Continuing Fic: Coming Back (Updated 01/18/08)

[ringwaldoeuvre]

Good to see an update on this great story, Carleen. The careful way you have revealed the details of the story is very impressive. The dynamic between W/T felt appropriate for where their relationship is, and the interation with Buffy also felt very natural. Very much looking forward to more. Well done.

~Mary

[AntigoneUnbound]

Hey Car--When the muse returns, she returns with a bang, doesn't she?

And speaking of bang--looks like our girls will be doing that shortly.

You know, of all the moments of intimacy--and I certainly loved seeing our girls get their flirt on--I think it was Buffy's semi-aside to to Tara while Willow was cleaning the table that really got my attention. It was a wonderful example of allusion, intimation, without full disclosure. Yet it didn't go on so long that the reader felt jerked around, you know? What I mean is, if it had gone on for paragraphs, at some point it would have been ridiculous for them not to make some explicit reference to what happened. So the brevity of the exchange lent to its effectiveness.

The issue of flirtation is always a funny one for me. In these situations, it really does communicate a lot about the power dynamics: who flirts; who is flirted with; who watches. So while this was played largely for laughs (and showed us some of Tara's humor), it also established at a more explicit level who is with whom. It's sort of like coming out with regard to relationship status.

I really enjoy your Buffy. As I've said elsewhere, I ilke her more as a supporting character. Here she's loyal and smart (Will...Shakespear: loved it!) and funny.

And may I finally just say: nice opening paragraph!! Heh...

I'm so glad you're back with this, Car. And let me add my voices to the veritable din which cries out: What the heck happened?

Lovin' it!
Mary

[watty]

This was a grand return to great things, Car. You haven't lost your touch, there are so many fine and memorable moments in this update. The fact that it takes place immediately after chapter 11 and I didn't feel like I missed anything or needed to be reminded, that's excellent writing.

I don't know how to articulate this well, but I realize the reason this story feels so good to read (aside from the off the scale flufficute factor) is timing. You take care not drag a scene out too long, while at the same time giving it enough time to develop. You're very careful in choosing your words and incorporating the small details, yet it all seems so effortless. You have an instinctive feel to the characters and what you want from them. That's an art.

Talking about good things in small sizes I love how you bury them in the story for us to find. Buffy isn't a buffoon, she knows her literature and geometry and knows how to joke about it; Willow thinking "my Tara"; Happy Meal MacWillow; Dopey Maclay; Willow's hand subconsciously caressing Tara's knee; the flirting with Rachel, Joyce dating Giles! ... all the little additions to the narrative and dialogue that makes the story so much richer, like it's come alive.

The seamless W/T reconnection / interaction continue. It really does seem that they hadn't been away from each other for so long.

“Don’t be sorry for something we both want, Willow.”

This and the "I know you" from chapter 11 must rate as two of the most romantic phrases I've ever read. It's not the words themselves, it's the setting, and the timing of the delivery. It's perfect. *swoon*

This is the first time Buffy and Tara have met in person? Niiice interaction. Niiice that they are able to open up to each other so quickly.

if you aren’t going to be around to lose count of them, let her know now so I have fewer pieces to pick up and glue back together, okay?

Buffy's protectiveness over Willow is so cute, and mature. Tara's promise to Buffy is serious too. I'm glad to see that underneath the joking around, they mean what they say and feelings aren't tossed around frivolously. These are good people you've developed in this story, they are not perfect but at the same time they don't have the self-centered, self-righteousness we saw in later seasons.

What else? The kiss of course. Unexpected but very sweet. The constant need to be near each other, to touch, to feel more. How their hands are always searching for each other's arms, knees, thighs, backs and "respectable body parts to touch in public." How loudly they shout "we're in love" to everyone who they come into contact with. The promise of more good things to come. I mean, they'll be in the same house. Surely we're in for more sparks flying now.
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[Emms]

Hi there Car, alas this is not my official feedback...(that will come tomorrow between the hours of 11:30 and 2:00 ) hehehe. I just wanted to let you know that I think your update is SUPER-de-DUPER!

Okay...that's it for now

xoxo
Emms

[Artemis]

Yay, she's back!

Things I love (in no particular order):

Deb's Diner: and the staff (where have I heard of them before?) Great description, it felt like a really lively, welcoming kind of place, busy, but never so busy that the gracious hosts don't find a moment to make everyone feel welcome and flirted-with. Speaking of that, I liked how the flirting got to Willow, and Tara had to go into damage control a bit - it's very true to Willow's slightly anxiety-ridden take-everything-seriously nature, and also to the fact that, while they do know each other so well, there's this whole sphere of experience that they have no experience with. They're just starting to explore how they work as a couple - not exchanging letters and emails, but right in the same room, with other people. It's as if all their knowing each other was done in seclusion, with only a select few (such as Buffy) in on it.

Willow: arranging the table, dusting Tara's seat, getting all cute li'l alpha Willow during the flirting, fuming at Buffy, joking with Buffy, being with Tara. It's all so Willowy

Tara: in some ways, she's Tara-plus, the evolved version - she's more comfortable with herself, especially evident in how she talks with relative strangers (Rachel) and Buffy. She's not just 'Willow's girl', even though she is completely Willow's girl, if you get what I mean.

Buffy: two words come to mind regarding your Buffy - deep and intelligent, and if canon Buffy had been those more often, I'd probably have liked her a whole lot more. She's still Buffy, the same character, but again, she's evolved. I love how her typical canon verbal goofs still come up, but as a deliberate joke for her now - best of both worlds, we get the funny Buffyisms without having to accept a room-temperature-IQ Buffy to go with them.

