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Fic: Camp Flutie

Postby Rane » Fri Dec 21, 2001 2:42 pm

Title- Camp Flutie
Rated- PG for now. Hehe… =) I’ll let you know when it get’s NC-17 cause you just know that’s coming! (um, no pun intended)
Summary- This one time, at regular camp, Willow and her friends…
Notes- Absolutely half AU, timeline is all wonky but takes place after the first year of college. Oz and Willow did break up but he didn’t leave. Tara never came to Sunnydale (I know, blasphemy! But wait, you KNOW she’s in this fic, hello this is me writing!) Some characters from Buffyverse are in here but a little different.
Danka- to MC for her feedback editing type of stuff and telling me when something didn’t make sense to her. But I must admit I’ve done revisions without her looking over them again so feedback from everyone very much welcome.

Hope you like my sillyness!

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The one and a half hour ride to Camp Flutie was a miserable experience for Willow Rosenberg. Not only had her best friend Xander thrown up two times in a travel bag right beside her, but also Buffy and Riley decided to suck face the whole trip while sitting in the seat in front of her. Willow knew it was an omen, a bad omen. This summer, camp was going to suck even if this year they were the camp counselors on their way to their three day orientation.

It wasn’t that Willow minded going to camp. She liked getting away from Sunnydale and everything Hellmouth-y in her town. Giles noted how summers were always slow for demons and hence slow for the Scooby gang and their demon slaying. Besides, if anything “end of the world” were to happen they were only a phone call away.

With her two best friends and her best friends’ boyfriend, a couple other people from Sunnydale were also joining in the happening fun. Along with some others from home Oz, Cordelia, Harmony, and Anya were in for the ride.

Willow sighed thinking about her ex boyfriend sitting with his best friend Devon a few rows in front of her. At least things with Oz were good, their split last year having been amicable and all. And the redhead certainly didn’t want to think about the group of girls that constantly chided and taunted her. She just hoped they wouldn’t do it in front of her campers.

She and Buffy were co-counselors for the summer even though everyone else had been given other tasks helping run the camp. Xander, of course, would be working in the kitchen. Riley would run the sports activities with his pal Forrest. Oz and Devon were both in charge of the “radio station” and anything techie for the plays and dances throughout the session. Willow didn’t understand why they were running the station with the loud speaker since that basically meant waking up everyone in the morning and announcing the schedule throughout the day. Back at home the sun had passed its zenith by the time those two ever woke up.

Cordelia was in charge of arts and crafts, Harmony in charge of the theater and choir for some reason, and Anya, well, Willow didn’t know what Anya would be doing just yet. Perhaps staring at Xander all summer and following him around like a love struck puppy as she normally did.

“How you doin’ there, Will?” Xander asked appearing like he was about to throw up again.

“I should be asking you.” She grinned back.

“Buses. Man, I can’t stand this. Would have rather used my skateboard.”

“I’m sure we’re almost there.” She tried to comfort him even though Willow had no clue. All the trees looked alike to her and it’d been the same trees since they left Sunnydale. There had been a couple of hills too but that wasn’t the point.

Not two minutes after Willow spoke, the big yellow bus pulled into a long driveway up to the camp area. Some kids on the bus began to cheer while others burped and did under the arm fart noises. One kid in particular sitting alone near the back exit was very excited. Jonathon was looking forward to the fact that as a counselor he would have kids looking up to him rather than down. Unless they were taller then him, he was a short little guy. Like Willow, he too was always made fun of but unlike Willow he really didn’t have good friends to back him up.

The Scoobs, as they called themselves, were a tight group: Buffy, Willow, Xander were always looking out for each other. Buffy’s whole destiny as the Vampire Slayer, the one girl in all the world with the strength to kill vampires and demons, was shared with the Scoobs ever since moving to Sunnydale four years earlier. Boyfriends and girlfriends came and went but the core three were a threat to be reckoned with. And who could forget Giles, Buffy’s watcher sent by the Slayer’s council from England to watch over the Slayer and teach her. Well, try to teach her since Buffy was not one to follow commands very much.

Willow took in a deep breath as the clearing presented the layout of the camp. Not that bad, Willow thought, everything seemed to be within decent walking distance. Walking was something she really didn’t want to spend her summer doing. She already did that back home patrolling every night with the Scoobs.

