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A Woman In Uniform - FINISHED (finally) 3/23/2013

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Re: Flu???

Postby photographer02 » Sat Oct 02, 2004 3:34 am

good good...



Hurry up with the new chapter!!!



Pretty please???



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Re: Flu???

Postby umgaynow » Sun Oct 03, 2004 5:34 pm

hey kitties -



Well, I had a lovely relaxing weekend (yes, illicit substances and chocolate were involved) So I am going to go and retype grrrr chapter 13 right now so it will be up in a couple or 3 hours...and yes, this chapter and the next are pretty much all sex...but the angst will be beack in chapter 15 so enjoy the smutty goodness while you can



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Re: Flu???

Postby umgaynow » Sun Oct 03, 2004 9:31 pm

Disclaimers: Don't own 'em, wish I did...grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr



Rating: Definitely NC-17...quite probably NC-21 really...



Summary: After a lovely snuggly shower, the all day W & T lovefest begins...and yes the handcuffs do make an appearance.:p



Notes: OK, so I decided not to tone down the smut after all...if it offends you then don't read it, simple as that...I did use a 4 letter word now and then, but tried to keep it as classy as possible while keeping it extra hot and sexy...vulgar just doesn't work for our girls...ya know? Anyway, if you can't make it through this one then don't even peek at the next chapter...cuz if this is NC-17 then chapter 14 has got to be NC-35 or more...On a story related note...all Take Charge Tara's dialogue is in italics...since you can't hear inflection on the page and I don't want to adverb you all to death...enjoy





A Woman in Uniform: Chapter 13

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The lovers stood together under the hot rain of the shower, soaping each other's slick bodies, hands wandering lazily, lips indulging in languid kisses.



"Tara baby?"



"Yes, my love?"



"Can I ask you a question?"



"Of course..."



"How could you think, for even a moment, that anything could keep me from loving you?"



"Well, you know..."



"Temporary brain damage?"



"Yeah...that must be it," she chuckled.



"I'll never stop loving you, Tara...no matter what happens."



"Good to hear...I hope you know I feel the same way."



Willow kissed her deeply, "Of course I do, baby...what we have is elemental...it may change form from time to time...but it can't be destroyed."



"Kiss me, my sexy little science nerd."



"Yes, Ma'am..." and she did.



Ma'am...hmmm. "So, Willow...can I ask you a question?"



"Anything."



"I was just wondering...did you, by any chance, remember to bring home those handcuffs?"



"I might have," she chuckled sexily.







"Willow, sweetie...have you seen my bag?"



"Uh, yeah...someplace...oh, I think I put it in the closet." Tara strode across the room without a stitch on, not a shred of self-consciousness showing and got her bag from the closet. Hmmm, I guess that chat in the tub did do some good.



"So, Will...do you trust me?" she had that strange tone in her voice again.



"You know I do, baby...with my heart...my body...my life...I'm just one big family sized econo-pack of trusty goodness."



Tara grinned at her silly lover, "So tell me...where did you stash those handcuffs?"



"Dresser...top left drawer."



The blonde walked to the dresser and opened the drawer in question, reaching in for the cuffs, her hand brushing against hard plastic. "Hmmm...what have we here?" she said tauntingly, picking it up.



BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ



"Oh..." Willow stammered, "Well, you know...I store all my tension in my neck, and sometimes..."



"Uh-huh," she lifted the vibrator to her face, "Doesn't smell like a neck," her pink tongue snaked out, licking at the tip, "Doesn't taste like one either...mmmmmmm."



"Yeah...well...you know..."



"Naughty Willow...still, this might come in handy," she set the cuffs and vibrator down on the nightstand and sat down on the bed beside her lover, picking up her bag. "Now let me see...what else do I have for you...I know it's in here somewhere...aha!" She pulled out a long, black silk scarf, setting it down next to the other accouterments on the table.



GULP...I have a feeling this is going to be an interesting day...a very interesting day indeed...hmmm...I wonder if I should stretch first.



"Is this OK, baby?"



"Oh yes," The redhead was already trembling in anticipation.



"Before we start..."



"You want me to give you a safeword?"



"Willow! I'm impressed," she teased.



"Yeah...well...I haven't...I mean...not that I...um...I read a lot."



"Uh-huh," her lover winked.



"Monkey."



"Excuse me?"



"Monkey...that's my safeword."



"Oh, I see...good one...hard to imagine that one coming up naturally during sex."



"Well, unless you were into...eeewww...scary visual place."



"Thank you so much for that deeply disturbing mental image."



"Hey, no problem."



"So...are you ready?"



"I was ready ten minutes ago, lover"



"In that case..." Tara pushed the redhead down onto her back, straddling her. She took the silk scarf from the table, trailing it along her lover's torso, teasing her breasts with it. Willow shivered beneath her.



"Now, Willow..." the blonde's voice and demeanor had changed in an instant, becoming sultry, demanding and damn it, just downright hot. "I want you to blindfold yourself for me."



Willow took the silk from her lover and tied it around her eyes, knowing that it signified her willing submission.



"Can you see me, baby?" Tara waved a hand in front of her face.



"Nope...can't see a thing."



"Good...hands up." This was definitely a command, not a suggestion.



Willow raised her arms above her head, feeling Tara close the cuff around one wrist. The sound of the lock clicking into place, caused a small bead of wetness to seep out of her, running down the crack of her firm ass. Next, her lover threaded the short chain through the slats of the headboard and fastened the cool bracelet around her other wrist. Willow could sense Tara's voluptuous breasts hanging very close to her face, just out of reach of her watering mouth. She knew better than to try and touch them and with the same certainty, that Tara was doing it on purpose.



Tara leaned down and whispered in her ear, "Are you comfortable, sweetie?"



"Yes, darling."



"OK, then...we're going to try something a little different here...this is about pushing limits...so if anything is too much for you...promise me that you won't be afraid to use your safeword."



"I promise." Willow knew in her heart that if it got too intense, Tara would sense it before she even thought of safewording, she had nothing to fear.



"Excellent...now there is one rule...I say when you cum...you can beg all you like...but don't ask me to stop unless you want to safeword...do you understand?"



"Yes, Tara." Oh God, yes!



"Now...as I recall...many times when we've been making love...you've told me to stop teasing," Tara spoke very slowly and deliberately, "Well, today...you're going to find out what teasing is all about." Willow inhaled sharply, letting out a long ragged breath.



"Oh my...aren't we eager," Tara ran her fingers softly through coppery curls, "Hmmm...already soaking wet...I haven't even touched you yet...you are a little harlot, aren't you?" Willow squirmed and whimpered, trying to get more friction from the blonde's teasing fingers. "I said...aren't you?" She pinched the redhead's nipple hard.