And following on from deep-and-meaningful Buffy, I'm really curious about The Fight (duh), and now especially how it relates to Buffy - did she (indirectly) have anything to do with it, how exactly is she seeing things in the aftermath of it... what's up? It's obvious her feelings for both Willow and Tara go very deep, and not just in a one-dimensional want-friends-to-be-happy way - e.g. her warning to Tara not to mess up Willow's heart. She's not just a convenient friend and source of non sequiturs and interruptions, she's linked at the heart, and shares pain as well as good times - the fight hurt her too.

So, in conclusion:

[JustSkipIt]

Car – Ok working through the update in order:

Feedback: Pretty please? Just remember, I leave feedback for you! Okay, maybe not for every update....but I try! And...and...I leave novellas. Okay okay....I'll be happy with a smilie face.

There are people getting feedback from you? And novellas?

Buffy forgot? Ok, I have not a lot of love for Buffy, particularly the Buffy we frequently see in W/T ff but she forgot? That’s very hard to imagine. I mean I guess she was very excited about Tony and the day and everything but wasn’t it just this morning that she was telling Xander all about W/T?

I really love this

“Willow.” Tara interrupted Willow’s building babble and lifted her head to gaze into green eyes. She pulled Willow closer, enveloping her in a comforting embrace. “Don’t be sorry for something we both want, Willow.” She felt Willow tremble in her arms.

Because I think it means so much. I mean we, the readers, have been right along with the girls in not knowing if they’re out, in, or whatever. But that’s just so gloriously clear: Willow wants Tara (which we knew), Tara wants Willow (which we didn’t), and both know it now. That’s just darling.

Willow rolled her eyes at her two friends and threw her hands in the air in mock exasperation. “Oh great! Buffy has an accomplice now. I’ll never get a break.” The smile on her face made the teasing nature of her statement clear. She then started walking toward the deli. “C’mon you two…let’s get going.”

I think that’s such a fun part of relationships. I mean you want your friends to like the new (or not so new) woman in your life but you also don’t want to get ganged up on.

Willow’s activities over the table are adorable.

Tara listened to Buffy and carefully read between the lines. “Buffy,” she spoke slowly, maintaining eye contact with the concerned hazel eyes, “there is more to what happened last year than you ever mentioned in your emails. I’m right, aren’t I?”

Well shit. You could be more cryptic!

The redhead often refused dates – from men and women – and the few times she did make the concession, it was usually because Buffy begged.

Well that pretty much rules out the jealousy factor as well as that other suggestion I made in chat.

Lol about Rachel flirting up Tara. Honestly, I think she’d be more likely to take on Willow but why not? Very amused that Joyce is now dating Giles in NY. Quite cute. Wonderful that they’ll be getting to spend the rest of the day together.

Great update and now about a shorter wait for the next one?

[Emms]

Okay so now on with the feedback!

Carleen, I'm sorry it took me so long to leave you a response on this update. It really was very naughty of me to keep you waiting

Yay! An update!! Woooo Hooo! (now that that's out of my system) I have to say that your brief break from writing definitely hasn't left you missing any beats.

At first I was all irritated with Buffy for not getting back in her car and driving away (very quickly) once she realized that Willow and Tara were together and that it was their special day....but then she made with the self-flogging and I ended up feeling bad for her. so I was all glad when they invited her to go to lunch with them.

Tara and Buffy had a very touching moment together when Willow was off and away being obsessive about the table. I thought Buffy was so sweet to ask Tara not to hurt Willow....and the bit about Tara having a "dopey" grin plastered across her face was hilarious! it's nice to see that Willow is having the same effect on Tara that Tara's having on her.

Hmmmm Deb and Rachel? sounds oddly familiar (which brings me to my next point) Why don't I ever get to be in a story?! (mock indignation) I could be quirky! I could be witty...I could be foul of mouth!

I really liked how Tara ended the flirting with Rachel when she noticed that it was going a little too far (even if the two of them were just joking) she could see it was upsetting Willow....and it was so sweet how she moved Willow's hair out of her face and got all sort-of-serious....

Car...you write these two so well....I can't wait for the next update!

xoxo
Emms

[singgirl]

Wow, I couldn't believe that there was an update when I checked in! That makes me very, very happy. I really missed this fic, it's one of the best on the board, not only because the setting is different, but because the writting is enrapturing. You have great "timing" for phrases and a great eye for word usage. Your method for telling the story is neither jumpy, nor monochromatic, metaphoriclly speaking, of course. it's not like you change font color. In short, thank you. Please, don't keep us waiting as long in the future, it's cruel, like giving somebody a down comforter in the Winter and then taking it back and saying "get used to this wool army blanket." I was fine before the fic, and taking it away would not end my existance, but now I know whast I am missing.

[Leafsdude]

Very cute.

Buffy's such a klutz. Why is it that with all Buffy-verse character, it could be said that if their head wasn't screwed on, they'd lose it? Oh well, at least it ended up well, and the Buffy-Tara conspiritory acts are already in full swing. Gotta love it!

Feel kinda sorry about Willow in the restaurant, but as the famous quote goes, "love makes ya do the wacky". Such a genius our Will. Tara's so lucky. <-- Happy Crying.

Anyway, looking forward to more, and can't wait for the Tara move in. Plus, you owe us an explanation over that fight.


PS. Sorry for the late review. Procrastination and all that jazz. But, it's here now. *innocent grin*

[GayNow]

Hey, Kittens!

First of all, I'd like to thank everyone for keeping up with my little story. I appreciate the feedback you've all given me. I admit it, I'm a feedback whore. Please, feel free to keep it coming. You're more than welcome to continue guessing the reason for the year-long lack of communication between our two favorite women.

