The Chronicles of Dopeygayland (UPDATED 4/11/10)

[stillrunning]

OOOO! OH OH OH!!! *spazzy jumps for joy* THAT WAS AWESOME!!! PST is all jealous of RGW sleeping with ST, who seems to be almost as nasty and vixeny as VW. OOOOOOOO update soon please!! Please please pretty please!!

[meretricious]

cam, i didn't mind that cliff-hanger so much, lots of pay-off in the update before the evil cliffhanger, much easier to digest. although after i read terra's fb summary, my brain exploded a little, quite a juggling act you've got going here. at one point, i think i was chanelling rocky horror a little (brad! janet! brad! dr.scott! rocky! uhh!)
i think what i'm enjoying the most in this fic is that even though the storyline is intentionally way over the top, the characterizations are still so natural. i've become something of a skimmer of most willow-babble, when it's forced, its gotten to where i find it almost painful to read. that yours seems so effortless, esp. in a highwire fic like this, is mucho impressive.
and lets hear a shout-out for dictionary.com, i've seriously considered making it a home page (love firefox, multiple homepages makes me happy). can't wait for more~mary
(ps-gord's in the mail, plus a couple of surprises )

[ringwaldoeuvre]

Another intriguing update. I am especially interested in seeing how AU Tara progresses. In the alternate world, neither Vampire Willow or Slayer Tara chose their destinies. AU Vamp Willow has a recollection of regular Willow's past and does not have to worry about balancing her personalities, yet AU Tara had a different path. She probably has remnants of her past, yet she has to merge the necessity of the Slayer's aggression with her shy up-bringing. Er... if AU Tara had a smiliar childhood as regular Tara. Vamp Willow is an almost complete departure (or at least, I think of it as a departure) from young Willow, yet Slayer Tara walks a fine line. Color me fascinated.

Regarding the "Art of Leaving Feedback" thread and the discussion of writing style, as well as the paranoia derived therefrom: word. It's tough since I am both a nit-picky writer and someone that recently faced her fear and delurked. I find writing dialogue quite tricky, which means I notice when someone does it well. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for the story.

~Mary

[pipsberg]

Hey look at me, late again!

Great update Cam! It seems to get more sorrid and complicated each time. Goody! I like seeing Willow try to explain her way out of what she did with the other Tara too. Squirmy Willow is so much fun. Thanks for the back to back updates!!

[tarawhipped]

Feedback replies on part 4, and part 5 coming up next. Thanks for your continued support! --Cam

GayNow:

VST and VW showing up and entering PST's dorm room...not so sure this is a good thing

Have faith, my friend! I did this primarily to show that it could be done...that even though it wasn't the Tara that lives there who invited VW in, it was basically an exact genetic match, so it worked. In addition, VST knows she can control VW, and that the girls are in no real danger from her. Thanks for your help on this next one, Car, and I hope you like the changes.[br]
Naeryn: LMAO Megan...I'm just pleased to have given you "yay" and emoticon-y goodness thoughts. This one took me a bit longer to do, cause the story's winding down and the updates are getting longer...hope you like it![br]
hermitfish: I was thinking about rewording that sleep definition, but then I realized it'd be just like Willow to know it verbatim...glad it gave you a chuckle. LOL on the Willow takeout...that would be neat, huh? "I'll have a vixeny Willow, hold the nerd, side of handcuffs." You are absolutely right about Tara having more strength than expected...she might surprise some people in this next chapter. Thanks, Cyd![br]
dragkinggoddess: Thank you so much for your comments regarding clarity/confusion. Keeping two sets of Willows and Taras straight (so to speak) has been the biggest challenge in this fic, and it's good to know it's working out ok. I mentioned back in summer or fall when I first wrote the original series, I've read a couple of fics with Slayer Tara, and loved the idea of that. It's gratifying to know that so many others have enjoyed it as well.[br]
Still Waters T: Holy crap, that's a lot of feedback, Liv! Regarding the first series, glad you liked the images, especially of ST. Yes, Buffy and Faith will have their hands full...in fact, that will be the subject of a future Dopeygayland Series. My ego is stoked about as high as possible after seeing how many of my favorite lines you quoted from Spanks Back. In reference to the line about Tara possibly being straight...I did go for a sort of over the top "Oh the HORROR!" reaction. I just liked the idea that Willow could go discover something about herself in a place where almost everyone was queer, then get back to her world and be faced with the possibility that the person she is so obviously meant to be with is straight.

Tara can teach her the proper way to learn magic---through Wicca

Exactly! I don't how much I'll ever get into the magic in this series (Carleen can attest to how whiny I get at the thought), but I wanted to have a more sensible, in control Willow, who stopped herself before she developed a problem. I like your remarks on PST's jealousy/RGW's guilt. They are certainly reacting to each other as if they are already in a relationship. Part of this is a reaction to literally seeing themselves as a couple (even if it is an alt-universe version). And no, ST and VW aren't bad...just very very naughty, and more than a little arrogant. Hope you like the rest, Liv, and thanks again.[br]
Safuega: You know, when I read your summation of the story, I was all confused, then burst out laughing, cause I was like "WTF? Is that really what I'm writing? Oh, yeah...it is!" All the acronyms and pseudonyms and...I'm just glad you all can follow it, and are finding it amusing. Thanks![br]
potential_angel: Mel, you tricked me with your new nick...very sneaky of you. Yes, I'm back, and I'm glad you are too. No worries...VW will not get to have her Tara and eat one too, despite what she may believe. Thank you![br]
terra21: Holy crap, terra...reading Safuega's summary, then yours...I can't believe you're all following this stuff...it sounds like utter nonsense to me! I read yours out loud to Ang, giggling my head off, and she just looked at me blankly and said "that's your story?" So glad y'all can appreciate my silliness, and I will get to the 'splainin'...but not so much just yet.[br]
JustSkipIt: I really appreciate your praise for the naughty bits, Debra...I admit I'd been re-reading Please about the time I started on Spanks Back. I knew when I did this one that Willow would find "her" Tara, and it had to be more a sweet romance for them, but having started this endeavor as a smutty short, it is nice to have the Altverse pair to get down and dirty with. I know the fic you're talking about with The Rose, and I have newfound respect for how the author juggles THREE distinct sets of W/T without causing confusion...truly impressive.

The only thing is: why does VS-T seem so evil?

I'm glad you asked this, cause I wasn't aware she was coming off this way. She isn't evil, but she does have her own motives for what she's doing, and they won't come out til the 2 chapters after this next one. She does see herself as fully in control of her pet and therefore isn't worried about VW harming anyone, but in typically cocky Slayer fashion, she doesn't consider how the vampire's presence might make them feel. I can't really reveal more without giving stuff away, but thanks for saying something.[br]
watson:

none of the synapses are working

I beg to differ, watson. Use of the word "synapses" alone implies that your magnificent brain is functioning fine. Once again I have to give props to Cyd and The Insanity Sessions for the idea of a Willow Convention at all. I reread that scene again recently and laughed my head off (Booberella...hehehehehe). Thank you![br]
candybabe86: Yay! More long, emoticon filled feedback! I'm very glad you're enjoying this, and more will be along shortly. In response to a couple of your comments: NO, Tara will never be straight in any dimension as far as I'm concerned...I just thought it important (and good for a laugh, of course) that Buffy mention the possibility. The "wanna snuggle" line was a set-up to make you all think that Willow had worked up the nerve to talk to Tara. I couldn't help it. I'm naughty. That interaction will make another appearance in this next update...hope you like it, and thank you.[br]
Tempered Cynic: Hiya, Mike! So cool to see you here, and I'm glad you're intrigued. Unfortunately, I cannot really answer your feedback except to say "wait and see, all will be explained shortly." Oh, but VW just wants the snuggles...she's pretty much a one-track vamp.[br]
YunaMaClay: Awww...making people smile is all I really want this fic to do. Well...and horny...making people horny. But that's it. No serious thoughts allowed. Glad to hear you're enjoying it![br]
stillrunning: *joins in spazzy dance* Wheeeeeeee!!!! Yeah, VST is a bit of a bad girl a la Faith, but with a sensitive side, as shown at the end of the first Dopey series (and possibly later in this one). Update coming up next, and thanks![br]
meretricious: LOL Mary...I think reading terra and Safuega's summaries friend a few of my brain cells too...I had no idea this was so convoluted, and am frankly amazed anyone is following it. Thank you for your comments about the characterizations. I wanted the events to be a bit cartoony, but the characters still need to be recognizable. Along those lines, I agree with you about Willowbabble...I try not to overdo it, because honestly, she didn't babble EVERY time she opened her mouth. As soon as I realized that one of the subtle differences between Willow and her vampire twin was that VW rarely talks, or only in short sentences, I knew I had to use some babble. I'm glad to hear it's not overdone. Thanks![br]
ringwaldoeuvre: Wow...lots of insight there, Mary. I may have to go into that more in depth in a future series, in particular how AU Tara grew into the Slayer. It's not something I've given much thought to, but now that this fic is off my Shorts thread, I don't feel as compelled to keep it all light and fluffy. Perhaps a future series could show how she dealt with becoming the Chosen One, getting to Sunnydale, and making VW her pet. Thank you r.e. the dialogue. This is the only story I've written in which the first draft is longer than the final, and a lot of that is tightening up the dialogue. More coming up next.[br]
pipsberg: No worries on late-itude, Pips, just always nice to see you here. And WOOHOO! for sordid and complicated! Despite reading all the feedback summaries, I swear I still know where this is going, and it will all make sense, I promise. I'm getting slower with the updates, but there's only two left after this next one, so I'll probably still have it done before some other people update. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Damn, I crack myself up.

Squirmy Willow is so much fun.

How the hell would YOU know???[br][br]

[tarawhipped]

Title: The Chronicles of Dopeygayland
Author: tarawhipped (Cameron)
Email: tarawhipped@hotmail.com
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: All characters are the property of Joss Whedon/Mutant Enemy
Feedback: If you know what’s good for you, you will.
Distribution: Sure, just tell me where so I can visit!
Notes: 1. Many thanks to Carleen for acting as beta extraordinaire for this chapter. Any glaring errors are her fault…what? That’s not what I’m supposed to say? Fine…all inconsistencies, misspellings, dangling participles and just plain “what is this crap?” moments belong to me alone.
2. I cribbed the phrase “nookie trip” from JustSkipIt’s Survivor: Ash Island…loved the phrase, hope it’s ok.
3. Thoughts in italics.[br][br][br]
Dopeygayland Spanks Back, Part 5: Indecent Proposals…Yes Please![br][br]
Willow grasped blindly for Tara’s hand, never taking her eyes off of the two intruders.[br]
“OW! By dobe!”[br]
Willow turned to find the blonde glaring back, her hands gingerly prodding her poked proboscis.[br]
“You hit by dobe!”[br]
“Oh, Tara, I’m sorry! I didn’t mean to—”[br]
“It’s all fun and games til someone breaks their schnoz,” the Slayer deadpanned.[br]
“Oooh, Mistress…remember the time we—”[br]
“Hush, Kitten,” the blonde reprimanded, reaching behind her to grab the vampire’s arms and draw them around her waist. The redhead molded herself into Tara’s back and watched over the Slayer’s shoulder as her counterpart scurried to the mini-fridge.[br]
“Frozen peas!” the hacker cried out victoriously, sitting down next to the injured Tara on the bed and handing the makeshift icepack over. The blonde shyly smiled back before wincing in pain and raising the bag to her face. Both girls seemed lost in each other’s eyes until the Slayer's loud "AHEM!" jerked them back to their predicament of indeterminate danger. Willow cautiously inched one hand across the bedspread toward Tara’s, a none-too-subtle move that did not go unnoticed.[br]
“Will you two just calm down,” the Slayer rebuked. “There’s no need to go flinging us into another wall…we’re just here for a friendly visit. I AM the Slayer for crying out loud…the Chosen One…the goody good guy? We’re not going to hurt you.”[br]
“M-maybe YOU aren’t,” Tara conceded, lowering the frozen vegetables to the bed. “But what about HER?” she challenged, pointing at the vampire, who was rapidly morphing back and forth between her demonic and human visages, all the while playfully snarling and gnashing her teeth.[br]
“Pet,” the Slayer warned without turning to look at her lover’s antics, which ceased at once. “If you can’t behave, we’re going right back to our dimension, missy.”[br]
The undead fiend rolled her eyes and amused herself with sucking on the tantalizing column of her Mistress’s neck.[br]
“Well then why are you here?” Willow asked, her exasperation evident.[br]
“What? Can’t a girl cross a dimension to look up an old friend?” the Slayer smiled innocently. “I just wanted to see how you were doing…what you were doing…who you were doing,” she teased, tilting her head to the side and moaning as her vampire continuing bathing her neck. She focused heavy-lidded eyes on the hacker. “Not too long ago you were begging to stay in my world…are you really so unhappy to see me, love?”[br]
“It’s a little confusing,” the redhead sidestepped the question and shot a quick glance at the blonde seated next to her, who appeared to be in shock.[br]
Confusing…good word…I’ll take ‘Stating the Obvious’ for $1000, Alex, Tara quipped to herself, shifting her focus between Willow and the vampire, who lazily opened her eyes and smirked knowingly at the blonde. Tara instantly dropped her gaze to her lap and shifted self-consciously, her thoughts returning to the coffee shop.[br]