"Yes, Tara."



"There's a good girl."





Starting at Willow's feet, with impossible gentleness and infinite slowness, Tara began to run her fingers over the redhead's hot flesh. When she reached her instep, Willow giggled and pulled her foot away.



"Willow..." Tara warned.



"I'm sorry Tara...I won't do it again."



"No...you won't."



The redhead felt her lover get up off the bed, then heard her unzipping her bag. The reality of not being able to see what was going to happen to her made Willow tremble with excitement. She felt hyper-alive, as though she was aware of each and every individual nerve ending in her body. Suddenly, she felt Tara's weight at the foot of the bed.



"Well, I thought I could count on you to behave yourself...but I guess you need a little help."



Actually, Tara had been fully aware of Willow's ticklish feet to begin with and this was all a part of her plan. Willow felt fleece encircling her ankle and heard the jingle of buckles being fastened, then the process was repeated on the other side. The wicked blonde spread her lover's legs wide, anchoring the restraints to the bedposts. The redhead felt a tap at her hip, "Lift" then a pillow sliding under her ass, lessening the strain on her limbs.



"How does that feel, my little harlot?"



"It feels wonderful...thank you, Tara."



"Good answer."



Starting on the inside of Willow's left ankle, Tara resumed her tickling. Ever so slowly, she trailed her fingernails up the inside of the redhead's leg, raising goosebumps on her pale skin. When she got far enough up her thigh that Willow could feel the sensations directly in her core, she stopped and switched to the other leg. The redhead had to bite her lip and concentrate very hard, to keep herself from trying to thrust toward the searching hand.



Once Tara was through with her legs, she did the same to her arms, wickedly tickling the bound woman's armpits to see if she would squirm and laugh again. She didn't. Very good, Willow. Next, the sultry blonde inflicted the same pleasurable torture on her lover's torso, skirting the boundaries of her breasts and bush in a maddening way. Already the redhead was whimpering in frustration. Suddenly, Tara raked her fingernails down the redhead's abdomen, causing her to rise up off the bed, gasping. Willow moaned mightily as her wicked lover began to trace the red lines with the full breadth of her soft tongue.



God, she's driving me crazy and she hasn't even touched my...well...usual places yet...I wish she'd at least say something...I need a distraction here or I'm going to cum any minute now...let's see...ooooooh...where's a good place to go shopping...uuurrrrggghhhh...damn, that tongue of hers is...mmmmmmm...so uh...yes...shopping...definitely going to need a new pillow...this one is probably soaked through already...it's one thing tasting myself on Tara's tongue, but...oooh Go-o-od...I don't think I'd want to...ooooo...sleep in it...fuck...what's she doing now? Oh my! Dead puppies...dead puppies...dead puppies.



Tara was between the redhead's thighs, licking up the abundant juices that had collected there. "Oh Willow...you're making such a mess...I must clean this up...whatever am I going to do with you?"



"I can think of something."



Tara pinched her inner thigh, Willow took it like a pro, not making a peep. "You do realize this isn't about what you want?" It wasn't a question.



"Yes, Tara...I'm sorry."



"Don't be sorry...just improve."



"Yes, Tara."



"Good girl." The blonde broke character for a moment, "How are your arms doing, lover?" she asked tenderly, stroking her cheek.



"Fine, baby...I'm great...believe me," Willow chuckled lasciviously.



"Well then, Willow..." Tara slipped effortlessly back into her role. "What shall we do with you next, hmmm?"



"Tara? Baby?"



"Are you OK, lover?"



"Oh yes...just a question..."



"Askin' ain't gettin'...but go ahead."



"I was wondering...since I can't touch you...can you at least take off the blindfold so I can see you?"



"And what will you do for me if I grant you this request?"



"Anything, baby...anything."



"I'll think about it..."



Tara reached down and started stroking Willow's sodden curls, so lightly that the redhead wasn't quite sure she wasn't imagining it. The bound beauty was moaning like crazy, trying so hard to keep still, but Tara continued the maddening tease, giving her no actual skin on skin contact. She straddled the redhead's leg, not actually touching it, but she was so wet that her juices dripped all over her lover's thigh. I can't wait to see how she reacts to this. Willow's breathing grew exponentially more ragged, as she felt the hot cream running over her fevered skin.



Suddenly, Tara was on her. Taking as much of her lover's breast in her moth as she could, she sucked hard, very hard indeed. The redhead raised up off the pillow, arching into her lover's wet, hot vacuum.



"Oh God...uunnngggghhh...Taaraaaaaa!"



Sensing just how close her lover was to cumming, Tara released the breast with a small pop and went back to her tortuous caresses of Willow's bush. The redhead was making a high keening sound, which the sultry temptress soon realized was the word please being moaned over and over again.



"Did you want something?" she asked, in the same tone she would have used to ask whether or not Willow wanted another cup of coffee.



The redhead was so aroused she found herself unable to form words. She moved her lips and tongue like a baby looking for a bottle, hoping that her lover would take the hint.



"Oh, you want to show me your goldfish impression?" Tara teased, "Very cute."

Willow growled.



"No? Are you thirsty...did you want a drink? Something to suck on perhaps?" The redhead moaned enthusiastically. Had she been able to see the lustful grin on her lover's face at the moment, Willow would have climaxed on the spot, rules or no rules.



"Well, I suppose...since you're being such a good girl..."



Willow could feel Tara moving down the bed, then something moving through her overheated core. What is that...the tip of a finger? She almost came on the spot when she felt the softness press against her swollen lips and realized what it was. Then it was gone and she could smell the strong musk of her arousal right under her nose.



"Open your mouth, Willow," Tara put her sticky, wet nipple between her lover's lips, "Clean it."



The redhead moaned against the soft breast in her mouth, licking her own wetness from the rock hard nipple, sucking at the pebbled flesh surrounding it, making Tara cry out in ecstasy. Feeling naughty, she bit down on the nipple, shaking her head from side to side.



The wicked blonde pulled the tasty treat away in an instant, "Did I say you could use your teeth?" she scolded.



"No, Tara."



"Well, since you have such a luscious mouth, I feel compelled to forgive you." She leaned down, kissing Willow fiercely...sucking at her tongue...biting her lips...her nipples so painfully erect that they felt like pebbles pressing into the redhead's sensitive breasts.



"Tara...baby...please..." the redhead groaned.



"What is it now, hmmmm?"



"Please baby, I want to see you..."



