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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby db » Tue Jun 27, 2006 9:30 am

I love love *love* it!!!

I love the perfect responses each of the characters have. I love how clearly I can picture where they are and what they are doing. I love Buffy and Giles and Tara and Willow.

but

*pout*

You have left me with so many questions!

Is the *other* Willow there? Or is *she* transported to this alternate dimension Willow's world? Is Willow in danger? What with her head problems and such -- shouldn't you get her to the hospital? ...and which season exactly is it - I mean, you mention Giles' apartment, so maybe it is season 5? But then you mention Lethe's Bramble and that wasn't until season 6. Is it early season 6?

I am so confused!

More please.

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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby JustSkipIt » Tue Jun 27, 2006 10:58 am

Hey SallyPants,

Another great update. And I swear that you're updating faster than you said you would. I'm not complaining at all; it's a very pleasant surprise. Actually an especially pleasant surprise since I'm working from home today because I forgot to take my computer to work. Seriously, I got all the way there and parked my car and got out and looked in the backseat--no computer! I guess it could be worse. I could have ridden the bus and had no way to get home again. Still, very frustrating. But I get to read a DD update so it's all worth it.

This update of course has to start moments after the last ended and you don't disappoint. I love your description of Willow's reaction to the kiss. It's not too much like she faints or has her heart explode with passionate love or something and also not the sort of controlled revulsion of people sort of on the edge of figuring/not figuring out that they're gay (exp: wiping her mouth with the back of her hand, etc.).

I love this paragraph:
She wasn't sure what the kiss had been intended to imply - really, it had been very short and had felt more like a greeting than anything else. But why would a stranger greet her that way? Was she European? And why was she walking along the street hand in hand with this girl? Or being led, really.

She's trying to assess the kiss and place into her "normal" worldview which basically says that Europeans kiss to great each other (although, don't they kiss on the cheeks?)(As an aside my extended family (and possibly all Jews, I don't know) kisses to greet each other occasionally on the cheeks but usually on the lips. I'm really thankful that as a young person, I had the sense to kind of observe other people and see that that wasn't the commonly accepted behavior).

Now I think we have enough evidence to say that Tara & Willow live wtih Buffy & Dawn: Tara made Dawn breakfast and Buffy took "the car."

Love the continued Tara not listening about coffee. You'd think that just Willow saying that she doesn't drink coffee would get Tara's attention.
"I'm glad," the girl said. "It's not healthy to only have coffee."

"I don't drink coffee," Willow responded.

"You haven't had any coffee? Is it opposite day?" the blonde said distractedly as she hurried across the courtyard to the front door of a ground floor apartment. "Well, don't worry. Giles will have some."


Lol Willow's edging away from Tara being "too close for comfort, actually." Tee hee. Again lol
What is it with this girl and coffee?
And of course she bursts into tears. I mean it just seems like too much at this point.

Now I'm going to make a prediction. I'm guessing that X/A are the missing "others" and that Willow has some connection to them or knowledge of them in her world. Ok, Anya doesn't make much sense because if Willow's world is a "normal" one, then Anya would have died 1100 years ago, but Xander could be her childhood friend or mortal enemy or whatever. Why do I predict this? Because you called them the "others" but didn't use their names. And I don't believe that's a mistake because you are becoming Captain Planning. So would Captain Planning accidentally not use X/A names? Seems unlikely. Also seems that if this world had a connection to Angel, the others would have jumped on it or shown some recognition of the name that Willow repeated a few times on the phone. Now that one I can say is a maybe because perhaps the others are just showing a bit of moderation in not reacting to her mentioning Angel. So maybe they do know him.

I'm glad that she's got their attention finally. I'm a person who can't stand reading/watching something where someone keeps saying things that are important and the other people never listen-- hit my head, strange day, don't drink coffee, etc. Even Tara who we fans and ff writers tend to imbue with an almost super-human empathy, completely ignores Willow's general distress and outright protestation.

Ok, I think that's enough. So well done and I can't wait for the rest. Thank you.
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby Grayson » Tue Jun 27, 2006 11:16 am

"Was she European?" Ha!

The thing I really like about this story so far is that it all seems realistic (as I often mention in my feedback to other stories, realism is important to me - or maybe I should term it believability, since the whole canon is based on something unrealistic). Realistically, someone like Willow isn't going to assume there's been a dimensional shift or whatever. That's not even on her radar screen. The moment in a fantasy story in which the normal person realizes that fairies exist (or that she's in a different dimension) is always the most crucial, and you've done a great job of slowly starting to bring everyone around to the realization that something is wrong.

