Poems

[Drakkenfyre]

Hello Kitties, I am new here but I justed wanted to pass these poems that I wrote on to see if they would be accepted.I believe they show the past and the present for Will and Tara. I hope you like them. Past: Voice- A beautiful voice to sing to me, A love with which to set me free. A shoulder on which I can cry. A reason to not let life pass me by.A family I can call my own.No more nights of being alone. A home in which t live.My love to someone, my heart to give. A place where I finally belong. A beautiful voice to sing my song. Present- Orphan-- Me, I anm an orphan lost in time and space.Searching everywhere to find my certain space. Yet, I know not who I am or where I have been. I have walked in times long forgotten by men. I have walked in ancient corridors seen by few. With each step curiosity and lonliness grew. At times, it seemed as futile as crying in the rain. There were moments of great joy and of great pain. For an orphan, I am my greatest ally and my worst foe. Alone on my path is how I choose to go. So, once again my long journey must begin. Remembering, I cannot lose nor can I win. That is all I have to say for now. Please let me know what you think.

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We few, We Mighty Few!!!

[Scout]

These poems were very nice. I thought “The Past” was especially fitting for Willow and Tara.

Just a small suggestion – you might want to break up the text or put it into a standard poetry format (see this thread for an example). It would just make them easier to read on the board.

Again, thanks for posting!

[Drakkenfyre]

Thanks Scout, I appreciate your comments and will change the format for my next post.

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We few, We Mighty Few!!!

[ninjitsugrrl]

your poems are great. both are worded beautifully. keep posting!

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"That's right, puppy. Willow's gonna make you bark."