"Still gnawing at that bone, are we?" she teased, pinching Willow's nipples mercilessly, the redhead panting like a dog, trying with all her considerable strength of will not to cum. "Oh alright..." she sighed, "but you'll have to wait a minute."



Again, Willow felt her lover get off the bed, then she heard what sounded like something heavy being dragged across the floor. Huh? She was in no condition to play Guess that Noise at the moment, she'd find out what it was soon enough. The redhead was experiencing a sort of floating sensation and she felt as though all her senses had been heightened. She imagined that she could feel the air currents, created by the blonde's movements, blowing across her heated skin. The blonde had not only become the center of her universe now, she was her universe, her world, nothing existed but Tara and this unquenchable desire. I wonder if this is what they meant by sub-space in those stories I read on the Internet.



Willow was torn from her mental ramblings by the sound of water running, then the slap of Tara's bare feet on the bathroom floor, the sound of curtains being drawn and the feeling of her goddess climbing onto the bed.



"Close your eyes, lover." Tara was making a brief appearance before the wicked vixen returned. She tugged at the knot in the scarf and Willow felt the silk sliding over her cheek, then Tara moving off the bed once again.



"OK...you can look now."



The redhead opened her eyes and saw Tara standing beside the bed, wearing the leather bustier she'd been wearing at Pride and nothing else, unless you counted the wicked grin. Her eyes took in the rest of the room, the drapes had been closed, there were candles burning everywhere and then she saw what her lover had been moving. The old full length mirror was at the foot of the bed and slightly off to the side. Willow could see herself fully in the large reflector, the scratch marks on her stomach, nipples empurpled by their advanced state of erectness and her center, fully exposed and vulnerable, dripping like a leaky faucet.



"Look at yourself Willow...now do you see why I want you so badly? I've never seen you look so sexy...and in your case, that's saying something..." The blonde's tone became a little naughtier, "So tell me, Red...are you enjoying being my little harlot? I won't ask you if it makes you hot...that much is obvious," she smirked, running the back of her hand over Willow's wetness. The bound woman arched and gasped at the touch, trying desperately to bring her straining, swollen bundle of nerves into contact with Tara's hand.



"Ooh...naughty, naughty...you are a randy little thing, aren't you? Are you like this with all your women?"



The redhead just gazed at her, mesmerized.



"Answer me," she pinched her lover's clit hard.



"Eeeeeeeeeeeee...no Tara...mmmmmmm."



"No? Did you say no to me??"



"No...I mean yes...um...oh...only for you, baby...you make me so hot...so wet...the best, baby."



"Well, well...tell me something Willow...do you want to cum?"



"Oh God, yes...please Tara," she whimpered.



"You're just dying for it aren't you?" the vixen asked in the sexiest voice Willow had ever heard.



"Yes! Tara...please...please..."



"I think I'll have to make you wait just a little longer then," she ran her tongue over the redhead's pouting lips, "It'll be so much sweeter that way."



Mentally, Willow scratched her head...Just when was my lover replaced by this evil twin, anyway?



Willow groaned in frustration, a single tear running down her flushed cheek. Shit, Tara...I think you may have gone a little too far here...take pity on the woman for chrissake...anyway, I'm pretty close to cumming myself...now there's an idea...



"OK lover...I'll make a deal with you...if you can satisfy me...make me cum screaming...then I'll give you release afterward...eventually..."



"Oh yes...please Tara...let me taste you."



"Well, since you asked so nice" the blue-eyed vixen purred, "But first..."



Tara crawled to the foot of the bed, detaching Willow's restraints from the posts, but leaving the cuffs on her ankles as a reminder. The redhead let out a sigh of relief. Tenderly, the blonde moved up her lover's body, taking a minute to massage her arms and shoulders, checking her hands to make sure they weren't cold. OK,all good. Then to Willow's infinite surprise, she released one of her wrists from the handcuffs, attaching the empty ring to the headboard.



"Mmmmmmmm..." the redhead moaned, rotating her wrist.



"Are you OK, sweetie?" Tara asked, stroking her damp hair.



"Oh yes, Tara...this is...uunnnghhh...that's the only way I can describe it."



"Would you like a drink of water?" she asked holding a glass up to her lover's lips. "I'm glad you like it, lover," she smiled broadly, "are you ready to go on?"



"Oh yes..."



"Well then...you are to use only your mouth...no hands...I released you cuz it's hard to say monkey when you have a mouth full of kitty."



Willow giggled naughtily, Tara smiling at her with absolute adoration. She'd slipped back into vixen mode in the blink of an eye, moving up the redhead's body to straddle her face. "Tap twice to safeword, darlin'..."



The sultry blonde grabbed on to the headboard, trying to keep as much of her weight on her hands and knees as possible. Her molten core dripped on the redhead's lips, running down her cheeks. At the first touch of Willow's tongue, Tara felt like she'd been hit with a jolt of electricity. Her lover was taking long, slow licks, reveling in the nectar that ran down her throat. Feeling that this was a good opportunity for a little payback, she was judiciously avoiding the blue-eyed temptresses clit. Tara was rocking back and forth, moaning in rhythm with the redhead's strokes, then crying out her name as Willow plunged her questing oral muscle as deep inside her core as it would go. She was tongue-fucking her and moaning at the same time, which created a sensation so intense that the blonde could scarcely keep herself from putting all her weight on her redhead's mouth. Wouldn't want to smother the girl...talk about a tough one to explain to the EMTs.



Tara groaned at the sudden loss of her lover's tongue, but her feelings of emptiness didn't last long as Willow pushed her whole face into the blonde's center, rubbing the hot juices all over her cheeks and chin and hell, probably even her eyebrows, judging by the way it felt. The blonde knew what her lover was up to, varying the intensity, making her wait. Oh...she'll pay for that...oooohhhhh! Just then the redhead switched her technique again, speed-tonguing Tara's straining bundle of nerves. The blonde's eyes rolled back and she screamed out Willow's name, riding her face like a bronco. She bucked against her in such a way that her chin came into contact with her slick, swollen, nether lips with every thrust.



It seemed that Tara was getting a little too close, so the redhead slowed things down again. She pushed inside her dripping center once more, languidly moving in and out, stretching her tongue to its limits in an effort to reach Tara's sweet spot. Just as the blonde had settled into the slower pace, Willow pulled another trick out of her bag. Continuing her languorous tongue-fuck, she sucked at the same time, leading the blonde in a breathtaking chorus of desperate moans and gasps.



"Oh Willow...baby...so gooood...so so goooooood...please lover...I need...oh God...make me cum baby...uunnngghhhhhhhh..."



