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Re: New Fic - Neverland

Postby tarawhipped » Tue Sep 21, 2004 5:27 pm

Freakin' wonderful update, Heather!



Even though there was no Willow/Tara interaction, you did such a great job of inching them closer together. With the bozos they're surrounded with, I'm not surprised that they're going to seek each other's company at the gallery.



I love the contrast between Buffy and Anya: Buffy trying to be the nice supportive friend, but totally clueless (tho she did score w/Willow's outfit); Anya the Queen of tactlessness, who offends everyone, but knows the score.



Poor Willow had every right to hide in her room all night from Mr. Grabbyhands, but she has to be there for Tara. And I don't care if she's going to hell, I LOVE manipulative, proactive Tara!



I could go on and on--but wait, I have! In conclusion, then, I just have to say bravo for the term "ass region.":lmao

:bow -Cameron



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

tarawhipped
 


Re: New Fic - Neverland

Postby ladydameon » Tue Sep 21, 2004 6:36 pm

This is good. Very good. I have been avoiding reading it for a while now - why? I usually don't like ubers but there is nothing else to read so I read it....I know I know. But the interactions, the relationships are extremely well done. A reader can almost see the pulling and tugging of the ropes of emotions. This is so like my life.



So, Buffy knows Tara is gay. Willow knows Tara is gay. I can't help but think that Buffy knows Tara has the hots for Willow....Things in that house have got to calm down after this gallery party thing. Somebody has got to break down and bite the bullet!



OH another thing I like about this story - they didn't have sex within the first couple of chapters - now don't get me wrong, I'm for it if the story can make it float .



Who's going to make the next move? I know Anya cleared up some things for Tara .

ladydameon

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Goddess of Violence

ladydameon
 


Re: New Fic - Neverland

Postby Willster » Tue Sep 21, 2004 7:37 pm

Such a nice update!!!



Tara isn't going to hell, she did the perfect thing!!!



She saved Willow form boring Kevin.. you couldn't have make him more boring even if you tried.. right? ;)



But now that Willow's dateless, Tara's gonna have to keep her company... please!!!!



Anya was so right.. and helpful, even if annoying as hell... just like we like her!!



Update soon, I am so addicted to this fic!!



Willster
 


Re: New Fic - Neverland

Postby jessan15 » Tue Sep 21, 2004 9:34 pm

I'm exhausted and can barely write this...but I have to try. I just found this pic tonight and have read it happily the entire way thru. I laughed, I knitted my brow....i cried....twice so far. Willow's departure...yep, i know what that feels like.



I LOVE that everyone loves but hates each other....well, apears to at least in their own minds. It's so perfect. And the complexity of the he said she said crap that they are all doing is simply amazing.



Oh the dream was just mean....the bracelet was just the perfect touch...loved them in the bathroom...and Tara couldn't be in hell if her head was on fire. Pawnung him off on Anya was a stroke of genius. I just loved how you incorporated Anya's best characteristics into this fic. Money and sex. hehe



So as I near totally exhaustion, I'm curious about a few things....does Dawn exist in your world? Any other familar faces be popping up anytime soon? And why wasn't Faith at the club?!?! LOL



oh yeah...and when's the next update cause I am beyond hooked. Absolutely delightful storyteller and a pleasure to read. Just get SOMEONE to talk to SOMEONE else and clear up all these confusions going around.

Love Will Find a Way

jessan15
 


Re: New Fic - Neverland

Postby shuyaku » Tue Sep 21, 2004 10:22 pm

Gosh, I just love this fic. This chapter was excellent. At first I really wanted to :rage Kevin. But at least he realized, although it took him long enough, that Willow was not into him. His touchy, feely-ness was making me kinda crazy. Let's just say, been there, done that!



As Chris (Artemis) has pointed out, Buffy just pretty much makes me :fit2 She is really going to need to do some major sucking up eventually. Her obliviousness - with Willow, with Xander and with Tara - is bordering on the absurd. I realize you need a fall guy (or gal in this case) and it is quite entertaining to watch Buffy continually put her foot in her mouth :D



And finally Anya. She is definitely a :fit2 one minute, :kiss the next. I mean you really do just have to love her - she's like family. Sure you may hate them sometimes. Okay, maybe even most of the time, but when push comes to shove, you just gotta love 'em. I love how Tara knows exactly which button to push. And love even more that she chastises herself with going to hell for doing it. But really, it just had to be done.



I may be repeating myself, but THIS FIC ROCKS!

-shuyaku

Oh God, Willow—you’re giving me the gift of Karen Carpenter. Just when I think I grasp the full extent of your love." - Tara

"Why do birds suddenly appear? It’s because, you are queer…" - Willow (Gods Served and Abandoned by AntigoneUnbound)

shuyaku
 


Re: New Fic - Neverland

Postby TromDeGrey » Wed Sep 22, 2004 6:15 am

Oh god! I love, love, LOVE conniving Tara!!! I swear I think this whole story is just making me giddy! :lol Your Anya is priceless!! I can't wait for the gallery opening!





Trom's Brain: Rubbing the World the Wrong Way

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Postby Sally McFine » Wed Sep 22, 2004 5:08 pm

As Idgie's obssessed fiancee who made her read this story aloud on my blackberry while we were on a road trip, just want to say that I love this story and am anxiously awaiting an update. Can't wait to see how the bracelet thing is resolved. Idgie and I have fun speculating together "How do you think that EasierSaid will resolve this point? I think blah blah blah. Or it could be blah blah blah."



One thing I have pondered is what the source of Willow's seeming initial discomfort with identifying as gay is. She had a bit of that on BtVS as well, going through her coming out process and hiding her relationship from Buffy/Xander/et al. at first, and my interpretation of that from the show is that it was just general coming out anxiety somewhat exacerbated by her perceived-by-me-as-distant-parents.



Wondering: is there something specific in her past that is going to come up as a plot or flashback point that is preventing her from being open and honest with herself, Tara, Buffy, etc. about her sexual orientation? Beyond just general societal disapproval and all. I guess I wonder about it because Buffy, as Willow's close friend, is really open minded, and I'm surprised Willow hasn't confided in her in the last four years.



Maybe this will all circle back to whatever it is that happened in Golden Gate Park three years ago?

Sally McFine
 


Brilliant!

Postby Tiggrscorpio » Wed Sep 22, 2004 6:46 pm

Hi EasierSaid! I just spent all day catching up on your wonderful fic, which is sort of a bad thing because I was at work while I was reading it. It's good to be the boss sometimes.



There are so many wonderful things to comment on about this story. The first and foremost is your amazing writing. Your descriptive style and thorough grasp of the characters has me feeling every gut wrenching, awkward and tension filled moment along with Willow and Tara. I absolutely love it!



I'm also enjoying that you have set your tale in SF, where I live. The familiar locations make me smile, like my being at Beauty Bar just two weekends ago. I must admit to some embarrassment at knowing exactly where Good Vibrations is on Polk Street. :blush



I like how you've weaved the canon characters together. The changes you've made to their relationships are great, yet I still feel familiar core elements with each of them. Willow is still a loveable spazz, Tara's both strong and vulnerable at the same time, and Anya (God, I love how you write her) is still all about sex and money!



You keep us guessing with some nice twists. Willow's dream was so hot and the whole misunderstood Xander sub-plot is great. Not to mention the torture of our girls taking one step toward each other, only to take two giant leaps backward. It's exquisite and I can't wait to read more. Thank you for sharing this!

