FF: Unexpected Consequences

[willow_thebadasswitch]

God the angst!!!

Just so you know, each of your installments leave me wanting more. (I kinda miss that time I spent the whole day reading Tears of the Goddess from start to finish. ) And where is Willow going? Hope she doesn't get into trouble what with Amy and Rack running loose. I SO hate those 2.

Cletus the fetus, huh?? That was hilarious. And I lmao at Anya's kids=tiredness rant. Also, I can totally imagine Giles explaining what he did to the other bear. Teehee...

[Kalita]

Oh, my, that chapter ending hurt. I felt like I'd been disemboweled.

My one consolation is that Willow is wearing that amulet. I'm hoping it'll come through in the end if and when Rack and Amy come after her.

Still, I'm all queasy and feeling not of the good. Don't make this too bad, pleeese...

[katydid]

We did sorta abandon the chat room. We now get together on Yahoo IM...look for me if you have it. My username is katydid317.

hee hee Thanks for the barefeet! I want more barefeet! I wanna see them rub each other feet!

Excellent update. I cant wait for the next part.

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"She practically has 'genuine molded plastic' stamped on her ass.

[Jae]

Wow... I am truly loving reading your work. Both this, and your other stuff. (not read all of it, but I'm getting there... at least the W/T stuff) You are a phenomenal writer and it's sooo nice that you're sharing your talents with us. The only downside is I keep reading your fic instead of doing all the papers I'm supposed to be writing... though this is certainly more enjoyable I look forward to the next installments and the opportunity to procrastinate further!

[Quill]

AAAAAAHH! No warning on this one just grrr at Amy and rack and woo hoo punchy Xander, giggle at the really cute Giles Lesbear scene, Oh my goodness breath Will/Tara not-so-sleepy time and Bam! To be continued? *severe pout firmly in place*
On a more serious note: No I have not been peeking at your hard drive - I'm not that ninja...*grin* You have, once again, completely sucked me in and now I'll be pacing back and forth, biting my nails and worrying my cats until the next update. It's cool, I can take it...I am capable of patience...sometimes...*grin*
Keep it coming!

[jomarch]

Okay, this is the first Fanfiction I have read and its brilliant. Characterisations are spot on and some parts are just classic (breakfast peas...need I say more). Its positively sweet misery reading it as the cliffhangers are not doing any wonders for my concentration at work. I am trying to discipline myself to only read it every other day but its not working. Now I am just re-reading the posted chapters to get myself through the day in anticipation for new chapters. I am definitely downloading your other stories as well. At least those are finished (right???) and won't keep me in suspense. (Good suspense but still not doing wonders for my working hours).

[Kilopto]

Okay I know I've praised you before but dammit this is just amazing!! Heart wrenching and kinda sorta painful at the moment but dear god woman this is amazing!!! Is this story real? Can fanfic writing BE this good?? Ack I am so at a loss for words. I've read fanfic from a bunch of different shows but this is like quickly becoming one of my most favourite fics of all time ever.

Just a damn fine story! Damn fine!

[xita]

Oh a touch brilliance with the bears, that really made me giggle. Plus the thing with the changing of polarity an oh so appropriate metaphor.

[scylla]

Whoa! That was very sinister! Poor Willow!! Anyway, I really like Tara's hormonally induced grouchiness! I am SO enjoying this, despite the fact that you lured us in with smoochies and then ended with disaster! keep up the great work.

[Pixie]

Brainfreeze....cannot form coherent thought...Cletus the fetus....hormonal, disloyal pissy Tara....true inner lesbear....okay, Tara, I totally see where she's coming (or not! teehee) from, but poor Willow!!!

*Squish* Pixie melts into a puddle on the floor!

[BytrSuite]

The bears were adorable. I so enjoy reading your fic. Now see, personally, chapter ten was much more of a cliffhanger than chapter eight. I would have read them both right away anyway, but I'm just saying.

I love all your W/T fics. I might have to start reading your non W/T stuff. I just need to get motivated to learn the new characters.

Keep up the good writing. I really love the way you write Anya and Buffy too. They are both much friendlier and more understanding in your world. It's great.

[mollyig]

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Originally posted by BytrSuite:
I love all your W/T fics. I might have to start reading your non W/T stuff. I just need to get motivated to learn the new characters.

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You definitely should. I love the Voyager ones - especially the Torres/Seven ones.