She had noticed the redhead across the room watching her, but had initially dismissed the attention as a case of ‘hey, look at the spaz being spazzy.’ It was only when she’d looked up and clearly read the girl’s lips mouthing “wanna snuggle” that Tara had nearly choked on her mocha. When she’d had the nerve to glance at the redhead again, she’d seen the same raw hunger in those green eyes that was so blatant in the vampire’s now.[br]
It was both exciting and unsettling coming from the more or less evil undead…in a ‘does she want to eat me or does she want to eat me?' way. From the enigmatic girl who seemed strangely protective of her, however, it awakened the almost overwhelming desire that had so unnerved her she’d fled the Espresso Pump in embarrassment. Confusing, she concluded with a sigh and returned her attention to the conversation.[br]
“How did you get here, anyway?” Willow asked.[br]
“Hmmm…funny story, actually,” the Slayer mused.[br][br][br]
Flashback: 8 months previously, in Dopeygayland…[br]
“No, you have to summon her. You’re the ‘wronged party’ or whatever.”[br]
“But what if she’s cranky?”[br]
“I’ll protect you from the mean old demon, Kitten,” Tara cooed.[br]
The vampire heaved a dramatic and wholly unnecessary sigh before reciting in her most bored voice: “I summon Anyanka in the name of wronged women everywhere.”[br]
The demon emerged in a flash of light and smoke.[br]
“Who summons Anyanka?!” she demanded.[br]
“I do,” Willow drawled.[br]
“You? You’re a vampire,” Anyanka sneered. “Can’t you handle this yourself?”[br]
“Well, there’s a slight problem there,” Tara stepped in to explain. “The person we need to deal with was brought here by your counterpart from another dimension…we need to get to that world…you’re going to help us.”[br]
“Slayer!” the demon hissed. “Why should I?”[br]
“Because that Anyanka lost her power source here. We found it and want to return it to her. If you don’t help us, I’ll rip yours off of your neck and send both to D’Hoffryn…your fierce name will become a joke…a cautionary tale for vengeance demons everywhere.”[br]
The Slayer and the demon stared menacingly at each other for long minutes before Anyanka threw up her hands and shifted to human form.[br]
“Fine! I’ll open a frickin’ portal! But this better involve some juicy vengeance…I’ve got a reputation to maintain, you know!”[br]
“Oh yes,” Tara nodded, trying to keep a straight face. “My pet here caught me with this other dimension’s version of her, and demands payback.”[br]
Willow rolled her eyes at her lover, who flared her own eyes and shrugged, biting her lip to hold in her laughter. Anya nodded enthusiastically and looked at the vampire, oblivious to the looks passing back and forth over her head.[br]
“Enacting proper vengeance is an important part of maintaining balance in a healthy relationship. Good for you!"[br]
“Thanks,” Willow sardonically replied.[br]
“So what did you have in mind? Evisceration? Ritual dismemberment?” The demon narrowed her eyes. “You’re just going to suck her dry, aren’t you?”[br]
“There’ll be some sucking,” Willow confirmed with a smug grin.[br]
Anyanka huffed in disappointment. “Vampires! So unoriginal!”[br][br][br][br]
“So it took us months to find that stupid necklace, which turned up in the lost and found box at the High School, then POOF! Anyanka sent us here. Kitten, don’t let me forget to find the Anya here and give that back,” Tara finished.[br]
“Anyanka! I can’t believe that—” Willow angrily exclaimed, jumping to her feet.[br]
