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Fic: Camp Flutie

Postby Divine Princess Fuchsia » Sun Dec 30, 2001 7:30 am

Bad Donnie! Bad, bad, bad Donnie. Keeping our two lovelies apart...grrr. And I was so looking forward to the two of them in firelight.....

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''I am, you know''
''What?''
''Yours''

''Those of you who fall into my good graces will come to know me as Maggie. Those of you who don't will know me by the name my T.A's use and think I don't know about: The Evil Bitch Monster of Death''.

Divine Princess Fuchsia
 


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Postby bearskeeper » Sun Dec 30, 2001 8:17 am

Wow, Rane! It just keeps getting better and better! I cant wait for the next installment!!!!
bearskeeper
 


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Postby canadian kitty » Sun Dec 30, 2001 12:21 pm

Rane. Tell that damn muse of yours to stop trying to lure mine off to the bahamas or I'll never get my story finished.

And if you write stuff like this while your muse is vacationing, i'm beginning to think you've got another one on the side.

It's not mine is it?

canadian kitty
 


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Postby Rane » Sun Dec 30, 2001 12:38 pm

hehe, my muse returned with me a few days ago. i could have sworn she mentioned something about a huge get together i was keeping her from and then i used MC's rope to tie her to my bed. that sounded really, really kinky so no, no kink involved.

Katharyn, as for Donnie, i actually think the actor was very good looking. yeah, he's a jerk but some girls like that in a guy. especially in camp, everyone's horny and it's ok to make mistakes like him. (i've always wondered if he knew the family secret or if he was just an abusive big brother).

jae, the scene is totally re-vamped. i'm saving the thing in the thing for later. i'm drawing out the story. i tend to compress things and now i'm actually challenging myself and writing novelesque. and, the bed comment: HILARIOUS! i was like, hmmm... i hope you're feeling better.

So kittens, here's an update... toodles and talk to you later!

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With the sound of the bonfire and its participants behind them, the two girls walked through the camp in silence not really needing to talk. They were in the presence of one another and that was satisfyingly enough.

The night was absolutely gorgeous, lots of stars could be seen in the sky, a gentle breeze cooled them and there were hardly any mosquitoes biting. The kiddy cabins were on the opposite side of the camp, and most of the staff was at the bonfire so Willow knew they were pretty much on their own.

As they walked Willow cuddled up further into Tara and wrapped her arm around the blondes’ waist, settling her head above her bosom. Tara didn’t know who had made the first move into the precious embrace but it didn’t matter, she treasured being this close to Willow even for the few minutes it took to walk to the parking lot.

As they neared the front of the camp, Tara lovingly kissed the redhead’s temple and whispered the redhead’s name softly. She looked over towards Tara as they stopped walking in front of a small, black pick up truck. Willow slowly drew up her right hand to caress the blonde’s cheek, touching her at a leisurely pace with her fingers, memorizing the curves as her fingertips trailed over her face. Once their eyes connected she instantly captured Tara’s lips in a kiss. “Don’t go yet.” She pleaded as she placed her hand over Tara’s heart. “Please.”

Tara didn’t know what to say. She never wanted to leave Willow’s embrace but knew Donnie was right. If her father found out she had snuck out… “I have to go. But I will see you tomorrow.” She kissed Willow.

This time it was more urgent, more passionate as tentative gentle pecks of lips on lips deepened as seconds continued. Mouths opened and tongues explored as hearts raced and breathing became an issue. Neither wanted to part, wanting to stretch out the few seconds they had left into infinity. Their bodies aching for more contact but knew it wouldn’t come just yet.

Their feeling for one another simmered inside and made it harder to let go and say goodnight. Willow’s body burned and she knew Tara’s did too. A mouth captured a moan as a hand traveled down someone’s back. Finger’s caressed jaw lines and others ran through soft hair.

“Tara.” Willow pressed her body up against the girl who more than openly welcomed her. Willow took a deep breath as her lips kissed Tara’s neck and collarbone. Missing the taste of Tara, her mouth returned to the blondes lips.

Time seemed to last forever but reluctantly Tara finally pulled herself away from Willow’s loving hands and looked as if she were about to cry. Her gaze lowered to the ground as her heart ached knowing that she had to leave.

“What’s wrong?” The redhead asked as her lips continued to kiss over the side of Tara’s face, her hands moving up to cup it.

“I have to go.” Tara mentioned softly as kissed Willow once more, her voice hushed by her unearthed emotions.

“I’ll see you tomorrow.” The redhead said in between the captures of Tara’s lips with her own. “Promise me.”

“I promise.” The blonde said under her breath as she kissed Willow’s lips again. “I promise.”

Willow nibbled on the blondes lower lips one last time. She looked into her eyes and smiled. “I’ll see you tomorrow.”

Tara quickly kissed the redhead one more time and let go. As she opened her car door both giggled in the moment and Willow kissed her again before letting Tara sit down and turn on her car. “Drive safely.” She added.

“I will.” The blonde smiled. Tara gently shut the door and pressed her lips against the car window, leaving an imprint of her puckered mouth on it. Willow lovingly traced it with her fingers and kissed it from her side of the glass.

“Bye.” Willow called out smiling broadly as she half waved at Tara.

‘She’s done it again’, Tara thought to herself as she waved back. Willow was so adorable.

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TBC....

Rane
 


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Postby Fuzz » Sun Dec 30, 2001 12:43 pm

Love that Wilkins Cabin bit.

I'm a bit late but the part before this update made me go " YEAH!!! " and hopping around
*sigh* Tara was totally made the move.
You go girl!!! ( Again,who wouldn't if this pretty red head stand infront of you...) Luckily enough,Willow wasn't too shy to make that kiss!!!

LOVE IT!!

Fuzz
 


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Postby tommo » Sun Dec 30, 2001 1:26 pm

I swear, this is just so cute. It's like all the crap never happened. I love it.

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"Bitter, party of one. Bitter, party of one." she muttered... ~ Four Months After by Capt. Murdock

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Postby willow_thebadasswitch » Sun Dec 30, 2001 1:33 pm

WOW!!! This story just keeps getting better and better!! You rule Rane!

... loving the smoochies.


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Postby Warduke » Sun Dec 30, 2001 2:03 pm

Oh Rane, great job with the smoochies

This just gets better and better.

Warduke
 


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Postby 'lucy' moore » Sun Dec 30, 2001 2:39 pm

Smoochies...Smoochies...Smoochies.YES!

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Postby scylla » Sun Dec 30, 2001 2:41 pm

This is just fabulous!!
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Postby xita » Sun Dec 30, 2001 2:46 pm

hmm. yes, you've done it again. Just perfect kissing, stolen kisses. It is such a camp story. I think that's the best part, like some eighties camp movie. It's great.
xita
 


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Postby Kajun » Sun Dec 30, 2001 2:56 pm

You have me checking into the Pens constantly for your updates.. well done!!! Oh!! and another update before I can post to the last one! Yeah for smoochies! Your melting my heart.. this is such a sweet fic!! Where is Tara planning on taking Willow??
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Postby OneFlyChicken » Sun Dec 30, 2001 2:57 pm

wonderful, absolutely wonderful! i want more smoochies!
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Postby bearskeeper » Sun Dec 30, 2001 4:28 pm

And just when you think it can't get any better - Rane hits you again! It was great. Just the thing to get me out of my after-work grungy yucky mood! More soon!!!! Please?!?!?!
bearskeeper
 


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Postby miss_spangles » Sun Dec 30, 2001 4:48 pm

Oh this is too good! I'm one of those people who keep checking in looking for updates when I really should be doing work. But hey, Willow and Tara flirting, etc. is a thousand times more interesting. I'm dying for the next part
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Postby orion » Sun Dec 30, 2001 5:24 pm

okay, I knew I was missing something! I never got to go to camp

At least this way I can get my vicarious smoochies. Wonderful job so far!!

orion
 


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Postby Rane » Sun Dec 30, 2001 5:25 pm

hehe... it just started drizzling here in LA so i'm back from my little day trip. i cant shop in flea markets when it rains, spoils the whole fun. at least it's not 20 degrees like my folks say NYC is.

