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Lyrics and Poems

Postby Hanki » Sun Mar 23, 2003 10:59 am

*takes deep breath*



my girlfriend (:p ) wanted me to post these so...



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stars



i've been trying so hard to write this song

trying to get my feelings straight for so long

but i finally realised i still don't know how i feel

cuz sometimes i wonder if what i think we have is real



i let myself think she's my little star

i think the distance might be too far

so i ring her phone and wait for an answer

see a shooting star and can't help but think of her



everytime i talk to her i smile a little more

seems like we have that much in common, gives me something to smile for

seems like i want everything when i've got nothing at all

and it hurts so much cuz i feel so damn small



i let myself think she's my little star

i think the distance might be too far

so i ring her phone and wait for an answer

see a shooting star and can't help but think of her



and now i cannot see

cuz you're so far away

waiting for the day when you'll be here with me



i let myself think she's my little star

i think the distance might be too far

so i ring her phone and wait for an answer

see a shooting star and can't help but think of her



even when we're apart

it doesn't matter cuz

we'll look upwards and see the same stars



~~~~~~~~



dream



i had that dream again, the one with the girl

the one i can't shake, got my head in a whirl

in my dreams she's perfect, in my dreams she's worth it

in real life she's gone, in real life she's not the one



so hard to let go to what you thought was right

so hard, so hard knowing you'll be alone at night

even when all you can think about it her smile

let go, let go even if it takes a while



i had the drean again, she was still there

why won't she go? why do i still care?

she was never perfect, she was never worth it

i'm glad that she's gone cuz she wasn't the one



so hard to let go to what you thought was right

so hard, so hard knowing you'll be alone at night

even when all you can think about it her smile

let go, let go even if it takes a while



i had the dream again but the girl has changed

she's got no face not, the new girl yet to be arranged

i dream she'll be perfect, i dream she'll be worth it

i know she'll never be gone, i know that she's the one



so hard to let go to what you thought was right

so hard, so hard knowing you'll be alone at night

even when all you can think about it her smile

let go, let go even if it takes a while



let go, let go even if it takes a while

let go, let go even if it takes a while



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Valentine



it's valentine's day again

but this year isn't the same

no fear of rejection

no time for depression

this year she has someone

this year the hurt is gone



so she picked out a card

thought what to write real hard

no fear of rejection

but time for depression

her joy can't last forever

but for this year they are together



she sends the card while she has someone

next year that security might be gone

she lives for now, tomorrow begins to fade

next year eludes her, no memories yet made



so now she is happy

love is all she can see

no fear of rejection

no time for depression

she doesn't have to be strong

she thinks this is where she belongs



she sends the card while she has someone

next year that security might be gone

she lives for now, tomorrow begins to fade

next year eludes her, no memories yet made



the dreams blur into one

but it's a different face she sees

the thrill of new love gone

and now she flees, she flees



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there ya go, a brief selection... oh and my girlfriend's words upon hearing i blamed her for this posting: "blame it on me? more like dedicate."

~ Han ~
"...cuz i shove a hanki down my trousers..." ~ Rachael Stirling

Edited by: Hanki at: 3/25/03 12:11:56 pm
Hanki
 


Re: Lyrics and Poems

Postby feena191 » Sun Mar 23, 2003 6:20 pm

they're beautiful :) I wish I could write like this



Feena

-x-

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The inward eye, the sightless sea, Ayala flows through the river in me...


feena191
 


Re: Lyrics and Poems

Postby StrawberryTrix » Mon Mar 24, 2003 2:05 am

they r really sweeeet



Straw

"My teeth, my car, my vagina, my business"~Kelly Osbourne

StrawberryTrix
 


Re: Lyrics and Poems

Postby SJ » Mon Mar 24, 2003 5:49 am

Great writing :read

SJ
 


Re: Lyrics and Poems

Postby Cmdr Lyssa » Mon Mar 24, 2003 5:28 pm

OK I've never posted on here so Hi. But I just had too write and say how brilliant these were. I feel I know exactly what you are trying to express in them. This is some excellent, excellent writing.

Cmdr Lyssa
 


Re: Lyrics and Poems

Postby shootingstar » Tue Mar 25, 2003 1:54 pm

Yay! You posted :applause *goes a crazy lil dance* :dance



I admit I am a mean and cruel girlfriend :boot making you post you lyrics, whatver was I thinking? Oh yea, I was thinking how great they were and how people would love them :p



When are you gonna post us kittens some more?

* * * * * * * * *

A pretty girl happy in an ugly world, watching all the pretty people doing lots of ugly things...

shootingstar
 


Re: Lyrics and Poems

Postby Hanki » Tue Mar 25, 2003 2:22 pm

thanks to everyone who posted comments... glad you guys liked them!



and sweetie you want more? ok then...



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Ice Warm



You're always so cold when you need to be hot

I love you so much even though i should not

Treat me so badly, i never say a word

Even if i did would i ever be heard?

They're under your spell, just like me

Why does no one ever see what i see?



A frightened little girl

Hiding who she is

So scared of what they think

Just trying to fit in



You treat me so badly cuz i'm just like you

Hurt me again, wish you could hurt yourself too

When we're alone you can be so damned nice

But some how in public you're as cold as ice

One day you'll want me and i won't be there

Cuz i'll be with someone who treats me with care



A frightened little girl

Hiding who she is

So scared of what they think

Just trying to fit in



One day you'll want me and i won't be there

Cuz i'll be with someone who treats me with care