In Tara's defense, she seemed to be in quite a hurry, a la the White Rabbit, so maybe that's why she didn't notice Willow's odd comments. But, like Willow, she had an expectation that things were normal. People hear what they expect to hear. We on the outside know better (like when you're screaming at the soap opera that someone realize their spouse has been switched with their evil twin...or maybe that's just me), but a normal person is going to take awhile to come to that conclusion.

Fortunately, canon characters (assuming that's the dimension Willow's been transported to) should be a little more ready to believe something weird like this could happen, so I'm sure they'll be on their way to straightening things out by the next chapter. But not too quickly, or the story would be over.
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby caz » Tue Jun 27, 2006 11:55 am

Hey - I'm European and I don't go round kissing people! :laugh

Good one Sally. Poor Willow - I bet she thinks that she's lost the plot. Hopefully she'll begin to trust Tara enough to let the blonde help her.

Looking forward to the next update. :bounce

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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby DaddyCatALSO » Tue Jun 27, 2006 12:25 pm

Well "Angel" can often be a last name, usually spelled "Angell" so the Gang might not have noticed and as for realizing it's an alternate Willow, well yes they should have no problem with putting that into perspective, once they realize it. Bu t the realizing part, well, bright as they Gang is gennerally they tend to be slow on the uptake, vis "The YOko Factor" "Intervention" among others.
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby spells42 » Tue Jun 27, 2006 4:00 pm

Hey Sally
Faaaaascinating. Poor Willow must think she's totally lost it. This looks like canon... call it R1 ...., all the gang is showing up, assuming the 'others' are Xander and Anya, plus demons. I wonder where R1's Willow is? Her continued absence suggests a whole bunch of possible scenarios. I wonder what supernatural threat they were researching and if it's got anything to do with this dimension duality?

Sits back to ponder :kitty

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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby mole » Tue Jun 27, 2006 4:36 pm

Yay! An update :party

Willow is well befuddled now. You did a nice job of caputring her increasing panic. And you've laid out the inner conflict regarding her reaction/feelings for Tara (e.g., Willow scootches away from her on the couch and yet feels a twinge of jealousy when Buffy is comforting Tara). And her reaction to the kiss:

She felt bewildered, flustered...and a sort of yearning. Was that what it was? It was as if the kiss, short as it was, had permeated her entire body with warmth and tingling. It was a feeling that she had never had before...


I like that the kiss wasn't followed by a sudden rush of recognition, love and naughty thoughts about Tara. It seems more "real" this way. But even though Willow doesn't know what's going on, her soul does. It's "yearning" for completeness, for connectin with its other half.

Now if we could only figure out what's causing the dimension hops, we can get to the smooch-filled reunion ;-) Oh, I'm sure there is much exposition and angst yet to come, but I'm looking forward to it just the same.

One thing I'm curious about: Is the 2nd dimension within in BtVS canon? If so, where in the canon timeline does transdimensional Willow arrive? Or are both dimensions A/U?

Looking forward to more!

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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby dorksrcool » Tue Jun 27, 2006 6:54 pm

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Yay Sally, I absolutely love this fic! I'm sorry I can't leave more descriptive feedback but I just started a new job and I'm super-busy right now. I promise the next fb I leave will be detailed, I'll even take notes.

I at least wanted to stop by and say that this one of my favorite fics already. Thanks for sharing.

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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby watty » Wed Jun 28, 2006 3:10 am

You knew that putting a "European" remark in this chapter will get you lots of comments didn't you. Smartass. :P

Poor Willow, so out of her element. Strange people calling her by name, expecting things from her, and a beautiful blonde obviously in some intimate relationship with her. Absolutely spot-on reaction, of her subconsciously (or even consciously) keeping a distance from Tara. And blah to people not listening either.

I'm also amused at how Willow-like this Tara is, with the babble, the non-sequiturs and the not listening re: coffee. She's definitely spent too much time with the love of her life. But also poor Tara, imagine your wife waking up one day and saying
"I've never met you before in my life."

It's enough to make you run for the hills. Well, I would anyway. Smart of Giles to play along by talking about calling the hospital.

