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Fic: Camp Flutie

Postby Puff » Fri Dec 28, 2001 5:39 pm

I don't know about Tara smiling and feeling dazed at the end of the chapter but I sure know I am. Great story Rane, I am loving it

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Postby miss_spangles » Fri Dec 28, 2001 5:41 pm

Damn! I wish I'd caught up with this one earlier. I finally got the chance to just sit down and read through it and it's wonderful. I can't wait to read more. And the kissing was just so unbelievably sweet!
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Postby Warduke » Fri Dec 28, 2001 6:15 pm

Ohh first kiss, that was just so sweet Rane, this is sooo good, can't wait for more
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Postby Dumbsaint » Fri Dec 28, 2001 6:33 pm

Rane, can I have your children? Heehee. Not in a Rumplestilskin kind of way, I mean like, can I bear them for you?

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Postby mariacomet » Fri Dec 28, 2001 8:00 pm

quote:
Originally posted by Rane:
Before she realized it Willow’s hands were quickly and gently holding her face up again and her lips were pressing against hers. Willow was kissing her. Tara hardly had anytime to process everything before Willow kissed her one last time before pulling back. “Bye.” she smiled at Tara as she walked backwards and out the barn.

Tara was too dazed to reply, all she could do was smile.

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Perfect moment, Rane, 100% perfect. quote:

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Postby xita » Fri Dec 28, 2001 8:22 pm

That rocked so much I can't even explain. Wow, I am so glad I read this before I head out cause now I have a big smile on my face. I loved Willow's moment of boldness. Sigh, thank you!
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Postby Brynn » Fri Dec 28, 2001 9:22 pm

I love this fic! It is just excellent -- so sweet. Everytime I read a part I am smiling by the end! Thanks! Can hardly wait for more!
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Postby orion » Fri Dec 28, 2001 9:44 pm

Sorry your road trip was cancelled but woohoo for more parts. This is such a cute story

BTW you rock!

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Postby Kajun » Fri Dec 28, 2001 10:01 pm

OMG! I love the whole "hay" "hey" exchange.. he he he.. And the rest of it is absolutely wonderful. You make me smile with each new part! Thanks!
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Postby willow_thebadasswitch » Fri Dec 28, 2001 11:45 pm

*sigh*... melted to a puddle on the floor.

Great update Rane!

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Postby Lonewolf » Sat Dec 29, 2001 12:57 am

Rane: That is sooooooo great, and soooooo sweet awwwww, I really love the way that ended with our girls kissing, You Go Rane. I really can't wait to read more.

Lonewolf

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Postby Katharyn » Sat Dec 29, 2001 1:36 am

Pesky campers getting in the way of our girls! Ah but it is the slow progression that is the beauty of this fic. Great Rane, just great.

Katharyn

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Postby magrat » Sat Dec 29, 2001 4:27 am

This is so romantic I love it
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Postby 'lucy' moore » Sat Dec 29, 2001 5:16 am

Beautiful...The written word can convey so much more than images on a tv screen...

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Postby fell » Sat Dec 29, 2001 5:26 am

Your stories always give me such a happy, honey. This fic is a wonderful trip to the only exotic place i've had the pleasure of visiting during the holidays- your amazing imagination.

Instead of boring you with the details of my lonely and depressing xmas, i'll send you some of my latest fic soon to beta. Was your road trip to SF cancelled? If so, maybe this will be the next best thing- it's about W&T on a trip to SF.

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Postby Divine Princess Fuchsia » Sat Dec 29, 2001 8:29 am

Ahhh, Tara in the hay.......what wouldn't I give to be Willow right there. And she smells of vanilla - on of my favourite scents ever since...well, anyway. Cute with the letters. More, more, more!

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Postby Kerrison » Sat Dec 29, 2001 12:58 pm

Jeez Rane... can I get a Tara out at my barn? Being the only erm...alternative girl at my barn is rough.

Come to visit me and I'll give you free riding lessons. Teach you the difference between a stall and a pen. And Hay and Shavings and a saddle and a bridle and...well, all the stuff you need to know for a barn-story.

Or... I'll trade you. You can write the smut for my story and I'll write all your horsie information!