“Kill W-Willow?” Tara quietly interjected, rising to stand next to the redhead, who had seemingly missed that little tidbit of information.[br]
“Hey! I thought you said you weren’t going to hurt us!” she argued, marching up to the Slayer, who brushed past her and flounced down on the bed.[br]
“That’s just what we told her. She wouldn’t exactly help us get here if we told her we wanted to, um…” she trailed off with a laugh.[br]
“W-wanted to w-what?” Tara stammered, her brow creasing.[br]
Vampire Willow smirked and slunk over to whisper in the blonde’s ear, which quickly turned bright pink along with the rest of Tara’s face and neck. Willow looked at her in confusion for a moment before the puzzle pieces in her head each dropped into pervy place.[br]
“HEY! I see what’s going on here! You’re on some kind of inter-dimensional nookie trip! Well, you won’t get away with it!”[br]
The Slayer giggled at the adorableness of Willow’s tirade, while the vampire ignored it completely and raked her eyes over Tara’s heaving chest, salivating at the sound of the blonde’s rapidly beating heart. Tara blinked at each of the three in turn before taking a step back and crossing her arms over her chest.[br]
“Let me get this s-s-straight,” she stated, looking from Willow to the Slayer. “You two boinked in another dimension, so now you two,” she shifted her gaze from the Slayer to the vampire, “show up here so we two,” pointing from the vampire to herself, “can get it on to even the scales?”[br]
The vampire nodded excitedly.[br]
Willow’s eyes widened and her jaw dropped.[br]
The Slayer said nothing, but peered intently at her counterpart and the rapid play of emotions over the girl’s face, which was again turned toward the hacker. The Slayer smiled to herself when she saw the blue eyes cloud and darken. After several long moments, blue eyes met blue, and the Slayer quirked an eyebrow expectantly.[br]
“What were you planning to do while we um…,” the blonde waved a hand between the vampire and herself and blushed.[br]
“I don’t know,” the Slayer teased, leaning back on her elbows and stroking the mattress. “Think this bed would hold four? Relax! I’m joking!” she continued before Willow could verbalize the ‘OH HELL NO’ look on her face.[br]
“And after…you’d go back to your dimension and stay there?”[br]
The vampire pressed close to Tara’s side and slid seductively down and up. “After you may not want us to leave.”[br]
Tara ignored the cheeky vamp and continued to converse with her twin. “And if I disagree?”[br]
“Tara?” Willow squeaked with startled incredulity, jerking out of her shock and grabbing the blonde’s elbow. She led them several feet away from the vampire, who blew out a puff of non-existant air, walked over to the bed, and plopped down on her lover’s lap. “You aren’t seriously considering this…are you?”[br]
“I have a plan…just play along, okay?” Tara whispered into the redhead’s ear.[br]
“Okay,” Willow agreed meekly, her entire left side tingling from the blonde’s warm breath on her ear. “I trust you.”[br]
“I’m not sure thi—”[br]
“I trust you,” Willow repeated seriously, looking into Tara’s eyes. They stayed that way, smiling dopily, until the smacking sounds coming from the bed became too loud to ignore, and they turned to see their alter-egos rolling around on Tara’s bed, vigorously kissing and groping. The blonde coughed quietly. The Slayer squeezed her lover’s ass and ground their pelvises together. Willow grabbed an orange off of Tara’s desk and threw it at her twin’s head.[br]
“GRRRRR!” the vampire snarled. The Slayer rolled out from under her and sat up, raising her eyebrows.[br]
“Well?”[br]
Willow and Tara exchanged a brief look.[br]
“I’ll do it,” Tara stated.[br][br][br]
TBC[br][br]