Tiggrscorpio
 


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Postby EasierSaid » Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:58 am

ShyCanuck Thanks so much for reading and I'm glad you loved scheming Tara. Willow and Tara are starting to move toward each other, but 'soon' is a little optimistic. 'Eventually' works best, I think. Slow burn fic! :



frau rosenclay Aw, hope it didn't keep you up too late (it was a long one). Glad you're enjoying and hopefully you'll like the gallery bit as well.



snuggle79 Anya was definitely Willow's hero, even if she managed to seriously piss her off in the process! If 'our goal' is an extremely long wait till things are hunky dory... then yes, yes we are very close! ;) Thanks!



WillowPowered Thanks very much, and yeah, I'm eagerly anticipating them getting together as well!



YMKA Aw, thanks! ;) Willow and Tara, talking, in the type-written flesh, this update!



Grimlock72 Action is Buffy's reward; at least when it comes to Willow. I think she thinks Willow's moping, and that in order to get out of the funk she needs Buffy-help. Obviously, not what Willow needs, but Buffy doesn't know that. Poor gal. Anya is blunt to a fault, but Tara and her have a special relationship, hopefully I'll be able to get into that some. Thanks for reading!



WickedReds Now how was it I knew you'd like that line....? ;)



russ Thank you very much for the detailed feedback. The first few chapters were rough, and I hate to say it but it's gonna be a rough fic. : There are so many misunderstandings and misassumptions that need to be worked out; angst is definitely going to pepper this story. Hopefully, some of that angst will be tempered by the fact that as you point out the girls are taking baby steps toward each other, and we all know happy ending is guaranteed. Anya definitely helped Willow out, but as everything has a flip, she also probably hurt the W/T cause a bit by embarrassing Willow about her behavior around Tara and Tara discounting Anya's words, because Anya says everyone wants to sleep with her. Buffy is infuriating, but well meaning, and yes, getting out of the way is coming very very soon. Thanks very much for your compliments re: my writing and thanks to the people recommending this fic--amazed, and grateful, that you are.



JustSkipIt Thanks very much. Kevin... who hasn't had to talk to that guy at a party, at least once in their lifetime? Was definitely easy to write. As I kinda told russ above, the problem with Anya is that she's so 'sex, sex, sex' that it's hard to take her seriously. Her riff on Willow wanting Tara is really only going to affect Willow for the time-being, I think, as Tara's heard it all before. 'Who wants to sleep with me? okay' The only difference is that she wants this time for it to be true. Flip side, putting stock in Anya's assertion is almost like Tara getting her hopes up when it can never happen. She's picking up her clues from other places... you know? Anya = Cassandra in a way. And yes! Older and Far Away, that's the *exact* tone I was going for with the silk pants. :) Happy now. Thanks again!



veiled isis moon I've done the 'stare, bump and ow' before. It's humiliating, haha. *sigh* I'm glad it had you giggling, and thanks very much for reading.



Wired vixen Goddess! Aw shucks. *blush* Mmmm for jealous Tara, and glad you liked Anya taking the bait. ;) W/T smoochies... not for a while, I'm afraid. Willow's taking Xander's forget about the romance advice... so.... : But definitely more W/T talking, if that's any consolation! Thanks for reading!



wimpy0729 Glad you liked the 'p.s.'. I thought that was Willowy, holding on to the grudge. Gallery visit.... next!



Irishgrl3 Yay for LMAO at Anya! She's so easy to write. Just think of something horribly offensive and jot it down. :)



Artemis I think if you were to do a smiley face report card at the end, Buffy might end up with that face. She's really my plot device punching bag, poor dear. And yes! Blind-date claymore mine. She was pretty much a land mine throughout the whole thing; fluster Willow, fluster Tara... good times that girl. And yes, smitten W/T are very *dreamy sigh* Thanks Chris!



alysagoddess85 I couldn't have Anya not say something about 'Good Vibrations'... it's a marriage made in heaven, those two. Buffy, annoying. W/T talking... pretty much now (as in the update going to post below). Thanks!



littlecrazy80 So glad you loved Anya and yeah, Buffy is just not doing anyone favors here... (with the exception of bringing over the bracelet when asked, cause that was nice)



ange04 No, no--you don't suck. Just glad to have you, and glad that you luuuuurve the story! Tara did play Anya, which was a lot of fun to write. I loved their brief interactions on the show, so definitely wanted them to end up friends here. Bracelet thanks and show painting revealed in this next update. Thanks so much for your feedback, and for reading.



Leafsdude7 Haha, glad you're enjoying (and thanks to Jackie for the recommendation from me as well)! Xander definitely is Xander, and Anya... Anya reminds me more of the O'Jays 'For the Love of Money' (but hey, I'm old school like that). W/T... they are inching toward each other, but the next step is going to be a loooooooong step. Long. Many parts. Sorry! And yeah, Buffy... I'm going to need to send her a mini-muffin basket when this is over to say sorry for trashing her rep. She really does mean well, and she does think she's protecting Willow. If she had all the facts she'd be doing things differently, for sure. Thanks so much for reading!



Nicole023 I'm glad you're addicted, and that the frustration isn't too frustrating. It's a long haul, and hopefully it's not too long. Thanks!



tarawhipped Cameron! Folks who love thrillers from the 40s (or you know, just in general), zip on over and read tarawhipped's Secrets and Spies. Pop some corn, get some junior mints... good read. As for the feedback - muchas gracias! I'm glad you enjoyed, and yes, Buffy and Anya are definitely studies in contrast. So glad you LOVE manipulative, proactive Tara--I couldn't let her sulk, not when it was her night, her house, her girl! Also glad you liked 'ass region'--it is a term that needs to be used more often! Thanks!



ladydameon Thanks for taking a chance on me, haha. I know what you mean though about ubers, which is why I'm trying to maintain as much of the aspects of canon as possible; Willow being crushed by Xander sleeping with Faith, etc. It's kind of a canon homage, I guess. Buffy doesn't know that Tara has the hots for Willow... yet. But don't be surprised if girl figures it out on her own. And yeah, no sex early on. They don't know each other, you know? They're in love, but are practically strangers. Need to get to know each other better before the good stuff. :) Next move? Sort of kinda mutual move.



Willster I probably could have made Kevin more boring... no wait, no I couldn't have. :) Willow and Tara will definitely be talking soon, this next update in fact! Thanks for reading.



jessan15 Aw! Thank you, very very much. I'm glad you're enjoying things so far, and that the complexity is appreciated instead of confusing or trite! As for your questions; yes, Dawn does exist and is at college. They'll probably reference her, but she's probably not going to show. No Faith! She's almost canon Faith up to her coma in S3, as in, bad girl who was their friend but did mean stuff to them and is now not. They'll probably reference her, as well, but in a 'glad she's gone' way. Thanks again, and hopefully you'll enjoy what's to come.



shuyaku Kevin. Been there done that indeed! Buffy is annoying, but really how else could she act, you know? Sure, she could listen more, but it's not like Willow's actually telling her anything. She'll calm down once she starts to collect more info. Anya is like family, and that's exactly why I used her. I like the idea that Tara had this friend that Willow hated, that someone could cut through everything and tell the truth and no one would listen because they were so a) angry, b) annoyed, c) sick of hearing it. As you said, "it just had to be done." Thanks!



TromDeGrey R not H! :) Glad you loved, loved, loved conniving Tara, and that you're giddy. Hopefully you'll like the gallery opening as well. Thanks!!