That being said, I gotta let you know that I have to put this on a side burner for right now (NOT a back burner). The next chapter is working itself out in my addlepated little brain, but I have a deadline to meet and I can't take the time to write it out right now. I'm keeping notes though, so when the time comes that I can write, it will all be ready for me. I'm hoping to have another chapter up before Christmas...definitely before the end of the year. I need to get one more chapter in before 2006 just to make myself feel worthwhile.

I will also have replies for feedback from the last two chapters. I know I didn't get replies up before the last update...I just wanted to post the chapter. So, look for replies in the coming weeks.

Again, thank you so much for reading, everyone! I'm very appreciative. I haven't forgotten about the story...I can't! It's always in my head. I just have to take care of this other task first and then I'm all over Chapter 13 like white on rice. I promise.

Carleen

[will]

I love the update it was cute.
Please update soon.

[RKT]

Take your time and write when you can. Though I will say that I hope your update is sooner rather than later.

I've enjoyed this story. Can't wait for more.

RKT

[histchic]

Woweee. I love this fic.

Firstly, thank you for not letting W/T fall into the angsty trap of doubting the other's feelings past the point of reason. Yes they obviously have some things to work through, but you've brought out more of their strengths rather than their weaknesses, and I personally think the story is better for it.

Secondly, what the frilly heck happened that made them not talk to each other? You are gonna tell us right?

I really like your Buffy as the supportive best friend, and having a story in her own right at the same time. That's one of the things that really saddened me about canon, is how everyone went their separate ways in s4 and s6.

Again, good work and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Toodles, take care.

[GayNow]

Okay, Kittens...they are incredibly overdue...but here are feedback replies for Chapter 11. I should have replies for Chapter 12 sometime in the next few days.

Please know that I have NOT abandoned this story. My muse deserved a vacation after writing "All You Can Eat" for the Fruitcake series. I'm just waiting for her to get back from her tour of the South Pacific (she doesn't like cold weather). I promise, she should be back soon and Chapter 13 will hopefully be on it's way in the fairly near future.

Thanks to everyone for continuing to keep up with the story and for sending me words of encouragement. You all mean very, very much to me.
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YMKA
[blockquote]Well, I made you speechless, huh? That must be a first. I need to write that in my diary.

I’m glad you liked the chapter and that it made you think. I like writing that makes me think too…so I’m glad I was able to achieve that in others.

Yeah, had to slip a little bit of Xena in there. That was my shout out to SallyMcFine’s fic.

LOL Buffy’s all right. She was just a bit overly excited and had a brain fart. She’ll make up for it later.

Thanks again, Marina![/blockquote]

hahler
[blockquote]Yes, Buffy often has bad timing, but she’s still a good person…in my fic, at least.

Thanks for reading, Dawn…I appreciate it! [/blockquote]

The Rose24
[blockquote]Yes, they almost kissed. Yes, I’m a bit cruel. No, they didn’t talk about what happened. Yes, I’m torturing you.

Fear not, the talk will come up in future chapters.

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to leave feedback.[/blockquote]

Vmarie
[blockquote]hehe I am evil and sadistic. I admit it.

I’m so glad you enjoyed the chapter. The end of the chapter was the most difficult part for me to write. I just didn’t know if I was getting it right. But, it seems as though I might have. Thanks. Of course Buffy arrived right then. Things can’t go that smoothly. LOL

Thanks, again, Stalker. I appreciate your kind words.[/blockquote]

Bugs23
[blockquote]hehe Thanks, Heather![/blockquote]

LesbianJedi87
[blockquote]Wow…okay…breathe, Rose. Breathe.

It was Tara saying, ‘yes’…she was mentally saying yes to the prospect of Willow kissing her. She couldn’t get the words out, so she was saying it in her head. The gentle caress on Willow’s hand was her answer.

I’m glad you enjoyed the chapter, even if it was a bit frustrating for you. I appreciate your continued support. And thank you for not throwing heavier objects at me. [/blockquote]

Darth Pacula
[blockquote]I’m so glad you enjoyed the chapter, Paul. And feel free to sing as much as you want. Really. I don’t mind.

I still maintain that it’s difficult to look into someone’s eyes while driving. Sure, it can be done, but the potential for danger is pretty high. With walking, not so much.

It would be pretty easy to have Willow pounce on Tara right then and there. But I’ve never been one to do things the easy way. It’s a curse.

WATCH XENA!

The disagreement will be coming up in a few chapters. There needs to be more talking from all parties involved….and we need to flashback a year to see what happened. But, it will be happening sooner rather than later.

Yes, Buffy actually quoted E.A. Poe. I had to give Buffy a brain; otherwise I wouldn’t be able to write her into the story. Though, she’s still Little Miss Flirtatious…had to keep that in.

Sabotage…what a wonderful word. That actually just came out of my pen…it was not preconceived sabotage. I originally intended for them to kiss right there in the middle of the sidewalk…people walking around be damned. But, suddenly Buffy showed up. It just happened.

Thanks so much, Paul. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement.[/blockquote]

Missocki
[blockquote]They’ll kiss…don’t worry about that. It will happen. Thanks so much for reading![/blockquote]

AntigoneUnbound
[blockquote]Mary, Mary, Mary…thanks sooooo very much for your support and encouragement.

Of course I had to have Buffy interrupting…isn’t that a requirement for W/T fics? Tara was downcast because of the interruption, not because it was Buffy…it was the bad timing. We’ll see as the story continues that Buffy and Tara are actually better friends than either of them actually realize. Their connection to Willow almost makes it necessary. But, their friendship actually goes beyond Willow…I think they will realize this about the same time the readers do.

Thanks for your comments on the physical scene. Yes, we have discussed this often. It’s so difficult for me – and I suspect others – to write. How much is too much? How much is too little? When does it stop becoming erotic and start becoming an instruction manual? It’s a tough call. But, I guess with practice I’ll get better at it. Writing! Better at WRITING!