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[delany]

well i tried.
i tried to just collect the chapters, to be read in one big chunk. but no..
i held out for oh..about 6 hrs before i cracked.
i canna take tha preasure cap'n!!!
i need more.. feed me...
*crawls under desk to chew on big toe*

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[Charlie]

OK, this is just so fantastic! Brilliant updates... I love charming Xander, and Anya getting broody, and silly Giles - the bears were so good! And the ending was just ouchy... but you've left us all desperate for more. So I can wait...

*settles down to wait, gives up impatiently after two seconds and begins pacing*

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‘When she lowers her eyes she seems to hold all the beauty in the world between her eyelids; when she raises them I see only myself in her gaze.’
- Natalie Clifford Barney

[Enigmatic]

Ohh, you are such a tease! Poor Willow, I feel so bad for her! But, I really like the conversation between Buffy and Tara, that is until Tara went all cracy, but it's great that Buffy supports her best friend, even though she had been bad! Can't wait til the next chapter...

[Enigmatic]

Oh, forgot one thing...Giles! It's great to have him back, I have missed him a lot!

[ShaggyKat]

Thank you for the update. It was as angst filled as you warned. I hope Willow just holding the dark magic doesn't hurt Tara, because it maybe a very, very long time before that reflex is no more.

I have become addicted to fanfic and have read through the archive sites(extraflamey, wiccanways). Now I come here to get my fix. I agree that Rane's stuff is top notch, but don't sell yourself short. I enjoy your stories a great deal. I have purposely stayed away from your voyager stuff so as not to pick up another fanfic addiction.

looking forward to the next chapter

[KittyKo]

Oh gods... I can't make any coherent remarks right now. I'm really enjoying this, but ouch.
*kittyko walks away sniffing "blasted cold"*

[fell]

Thanks for your wonderful story, Lisa. Your writing is superb. You've done a beautiful job of melding scenes from the series, but my favorite part so far was the kissybears- so funny! I laughed and i cried until the cockles of my heart (whatever that is) got all warm and toasty. What more can a hopeless romantic ask for? Oh yeah- adventure, angst and drama- and this has all the flavors. Such a treat for these Buffy-less weeks.

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[sparrow]

I thought it was really cool and a little sign to calm the Willow dark magic fears that Cassie said the darkness went away from Tara when Willow moved behind her. Very interesting. I wish Tara would really give Willow that second chance and not do the it's ok that I can touch you but not ok if you want to get close. Also very interesting that in the last chapter when Willow and Tara were well you know Willow said a few times I love you to Tara but Tara did not responde. Or maybe I'm just over analyzing this due to the none tv Willow and Tara goodness. Anyways great additions to this fic. You really have a talent, keep up the great, captivating work. I'm hooked.

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"I may be loves bitch but at least I'm (wo)man enough to admit it"

"Yea baby, I'm back"

[silverangel]

I laughed my ass off at "Cletus the fetus" and the Giles tale of the bears, that was so cute! But the end of chapter 10?? I need a hug. *sniffle* how soon till chapter 11?

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Jennifer, Site Mom at Willow and Tara's Love/ http://clix.to/willowandtaraslove

Willow: Where would you go? If you felt lost and alone? Where would you go?
Tara: To you.
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[Willow Rocks]

I can't express in words how much this fic rocks, this may be even better then Bound and the rebrution and reward fics

I need more now!

[Robin]

This is like rollercoaster, but I like it!
But there's one thing I'm wondering: you got all the characters involved, but Spike is missing. Why?

[the_slayers_girl]

I love this story so much. I keep checking back like every five seconds to see if it has been updated! Its wonderful! More please...and soon!

[Puff]

What no update yet? I'm not good with the whole patience thing

[willow_thebadasswitch]

oh bugger! I thought it was an update. I guess I'm as hooked as you are, the_slayers_girl.

[Bobo's Mom]

Lisa,

What a thriller you're creating. Can't wait for the next update. Also, I wanted to let you know that you're doing a good job descibing some of the emotional/hormonal reactions of pregnancy; I work with moms-to-be everyday and indecision is the norm.

You asked me about the nickname. Bobo the cat sometimes acts like my first born and was sitting atop my computer when I registered, so it seemed to fit. My other cat's name is Picard, which explains why I came into contact with your Star Trek fiction first. Your web page has been saved in my favorites for awhile now!

Good luck with the update. As a long time reader I must say that you really capture W/T and tell their story with a strong and believable voice. I hope you have many stories left in you.

A devoted reader,
BM

[Jenny Scott]

Okay want an update...

(does her impression of the wee kid in the exorsist)

...NOW!

(Head starts to spin around. Mwah haw haw...)

