FF: Unexpected Consequences

[Lisa of Nine]

Hi all.
I've been away dealing with real life but still found time for some writing.
Here are the first two chapters of my next story.

Let me know what you think. http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon01.html http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon02.html

Lisa
PS... To Rane, I've enjoyed Camp Flutie so much. Thank you! Sorry to hear about your mom.

[ULookSoPrecious]

Woo and Hoo! Two chapters here! I read chapter one on the WillTara list then I came here to check up on other fics and what do I find? The second chapter to this wonderful fic! Thanx for writing again!!

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"Nobody, not even the rain, has such small hands" -ee cummings

[Kiwiccan]

What can I say? Yahoo!!! New Lisa Fanfic!!!

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Paula
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Amber FanGirl #1a; May the Amber Force be with you.
Keeper of my own insanity
"I love being a girl, having a girl.." ~as sung by Amber Benson in the UK

[BytrSuite]

Yes! I love all your fics. Each one is so wonderfully written. I think every single one made me cry. And the best part is they always have happy endings.

Woo! Hoo!

[Kesi]

Oh I LOVE your stories. They are Great, Wonderful... I love them MMMMMOOORRRREEEEE pleaaasseeee more, more ,more

[Kalita]

Oh, I must have more! You've sucked me in like a black hole, I don't know what to do!

I know I wnated you to write more, Lisa, but this hellish-torture stuff wasn't part of the deal.

Or shouldn't be, anyway...

[willow_thebadasswitch]

Your fics rock, Lisa!! I'm already sure I'm gonna enjoy reading this one too.

[Dice]

Though this is on a W/T board, you deserve great credit as well for your wonderful characterization of Anya. You do a far better job with her than ME's writers, IMHO.

[Quill]

Oh my goodness! Hello? Mucho intense and all sorts of intriguing. I love it. More please?

[Rally]

Great work with Anya, very enjoyable.

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-R

"Everyone's getting spanked but me."

[emily 'first']

Nice...Totally unexpected ending to chapter 1,and chapter 2 as well...Hope you post the links to the rest here as well.
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P.S. Liked Anya as well...

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vive,valeque.

[nika]

Lisa I love all your fics, this one isn't the exception. Please update soon, oh and I just love the way you write Anya "Two words hell...spawn"

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"Eat lot's of applesauce, preferably fed to you by attractive young lesbians." Amber Benson

[katydid]

You know, I was just thinking that it had really been a while since I had seen and fics from Lisa. Low and behold I open my email, and there is a fic from Lisa. Woo hoo.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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"She practically has 'genuine molded plastic' stamped on her ass.

[Corto]

Lisa of Nine's stories: Resistance is futile! Lisa, your story is fantastic. Please write more soon.

[scylla]

WOW! This is amazing. Keep up the great work!

[Willow Rocks]

I need more now!

[Italiangirl]

Wonderful! Fabulous! Maaaaahveloous! Did I say wonderful?

Your fics are amazing. You completely capture the essence of each of the scoobies. Your plots are interesting and draw everyone in immediately. *Sigh* They're lovely.

This one is no exception. It's wonderful. In a snivelling, angsty way. But no less wonderful.

More please?

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"You're in my blood like Holy Wine
You taste so bitter, and so sweet
Darling, I could drink a case of you
And still be on my feet;
I would still be on my feet."
-Joni Mitchell

[Kiwiccan]

My dear Ms Lisa, when can we expect the next chapters of your brilliant story? How often will you be posting chapters? Do you sign autographs? Can I name my first born after you?

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Paula
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Amber FanGirl #1a; May the Amber Force be with you.
Keeper of my own insanity
"I love being a girl, having a girl.." ~as sung by Amber Benson in the UK

[This message has been edited by Kiwiccan (edited January 12, 2002).]

[Lisa of Nine]

Good morning.
Let me just say that I am STAGGERED by the incredible response from the people on this board. Thank you so much for making we feel like Sally Field getting her Oscar. "You like, you really like me!" (I won't go into her ER guest spot... *cringe* the character, not the actress, BTW.)

I want to say to everyone, thank you so much. I've been blessed with feedback and it means the world to me.
Oh, *G*, I'm posting the new chapter addresses too.