Seems like they're expecting some impending doom, otherwise why would the other Willow have stayed up all night researching? I'm thinking Willow 2, if she's in Willow 1's dimension, is equally confused. If she starts talking about magic and demons I guess she'll have to be re-admitted into hospital.
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby willowbaby05 » Wed Jun 28, 2006 4:15 pm

:wave Hi Sally,
When Willow told Tara she didn't know her that abosolutly broke my heart. I can just image what the other Willow's going through. If there is another Willow?
And yet there is the Willow that's in this dimention. She has to face the fact's that there demons, she's a witch (or is she?), and she has a lesbian gay type lover!
Pretty hard to take in. But I hope she'll put through. Also I hope that Tara can pull through it in the process.
I love this fic so dont stop keeping the update's comming.
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby AntigoneUnbound » Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:22 pm

Sally Most Fine, Indeed~~Well, I saw that this story was on reply #69 and of course I just had to jump in on that.

Oh, I'm lovin' this story! It's fascinating, and you capture the details so well, esp. the emotional ones. Buffy's name brings a temporary respite to the gathering confusion, which makes the eventual anguish all the more palpable. It's as if rescue was close, and then proved to be anything but. I also like her reaction to Tara's kiss. Many first kisses (as depicted) have a sense of familiarity to them; I like that yours didn't. It teased, as all good first kisses do. But I digress. This is a really intriguing premise; I love that it's in your hands!

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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby Lonewolf22 » Wed Jun 28, 2006 11:09 pm

SallyMcFine: Great update, I feel really bad for Willow, not knowing what is going on and being confused. If that other Willow is at the Scooby meeting, is our Willow in the other Willow's world?(Try saying that 3 times fast) If not what is she going to think about everything? I felt really bad for Tara, I hope that everything is known to everybody pretty soon, I don't like to see Tara sad. I can't wait to read more.

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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby Emms » Thu Jun 29, 2006 11:00 am

Wow…how did I miss this update? :punish

Poor Willow…she’s all confused and trying to figure out what’s going on. And then the reoccurring bit with the coffee :lmao that was funny. I really feel kinda bad for Willow though…that would be so scary to one minute be in your normal life and then suddenly be transported somewhere else where you don’t know the people that seem to know you and the one person you do know is offering you coffee and making jokes about how you take it intravenously.

But I’m really starting to wonder where the other willow is… maybe she took Willow’s place in the other reality… maybe there’s a “coffee-drinking Willow” walking around in the other dimension wondering why everyone there isn’t offering her coffee… Okay… I think I’m confusing myself…

I hope the gang figures this out, and quick! :paranoid

seriously though, sweetie. I loved the update. ;-)

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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby SithLordWiccan » Thu Jun 29, 2006 12:03 pm

Sally, I gotta say that I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm still trying to debate whether or not Willow's consciousness inhabits the body of her counterpart in this reality or if the second Willow is out there somewhere (and for some reason I think of the scene from “Back to the Future II” when the two Jennifer’s meet one another), but I know that you’ll make the eventual discovery of that fact worth waiting for.

Like Emms, I chuckled about the oft-mentioned references to the other Willow’s caffeine addiction and this Willow’s lack of coffee goodness. I get the feeling that this is going to become a running gag, and something tells me that it will be good to have it.

Nice update, Sally. Can’t wait for the next one. :)
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby FineyMcFine » Fri Jul 07, 2006 5:48 pm

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Hey Vale - I want to know what happens too! :) Don't you fret, I'm moving to a biweekly posting schedule so if all goes well with the editing process then part 3 will be up on July 11 (USA time). (Let's hope it stays biweekly and not biweekly-curious.) ;) Thanks for reading!

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Yes, we do need more! I can't imagine what it would be like to have the love of your life tell you she doesn't know you, especially after going through things like her ex-boyfriend coming back, Family, etc. Where is the other Willow indeed? I think that will be one of the topics of discussion among the Scoobies.

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Glad you like it up there on the cliff! Poor Tara for sure, and I'm glad it was her too - I wouldn't want to be writing a dimension where Willow was with someone else like Buffy or Anya or something. Not my thing. Bibeau's Compendium was just a throwaway joke since that's the book Buffy had to get in the video game Chaos Bleeds. :)

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Glad you like the characters! There are many questions, and the answers will slowly be revealed, I promise. But I will tell you that it's early season six in terms of the timeline, yes. I actually have it narrowed down to which episodes it's in between, but I can't remember the name of it - but in the next part someone will mention some events which will provide a clue for all those who like such clues. More on July 11!