Sally McFine Finey fine fine. Sorry, I had to say it. A couple that reads fic together... warms the heart, I remember those days very well. So crazy that there's speculation about something that I'm writing!! I should call you two if I get stuck: "so, how am I going to resolve this point?" I'm sure your theories are better than what I have planned!



As for Willow's discomfort with identifying as gay. You're definitely right, part of it is general coming out anxiety, and in this fic I've decided to make Willow and her mom close (well, 'er' than canon). Shelia's words definitely effect her profoundly. Also, Buffy is open minded now, but that doesn't mean she showed up on her first day of college, met Tara and was like 'you're gay? cool.' Any discomfort Buffy might have felt with Tara initially would have been confided in Willow, etc, etc. I hope to get into it in future updates. One reason why I keep warning that this might be a long haul is because I want to get into why Willow's being so reluctant, while also building her relationship with Tara. I'm totally greedy; I want to see them fall in love (I think that's what helped Willow come out on the show; she knew Tara loved her, had her support). Sure, they love each other now, but it's blurry room, Tony and Maria at the dance love. I want everyday, 'I love her when she does x, and even in spite of y', and I think that'll help with whatever overwhelming fears Willow has about coming out. Golden Gate Park is definitely going to get some attention--big turning point for both W&T, have to show it. Thanks so much, that was fun to actually type out!



Tiggerscorpio It is good to be the boss! You read fic at work, I write it at work! Haha. Thanks very much for your kind words, really really appreciate it. Yay for SF! Yeah, this is definitely a landmark heavy fic, you're bound to recognize more places if you know where both BB and GV are! Thanks re: the canon aspect; I'm trying to keep the core traits as much as possible. And as I've said before in replies, thank me for sharing? Thank YOU for reading! (That goes for all ya'll.)



Okay, let's update this sucker; gallery visit ho!

EasierSaid
 


Re: replies

Postby EasierSaid » Thu Sep 23, 2004 2:00 am

Title: Neverland
Author: EasierSaid a.k.a. Heather
Feedback: Bites lip and whispers "yes, please."
Spoilers: None.
Setting: AU. There is no Hellmouth, there is no slayer and no magic of the wicca variety. Just our girls and the rest of the Buffy characters living and loving in that great city by the bay, San Francisco.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Please don't sue me Mutant Enemy.
Notes: They're talking. FINALLY! Enjoy. :)

Thoughts in italics

PART 15

The ride to the gallery was uneventful, the driver taking a surprisingly direct route over the city's hilly streets. Buffy, Jim and Willow shared the cab with the married couple Willow had spotted Tara with earlier, and all laughed at how fortunate they were that they had snagged one of the larger vehicles. The group made small talk about how they knew Tara, the couple revealing they had been fans of the blonde's work for years. Willow couldn't help but grin giddily as they described their fondness for the blonde's work, and for Tara herself. Of course they love her, she's loveable... she thought, shimmying in her seat.

When they stepped into the gallery, Willow couldn't help but smile. The two-room, L-shaped space was packed with about 150 people, all milling around drinking glasses of champagne and absently conversing while taking in the art. The ceilings were high, the exposed wood beams complimenting the hardwood floor. Evenly installed along the walls and spotlighted by small track lights were fifteen large, swirling canvases. Willow immediately felt her eyes drawn to the work, and she couldn't believe how stunning the paintings looked in a professional setting. The space was dotted with large arrangements of branches decorated in white christmas lights and Willow couldn't help but notice Tara's influence on the space's smaller decorations.

"We're going to get drinks, want one?" Buffy asked as she started to make her way toward the makeshift bar in the back with Jim.

"Sure." Willow replied, still taking in the spectacle before her.

"Okay, be right back," Buffy said as she disappeared into the crowd. Willow moved her gaze along the wall, briefly taking in each of the paintings. They were different than the works she had seen before, the works that Tara had decorated her home with. These were... milder? Not as much paint layered onto the canvas. Still passionate, still vibrant but definitely a different style.... except for the last one. Tucked toward the back was a large canvas that stole Willow's breath. Heavy slabs of white and yellow paint, framed by a diffused purple glow. It's amazing... Willow thought. She started to move toward the work when a roar went up in the crowd; she turned in her place to see a surprised, and then blushing Tara standing just inside the doorway, her cab ride mates flanking her.

The blonde ducked her head, her hair falling forward, and Willow couldn't help but beam with pride as Tara looked up and smiled at the applauding crowd, her cheeks red. The blonde held up a hand, 'enough' and it was plain she hoped everyone would return to what they had been doing before she entered. "Speech!" Someone yelled enthusiastically from the back.

"Speech? I just w-walked through the door!" Tara replied good-naturedly. People laughed and then became quiet, waiting for the blonde to speak. "Um, I guess, just... thank you." She said sincerely, knowing that she wasn't going to be able to dodge the invitation to address the crowd. "Everyone here, for all of your support; especially Marissa Davis, who put this series together and asked me to be a part of it." Tara held her hand out and everyone turned to see Marissa standing hand in hand with her partner Michelle. The woman with Carole King hair smiled and nodded her head to Tara graciously; Tara nodded in return. The blonde took a big breath and continued. "I hope you've caught the other artists' work, if not there's a booklet, are there booklets?" She asked Marissa, who nodded, smiling. "There are booklets--" she laughed slightly, Willow melting upon hearing the sing-song noise, "in the back. So, um... enjoy!" She finished, laughing and everyone applauded again.

A few people surged forward to offer their congratulations to the blonde. Before the first one made it to her side, Tara's gaze swept the crowd, her eyes landing on a beaming, staring, Willow. Tara's smile went as wide as Willow's eyes; the redhead quickly looked away, embarrassed. She looked up at the blonde again in time to see Tara still smiling at her affectionately, before turning to accept the hand of a potential buyer. Wow. Willow thought, frozen.

"Here you go." Buffy said, nudging Willow's shoulder and offering a flute of champagne.

"What? Oh, thanks." Willow replied, taking the drink. She took a sip and then looked back over to Tara, who was now being ushered further into the gallery by a small cluster of well-dressed people. Willow turned to take in her long-time friend and her really tall date. "So... now what happens?" She asked Buffy.

"We look at the art."

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Tara loved Willow's red hair. Not only was it beautiful, and soft, I bet it's soft, but it allowed her to keep tabs on the girl's movement through the crowded room. Everytime the blonde yearned to see the redhead, which Tara was noticing was more and more as each minute passed, all she had to do was stand where the gallery's two rooms met and let her eyes wander until she spotted red.

She noticed that Willow was taking her time intently studying each of her paintings, starting with the one installed closest to the front door. Tara watched as the girl would stand before each painting, arch her neck back and stare, her gaze gently caressing each part of the canvas. It made Tara's heart beat faster, watching Willow's eyes carefully roam over her work, and she knew she wasn't giving the people talking to her, her full attention. How could she, when Willow was within her line of site. How could she, when Willow was looking at her work, her art, with such consideration and care. A full forty minutes after her arrival and completely embarrassing speech, Tara noticed that Willow was only five works in. The way she's looking at the paintings... Tara's smile broke wide across her face. It's like... she likes them. Tara's smile faded and she looked at Willow more seriously. It's like she likes them--

A male voice cleared behind her. "Ms. Maclay."

The blonde turned and saw a smiling middle-aged man in tan slacks and a blue blazer. She smiled warmly and held out her hand."Mr. Kahn, please, call me Tara." She said, taking his hand and letting him kiss her cheek. "How are you?"