In order to save space, I'll respond to all posts down below.(not THAT down below. Dirty kitten minds!) ... thanks again!
http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon03.html http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/uncon04.html

Now, for all the sweet replies!

ULookSoPrecious:
I wanted to thank you again for the sweet comments on the WillTara list and here. You've been wonderful. Let me know if you like the new chapters as well.
Thank you,
L
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Kiwiccan:
Paula,
You've always been a wonderful supporter.
Thank you! (I'm sure you can make something naughty out of that supporter comment. *G*)
Thanks again!
L
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BytrSuite:
I've made you cry? Wow. Let me just warn you that this fic is BY FAR going to be the saddest I've ever written. I promise Willow/Tara couple-ness, but...well... any other spoilers would just be wrong. Spoilers are bad...
Thanks for taking time to reply. It means a lot.
L
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Kesi:
Thanks for the enthusiastic trust in my writing. I hope this story lives up to your expectations.
Thank you so much for the sweet words.
L
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Kalita:
A black hole? Wow, I love sci fi metaphors. Cool, I'm a sucking black hole. Hmm, that sounds naughty, but yet oddly appropriate for me. The naughty part, that is.
As for the "hellish-torture," um, what were you expecting from me? I live to leave readers hanging.
Seriously, thank for writing.
L
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willow_thebadasswitch:
Thanks! I hope you love it. Cute jumping green... err...thing on your post. (What are those jumping creatures anyway? Are they smiley faces run amok? They sure are cute.)
Thanks again,
Lisa
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Dice:
Thank for for pointing out my Anya characterizations. I LOVE Anya. She's one of my most favorite to write. I think she and Tara are the most underused characters on the show. They have incredible potential and fabulous actresses playing them, so why don't we see more of them? *Sigh* Oh well, that's why we have fan fic.
Thanks again,
L
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Quill:
Glad you are intrigued! I aim to please.
I'll post as quickly as I can.
Thanks for writing to me,
L
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Rally,
As I mentioned to Dice above, I adore Anya. She's a kick in the pants to write. Heck, half the time, I don't know what she's gonna' say until it's on the page. *G*
Thanks for replying,
L
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emily 'first':
I'm glad I kept you guessing. I hope the rest of the plot twists will be as unexpected.
Oh, and I will certainly post the links here for the rest of the chapters. Plus, I'll post a link to my Willow/Tara page once I post this as a completed story.
Thanks,
L
PS. As for Anya...see above. Emma C Plays her to perfection on the show.
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nika:
I'm glad you like all my stuff. I write fan fic because I love doing it, but hearing that people enjoy it certainly makes me smile.
I'll update ASAP, and look for more Anyaisms.
Thank you,
L
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katydid:
Wow, it still amazes me that people actually remember me between stories. Thank you so much for saying that. I hope you enjoy this story as much as the previous ones. It's gonna' get pretty dark. I'll post new stuff as often as possible. I'm shooting for two chapters a day.
thanks again,
L
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Corto:
LOL... resistance is futile? Have you read my 7 of 9 stuff, or are you just having fun with my nickname? Either way, it's a great compliment.
Thank you,
L
PS. Here's the 7 of 9 page, if you're interested. http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/index.html

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scylla:
Thank you! I'm thrilled that so many people like it. I just hope it doesn't get too dark. I am tossing out warnings left and right, so no one should be shocked.
Thanks for replying,
L
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Willow Rocks:
Yes, ma'am! More is on the way.
Um, well... that is...if you are a ma'am... if not... make that 'yes sir!'
Course, if you're like Peppermint Patty, and I'm like Marcy, I could call you sir even if you are a woman... oh never mind! LOL
I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Thanks,
L
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italiangirl:
Thank you so much for the glowing reply. I swear my head is gonna' swell. Either that or I may get like Glory and recruit minions.
I love hearing opinions about the characterizations. I really try to get each character's voice down. It helps me as a writer when I hear if I am getting it right...or wrong for that matter. All feedback is good.
Hope you're enjoying the angsty plot. Much more angst to come!
Thanks again,
L
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Kiwiccan:
Paula...LOL
I already named my 3rd born after you, dear... "Sappho," the muse and goddess of lesbians!
Plus, you have my autograph, on the restraining order you sent out when I kept bugging you.
Hope things are well in NZ. It's great to hear from you. I will try to post two chapters a day. How's that?
Lisa
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Okay, I think I got everyone!
Thanks to all the kitties. I don't often have time to post, but I swing by between classes to get some W&T goodness. This place is a haven. Thank you all so much for being here!
Sincerely,
Lisa