This next part is totally new, totally extra and had not been beta-ed by someone else. I'm actually writing two scenes ahead of this one and betaing the upadtes at the same time so please comments/feedback welcome cause i'm sure there are some mistakes. hope you like...

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Willow sadly returned to the bonfire area only to find it shriveling. None of the staff was around anymore and she began to get a bit panicky. ‘Where is everyone?’ she wondered as she scanned the field. In Sunnydale, creepily uninhabited areas meant badness was afoot.

“Willow?!” Buffy called out as soon as she saw her, giving the redhead a little heart attack. She giggled softly at the sight of Willow jumping in place and her little “eek!” shouted into the night air. “Where have you been? Where’s Tara?” she asked as she walked up to her.

It took Willow a few seconds of calming down her heavy breathing to say, “Home… Where is everybody?” She voiced a bit confused about the desolate field.

“Everybody is sleeping. It’s been over an hour since you two disappeared. I’ve been looking all over for you. I even went to the barn.”

“What? I just walked her to her car.”

“For over an hour?” Buffy knew the parking lot was in the front of the camp and no matter what it would not have taken an hour to walk over there and back.

“An hour?” Willow asked in wonderment. She’d been kissing Tara over an hour? Willow blushed at the thought.

“Were you abducted by aliens?” Buffy quipped as she crossed her arms over her chest.

“What? No, Buffy.” Willow chuckled. She and Buffy were die-hard ‘The X-Files’ fans, never allowing anything or anyone to interrupt them while watching the show. Well, unless it was the end of the world or something and they taped it. “I guess we lost track of time.” The redhead admitted.

“Right.” Buffy nodded. “I’m sure you’ve got some government microchip in your nose now.” She said referring to the past situation of one of the main characters of the show as she wrapped her arm over her best friends’ shoulder.

“It was in the back of her neck, Buff.” Willow said as they began to walk towards their cabin.

The two strolled through the campgrounds in silence until Buffy spoke up, “Are you ok?” she asked concerned.

“Yeah, why?” Willow didn’t understand where that question came from.

“Its just lately you’ve been… not distant but… You’re, like, occupied by something. I just want to know.”

“I’m fine.” Willow replied, her head spinning with thoughts of Tara.

“It’s just- I know you and Tara are becoming good friends and all but- I just wanted you to know that I’m still here for you. You’re my best friend and I love you.” Suddenly Buffy’s spidery senses overwhelmed her. “Willow, stop.” She said she held her friend behind her and scanned their surroundings. They were near the kitchen and mess hall now but Buffy’s feelings didn’t register simple human kids raiding for food. It was something else.

“What?!” Willow grew worried. She felt she was back in Sunnydale patrolling again with Buffy and her heart began to beat rapidly. Except for Buffy she didn’t have any weapons.

“Shhh…” Buffy stepped forward. “There’s something out there.” She voiced as she looked over to the group of trees and shrubs behind the dining hall. Her Slayer eyes tried to focus as her hearing honed in on the sound of movement.

The redhead shook her head vehemently. “No, we’re on vacation!” Willow whispered to her. “There cant be any demons here.”

Buffy didn’t reply to that. “I’ll be right back.” She said as she stepped forward.

Willow quickly reached out and held her back. “You are not going alone.”

“Will, you don’t have any weapons.” Buffy answered her knowing no matter what Willow would always back her up.

“I know.” Willow looked down to the ground and grabbed a rock the size of her fist near her tennis shoes. “I have one now.” She half smiled nervously at Buffy.

Buffy sighed at her best friend. She loved her so much. “Come on then.” She smiled.

As they snuck up silently and neared the back of the kitchen they heard a couple of low growls coming from the bushes.

“Oh god what is that?” Willow whispered as flashes of all the demons she’d encountered during the last four years ran though her mind.