She saw the mess hall and the theater, and she already knew there were toilets and sinks in each cabin but the showers were in an adjacent building. As long as there were no Daddy Long Legs crawling about in her cabin she’d be fine. She hated spiders with a passion right below her hatred of frogs.

As the bus unloaded with humans and their luggage, Willow helped walk Xander to a nearby tree where he proceeded to throw up one last time. Last year had been his record, he upchucked seven times. Last summer also had been their last hurrah as campers with, among many other things, the freedom to raid other cabins in the middle of the night. This year they were the ones thwarting raids, and stopping the food fights and catching the underage smoochies behind the cabins.

“Hello, everybody I am Doug Flutie, camp moderator. Welcome to Camp Flutie.” A dorky looking kinda man announced as he walked up to the group of twenty. Next to him stood a detached uppity woman with a load of papers in her hands.

“We know who you are, moron!” someone said loud enough he was heard by all.

Mr. Flutie looked amongst the gathered and knew exactly who it was. After all, the British accent gave him away. “William, I anticipate better behavior from you. This year you are a counselor, a leader, you all are. I expect you to behave in a civilized, adult fashion.”

“Well, my parents are adults and they certainly aren’t civilized.” Another recent arrival retorted.

Mr. Flutie simply sighed. “We are to meet at the cafeteria in exactly one hour. Until then settle in cabins, get to know your neighbors, etc, etc, etc. You all did bring the packets I mailed you, right?”

A loud murmur ran through the crowd and most shook their heads. Mr. Flutie rolled his eyes, “Miss Post here has all your cabins assignments and camp maps. Please don’t lose them. Again. See you at lunch.”

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Willow dreaded the fact that this year Xander would be the one in charge of the kitchen staff. She wasn’t looking forward to finding actual bugs in the bug juice and mystery meat Wednesdays was not her idea of funny. Probably due to the fact that he hadn’t prepared this particular meal, Willow felt comfortable and ate her burger with no worries.

As her eyes scanned the mess hall she tried to block out Buffy’s constant chatter.

“And Riley thinks making out in the forest is so romantic.” The Slayer continued on and on. “Like-”

“Who’s that?” Willow interrupted as her eyes gazed a little too long on a blue eyed blonde girl across the room. She hadn’t been in the bus, Willow would have certainly noticed her then, and she wasn’t a camper from last year. She would have noticed that too.

Buffy took a bite of her burger and replied, “Oh, that’s Karen. Or is it Taryn? I don’t remember. She was out in the forest and accidentally walked in on me and Riley while we were getting it on with the smoochies.”

Willow didn’t answer back, she just kept staring. The blonde was the most breathtaking girl she’d ever seen. It seemed she carried a halo over her head, like an angel. Her lips were… Willow suddenly realized that she’d never had thoughts like these before. Ok, maybe a couple of times before but she was Oz’s girlfriend. Or had been. She went out with Oz and she’d been in love with Xander, like, forever…

Buffy carried on, “I think she said she’s the new riding instructor. Can we say birkenstocks and granola?”

“What the hell does that mean?” Willow turned to her in a little disturbed by Buffy’s flippant remark.

“Uh, nothing. She looks like she’s a hippie. That’s all. Geez.” Buffy took another bite of her burger.

Willow dropped it. “What happened to Donnie?” she asked wondering about last years riding instructor.

“Booted, I bet.”

“Oh.”

Oblivious to Willow’s staring, Buffy continued on with her story, “So then…”

***********

Willow loved Buffy. She was her best friend, saved her life plenty of times while out on patrol on when she’d get kidnapped by some monster, she shared her pain during times of heartaches but if Buffy did not shut up about her and Riley the redhead was about ready to stand up and walk away. Buffy’s non stop *me* talk was driving the redhead insane and it took a lot to make her annoyed. Actually, Willow did exactly that. Politely she excused herself and went to return her plates and tray.

The redhead made sure to inconspicuously take the long way, the way that would take her past Taryn, or Karen. She hoped to find out her real name soon but till then she looked more like a Taryn than a Karen to her.

The blonde was sitting alone, reading a book, towards the edge of her table. Willow noticed she had hardly touched her lunch. Just an apple was eaten. If Willow had any courage she would have asked her why she hadn’t eaten anything. She also would have asked her what book she was reading. One thing Willow absolutely adored more than her laptop computer were books. Willow was a bookworm and very, very proud of it. Well, unless she was being made fun of because of it. But she was still proud nonetheless.

