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Poetry: Enticement

Postby Kerrison » Fri Nov 30, 2001 9:26 pm

Feedback would be nice.


Copyright: K. Hurley 2001
Enticement

Enticing Rolls of generous lips
Calling my soul
With a breathy whisper.
Pulling gasps from my chest
Nibbling on my Jaw line
With a catching breath.

And of the curvatious landscape
Seeks a quiet rolling blush
Chasing heat down my body
With tireless hunger.
Feat my eyes along her grace.
Gently devouring every sight.
Might the peaks and valleys become sacred.

Capture my lips and we will brand each other with fiery kisses.
When we finish our exploration of mouths and bodies and hearts alike,
Take me fully into your lush embrace.
Rest my head on your heaving shoulder.
Entangle your fingers in my hair.
Sooth my parched spirit with gentle words.

Kerrison
 


Poetry: Enticement

Postby Wiccagrrl » Fri Nov 30, 2001 9:55 pm

Oh my...is it just me or is it getting warm in here? Very nice.
Wiccagrrl
 


Poetry: Enticement

Postby Kerrison » Fri Nov 30, 2001 10:04 pm

Why, thank you! Its great to know it elicited a response from you....especially a positive one!!

Kerry

Kerrison
 


Poetry: Enticement

Postby Scout » Sat Dec 01, 2001 7:04 pm

Yes, I liked it, too. How wonderfully descriptive and sensual. Thanks for posting it!
Scout
 


Poetry: Enticement

Postby Rane » Sat Dec 01, 2001 11:59 pm

ok, i'm not a poerty type o' gal but i loved it!!! very descriptive and understandable.
Rane
 


Poetry: Enticement

Postby Spell Gal » Sun Dec 02, 2001 3:35 am

Very nice! Images are created so beautifully when they let you read between the lines...

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