The connection is so important for me. So, yes, I wanted to make sure I established that before Willow and Tara got into the heavy discussions about the argument and events of the previous year. It’s the connection that will get them through it. I think if they immediately flew into “let’s talk about what happened” conversations, it would have been too difficult for them to mend fences.

I’m glad you liked the humor, Mary. That means a lot coming from someone who writes the funny stuff so well. Yes, it was just a few babies…because there are just some infants who can sleep through anything…though I’m very, very sorry about your knee.

Seems like lots of people want to go to Cameron’s Fish Market. I’ve heard it’s a pretty good place. And I think sprouts and tofu as garnish for a rib eye sounds really good.

Thanks, again, Mary. I’m pleased and honored that you’re enjoying my tale.[/blockquote]

kindagay
[blockquote]aaawwww Jeanne, I made you cry? Go me! Okay, I honestly wasn’t trying for that kind of reaction from readers, but since I got that kind of reaction, I’ll take it.

I’m so glad you liked the chapter…I hoped to start (re)building their connection/relationship in this chapter. I really wanted to show the strength of it. Hopefully I achieved that.

Well, I’m gonna make you wait for their first proper kiss…but it shouldn’t be too terribly long. In the mean time, there will be a bit of flirting.

Thanks, Jeanne![/blockquote]

WillowRTaraM1
[blockquote]Thanks, Jacks. I’m glad you liked the chapter. And, c’mon, you have to admit that the Buffy Karaoke Party was kinda fun. [/blockquote]

LeatherQueen
[blockquote]I’m glad you’re enjoying my story…it’s not much, but it’s pretty fun to write. And please don’t flog me…Buffy HAD to interrupt…it’s a rule of fan fic! Thanks so much for your kind words.[/blockquote]

UnderTheirSpell
[blockquote]You know...I. Did. And I’m usually leery of reading incomplete fics as well, so the fact that you took the time to read everything to this point makes me very appreciative. Of course, it also makes me feel very bad because it’s been so long since I’ve updated. But, please believe me…I’ve not abandoned the fic. Not in the least. I just had to concentrate on the Fruitcake story…and then I had to let my muse go on a much-needed vacation for a while. I think she’s due back fairly soon though. So hopefully I’ll be able to get cracking really soon. Again, thank you so much for your kind words.[/blockquote]

sam
[blockquote]Thanks, sam. I really appreciate it.[/blockquote]

freakgirl05
[blockquote]Oh, please don’t kill Buffy…I need her for later in the story. There will be smoochies…I promise. Honest. I just don’t know when they will happen. Thanks for reading![/blockquote]

SallyMcFine
[blockquote]Mistress of Delayed Gratification? Could that be the problem with my sex life? Hmmm…..

I put in the Xena references just for you, Sally. I’m glad you and Mrs. McFine liked them.

Yeah, the timing of this story is interesting. In essence, all of the present action has taken place in just a few hours. I’m evil that way. They will get to the talk, but I need to have them reestablish their connection…reach a common ground, if you will. Otherwise, I just don’t know where I would go with it. They won’t ignore the rift, but they need to have a solid foundation before they can attend to it.

Cameron’s Fish Market is pretty darned popular….I wonder if Ang is aware of this.

Thanks, Sally. I appreciate your words of encouragement.[/blockquote]

Krokador
[blockquote]No killing Buffy! Really…she’ll redeem herself. I promise. No killing!

I’m glad you enjoyed the update, but you really don’t have to worship me. Really. No, really. Stop. STOP ALREADY! Hehe

Thanks for your kind words.[/blockquote]

Aine
[blockquote]Thank you so much, Stacey…and welcome to the thread. I hope that I can continue to bring you some enjoyment. I promise, I’m working on the next chapters. Just have to get the muse back home from her vacation to crank it out. Thanks again! [/blockquote]

Willow~Rosenberg
[blockquote]LOL Again, there will be no killing of the Buffster. Perhaps a little good-natured ribbing at some point, but no killing. She’ll make up for it, I promise. Thanks so much for continuing to read and for your kind words. [/blockquote]

watson
[blockquote]”manus contactus”? Um…okay. If you say so.

So I made you swoon, huh? Multiple times, even. Well, go me!

Cuteness and romance…well, that’s kinda what I was going for, so Yay!

I’m actually pretty surprised that you haven’t already designed a spreadsheet for Willow’s brain…I kinda thought that you would have jumped right on that.

Yes, there is quite a bit for them to catch up on…as we’ve discussed a number of times. It will take some time for them to do that….and I don’t want to rush them. For as much as Tara says, “I know you” to Willow, they really need to get to know each other again. Particularly after a year of no contact. But, at the most basic level, they do know each other. And that’s what I wanted to clarify first…so they have a foundation on which to build. And build they will.

I really like this Buffy. Not just because she’s “my” Buffy, but because this is how I saw her on the series…at first…before the writers started taking the heavy drugs and made her a self-centered, whining pain-in-the-ass. This is the Buffy that should have been. Of course, that’s just my opinion.

Personally, I think Cameron and Mama Angela should just join forces and combine their eateries…oh wait…um…nevermind.

Thanks so much, watty. I truly appreciate all of your help on this story. It’s wonderful to have someone to talk to about my ideas…and someone with whom I can debate those ideas. You’re a gem![/blockquote]

Artemis
[blockquote]Chris, your brain took a national holiday? Damn! I didn’t know that was possible. Seriously, don’t worry about missing those…I’m sure you’re not the only one.

I never realized that “I know you” would have the impact on readers that it seems to be having. I mean…wow! And, you’re right, while the 8 years apart was painful for them, they have so many ‘firsts’ to look forward to – firsts that they won’t take for granted. I hope I’m able to write them well enough to do them justice.