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Yes, I decided on the advice of Mrs. Beta to post the first three chapters with week intervals, because those events get the story going - Willow's in a new dimension and she runs into Tara and goes to Giles' apartment. But now, I swear that I'm going to move to a posting schedule of fortnightly, for all the aforementioned reasons I've aforementioned.

Indeed the update had to start moments after the last - I'm all for gaps in time when it's not important but it's still important here. Hee, yes - her reaction to being kissed is confused, all right. I just didn't think that passionate love would be realistic, but controlled revulsion - that's not quite the story I wanted to write either. Something...in between, sort of, I guess.

I'm not sure if Willow really knows that much about how Europeans kiss, I think she's just grasping for stereotypes or something. I must admit the European comment in her mind was a bit of a little joke for our European kitten compadres. My family usually kisses hello on the mouth and/or cheek depending on who it is, and we're Scottish/Canadian/English with a dash of French on the side - sort of like a shepherd's pie with scalloped potatoes instead of mashed - HEH! Maybe that's only funny to me. What was I saying?

Yeppers, Tara and Willow live with Buffy and Dawn - I put up in db's reply that it's early season six. Between which episodes will be revealed shortly. And yeah, too close for comfort. But whose comfort? :D

You may be right about X/A being the missing others. We'll see if you're right about the rest. ;) Sincerely, Captain Planning

Now that one I can say is a maybe because perhaps the others are just showing a bit of moderation in not reacting to her mentioning Angel. So maybe they do know him.


Perhaps, perhaps. And yes, in movies and TV shows when people don't listen it drives me nuts too, but I can see how it would happen if you're not expecting that your friend/lover is actually someone from a different dimension. All the times it's happened to me it's taken a while for me to catch on too. ;)

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Heh - see my response to JustSkipIt for more on the European throwaway joke. I'm glad to hear that you think this story is realistic, Grayson - while I loved UberCon '05 and UberSmut, those two stories for me have a hint of a romantic comedy farce, while this one is trying to be much more in the real world, if you will. Even though it's clearly not in the real world. So to speak. But yes, for sure Willow will not assume there's been a dimensional shift - she has no concept for all of that stuff.

Yeah, Tara was in a hurry and we'll probably find out why later. I don't think it's an important reason, but yeah, she was rushing around. I think that most people tend to operate with an expectation that things are normal. I certainly do, and sometimes I don't always notice right away when someone is upset, for example. And people totally see and hear what they expect to see and hear. That's weird too - I've had experiences where I've SEEN right in front of me that a certain piece of paper had a certain name on it, but upon closer inspection it was different. My brain filled in what I expected to see. Same thing for people's faces, sometimes. Neuroscience is interesting. Or maybe I live on a dimensional cusp?
"Was she European?" Ha!

I don't think it's giving anything away to say yeah, Willow's been transported to the canon dimension. :) Thank you for reading, Grayson! I always appreciate your feedback.

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Tee hee, it was just for you and your continental compadres that I included that little "European" comment, Caz. I know that not all Europeans kiss everyone - I think it's one of those stereotypes that Americans have, kind of like all Europeans think that Americans are boorish and loud. (Just kidding again! Heh.) Yeah, poor Willow. What does lost the plot mean? I do hope she starts to trust Tara - we'll find out more soon on that front.

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Good point that Angell can be a last name. I am guessing that the Scoobs are probably so preoccupied wondering where their Willow is that it might not be registering right now, but at some point they'll catch on as to what Willow said. And you're right right - the gang is often frustratingly obtuse in canon. But yeah - they should have no problemo believing that it happened. Thanks for reading!

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Hey Anne - yeah, poor Willow! I would be thinking that I had flipped my shit if anything similar ever happened to me. Verrrrry good questions about where R1 Willow is. We'll get a little more into that in part 4 and beyond. As for what supernatural threat they were researching, that will become a little bit more clear as the story progresses. Suffice it to say it's the most chilling threat the Scooby Gang has ever faced. Thanks for your continuing interest!

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Poor Willow and her increasing panic. Thanks for saying I did a nice job capturing it - that's what I was going for. And it's going to get worse before it gets better. And yeah, she's conflicted but hardly realizing it with regard to Tara. But that will continue to come into play as the story goes on. Yeah, I totally didn't want to have a sudden rush of recognition with the Tara kiss - it needs to be real and I tried to write it as if I were a young not-quite-clueful-or-out woman, although I fear I would have been like "WTF, mate?" instead of Willow's non-response. But she's pretty used to dealing with things internally, this Willow is.