The redhead slipped her tongue out of Tara's grasping channel and grabbed hold of her swollen nub with her teeth, sucking for all she was worth. The blonde bucked and thrashed, moaned and gasped, her vocabulary reduced to guttural sounds and dirty words.



"Oooh fuck...oh Willow...baby...harder...harder...oh yeeeesssss....lick my kitty, baby...suck it...oh Willooooooooooowww..."



Tara came, screaming her lover's name, grabbing on to the headboard so tightly that her knuckled were white. Arching backward like some bacchanalian ballerina, the lights flashing behind her eyes. The redhead drank down her lover's hot nectar, sucking every last honeyed drop out of her, licking at her wet, hot cavern until there wasn't a trace left.



Carefully, Tara climbed off her lover, dropping down beside her to take her in her arms. She kissed her fiercely, with all the love she felt bursting from her heart, until she felt the redhead struggling beneath her.



"Oh...Tara...baby...need...to...breathe...sorry..."



"Don't you...dare...apologize...to me...after...that...Rosen...berg." She snuggled into the breathless redhead, resting her read in the crook of her neck. "I love you, Willow."



"Mmmm...I love you too, baby...um...sweetie?" she tugged at the cuffs, "Do you think you could undo this...just for a little while...I want to hold you."



"Of course, baby...but no touching yourself," she teased, unlocking the cold steel bracelet, "I'm not through with you yet...oh no...not by a longshot..." The look in her eyes when she said it, made Willow shiver to the bone. Mmmmmmmm, I like Take Charge Tara... She sighed happily and wrapped her arms around her soulmate, grinning as she jingled the restraints still attached to her ankles. I can't wait for round two...



TBC



And I bet you all can't either....hope it was worth the wait...still have to write the next scene, but it is basically finished in my head, when I get it posted all depends on how things are at work this week...in the meantime you have all this long smuttiness to keep you amused:tara :willow :boot :luv2





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Re: Flu???

Postby Tempest Duer » Sun Oct 03, 2004 9:56 pm

...............I love this fic. Did I tell you that?

It's insulting to the whole gender[sic] of rap.



~Eminem

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HOLY SMUT

Postby wimpy0729 » Sun Oct 03, 2004 10:39 pm

Holy hell, you melted me. :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud :thud



Good thing I had my thud pillows placed around my chair so I didn't get hurt when I fell out. And my glass of ice water...well, I just gave up on using it to drink and had to thoroughly douse myself and it still didn't help.



That was wicked awesome and very well worth the wait.



Way too much good stuff to list, as it was all great, even better than great but my brain isn't working too well right now so I'm having a hard time finding the right words.



I gotta say that I really love how you kept the love and tenderness even in the middle of such heated passion. Excellent job!



Now I'm gonna camp out right here in my thud pillows and wait for the next part.



Wimpy





"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

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Re: HOLY SMUT

Postby WickedReds » Sun Oct 03, 2004 11:56 pm

HOLY SMUT BAGS!!!!!!!!! that was naughty... very sexy and i found some funny stuff too... Mmm arousal and funnies... great combo...

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BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
:lmao :lmao

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Monkey...that's my safeword
:lmao :lmao

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Well then...you are to use only your mouth...no hands...I released you cuz it's hard to say monkey when you have a mouth full of kitty
:thud :drool

Thank the gods i'm in my bed or i would of fell right out of my chair... this was wickedly hot... and oh my god that position tara was in...:drool ... very fun...

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lick my kitty, baby
:thud

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Mmmmmmmm, I like Take Charge Tara


I'm going to agree with willow there... there's just something about take charge tara that turns me on....:drool

more soon



-reds:willow



My banana dances for smut :banana





Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon

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Re: HOLY SMUT

Postby Artemis » Mon Oct 04, 2004 3:21 am

Heck, who wouldn't like Take-Charge Tara? :thud



This is gonna sound strange, but y'know what really stood out for me? Early in the chapter, when Tara goes to get her gear ready, striding around naked like she owns the place - as you said, completely un-selfconscious. That is sexy.



Everything else was sexy as well, oh yes it certainly was, but for me that moment was the basis of it all - Tara's confidence.



I liked how Willow was so smut-literate as well, having done all her reading - that's very Willow, being curious just for curiosity's sake (that's how I read it anyway, her having read this stuff not because she was specifically interested in it, as opposed to some other kind of kink, but because she's interested in everything, more or less).



So... NC-35 next, huh? Well, bring it on, I say. Now I'm curious, how high can an NC- rating go? Triple figures? Tara in that bustier is worth a few points just by itself :drool

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

Artemis
 


re:holy smut

Postby umgaynow » Mon Oct 04, 2004 7:44 am

thanks for all the fab feedage...glad everyone dug it and didn't think it was too smutty...and Artemis...you always seem to get it...cool :drool

umgaynow
 


Re: OHMYGOD!

Postby veiled isis moon » Mon Oct 04, 2004 8:15 am





That was friggin amazing........wow.........go you! Shit!! I did not want that to end, i was glued to the screen! I want the next chapter now goddamnit!! I really need a cold shower...........and by the looks of it, i'll have to read the next chapter whilst i have a cold shower, otherwise i'm not gonna be able to move anywhere! Talk about turning into a big mushy puddle! Too much !

veiled isis moon
 


OMG

Postby LizPuRR » Mon Oct 04, 2004 10:22 am

wow that was soooo hot!!!

defintaly need that continued!!!

:thud :bounce :thud

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you were the one, you were the only one and you were amazing

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Re: confident tara is sexy

Postby alysagoddess85 » Mon Oct 04, 2004 10:33 am

wow...so first off that whole thing was just hot...i mean come on...who WOULDNT want a take-charge tara doing naughty things to them?! i do have to agree with artemis though...confident tara is the hottest of all...the fact that she trusts willow enough and knows that willow believes in her enough to be able to even suggest doing all that is really great...it shows how close theyre really becoming as people as well as lovers.



and then yea...tara in a leather bustier....that just speaks for itself...i cant wait for the nc-35 update...lol...thats gonna be a blast if this was just the nc-17 warmup...hooboy....hope i dont faint!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

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Re: confident tara is sexy

Postby pipsberg » Mon Oct 04, 2004 11:16 am

Holy Smut indeed! Great job with the hot sex there. Whew. Take charge Tara is one of the sexiest things imaginable..



:peace

-pipsberg



"We live our lives, do whatever we do, and then we sleep - it's as simple and ordinary as that."

