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 Post subject: Re: You Make Me Smile
PostPosted: Sat Oct 22, 2005 12:00 pm 
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Time for ? and a reply... Woooo so cute it was cute... it is cute.

I think I know what Spencer wrote to Santa. A cute red restaurant lady for his mom and maybe hoping Logan will take him somewhere just the two of them. You know mother and son time.

I'm still wondering if Willow saw Tara's paintings. Maybe she was to focused on the Spencer art to see them or just forgot to look further. Or Tara had taken the wrong ones with her. She had left the best art at home. Is that it? Is Willow coming over for a cup of coffee one night and then she will see the real Tara art? I meant paintings not Tara love....ok that too but you know what I mean.

And I was wondering if Willow will be posing for Tara so she could paint her....naked :glasses heeee this is NC17 you know.

Well I get the feeling that shy Tara will leave the building soon.

This update is soooo cute and the three of them together is just perfect.

Please Please Please Please Please update soooooooon please!!! pretty please.

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 Post subject: Re: You Make Me Smile
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She had always gotten the suspicion that he wanted more than a professional relationship with her, which was so totally out of the question that it wasn’t even a question anymore. It was a Picasso painting.


There are no words for how funny and wonderful that Picasso painting line is. Just awesome.

Spencer is so cute. I love the "I'm six!" when he's introduced to Willow. Heh. And the restaurant lady stuff was funny, too. Especially when Tara said the same thing when she realized who Willow was.

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Yep. I check the column marked "cute" for this fic.

Definately an A in my book. And I'd like to read more soon please :D

It's late. I need to study.. thus equaling the lack of proper feedback again.

But more soon please :D haha

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Hey Emms! Remember me?

Sorry for the tardiness. I'm finally getting some time to read again and of course, was so giddy to see you having yet ANOTHER wonderful story. This has your trademark touch of sweetness factor, and I'm sensing soon to be romantical factor. I feel sorry for Tara having to deal with Logan's general crappiness. It's one thing if it's just you, but when there's a child involved, it makes it so much worse. She's so selfish not seeing what she's doing to Spencer, not to mention Tara.

Anyway, back to the good stuff. So...they're having lunch. I love Tara taking the initiative (no reference to Riley's old employer).

So, yay, yay for Emms. Can't wait to see what comes of their lunch date.

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Awe Taras Shadow you are such a sweetie for checkin' up on the update. :x

Hi everyone! I know there should be an update posted by now....I'm sorry for the delay, I just haven't really been in the writing mood lately. I do have quite a bit written on the next update, so whenever I get the next inclination to write, this story will be at the top of my list. Thank you all for reading and leaving such wonderfully kind feedback. You all are the greatest!

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To everyone that reads this...

We all know Emms has been really busy lately. With her art work and writing like 999999999 fics on this board in one year time. Wooo that is really woooooo. And off course her personal life.

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Emms I don't want to push you into anything...belief me take your time as long as you need...no hurry at all.

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Just reading the post above this one quote.

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I'm sorry for the delay, I just haven't really been in the writing mood lately.


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Emms that makes us all a little worried...You aren't in the mood to write?

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That's why I thought it would be nice to give you a little knock on your shoulder for all the work you have done.

So everyone who wants to join me on this. Can leave a few words here for our dear writer. PS no pushing for updates or begging. That would just bring pressure on her. We don't want that do we.


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 Post subject: Re: You Make Me Smile
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ok here's a little shout out for the wonderful ms emms and her all-around wonderfulness... i've really enjoyed your work whether it be fanfiction, poetry or drawings... every single time i read your written work or see an artwork proves to me more and more just how deep a well of creativity you have... simply amazing!... every one of them a glimpse to ms emmy's inner world... and everyone of them a gift to us humble readers...i know what it feels like to be in that sort of stupor where there is just little juice left to squeeze... it happens to the best of us and to the worst of us... and if you're lucky enough like me, it happens more often that you'd like... i'm not really eloquent with words or anything, so please i hope you bear with my ramblings... i just wanted to say that you can take as much time as is necessary with the writing of this and your other works... no one's pressuring you (especially after reading henny's post, no one will dare :-D ) into pushing yourself when the words are just not there yet... speaking for myself, i can wait... meanwhile, i can always read your other works to tied me over... they are wonderful enough to be rewarded more than one reading... if you are anything like me, you are the type of person who never gets satisfied until you get it just right and never leaves things half-baked (unless you really intended to) and i totally can relate to that so i totally understand... your words of encouragement have really touched something within me... enough to make me feel i can do even better... and i will always be grateful for that... so here i am with my simple words trying to express my support as you have given me... i may not be able to ever express in words just how grateful i am, but i hope that through these simple words i have sent it across... your well runs deep and it will fill up again pretty soon, so i am not worried..

ok, that's my two cents worth! please feel free to tell me if i'm going way overboard on this...