As she proceeded to walk past the blonde, Willow prayed to all the deities she had memorized during her study of Wicca to not trip and make a fool of herself. Her prayers were soon replaced when her sense of smell overtook her. Vanilla. Vanilla everywhere. The girl smelled like vanilla.

“Willow!” Cordelia said in her typical Cordelia like tone when addressing the redhead. It was one of pure bitch and abject boredom.

She looked over at Cordelia and shook her head slightly. “Oh god no,” Willow moaned under her breath. She didn’t feel like being made fun of yet again by her childhood acquaintance. “Hey, Cordy.”

“Yeah. Whatever. Look, you speak Xander speak, right? Tell the boy that I have my meals sent to me daily and that they *need* to be refrigerated. I will not be subjected to this crap, especially since he’s the one in charge of the kitchen this summer. Got it?”

“Well, did you tell him?” she asked not really caring. She just wanted Cordelia to disappear.

“Well, duh, I told him. I just wanted to you make sure he understands that if he messes with me in any way, shape of form this summer I will sue him.”

Willow rolled her eyes a little and sighed. “Fine.” She waited until Cordelia had walked past her to whisper, “I hope he spits in them.”

A low giggle brought her back to reality. Willow suddenly recognized where she was and what she had been doing. She looked over to her left and saw the shyest yet cutest smile she had ever seen in her life radiating from the mysterious blonde. Their eyes connected for a second and Willow was entranced by how blue they were. Like the ocean, endless.

Even though her heart was palpitating and she was a nervous wreck, she couldn’t help it and managed to twitter out a simple, “Hey.”

“H-hi.” The blonde replied as she nervously drew her lower lip under with her teeth.

The innocent display made Willow’s hear skip a beat and she would berate herself afterwards for what she did next. “I, uh… I gotta go.” With that Willow took off toward the front of the mess hall and loudly dropped her tray and plates into the bin.

As she walked back to Buffy she couldn’t help but think it was always the same with her. Whenever she found someone that intrigued her she’d shy up and words that usually came effortless to her in her mastery of babbling were blocked. Her brain functioned the same exact way every the time. She’d garble, maybe say a few vowel sounds and then run away. Just like she had done right now.

As she sat at the table with Buffy she wanted more than anything to look over to the blonde and see if she was looking at her. Yeah, looking at her like she was a freak, Willow thought. That smile though…

Buffy’s voice interrupted her daydream. “Did I tell you what Riley is planning for the banquet?”

Thoughts of the blonde faded as Willow tried to do the best friend thing again and try to listen this time. It was the longest five minutes of her life until the call for the round robins to begin came.

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TBC....

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Postby Dumbsaint » Fri Dec 21, 2001 3:15 pm

Heehee! Rane, dear, who told you that I have a summer camp fetish? I am so looking forward to the rest of this one... heehee.

Yay!

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Postby Katharyn » Fri Dec 21, 2001 3:17 pm

Oooh Rane I can see all sorts of fun ahead*S* You know naming it Camp Flutie brought allsorts of "Band Camp" ideas to mind... but this is going to be better than band camp*S*

Loving it already and especially the sweet and quick Willow/Tara exchange... And Tara as a riding instructor... jodphurs anyone... oh my*S*

Baited breath here.
Katharyn

Edited to add.. Jodphurs AND boots. Baited breath all sucked out of me... Okay so that is one of my fantasies*S*

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Postby CaptMurdock » Fri Dec 21, 2001 3:51 pm

No foodfights??? Gotta have a foodfight...

This is great! Meatballs (though not its horrendous sequels) is one of my favorite movies. You gotta riff on it someway!

Looking forward to the next part!

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Postby SciFiAcid » Fri Dec 21, 2001 6:56 pm

O_o Rane, sweetie, another fabulous ficcie!! You're just kickin'a with the writing these days. More... and more... now please! Hey, I said please... hehe

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Postby xita » Fri Dec 21, 2001 7:49 pm

Oh I am loving this, I need to relive the magic of their love, overcoming everything in any reality. More please
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Postby Warduke » Fri Dec 21, 2001 9:46 pm

Oh Rane, this is sooo cute, can't wait to read more.
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Postby mariacomet » Fri Dec 21, 2001 10:28 pm

quote:
Originally posted by Rane:
Danka- to MC for her feedback editing type of stuff and telling me when something didn’t make sense to her. But I must admit I’ve done revisions without her looking over them again so feedback from everyone very much welcome.