Needless to say, I loved the kiss...moreso the fumbling, I think.

Kerry


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Postby tommo » Sat Dec 29, 2001 4:12 pm

Okay, I'm late to this thread like so many other fics on the board. I just read all the parts right through and I have to say that this is excellent, Rane. Your style is just perfect. Lots of lovely, lavish description and an achingly correct account of first love. Beautiful.

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"Bitter, party of one. Bitter, party of one." she muttered... ~ Four Months After by Capt. Murdock

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Postby Rane » Sat Dec 29, 2001 4:58 pm

you guys are so sweet! thanks for your feedback.

kerry, i'll get tara out of the barn but i'm not sure she'll be able to head over to yours... she'll be busy with Willow and all ya know? i accept your trade (though smut is ruth's forte not mine, teehee, however ask MC and she'll tell you i wrote quite a little 'smuttyesque' encounter between our two girls within their first week of meeting, it's since been edited further back and non-smuttyfied, or not. not there yet) and i would love for you to fix my ingnorant mistakes on riding terminology for when i post it on to WW and EF. thanks again for your help darling!

julia, thanks for the offer and mucho hugs but i think i'm the only girl i know that actually is looking forward to giving birth. just the thought of having a life growing inside me... ok, that's another thread.

things are taking their sweet time with this fic because i'm actually trying to narrate as well. thanks to MC and fell (who's helped me so much in the past) i'm getting more confortable. I tend to skip over it and they're always like *well, how does she say this?*, *i haven't a clue what you're trying to do here* etc... very cool of em. love you both.

i promise an update either later tonight or early tomorrow.

thanks again for reading and hugs to all!

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Postby tommo » Sat Dec 29, 2001 9:42 pm

I don't write that much smut! I haven't written smut in a long time. Which kind of suggests that maybe I should...

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"Bitter, party of one. Bitter, party of one." she muttered... ~ Four Months After by Capt. Murdock

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Postby Dumbsaint » Sat Dec 29, 2001 11:46 pm

Yeah, you and me both, Ruth. Calling all smut muses...

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Postby Rane » Sun Dec 30, 2001 12:01 am

well, my muse took off to the bahamas with canadian kitty's muse for a little bit so i'm thinking all the muses took off for a holiday. I think they're Union.

here's an update... the next part may take a little bit longer to post. i need to re-vamp some stuff and add others. hope you like the update...

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There was only a half-hour left to the bonfire and Tara still hadn’t arrived. Willow was beginning to get restless. Her whole afternoon went by so slowly knowing that later that evening she would be able to stare into those eyes again and maybe even kiss her once more. Not only could she still feel the touch of Tara’s lips on her own but the tingle in her belly hadn’t ceased yet. Still, Tara hadn’t arrived and it was nearing the midnight hour.

“What time is it?” She asked Buffy as her eyes scanned the group of counselors and staff gathered around the bonfire.

“Not even a minute since the last time you asked.” Buffy answered.

All of a sudden, Willow felt it. She knew Tara was around and looked for her in their surroundings. She found her standing near the clearing of the bonfire area talking with Oz. She was smiling at something he was saying. Her eyes darted to Willow connecting with hers for a second before she looked back at Oz.

“Were is Riley with the marshmallows?” Buffy huffed.

“Uh huh.” Willow replied as she kept staring over at Tara and Oz. Why did she always see them together?

Buffy noticed Willow was not paying her any mind and followed her gaze. “What are you staring at? Oh, Oz and Tara. Are we a wee bit jealous, laddie?” she asked trying to sound like a leprechaun. And, to be honest, it worked.

Willow finally pried her eyes away. “No.” she said trying to sound sincere and finished it off with a roll of her eyes.

Buffy didn’t want to get into a *listen to me* lecture mode but did none the less. She turned over to Willow and spoke, “Look, it’s ok to still have feelings for Oz… and stuff. I will always love Angel. And-”

“Hey.” Tara announced as she walked up to the two best friends.

Willow’s eyes connected with Tara’s as she stood up from the log she and Buffy were sitting on. “Hi.” She twitted out. Tara looked incredibly stunning by the firelight.