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Well I hope I am posting this is in the right place & didn't miss a link or something but anyway...
Well what to say about the divine Ms Emms? Emms you know I how much I love your writing and if you don't you should & although I don't post in them I do visit the Studio and the Longue and I love your work on there too. You are so amazingly talented Emms and such a lovely & nice person as well. It was your work and writing that originally got me interested in fanfic so I thank you sooo much for introducing me to such an amazing world. You are always there if someone asks for your help and you have so many fans on here. I haven't been here for all that long but I can honestly say that I have enjoyed every moment being here reading your posts, your fic, you poems and looking at your artwork. Thank you so much Emms and we all love you!!! :kiss1
(It won't be long till little miss tarebear comes here and expresses her praise too! EDIT- she even beat me too it...)

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Emms,

Just a small thought...
Your writing puts a smile in my heart. Thanks!

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Hello ms Emms,

I'm one of your big fans and I mean BIG BIG BIIIIIGGG. I just wanted to let you know I really adore your work in different ways. :flower

I'm not the only one out there. I just chatted with our old friend Rhi the smut bunny well she wished she had more time to leave you a big big BIG reply (because of farm work and a sick horse she wasn't able too do it) and she promised she would do it this year not really sure when yet...but this year. In the meantime I'm her homing pigeon so on behalf of her. I can tell you that she worships your work.
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As a poor, unfortunate senior in high school, I have been busy working on countless papers and projects until past midnight for the past few nights. You're fics give me a half an hour long mini vacation every night before I finally call it quits and go to bed. Instead of falling asleep thinking of Macbeth and what Shakespeare is really saying, pre-calc problems I may never actually understand, college deadlines, World War I, and other assorted school related horrors, I fall asleep thinking about my latest adventure in the world you create with your fics. For that, I am eternally grateful.

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Hi everyone :applause I'm close to posting the next chapter, but I wanted to stop in first, and leave you all some much needed responses to your wonderful feedback. I know it's been a long time and I hope that everyone's still interested. :flower

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I am glad the ladies finally get a chance to talk a little. They know each other's names now and are meeting for lunch. I look forward to seeing how it goes.


Yep, the lunch meeting is next :-D

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Okay, I'm loving this fic. Your writing is descriptive without being overly so, just perfect. And Spencer is so sweet and cute, I love him!


Thank you. I'm glad you find the tone of the story, not too overbearing. :-D and I'm delighted that you like the story, thus far! :x

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Yey update! It’s so nice to come home after a hectic day to find an update to a fic I’m beginning to love more and more with each update! Thanks for completing my night!


Awww, thank you sweetie :blush But now I feel all bad for having waited so long between postings. I hope you still like the next chapter as much. :-D

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I so love the little man! He’s such a sweet little boy. He’s had his share of heartaches in such a young age (mostly from Logan’s empty promises), but still, he has such a generous heart (what with forgiving Logan every single time and literally giving away his art to a virtual stranger!) I think he takes from his mommy Tara. And writing a letter to Santa so early… hmmmm it must mean there is something really important he wanted. I think I may have an idea of what it is though (or is that wishful thinking on my part hehe ). Not only does he have a big heart, he is also talented (I assumed that the art Willow was looking at were Tara’s[bad of me ]) AND he is intelligent as well for not forgetting the “restaurant lady!” Can I keep him for myself? He’s just so cute I wanna hug him and never let him go (but there is oxygen becoming an issue if I hug too tightly and getting arrested for kidnapping hehe ).


hehehe...that bit of feedback bordered on a ramble, there sweetie. :lol But I liked it. :glasses And yes. You are right. No good can come from kidnapping....it's much safer to enjoy Spencer from a distance :-D

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I was all with the sigh with the description about Tara and Willow wanting something missing in their lives for so long. I know the feeling of Tara wanting somebody to take care of her. She’s been taking care of someone else for so long (Spencer and I assume Logan as well) that she just wanted someone to take care of her for once… To let go and let someone else help hold the reigns with her. I know Willow's drive for success (coz I feel it myself everyday too when I step out of the door), but coming home to an empty house, she is beginning to think is this all worth it? Was success worth not knowing the warmth of someone in her bed and the look of love directed only at her? I so look forward on the development of their feelings for each other, but this early, Tara feels that undeniable tug… to for once be bold enough and reach out to this woman! And Willow in babble mode says it all! Hehe


You are right. There is so much that they could give eachother, and that is so important in life...it's about balance. Tara needs someone to take care of her, for a change, and Willow needs someone that's going to slow her down a little and show her that life is not all about work. They're perfect for eachother, I think. :-D

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Cant wait for that “quick” lunch, but with these girls and the little man, I’m sure it wouldn’t be quick at all!


hehehe....well, I've been writing it for how long now? a couple months? so I'd say it is the longest "quick" lunch in all of history! :lol

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I’ve been mostly a lurk girl these past weeks, but I just love this fic and I just had to let you know that… I love all your works actually… Keep up the GREAT work!


