay, I SO need sleep. LOL)
G'night! http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon29.html

[fell]

This continues to thrill me, Lisa. The last couple chapters were awesome. I particularly love what's happening with Buffy- seeing her rediscover her feelings through experiencing Tara's is a great idea. And the Witches' Council- verrrry spooky!

I'm totally loving this and eagerly awaiting the next installment.

[emily 'first']

This story is a joy to read...In fact every update causes me to wriggle in glee...Which,when I think about it,engenders a feeling of joy.Kind of a self fulfilling prophecy !

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vive,valeque.

[Daydreams]

bouncing here.... great update loving every page you write.

I was hoping that Tara would remain the all powerful witch...as in you other stories Tara never remembers that she is so powerful. Plus hoping for a sequel to Tears of a Goddess?

Loving it all

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[lovin_wil_tara]

Wiked fanfic, best ive read.
I dont normally post replys but i think this one definately deserves one.
Keep up the good work, thanx

[Pixie]

Well, if I'd known that all it took was a song, I would have tried that weeks ago.

Wow! Amazing. Poor Buffy *sigh*. Very interesting way to have her break up with Spike. I'm so glad we have reason to like Diana and Cass again. And the Council of Witches people are reeeaally scary. I actually feel bad for Amy.

I'm glad you got some sleep!

[Quill]

ok, last night was, officially, one the worst nights of my life and I've got a wicked hangover to show for it this morning. BUT, coming home to find an update has completely negated any pain or regrets I have about the past 24 hours and given me a reason to smile.

Since I neglected to do so at the time, I'm going to post my feedback for the previous installment. *quirks eyebrow* Lisa really enjoys making her minions squirm...this we all know...and that last cliff hanger had me looking like a 5 year old denied bathroom privilages. The whole Tara/Buffy interaction was well worth it though. You are phenominal!

Now, on to reading the next chapter.

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"You are the star for which all evenings wait."
~for Nicole~

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[katydid]

Wow is what comes to mind. Excellent update....well worth the wait in my opinion. Willow getting hot seeing Tara work out...lol....very nice.

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"She practically has 'genuine molded plastic' stamped on her ass.

[Puff]

What a great update Lisa (I feel like I've told you that already ) I really don't like the witches council and I think I'll be worried if they find out about Tara.

I look forward to reading the next part.

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'The cold and ruthless sea tossed the lovers' into the starry black night. together they fall, together they sleep. forever.. forever.. *whisper*forever..the cold and ruthless sea...' By Sweets

[xita]

Oh, w/t sex, can't get enough of that. And a breast massage is just what the doctor ordered. I like Buffy figuring that there are better things in life than what's she's been feeling and dumping spike (yay!!!!!), but she needs to find her own girl to lust over and leave Willow's girl alone

[ForeverPiper]

I love how Buffy figures out that she deserves more...but if Willow ever finds out about Buffy falling for Tara she'll be pissed! However, I would like to see Tara's reaction. *grins evily*

Sorry about the double post...I acidentally pushed the button twice.

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[Sassette]

I don't know about that, so much ... it seems like Buffy is just about the only person who could fall for Tara without invoking the wrath of Jealous Willow.

Everyone might see this completely different, but I would think that Willow would realize that Buffy would never EVER make a play for her girl. Not only that, but if the fact that Buffy has a thing for Tara gets out, it's likely that Buffy's condition since her resurrection - the lack of feeling, the sex with Spike, etc - would also get out, and that Willow would mostly just feel really bad for Buffy.

Great update, Lisa ... this thing is giving me grey hairs prematurely, I'll have you know!

*mutters* Freakin' Amy couldn't just leave town, could she? Oh, no! Rat-Girl had to stick around, and now she's gonna' ruin everything ... Grrrr...

-Sass

[Quill]

Lisa, absolutely fantastic update. It had a bit of everything: humor, passion, sadness, guilt, unrequited psuedo-love, betrayal and evil. Amy's breaking process actually made feel mildly sorry for her...not enough for me to forgive her, of course. *bites lip in anticipation* Ok, not to make you feel pressured or rushed but...*whips out the ever-faithful puppy eyes*...please mistress, may I have some more?

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"You are the star for which all evenings wait."
~for Nicole~

[ForeverPiper]

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Originally posted by Sassette:
I don't know about that, so much ... it seems like Buffy is just about the only person who could fall for Tara without invoking the wrath of Jealous Willow.