The 2nd dimension is canon, yep, and we'll find out more about where in the timeline in upcoming chapters. More soon! :)

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Yeah, you caught me - the "European" remark was on purpose. Hee!

Yeah, poor Willow - she's confused and freaked and all kinds of badness. Poo on the people not listening, but in their defense, they weren't expecting someone with red hair who answered to "Willow" not to be their Willow.

I thought that in canon that Tara ended up taking on a lot of canon Willow's traits - she started babbling a bit here and there, and certainly wore all kinds of crazy-ass clothes, eh? So yeah, this Tara is a bit like Willow, or at least my interpretation of such.

Yeah, Giles has always been a stabilizing influence, don't you think? And he knew that if this Willow was anything like their Willow that hands-on evidence would be the best convincer. And yeah, Willow was likely up all night because they are being confronted by some dire evil that is confounding them. We'll find out more soon! Thanks wattypantsies.

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Hi! Yeah, I totally agree that such a statement from one's love of one's life would be a heartbreaker. You're very nice to worry about what the other Willow is going through. Perhaps we'll know more at some point about that.

We'll see how well Willow adjusts or not in upcoming chapters. I'm sure that the Scoobs will try to help her as much as they can. Thanks so much!

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Hey Mary! I knew that nothing would bring you out of the woodwork like a 69! Tee hee. Yeah, poor Will - Buffy's name was the old bait and switch, no matter how unintended on Tara's part. I can't imagine what would be more disorienting to someone than having so many things so similar and yet so foreign - almost worse than being among total strangers. Sometimes dreams are like that - tantalizingly similar but different too. Anyhoo-hoo, thanks for reading and for your kind comments! :)

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Lonewolf22

Hi Lonewolf! Yeah, I feel bad for Willow too - I'm not sure if she has the skills to deal with what's happening. Where is canon Willow? Good question - I promise that we will find out before the story is over, but not right away. I feel bad for Tara too - I can't imagine what she'd be thinking in a situation like that. (Actually, I can imagine.) Thank you for reading!

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Hi Emmypants - yeah, the coffee thing seemed like one of the most obvious differences to play on. I too feel bad for Willow - it would be totally scary to be transported somewhere. Where is the other Willow? Like I told Lonewolf, I think we'll find out before the story is over - and I'll bet the other Scoobs are wondering that very same thing.

I can't imagine the horror of wandering around with no one offering me coffee - that sounds like a fate worse than death. ;) (I drink a lot of coffee.) Hee hee. A chilling picture you paint there, Emms.

Thanks for reading! :D

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Sith, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hm, that's an interesting question about Willow's consciousness. I think that further chapters will help to hypothesize about where the other Willow could be. Funny you should mention "Back to the Future" - that's one of my favorite movies.

I just can't imagine what it would be like to not be a caffeine addict, which is part of the reason why I thought it would be fun to explore that a bit through this Willow. Thanks for reading!
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby caz » Sat Jul 08, 2006 11:13 am

Hi Sally. :wave

Losing the plot is another way of saying that you think you are going mad.

I lost the plot years ago!

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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby Thianne » Sat Jul 08, 2006 11:19 am

tee hee :p you're funny Sally :p
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby grimlock72 » Sun Jul 09, 2006 5:47 am

Oh a new Sally story :pinky .. and Willow and Tara have already met even ;-) The story title is confusing me a bit, since Willow seems to have entered another dimension as opposed to forgetting stuff.. then again we're only onto chapter 3 :smug

I like the puzzle element in stories like these, Willow is wearing her 'other dimension' clothes so she must have been transported there somehow... or <> , anyway I can think of some season6 episodes this would fit it, yep.

Poor Tara too, she has somehow lost 'her' Willow. What to do... try to swap the Willows back again would seem logical. After all, what about the other Willow who must be missing her Tara??? Come to think of it, are we a Tara short or has Willow in the 'normal' dimension simply not found her Tara yet??

Questions, questions... interesting indeed :peace

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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby FineyMcFine » Sun Jul 09, 2006 7:01 pm

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grimmy, thanks so much for stopping by! Yeah, the title refers more to Willow's disorientation that she experieced in Chapter 2 as well as the continual disorientation she's experiencing being in a place that is somewhat like her own but also very dissimilar, and with people who are like but not identical to the ones she knows in her own world.