I'm so glad that you came out of lurkdom, and thank you so much for all your kind words. :|

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As usual, your imagery is outstanding. The two lonely hearts, each wanting more from her life, more human contact, someone to love. I can just see it, like a movie -- Tara pensive with her hot cup of tea and Willow in her large empty bed staring at the ceiling -- the atmosphere your words paint is so palpable.


Thank you, dear. :blush

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Not surprised they run into each other at the festival, though I'm glad that it's Spencer who notices Willow first and engages her. Willow's banter with Spencer is so sweet, a good sign of things to come. Like I said before, Little Man Spencer deserves the love of two parents and it seems he may have found the missing family unit. Now, only if Tara realizes it ...


Thank you. I felt when I was writing that part between Spencer and Willow, that it was completely necessary, so I'm grateful to know that it came off so well.
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Emms, I'm so glad that things appear to be moving right along with the girls and that they are having lunch together. Spencer sounds very talented. Nice twist with us thinking Tara would be the artist and Willow would love her paintings, but it ended up being Spencer instead. I was afraid that Tara wasn't going to go to the show at all since she couldn't summon up the motivation to paint the night before. The description here is so crisp and clear; your writing is so vivid.


Thank you so much-- on all accounts. :| And, I'm glad you like twists...cause there's a few more to come. :glasses :-D

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For The Love of Tara Thank you so much sweetie.

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Well, this is just what the doctor ordered, nice and fluffy with a dash of angst to spice things up just a touch.


yes, but just a dash, mind you....angst can be very spicy.

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Okay, I know everyone else is saying the same thing, but damn, that Spencer is cute. Though how could any child of Tara's be anything else, right?


I have to agree there :x

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Her ex though? A very complex character there, capable of inspiring intense dislike and abject pity simultaneously. Sure, she's a crap mother, and hello? Cheating on Tara? What kind of mental defective would do that? But I can't help but feel a bit sorry for her. Which is probably what you were trying to do, so I hardly need to tell you that, now do I?


Yes, it's true. She hasn’t exactly presented herself as an exemplary mother...but I think she's like a lot of people; in the way that she's at least making an attempt (okay, so it's a drunken attempt) to have a relationship with Spencer (some of the time)...and she hasn't exactly made any right decisions thus far...but I sense change in the air.

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Your version of Willow here is her usual quirky self, but with her you're also painting a detail portrait of loneliness. That scene with her alone in her penthouse staring out the window? Classic.


Thank you. :blush

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This Kirkland Jr pillock? Definitely not liking him. I'm getting the urge to kick him hard in the goolies, but I suppose every story needs a bad guy, right? Well, he seems to fit the bill, from what little we've seen of him.


Yes...poo-poo on Kirkland Jr. I'm sure Willow's going to end up kicking him, (as you said) hard in the goolies before this story is over. :lol yes...I'm quite certain of that. hehe

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She had always gotten the suspicion that he wanted more than a professional relationship with her, which was so totally out of the question that it wasn’t even a question anymore. It was a Picasso painting.


I loved the way you phrased that by the way. A Picasso painting?


Thank you.

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Nice way to portray the instant connection between Willow and Tara, with both of them covertly eying the other. Then the casual first meeting that goes nowhere? Nice way to ramp up the tingle of anticipation. And the way you closed off part two, with the reveal that they'd both be at the sidewalk show? Great cliffhanger. Though does it really count as a cliffhanger? Maybe it should be more of a hillclinger?


Yes, I like that. Hillclinger, it is. :lol

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Then, in this latest update, you show that Tara, despite having Spencer, is just as lonely as Willow is. Hmm, I wonder what could fill the void in both women's lives? I wonder .... Nope, haven't a clue.


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Okay, I have to ask, a stuffed dog? We are just talking about a stuffed animal right? Nothing taxidermy related? Cause that would be just ... eeuglh on so many levels.


No, no, no...definitely stuffed in the cuddly way...there's nothing taxidermish going on....yet. hehe. But seriously though, remember that big dog Willow always had on her bed during season four?

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Hmm, I have my suspicions about what Spencer's wish could be. I'm going with either making his Mum happy ie bring the Willster into their lives, or something about Logan. That being said, I've probably just jinxed myself into being completely incorrect.


perhaps incorrect isn't the right word....premature, maybe. Spencer is very much fixated on Logan right now, so it wouldn't surprise me if he's writing to Santa in order to get his missing mommy to return. But then again, it could be something else all together :lol (I'm evil) :lol

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I loved that little detail about how Spencer knew not to go wandering off. I know I did enough of that as a kid. The whole bit where Tara stood on his shoe? I don't know why, but I just really loved that.


I'm so glad you loved the stepping on the shoe. I actually went back and forth with that more than a few times...I very much wanted to get across that the stepping on Spencer's shoe was a maternal thing and not a reason to call Child protective services. LOL

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finally, that bit where Willow's trying to cajole Spencer into taking payment? Fantastic.