"I'm well, I'm well." The man said, righting himself and releasing her hand. "But the real question is how are you? This is quite an impressive turn out." He said, his hand sweeping out to indicate the other people around them.

"It is, much more than I expected." Tara said gratefully, quickly looking around the room, her gaze momentarily sweeping over Willow's frame.

"There should be twice as many people here," Mr. Kahn complimented with authority. "You've once again managed to present an outstanding collection; I'm very impressed."

"Thank you." Tara said sincerely, placing her right hand on her stomach.

"I actually wanted to talk to you about one of these pieces..." the man distractedly trailed off, something catching his eye beyond Tara. Tara turned to see what the man was looking at, but of course her eyes found Willow instead and she smiled. She turned back to the man, who was also now smiling. "If you could excuse me for one quick moment Tara, I'll be right back."

Tara nodded confused, and watched as the man ducked around her and walked straight over to... Willow?

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"Willow Rosenberg." Willow's eyes went wide as she stared at the work in front of her. She knew that voice. She turned slowly and saw the smiling middle-aged man. "Willow-- What-- I didn't know you were an art fan," the man said with amazed amusement as he swept the slim woman up in his arms. Willow was smiling now, returning the warm embrace. She opened her mouth to reply but he stopped her, taking her arm. "Come here, there's someone I want you to meet."

Willow frowned and turned to follow him, noticing as they dodged clumps of mingling people that he was pulling her toward... Tara? Willow looked around for another destination but knew with each step that he was leading her to the blonde. No, no! Willow thought, panicked. Buffy said socializing was bad! Her eyes went wide and she tried to pull the man who was leading her to a stop but it was no use. He ended their journey a mere foot away from a very perplexed looking Tara. Mr. Kahn turned to smile at Willow.

"Tara Maclay, I'd like you to meet my niece, Willow Rosenberg." Tara's eyebrows shot up as she looked to Willow, who looked absolutely mortified, turning her gaze to the floor. "Well don't be rude Willow, shake the woman's hand," the man teasingly instructed.

Willow looked up tentatively and her eyes met Tara's. The surprise on both's face was evident to the other, and Willow hoped beyond hope that the blonde wasn't mad at her for interrupting her all-business evening. What if I'm making her nervous, Willow anxiously thought. I don't want her to be nervous, I want her to be relaxed, she should always be relaxed and Buffy said socializing was an anti-relaxer, and what if-- Her babble was cut short when Tara flashed her a teasing half-smile. Willow's eyes went wide as she took in the expression on the blonde's face; playful, her eyes twinkling with mischief and... amusement, mirth? I can't... she trailed off as she looked down and saw Tara's extended right hand.

Willow's tense lips inadvertently relaxed and broke into a slight smile when she saw the bracelet on Tara's wrist. Her own hand gravitated outward and the two connected, a gentle clasping of soft hands. Tara rotated her wrist a little, and the bracelet slid along her skin a bit, gleaming as it caught the light overhead. Willow's smile went wide, her chest swelling with pride.

That's my gift. She's showing off my gift. The redhead looked up and made eye-contact with the similarly beaming blonde. Willow briefly thought, okay, should let go now, but her hand had a mind of its own. The two girls stared at each other for a long moment, smiling, and Willow gently moved the pad of her pointer finger up and over the inside of Tara's wrist, eventually touching the edge of the bracelet. Tara adjusted their grasp slightly, lowering their clasped hands so that the bracelet fell forward, resting on the outside of Willow's finger, trapping the tip of her digit between the jewelry and Tara's soft flesh. Willow wasn't sure when she last took a breath, but she was certain she was on the verge of passing out.

"Okay, I said shake it not hold it." Mr. Kahn's voice interrupted, and Willow both dropped her hand and eyes immediately. Tara swallowed hard, watching the redhead close up on herself, and then looked over at the man in front of her.

"N-Niece?" Tara asked, curiously, hoping against hope she hadn't made Willow uncomfortable with their prolonged hand shake.

"Not really." Willow spoke, looking up at Tara and then over to the man standing next to her side. "I mean I call him my uncle, but not--"

"Ira Rosenberg is one of my best friends." Mr. Kahn interrupted. "Known him since we were teenagers, we went to college together; I watched this little girl grow up!" He put his arm around Willow's shoulders and squeezed. Willow smiled, slightly embarrassed and Tara smiled sympathetically in return.

"Actually though, you're not introducing us Roger," Willow said, as the man looked down at her in confusion. "Tara's my roommate." She nodded at the blonde, who nodded in return, smiling sheepishly.

Roger Kahn pulled his arm away from Willow and place his hand over his heart, mock gasping before chuckling. "Now why doesn't that surprise me. The most talented artist I know living with the most creative programmer I know; you two must feed off of each other."

Willow's eyes went wide and she quickly looked to the floor, while Tara blushed bright red. Naughty thoughts, naughty sweaty, naked Willow thoughts! "W-Willow um, actually just moved in a couple of months ago, so... no...'feeding'..." Tara said wincing, looking up at the man, noticing Willow's eyes glued to her shoes.

Mr. Kahn nodded, oblivious. "So how do you two know each other?"

"Buffy." Willow said, looking up over to Tara, who just nodded, grateful to have the redhead's attention. "Tara and Buffy were roommates in college."

"Ah, good times." Mr. Kahn said. "How is Buffy, still living in the city? Working at the magazine?"

"Yeah," Willow said, craning her neck as she scanned the crowd for the petite blonde. "She's here..."

"How about your boyfriend Xander, he here too?" The man lovingly nudged Willow and winked at Tara. Tara's mood shifted somber as she looked over to Willow for her response.

Willow sighed deeply, flashing a quick look at Tara before grinding out, "not my boyfriend..." Never going to *be* my boyfriend... she thought.

"Okay, okay..." He joked, holding his hands up. Willow rolled her eyes and Tara watched the interaction closely. Satisfied that he had embarrassed Willow as much as a faux niece needed to be, he turned his attention back to Tara. "Before I dragged your roommate over to introduce her to you, I believe I was about to ask you about one of the pieces you're showing tonight." Tara pulled her thoughts from Willow and looked at the man expectantly. "I'd like to buy 'Golden Fantastic'."

Tara smiled warmly, proud, while Willow's eyebrows shot to her forehead and she looked at her pseudo-uncle with surprise. "You're going to buy one?" Tara's smile faltered, and Willow caught the look out of the corner of her eye. She turned her attention to the blonde and said, "not that it's not great, I mean, it is, with the colors and the, I just," she turned back to her uncle, unable to take Tara's confused, hurt look. "I didn't know you were collecting art," she prompted, turning to indicate to Tara that she wasn't questioning the quality of the painting, but his buying art at all. Tara's brow furrowed and she looked to the man. "I thought you were, sport memorabilia man..." Willow further prompted.

"I am, what, a man can't have two passions?" Mr. Kahn said jocularly. "I already own one of Tara's pieces," he nodded at the blonde, who just smiled sheepishly as Willow looked to her, surprised. "'Somehow, Someway'. Bought it last year after meeting this delightful young lady at a showing at Curtis Sutter's house."

"You know Curtis Sutter?" Willow asked the blonde.

Tara nodded. "He's bought a few of my paintings." She could tell Willow was surprised, and asked, "do, you, know him...?"

Willow nodded. "He's my boss."

