
YAY! It's posted!!!!



I appreciate all of it!more than that I like Willow's loneliness and her strength - both dominant parts of her character. It's interesting to have them meet this way and I like the old power of a kind of fairy-tale setting
One thing I wonder was Willow casting the lightning to scare Tara away or to scare away any pursuer's.
I follow you're work on *coughs* another site and I really enjoy your style of writing.
The Maclay men well, what can I say, except that's one group of men that I wish Willow would hit with some lightning
Dibs Mistress Strikes Again!!!!
She felt the wind, like her lover's touch, running through her hair. "I know," she sighed. "I know that you won't hold me to that promise." She stood, speaking to the wind. "I can't let her in, baby. I just can't. Everyone who I love ends up hurt. You're gone. My family is gone. One of my dearest friends is gone, and the other is scarred for life."
“Who led them? Who led the villagers?” Tara answered the question with her own, although she felt that she already knew the answer. Her father’s bragging words were echoing in her ears.
“Donald Maclay. That man is evil, and determined to eradicate magic from the Earth through violence. He is also the one who murdered Morgan.”
“No……”
“My father is Donald Maclay,” Tara admitted
Willow felt a scream break from her throat as she stood just outside the door. How can this be? This wounded woman was the daughter of that monster? The monster who had murdered her Morgan, her love? Willow stepped into the room, a cold calmness flowing through her.
“Did he send you?” Willow asked, her voce cold. Her fists were clenched tight. She didn’t even notice the sparks coming from them. “Did he send you to finish me off? Killing everyone I love wasn’t good enough? Haven’t we suffered enough?”
“She has been hurt by him as much as you, Willow,” Buffy whispered to her before leaving the room.
Willow softened, realizing the truth in Tara’s words. Tara was just another woman unfortunate enough to have had an experience with Donald Maclay. Except Tara didn’t just have one experience; Tara had lived with her father for her entire life. Willow felt her resolve settle inside her and she stood straighter.
“Stay,” Willow said, surprising Tara who was struggling to stand. Willow’s eyes and hair were back to normal. “He will hurt you no more. I promise. I could not protect Morgan, but by the Powers, I swear I will protect you!”
He backhanded her and she fell, a hand held to her bleeding lip. She started an incantation, one that Tara recognized. It was the spell to paralyze. Her mother had taught it to her days ago. Tara struggled to remember the words as her father kicked her mother in the mouth.
The force of the kick whipped Elizabeth’s head back, the bottom half of her jaw dislocated and hanging limp. The words would not come to Tara as she sat and watched helpless as her father continued to kick her mother, shouting obscenities.
“We will not suffer a witch to live,” Donald shouted as he sent a rough kick into Elizabeth’s temple. Her body went limp and Tara turned and ran. Her mother was dead.
Willow gasped as she woke, still feeling the fear that Tara had felt. Her heart was beating frantically and there were hot tears on her face. She reached out into the bond and realized that Tara was still in the dream. She couldn’t help herself. She had to get to Tara.
“Shhh, auri, its okay now. You’re safe,” Willow said, not realizing she had spoken the endearment.
“What? W-what did you say?” Tara whispered.
“You’re safe,” Willow repeated, rubbing her hand along Tara’s back.
“N-no, you s-said auri.” Willow’s hand stilled for a moment and then began to move again. “How d-did you know?” Tara asked.
“I shared the dream, Tara.”
“Tara,” Willow whispered. “Auri. My gold one, you will be safe, I promise you.” Willow leaned forward and pressed a kiss to Tara’s forehead. Laying back down, she wrapped her arms around Tara and gave into her own peaceful dreams. Peaceful dreams filled with laughing, deep sapphire eyes.
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I have a thing for witches and kingdoms and medieval kinda times so that's definitely a plus! This story is so well written and you've obviously given it allot of thought since Willow in this story has a whole past that is slowly getting revealed. I loved the last part when Willow holds Tara and they fall asleep together :] can't wait for the next update! 

"Morgan!" Willow called out, her heart ripping the name from her chest as she tossed her pain into the sky. The lightning lit up the night, showing Willow's pale, tear-streaked face as she sobbed and fell to her knees, memories flooding her. "I promised you, baby. I promised."
She felt the wind, like her lover's touch, running through her hair.

Willow choked on her grief and threw more lightning into the sky. Where the loud crack of the lightning was usually soothing, tonight it seemed to only heighten her pain and brought more tears to her eyes. She stared out into the night, seeing the pale stone out of the corner of her eye. Willow refused to look at it when she was like this. Morgan would not have approved of the way she held on to her grief, yet Willow had to admit she felt as if her sorrow was all she had left.
“Tara,” Willow whispered. “Auri. My gold one, you will be safe, I promise you.” Willow leaned forward and pressed a kiss to Tara’s forehead. Laying back down, she wrapped her arms around Tara and gave into her own peaceful dreams. Peaceful dreams filled with laughing, deep sapphire eyes.


soon!!!!
Most definitely my favorite and the most touching part of this chapter."They were permission, advice, and a goodbye all wrapped together."
I like hearing from Kittens!
....It's sweet the Tinkerbell light, getting Willow's attention. The Willow helping Tara get outside, the bonding between them is so amazingly perfect. Your descriptions are so detailed that I see myself there.
(Also, it's super cool that Tara noticed that thing that Willow does when she giggles ;] )



Willow smiled softly; glancing down at Tara’s lips and back up to deep pools of blue. Tara gave an almost imperceptible nod; their lips met in the middle. It was a soft and gentle discovery of their newfound love, Willow felt the final piece of the puzzle slide into place. Tara’s hands moved to draw the redhead closer, as their lips continued their gentle caress; Neither woman demanded more of the other, this was enough. They parted softly, leaning their foreheads together to stare into each other’s eyes. This was quickly becoming their favorite thing to do.

They chatted for a few more minutes before the trials of the day finally got to them, falling asleep in each other’s arms. Buffy came in a little bit later that night to check on them, finding the two women so wrapped up in each other that it was hard for her to tell where one began and the other ended.

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