I love the puzzle thing too; I'm very much enjoying putting the clues in here and there. And now I'm curious about what you snipped, deeming it too dangerous. Curiouser and curiouser.

Many questions and most if not all of them will be addressed in future chapters, so I won't try to answer any of them here. But I will say that I'm always pleased to read your feedback because you obviously put a lot of thought into reading the story and then analyzing it in feedback. Thanks grimmy! :)
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby willowbaby05 » Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:50 pm

:whistle *taps desk* Okay, I'm seriously not reading this story over and over again, perpareing for the next update. No siree, not me. What?! Hey at lease I'm not bitting my fingernails. Any lower I dont think I'll have any fingers. Just kidding, just posting, waiting for the update. :D
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby a willow angel » Tue Jul 11, 2006 2:24 am

This story totally consumed me! My mum made me go offline while i was in the middle of reading it, and i sat there tapping my fingers until she let me go back on, because i couldn't consentrate on anything as my mind kept wondering back to this fic. And I probably used too many words there to simply say, i'm addicted to this fic :blush

I love how Tara is with Willow, while Willow in unaware of it, although at the same time, poor Tara.

The coffee thing was also awesome, coz it's such a Willow trademark, so it's funny how the alternate Willow doesn't drink coffee at all.

Can't wait to see more!


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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby FineyMcFine » Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:04 am

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Hey Nat, I'm glad you've liked it so far! Yes, poor Tara for sure, and poor Willow as well. And I'm glad you liked the coffee device - I figured that a different Willow would pose a little bit of a cause for concern for people, but a different Willow who did drink coffee would really rock their socks off. Thank you for reading, and I hope you like what's next!
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby FineyMcFine » Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:07 am

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Title: Dimension Dementia
Part: 4
Author: SallyMcFine
Feedback: I love feedback. Bring it on!
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: All disclaimers apply
Thanks: To my beta, Mrs. McFine, for her editing and storyline skills that are out of this world.
Setting: AU/canon crossover
Summary: What happens when a shy, introverted girl is torn away from her world and deposited into a dimension full of vampires, demons, and…a girlfriend?
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Part 4 - Ghost

Willow's tears spurred Buffy into action. No matter how strangely she might be acting, her best friend was clearly upset, and she jumped up from the couch and enclosed her in a secure hug. Willow didn't resist - Buffy looked a little different, but she was still the only familiar anchor in what was turning out to be a strange sea. She clung to Buffy as she cried out her confusion and fear. A corner of her mind noted that even Buffy's body felt different - she seemed impossibly strong and well-muscled as she held Willow in her embrace, whispering soothing words.

Gradually her sobs subsided and Buffy led her gently over to a wing chair on the other side of the coffee table. Giles emerged from the hallway and handed her a box of tissues, which she accepted gratefully. She stole a glance at Tara, who hadn't moved during the entire time - she sat on the couch with her arms wrapped around her torso, watching Willow with an expression of worry and...something else that Willow couldn't identify.

"All right, then," Giles spoke into the awkward silence. "No appointment at the hospital?"

She shook her head.

"Willow, why don't you tell us what it was you were doing before you came over here. That seem as good a place to start as any," he said.

She dabbed at her eyes and took a deep breath. "I got up, took a shower, had breakfast, said goodbye to Buffy, and started walking to the hospital. My appointment was at 10:00 a.m." She looked ruefully at the clock. "It was, I swear. I have this appointment card." She still clutched the card in her hand, and laid it down on the coffee table. "But they said that not only do I not have an appointment today, but my doctor isn't on staff."

Tara cleared her throat hesitantly. "Um, Willow? Why were you going to the h-hospital?"

Willow hadn't noticed that Tara had a stutter - she hadn't stuttered at all on their walk over to the apartment building. "Six days ago I hit my head on the freezer, pretty hard. It knocked me out, and Buffy found me in the kitchen. I went to the hospital and they kept me for a few days because apparently I had a seizure, and they wanted to rule out a brain tumor. Do you not remember any of this, Buffy?"

Buffy shook her head. Giles motioned for her to continue.

Mystified, Willow said "Well, I swear, it happened, unless I'm crazy. Anyway, I was having headaches, and I started having trouble with my vision."

"What kind of trouble?" Giles said. "Loss of vision?"

"Not exactly," Willow said. "Too much vision, I guess. I was seeing things that weren't there - dishes, cars, flickers of light - mostly out of the corners of my eyes. When I looked at them straight on, they weren't really there. Until this morning..." she trailed off.