And, yeah, Buffy coming by to interrupt them is pretty cliché…I admit that. But, I just had to do it. Actually, as I mentioned earlier, it just happened. I didn’t intend for Buffy to show up right then. My original idea was to have her see the smoochies happen and do a little happy dance next to her Tracker…then quietly get back into her vehicle and go about her day. But suddenly the interruption was coming out of my pen! I think I even said, “What the hell?” aloud while writing on my train ride home. I got funny looks, anyway.

Thanks so much, Chris. I’m glad you’re keeping up with the story and that you’re enjoying it. I appreciate the kind words.[/blockquote]

grimlock72
[blockquote]Now, now…let’s not be too hard on Buffy. She didn’t intentionally interrupt them. She just had a flighty moment. She’ll make up for it later.

I think Tara felt the need to convince Willow that she wasn’t mad and that she didn’t hate her. Hence the need to look at Willow. Though, note that she kept in physical contact at all times. The hug happened at a moment when there was an understanding between the two…an understanding that Tara was there and that she didn’t hate Willow. Then the comforting could begin.

See above for discussions on why Tara is not jumping feet first into the “let’s talk about what happened last year” conversation. She doesn’t have any ulterior motives for putting off the discussion. The only thing on her agenda at the moment is to be with Willow. To just be. She knows they need to talk before they can move forward. But in order to move forward, they need a starting point. She just wants to take a bit of time to establish that starting point. After 8 years being apart, can you blame her for simply wanting to bask in Willow’s presence for a bit? I can’t.

Thanks so much for continuing to read my little story and for your kind words. I appreciate them greatly.[/blockquote]

[Candleshoe]

Ooh, an update, how exciting! This is one of the fics that brought me out of a four-year lurk, so I am waiting with bated breath...

[GayNow]

Hey, Kittens! I’m back with feedback replies for Chapter 12.

Again, I’d just like to thank everyone for keeping up with the story and sticking with it. I really appreciate you all.
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The Rose24[blockquote]I’m really glad you enjoyed the chapter. I had a good time writing it. I don’t think I’ll torture you…but I plan on keeping you in suspense for a bit. [/blockquote]LesbianJedi87[blockquote]Yeah, this was a long chapter, wasn’t it? It was the chapter that wouldn’t end. I just kept writing and writing. I finally quit because my wrist hurt. LOL I’m glad you liked the update, Rose. Thanks for your comments.[/blockquote]Ressick[blockquote]Thanks for staying up late to read the update…and for the happy dance. I really appreciate it.[/blockquote]Darth Pacula[blockquote]Well, Paul, I think they were both aware of their feelings for each other…once. But after the year hiatus on the relationship, they are both kind of leery. But this is the Kitten Board…so you know it will have a happy ending at the end of the journey. The journey just may be a little…bumpy.

Yes, Buffy will be doing a lot of redeeming throughout the rest of the fic. She’s a good friend to both of them…but especially Willow. But, c’mon, wouldn’t you bust into a fit of giggles if you were watching Willow turn fifteen shades of jealous green? Hehe

Hints, hints, hints. I’m all about the hints. There will be more hints in the next chapter. We’re getting closer and closer. No comment on Buffy’s hint re: Willow’s previous condition.

I’m so glad you liked the chapter, Paul. Thanks so much for commenting.[/blockquote]tarebear[blockquote]Holy Feedback, Batman! That’s a lot of quoting!

Cecile, thanks so much for keeping up with the story. I’m so glad you enjoyed the chapter. I wanted to have a chapter of bonding (NOT bondage…yet…Oh that was wrong!). I thought it was important for Willow and Tara to have some time together to just be with each other…and kind of feel each other out (NOT up! They are NOT feeling each other up…yet). And the inclusion of Buffy in the mix just happened. I kinda liked it. It felt good.

I really needed Buffy and Tara to have that moment at the deli. It was important for a number of reasons…it shows the connection that Buffy and Willow have forged over the years, it shows the connection that Buffy and Tara have developed, and it leads into events that will be discussed in future chapters.

Seems like lots of people are curious about that argument. I admit it…I’m curious too. Honestly, I haven’t written it yet. I know what it’s about…I know what happens…I know what happens in the aftermath…it just isn’t fleshed out and in print yet. Fairly soon though. There will be more hints in the next chapter.

‘The talk’ will have to happen soon…you’re right. It’s necessary for them to get all of that weight off their shoulders before they can move forward in a satisfying way. But, for right now, they just need to build a foundation.

Thanks so much, Cecile. Never apologize for long feedback. It makes the writer feel good. [/blockquote]spells42[blockquote]Yeah, Anne, there will be more angst, but I don’t think it will be as bad as you think. And I don’t think the worst of it will be about what you think.

I enjoyed writing the flirting. One thing I really wanted to do in this story is make Tara more outgoing…less of a wallflower. She still has her insecurities, don’t get me wrong (and we’ll see some later), but I wanted her to be more confident about herself. She has a healthy family life, that should be reflected in her self-esteem.

Thanks so much, Anne. Glad you’re still reading. [/blockquote]SallyMcFine[blockquote]You were shocked, huh? Well, I’ll have to see what I can do in upcoming chapters to continue that trend.

I’m glad you liked the chapter, Sally. Don’t worry about Willow and Tara needing to talk. It’s coming up very soon. Buffy is much more aware than she seems, interrupting the kiss on the sidewalk aside (give her a break, she was excited), and she will know when to stick around and when to make herself scarce.

I’m a good clue dropper, aren’t I? I’ll be dropping a few more clues, but then things will be revealed.

Patience, Sally. Don’t let the suspense kill you. Just let it keep you tied up a little (!!!)…hopefully, the wait will be worth it in the end.

The next chapter? Hmmm….I’m writing it now. So hopefully it will be showing up sometime fairly soon.