As always Rane you are very welcome. I have loved your Tara and Willow interaction in this story since I read it the first time and it is still WONDERFUL. You didn't cut out that one especially really good part did you? I mean that one especially REALLY REALLY REALLY good part?

I think the kittens are in for a real treat.

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Postby Lonewolf » Sat Dec 22, 2001 12:12 am

Rane: Really loving this fic, I especially love the sweet interaction between our favorite girls, its really nice I hope that Willow will talk more to Tara in the next part. Can't wait to read it.

Lonewolf

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Postby emily 'first' » Sat Dec 22, 2001 1:01 am

Aah,back to a beginning...A renewal?
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So looking forward to more...

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Fic: Camp Flutie

Postby Rane » Sat Dec 22, 2001 1:21 am

oooh! yay, people like it so far! i was so scared no one would think it funny but i'm glad you guys do! woo hoo! camp rocks! i dont have a fetish for it like some do *wink* but i do think there are so many stories there. and the flutie thing was from the first principal, i wish i were that imaginative... hehe... band camp. there may be a food fight. i have the w/t arch set but the rest i'm kinda skipping to keept it as heavily W/T as i can. but i'll inlcude a lot of camp fun.

as for writing so much, adrienne, i'm currently unemployed so what better to do in between sending out resumes and interviewing than write about W/T?

and as for technical horsie stuff i will not be able to write anything like that. i feel horrible i know so little about horses and riding terminology. so, um, what's a jodphurs? lol... honest i have no clue.

I believe the second half of this update is what MC was speaking of... hope you enjoy and that it makes sense. i know how it happens i just cant explain it quite right...

disclaimer: i lifted a line from *where the wild things are*. bad me...

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For the next three hours all the counselors were split up into groups, and went from activity to activity getting to know the instructor and the agenda for the rest of the session. Rules were explained, games were illustrated. The counselors even played some of the games as icebreakers. Not that they needed them since everyone pretty much knew each other already from last year or Sunnydale.

At the archery field Willow knew she would never be an archer when she grew up. Not that she wanted to either. But it was pretty embarrassing to have every single arrow miss even the huge stack of hay ten feet in front of her.

“Willow,” Oz walked up, hands in pockets, “shoulders down.”

“I’m trying. I’m all tense-y.” she said as she loaded up again.

“Massage?”

Willow grinned, “Thanks, but no.” She focused on the bullseye once more as she drew her bow and arrow down.

“So, who are you going to banquet with this year?” he nonchalantly asked as he stood next to her and watched.

Willow missed again. “The session hasn’t even begun and you’re already thinking about that?” she turned her head to look at him.

“I like to be prepared.”

The redhead knew it was just Oz’s quirky sense of humor, she knew he wasn’t asking her to the dance. After all he’d been the one to break up with her last year out of the blue. For weeks she hadn’t understood why he’d broken up with her after a year and a half of dating. And truth be told she still didn’t know, but a few months afterwards they became friends again and he’d even help once in a while with the patrolling and research fests the Scoobs would have to help Buffy.

Willow’s eyes traveled beyond Oz towards a figure in the hilly background. The blonde was riding a horse followed by a group of riders. Willow couldn’t believe she felt both excited and scared at the same time. See, Willow was petrified of horses due to an accident on her fourth birthday she’d tried to forget. Leave it to fate to have the girl she was crushing on be a riding instructor who spent her days surrounded by big, tall, teeth-that could-take-your-arm-off horses.

“She’s good.” Oz remarked after following Willow’s gaze.

“Yeah.”

“And pretty.” He added.

“Yeah.” Willow unconsciously agreed with a sweet sigh. Confused once she realized what she’d said she looked at Oz again. “What?”

Oz just smirked.

“Look, Willow, I made five bullseyes in a row!” Buffy prided out loud.

Willow broke the mutual stare fest only to anxiously look at Oz again. His expression hadn’t changed. Quickly she turned her attention to Buffy and proceeded to congratulate her.