[GayNow]

I hope you like the changes.

Oh I do, I do! The changes are very nice indeed. Nice, clear explanations....no confusion....makes my little brain all comfy.

It was both exciting and unsettling coming from the more or less evil undead…in a ‘does she want to eat me or does she want to eat me?' way. From the enigmatic girl who seemed strangely protective of her, however, it awakened the almost overwhelming desire that had so unnerved her she’d fled the Espresso Pump in embarrassment.

I particularly liked this. A glimpse into PST's mind while still giving me a little chuckle. Little chuckles always make me feel happy.

“So what did you have in mind? Evisceration? Ritual dismemberment?” The demon narrowed her eyes. “You’re just going to suck her dry, aren’t you?”

“There’ll be some sucking,” Willow confirmed with a smug grin.

Anyanka huffed in disappointment. “Vampires! So unoriginal!”

Oh, now this is FUN! Anyanka...always so perceptive. But if she only knew what they really had in mind! WHEW!

“I’ll do it,” Tara stated.

Oh I can't wait to find out what Tara has planned. This should be interesting.

And, finally....

Carleen can attest to how whiny I get at the thought

Yes, Cam can get very whiny...very VERY whiny...but it's cute...so girly.

Can't wait for the next round, Cam!!!

Carleen

[UnicornLover]

CASS! WOW! i love where your going with this story!!!!!!!! i can't stop reading it!! it's so awesome!!!! is really going to do it? that would be intrusting!!!! oh my gosh! i love this story! please update really SOON! sorry i haven't updated lately, all your other chapters are just to awesome for words!!!! i glad i have time to coment today and look... i'm the second to reply! YAY me!! Update now!.... please? ~:moo

~*Shawna*~

p.s. i love this line...

does she want to eat me or eat me?

that is just so funny. it was very creative and well played. i like your sense of humor!

[Naeryn]

“Oooh, Mistress…remember the time we—”

“Hush, Kitten,”

“Let me get this s-s-straight,” she stated, looking from Willow to the Slayer. “You two boinked in another dimension, so now you two,” she shifted her gaze from the Slayer to the vampire, “show up here so we two,” pointing from the vampire to herself, “can get it on to even the scales?”[br]
The vampire nodded excitedly.[br]
Willow’s eyes widened and her jaw dropped.[br]

“I trust you,” Willow repeated seriously, looking into Tara’s eyes. They stayed that way, smiling dopily, until the smacking sounds coming from the bed became too loud to ignore, and they turned to see their alter-egos rolling around on Tara’s bed, vigorously kissing and groping. The blonde coughed quietly. The Slayer squeezed her lover’s ass and ground their pelvises together. Willow grabbed an orange off of Tara’s desk and threw it at her twin’s head.[br]
“GRRRRR!” the vampire snarled. The Slayer rolled out from under her and sat up, raising her eyebrows.[br]
“Well?”[br]

BRILLIANT! I love the image of VW getting hit in the head with an orange... TOO funny. And ST able to completely switch emotions and actions on a dime... it's just hilarious!

[Killer In Me]

ooooooooo moooooorrre pllllzzzz..
this is so good. i dont no y i havnt seen this b4 its awesome, highly original.
pwease wright more soon pwease *puppy dog eyes*

[YMKA]

Oh Cam...... this is briliant.. ....I laughed so hard.....I'm not going to quote, cuz other people already did it....I loved the interaction between both Taras..... "eat me and eat me".... the "two" .... Can't wait to read more

M.

P.S I can't believe I forgot to mention it.....okay it was 2am and I just came back....but I was laughitng so hard when Tara Layer asked if the bed could hold 4 people .....for some reason when I was reading it all I could see was Faith saying it....

[stillrunning]

Oh wow Cam...I do believe I look like a total dork sitting here and laughing out loud the whole entire time. I just can't help it though! For some reason, the image of VW getting hit in the head with an orange just did me in, and I'm just now getting myself together enough to leave you fb. You, my friend, are freakin' brilliant!

[watty]

Cam, before I start with feedback, I've been instructed to give you a hard time for leaving a cliffhanger, and although this is not necessarily my own opinion (which follows), I have been by Mistress Carleen, even though the whipping sounded like cowbells on my loudspeakers and not the fierce cracking of a whip cos "oh, you're on a Mac ...".

Yeah, I got suckered into doing this IM thing.