“Looks like something is hungry.” Buffy said as her sense of smell registered the scent of that evenings dinner. She realized they were nearing the garbage cans and it was probably some wild animal raiding the trash rather than some demon. Although, she could think of a few demons that actually hung out in dumpsites back home.

“I’d rather they be fasting. Fasting is good.” Willow tightened her grip around the rock.

Buffy relaxed as she chuckled lightly. “It’s probably a coyote. Or a bear.” She mentioned as she turned around to Willow. She realized that last thought was not a very pleasant one. Last time she fought a bear was certainly not a fond memory.

“No, it’s not.” Willow warbled as soon as Buffy turned to her, a look of pure horror spread across her face. “DEMON!” she shouted as she pointed at it with her rockless hand.

Buffy had no time to react as a large, scabrous demon emerged from the bushes and whacked the Slayer from behind. His power sent Buffy flying, falling a few feet from Willow who watched her crash on the ground in pain. Willow could do nothing more than throw the rock at the demon with all her force hoping Buffy would recover fast.

The rock never connected with the demon though. It hardly even reached it. ‘I should have paid more attention during archery’, she scolded herself as the demon looked at her puzzled. She was such a tiny thing compared its massive size. Its eyes were red and its mouth all distorted with a couple of teeth protruding the demons lips. Willow’s heart sank as she thought of all the ways they could rip her into shreds.

Before she was able to process another thought she felt Buffy’s arms encircle her as she threw herself on the redhead. They fell sideways to the ground as Buffy high kicked the demon back in mid air. The Slayer landed on top of Willow.

Buffy looked over her friend to make sure she was all right and noticed something on her neck, “Is that a hickey?” she asked wide eyed.

“What?! No! Buffy, this is serious. Demons!” Willow motioned with her head to the demon heading towards the girls again.

As Buffy jumped off the redhead and headed towards the demon ready for the fight, Willow quickly reached up to touch her neck. She rolled her eyes once she realized she wouldn’t be able to feel the hickey. ‘Rock, I need another rock’, she thought as she stood up and looked at the ground around her.

Buffy was in the middle of her fight with the demon, both trying hard to out do the other. Her usual quips in between punches were silenced as she tried to figure out a way to beat this thing. It was too strong.

Willow grabbed another rock from the ground and waited for a clear shot. It never came. Buffy and the demon were too close to each other for her. She was afraid she’d hit Buffy instead of the demon and that would not be very cool. She tried to think of spells she could use but couldn’t remember any that didn’t end up with a fire, and accidentally burning Buffy was not good either. She hated feeling so useless and powerless.

Buffy thought she was finally getting the upper hand in the scuffle as the demon punched her with a right hook that sent her to the ground. He stood over her and suddenly disappeared from her line of sight. It had been knocked to the ground after a rock connected with the side of its face.

Buffy looked over to see Willow beaming. “Thanks, Will.”

“Sure, it was nothing.” She said nonchalantly even though she was bursting with pride inside.

Buffy quickly stood up and waited for the demon to rise. But it never did. It wasn’t even moving.

“What’s wrong?” Willow asked.

“I think you killed it.” Buffy said as she tapped the demon with her feet, still alert that this all might be just a ploy. She studied it a few seconds more and reached over to snap its neck just in case. “It’s deader.” She announced.

“Do you think it had a heart attack?” Willow wondered aloud as she neared them.

“Maybe. I don’t know.” Buffy scratched her head. “Maybe you David-ed it.” Willow’s puzzled look let Buffy know she didn’t understand what she was saying. “David and Goliath? The rock…”

“Oh.” Willow nodded. “Except I’m a girl and all.” Buffy nodded. “Should we bury it? It wont go all poof like vampires, will it?”

“No. But memorize its features so we can research it later.” Buffy mentioned as she grabbed one the demons arms and began to pull it towards the trees.

Willow helped her drag the demon. “Why me?”

“Cause you’re the one with the photogenic memory.”

“Photographic.” Willow corrected.

“That’s what I said.” Buffy answered back with a roll of her eyes and a smile on her face.

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TBC....

