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I'll give it ago....

Postby kiwi6969 » Thu Oct 26, 2006 4:22 am

no name as of yet... :)


A leap for you,
Is A dive for me,
Take each day as it comes,
Is like a year for me,
While I'm coming,you are going,
While you are here, I am not,
To be or not to be,
Well to tell the truth, that is me,
Who am I?, what am I?
Who can I become,
What will I become,
Am I going, or am I staying,
Do you need me, Do you want me,
Can you even see me,
Yes I am here,
I am real, and have feelings,
Only you don't seem to care,
And now I don't care,
I can live without you,can you without me,
To be apart, I can do,
To live without you, yes even that too,
I think that's what I need to do,
that is what I will do,
To have a life without you.




thank you for taking the time to read.

Terri
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Re: I'll give it ago....

Postby Brianna » Thu Oct 26, 2006 11:03 am

I've never undertand well the poetry but I feel sad reading it, thoug I like it, I like reading sad things. It remainds me that my live could be sades't
Do I act like the big knowledge woman?

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Re: I'll give it ago....

Postby kiwi6969 » Thu Oct 26, 2006 2:02 pm

thanks for taking the time to read this, and everyone can write poems, just write whats in your heart.. :)
' she's out there, our heart's have met, our soul's have met,just not yourselves'
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Re: I'll give it ago....

Postby SJ » Fri Oct 27, 2006 12:19 am

Great poem,thanks for sharing.
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Re: I'll give it ago....

Postby kiwi6969 » Fri Feb 23, 2007 4:39 am

you put the knife deep into my heart,
twisted and torn my heart apart,
pulled apart plunged into dark,
I died today, from what you did,
A day like today I wish I was dead,
you killed me with all your words,
lied to me with your feelings,
confesed your deepest sins,
I was a joke to you,
just let you know today,
that you were the death of me...
' she's out there, our heart's have met, our soul's have met,just not yourselves'
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Re: I'll give it ago....

Postby SJ » Sun Feb 25, 2007 3:48 am

Powerful words,great poetry.
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