Tara's eyebrows crept up and Mr. Kahn nodded. "Mr. Sutter stole this little genius from the company she worked at in Boston. I like to think I helped, a bit." He again nudged Willow affectionately.

"Y-You work for SutterSoft?" Tara asked, a little confused. Mr. Kahn looked between the two girls.

"You live together and you don't know where she works?"

Tara was caught off guard by the question, and stammered, "w-we haven't spent a lot of t-time together since she's moved in." Or more accurately, she never talks about herself when we *do* spend time together... the blonde trailed off.

"I've been busy getting started with work," Willow lamely excused, her head ducked in embarrassment.

"And I've been preparing for the show..." Tara tacked on absently, helpfully. Willow flashed Tara an timid, grateful smile and the blonde nodded slightly.

"That's a shame." Mr. Kahn said. "Well hopefully when this is done," he said, indicating the room, "you girls will be able to spend more time together; two of the best young women I know."

Willow blushed at that and Tara looked over at the redhead optimistically. Maybe... I hope...

A soft hand touched Tara's shoulder. "Tara," Marissa said. "Mrs. Igasaki would like to talk to you, if you have a moment."

Tara turned back to Mr. Kahn. "Mr. Kahn has asked about 'Golden Fantastic'," she said to Marissa, who smiled and nodded.

"It is still available." Marissa replied.

"Excellent," the man answered. "Just show me what papers I need to sign, I have my checkbook ready." He said patting his jacket's breast pocket.

"Great, just follow me." Marissa said, starting to walk toward the back. Mr. Kahn leaned over and gave Willow a warm hug.

"Don't leave; and try and track down Buffy, I want to have you girls over for dinner."

"Okay." Willow smiled, nodding.

Mr. Kahn leaned over and gave Tara a kiss on the cheek, smiling. "*All* of you girls." Willow nervously smiled and Tara nodded. "Beautiful show." The blonde smiled in reply and watched as the man walked away. The two girls stood next to each other for a long moment, awkwardly silent.

Say something, dummy. Willow said, looking up and catching Tara's eye; the two blushed and looked down.

"I w-wanted to tell you--" Tara started to say before being cut off, another soft hand on her shoulder. Tara looked over to see a very well-dressed, older Japanese woman smiling at her. "Mrs. Igasaki," Tara said warmly, taking her hand in a brief shake, bowing slightly. "If you could just--" she looked over to excuse herself from Willow's company for a moment, but the redhead was already gone. The blonde frowned and looked around the room, finally spotting the redhead making her way to stand in front of painting number six. Tara smiled slightly at that, and turned back to Mrs. Igasaki. "I'm sorry; Marissa said you wanted to speak with me..."

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The painting was simply amazing. It occupied the final installation spot, and was located furthest from the front door. While lit as well as the other pieces, it seemed to be sort of hidden, tucked into a small nook toward the back that people seemed to be avoiding, and with crowds thinning as the night neared its end, the redhead was allowed to stand before it, alone. She stood about three feet from the work and let her eyes carefully inspect the painting. She had decided the purple paint had been applied to the canvas first, and then later, layers upon layer of white and yellow paint had been added. Probably with a palette knife... Willow inwardly smiled, pleased with her new art knowledge. The different shades of purple radiated out around the explosion of chunky white and yellow gestures, and occasionally Willow could pick out where some purple had snuck into the white and yellow space, as if shining through, between the thick, light colored paint. It's one of the most beautiful things I've ever seen... Willow thought, spellbound.

"Hey."

The redhead turned her head and saw Tara standing about three feet away. *The* most beautiful thing I've ever seen... The blonde was wearing her familiar half smile, and Willow couldn't help but smile in return. "Hey." The redhead responded softly.

"I'm sorry about before..." Tara said, taking a step closer. Her voice was gentle, her manner slightly hesitant. "Interruptions; one of the hazards of these sort of events."

"You don't have to apologize; you're working." Willow answered. Tara nodded slightly, and then looked back to the thinning crowd. They were a good ten feet from the people finishing up their drinks, and Tara was fairly confident they wouldn't be disturbed. Willow watched as Tara looked around, and wondered if the blonde was looking for someone in particular. She probably needs to get back to the schmoozing, but it was nice of her to come and say sorry, even though she didn't have--

"I love the bracelet." Tara blurted out, looking directly at the redhead. Willow's eyes went wide and Tara stammered, "I m-mean it's beautiful, everyone's been complimenting me on it all night; I think Marissa's even going to try and get the artist to show up here."

A warmth she hadn't felt before spread throughout Willow's chest, down her legs, down her arms and then up into her head. A mixture of pride, fondness, love--she squared her shoulders and stood taller, tingling. "I'm glad you like it," the redhead said quietly, her smile wide.

"Love." Tara corrected with a smile, before ducking her head bashfully. Willow's stomach fluttered, and she swallowed hard as she saw Tara's cheeks flush underneath the rogue strands of blonde hair covering her face. Tara looked back up and they looked at each other for a long moment. "I hope you don't--" Tara started and then stopped.

"What?" Willow asked, prompting the girl to continue.

"I hope... you don't think I'm being rude by asking... I just..." Willow waited patiently for the blonde's question. "Why?" Tara asked simply.

Willow wasn't expecting the question, although really, you should have; of course she wants to know why, wouldn't you want to know why, of course you'd want to know why. Her smile faltered and she racked her brain for an answer that wasn't 'I love you desperately'. "It reminded me of you," she shrugged, explaining simply. Course, everything reminds me of you; music, birds singing, sunshine-- "I thought you should have it."

"Oh." Tara said simply. Breathe, breathe... my heart's going to explode, okay, breathe... she patiently instructed herself. The two girls shared another long look, before Willow dropped her head, and then looked back up at the painting. Tara stared at her profile.

"I like this painting..." Willow said, gesturing to the work in front of her. "The sold sign is covering up the title card though; what's it called?"

She looked over at Tara innocently, and Tara couldn't help herself; I'm going to hell... she internally winced, as the teasing words escaped from her mouth. "'Just Paint'."

A mortified blush covered Willow's face and Tara couldn't help but chuckle warmly, moving closer to the redhead and squeezing her forearm. "I'm kidding," she said, ducking her head to make eye-contact with her roommate. Willow sighed, relieved, but gave Tara an odd look. "I'm sorry, I couldn't resist. And technically it is just paint." Tara quickly said, hoping to smooth away Willow's worry. "Well, and a little canvas," she joked and Willow's face broke into a wide grin, Tara's words echoing those of her best friend's several days earlier. Tara smiled widely in return, and again squeezed Willow's arm before dropping her hand.

"Ha ha." Willow said, her eyes sparkling. She looked back at the obscured title card. "Do you always hide the title after you sell a painting?"

Tara shook her head. "This one isn't really for sale--"

"It's the fifteenth..." Willow said, putting it together. Tara nodded and Willow's brow knit. "So it got here then? The missing painting, the one you were having shipped?"

Tara shook her head. "No. This one is from my personal collection at home. Hence the sneaky no-sale sold tag."

"I don't recognize it..." Willow said, digging through her memory, trying to place the work.

"Because it hangs in my studio." Tara said. "And you, never, come into my studio..." she trailed off with a self-conscious half-smile.

"Oh." Willow said, ducking her head. She looked back up at the painting, and then turned back to Tara. "So, why, is the title card covered up again...?"

Tara smiled warmly, loving how tenacious Willow's mind was. "I um, I don't tell people the titles to the paintings I paint for myself." She watched as Willow quietly processed the information before continuing. "They're, for me, you know? Just for me, have special meaning, the title is tied to that and, I don't know, seems like sharing that is sharing too much."