Now, after I read Part 5 I was overcome with an insane amount of envy. How come I can't write like that? Why can't I be half as crazy as that crazy woman? Or at least 25%? 10%? 2%? I went away and sulked for 2 days before getting off my butt to leave feedback. Cos otherwise it'll all be: It was great *jealous* Yeah Cam very funny *jealous* Hilarious *jealous* mumblemumblemumbleBrilliant VW/VST/PST/RGW interactions *jealous* Hot and sexy without actual sex *jealous* Tara's gonna do what? *jealous*

Seriously, this update had everything. From the sugary sweetness of

Both girls seemed lost in each other’s eyes until the Slayer's loud "AHEM!" jerked them back to their predicament of indeterminate danger. Willow cautiously inched one hand across the bedspread toward Tara’s, a none-too-subtle move that did not go unnoticed.

to the "innocent friendliness" of

“What? Can’t a girl cross a dimension to look up an old friend?” the Slayer smiled innocently.

to the painfully obvious double entendre,

“There’ll be some sucking,” Willow confirmed with a smug grin.

to the accusatory

“HEY! I see what’s going on here! You’re on some kind of inter-dimensional nookie trip! Well, you won’t get away with it!”

and planning

“I have a plan…just play along, okay?”

and of course all wrapped up in tongue-firmly-in-cheek humor, not to mention guest starring groping, licking, rolling, , hints of orgies, frozen peas, confident Slayer Tara, playful Vamp Will, about-to-have-her-eyes-pop-out RG Will and introducing formerly-painfully-shy-but-rapidly-developing-into-a-vixen Tara!

I don't think that was a cliffhanger per se, just an interlude, so we can digest the proposition, ponder on whether Tara will actually go through with the deed and reflect on what her plan might be. You've stopped it at just the right moment, to whet the readers' appetite and entice them to return for more, you've hooked them and you're now reeling them in slowly .

Aw heck, the hell with niceties. You left us with a CLIFFHANGER? How DARE you leave us with a CLIFFHANGER and not update for 2 days? What are you going to do about it ?!?!? You'd better update soon, or else ...

[WT214]

It was only when she’d looked up and clearly read the girl’s lips mouthing “wanna snuggle” that Tara had nearly choked on her mocha.

That made me laugh so hard Hmm I wonder what Taras got up her sleeve.

[cooper]

Dopeygayland was the best of your shorts that I have read. The fact it is becoming its own story is genius. Its silly and eloquent and has all kinds of goodies packed inside. From looking at the comments I guess I'm not the only one to love the "wanna snuggle" as well as the "there will be some sucking" lines. This is great, I can't wait to see what Tara's plan is

cooper

[potential_angel]

does she want to eat me or does she want to eat me

lol hehe im glad it was the nice lesbian sorta eating. hehe that was a great update cam. all with the yummyness

mel

[hermitfish]

Forgive me if I say nothing of pep or value for my response to this update but my brain has yet to completely denumb from 29 hours of driving. As soon as I dug out my computer, I wandered here looking for your update...I hope I get some credit for that.

You had me laughing by the time I read the title for this part...only to continue on through the inter-dimensional nookie trip revelation and a projectile orange. You do a great job of keeping the clarity between who's who. Now I eagerly wonder what 'Not as shy as we thought' Tara has up her sleeve. Great update Cam.

~Cyd

[caz]

I thought that this tale was wonderful as a short story, but now that you have extended it i think it's bloody brilliant! I haven't laughed so much in a long time. I love the interaction between RGW and VW - they are probably more alike than they think. I'm sure that RGW will prove it when she finally gets her hands on PST . I can't wait to read more.

Caz

[CaptMurdock]

Oh, this is gold. Put your Cold Shower on danger money, baby.

I love how normal, shy Tara nevertheless demonstrates her near-unflappability in even this situation. She might even consent to a quick "trade"...

Just a thought. [/code]

[the hero factor]

I like VWillow, switching in and out of game-face and playfully snarling. Hee!

“You? You’re a vampire,” Anyanka sneered. “Can’t you handle this yourself?”

That's funny, Anyanka being annoyed with VWillow.

“I don’t know,” the Slayer teased, leaning back on her elbows and stroking the mattress. “Think this bed would hold four? Relax! I’m joking!” she continued before Willow could verbalize the ‘OH HELL NO’ look on her face.

Willow's Hell-No-face. Pricless.