Thank you so much for leaving such detailed and wonderfully thoughtful feedback. I really appreciate the time and energy that must have taken. :x
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But oh such a lovely update this time Lil Spencer is so cute, wanting to give his paintings to Willow for free, and being this little man. So far so good, the little boy seems to like Willow a whole lot So there shouldn't be too much trouble over accepting Willow being around, cuz she's gonna be. Wonder what's gonna happen with Logan though...

Oh my I'm hooked Can't wait for next update!


Oh, I'm certainly glad you're hooked *laughs evilily*

Thank you for leaving feedback.

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Ooooh, they're already going to lunch. Things are moving along quite nicely so maybe a little isn't too far off? Love this fic! Tara would be a good mom and Willow would look hot in a business suit.


Hi there Amy! Well, I’d say there could be a little kissing soon….and I agree Willow would look hot in a business suit.

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Jeanne, I've been sitting here for ages trying to create a reply that would equal your wonderful thoughts. I couldn't. I just want you to know, I think you're great and I very much appreciate your support and kind words.

I don't pretend to be the best writer...or even a good writer, for that matter, but each time I get a few words from you (or a ramble, usually right? :lol ) it makes all the heart I put into writing, worth it. Thank you.

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Hi there, Anne! :|

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Another loverly (spelling intended) story for us to follow ... two lonely women wanting to find their soulmate, but what trials must they go thru' first? Will W & T fall in love, will they be happy ever after? Is this the Kitten Board? Thank goodness, yes to all of the above.

Love your setting and your OC, especially lil' Spencer. He's a very talented little boy to be able to paint so well ... he probably gets his talent from his Mom. I bet I know what his Christmas wish, and I bet he gets it, one way or another.


Thank you sweetie, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Yes....definitely a happy ever after :x
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errrrrrrr you excite me with an update and then you leave me hanging!! Oh well ill deal but what a wonderful update!! Willow and Tara meet again! Yay!! ....and is this little get together a date????..... my one prediction for the day is that spencers wish was to get tara to find someone (like willow) haha well thanks for the update!!! Please continue!!...


Hi sweetie...wow, well....it's been too long since I've updated this fic, I'm looking forward to getting back to it though. :-D Thank you for the kind words...and yes...I guess the little get together could be considered a date...which might eventually lead to an even bigger date. There could be cooking involved even.


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Heh, 'restaurant lady', I like that


Children tend to go on what they know :lol

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Y'know, I had a sneaking suspicion early this chapter that it would be Spencer's art, not Tara's, that caught Willow's eye - not that Tara's art isn't eye-catching, I'm sure, but I got the impression her work wasn't going to be on show today, what with the general uninspiredness. Yay me


Yeah, I figured a lot of people would suspect that, because I practically said as much (with out actually saying it) at the beginning of the update when Tara asked Spencer if he put his canvases in the car.

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I loved the image of Willow and Tara, separately, wondering about their lives. Tara sitting there, with the music on the other side of the window, the barrier between her and life-going-on type things. And Willow with her stuffed dog That's very cute - I hope the stuffed dog doesn't get booted out of bed once Tara takes up residence. Willow/Tara/stuffed dog is an allowable threesome on Pens, right?


Probably, but it's kinda oookey, if ya ask me. :lol

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I too am curious about Spencer's letter to Santa - will it prove to be "Please being Lee-lee back?" (heartbreak, angst), or "Please send Mommy a hot redhead for kisses and gay love, whatever that means, I heard it somewhere and it sounds like Mommy's kind of thing," (joy)? If the latter, well, lunch is a start


I hope it's the latter, but I guess we'll have to wait and see.
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Yeah, a new update. Thank you Emms!!! Yet again great & I love that Willow and Tara are taking things slow and not rushing into anything sudden. Spencer is still so cute & I love Willow's interaction with him, what a great family the three would make!


Thank you. I'm so glad you like the story! :-D

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Ms. Emms, just wanted to drop a line and say that I absolutely love this story. Thank you for not going overboard with the angst, but giving us just enough to where it isnt boring(Not that your stories would ever be). Logan is an absolute doll! Again, thanks for the journey and I look forward to more!

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Here are the rest of the replies...a little late, but here all the same.

I'll be posting the update directly after these. I just want to say again, a big thank you to everyone who has left a few words. Writing is hard sometimes and I think I speak for writers everywhere when I say; we really appreciate all the wonderful kitten feedback. I know, for me, anyway, it makes all the hard work worth it. Thank you.

now...on with the rest of those replies!!

Oh also... a double thanks to my dear friend Henny who's always there to lend an ear when I need one. Thanks, sweetie. You're the best!

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CrazyTaraWitch I'm so glad you're enjoying. Thank you for leaving feedback! :x

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Henny-poo! You've beat me into submission girl! :lol Because of you I've finally finished the next update! (which I will be posting shortly )

Thank you so much for all your support and kind words, sweetie.