"Yes?" he prompted.

"When I left the house this morning, I told Buffy I was going to walk because it was so nice outside. And I was crossing Main Street, and there's this new age shop, Middle Earth, you know?" Blank stares greeted her. "And I saw the sign change, right in front of my eyes. It changed to 'Magic Box.' And then Tara came out of the door, called me by name, and told me we were late. I just sort of got carried along - I thought she was a friend of Buffy's and that Buffy had decided to drive me to the hospital after all."

"Hmmm," said Giles, looking at Willow consideringly. "And you don't know me or Tara, but you do know Buffy."

"Yes. So you're saying that the four of us are friends?" she said absently. She saw Tara flinch again, although it was subtle. "But Buffy...you look different."

"How?" Buffy's tone was curious.

"Your hair - it's shorter than it was this morning. And you're kind of...stronger than I ever remember you being. I don't know how that could have happened so fast."

"I might have an idea," Giles said. "But it's only a hypothesis."

"What is it?"

"I think that you are not the Willow Rosenberg that we know." He said this gently, as if trying not to panic her.

It didn't work, though.

"What do you mean?" she said, her voice a little shrill as her heart resumed its pounding.

"Well, I propose that you are from an alternate reality, and you've been accidentally transported into our world."

Buffy turned to him. "Is this like the time with Anya and the necklace and everything?"

He nodded. "Similar, although it doesn't seem like the same forces were at work here. We at least know it's possible - we'll have to do some research to confirm it."

Willow couldn't believe what she was hearing. "Wait a minute, what are you talking about? Alternate reality?"

Giles looked at her. "Yes, you know - parallel universes, quantum theory, probability waves. That kind of thing."

She shook her head. "I'm not very up on my physics."

Tara and Buffy both did a double take. "You're not?" Buffy said.

She shrugged, wondering why they seemed so surprised. "I know the basics, but nothing beyond that." Her throat was a little scratchy from crying and she coughed.

Giles said "Buffy, why don't you get Willow some water." Buffy nodded and walked over to the kitchen.

While she was doing that, Tara leaned over to Giles and whispered, "Giles, if you're right, then where is..." He returned her look with one of understanding and murmured a few words to Tara. She nodded and stood up from the couch, producing a cell phone from her bag as she walked into the hallway.

"So Willow, parallel universes. One of the mathematical consequences of quantum theory is that the equations predict the possibility of infinite simultaneous realities. Without going into all the boring details," his tone became pedantic, "suffice it to say that it's possible that there are many Sunnydales, each of them infinitesimally different from the next. In this one, there's a certain ratio of nitrogen and oxygen in the air, for example. In another one, every minute detail might be identical but for that ratio - it might be slightly changed. A bit more nitrogen than oxygen. And bigger things as well - a Sunnydale where Buffy has red hair and you're a brunette. Where you have three sisters. Where the grass is pink. No matter how preposterous it sounds, the mathematics say that it's possible."

Behind his back, Buffy mimed falling asleep and snoring as she finished pouring a glass of water. Willow covered a smile with her hand, the first real smile she had since finding herself in this nightmare. No matter what universe this was, Buffy was still Buffy.

Giles glanced askance toward Buffy. "Anyway, at this point, I think it's best to assume that you and your counterpart - our Willow Rosenberg - have switched places."

She detected something evasive in his tone, but didn't pursue it, feeling so overwhelmed by what he was proposing. "Another Willow Rosenberg? Another me?" She accepted the cup Buffy handed her as her friend settled back down on the couch, where she was joined by a pale and increasingly agitated Tara, returning from the hallway.

"Possibly," Giles said. "Why don't you tell us some details from your life so we can ascertain if that seems likely. For instance, when did you meet Buffy?"

"I met her in ninth grade."

Buffy looked up. "Tenth."

Giles leaned forward. "And here we have a discrepancy, probably one of many details that makes your life different from the Willow Rosenberg in this universe."

"Why did I move to Sunnydale in ninth grade?" Buffy asked, curious.

"Your parents had split up in eighth grade and your mom wanted a fresh start. She was also...worried about some people you had been hanging out with. And we met our freshman year, which was a lifesaver for me."

"How come?"

Willow looked down. "My best friend died that summer in a car accident. He was my oldest friend since we were kids. It was really hard."

An indrawn breath made her look over at Tara, her hand over her mouth in a belated attempt to stifle the gasp.