Everyone might see this completely different, but I would think that Willow would realize that Buffy would never EVER make a play for her girl. Not only that, but if the fact that Buffy has a thing for Tara gets out, it's likely that Buffy's condition since her resurrection - the lack of feeling, the sex with Spike, etc - would also get out, and that Willow would mostly just feel really bad for Buffy.

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You're proably right. I just remember how jelous and overprotective Willow was over Tara when Anya kissed her. Of, course I know that Buffy would NEVER, EVER try ANYTHING to take Tara away from Willow. Willow knows that too. I'm just thinking it would be a REAL surprise to both Willow and Tara.quote:

[Sassette]

Oh, absolutely a surprise ... they're so attuned to each other on that level, they won't notice Buffy's feelings unless they're pointed out to them, or Buffy confesses.

*happy sigh* This fic is just such a joy to think about ... even if I'm worried sick about our girls.

-Sass

[Rosenberg]

I just started reading this the day before yesterday. After completing the first chapter, I was Skeptical Gal. Tara pregnant because of Willow, uh huh. But I continued reading, and I wound up devouring every word, much like a demon spawn devouring...whatever. If I were to post all my comments, I would need a thread of my very own. So, since I don't have my very own Lisa Comments thread, I'll just mention a couple of things that made an impression on me.

I'll never be able to think of a sand-witch again without getting a silly smirk on my face. The deli scene was great, and Anya's comment about gay cows wearing Birkenstocks caused me to giggle out loud (which is not a good thing when you're at work). I rarely, if ever, cry while I'm reading fiction, but the incident with Tara and her Mom and baby brought tears to my eyes. So did the scene where she found the peas in the freezer. That was so simple, but powerful.

I absolutely loved the training room scene with Buffy and the conflict she feels being in physical contact with Tara. Only the discipline of a Slayer allowed her to keep some semblance of composure. Sweaty Tara in a sports bra with her arms around me would have pushed me over the edge. It's nice to see that Buffy isn't immune to Tara's attributes. I'm glad that it allowed Buffy to open herself to feeling real human emotions again and realize that her 'relationship' with Spike isn't based on love. Her bonding with Tara showed her what real love is. And it gave her the impetus to break up with Spike. The pirate fantasy was too cute, and Buffy asking Tara about the levitation thing was absolutely LOL!

I think I'll go and do some bungee jumping now, so I can keep myself in shape for the rest of your cliffhanger.

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I'm very seldom naughty

[bearskeeper]

::slowly opens eyes:: Aw, shucks. I thought there was an update. Oh well ::crawls back into her hole and goes to sleep, waiting for another update::

[Sheila]

WOW...

I'm looking at my swords on the wall and thinking that maybe me and my baby could use some trainning...

Tara training with Buffy and then being massaged by Willow were two of the sexiest scenes I've ever read in fanfic...

Whatever was your inspiration for that, it sure was pretty darn worth it.

Being serious now... if possible... no, don't think so... well, loving every single line of all chapters. Just wonderful, hon!

Diana and Cass really surprised me (although, I did think that they were doing something good... but, in this story, you never know...). And Miss Nove is much scarier than Rack. Why, oh why I have this image of Tara facing her now??? Even knowing that Tara is more powerful, it scares the hell out of me what might happen if "The Witches in Black" get Willow. They can hurt Willow pretty bad...

Your always devoted mitten,
Sheila

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[Willowfan]

Wow....I mean..Wow...wowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowowow!!!
Of all the FanFic I've read...in the countless places I've searched...
Lisa...yours is Absolutely, without a doubt the finest. You capture everything about thier love. It's...it's magical...and powerful..and tangible...I cried. A lot...(Knew I shoulda followed directions and bought the Kleenex stock). You are...amazing. You capture everyone so perfectly. Dawn, Anya (did a GREAT job, I have to say), Xander, Buffy and espically Willow and Tara..(hehe..peas for breakfast..hehe)
You are an amazing author. I bow and humble myself before the master..or mistress? Hmm...
I dunno...your dern good. And you didn't degrade the love scenes to that icky porn, like other writers tend to do. With Willow and Tara's love, you don't need to.
oh yeah...more,more,more,more...
Willowfan

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Tara:You found me...
Willow: I'll always find you.