Willow nodded her head, and looked back to the painting, letting her eyes wander over the canvas again. Tara watched the girl, watched how her big, inquisitive green eyes took in each swirl, each color on the canvas. How the redhead's eyes seemed to hold a mixture of respect and affection for her work that she wasn't sure she had seen in anyone else that night. Or ever... she thought. She took a deep breath, and softly said, "It's called 'Fillmore'."

Willow snapped her head toward Tara, her brow furrowed in confusion. "But you just said..." The redhead stopped herself and went speechless, her mouth hanging open slightly as it hit her. What Tara had done. What Tara had shared. The blonde looked her in the eye, nervous, vulnerable. "Thank you." Willow spoke reverently.

"No problem." Tara replied, her voice a little thick. Her eyebrows arched in surprise when Willow suddenly frowned. "What?"

"'Fillmore'... the street?" The redhead looked back to the painting, trying to figure out the connection.

Tara chuckled and shook her head. "No, The Fillmore, the concert venue?" Willow shook her head, her eyes blankly indicating she didn't know the place. "You've never been to The Fillmore?" Tara asked, sympathetically.

"Nope."

"Oh..." Tara answered, trying to figure out how she could accurately explain the work. One side of her lips tugged into a frown, and Willow watched her. The redhead turned back to the painting and stared.

It doesn't look like a crowd of people... maybe... she looked back over to the blonde. Okay, here goes nothing... "Is this... what, sound, looks like to you or something...?"

Tara looked momentarily shocked before the throaty laugh escaped. She laughed hard and Willow looked down at her feet, her face going red. Immediately, she felt the blonde's hand cupping her left elbow, Tara's thumb tracing little circles on the fleshy part of her arm above the joint through her shirt. Willow hazarded a look over at Tara and saw... her eyes sparkling... I've never... I've never seen eyes sparkle like that. Willow was mesmerized as the blonde's laughs wound down, the esteem for the redhead plain on her face.

"No, but please, may I use that the next time an art critic asks me about a work?" The smile on her face was so genuine, so kind, that Willow knew the girl hadn't been laughing at her, that the blonde wasn't making fun of her for her question.

"Sure." Willow finally said, amazed that she was able to get any words out. Tara's half smile returned, and she dropped her hand from Willow's elbow with a light squeeze. Willow missed it's presence immediately.

"It's..." Tara looked at the piece before looking to Willow. "There are crystal chandeliers at The Fillmore, they hang over the main floor, five on each side. Before and after the different bands play, the chandeliers are on, so they're kind of, white, with yellow." She indicated the center part of the painting. "But, they're next to these theater lights, and the gel, or whatever you call the thing that changes the light's color, is purple..." She indicated the area along the edge of the work. "They're majestic." Willow smiled and Tara continued, heartened by the redhead's attention. "I can never see the bands when I go to the shows, I'm too short--"

'Wishes was 2 inches taller...' Willow thought fondly.

"And I somehow always end up behind the tallest person at the show." She smiled. "So most of the time I find myself staring at the chandeliers. Just kinda, get lost in them, listening to the music..." The girls shared a long, warm look and Tara sadly shook her head slightly. "You've never been?"

"Never." Willow responded.

Tara took a deep breath, before exhaling with a smile. "That needs to change."

Willow's heart raced, and she quickly looked to the ground and back up, the blonde smiling at her. Out of the corner of Willow's eye she saw Marissa approaching. Tara followed Willow's gaze and turned slightly.

"Hey, sorry to interrupt," Marissa said as she stood next to Tara, her hand resting on the blonde's back. "I have a fellow who wants to know more about 'Speak Low' and a woman who would like to speak to you about commissioning a work."

"Okay." Tara nodded, knowing that as much as she wanted to beg out of it, ask to speak to the two potential buyers another time so she could extend hertime with Willow, she needed to go. She turned her attention to Willow. "We'll talk more later?" She asked hopefully.

"Yes." Willow nodded, smiling. Tara gave her a huge smile and turned, walking away with Marissa. Willow turned back to the painting and let her eyes get lost in the little nuances. She felt a hand on her shoulder and turned, seeing Tara again. Willow was about to ask if she had forgotten something, when Tara reached forward and took one of her hands. Willow froze as the blonde squeezed her hand.

"Thank you for the bracelet." Tara said sincerely. She squeezed Willow's hand again, and then turned, heading down to where Marissa was patiently waiting with a gray haired gentleman. Willow wasn't sure if she was going to cry, sing with joy or faint; she opted to just glow, as she turned back to the painting.

*************************

Fifty minutes later, Tara entered the Living Room Lounge. The amber colored room was lit with small, ambient lights, and house music poured out of the sound system. She wandered through the crowd until she saw Buffy sitting on one of the couches. As she closed in on the petite blonde, the girl spotted her and cheered. Tara smiled widely and curtsied before taking a seat beside her friend. Her eyes quickly looked around. "Where's Willow?"

"She went home." Buffy replied, handing over a drink. "Bellini," she defined, before getting back to the redhead. "She said she had to work tomorrow, something about a good night's rest--"

"School night." Tara said, smiling widely.

"Exactly." A tipsy Buffy replied. She reached over and clinked her glass to Tara's and the two took sips. "So how do you think the show went and hey! That's not my tennis bracelet!" Tara looked a little surprised by the sudden topic change, and had to put her drink down quickly so as not to spill when Buffy grabbed her hand and inspected her bracelet. "You wore *this* instead of a sapphire tennis bracelet?" The petite blonde accusingly asked. "Tara, it's funky."

"It's beautiful." Tara retorted.

"Where'd you get it?" Buffy asked.

Tara took a deep breath. "Willow gave it to me."

"Cool." Buffy said, picking up her drink.

"She bought it for me at Annabelle's this weekend." Tara clarified. Buffy's brow furrowed and she stared at Tara.

"Why?" Buffy asked. "I mean, super nice, but...?"

Tara shrugged, smiling warmly. "She said it reminded her of me and that I had to have it."

"Huh." Buffy said, her wheels obviously turning. She saw that Tara was still watching her, so she said, "you need to keep your friend Anya on a leash."

Tara laughed at that, pleased that Buffy hadn't grilled her about the bracelet, that the petite blonde didn't deem it 'big deal' material. Definitely need time to figure out Willow without Buffy's 'help'. The blonde put on her best straight face and asked, "why, what'd she do?"

"She stole Willow's date, and really pissed her off." Tara's face faltered a bit at that, guilt creeping in. "You should have seen Willow's face, I've never seen her so mad. Bright red, red like her hair red." Buffy shook her head and took a sip of her drink.

Tara looked down at her hands. Willow was upset that her date left with someone else... she liked him? Of course she liked him, she was smiling, she--

"I mean, Willow was like, good riddance Kevin--"

"What?" Tara interrupted, trying to get Buffy to focus for a moment.

"Kevin. Willow's date. He kept putting his hand on her ass region, which, she didn't like so much."

Tara fumed. 'Kevin' was touching Willow's 'ass region'? Suddenly the 'punishment' of sending him off with Anya didn't seem to be enough. Her brow furrowed as she replayed the conversation so far. "Wait, you said Anya pissed Willow off, but it sounds like Willow was relieved--"

"No, the pissed off was earlier in the evening. I was getting my first drink, I look over and Willow's standing in conversation with Anya, shaking. Looked like she was going to fisibly-- fisbly--" Buffy sighed in frustration. "Phy-sick-all-y assault her." Tara frowned. "And you know Anya. Cool as a cucumenber. Cucumbbe-" Buffy frowned in confusion. "Cucumberbund?"