*********

Before Willow knew it it was time for the horseback riding lesson. Buffy had to basically drag the redhead near the stables. She was careful not to use her full strength on her thin friend. Having the super human strength she had she could break her bones and that would not be camp fun for either of them.

“No, please.” Willow entreated as she tried to squirm out of her best friends’ grasp. So many thoughts were running through her mind but she couldn’t formulate a sentence. She knew if she started to talk a babble fest would begin and she wouldn’t be able to stop. And, the conflicting feeling weren’t helping either. She was scared of the horses but still wanted to see the new riding instructor. She was torn between fear and hope.

“You are a counselor! What kind of a role model are you if you don’t go in there and learn to ride horses?”

“Buffy, I-“

“Is there a problem?” A familiar voice asked from behind the two friends.

Buffy turned around to the voice. “Karen, uh, Taryn-“

“Tara.” The girl corrected her as she nervously grinned at the two of them.

“Right. Sorry. I didn’t- My co-counselor and best friend Willow here is petrified of horses.” Buffy nudged Willow to stand up straight.

Willow’s mind was still on the girls name. Tara. So earthly and goddess-y. She hadn’t noticed both were staring at her. “Huh?” she asked as she became a bit breathless when her eyes connected with Tara’s.

“Your horse phobia.” Buffy spelled out for her.

“Bad… birthday. Pony thing.” Willow succeeded to say. If she could have kicked herself for sounding so silly she would have.

Tara simply nodded. “Y-yeah, pony’s can be crazy. But these horses are the s-sweetest in the world. I give you my word.”

Hearing that attestation comforted Willow, “Really? Cause horses, I don’t like them.” She admitted.

She realized she may have hurt Tara’s feelings when the blonde replied, “W-well, um, I’m sure Buffy can bring your campers alone if you don’t like the horses.” her voice lowered with every word.

“No!” Willow shouted a bit too loudly. ‘I- I want to come. I want to like the horsies and ride them. I want to like them a lot. I just…” She saw Tara’s lopsided grin and her heart melted. “I just don’t know where to start.”

Buffy slid her arm with Willow’s, “Well, you’re still about 20 paces from the stable so lets get a move on it.” and they walked ahead to the stable.

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It had been five minutes and Willow was still standing about ten feet away from the horse assigned to her. All the other counselors were bonding with their horses, stroking their coat, feeding them, some even mounting up saddles. Hers just stared at her with his beady brown eyes and long lashes. Willow swore he looked bored. Or was it a she? Curious, she bent over slightly to get a better look.

“Are you ok?” Tara timidly asked as she walked up to Willow.

The redhead jumped. “Ohmygod!” She held her hand over her heart. “Don’t sneak up on people with horse phobias in a stable surrounded with horses that cause phobias!” Willow finally smiled when her breathing calmed down to let her know she was kidding.

Tara giggled. “Sorry.”

“My fault. I was just…” Willow shrugged her shoulders nervously. “I’m working on it.”

“On what?” Tara asked as she looked at the petite redhead.

“On closing the gap between me and the horse and petting her.”

“It’s a he.” Tara replied as a matter of fact.

“Oh? I didn’t see- You know, I wouldn’t know what to look for down there anyway. I mean I do. Everything has something down there ya know and boys have a distinct- They have things. Certain things that- Oh god. Stop me now, please.” Willow blushed furiously.

“Ok.” Tara smirked as she watched Willow squirm. “Give me your hand.” She softly stated.

Willow was quite confused by the request. “What?”

Tara held her right hand out to Willow. “Your hand.”

Tentatively, Willow reached over and clasped the blondes’ hand. She didn’t know what to expect. Where her white palms going to feel soft? Where they as sweaty as she feared hers were? Was there going to be finger lacing?

With some of her questions answered Tara simply led Willow closer to the stable door. One step, two steps, three steps…

‘Ok, heart starting to palpitate again’ Willow thought. She just couldn’t figure out if it was from Tara’s soft and caring touch or from the closer they got to the horse with with their forward movement.

“Relax.” Tara whispered quietly and lightly squeezed her hand as they stopped about a foot away from the pen. The horse was still standing towards the back simply staring at the two girls standing in his enclosed area’s doorway.