Michael Cunningham, The Hours

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Re: confident tara is sexy

Postby umgaynow » Mon Oct 04, 2004 9:51 pm

Well my darlings...as usual thank you for all the fab feedback...I was working on the next chapter earlier tonight and frankly I am surprised the paper isn't bursting into flames...I'm kind of afraid to post it really...compared to what's coming up this last chapter was tame...it's funny, Tara becomes both more loving and more dominant if you can imagine that...and we find out a few things about Willow's stuff as well...so there's a little teaser for you...and advanced warning...don't read chapter 14 if you have a weak heart...it should be posted by the end of the week at the latest...if not sooner...probably sooner but I can't say specifically when...depends on how much longer it ends up being...although in all honesty I don't know how much more Willow's poor little passion wracked body can take...so maybe sooner than later after all...and yes I know I'm babbling...maybe I need to stop working on the story for a while :kdevil Coming Soon...NC-35...showerproof those computers now!!!



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Re: confident tara is sexy

Postby shuyaku » Mon Oct 04, 2004 11:45 pm

Due to heavy duty time constraints, and frankly the lack of higher brain functions (W/T + umgaynow = HOT!! = brain meltdown), I offer a very meaningful :thud with a side of :drool , a bit of :shock and a :banana on top.



:D

-shuyaku

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

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Re: confident tara is sexy

Postby Stroke of Luck » Tue Oct 05, 2004 1:04 pm

u r RIGHT! i cant wait for round 2!:blush

But round 1 wowy that was hot and :drool and even :thud . i can just imagine how round two will be:p muhahahah Willow will suffer alot for that "punishment" that tara got:laugh



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Re: confident tara is sexy

Postby umgaynow » Tue Oct 05, 2004 8:49 pm

well, my wee kitties...I finished chapter 14 today...and at the risk of sounding egotistical I am really quite impressed with it...made me need a cold shower and almost made me cry too...don't worry, not angsty tears...beautiful Willow and Tara love tears...then again maybe I'm just hormonal...it still needs a few small tweaks (but then don't we all) and I brought home a movie to watch so I will do my best to post it tomorrow night...unless I have a crappy day or something...so you will definitely want to book that cold shower time and maybe have a fire extinguisher and a box of tissues next to your desk...I take no responsibility for any components that melt or burst into flame...trust me...compared to what's coming up, the rest of the story has been tame...then I'm afraid the angst returns in chapter 15...after all the girls do need to have jobs...they can't shag all the time...no matter how much me way want them to...for starters walking would be quite painful, never mind sitting down :p Until next time...keep the BF coming...:tara :willow :luv2 :drool



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Re: confident tara is sexy

Postby alysagoddess85 » Wed Oct 06, 2004 10:17 am

wow...oooo my shower times booked...but i dont get your logic!! why cant they shag all the time?!?! walking and sitting are wwwaaayyy overrated!! and jobs...pppfffttt...who needs one of those...they can live on love!!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

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Re: confident tara is sexy

Postby tarawhipped » Wed Oct 06, 2004 7:27 pm

Just wanted to add my :drool to the puddle (or lake by now).



That was well worth the wait--VERY hot, but also sexy and sweet, and even funny at times (I love Willow's attempt to cover her knowledge of safewords with 'I read a lot':lol ).



Can't wait for the next one! NC-35, huh? I've never been so happy to be 36!



:peace -Cameron



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

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Re: confident tara is sexy

Postby umgaynow » Wed Oct 06, 2004 8:05 pm

Hello my tiny felines :kgeek



I have good news and bad news...the good news is that the ultra hot chapter 14 is finished and ready for posting...the bad news is my dad needs the computer and he's in a mood so no arguing that point...if he doesn't finish too late I will try to post tonight although it is rather long, we'll see...also wrote the first draft of chapter 15 today...you are officially being warned, it gives new meaning to the word angst...I was getting upset just writing it...in fact the next 2 or 3 chapters will also be wall to wall angst...but it's necessary for the plot and I promise you a happy ending...so don't hate me too much...if I can't get on later I will post tomorrow



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Re: confident tara is sexy

Postby alysagoddess85 » Wed Oct 06, 2004 8:38 pm

im all kinds of good with the angst just as long as u make up for it with some wonderful lovin' afterwards...cuz yea...thats just fun fun fun!!



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

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A Woman in Uniform Chapter 14

Postby umgaynow » Wed Oct 06, 2004 11:54 pm

Disclaimers: I don't own them...but if I did, they'd have to show Buffy on the Playboy channel...also ratingwise...this is the smut upon smut NC-35 chapter I have been warning you about.:drool



Summary: The all day love-fest continues...and Tara's more Take-Chargey than ever:boot



Notes: What more can I say...definitely not appropriate for children or anyone with a heart condition...if you and or your computer burst into flames, don't blame me:p

Once again, TC Tara's dialogue is in italics...also character thoughts



A Woman in Uniform: Chapter 14

*********************************************



Tara took Willow's hand, kissing the chafe mark on her wrist, "This simply won't do..." She crawled down the bed and removed the fleece-lined restraints from the redhead's ankles, refastening them to her wrists. "There...that's better," she kissed her lover gently, "I don't want to hurt you, baby...not ever."



Willow smiled, "I know that, my love...although, all this delicious frustration of yours is getting a bit uncomfortable."



The blonde grinned wickedly, "Well, we'll just have to do something about that, won't we?"



"Yes, please..."



"On your back...arms up."



"Yes, Tara," she assumed the position.



The blonde anchored the restraints to the bedposts, stretching her lover's arms just to the point of near discomfort. Placing a couple of pillows behind the redhead's back, she straddled her taut abdomen, her wetness sliding along it as she kissed her with passionate abandon. Willow was reaching her former level of frustrating arousal with horrible rapidity. Tara pulled back from the kiss, sitting back on her heels so that most of her weight was supported. She ran her fingernails all over the redhead's breasts, with just enough pressure to make it more of a scratch than a caress, but not enough to do any damage. Once she'd decided that her lover was suitably worked up, she took hold of both nipples, squeezing them with unrelenting pressure. Willow arched up into the blonde's sodden core, gasping in pleasurable pain.



"Are you alright, honey?" Tara asked, her tone the height of nonchalance. She might just as well have been discussing the weather. "Are you having an asthma attack? Do you need me to get your inhaler?"



The bound woman growled.



"None of that, now," she switched from constant pressure on the redhead's bruised nipples, to alternately pinching and tweaking one then the other.



"Yes, Tara..." Willow moaned.



The wicked blonde released her captive's nubs, causing a flash of pain as the blood rushed back into them, the redhead writhing against her.