Thank you, friend. I really appreciate it. Hopefully my muse will stick around long enough for me to finish up this story so that you and I can start talking seriously about that collaboration. [/blockquote]sam[blockquote]Thanks so much, sam. I’m really happy that you liked it. And thanks for continuing to read. [/blockquote]Kaia[blockquote]OMG! Did you ever recover from passing out? Glad you’re still reading! Thanks so much. [/blockquote]grimlock72[blockquote]Hey, I have no complaints about people re-reading my story. None at all. So, please, be my guest. Unfortunately, I think I may have to disappoint you…I don’t think I can write “prancing”.

Tara has made it very clear that Willow holds an incredibly special place in her heart. Whether she’d declared that she wants to live with Willow has yet to be seen, but she certainly doesn’t want to be excluded from Willow’s life in any way. I’m not sure she got to that place “so fast” though…I mean, this relationship has been many, many years in the making. You haven’t missed any steps…the talking is on its way.

That’s the thing right now…”the joy of seeing each other again is dominant at the moment.” Willow and Tara are just reveling in each other’s nearness for the time being. They know there are much heavier conversations ahead. They know that there will be some difficult moments. But, for now, they are just Willow and Tara…together again.

Yeah, this is a good Buffy. And don’t be too hard on Buffy and Tara…they weren’t making fun of Willow. They were having fun…not making fun. If I were in Buffy’s place, I’d be forced into a fit of giggles too.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it.[/blockquote]Krokador[blockquote]So glad you liked the chapter, but I’m sorry it kept you from your homework. I hope you got that done.

Thanks so much for continuing to read and for your kind words. [/blockquote]DarkWiccan[blockquote]Thanks, DW! I appreciate it![/blockquote]the hero factor[blockquote]Thanks! Yes, we are getting closer…much closer. I’ve had a recent spurt of creativity and suddenly the next two chapters are very, very clear in my head. Hopefully, they will write themselves easily and I’ll be able to share them with you all soon. Thanks for sticking with the story.[/blockquote]ringwaldoeuvre[blockquote]Thanks, Mary. Those words mean so much to me, especially coming from a writer as talented as you are. I’m very appreciative.[/blockquote]AntigoneUnbound[blockquote]A bang, huh? Cool. Though, I don’t know how quickly Willow and Tara will be banging.

I’m so glad you liked the conversation between Buffy and Tara. That conversation was one of the few parts of this story that went directly from my brain to my computer. Just about everything else is written out in a composition book before typing it up. Things usually get edited and changed in the typing process. But that conversation just happened. I typed up the section just prior to that – the section I’d written on the train – and my fingers just kept flying over the keys. Before I knew it, I had this great conversation. I don’t even know how it happened. But I’m glad it did.

Oh! You got the whole idea behind the flirting scene! You see, Mary? This is why I believe we are starting to share brain cells. And this is why I think we need to collaborate sometime and write something together. That could be fun!

I like this Buffy too. Much like the Dawn you wrote in GS&A and ATGB, I had to make Buffy palatable in my fic or I would want to dump her off the nearest bridge. (Thanks for mentioning the Shakespeare reference. I liked that one. Heehee.)

Thanks, so much, Mary. I’m so glad you’re enjoying my story. I hope I continue to live up to the challenge of writing it. As for what the heck happened…well, you kinda know (since we’ve talked about it a bit)…but you’re gonna know a hell of a lot more in upcoming chapters. [/blockquote]watson[blockquote]My dear wattybutt, thank you so much for sticking with me through the writing of this chapter. And for telling me “just finish the chapter already and post it!”

Thanks for your thoughts on the timing of the story. I’ve tried to find a happy medium between fics I’ve read in the past. At one extreme there are the fics that make me yell, “Oh, get on with it already!” and at the other extreme are the fics that make me think, “I really wish I knew more about what was happening around them…and about what they were thinking.” I’m glad you think I’ve achieved that. And, yeah, I do spend a lot of time choosing words. Though, sometimes I think I should just stop obsessing about it and simply write. But, a leopard can’t change its spots.

Thanks for noticing the subtleties. Some of them are intentional, some just happen that way.

I can’t believe I made you swoon again. You’re too easily swooned sometimes. As I’ve said in other places, I really wanted to establish their (re)connection before I got into the heavy stuff. They need that foundation in order for the upcoming talks to be productive.

I can’t begin to tell you how pleased I am that people like this Buffy. I am just floored by that. Because of the way she was written in the series over the years, I think it’s kinda hard to pin down a character for her – it was always changing. There were some days when I really loved Buffy and other days when I wanted her to get eaten by a really grotesque demon. So finding that space where Buffy is liked is a good feeling.

I figured that after ending the previous chapter with a thwarted kiss, I needed to put something in there to appease the Kittens. But, there was also this need to not only address the intentions of each character, but to show their reactions to each other’s intentions. Does that make sense? I think I just confused myself.

Sparks will be flying, I’m just not sure they are the sparks you’re expecting.

It’s difficult for me to tell you how much I’ve appreciated your support throughout this endeavor. You’ve been hanging with me on this for 8 months now…perhaps more. Others would have run away screaming by now, but you’re still here. So, thank you.[/blockquote]Artemis[blockquote]Oh, Chris. One of the reasons I love you so much is that you pay attention to the details. Thanks so much for this…

While they do know each other so well, there’s this whole sphere of experience that they have no experience with. They’re just starting to explore how they work as a couple – not exchanging letters and emails, but right in the same room, with other people.

You’ve hit the nail on the head. For as much as they do know each other, they still have a lot to discover. If there is anything in this fic I’ve done deliberately, it’s putting in “I know you” in the previous chapter and then my little attempt to thwart Tara’s declaration in this chapter. Yay for you, Chris!