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There are no words for how funny and wonderful that Picasso painting line is. Just awesome


:blush Thank you.

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Spencer is so cute. I love the "I'm six!" when he's introduced to Willow. Heh. And the restaurant lady stuff was funny, too. Especially when Tara said the same thing when she realized who Willow was


Thank you. I just had to write in the "shout six" I think it's universal that all six-year olds do that. And it seems localized to just that age group too. LOL Every time I meet a six-year old, they always feel the need to anounce that they are six. It's very important to them. it's very comical. LOL.

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VixenyTarasHot Oh good. Cute it is, then. :-D

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WIMPY! OMG! Where have you been lassie??? it's been like....FOREVER! :applause

I'm so glad you like the new story! You know me...I'm always starting a new one before I finish the others. :lol

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Well what to say about the divine Ms Emms? Emms you know I how much I love your writing and if you don't you should & although I don't post in them I do visit the Studio and the Longue and I love your work on there too. You are so amazingly talented Emms and such a lovely & nice person as well. It was your work and writing that originally got me interested in fanfic so I thank you sooo much for introducing me to such an amazing world. You are always there if someone asks for your help and you have so many fans on here. I haven't been here for all that long but I can honestly say that I have enjoyed every moment being here reading your posts, your fic, you poems and looking at your artwork. Thank you so much Emms and we all love you!!!


Thank you, lolli. I think I forget sometimes that there is more to me than just updates. And it's easy to get lost in that frame of mind occasionally... thank you for reminding me.

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Ahhh yes. breaks are very necessary. :lol please feel free to take them often.. :shock BUT NOT TOO OFTEN! We wouldn't want those grades to start slippin' now would we?....I'll be keepin' my eye on you missy! Now get back to work! *sound of whip cracking*

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Willow still couldn’t believe that they’d gotten an actual table. The small deli was packed with hungry people from the exhibit; many of them tourists. But the blonde seemed to have friends everywhere; first at the art show; people had stopped to shake her hand and kiss her cheek. Then at the deli where an across-the-counter kiss on the cheek had gotten them the best table in the place--not that Willow thought the woman was some kind of kiss-slut or anything, in fact the blonde had seemed conservative with the kissing and not at all flamboyant.

Willow shifted her red and white sneakers under the table--it was true that they didn’t really go with the expensive leather jacket she was wearing, but then again, Willow had always been more of a comfort-gal than a cutting-edge, fashion diva. In her youth she had even been considered one of the more “funky” dressers; in high school, all the way up until college, where her creative flare for the mismatched-matched sort of got lost amongst the equally exotic patterned and pressed folks in attendance.

“Do you paint as well?” Willow asked, directing her thoughts into a more forward motion. She couldn’t deny that she held a double intention in wanting to know. Aside from being truly interested in this blonde woman, Willow also had to consider the dwindling window of opportunity for employing an artist for the Kirkland Group. And since she couldn’t very well hire a six-year old, she was forced to reasses her options.

“Oh, yes. I don’t have anything out there today…I was going to, but I just…” Tara’s words ended. She didn’t want to admit to virtual stranger that she’d been feeling a little “off” the last couple days. But there was something in Willow’s eyes that gave Tara a sense of ease and comfort. She didn’t know what it was though…maybe just the day playing tricks and instilling a false sense of security. Willow’s eyes were green, and held a strength that made Tara want to open up to her. But she remembered Spencer seated between them, which was enough to make her censor her words.

“I would really like to see your work…Will you be showing again?” Willow asked, secretly hoping the inflection in her voice wouldn’t reveal her true intention-- which was simply to see this woman again and by that time, had nothing at all to do with art.

Tara nodded offhandedly and tried to recall when the next showing would be. She drew a blank. Tara watched Willow over the rim of her glass as she pretended to drink the iced tea inside. Spencer, seated beside Tara, shuffled in his chair which caused the metal legs to scrape across the concrete floor with a grating sort of sound.

“I’m going to Disney World for my birthday this year.”

Spencer announced proudly, taking a sip of his lemonade. The cup, the woman behind the counter had given him was child-sized and plastic. “You are?” Willow asked, turning her partial attention to the child, whom she could tell was waiting for her to respond. The rest of Willow’s attention skirted across the table, toward the gorgeous blonde, who, at that moment, was delicately picking a brown spot of lettuce from her sandwich. Willow never knew how deliciously exciting damaged produce could be, until that moment. She was riveted.

“Yep. Isn’t that right Mommy?”

Tara smiled but said nothing. She wondered when those plans had been made; Logan had never said anything to her about it. Tara wondered if the other woman even remembered promising Spencer they’d go. Tara worried about what to say. She didn’t want to upset her son, but she didn’t want him to be disappointed when it didn’t happen, either. “We’ll see.” Tara said, deciding neutrality was best at the moment; she’d talk to Logan later that evening to get the full story. Tara grew quiet...She didn’t want to think about Logan.