After seeing the horse hadn’t really budged closer to them, Willow looked over at Tara and nodded. She gave herself that moment to Tara and the blonde received the message loud and clear. Tara slowly raised both their arms and turned Willow’s hand up, facing the roof of the stable. Then, she quickly moved her hand underneath Willows’ and held it firmly from underneath the small wrist, her thumb in the middle of Willow's M on her palm.

Willow giggled nervously as Tara called the horse to them with a low clicking sound. “Shh…” Tara voiced very softly, dangerously close to Willow’s ear.

She’d been so preoccupied by the blondes hand holding hers that she never noticed Tara was now standing behind her and a bit to the side so she could see the horse in front of them. Willow registered she was actually calling the horse to them with her own hand and the sounds. Then, she realized the horse was actually moving towards them.

Her knees were turning into jelly as she took in everything that was happening, both the Tara thumb gently caressing her hand and the horsie walking to her. She could feel Tara’s heart beating and it was very bizarre since their bodies weren’t actually touching.

The horse promptly walked over to the two. Willow’s hand was kept in place by Tara, her body blocked from running away by the blonde. Willow thought all she had left was to let the horse bite her fingers off and closed her eyes waiting in anticipation. ‘What a romantic way to lose a digit’, she thought. But the pain never came. What came was a couple of ticklish whiskers and a very, very soft snout sniffing the palm. A large gooey tongue darted out to lick it.

Willow beamed as she opened her eyes and saw the horse was not biting her at all. This was making her very, very happy. She looked over to Tara and as soon as their smiles and eyes connected a current ran through the both of them. Startled by the intensity of the encounter both girls jumped away from each other and the horse was scared off back into his pen neighing loudly.

Buffy noticed the commotion from afar and ran over to them. “Will! Are you ok? Did he bite you?”

Willow looked at her hand, front and back. All fingers were there. “ No.” she replied in wonder. She looked at Tara who seemed as surprised as she was.

“I, uh…” Tara looked at Willow again and then to Buffy. “I don’t- I don’t know. He, he didn’t bite… I’m, um, I’m going to go check on the o-others.” Tara mentioned and walked away with her eyes looking down at the ground. Willow watched her leave.

Buffy noticed how Tara was blushing. She looked over at Willow and saw she was too. “What the hell just happened?” Buffy asked.

Willow’s gaze turned back to Buffy and she slowly smiled. “I touched a horse.” She said as she looked at her hand in awe. She could still feel the energy crackling from Tara’s touch.

“Welcome to the club. Are you sure you’re all right?” Buffy asked again.

“Yeah… When’s the next round?” Willow changed the topic once she ran her fingers through her hair hoping Tara’s lingering touch would not be erased. She nervously fiddled with her shirt and looked at Buffy.

The slayer eyed her but let it go. “Twenty minutes. Arts and crafts.”

“Good. Good.” Willow said quite distracted. Her mind was still processing everything that had happened with the blonde. “I could use another macaroni necklace.”

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TBC.....

[This message has been edited by Rane (edited December 22, 2001).]

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Postby Katharyn » Sat Dec 22, 2001 1:35 am

quote:
Originally posted by Rane:

and as for technical horsie stuff i will not be able to write anything like that. i feel horrible i know so little about horses and riding terminology. so, um, what's a jodphurs? lol... honest i have no clue.

Neiither do I much, probably not even spelling it right... but think skin tight riding trousers worn with knee high boots... You'll have seen them on TV.

Great second part Rane... a crackle of feeling very, very, nice indeed. And this line: "Leave it to fate to have the girl she was crushing on be a riding instructor who spent her days surrounded by big, tall, teeth-that could-take-your-arm-off horses" Perfection itself.

More please...
Katharyn

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Postby xita » Sat Dec 22, 2001 2:07 am

Oh, I really like Buffy with a clue, so much better than the way the show played it. Oh rane, soo good. Camp fun and romantic. sigh.
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Postby Warduke » Sat Dec 22, 2001 9:11 am

Rane this is just so sweet, I love the electricity between W/T, just so powerful, as it should be
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Postby scylla » Sat Dec 22, 2001 9:27 am

This is really great (as your fics always are)!
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Postby mariacomet » Sat Dec 22, 2001 11:13 am

Nah, Rane...the horse scene IS my favorite W/T moment in Flutie so far, but the especially good scene is much later, it was in part 2 that ya sent me.