Alpha Willow…HA! I like that.

RE: Evolved characters…thanks for that, Chris. I really wanted to write Tara as a more confident person. She still has her insecurities (we’ll see some of those arise soon), but I’ve always felt that, on the show, those insecurities were a product of her upbringing. In my world, Tara has a loving, supportive family. I think her character had to reflect that difference from the show. And see comments elsewhere with regard to Buffy…I had to make her more evolved or I would have had to kill her off in some horrible way. At the same time, I’ve liked many of the Buffyisms that cropped up over the years…so I needed to have a reason to throw in a few of my own.

Future chapters will go into more detail RE: Buffy’s involvement in the rift. I will say this, though…she didn’t have anything to do with it. She didn’t cause anything to happen. However, she’s heavily involved in the aftermath. Again, we’ll learn more about it. You’re right, the fight did hurt Buffy as well.

Thanks you so much, Chris. You’ve been consistently supportive throughout this entire process. I really appreciate it.[/blockquote]JustSkipIt[blockquote]Ok working through the feedback in order:

There are people getting feedback from you? And novellas?

Yeah, so you caught me during one of those rare times in my life when I have to focus on one or two things exclusively. It may not always be timely, but the feedback gets there eventually.

Buffy forgot? …. That’s very hard to imagine. I mean I guess she was very excited about Tony and the day and everything but wasn’t it just this morning that she was telling Xander all about W/T?

Yes, this is true. But I don’t find it that hard to imagine. Buffy’s interruption is, in some ways, an autobiographical experience. There have been times when I’ve done that to people. When I found out that I was accepted into the PhD program I really wanted, I was so excited that I walked into my boss’s office to give my notice…a mere 30 minutes after I’d talked to her about the meeting she was having…and after she’d told me that she shouldn’t be disturbed. Fortunately for me, I had an understanding boss. Fortunately for Buffy, she has a couple of friends who won’t hold it against her.

Tara listened to Buffy and carefully read between the lines. “Buffy,” she spoke slowly, maintaining eye contact with the concerned hazel eyes, “there is more to what happened last year than you ever mentioned in your emails. I’m right, aren’t I?”

Well shit. You could be more cryptic!

Yeah, I could be more cryptic if I wanted to…but I think that was cryptic enough.

Great update and now about a shorter wait for the next one?

Thanks, Debra. I really appreciate it. Though, as we can see, the ‘shorter wait’ part just didn’t happen. But, the next two chapters are sort of pulling themselves quickly together, so hopefully they will be more timely. [/blockquote]
Emms – the Kitten formerly known as Miss Kitty’s Ball O’ Yarn
[blockquote]Thanks so much for your enthusiastic comments, Emmy! Though now I have to apologize for taking so long to write this reply…and for not updating in months.

Yeah, Buffy is good at the self-flogging. And she’s lucky to have a friend like Willow…and now Tara. She avoided a severe beating because Willow and Tara are such understanding people.

I’m glad you liked the interaction between Buffy and Tara. See my comments above RE: that conversation. It just felt right.

Do you know Deb and Rachel too? Wow! Those two certainly get around. And, you got to be in a story! Remember that little thing called All You Can Eat? Okay, so you weren’t foul of mouth in that one (you were only SIX), but I think you were incredibly adorable. One day I’ll try to write you into a fic…and I’ll make you foul of mouth.

I felt it was important for Tara to engage in both activities – flirting with Rachel and being fully aware of how it was influencing Willow. At the same time, she needed to come to a realization that she’d hit the teasing limit and then make amends for it. I needed it to be a “getting to know you” moment between Tara and Willow. I think it succeeded…I hope it did, anyway.

Thanks, Emmy. Your kind, supportive words mean a lot to me.[/blockquote]Irene73[blockquote]It has been a while, but please don’t apologize. As you can see, it’s been quite a while for me too.

I’m so glad you’re still enjoying the story, Irene. Your dedication to remaining current warms the cockles of my heart…though I admit that I don’t know what a cockle is…and why are there some in my heart? Anyway, “what happened to make Tara so angry at Willow?” Well, that will be coming up fairly soon. There will certainly be some awkwardness, but I wanted to make the initial reunion as smooth as possible. As I’ve mentioned before, I need them to have a solid foundation, a good starting place, before they can move on to heavier issues. I think the conversations between Buffy and Tara and between Willow and Tara will be satisfactorily revealing. I hope so anyway.

Thanks for the kind words on the detail. There are some parts that just seem to write themselves and other parts that I labor over…I’m sure you can relate, as most writers probably do. I’m glad the emotions are coming through.

Yes, yes…Loving this Buffy. She’s fun to write.

You know, the Demon Sub is pretty good. You should suggest to Debra that she and Rachel expand.

Oooohhh…added spice. I like that description, Fajita! I definitely needed to have the three of them be confident. Though, do not doubt that each woman has her own insecurities. They aren’t infallible. That’s what I like about them.

Thank you so much, Fajita. I appreciate your commitment to my little tale. Those cockles are getting warm again. [/blockquote]singgirl[blockquote]I’m so glad that the update made you happy. I’m sorry there hasn’t been another one since. I’m hoping to rectify that soon. Thank you so much for your very kind words re: my writing. When I say “It’s a labor of love,” I definitely put the emphasis on “labor”…I’m sooo not a natural at this. Fortunately, I have people like watson, AntigoneUnbound, tarawhipped and others to continually kick me in the ass and encourage me to continue. And, of course, the wonderful comments from every Kitten makes me feel good.

You know, that’s an interesting thought…maybe I will change font colors a bit. That could be fun!