“I –I wont be able to stay long.” The blonde frowned a bit unsettled.

“Why not?” Willow asked, worried.

“I just c-cant.” Tara looked over to the fire for a split second.

Buffy was growing tired of being ignored. “Hi, Tara.” She finally said with one of her knowing smiles.

“Hi.” The blonde looked down at her and smiled shyly.

Buffy stood up and patted her behind to get the dirt off. “I’m going to go find marshmallows. Silly boyfriend is taking forever. What are they good for?” she kidded as she walked away.

Once Buffy left, Willow motioned for the two of them to sit down and they did. “Thanks for coming.” She said. It took all her strength to not reach out and cusp the other girl’s hands.

“Of course.” Tara looked over to her and smiled. The uneasiness of a few second ago had passed. “How is Jamie?” she asked sincerely.

“Her elbow is sprained but at least she can stay at camp.” Willow mentioned.

“I’m glad she’s ok.” Tara brightened up as she looked at Willow.

Willow wanted to reach out and hold her close. She wanted to hold her hand and play with her fingers. She wanted to-

“Is this what all you guys do every night?” Tara asked as she looked at the milieu. Some counselors were talking, other staff members were singing and playing guitars. Couples were snuggled up together roasting marshmallows or kissing and groping openly.

Willow nodded. “Pretty much. Lights out is a ten and the raids don’t usually start until after midnight so we’ve got about two hours to kill. Someone thought bonfires and marshmallows were a good idea about ten years ago since this is now tradition and all... How do you and Oz know each other? You two seem so chummy.” She asked trying not to sound too jealous.

The fire transfixed Tara’s gaze. “We met last year. He’s really cool.”

Willow was shocked by the disclosure. “Last year?! But you weren’t here last year. We’re you?” she asked bewildered by all this.

Tara grinned as she turned her face to Willow. “Yes.”

“But , I…”

“I got sick the first week and had to go home.” Tara explained.

Willow didn’t believe it. “No.”

This time Tara laughed out loud. “I’m not kidding. I got Mono.”

“For real?”

“Yes.”

Willow shook her head. “And to think you met Oz and not me.”

“Fate’s funny that way.” Tara mentioned as she gazed at the crackling fire once more.

Before Willow could respond to that statement Riley walked up and asked for Buffy’s whereabouts.

“Went off looking for marshmallows.” the redhead told him.

“I’ve got them right here! She’s so impatient sometimes.” He mumbled as he wandered off to find his girlfriend.

Willow looked at Tara again and opened her mouth to speak. Instead a rough voice came from behind them.

“Tara?!” Donnie asked as he wandered up to his sister. “What the hell are you doing here? If dad finds out-“

Tara quickly stood up and shook her head at her brother. “I w-was just leaving. I’m leaving.”

“Tara, what?” Willow stood up not knowing what was going on. All she knew was she’d never liked Donnie before and seeing the fright in Tara’s eyes made her hate him now.

“You better run home before he realizes you’re not there.” He looked over to Willow and recognized her. “Rosenberg. She who pretended to be allergic to hay last year just because she’s scared of itty bitty horses.” His guttural laugh curled the redhead’s fingers into a fist. “And you’re hanging out with my sister? She put a spell on you?” he asked her in a hushed tone.

“D-Donnie, shut up.” Tara finally stood up to him. She looked at Willow for a second and then back at her brother.

Donnie was a bit surprised to hear her talk to him like that. He chortled and shook his head. “Whatever. It’s your butt, not mine.” His eyes wandered behind Tara. “Hmm, marshmallows… See ya home later lil’ sis.” He said as he took off.

Willow noticed Tara’s eyes followed her brother, “Ugh, he’s such an ass!” Tara finally uttered as she shook her head and rolled her eyes. “You’re so lucky you don’t have any siblings.” She said as she looked back over to Willow. The blonde was still frowning but her features were softening again. Her eye connected with Willow’s questioning ones. “Willow… I-I should go.” She gently said.