It's when they...ya know...do the thing in the thing after the thing.

*whistling, being all cryptic*

By the way, the narration you have going is excellent. You can really feel the tension between our two girls.

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Postby Rane » Sat Dec 22, 2001 1:11 pm

oh, THAT part... yeah... teehee... that part is still in there. i didn't realize you'd read part 2 already.

here's a little more:

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Dinnertime was upon them and Willow still couldn’t shake the afternoon experience with Tara from her mind. She’d been thinking about it non stop the rest of the day. Her whole body tingled as she looked forward to seeing her again. It wasn’t just a crush, Willow knew, it was something else. Something deeper, something powerful, magical. Willow’s eyes widened. Magic.

“Earth to Willow.” Buffy tapped on her arm slightly.

“What?” Willow turned to her a bit dazed. Was Tara a witch as well?

“You’ve been scanning the room since we sat down. Who are you looking for? Oz?” Before Willow could reply Buffy saw Riley and shouted out to him to come over to them.

Riley, trailed by Xander on a break from his duty, walked over tray in hands and sat down with the two girls. “Hey.” He said as he kissed Buffy on the lips. “How was your day?”

As their conversation faded in the background Willow turned to Xander. She noticed he wasn’t eating. “Aren’t you eating?”

“No, I know what’s in the food.” Willow was about ready to spit out her spaghetti and meatballs and Xander noticed. He laughed as he watched her gag. “I’m kidding, Will. I ate already. All day actually. Everything here is sterilized. Is that the right word?” His eyes wandered over to Cordelia’s table. As usual she was surrounded by her posse of followers. “Man, Cordy just gets hotter every year.”

Willow rolled her eyes as she swallowed her food. She took a quick sip of her juice and replied, “Ewww.” to the Cordelia comment.

Suddenly her eyes registered Tara entering the dining hall with Oz. He courteously held the door open for her and she smiled her adorable shy smile. She felt a pang of jealousy and furrowed her brow.

Xander saw this. “What’s a matter, Will, getting jealous? I thought you and Oz were done.”

Willow nodded. “We are. We’re still friends. I’m not jealous.”

“Hey Oz!” the redhead heard Riley call out to him and wave his hand to come over.

Oz nodded and mentioned something to the blonde, she nodded slightly and trailed behind him towards the table.

“Oz, my man, how goes it?” Riley shook the shorter guys hand. “Hey, Tara.” He said as the two newcomers sat down.

“Tara, you know Buffy and Xander, and Willow, right?” Oz asked as he spoke of the others.

“Yes.” Was all Tara mouthed as Buffy and Xander smiled and bopped their heads up and down in agreement.

Willow quickly averted her eyes to her plate and realized without warning she wasn’t hungry anymore. The room suddenly got hot and her head began to spin just a teeny bit. She tentatively lifted her eyes to look at the blonde and was a bit relieved to find the shy girl had actually joined in conversation with her friends. Not that Willow could hear the conversation around her. She’d gone deaf all of the sudden and her eyes only registered the blonde sitting in front of her.

Suddenly Tara’s eyes connected with hers and Willow let out a squeak having been caught in her starefest. “What?” she tried to play off as if she’d just misunderstood something. Or maybe if the gods were being benevolent that evening someone had actually asked her a question and she’d been too far gone in Taraland to process it. Either way Willow registered Tara’s adorable grin and sighed. “What?” she asked again, this time a bit more controlled.

“Yeah, Will, private lessons are just what you need.” Buffy said as she ran her fingers through Riley’s hair. “Face your fear.”

“Lessons?” She asked getting even more confused by the minute.

Oz looked at her funny, “I suggested Tara give you lessons during our breaks after lunch.”

Willow glanced over at Tara whose eyes were lowered. Willow knew she was uncomfortable, she felt it. “I’m sure Tara’s busy and all. I mean a stable full of horsies- that’s a lot of horsies and work. She shouldn’t waste her time with me. The horsies have their horsie needs to be taken care of.”

Tara’s eyes darted up. “I-I- wouldn’t mind.”

“You sure?” Willow asked her worried that Tara was just being sweet.

“Company would be nice.” She quietly voiced.

“Human company.” Xander added as he stole a meatball from Willow's plate with his fingers.

The two girls smiled bashfully at one another as the rest of the gang continued on to other topics.