"There, there..." she purred, moving down to straddle her lover's thigh, "You're doing very well, my little harlot." Then, reaching back to pull Willow's thigh up into her, she leaned forward and took the tortured nipples into her mouth in turn, soothing them with her soft tongue, sucking ever so lightly. Tara rocked against the redhead's muscled thigh in cadence with the tempo set by her languid tongue and lips. Slowly...softly...not enough to get her off...but certainly enough to make her dripping wet...oh so sweet...oh so sexy.

Feeling it was time to escalate things a bit, she launched an assault on Willow's neck. Kissing...licking...biting...sucking hard at the places she knew would drive her lover crazy...her pulse point...that ultra-sensitive spot just behind her ear where her jawline began.



"Oh...Tara...baby...please..." Willow moaned desperately.



"Feeling a little keyed up are we?" she teased, nibbling at her redhead's lips.



Willow glared at her lover. "You are just plain evil, do you realize that?"



"Oh...you love it," she winked, "don't you?"



"You are enjoying this way too much..."



"Oh, I don't know...I'm starting to feel a little frustrated myself." The blonde reached over her lover's outstretched arm, retrieving the vibrator.



Willow heard it before she saw it. Oh God, what's she gonna do with that?



Tara got up on her knees, stripping off her corset. Arching her back, she skimmed the vibrator over her breasts, grinding down into Willow's leg as she teased her nipples with it. The redhead was speechless, her eyes like saucers. Which, of course, was exactly what the wicked blonde had in mind. I'll give her a show she'll never forget. She dipped the vibe between her thighs, throwing her head back, moaning and gasping in pleasure, her lover making sounds in faint echo of her own.



"Oh, Willow...baby...this feels sooooo good...mmmmmmm...oh yeah..."



Just when Willow didn't think she could take anymore...If she cums I swear I'll die...Tara took the slick tool from between her legs and applied it to the redhead's sensitive nipples, swallowing her moans as she kissed her passionately. Willow was bucking wildly beneath her, tugging futilely at the restraining cuffs around her wrists, the short chains adding a percussive backbeat to their lovers' symphony.



Suddenly, Tara thrust her thigh into the redhead's center, leaning in close to her ear, running her tongue around it once, before whispering, "Cum for me, baby."



With no stimulation aside from the steady pressure of Tara's leg and the torturing vibration of her nipples, Willow came explosively at her lover's word. Lifting the blonde right off the bed with the power of her arching body, she sprayed her hot nectar all over lover's thigh.

"Taaaaaaaaaaaa...raaaaaaaaaa..."



The blue-eyed beauty scooted down and began cleaning the wetness from her lover's sex with long, slow strokes of her whole tongue in more of a soothing caress than any sort of stimulation. When Willow was finally still, Tara climbed up her body, detaching the restraints from the bedposts and taking her boneless lover in her arms.



"Oh, Willow...baby...that was the sexiest thing I've ever seen...your beautiful body arching and heaving...the feel of your muscles fluidly changing shape beneath your skin as you writhed under me...so hot, darling...thank you for this, baby...you're amazing...I love you so much."



Still breathless, Willow mumbled, "Mmmmm...I love...you...too...baby..."



"You did so well, my love," she held her close, kissing her hair, "I'm so proud of you."



The only response the redhead could muster was, "Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..."



"That's OK, lover...don't try to talk...rest a while...you've earned it," she kissed her softly.





When Willow could speak again, she jingled the chain hanging off her wrist, "I'm guessing this isn't over yet..."



"Do you want it to be?" Tara whispered, nibbling her ear.



"Oh, no...definitely no to that question."



Tara smiled wickedly, "Just let me know when you're ready for more, lover."



"Ready when you are, my vixen."



"Vixen, huh? And which are we today, the pot or the kettle?"



"Whichever is the wettest, I'd imagine."



"Sorry lover, I don't think that distinction is going to amount to much at this point," she chuckled lustily.



The redhead stretched mightily, a contented smile on her lips. "So...how do you want me?" she grinned wickedly.



"How long have you got? That could be quite a list," the sultry blonde teased.



"Well...pick one..." the redhead taunted.



"If you insist..." Tara piled a couple of pillows in the middle of the bed. "I noticed how much you enjoyed my little show," she winked, "so I'm guessing you like to watch...I want you to lie down on your stomach...with your head toward the foot of the bed."



Willow did as she was told, without her lover having to explain further, her body draped over the pillows so that her sweet ass was raised high in the air. Tara walked around the bed, fastening the redhead's restraints in place and adjusting the mirror so that the bound woman had a clear view of herself.



Ooooo...this is going to be...interesting...



The blonde climbed onto the bed, spreading her lovers legs and settling in between them. "Now, isn't that a pretty picture..." She laid down lightly on her redhead's back, kissing her neck then smiling at their reflection in the mirror, Willow smiled too.



Slowly moving backward, the blue-eyed beauty kissed her way down her lover's spine, the redhead emitting a low contented moan each time the soft lips made contact with her skin. Tara smiled inwardly. She likes this as much as I do...the power games...the restraints...oh yes, definitely made for each other.



"So...Willow..." she spoke between kisses, "We're...going...to...do...things...a little...differently...this...time..." The blonde was now kissing the baby soft flesh of her lover's firm ass. "You...can...cum...as often...as you...want...to..." the redhead moaned happily, "I...want...you...wet...as wet...as...I...can...get...you..." She ran her tongue slowly along the crack between the pale globes.



"Mmmmmmmm...I don't...think...oooo...that is...OH...going to be...oh God...a...problem."



Tara's tongue was delving deeper, not quite bottoming out yet, but getting there. The redhead shivered with delight. Was that a shudder or a shiver...hmmm...careful, Maclay. She ceased her licking tease for a moment.



"Is this OK, lover?" she asked, gently easing the cheeks apart.



"Oh yes, Tara...it's wonderful...and you look so sexy doing it."



Did I peg her right or what?



Tara's tongue ventured further in, tickling the redhead's sensitive ring. Willow was moaning with every stroke, pushing herself up into her lover's questing tongue. The blonde reached her left hand down between her lover's legs, cupping her center, pushing her forward.



"Get on your knees for me, baby."



Now that she had better access, Tara resumed her tonguing and started in stroking the redhead's hot core. All palm...no fingers...gently...slowly...making her wait. Then, slipping one finger between her lips on the upstroke...not penetrating...just tracing the dripping cleft. She could feel her lover's sex pulsating under her tender touch, the redhead's body trying to pull her in. Probing Willow's nether entrance with her tongue, but not penetrating, Tara slipped her thumb into the grasping channel, rubbing her swollen nub with her fingertips.