"Cucumber." Tara supplied.

"That's why I love you in a very non-gay way." Buffy said. She smiled as she saw Jim crossing the floor toward them. "He's cute. Don't you think he's cute?" She gushed, leaning into the blonde.

"Very cute." Tara replied. Jim sat down next to them and Buffy gave him a big kiss. Tara looked to her watch and then stood.

"Hey hey!" Buffy protested, pointing to the now-empty chair.

"It's been a long day..." Tara apologized. "I think I really need some sleep." Buffy pouted and Tara chuckled. "You have more important things to do." She arched an eyebrow and Buffy smiled. The petite blonde held out her hands and Tara leaned over, hugging her tightly.

"You were wonderful tonight." Buffy said softly into Tara's ear. Tara nodded in thanks and kissed Buffy's cheek. The girls broke apart with a warm look and Tara zig-zagged through the crowd toward the exit.

I wonder if Willow's still awake... she thought, the night air closing around her as she tried to hail a cab.

Edited by: EasierSaid at: 9/23/04 2:06 am
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Re: replies

Postby Grimlock72 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 4:39 am

Will wonders never cease ?? For once one of the people in this story corrects someone's mis-interpretation of events :) Good thing Buffy said "I mean, Willow was like, good riddance Kevin--" as Tara had already concluded that Willow would rather marry Kevin... boy is she quick with thinking herself into depression-land :)



I had a feeling the painting Willow was attracted to was indeed the not-for-sale one. I do wonder about the difference in style, I can imagine not wanting to sell some work you really like... but why the different style for works-intended-for-sale ?



Ah well, at least it set Willow up for a date at the Fillmoor... heh. Also liked this line: "Willow wasn't sure if she was going to cry, sing with joy or faint; she opted to just glow" -- lots of fun to be had indeed.



Fun to see it's such a small world after all with Willow and Tara having both knowing the same people. It's interesting that said people do indeed know more about Willow than Tara does at the moment. No doubt that will be corrected sometime soonish :)



Willow going all panicky over socializing which Tara might not want... heh. Tara is woman enough to tell Willow if she doesn't have time right then for her, not to worry. Besides, Tara has done gallery shows before.. it's not like this one will crush her :lol



Good update, not even tHAT much angst either :)



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Re: replies

Postby Artemis » Thu Sep 23, 2004 6:00 am

Okay, the smiley report-card:



:willow and :tara seeing each other across the crowded room was :heart , then actually talking was :banana - and Mr Khan 'introducing' the two of them, that was :lol



:tara (it's okay to clone Willow and Tara smileys, the more the merrier) showing off :willow 's bracelet was :flirt , especially as nothing went horribly wrong to make the two of them end up thinking the other was :no with regard to :kiss2



And I :love throughout their time at the gallery how :willow was :shock at :tara 's paintings, especially encouraging in that :tara got the impression that :willow was :thud , rather than just :wtf - and then their conversation about 'Fillmore': :applause . Great to see :willow really trying to put into words her :bow for the painting, especially seeing as :tara seemed very :blush at her attempt to define what she was seeing (even if it was inaccurate and made her :lmao - I'm grateful also that :willow didn't get all :paranoid and assume that :tara was :laugh because she was :rolleyes at :willow 's comment).



A minor :punish to Buffy for her minor mess-up in relaying to :tara the details of :willow 's time with Kevin, but :D for her clarifying quickly, and :clap to :tara for not getting :confused and instead :hmm about :willow without just :eek first thing.



And lastly, I hope :willow isn't already :sleep when :tara gets home, and they can have a little private time to talk properly, and both go to bed thinking :luv2 thoughts.



Oh, and :tara 's not going to hell, because all the :devil s would get :angry at her being so hot they look positively :brr by comparison. We all know darn well :tara 's an :angel - with just enough :fallen to make :willow :drool



Well that's it for now, in conclusion this story is :flower and I'll be :bounce to see the next chapter. And I promise then I'll use real words. :bigwave



Edited to say: I really hope I didn't scare off any smiley-phobic readers.

Chris Cook

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A Willow and Tara for every world.

Edited by: Artemis at: 9/23/04 5:03 am
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Re: replies

Postby Wired vixen » Thu Sep 23, 2004 6:20 am





Now THAT was my favourite update by far! Everything was so sweet, kept my heart beating real fast, all those glances and smiles.....*sigh*

I can see now that its best not to get on with the smoochies yet, i mean, this is cute stuff, and that would be rushing- *note to self, calm down!*



I love how Tara's mind works in this fic, and Willow's babble-fests, this really is a great fic! can't stop saying it!



So this has probably been mentioned somewhere, but how old are they all in this fic?



Thanks for the fantazmagorical update! ;)



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Re: replies

Postby snuggle79 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 6:33 am

I love this fic, and i truly adore this update! They took one big step towards each other. Big hooray on both girls for being so brave finally. :D

I hope Willow's still awake, when Tara gets home. hee :D :eyebrow

Awesome update!



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Re: replies

Postby YMKA » Thu Sep 23, 2004 6:39 am

Man....(actually woman...) you created a monster....I woke up and thought "Please...let there be an update for "Neverland"....pretty please?"....and what did I see as soon as I opened up my browser? An Update!!! [Imagine Macaulay Culkin in "Home Alone" saying "YES!!" ;) ].... That was me... You are evil woman!!!! with frequent updates;) .....OT here... sorry :blush



I Loved update.....how they began to discover things about each other, litte by little...Tara teasing Willow with "Just Paint"... that was great :lol :lol . And telling Willow the title of the paint....*sighs.... Oh....their handshake!!!!! The description was amazing...all the details...and it's like very first time... it's the beginning...the handshake!!! I thought it was brilliant start for a friendship, for showing that they are going to be closer....sorry if it doesn't make any sense.....it does to me...lol.



Quote:
you two must feed off of each other."




:lmao :lmao ....not yet....:lmao :lmao



And I'm sorry if ididn't make any sense....it's 8:30am.. I'm not morning person...I just really loved the update and how it lead them to talk and discover more things about each other... Great Job!!!



Thanks!!!

:peace :heart

M.



P.S Okay....I'm editing it again.... :shock ...2 times in a row... :shock .... But I was just :rofl :rofl at Chris' feedback... The only way do discribe it "DUDE, THAT WAS AWESOME!!!" Sorry I just had to say that....:D

Edited by: YMKA at: 9/23/04 5:45 am
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They finally talked

Postby wimpy0729 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 7:24 am

That was wonderful.



I loved their introduction by Willow's uncle. That was so well done. Sometimes it just takes something ironic like that to get the ball rolling.



I also loved how Willow discovered the bracelet. That was excellent, and she felt so overwhelmed by Tara's response of "love" it. I think I actually got goosebumps.



Interesting too about Willow's response to Tara's private painting, and now Tara shared something private with her, so Yay for that. Now perhaps they can really start to learn more about each other, aside from the fact that they're both totally smitten with each other.



More soon please!



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Re: They finally talked

Postby BARE1975 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 8:12 am

Hey!