“Go?!” Willow’s heart was breaking. “But you just got here. And tomorrow Saturday so I won’t see you until Monday... Tara, I don’t think I can wait that long.” Her voice was a bit despairing but she didn’t care. Willow knew she was being foolish but she didn’t want her to go. They didn’t have round robins on the weekends and the most of the staff was allowed to come and go as they pleased. And Willow believed that since Tara lived a few minutes away she’d probably not hang around the camp at all on the weekend. She wanted to see Tara again. She wanted to be with her, talk and laugh. She wanted to hold Tara close and protect her. She wanted to slap her silly brother for trying to intimidate Tara.

Tara smiled and thought for a moment. “Do you have a break tomorrow?” Willow nodded wondering what this meant. “Meet me at the Wilkins Cabin after lunch then.”

Willow’s eyes widened. She knew all about that abandoned cabin in the woods. “Wilkins? But, isn’t that haunted?”

Tara smirked. “No. My brother started that rumor years ago so he could take girls there and not be interrup- uh, I-I’m totally digging a hole for myself aren’t I?” she asked shaking her head in her hands. Willow finally grinned. “I didn’t mean it like that. I just meant we could meet there. I want to take you somewhere. Else.”

“Where?”

“You’ll find out tomorrow.” Tara coyly smiled as she turned to leave.

“Tara, wait!” Willow grabbed her hand. “Let me walk you home. Please.” She said even though she had no clue where exactly home was.

The blonde grinned as she squeezed her hand. “I have a car.”

“Let me walk you to your car then.” Willow amended her statement, longing in her eyes.

Tara smiled as she nodded. She couldn’t deny Willow anything when she looked at her like that.

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TBC...

[This message has been edited by Rane (edited December 30, 2001).]

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Postby Warduke » Sun Dec 30, 2001 12:09 am

I am loving this fic so much Rane, another great part, I love Tara calling Donnie an ass
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Postby Dumbsaint » Sun Dec 30, 2001 12:10 am

*enjoying her state of being a melty puddle of girl goo after reading this latest installment*

My girls. My lovely, lovely girls.

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Postby tommo » Sun Dec 30, 2001 12:14 am

"Tara smiled as she nodded. She couldn’t deny Willow anything when she looked at her like that."

Delightful. Because we know what that looks like. Sigh.

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Postby Katharyn » Sun Dec 30, 2001 12:40 am

Just wonderful... running out of superbatives here so I have started recycling.
Apart from the idea of Donny actually getting any girls to go with him to a cabin in the woods I cannot find a flaw in this lovely sweet and funny fic... Big happy!
"I want to take you somewhere" Yes we know!

Katharyn

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Postby Lonewolf » Sun Dec 30, 2001 1:09 am

Rane: GREAT update, I really love the way Willow can't stand to be away from Tara too long, its really lovely and very sweet, I can't wait for the next part. Hope that muse kicks in soon.

Lonewolf

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Postby xita » Sun Dec 30, 2001 1:31 am

Thank you Rane. Again lovely. Nothing more I can say except I love it. I love the way they are figuring things out. They know they like each other but they are trying to figure out what they are going to do about it now. sigh...
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Postby Jae » Sun Dec 30, 2001 1:43 am

Wow... this is turning out so lovely. *pause* That sentence wasn't grammatically correct, was it? Oh well... okay, enough with the ellipsis (is that the right word?) it is obviously time for brackets instead. And now that I'm way off topic (sleep is needed) let me reiterate. Wow. This flows far more naturally than the first draft you sent me. I love it! =0) I'm sooooooooooooooooo sorry about the lack of constructive criticism earlier, but away, then sick (still sick, actually. It seems to be going around, eh?) didn't leave time for intelligent thought. So, yes. It flows wonderfully and as far as I can tell, everyone is beautifully in character and the romance between Willow and Tara is sooooooooooooooo sweet! I greatly look forward to seeing how you revamp the next scene !! Sadly, I believe the late hour has stolen away any further intelligent comments that might arise from this marvellous fic. So, I bed thee... umm.. bid thee *thwacks self* (stupid typos) a fond goodnight. (Incidentally, that was a genuine typo that was just too amusing to fix... so goodnight!)(Gosh darnit, I put in more ellipsises! GAH!)
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Postby 'lucy' moore » Sun Dec 30, 2001 5:59 am

I like...

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