Willow could sense the change in atmosphere immediately following the little boy‘s declaration. It was a heavy, silent kind of change and Willow felt the need to fix it. So she delved deeper into conversation, trying to keep things light. “I like amusement parks, If I had a back yard I’d probably put a Farris wheel in it…well not a Farris wheel, cause they’re scary, but maybe a camel for the kiddies to ride around on. But not a pony…because…well, lets just say there is a traumatic pony moment in my past that I’d rather not relive…ever,” Willow said, knowing full well that she had gone beyond filling the silence and had traversed fully into the land of babble. She knew that if she didn’t stop herself she might continue on, straight into her scary-pony past. Tara was smiling though, which made Willow feel more confident. However, she couldn’t help the fleeting wonder if amusement parks in general were a sensitive subject for Tara, or if her particular aversion was to this one specifically.

Tara smiled at the redhead’s babble. “Ponies aren’t that bad…sometimes, but not usually,” She said, putting Logan from her mind completely. Tara could feel Willow’s eyes on her which was making her feel a bit warm. Tara loosened the scarf she wore. Then, extracting it from around her neck and slipping it out from under the collar of her jacket, Tara set the flowing material on the only other empty chair at their table.

“Do you ride?” Willow took a bite of her sandwich, and noticing the way the blonde woman was removing the red and brown scarf from her neck, swallowed with a bit too much enthusiasm. Her throat clenched, threatening to lodge the food there, and kill her right on the spot.

“A little…I’m not that good, but I don’t fall off either,” Tara said. She caught Willow’s gaze momentarily, but it was gone before Tara could let her own linger. Spencer sat between them, he’d been silent for a long time and Tara wondered if he had sensed her silence from a moment earlier.

Tara could feel Willow’s gaze flicker to her, once more, from across the table. Tara deliberately kept her eyes on her sandwich. For the moment, the brazenness she’d felt when she’d boldly asked Willow to accompany them had fled, leaving her alone with feelings of self-doubt and a strange, unexplained tingling sensation just below her kneecap. It tickled and Tara had to take a bite of her sandwich to keep from laughing.

Willow regarded the beautiful woman curiously and wondered if the funny look on Tara’s face was in fact amusement, or if the blonde simply thought Willow was a complete dork.

“These are Antirrhinums.”

Spencer spoke suddenly almost as if he could sense Willow’s thoughts and meant to diffuse the situation before it had a chance to escalate into Willow saying, or doing something to embarrass herself. As if to further reiterate his statement, Spencer reached out to touch the delicate pink and white petals of the flowers in the center of the table.

“Yes, they are,” Willow said, amazed that a boy his age would know the scientific name for Snapdragons. “They’re pretty aren’t they?” Willow leaned forward to take a closer look at the flowers. Snapdragons had always been amongst her favorite flowers.

“I like them a lot.” Spencer smiled.

“Me too,” Willow said kindly, and was rewarded with a grin from the boy. “What grade did you say you were in, again?” She had to know. Willow recalled he’d said he was six…but since when did six-year-olds study botany?

For the rest of their lunch hour Spencer monopolized the conversation. He regaled Willow in detail on his daily adventures at the Montessori school he attended.

Tara sat back watching the interaction between her son and this beautiful woman across from her. She was amazed by the ease with which Willow exchanged conversation with Spencer. Tara, deciding Willow was a natural with children, wondered if she had any kids of her own.

Tara casually glanced down at Willow’s hand, her eyes gracing the redhead’s slim fingers, lingering only slightly longer than necessary to see that she wore no wedding ring--a small victory, but hardly evidence enough to convict. Maybe she was divorced…or dating someone. Tara wondered lightly on how to go about gaining such information without coming right out and asking.

Fortunately she didn’t have long to worry about it, because through the large glass window Tara could see Ginny, motioning for Tara to hurry up. Unfortunately that meant lunch would have to be over.

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They walked back across the street, causally dodging foot traffic and the street vendors who’d, it seemed, organized themselves into a most effective obstacle course. Tara gripped Spencer’s hand tightly, in order to keep him standing next to her, but felt him tug on his hand slightly, and loosened her grip.

Tara stopped once they had reached their stall, and tuned to Willow. “This was….fun,” She said, rocking back on her heels. She swung Spencer’s hand lightheartedly for something to do so she wouldn’t have to meet Willow’s eyes. She didn’t want this to end.

“It was…fun,” Willow agreed. Her gaze traveled away, of their own accord and down the woman’s body with the precision of a surgeon. Then shocked at her own behavior her eyes fluttered back to the safety of Tara’s face, so as not to make herself a candidate for the “Pervert files” that were, she was sure, kept on record somewhere at the police station.

Neither woman knew what else to say.