One of the things that I like most of your fic is that, even when you see other person doing this it gets you on your nerves, my behavour with someone I like is exactly the same as Willow; as soon as I see that person I run to the opposite side of the room and I don't say a word even if my life depended on it, so usually that person thinks that I hate her or something...



the fact is that if I don't do that, I make a fool of myself with the Oh-I-love-you-please-be-my-sweetheart eyes. And from what I see with the bracelet thingy this is what is going to happen next, so please, keep on writing the story of my life, but with a happy end for a change :wink

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Re: replies

Postby Irishgrl3 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 8:27 am

That was so incredibly sweet! :D



And we got a some W&T communication as promised, yippee. Their interaction at the "no-sale sold" painting was fantastic. Tara teasing Willow about the "Just Paint" and her sharing the title of the painting, very intimate. Drunk Buffy was pretty funny but she almost blew it with the Kevin comment, but she recovered well.



Wonderful update!

:applause :applause :applause :applause :applause :applause

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A Wonderful Distraction

Postby TromDeGrey » Thu Sep 23, 2004 9:11 am

OK, so I buzzed into my office early this morning hoping for an update and was not disappointed. What a wonderful chapter! But what a distraction! LOL!! My client came in about 20 minutes after I'd finished reading and I was trying to concentrate. I kept reciting muscle names as I did the massage, "Tibialis anterior, fibularis longus, fibularis brevis, his longitudinal arch is starting to fall again..." but this image kept popping into my head. Willow and Tara shaking hands and Tara trapping Willow's finger between her wrist and the bracelet. It's such a gorgeous, rich image! All of the little touches and looks between them... So small yet so significant. I was really glad when my client started snoring because I'm quite certain that was the worst massage I've ever given in my life! :lol After he left, I sat down and actually read it again - something I rarely do. It's just... lush, is the best word I can come up with. The whole chapter was just so wonderfully humid with anticipation. I find myself thinking that if you were to throw in the towel right now, just throw your hands in the air and say, "No more!", I would be disappointed, but not heartbroken. They have an air of inevitability about them now. The first steps, however tentitive have been taken. Of course, I want to see the rest of their story! But you've opened the door for them so beautifully... Wow. Just, wow.





edited to add: I was taken by the difference in Tara's work - the public vs. the private. It's so very, very Tara. Beautifully told!









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Re: A Wonderful Distraction

Postby WickedReds » Thu Sep 23, 2004 10:06 am

Hey look they're making some tracks here... yay!!! this was a really sweet update... i love how willow was taking her time and looking at each painting... and the conversation... near the end with the whole i love the bracelet... i was jumping for puppys... hopefully there will be less misconceptions...



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my banana dances for smut :banana

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Re: New Fic - Neverland

Postby Confusedgal03 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 11:06 am

WOW! 2 new updates sooo soon! Hehe I'm loving it :applause

I absolutely love Anya in this story... HILARIOUS! Plus she took care of "Mr. Grabby Hands" :p



Yay! we finally got some :willow + :tara alone time... it's great to see them all shy and nervous around each other...*sigh*... young love... :luv



Wonderful updates! :bow

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NeVerLand

Postby LizPuRR » Thu Sep 23, 2004 11:11 am

great update....

2 words....Ayna Rules!!! lol

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Re: A Wonderful Distraction

Postby alysagoddess85 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 11:22 am

that was an excellent update...im so happy...it made me all glow-y and warm inside...i love how willow was using her new art knowledge and really showing an interest in taras work...and then how tara noticed her noticing her work...and then the little scene where they shook hands after their 'introduction' and tara trapped willows finger with the bracelet....that was really a sweet touch. just one of those little things i guess that makes this story as good as it is. cant wait until tara gets home though...maybe they can continue their talk because it really seems like theyre finally connecting and willing to let each other in a little more.



~mel:kdevil

'The Cat in the Hat' is fine, just not during sex.--Alyson Hannigan

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Re: Neverland

Postby WillowTara Addict » Thu Sep 23, 2004 11:48 am

Wow...I have been reading this fic since the moment the title, "NeverLand" appeared and never left a feedback. Now that I am feeling somewhat gulity. I must say, you have described San Francisco so well!:banana I live only an hour away from SF and I loved going there all the time because I always strive for its vibrant and energizing atmosphere.:eatme I must say, the piece on Anya and Willow was so hilarious that I was :lmao :lmao :lmao for few minutes. Good vibrations! Goddess, I never thought I would see something like that in this wonderful fic after I went there before. You are even accurate, it was actually two blocks away from Polk Street. Now the interaction between Tara and Willow was so sweet and very realistic! Sometimes I would think it was based on personal experience but it doesn't matter because it's INCREDIBLE story! I can't wait for the climax that would leave us pawing over each other to see what happens next. Keep the fantastic job! Love you already! :applause

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Re: Neverland

Postby littlecrazy80 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:58 pm

Just a short reply. WOW :D



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Re: replies

Postby justin » Thu Sep 23, 2004 2:25 pm

The last couple of updates have been great.



I was :lmao at Annya's comments at the party. It seems she thinks that everyone wants to sleep with Tara, though she'd probably right there. So despite that, will her comments at least make Tara consider the idea that Willow's interested in her?



I liked Tara being sneaky and using Anya to get Kevin away from Willow.



The art show was great. It was good that Willow and Tara had some time to talk. Though Buffy did almost ruin all that good work. It's a good thing she corrected her mistake.



I agree with Tara that she needs to figure out Willow without Buffy's "help". It's hard to really get to know someone from someone else's opinions, especially when that person is as clueless as Buffy.



Though this sentence did jump out at me.



Quote:
Buffy said, her wheels obviously turning.




Buffy was obviously thinking about something but what? was it, "wow, buying jewelry for Tara, I wonder if Willow's got the hots for her." or was it, "How come Tara got this nice bracelet and all I got was some crummy earrings?" or was it, "I shouldn't have had that last drink. If the room doesn't stop spinning I'm totally going to :puke ." ?



Looking forward to :read more

Heat is work and work's a curse - Flanders & Swan

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Re: Neverland

Postby pipsberg » Thu Sep 23, 2004 2:58 pm

Oh wow! That was an amazing update. Please, please, please give us more soon. I am hanging on your every word!



:peace



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Re: Neverland

Postby Nicole023 » Thu Sep 23, 2004 3:39 pm

Oh WOW..



*sigh*



That was just amazing ! So beautiful..



Thank you.. for all off these updates

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Re: Neverland

Postby WillowPowered » Thu Sep 23, 2004 5:21 pm

Ohh we have some progress. Progress is good.



Jill

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Re: replies

Postby tarawhipped » Thu Sep 23, 2004 5:42 pm

Awww, Heather, this was awesome! Having Willow's 'uncle' point out their obvious need to talk to each other (reiterating Xander's advice) was great. Now that it's out in the open, they have to act on it, don't they? Seriously, don't they?? The moment where they made meaningful eye contact after Tara arrived was beautiful. Wow, indeed! Please don't let Willow be asleep when Tara gets home!



I really love the way you describe Tara's paintings, too. I'm a 'miniscule knowledge woman' on the subject myself, but I was lucky enough to see a Van Gogh exhibit a couple of years ago (one benefit of living in Chicago), and it blew me away how the paint just jumped off the canvas. It finally made me understand what the fuss was all about, and your description reminded me of that.



Finally, thanks for the endorsement on my fic--that was very sweet:blush . *hands Heather a big bag of Reese's pieces*

:peace -Cameron



What should I be but just what I am? - Edna St.Vincent Millay

Edited by: tarawhipped at: 9/23/04 5:08 pm
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