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Poesía

Postby Kittie17 » Mon Dec 31, 2001 12:27 am

I wrote this some time ago but it's in spanish, there's no way I can translate this sorry
If someone wants to try and translate it it'll be great.
I like to write Willow's thoughts of her love for Tara, so this one would be when they were just friends. Hope you like it

Esa figura... esos ojos.
Me pierdo en tu mirar.
En cada pestañar suspiro,
por ti, solo por ti.
Me envuelves en un mundo de fantasía,
solo sueños que se apropian de mi vida.
Por este camino irreal me lleva tu cuerpo,
atándome a tu esencia.
Con magia sacada de tu boca
que llega a mi con cada palabra,
con cada frase pronunciada.
Y todo queda precauciosamente
guardado en mi memoria.
Por si algun día te pierdo,
yo conservo en mi tu recuerdo.
Déjame alcanzarte.
Besar tus ojos bajo un cielo estrellado
y amarte con mi mirada.
Profesando mi amor con mis labios.
Te amo...
Y sólo quiero meter en tu corazon
este maravilloso sentimiento.
Deseo que sientas por un instante
lo que siento yo;
Amor.
Y conmigo caminar por las nubes,
volar por los cielos.
Amarnos fuertemente, eternamente.
Ingenuamente jugando con las manos.
Poder acariciar tu pelo,
poder entregarte mi vida en un instante.
Perderme en ti como lo hago en mis sueños.
Amar contigo
y ser tuya para siempre.

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Todo lo que necesitamos es sentido comun y eso no puede ser enseñado

Kittie17
 


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Postby Pixie-Muso » Mon Dec 31, 2001 12:47 am

My Spanish is pretty rough, but from what I read, the poem was beautiful. Please don't ask me to try and write any though.

The poem is filled with such beautiful sentiment, but this line (with the many connotations it can hold - I'm such a sick kitten) just leaves such romance in the air:

Profesando mi amor con mis labios.

Muchos gracias, Kittie17.

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"...the hardest thing in this world is to live in it..."
~Buffy, The Gift.

Pixie-Muso
 


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Postby Kittie17 » Mon Dec 31, 2001 2:45 pm

Thanks, that's actually my fav line too.
I think it sounds good hehe

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Todo lo que necesitamos es sentido comun y eso no puede ser enseñado

Kittie17
 


Poesía

Postby Pixie-Muso » Tue Jan 01, 2002 8:05 pm

Yup! It sounds very good. Sexy and romantic. Plus the line - the words just roll of the tip of your tongue, when saying it out loud.

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"...the hardest thing in this world is to live in it..."
~Buffy, The Gift.

Pixie-Muso
 


Poesía

Postby xita » Tue Jan 01, 2002 8:27 pm

Que romantico y precioso tu poema.

"Amarnos fuertemente, eternamente." Esta linea, de tu poema a los oidos de Joss.

xita
 


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Postby Rane » Tue Jan 01, 2002 8:45 pm

ok, extremely rough translation because i cant seem to figure out some of the words used. how do scholars do this? i may say it one way and someone else another (casue i'm trying to do a literal translation not a poetic one).

That figure… those eyes
I get lost in your gaze
in each (blink) I sigh
For you, just for you
you wrap me up in a world of fantasy
Only dreams that ( ) my life
this imaginary path takes me to your body
Tying me to your essence
with magic escaping your mouth
that reaches me with every word
With every pronounced phrase
and everything stays ( )
Guarded in my memory
In case I lose you one day
I preserve you in my memory
Let me reach you
to kiss your lips under a starry sky
And love you with my gaze
Professing my love with my lips
I love you
And I only want to enter in your heart
This incredible feeling
I wish you could feel for an instant
what I feel
Love
and walk with me on clouds
Fly through the sky
Loving strongly, eternally
Ingenuinely playing with hands
to lovingly stroke your hair
To give my life to you in an instant
get lost in you like I do in my dreams
to make love with you
And be yours forever.

Rane
 


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