“You’re leaving already?” Spencer piped in, his tone a scathe away from a whine.

Willow came to her knees so that she was eyelevel with the young boy.

“Will we see you again?” he asked, tilting his head to the side.

“I um…I--” Willow looked in Tara’s direction for some sign that would guide her in her answer, but found none.

“What about your paintings?” Spencer asked.

Spencer put his hands on either side of Willow‘s face

“You could come over for dinner. Mommy, can Willow come over for dinner?”

Willow was surprised and had to be stop herself from pulling away from his small hands. She wasn’t used to children and didn’t feel prepared for this kind of physical interaction. “Oh…I don’t think that---your mom would…I mean…” Willow stammered, trying to answer before Tara could have a chance to object. All the while, Spencer kept his hands locked to Willow’s cheeks, forcing her to look at him. He smelled of bubble gum and fabric softener and Willow had to smile in spite of her position.

“--No! I mean, that would be nice.” Tara tried not to blush. “Unless you don’t want to….” She added, not wanting it to seem like she was forcing Willow into something she didn’t want to do.

“No, I do. I really do. Okay?” Willow, put her hands over Spencer’s warmer ones. Then lowering them from her face, she clasped them together in front of him as if he were praying. Willow smiled, then stood.

“Tuesday sound alright?” Tara asked. She could feel her teeth sinking into her bottom lip. She wondered if the suggestion of dinner on Tuesday made her seem presumptuous. Tara wondered if she should’ve let Willow pick the day. “That is, if you’re not busy,” she added, just to be on the safe side.

“Tuesday sounds great,” Willow said. Tara nodded and took a slip of paper from the table. Bending, Tara wrote something on the paper; it was her address and phone number. Willow took the slip of paper from Tara, and held onto it as she didn’t trust her pockets to keep it safe.

“Tuesday it is, then,” they both said at once, then laughed nervously. They smiled at each other shyly and shook hands awkwardly as if they’d just made a business deal, and then Willow turned to leave.

Willow had gotten a few paces away, then turned back. Spencer was waving with one hand while the other hand shielded his eyes from the sun. The cuffs of his blue sweatshirt had slipped down so that it looked as if he had no hands. Willow waved back, catching one last glance at Tara before heading in the opposite direction.

Willow knew she was grinning like an idiot, and a pair of older women even gave her funny looks as she passed by them on the way to her car…but it didn’t matter. Her thoughts were already turning to Tuesday.

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Wow, what a great birthday present for me for tomorrow, a new update of my favourite fanfic ever, & I'm first to leave feedback this time :-D :bounce! I can't get over how amazingly written the character of Spencer is, I love everything about him, especially the way he is initiating the relationship between his mother and Willow! Willow's interaction with him is so cute too and it's even better when the fact that she isn't used to children is established, it explains a fair bit actually! I loved the Willow babble at lunch too, I could just imagine Spencer's face looking up at her when she was babbling!

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Tara stopped once they had reached their stall, and tuned to Willow. “This was….fun,” She said, rocking back on her heels. She swung Spencer’s hand lightheartedly for something to do so she wouldn’t have to meet Willow’s eyes. She didn’t want this to end.

That is such a Tara thing to do, swinging the hand... awww, so sweet!
I like the way Tara checked for a ring on Willow's finger too, very subtle! Basically I loved the whole update and how the story is panning out!
Thanks Emms, can't wait for tuesday's dinner! :clap :p

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Aww yay spencers so adorable!! He likes willow already thats so cute!!! Well i cant wait for tuesday either!! Please update soon!
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Yay! for update-y goodness! :D :bounce :) :party

That was lovely Emms, lovely, & sweet, & cute & aww! :) I loved it.

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It seems Tara's got lots of friends, that's nice to see.

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not that Willow thought the woman was some kind of kiss-slut or anything, in fact the blonde had seemed conservative with the kissing and not at all flamboyant.
:lol Cute

Well, everything's looking very good for our girls; what with Willow getting on so well with Spencer (& a big yay! for Spencer), & a nice dinner date planned for Tuesday - that will be fabulous, Willow & Tara will both get a nice break from their usually lonely nights & they'll see how perfectly they fit together & they'll fall in love & everything will be perfect. :x

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“I’m going to Disney World for my birthday this year.”
Hmm, I do hope that Spencer doesn't get upset, I'm pretty certain that, if Logan did make that promise, she's not likely to keep it, but, I'm sure there's a certain redhead who could probably afford a trip to Disney World. :glasses

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“These are Antirrhinums.”
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Tara casually glanced down at Willow’s hand, her eyes gracing the redhead’s slim fingers, lingering only slightly longer than necessary to see that she wore no wedding ring--a small victory, but hardly evidence enough to convict. Maybe she was divorced…or dating someone. Tara wondered lightly on how to go about gaining such information without coming right out and asking.
I'm sure there'll be lots of opportunity for Tara to find out lots more about Willow when they have dinner together.

