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Eyes of Darkness

Postby Drakkenfyre » Tue Mar 26, 2002 6:41 pm

I know what you all are thinking, God,no, it's her again. Oh, well I am in a writing mode so you will have to bear with me.

The eyes of darkness,
The magic unleashed.
Sound and fury.
Light and pain.
A neverending darkness.
Is that what I am?

My love has gone,
I stand as an empty shell.
I exist but yet I only subsist.

I was fought against the darkness,
Now I have become that which I have most feared.

I must fight this.
My goddess of true light and soul,
To feel her hand again in mine,
This is my hope,
My wish...
My everlasting prayer...


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"We few, we happy few.."
"We band of buggered.."

Drakkenfyre
 


Eyes of Darkness

Postby The Next Tara Maclay » Tue Mar 26, 2002 7:22 pm

Good.I like I like.
The Next Tara Maclay
 


Eyes of Darkness

Postby ninjitsugrrl » Wed Mar 27, 2002 12:49 pm

i like this poem. very dark but, blah, that is what joss gives us to work with. i think you captured the mood very well.

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"That's right, puppy. Willow's gonna make you bark."

ninjitsugrrl
 


Eyes of Darkness

Postby Drakkenfyre » Wed Mar 27, 2002 3:41 pm

Thanks for the feedback guys!!! I really appreciate it.
*The Next Tara Maclay*- thanks for the input, I have been reading your postings and love them all. Keep going..

*ninjitsugrrll* - I know what you mean, we take what we can get and make up the rest. Thanks for the feedback.

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"We few, we happy few.."
"We band of buggered.."

Drakkenfyre
 


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