Willow was thrusting back into her lover's demanding hand, panting and growling like an animal. Knowing just how close she was to cumming, Tara pressed her tongue in a little, trading three fingers for her thumb, curling them into Willow's sweet spot over and over again. The redhead came with a feral cry, filling the palm of her lover's hand, hot juices running down the blonde's wrist. The boneless woman flopped down onto the pillows, breathing hard. Tara snuggled her from behind, kissing her neck and ears.



"Oh, Tara...that was...so hot...watching you...I was so...turned...on..."



"Was?" the blonde teased.



"Oh...not was...so not was..."



"I thought so..." she stroked her lover's sex gently, "You ready for more, baby?" she whispered in her ear.



"Yes, Tara."



Oh...yes Tara...not baby...or lover...yes Tara...she is so into this...woo and hoo.



"On your knees, Willow."



Once the redhead was in position, Tara held the vibrator up in front of her face, "Clean it."



Willow gladly took the toy into her mouth, greedily sucking her lover's luscious juices from the sticky plastic, until Tara pulled it away.



"Was that yummy?"



"Mmmmmmm...yes, Tara...although I do prefer it straight from the source."



"Aren't you sassy all of a sudden?"



"Well...it wouldn't be as much fun if I was completely submissive, now would it?"



"You do have a point there..."



Tara suddenly thrust two fingers into her lover's soaking wet core...slowly and deeply...in and out...adding another finger...working her swollen nub with the vibe. The redhead was bucking against her so wildly, that she was having a hard time keeping her fingers inside. Willow moaned dejectedly when the blonde withdrew, feeling less than complete without her lover inside her. Still, the emptiness didn't last long. Tara pushed the vibe inside her redhead, pumping hard, her sticky wet fingers traveling to the place where her tongue had just been. As she felt the wicked blonde penetrate her nether entrance with two fingers, slowly screwing her from both ends at once, Willow climaxed again. The orgasm didn't stop Tara for a minute, in fact it barely slowed her down, she rode Willow's spasms like a wave, continuing her assault on the redhead's luscious holes as her own wetness dripped copiously on the bed. I really need to figure out a way to do this and have her suck my kitty at the same time.



"Open your eyes, my Willow," the redhead gazed at her in the mirror, "do you see how well we fit together...how we complete each other...two halves of a perfect whole?"



"Oh yes, baby...God yes...Fuck me, Tara...it's all for you...make me cum..."



The blonde continued to pump her lover as she leaned down and bit her neck. Willow exploded instantly.



"Yours, Tara...all...yours..."



Mesmerized, Tara watched her lover in the mirror as she came...the breathtakingly beautiful expression of ecstasy on her face...the ripples of pleasure undulating through her lithe form...and hottest of all these things...watching Willow watch her in return.



"How are you doing, lover?"



"Mmmmmmmmm....more...please! I'm all yours, Tara...take me..."



"Mmmmmm...you read my mind..."



Tara slid the vibrator out of her lover's center, replacing it with three fingers. As she thrust slowly into the redhead, she pulled out of her rear entrance and picked up the vibe again. Using her knee to spread Willow's legs a little further apart, effectively opening her, she applied the humming shaft to the place her fingers had just vacated. Massaging all along the redhead's luscious cleft, she teased around the grasping ring of muscle, not entering. Willow, meanwhile, was breathing like she had a collapsed lung and her sex was producing so much lubrication that the blonde's fingers inside her offered no friction at all. The blue-eyed temptress added another, thrusting slowly...deeply...probing her lover's sweet spot...raking her fingers across it. The redhead's eyes were riveted on the mirror, her mouth open, tongue questing as though she was tasting some invisible lover.



Tara sped her pace inside the bound woman, Willow humping back against her hand with great vigor. Leaning down to kiss and lick the redhead's back, the wicked blonde slowly pushed the vibe inside her. After giving her a moment to become accustomed to the fullness, Tara shook the toy a bit, watching her lover's ass wiggle. Willow came furiously, screaming like a banshee, the blonde slowly fucking her backside all the while. Then, taking advantage of the volcanic orgasm, Tara tucked her thumb and slid fully inside her lover, Willow's swollen lips like a pink bracelet around her wrist.



"Oh God...Taaaraaaaa...yes baby...yes...yes...yes...taake...meeeeee..."



The redhead's sweet cum running down her forearm, Tara slowly pumped her with her fist, pushing the vibe into her rear entrance each time her hand stroked outward. Gradually, she increased her pace and force, Willow's inner muscles drawing her deeper, beckoning more more more. The bound woman collapsed onto the pillows, no longer able to support her own weight.



"lOh God...Willow...baby...sooooo hot...you feel so good...look at me, lover..." The redhead opened her eyes, gazing at the mirror," So beautiful, baby...sooo beautiful...I love you so much..."



It took all of Willow's concentration just to moan in response. The tension was slowly building inside her and she felt like she might just die of pleasure, if the sultry blonde didn't grant her release soon. Tara was being quite strong and firm with her now, but somehow tender and loving just the same. How does she do that?



Sensing that her lover needed a little more to push her over the edge, the blonde began twisting her hand with each thrust. Straddling her lover's leg, she pushed her sodden sex into the back of a muscular thigh. Willow was chanting now, one word over and over again.



"Yours...yours...yours...yours...yours...yours...yours...yours...yours..."



Taking her hand off the buzzing massager, Tara leaned down a little to hold it in with the weight of her body, reaching underneath to tease Willow's...wow...unbelievably swollen bud. Grinding against the redhead's leg with increasing speed and fervor, Tara stretched out her fingers to stroke her lover's cervix. She was chanting louder now...YOURS! YOURS! YOURS! YOURS!..her whole body trembling with unreleased tension.



"Oh...fuck yes...Willow...baby...cum...with...me...now baby...oh God...yeeeeeeeesss...Wiiiiii...llooooooooowwwww..."



Tara came unfathomably hard, the redhead following not long after, spraying her sweet nectar all over the blonde's golden curls, her inner muscles clamping down so hard on her lover's fist that she was afraid she might break her hand. The blue-eyed beauty collapsed on top of her Willow, gently pulling her hand out of its warm wet home, once the spasms had stopped. The vibe had popped out on its own and Tara tossed it aside, reaching over her lover's spent body to remove the restraints. With a strength that surprised them both, she lifted Willow, carrying her to the other end of the bed, where she set her down in a rare dry spot. Then she laid down beside her, taking her in her arms. She kissed the redhead over and over, wherever her lips would reach...her hair...her neck...her shoulders. Tara cradled her lover gently, tears rolling down her cheeks as the emotion welling up inside her, spilled over.