Rane
 


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Postby fell » Sun Dec 30, 2001 5:36 pm

Oooh, rane. You rock, girlfriend! This is delightful. It's hard (for me at least) to figure how to make the whole alternate storyline thing work, but you're doing a great job with this. It really works. Keep it up!
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Postby canadian kitty » Sun Dec 30, 2001 5:51 pm

[QUOTE]Originally posted by Rane:

Buffy looked over her friend to make sure she was all right and noticed something on her neck, “Is that a hickey?” she asked wide eyed.
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Oh Rane. That was hilarious.

[This message has been edited by canadian kitty (edited December 30, 2001).]

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Postby Aria » Sun Dec 30, 2001 6:06 pm

Rane I enjoy all of your fic, but must say you've outdone yourself here. This is too good. I always enjoy a alternate meeting story and this is the best I've read! Those last sections were great. Loves the part where Buffy saw Willow's hickey! It's just a matter of time before Buffy figures it out and that scene should be very fun.

Thanks for a great story. I was having a bad day until now.

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Postby miss_spangles » Sun Dec 30, 2001 6:10 pm

I love the interaction between Buffy and Willow in this story, I wish we'd see more bonding on screen too. I don't know how you're managing to keep this up Rane, but it's great
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Postby orion » Sun Dec 30, 2001 6:18 pm

oh god, still can't get over it, I love that Willow killed the demon with a rock.
Woohoo go Willow!!
orion
 


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Postby Charlie » Sun Dec 30, 2001 6:27 pm

Rane, I, along with most of the Kittens on DCP, am falling rapidly in love with you...

This is SO good! I laughed out loud at Willow's hickey... startled the cat. You go, girl!

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Postby xita » Sun Dec 30, 2001 8:50 pm

It keeps getting better. Willow with a hickey! I am tempted to make it rain in la a lot so you stay home and write
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Postby Warduke » Sun Dec 30, 2001 9:00 pm

What can I say Rane, Willow with a hickey, losing track of time because she was kissing Tara for an hour, can you blame her

I can’t wait for more, this is just sooo good.

Warduke
 


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Postby Brynn » Sun Dec 30, 2001 9:03 pm

I am loving this entire fic -- but the hickey really made me laugh! Willow and Tara losing a whole hour making out? Gotta love that! Can't wait until they hit that "haunted" cabin!
Brynn
 


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Postby AutumnT » Sun Dec 30, 2001 9:21 pm

I'm usually not much for alternate universe fiction. I'm pretty much strictly a canon gal. However, I think why this is working so well for me is that you are letting us experience the feelings and events that were going on, but we were never allowed to see. Since we were excluded from all those moments it's great fun to see them played out here.
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Postby Tempest819 » Sun Dec 30, 2001 9:31 pm

I just have to give huge DITTO to what everyone was saying. I was laughing so hard at the hickey part, it was classic. Willow losing track of time while getting with the smoochies. Hey if I got to kiss Tara or Willow I'd be lucky if I remembered my own name. oh I just went to a happy visual place. I love feel good fics! Keep it coming Rane. Keep it coming!
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Postby LeatherQueen » Sun Dec 30, 2001 9:33 pm

Oh, I'm really loving this fic. It's so sweet and funny. And smoochies, too!

Heh... and I love hickeys on Willow. Naughty Tara!

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"Honey, I'm the original one-eyed chicklet in the kingdom of the blind." -Glory

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Postby Jae » Sun Dec 30, 2001 10:34 pm

*happy sigh* Oh, this truly is marvellous. You really do write well. I'm really enjoying the longer version of this. Your attempts at making it more novelesque are most definitely successful! I can't wait for the rest! Well, I suppose strictly speaking I can, and will have to, but I don't want to!! I have to say, the latest added scene was priceless. I adore the concept of all that time having passed and Buffy noticing the hickie was ingenious! YAY YOU!! (That's right, you now have your own, personal cheering squad. Don't you feel special?)

Okies, that is quite enough out of me. And I have to point out that I did not use ellipsis once during this entire post!

Anyway, keep up the good work! Please?

Jae
 

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