

Dance scene starts funny with the illuminated raver then ends up soooooo hot! Amazing!
My dinner with Fang (hmmm GREAT movie title! ):
So this was incredibly fascinating to me, these two carving out a relationship after all the chaos that had ensued. Please give us more of this!
Also liked how Noel handled things. A good bouncer (and I’ve known a few) doesn’t jump in and kick ass in major bar brawls. The best bouncers intervene and move things along to where the big brawl never or almost never happens. Noel was believable and it was great to see him cut in and do his job. Loved Tara’s concern, too.
Just hot and sweet, loved the discovery of what they each like – notice we’re both kinda neck girls!
Faith and Allie. Allie, eh? That name just keeps creeping into your stories. *smirk* but if it’s in honor of the amazing Babble-y One then I’m all for it!
Then Willow’s story about Rhonda really took my breath away. Very touching, very real. And then her decision to move on, to embrace the love of her life in the here and now. That was powerful; thanks for giving us that so quickly.
Their kisses, their heading home was beautiful. And yes, I want more.
Hiya Bestie! Forgive me if I - *yawns* oops, sorry *giggles* Feedback is gonna be loopy! Its 2am and i'm half asleep! Okays! Here we go!
I know that feeling...its like WHOOSH. Nice job slipping that in there. Also, when Willow gets out of the limo, it reminds me of those old movies, where the actor gets out of his car, or the driver, and helps this super sexy woman out and first all you see is the delicate hand, then the loooong high-heeled leg...yeah, like that..hehe.
*gulp*
Nice surprise, bestie! Faith? Yippee!!
This whole part was so touching *wipes eyes* Sorry, I get waaay emotional when I'm tired. Drunk drivers are a huge problem, and its a situation that is so real. *hugs*
Great stuff, bestie! I'm looking forward to more, wondering when all the business is gonna start...and keeping my eyes open for your "villains"! They better watch out! Hehe!
I thought I left fb on this already, I guess not, sorry, bad kitten. I did read it though. Loved the club and the dancing. Tara gently...dragging Willow to the dance floor. And then that kiss, hot! I guess everyone in Hollywood knows Tara is out and proud. Fang and Marie. Interesting pairing. I still don't know what I think about those two, but I am interested to know more to make my decision. Then Willow's sad story about Rhonda. *tear* I hate drunk drivers, especially around the holiday's when people somehow lose their sense of responsibility. Ahhh. Sorry, just a pet peeve. Anyway, hopefully, Tara can show Willow love and hope again. I think they are off to a great start. The work element will be interesting though. I've worked for a girlfriend before, not the best situation.

Opening her left eye very slowly Fang looks behind her, eyes quickly widening as she sees a very naked Marie spooning her from behind, ‘Oh shit! When did we…?’
“I call you sunshine because outside of work, you brighten my day.”

I will text you, can’t really call ya know?” Laughing at her own joke Faith joined in, “Oh right yeah…” Hugging each other, Allie stepped outside winking at Faith as she turned walking down the sidewalk to her bike parked on the curb. Faith was rooted to the spot in front of the door as she watched Allie put on her leather chaps and jacket, then her fire flamed helmet; when the bike was out of site she finally shut the door,


And now we find out about Willow’s deceased fiancée
How sad!!! I’m glad she has been able to move on but what a craptastic thing to happen!
what a cute story. Those two seems to be hitting it off quite well. Fang’s wake up in Marie’s bed
Too funny!! And then Willow and Tara managing to pull each other/fall out of bed together. Ouch! Back pain is no one’s friend nor are nasty head bumps. I’ve had both and its absolutely no fun. I hope poor Tara’s head heals before she has to start shooting! Let’s hope they are able to lay low for a few days or the media would have a field day with such an obvious injury.


It was cute to see how Faith and Allie met though. Very sweet. And a Tara made breakfast is definitely the cure-all to everything including a nasty fall to the floor. They're so cute.
It's super cute
I love how Willow is confused as to what's wrong with Tara at the end, completely oblivious
I can't wait for more 



"Is that your stomach again?"
Sheepishly the redhead nodded as her cheeks became almost the color of her hair.
"Shorry butsh fast motablishm." The red head was trying to talk while actually brushing her teeth.
"You had eight funny shaped pancakes a few hours ago, I cannot believe you are hungry already!" Tara rinsed her brush then her mouth with water.
Spitting Willow giggles, "Hey what can I say, our lil workout this morning made me hungry after we ate." SHe began washing her mouth out with water as the actress' eyes went wide.
Loved the toothpaste talk - perfect!!! Then the hotness and love AND the hot lingerie!!! But but why don't I believe that Director C. will stop being a psychotic bitch?