"Oh...Willow...darling...I love you so much...that was...mmmmmmm...the best, baby...you are a goddess."



Willow moaned contentedly, barely able to mumble, "Love...you...Tara...mmmmmmm...stay....with...always...OK?" she sounded positively exhausted and a little intoxicated.



Her blonde kissed her gently, lovingly, "Sleep now, my love..." She repositioned the redhead to pillow her head on her own soft breasts, God knows all the other pillows were a wash.



"Mmmmmm...soft..." the redhead smiled feebly.



Tara chuckled at her loopy lover, "Yes, baby...soft...and yours...only yours...we'll talk later...sleep now...I love you, my Willow."



The redhead nuzzled into her lover's bosom like a drowsy child. Tara pulled a blanket over them both, closing her eyes and sighing in perfect bliss. She wants me to stay...as if I could do anything else. Tara fell asleep stroking her lover's damp hair, happier than she'd ever been in her life.



TBC



umgaynow :tara :willow :luv2 :drool :drool :drool :drool



so...let me know what you think...was it worth the wait? Is it hot and sexy and touching too? Or did I got too far and I'm just a smutty swine? Remember...this is the last hot sex for a while...the angst train is pulling into town..OK...cross your fingers, I'm gonna hit the posting button now...



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Re: A Woman in Uniform Chapter 14

Postby WickedReds » Thu Oct 07, 2004 12:35 am

*opens mouth... no sound*

*Shakes head and slaps self a few times*

HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!

THAT WAS HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :thud :drool :jaw

i'm fucking speachless...all i can do is this...

:drool :jaw :thud :drool :jaw :thud :drool :jaw :thud :drool :jaw :thud :drool :jaw :thud :drool :jaw :thud :drool :jaw :thud :drool :jaw :thud :drool :jaw :thud



-reds:willow :thud :drool :jaw



my banana dances for smut :banana

Tara in a wet shirt, Tara in a wet shirt. Tara in. A. Wet. Shirt. “Of course.”-Willow From Remember to Breath By Yellow Crayon

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Re: A Woman in Uniform Chapter 14

Postby veiled isis moon » Thu Oct 07, 2004 5:37 am

*looks around*

......floor........hmmmm.....how'd i g......

*spots computer screen*

.....ohhhhh.....

*fumbles her way back onto the chair*

*stares blankly at the screen*

.......come on, pull it together. It's only a fic....a fic with sex.....lots of......fist.....ohmygod....

*slaps head couple of times*

....right....feedback.....think.........you give good fist-sex!Shit! You have-write......write good sex......all good sex.......vibrators!.......vibrators good........handcuffs, yummy........tied......with teasing......lots and lots of.......

*shakes head and looks blankly at the screen*

......who-what am i doing?........feedback.......right......feedback......i did that already.....

*scratches head*

......hmmmm.........you give good fist-sex! Shit! I mean.......................



Edited by: veiled isis moon at: 10/7/04 7:38 am
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Worth The Wait

Postby wimpy0729 » Thu Oct 07, 2004 6:38 am

*GULP*



Um...I ditto what the others said. Yes, it was definitely worth the wait. The shower is definitely a must, when I remember how to get there. :thud :thud :thud :thud



It was SO hot, but I really loved the tenderness throughout. Excellent job!



Now when the angsty stuff comes, I'll just go back and read this a few more dozen times to get me through it. ;)



More soon please!



Wimpy





"There was plenty of magic." ~ Tara

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ummm

Postby LizPuRR » Thu Oct 07, 2004 10:36 am

DAMN!!



what else can one say really??



:thud

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you were the one, you were the only one and you were amazing

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Re: ummm

Postby alysagoddess85 » Thu Oct 07, 2004 11:36 am

*wipes steam from screen* HOLY HELL!! THAT WAS SMUTTY!! oooo wow....yea...hang on...*rewipes screen again*...ok all better....my comps just a little smokey looking...o wow...i have a need for a shower....a cold shower...or a cooler of ice....no not cold enough...dammit....*sigh*....that was sooooo worth the wait....need ice...moving to antarctica now....no still not cold enough



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

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Re: ummm

Postby Stroke of Luck » Thu Oct 07, 2004 12:38 pm

I love the smut parts, but i miss the other parts too! the talking, meeting friends etc. maybe the next time they´ll wake up, they´ll go to the shower and having some fun there and then they are getting ready for the world:p with their sore pussys and asses;)



Yes, they do belong together:D



Cu:wave

SoL/Natti

"I wish that you were here or that I were there, or that we were together anywhere!"

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Re: ummm

Postby Artemis » Fri Oct 08, 2004 9:42 am

Well, now I know why they make those waterproof keyboard covers - to keep the drool out of contact with the circuitry... :drool Must get one of those.



Take Charge Tara is just the hottest :thud - though, I think a very close second place goes to Willow in this chapter. She certainly wasn't just lying there having Tara do all the work, she was playing the game too - like she said, it wouldn't be much fun if she didn't :) I know her italicised lines were more for emphasis, but what with Tara's italics being 'Take Charge Tara' lines, I kind of saw Willow's as her getting into the 'Taken-Charge-Of Willow' role.



That little aside where Tara took a moment to gauge whether she was going too far was very nice also - a good reminder that this super-hot vixen is still sweet, gentle Tara. As Willow noted, she's both at once, which just makes the vixeny aspect of her all the hotter.



Angst next... well, it had to come sooner or later. I like the balance you're striking - smut, love, story, friends, it's all there. I mean, this chapter could have stood more or less on its own, without the rest of the story, just as a smutfic - but I think it's a lot more engaging because of its setting.



Thanks, and more please :)

Chris Cook

Through the Looking-glass

A Willow and Tara for every world.

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Re: ummm

Postby WillowPowered » Fri Oct 08, 2004 2:50 pm

Holy cow that nearly made my head explode



Jill

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Re: ummm

Postby VixenyTarasHot » Sat Oct 09, 2004 10:33 am

Ah yes, I remember I read this before work.... NOT COOL! haha So obviously, I didn't have time to update, and then I forgot that I didn't reply, and yeah, so sorry bout the delayage of feedbacky goodness.. and I really need someone to stop me.. *takes breath*



Ok so uh, obviously really hot update.. pretty much melted me.. and work was erm.. frustrating.. to say the least.



But of course I can't wait for mooore!! Soonish maybe?



Ashleigh

"...A-and I'm gonna make it up to you. Starting right now."

(Starts to smile)"Right now?"

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