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"The worlds about to be destroyed and i'm stuck in a traffic jam!"

[Lisa of Nine]

Good evening. IT'S HERE!
Here are tonight's two chapters. Same bat format, same bat channel. Chapter address, followed by feedback replies!
Sorry for no warning last time, but that was just emotional angst. I really only warn when there is baby in peril stuff! LOL
Thanks for all the feedback.
Enjoy,
Lisa
PS.. I don't suppose anyone ever looks at these addresses early do they? *G* I usually upload them about 5 minues before I post the link.
http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon11.html http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon12.html

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Puff:
I only warn when there is MAJOR angst...death, life in peril cliffhangers. DO I look repentant? No? Oh darn.
Hugs to you. Yeah, WIllow is suffering but she used dark magic...the universe doesn't like that. (In my fic I AM the goddess... so Willow is at my mercy.)
I can always use a publicist!
Thanks,
L
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Halcyon:
Now, if I put a warning on every chapter...who would take me seriously?
Hope you like where the radar is heading.,
Thanks,
L
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mariacomet:
I'm glad you liked the bears. I got that idea from the story that floated around the net about the hallmark bears. (I think someone posted it on the kitten board.) It just screamed W&T to me.
Xander is fun. He and Anya have some more interesting scenes to come.
I love UST...and yes, I try to be evil.
Thanks for the feedback,
L
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willow_thebadasswicca:
I try to make you want more. That's the idea.
If I have a cliffhanger at the end of each chapter... you will read the whole thing at once. Like you did with TOTG. That was all part of my evil plan!
Willow outside in peril? Now...would THAT be the expected outcome? Let me know what you think of the new chapters.
Cletus... hehehe Yeah, I love that name. (Too much Simpsons)
More Anyaisms to come!
Thanks again,
L
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Kalita:
Funny you should mention disemboweling... there is a mention of that later down the line!
Glad the tension is building. Hmm, seems everyone thinks WIllow will be outside, alone and in peril? Would I go the expected route?
Enjoy the next part.
Thanks,
L
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katydid:
Abandoned the chatroom? No wonder I have abandonment issues!
I don't have that message deal everyone keeps talking about.
More bare feet to come...so to speak!
Enjoy and thanks for all your feedback!
L
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Jae:
I'm glad you found my other stuff. I put it on the web so people can share my love of all that is W/T.
Feel free to give your professors my website address... maybe they will go there instead of making you write papers?
Procrastinators will rule the world!.... tomorrow. Or maybe the day after... but for sure by next week. I think. maybe.
Thanks,
L
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Quill:
No warning? *sigh* I can't warn for every chapter... y'all should know I punish you at the end of every one.
Amy and Rack... up to no good... still. You won't like them at all when this story is over.
Xander grows on me. Glad you like him too.
No pacing! It scares cats.
Enjoy the next parts,
Thanks,
L
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jonarch:
first fan fiction? Good god you're getting a late start. Get thee to Pink Rabbit, Wiccan Way, Extra Flamey...and about 15000 other sites this instant!
Seriously, thanks for the compliment. I hope you enjoy all the fan fiction you find.
Sorry to make your work day angsty. *G*
Have a bowl of peas for breakfast and get to work.
I hope you like my other stories as well. They are all finished except one trek story...Seven Wonders... and it's terminally unfinished... just don't go there. LOL
Thanks,
Lisa
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kilopto:
Actually, this is my real life story. I'm a lesbian witch with a pal who's a slayer...
Sigh... okay, so it's all fiction. You wouldn't want to read my life story...no cliffhangers.
I am very touched by your compliments.
Thank you.
L
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Xita:
Glad the bears worked for you, and I'm glad you liked the metaphor. I hope the show changes willow back to light based magic and doesn't just make her give it all up. (Those she has always liked the dark arts...bad willow.)
Thanks for replying,
L
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scylla:
*sigh* Poor Willow? I put HUGE clues in explaining Tara's grouchiness and her ... lustful advances... LOL Don't judge poor Tara until you read the next chapters.
The smoochie interuptus will not last much longer...I promise!
Enjoy the new chapters.
Thanks,
L
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Pixie:
See above... LOL
It should be "poor Tara" I swear... Tara is a sweetie and above any reproach.
Glad you liked Cletus and the bears.
Enjoy the new...cliffhanger chapters.
Thanks,
L
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ByrtSuite:
I really want a set of the lesbears. Maybe I should market them.
See? I think baby in peril= big cliffhanger... willowheart in pieces=pretty big cliffhanger. I only warn for big. *G*