"Wh-who...?" Tara asked.

Before Willow could answer, a scraping sound at the door caught their attention. The handle turned and the door opened, revealing a slim blonde woman who sashayed into the room, followed by a man carrying a white bakery box.

"Sorry we're late!" the blonde chirped. "Anyone want doughnuts? Oh, darn, you already have some."

Buffy glanced over. "Hey Anya. Hey Xander."

Willow's plastic water glass slipped from nerveless fingers and clattered on the floor, splashing across the hard wood. Everyone looked over at her. Her face had drained of color.

"What's up, Will?" Xander asked. He walked over and set the doughnut box on the coffee table next to the half-empty one. "You look like you've seen a ghost. Or a demon. Or a ghostly demon."

Willow tried to speak. Her lips moved, but no words came out. She stood up shakily and took some tentative steps toward Xander, who watched her curiously. She approached him and touched his face gingerly as if to convince herself that he was real.

For the second time in hour, she burst into tears.
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby justin » Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:21 am

Dibs

That was a great update ;clap very emotional too.

So this Willow doesn't know about physics? I suppose next you're going to tell us she's not interested in computers :thud

It's good the others seem to be figuring out what's going on. Though they still don't know what happened to other!Willow.

I can see meeting Xander in this reality would be rather upsetting. Poor Willow, she seems to have a lot to take in.

Looking forward to the next part.
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby Knock yourself out » Tue Jul 11, 2006 5:26 am

Hi Sally, great update!

Earlier on I mentioned that reading this story would be delicious agony because I’m not used to reading fics as they are published. So in the interest of my sanity, have you any idea how many chapters this might be in?

I am looking forward to more Tara and Willow interaction and by Tara’s demeanour when she came back into the room, she didn’t find “canon” Willow which is a worry.
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby Thianne » Tue Jul 11, 2006 6:09 am

Hey Sally! i loved it! i feel so bad for tara though....poor thing. and xander....dead? what a shock! continue soon please :D

ps: maybe some incentive...*hugs* :D
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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby mole » Tue Jul 11, 2006 7:29 am

She shook her head. "I'm not very up on my physics."
Tara and Buffy both did a double take. "You're not?" Buffy said.


Okay, first this Willow is not a caffiene junkie and now she isn't a huge brain? Talk about alternate realities:)

Really enjoying this story, Sally. Looking forward to the inevitable Willow/Tara connection; how the alternate Willow will handle her feelings for Tara and how Tara will adjust to this different Willow. Will they fall in love? And if they do, what happens when the "real" Willow comes back? Will she be jealous of the "other" Willow? Hmmm....perhaps you'll take a different tack altogether.

To paraphrase Giles, suffice it to say that I'm looking forward to more ;-)

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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby a willow angel » Tue Jul 11, 2006 9:13 am

Wow, that was a fast update! :party

Xander being dead in other Willow's world was quite a twist! Poor Willow, with the day she had I'm surprised she's still on her feet.

I wonder what Tara's like in other Willow's world, and how Willow is coping in the reality other Willow came from without Tara.

Do we get to see Willow in other Willow's reality? Are they gonna switch back?



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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby bluebird » Tue Jul 11, 2006 11:29 am

Wow what a great update!!

I'd like to see what is happening to the 'other' willow durring all this.

Poor Xand tho I do have one question -

this Willow likes :wtkiss right?? because if not that would be a really,
really bad, bad thing.

Keep it up


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Re: Dimension Dementia

Postby db » Tue Jul 11, 2006 1:36 pm

:clap :clap :clap

Oh SallyPants

(may I call you call you SallyPants?)


This story is so amazing. Wow. How perfect - the alternate dimention Willow's Xander *died*. Now she *is* going to believe that this alternate dimention is real!!

You did a great job of capturing the emotion of all that she has learned/experienced on this crazy day - and when she discovered that Xander was alive - :cry I had a huge lump in my throat the entire time I read that.

My next question is (you had to know this was coming, right?) : How is Willow going to take the fact that her alternate reality person is gay. Is this Willow gay?

Poor Tara. She must be worried sick and *so* afraid of losing her Will... and what about poor Willow trapped in a dimention with dead Xander and no Tara? I bet she was playing with Magic - morphing dimentions or something and she screwed up. Yup. I'd bet money that's what happened.

*plunks a shiny nickle down on the table*

I hope this teaches Willow a lesson about playing with magic!

I can't wait to read what you've got next!

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