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TBC.....

Rane
 


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Postby xita » Sat Dec 22, 2001 1:24 pm

I think kind oz is playing matchmaker, how cute. If that's the case, it's just a feeling I get. Sigh...
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Postby Warduke » Sat Dec 22, 2001 1:38 pm

That's the feeling I got too xita, Oz saw Willow's reaction to Tara earlier and now he's playing matchmaker, at least that's what it looks like to me.
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Postby Kittie17 » Sat Dec 22, 2001 1:39 pm

awww I like this fic so much!
More More!

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Postby nika » Sat Dec 22, 2001 2:52 pm

Ah Rane, I just love your writing so darn much. The tension between them and the sparks flying (glimmer in my eyes, smile on my face). And one time in flutie camp...
(hee-hee sorry couldn't resist it)
nika
 


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Postby KittyKo » Sat Dec 22, 2001 3:58 pm

cute beyond words *^^*
I'm loving this Rane.
please, more soon.
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Postby Dumbsaint » Sat Dec 22, 2001 4:08 pm

Awww. Oz playing matchmaker for W/T is so damned cute that I just might have to take "Oz got run over by a reeeindeer" off of my status message list on Yahoo Messenger.

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Postby Charlie » Sat Dec 22, 2001 6:49 pm

Rane, this is SO cool! I'm loving it! That 'I touched a horsie' moment was so cute and I can so see it happening - I've always wanted Tara to make good on her offer in WTWTA!

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!

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Postby Kajun » Sat Dec 22, 2001 10:31 pm

Rane.. this is very sweet and funny! Thank you for making me smile! I love it! Wonderful!

More please..

Kajun
 


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Postby Rane » Sat Dec 22, 2001 11:21 pm

y'all are making me purr! thank you so, so much for putting up with my unemployment burst of ficaroos. i just hate not being able to read all the other fics out there at the same time. makes my brain go kablooey.

oz, the matchmaker? hmmm... i cant help it. i love oz, i know he did wrong by the whole veruca thing but he's still such a great guy to me. he'll always love willow and i love that. i guess he just reminds me of my ex.

there is SO much more to come and i've just gotten back a load of beta goodies from MC so i'll have to take a few days to process everything and move around some things and then you kittens will have a big ole update after christmas (maybe before, but i cant promise... family and friends getting in the way)!

*hugs* to all of you.

Rane
 


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Postby KerrisonRose » Sat Dec 22, 2001 11:24 pm

Hey guys-- I'm an Equestrian Major in University...translation: I'm paying lots of money to learn bout those evil ponies.

If you've got any horsie questions, let me know...I can answer them or point you in the right direction to getting the answers. What kind of rider would I be otherwise?

And yes, if you ride English-style, you wear Breeches (aka: Britches) or Jodphurs. They are VERY snug pants and you wear them with Tall (expensive) riding boots that come up to right below the knee. The boots are Very tight, as well, along the leg. Why? They allow for stronger contact between the rider's leg and the horse. Why do you need strong contact? The rider has a couple of tools that will help them control the horse but one of the main ones is the use of your legs to steer and guide the horse. The less 'stuff' you have in the way (material on clothes, etc) the more your horse will be able to feel your instructions and listen. Hence the tight clothes.

Make some sense? I hope so. I also hope I didn't get carried away with my desire to help.


Again...offering to help with any and all horse questions. Will beta-read horse related scenes for no charge.


[QUOTE]Originally posted by Katharyn:
[B] Neiither do I much, probably not even spelling it right... but think skin tight riding trousers worn with knee high boots... You'll have seen them on TV.

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Postby Rane » Sat Dec 22, 2001 11:36 pm

kerrison, email me please! rane018@yahoo.com

yay! i get to not sound so dumb during the horsie scenes and i do have questions about stables and such as well.

[This message has been edited by Rane (edited December 23, 2001).]

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Postby Lonewolf » Sun Dec 23, 2001 12:18 am

Rane: Really great 2 updates, like everybody here I really love the whole Oz matchmaker thing I think its nice that he wants to see Willow happy, I can't wait for the next part.

Lonewolf

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Postby Katharyn » Sun Dec 23, 2001 1:15 am

Outstanding Rane... just that. Loving it. Great idea and getting better and better.

Katharyn

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