I'm very excited about the dinner - as I'm sure you've figured out from the fact that I've mentioned it in practically every paragraph. :D I can't wait to read about all the fun that they'll have.

Thank you for this update sweetie, it was exactly what I needed. :D

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not that Willow thought the woman was some kind of kiss-slut


Well she is KISS ME... KISS ME .. KISS ME TARA !!! moww wa moww wa lol that was so funny.

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you don't have to thank me :blush silly. It's all true and you so deserve it.

Back to the story.

I loved it they are both playing it cool...the whole are you or aren't you liking me theory. Then there is the eye contact. I want to look at you but I'm so shy and what if you don't like me or don't like what I am doing too you. That is so cute! Lucky for them that the little men is there to help them even if he doesn't really know what is happening or he is in love with the green eye lady.

It really is a big thing for Willow not to move away from Spencer's little hands. She is a business woman normally her work comes first. So it's kinda understandable that she isn't use to kids. So this little thing that went on is a big step even if it's just a normal thing of life for some people.

I really hope Logan won't forget to take Spencer. It will make there relationship better. But that also could mean that...(because I don't know when his B-day is.) Just think hypo if it is like 6 months away that could mean that W and T's relationship should be a few steps further and if Logan will take him away that could mean that Willow will be jealous about there closeness since she isn't the boys mom. Are you still following this? But yup a BUT you know me too well I need to have my but's. So if it's sooner and Logan won't show up and Tara can't afford. Willow can take them both. That would make there connection even better. Get it?? :wink

Like the rest off us I can't wait for the next update...just take your time!!! just relax a little now and then.

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I love it.
i love spencer he is so cute and he invite willow over.
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Go Spencer!!! I can't wait to read what will happen on tuesday.
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Ah... Emms that was great! Jeez, all that ackwardness, I was a nervous wreck just reading it. :-D Although Spencer and Willow seem to be connecting wonderfully. Maybe Dinner on Tuesday will be less ackward between Willow and Tara.

This chapter was full of hysterical lines. Way, way too many to mention without quoting your whole story,:-D but these two bits stuck out expecially funny to me. :lmao :lmao :lmao :lmao

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"It was…fun,” Willow agreed. Her gaze traveled away, of their own accord and down the woman’s body with the precision of a surgeon. Then shocked at her own behavior her eyes fluttered back to the safety of Tara’s face, so as not to make herself a candidate for the “Pervert files” that were, she was sure, kept on record somewhere at the police station.


I am looking forward to the two of them seeing each other again although I'm afraid Logan hasn't made her last appearance and might try some heavy interference.

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I'm just really enjoying this story. Spencer is such a delight. After writing my Fruitcake story, I am learning to have a real liking for cute kids. And Spencer is definitely a cute kid.

I like the bit of nervousness between Willow and Tara. Thank the heavens for Spencer...those two women would never get to the date stage if it weren't for him. I think you're developing their budding attraction very nicely.

Well done, Emms. So glad you came back to this. Can't wait for more.

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Emms,
So glad to see an update to this very cute story. Spencer seems quite the genuis, knowing the name for snapdragons. Of course we're reminded just how emotionally vulnerable he is though with his Disney comment. Surely this is something Logan told him and he's latched onto it. What an idiot she is. Willow's quite cute and Tara too. Well done.

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Funny scene at the deli. It's more than obvious to us, the readers, that there is interest and attraction between the two women. Yet they seem almost afraid to explore it. Willow keeps asking Tara questions, about whether she painted and whether she rode. Tara, on the other hand, seems to be more concerned with the tickle underneath her knee. It falls to Spencer to clear the cold air between them.

Even worse back at the stall. The emotional ping-pong they seem to be playing. If I were Spencer I'd be thinking, what do I have to do to get Mommy and this nice lady together?

:lol I guess this is the initial stage of a typical relationship. There's the tentative feeling out stage that is sweet yet awkward. I'm glad they have Tuesday coming up.
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I love this story. It is so sweet how Spencer is to Willow. Ooooo and it's gettin' good too. :-D Please update soon.


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Woo hoo! Update! I was looking forward to an update and you didn't disappoint! Spencer is such a cutie and smart for his age, sounds like a lil Willow in the making! :D

Cannot wait for more! :D

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Spencer is so cute! And I would be checkin out Tara's body too. Yea for kids outspokenness. Awesome update and I love your story!

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Yay! This fic rules. I love your writing style. It has a flow that is easy to read but never boring. It just kinda sucks you in until you realize you're at the end, I like that. Thanks for the lovely update!

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yay! so glad u came back to this.
the update was great, hope to see more soon!

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cute story! spencer is such a sweet boy! I think his letter is not about having Lee-Lee back... maybe he's asking Santa a proper girlfriend for his mother, someone who won't hurt their feelings and love them as they deserve.

my thoughts are turning to tuesday too... tomorrow, maybe? :)

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