If you read any of my trek stuff, I suggest She who hesitates. It's my personal favorite and it has a baby! Well, several actually... and a blonde hottie with perfect breasts in peril (her, not the breasts) and she is... hey... hmmm sensing a them here. hot blondes in peril... dear goddess, guess I should avoid blondes in real life? Nah!
I think Buffy and Anya have the seeds of nice on the show. They just need nurturing.
Thanks again,
L
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Mollygig:
Thanks for the plug!
Did you notice my theme of beautiful blondes in peril?
LOL
Thanks,
L
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Delany:
Crawl out from under that desk and enjoy the new chapters.
Six whole hours? Wow.
Thanks for the sweet comments!
L
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Charlie:
I try to give all the Scoobies some air time... well... page time. I love them all.
I think I might give the lesbears their own show.
Enjoy the new chapters,
L
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enigmatic:
I'll glad you liked that Buffy Tara scene. I am curious as to what you will think of the next chapters.. Buffy isn't quite so nice to Tara in these ones. *EG*
Thanks for replying,
I missed Giles too... That's why I drafted him back to Sunnydale!
L
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Shaggykat:
Addiction seems to be the theme. Try weaning yourself to 30 fan fics a day. That's what I do. *G*
Willow's dark side is waning... let's hope it wanes fast enough.... *EG*
You avoid my trek stuff? *wounded pout* But it has a beautiful blonde in peril... resistance is futile.
Seriously, Thanks for replying,
L
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kittyko:
Glad you are enjoying the painful ride.
I hate those darn colds!
Thanks,
L
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fell:
thank you for the wonderful compliments.
The bears are quite popular...and the peas. I should sell them.
BTW, I think cockles are located in the same place as a chicken;s 'nuggets.' I think.
I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far.
Thanks,
L
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sparrow:
Good catch on the Willow... darkness fade deal! Keep watching.
I think Tara needs to be sure before she takes back an addict. She has to worry about Cletus now.
Another good catch on the "I love you"s. Tara was all abouyt the lust. She couldn't say "I love you" unless she meant forever... but I digress... read today's chapters...all is explained!
Hooked? Hmm, what shall I do with you once I catch you?
Thanks again for the sweet comments,
L
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silverangel:
Cletus and the lesbears... I should send that to the Oxygen channel..have them make a cartoon.
Thanks for replying,
Chapter 11 is up.
Enjoy,
L
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Willow Rocks:
I hope each new story surpasses the last. That is my goal. It's nice to hear that you think I am on the right track.
I just posted more... LOL
Thank you,
L
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Robin:
Weeee! I love rollercoasters.
Spike? Gee, what an interesting thought... take a peek at tonight's chapters.
Thanks,
L
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the_ slayers gift:
Ack!
I was just gonna' post and found more replies. I am hurrying!
L
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Puff:
Hurrying...hurrying...must upload....
L
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willow_thebadasswicca:
Geez... must reply to all before posting...must reply....
Okay...off to upload...
Thanks,
L
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bobosmom:
ACK! You posted while I was posting! LOL
thank you! I've done some research on the pregnancy stuff. I hope it shows. I even have an online calendar of Tara's pregnancy all worked out. That way I know how big Cletus is... what kinds of stuff will be happening, etc.. It's goof to hear I got it right!
Say hi to Bobo and Picard from my three cat children... Nikita, Simba, and Sappho.
I am always thrilled when someone who likes my trek stuff also likes my W&T stuff. The genres are so different!
I'm glad you like the W&T voice. I try to make each character as accurate as possible in fan fic.
Thanks again,
L
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Jenny scott,
I never argue with someone who can spin there head in a circle.
L
Thanks you EVERYONE!
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You are all fabulous!
Lisa

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[Puff]

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Originally posted by Lisa of Nine:
PS.. I don't suppose anyone ever looks at these addresses early do they? *G* I usually upload them about 5 minues before I post the link.

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Actually I told you I am not a patient person, I think I got the chapters when you were uploading them...I know I had checked enough times

Yes you are truly goddess of the fic world and because of that I don't mind a tiny bit of suffering as long as happiness prevails. But it better prevail, it will won't it?

Oh I loved the new updates Willow and Tara not being able to sleep unless they are together was sweet. And Cletus the foetus? I laugh everytime at that.

Btw thanks for the hugs, I am sure as the story progresses I will need more of them.

Publicist? Sure So I just have to tell everyone how great the stories are. It's not like I don't do that already.
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