Hurray for an update!!
(Willow in a red bra and thong set
and Tara in black lace, wow!)
Actually, I'm more interested in Clarisse than Tara's father. I love the tension between Clarisse and Tara and how jealous Willow will fit in. 
DIBS!!!!!
great update!!! lulling us into a false sense of security before the sicko starts up huh? naughty girl.
yay for sexy clothes!!!!
Loved the toothpaste talk - perfect!!! Then the hotness and love AND the hot lingerie!!! But but why don't I believe that Director C. will stop being a psychotic bitch?
Loved Marie and Fang, Marie giving Fang 'the look' and then Fruit Loop choking -funny as heck! Those two are fresh, am amazed how much I like 'em. Maybe Marie was just in the wrong job! And the right job is to hang with Fang <=even rhymes!
Also, really liked Faith and Allie, what a surprise! Allie dressed to the nines and rocking Faith's world then Faith coming right back at her!
Whoooeeeee! Sign me up for a box seat at that contest!
Glad to see you back to writing! Fun times with toothpaste talk, shopping plans and sexy clothes (Willow in a red bra and thong set and Tara in black lace, wow!)
*wipes drool*
Great update bestie! Glad to see you back. Really looking forward to seeing the work start and what that might bring.
Glad to see you back on the board. Great set-up chapter. Can't wait to see what's to come with Tara's dad and Clarisse.
Well a few more details will be shown in the upcoming chapter, but nothing is going to be quick, more subtle likeLovely update! I am so sick of Tara's father & brother...in a number of fics. Can't we just kill them off once and for all? lol It's like the calm before the storm and I'm full of apprehension waiting to see what happens next! Actually, I'm more interested in Clarisse than Tara's father. I love the tension between Clarisse and Tara and how jealous Willow will fit in.

hiya friend, ... sorry i've been such a bad kitten (
not keeping up with my feedback)Upstairs Willow was in the master bath drying her hair as she heard the doors to the bedroom open and close, ignoring the call from the blonde Willow turns the blow dryer on high. She was hurt, wanting some space away from the blonde, hearing the bathroom door open she sighs knowing she won’t get her space. Turning she sees the blonde standing there with tears running down her cheeks.
Instantly the blow dryer clattered onto the counter top as Willow ran to Tara, wrapping her arms around the woman; “Baby why are you crying?” The blonde could hear the worry in her voice, she was hoping she could make it better; grabbing a few tissues from the counter as she keeps her arms around Tara.
“Y-you…and then…the thing…I hurt you when I just meant a joke…I’m sorry…” trying to pull away to move into the bedroom Tara felt the redhead’s arms tighten around her waist. “Please Willow…I know I hurt you and I feel awful I shouldn’t be here right now.”
“No baby, look I am sorry how I reacted, it just…I dunno I’m sorry.” Willow held onto the blonde for dear life, “It was funny falling into the pool though, didn’t expect that to happen.” Hearing a giggle, Willow smiles that she made Tara giggle.; knowing that even fights or misunderstandings can’t stand in their way.

Okay wow. Really enjoyed that. A halter top... very sexy choice. I love the way Willow and Tara both related to Willow's old student. It shows how down to earth both of them are
The way Faith stood up for her date was wonderful. People shouldn't be discriminated against. Just because you can't talk doesn't mean your not intelligent. Of course, just because you can talk doesn't mean your intelligent either. Intelligence has nothing to do with any impairments and people need to learn to accept each other. So big yay for Faith.
Mr Maclay will likely be trouble and I'm certain Ron will help him. Men with big egos, which Ron seems like that type, don't like being turned down by lesbians.
I aboslutely LOVE how well you describe everyone's connection to one another
Loving all the connections going on. Sorry it took so long. We're still at the hospital, but my girls are sleeping so I get a break. Really enjoying this bestie. C is crazy if she thinks she can seduce Willow. Keep up the great work. I'm lookin forward to the next update!
i am impressed with how well you are keeping the different story lines flowing and interacting so smoothly. you are giving good depth to all the characters both those familiar to us and the originals that you are creating. you have a fun balance of laughter, love and sinister shadows.
the Faith i see in your story is the one i could see her being if she would have gotten true friendship and support; instead of being pushed to the outside like what happened in the show. she still has that fiery temper, and devious nature. however it is channeled into protecting those she cares about.
i know this is from a few chapters back, but i think this shows best how they are beginning to love each other. they are so not wanting to be the cause of pain to the other, and if they see the other upset or hurting it breaks their heart.

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