[WiggleStick]

It's official, you are my favourite fan fic writer ever! You write the best fic i have ever read from any show...keep up the excellent work cause the new parts were great.

[Enigmatic]

Great update. You sure know how to weave a great story.
I love everything about it, especially the whole Two-mothers thing, and that it is a child, not of dark, but of light.
Keep 'em coming!!

-Enigmatic

[Robin]

Think that's a great idea! You gonna continue this, aren't you? I mean I hope you gonna continue.

[BytrSuite]

Hee! I love how you incorporated the song from OMWF and the Lethe's Bramble in there. Excellent.

Heh, this is the first time I'm reading a story of yours that doesn't have all the parts done already. I'm finding out I'm kind of impatient.

But, no rush, it's the good kind of torture.

[Kiwiccan]

Lisa,
LOL I have framed the original Restraining order. It now sits in a place of honour...above the toilet.

I suppose 2 chapters a day will have to do. Though you know how I feel about reading pieces of a story.

yes, sappho the muse. I may have to go back to using my old handle...A-museme.

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Paula
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Amber FanGirl #1a; May the Amber Force be with you.
Keeper of my own insanity
"I love being a girl, having a girl.." ~as sung by Amber Benson in the UK

[This message has been edited by Kiwiccan (edited January 12, 2002).]

[Rane]

hi lisa. thank you so much for your note. i'm sure everything will be fine with my mum, it's just shocking.

as for your fics THANK YOU for giving me something to look forward to. i love your writing so much i'm all happy. if it wasn't for you i dont think i'd ever thought i'd be able to write a novelesque fic like Flutie. thanks for your inspiration.

i love this new story. and it's true, you write anya so well.take care and you always keep me on the edge with every chapter.

[This message has been edited by xita (edited March 31, 2002).]

[Kalita]

Yay! The baby is nice and human and will have two moms and I'm just loving this.

I can't wait to see what happens to Rack if he tries black magic on Tara. I wanna see what that pendant can do.

Oh, and can I just say how cool it is that you respond so thoroughly and personally to feedback? Most of us are just happy when an author gets her work done for us, but this really is going the extra mile.

[This message has been edited by Kalita (edited January 12, 2002).]

[Kiwiccan]

Just an added note to say, that I would never object to an extra chapter or two if you ever feel the urge to post more than 2 a day.

Just like Willow...not pushing, never would push.

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Paula
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Amber FanGirl #1a; May the Amber Force be with you.
Keeper of my own insanity
"I love being a girl, having a girl.." ~as sung by Amber Benson in the UK

[Puff]

Yes a new Lisa fic, this made my day It was so great to read the first 4 chapters of the story and I love how it is going. Sad? I can take it, I just might need hugs Glad you are posting the chapters on the pens as well.

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Bloody hell, sodding, limey, shagging, knickers, bollocks...oh God...I'm English

[KittyKo]

Ok, I'm just *so* glad that Puff pointed this fic to me.
It's amazing! I really like your fics Lisa and this one is going so so great! Plus Tara and Willow baby. How adorably cute is that?! Ok, there was that heart breaking moment of "hell spawn" possibility, but then it all melted into a "uff, awwww" kinda momento.
Eagerly wainting for the next chapters.
Thank you!

[Corto]

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Corto:
LOL... resistance is futile? Have you read my 7 of 9 stuff, or are you just having fun with my nickname? Either way, it's a great compliment. Thank you, L PS. Here's the 7 of 9 page, if you're interested. http://www.quiknet.com/~lcountry/index.html

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Well, having fun with your nickname. I love Star Trek (Am I allowed to say that here?). Oh, and thanks for the link!quote: