when a tune pops into my head. so, being the whistling type, i whistle it and try to go back to studying. but i cant quite think where i got the tune from, so i'm forced to believe that i made it up*. as if thats not distracting enough, bam, it's got words! definitely mine now, as evidenced by the lack of sense they make. anyway, that put an end to any hope of further study, so i went ahead and wrote them down, and more followed...
so here i am, with something somewhat resembling a half-written ill-formed song, the tune to which i have no way of expressing to you, as i absolutely cannot write music. BUT, i thought it was maybe worth sharing anyway, so here i am
*dont know for sure- i could easily have stolen it from somewhere and not remember where. if you read my mind, hear the tune, and recognize it, please fill me in!
'neeway, here 'tis:
'Cause you know she's been hurting,
Though smiling and flirting;
She thinks he's been needing
A sizeable beating
She knows its long done
But she cannot quite see where she's gone wrong;
Yeah she's gone wrong now.
'Cause you know she's been sweating,
And never once freting
He thinks he's been working,
But more often shirking,
He thinks it's a shot
But she cannot quite see that it's all he's got;
Yeah it's all he's got.
'Cause you know she been leaving,
But he's not believing,
She sees he's been faking,
All twisting and shaking
He hopes it's real
But she cannot quite see that she made a deal;
Yeah they made a deal.
so yeah, just thought i'd share. feedback welcome, i'm not really much with the writing so dont be afraid you'll hurt my feelings
actually, i guess it came out more poetry then song; some things were different originally, but i changed them as i was typing to make it more parallel.