I’m sorry I’ve been cruel. I never intended to go this long between updates. I needed to write All You Can Eat after I finished the last update. After that, my muse just collapsed. Immediately following the collapse, she booked a flight to the South Pacific. She just got back and the two of us have gotten back to writing. Hopefully the next chapter will be ready soon.

Again, thank you so much for your kind words.[/blockquote]Leafsdude[blockquote]Hey, Fencey! Thanks so much for chiming in! Things just don’t feel complete without your feedback. I’m really glad you’re enjoying the story, David. Of course things are going to end up well…this is the Kitten Board! Thanks, again…I appreciate it.[/blockquote]will[blockquote]Thanks, will. Sorry for the update delay. Hopefully I’ll have the next chapter soon.[/blockquote]RKT[blockquote]Thanks, RKT. I appreciate it.[/blockquote]histchic[blockquote]Thanks for your thoughts re: strengths vs. weaknesses. I agree with you. I didn’t want to have an entire fic with the two of them doubting every word and every move. It just wouldn’t be fun to write.

Yeah, I’m gonna let you in on what happened. I promise. It’s coming up soon. Not in the next chapter, but more than likely in the chapter after that. Though more hints will be dropped before the big reveal.

I like having Buffy as a supporting character, but I wanted to make sure that she wasn’t just “window dressing” – there solely to make sure that Willow had at least one friend. I needed her to be a person with thoughts, feelings, and ambitions. I’m glad she’s playing that way.

Thanks, again. I hope to have the next chapter soon.[/blockquote][hr] Again, my thanks to everyone for continuing to read. I’m in the process of writing Chapter 13 (and Chapter 14 is forming as I write 13) and I hope to have it ready to post in the very near future. It has become my focus. All of the library books that are sitting on the table next to me are just staring at me as if to say, “oh sure, you check us out and get our hopes up…and we’re just sitting here. We could have done that at the library! At least we would have been with our friends!” Oh well. Think about how mad they are going to be when I renew them for another three weeks! I tremble at the thought.

All of this is to say that if you need to do some rereading to remember what the hell is going on, there’s time. I’m working on Chapter 13, but it’s not done. So, reread if you need to…and I’ll get the update ready as quickly as possible so that I can share it with you.

Thanks to all of you for keeping up with Coming Back…it’s because of all of your kind words and support that I’m keep “coming back” to the story. Much love to everyone.

[mole]

All of this is to say that if you need to do some rereading to remember what the hell is going on, there’s time. I’m working on Chapter 13, but it’s not done. So, reread if you need to…and I’ll get the update ready as quickly as possible so that I can share it with you.

Ah, a fine suggestion. I first found this story on the Looking-Glass, before I even knew the kitten board existed. I know, I'm a late-bloomer. That said, I haven't left feedback before, but I add my voice to the chorus. I love your take on our two favorite women (and I even like Buffy ). Quite puzzled as to what could have kept W/T out of contact for a year. Must have been a doozie.

Thanks to you for sticking with the story, as well. Looking forward to more.
Michelle

[GayNow]

Candleshoe,

I'm glad you're excited about the upcoming chapter. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts. We're all glad that you've delurked.

Michelle,

Welcome aboard! So glad you've been enjoying the story. Thanks so much for chiming in and letting me know that you like the portrayal of Willow and Tara. As I've mentioned in other places, that's an important thing for me...making sure that I stay as true to the characterizations as I can. I want to write a story about Willow and Tara...not write a story and randomly name the characters Willow and Tara. So, I'm glad that's ringing true for you. And yay for liking Buffy!

More about the argument, and the argument itself, will be coming up in the next two chapters. Chapter 13 is coming right along...and chapter 14 is making itself more detailed in my addlepated brain as I write. It's difficult, though...we're getting into heavy stuff. So, I hope it still keeps people reading.

Again, thanks for keeping up with the story and for adding your comments. I really appreciate it. Truly, I do.

Carleen

[GayNow]

OMG I SUCK!!!!

Cameron of the Gay has brought it to my attention that I missed a few people in my replies for chapter 11.

She was wrong. I didn't miss a few.

I MISSED TWELVE PEOPLE IN MY REPLIES!!!!!

To those twelve people, I'm truly sorry. I must have lost some pages when I printed out the feedback (I write on the train during my commute to and from work).

I will get on that this week in between writing chapter 13 and the rest of my life and get those posted ASAP.

I'm soooooooooo sorry!

[JustSkipIt]

Which means that either the folks at Car's work or the folks on the train now have a page of feedback.

[Kaia]

LMAO @ JustSkipIt

[JustSkipIt]

The last udpate to this story was 11/4. That's a long time.

[GayNow]

Yep...it is a long time.

[Kaia]

115 days...

[GayNow]

2760 hours...

165,600 minutes...

9,936,000 seconds...

[Kaia]

yup.
definitely a long time...

[LesbianJedi87]

have my eyes decieved me? is car gonna update soon?
I CANT WAIT!!!

[GayNow]

I'm working on Chapter 13 right now, in fact. I think I'm about half way done. It's a long one. Lots happening in this chapter. Angst alert. And because there is an angst alert, it is taking me longer to write. I'm finding the non-fluffy stuff more difficult to get down on paper. But I am working on it!

I also had a life setback and lost a couple days of writing. Want to know what happened? Well, read here and you will know all about it.

Alright, back to Chapter 13!! Here I go!

[tarawhipped]

I also had a life setback and lost a couple days of writing. Want to know what happened? Well, read here and you will know all about it.

Yeah, yeah. If I had a nickel for every time I used the ol' "I couldn't finish my assignment 'cause part of my house collapsed" excuse...

-Cam

[GayNow]

Yeah, yeah. If I had a nickel for every time I used the ol' "I couldn't finish my assignment 'cause part of my house collapsed" excuse...

I'll remember this when you come over here to help us clear out the wreckage.