Hmm. I wonder what PSTara has in mind. Can't wait for more.

[meretricious]

cam, i actually don't find this story difficult to follow at all, as long as i don't think about it. thinking bad. i got the biggest kick this time out of vw snarling and ,well, vamping (that works 2 ways doesn't it?) while standing behind slayer tara. reminded me of harmony in restless snapping around giles.
every update in this has more laugh out loud lines than i would even try to quote (plus i'd have to learn to use the quote function and blow my inept rep) but i really love how after all the comedy of errors and identities you play with, you tie it back into the "i trust you" dialogue from "who are you" and bring up a big case of the warm fuzzies, then turn around and diffuse that with our bumping and grinding dimension hoppers. this is great fun cam!~ mary

eta-wait a minute cam, wtf, frozen peas in a DORM frig? all ours ever had was wine coolers yougurt and string cheese.

[JustSkipIt]

Hey there,
First off, totally ok and appreciated to crib. What a hysterical update. One of the things I really like about this fic is the way it changes with every update. One is scary, sexy, cute, etc. Very well done.

[ringwaldoeuvre]

Once again, Cam, you meld humor and intrigue seamlessly. And, as usual, you leave me hoping for more. The interaction between the characters is delightful, and it's very easy to follow each Tara and each Willow is speaking. Well done.

~Mary

[WickedReds]

Cam ur bloodly brillant! sorry again for my slowness with the FB but u know RL knocks u around here and there...
But u had me rolling with laughter and wiggling in my seat with sexually deviant visuals... but then again im a smut bunny so thos visuals r always there... cant wait for more, oh by the way.... smut...Smut..SMut...SMUt...SMUT!!!!!!

-reds

[behindhereyes]

Cam,

Turn my back for what seemed like a moment, and you went from this rather extrodinary writer, to absolutely freakin brilliant ( note to self excellent ass-kissage ) . This story runs from lil scary, to thrill ride, to someone please ride . You are fantastic with the covert shout-outs to people .
Love the story, and pretty damn fond of the author !

behindhereyes
Kim

[wimpy0729]

Hi there. Remember me? hehe How's them chaps feeling there, Cam? You might want to try a little powder if you're chafing.

Please forgive my super lateness, but real life has me in a whirlwind and I'm finally getting to read and just had to give you some well-deserved feedback.

Okay, you know you might have to put me on the confused train here. This is almost like a "Who's on first" deal, but here it would rather be "Who's on who?" Only your warped mind could come up with this stuff Cam, and I'm so glad it did. Just remember to speak stupid so my tiny little brain cells can comprehend.

Can't wait for more!

Wimpy

[onlyhalfevil]

hey, so glad that you continued the story. that was very funny already, and now this, having VW and ST travelling to the original dimension to get some more fun, it's just a riot! the dialogue's great, and love the vampire willow shifting in and out of game-face, it's so visual and laugh out loud silly. that's just one example, the rest have quoted so much already. well, just to say i really like this fic, it's pure entertainment of the happy fuzzy kind.

[terra21]

Heheheh. I love when I read a fic and I do nothing but smile and laugh, with an occasional gulp and whew.

a case of ‘hey, look at the spaz being spazzy.’

I don't think I've lived a day without thinking this while someone looks at me. LOL.

And the orange to the head,

Oh btw, is PST is turning into Vixeny Tara?


terra

[TemperedCynic]

In lesser hands, this chapter could have degenerated into a teen boy's wet dream. All the elements were there, but you steered the craft deftly through rough seas and are pointing to Goddess-knows-where! I love how ST and VW are "amped up" versions of their RL selves, but I cherish the total sweetness of the originals. As mentioned above, Tara is one tough hombre to handle herself in such a situation - Willow is a Scooby and can deal but this is new territory for shyTara. She adapts well, that girl - she'll outwit the sex-crazed other-worlders and then surprise spazzyWillow. How, you ask? I suspect spazzyWillow will try to leave Tara after this mess is over, thinking that Tara would want nothing to do with her. Hope that does happen, because the redhead would be quite surprised. Keep going, Cam, this is just wonderful.

[Killer In Me]

come make with the smutt post, go go!!!
ill giv you a pwitty flower aint it purdi.
please update soon