~~~~~~~~



Dear Mum



Dear Mum,

I've got something to tell you,

It's not easy to say

Dear Mum,

It's not just some dumb thing

That i made up today

Dear Mum,

Will you still want to know me? Please don't disown me

Over this thing i have to say

Dear Mum,

You know that i love you but i can't keep denying,

This thing ends today...



Dying, i feel like i'm dying

Even though i'm only crying

Why did you react this way?

Trying, i feel like i'm trying

Even though i know i'm lying

Just make this fight go away



Dear Mum,

It hurts that you hate me now

When really it's still me

Dear Mum,

I think that you don't understand, how

Can i make you see?

Dear Mum,

Now that you don't know me, too late you disowned me

At least you'll let me be

Dear Mum,

Now that i quit denying, i'm gonna give up trying

Maybe one day you'll see



Dying, i feel like i'm dying

Even though i'm only crying

Why did you react this way?

Trying, i feel like i'm trying

Even though i know i'm lying

Just make this fight go away



Just make this fight go away

Just make this fight go away

Just make this hurt go away

Just make this hurt go away

Please...



~~~~~~~~



oxymoron



i've never been good at expressing myself

the words have never come easy

this insecurity

washes over me

and i can't go on with you here

i can't go on without you here



i need you yet i hate you

too hard to let you go

protests fall on deaf ears

and all i want is you



this pain must have some cure

i've got a feeling i cant ignore

i hate you, i hate you but need you too

i need you, i need you but hate you too



i wish i could die and leave this pain behind

wish it came as easy as that

why do i bother

i'm slipping further

and i cant go on with you here

i can't go on without you here



i'll let go, start to bleed

but you're what i need

come and save me please

before i end this deed



this pain must have some cure

i've got a feeling i cant ignore

i hate you, i hate you but need you too

i need you, i need you but hate you too



its too late this has to end

fall into pain like a friend

can't save me now, no one can

this went too far to mend



this pain must have some cure

i've got a feeling i cant ignore

i hate you, i hate you but need you too

i need you, i need you but hate you too



i hate you

i need you

goodbye



~~~~~~~~



is that ok? :p now post some of your poems!!

~ Han ~


"the fatal flaw of 'Who's Gurkhan?' was that nobody cared who he was as long as Gabrielle kept dancing in that skimpy outfit..." ~ me on Xena season six ep 'Who's Gurkhan.'

Hanki
 


Re: Lyrics and Poems

Postby SJ » Thu Mar 27, 2003 5:49 am

Very expressive :glasses

SJ
 


Re: Lyrics and Poems

Postby mocha fiend 22 » Thu Mar 27, 2003 10:36 pm

wow your really good at this.

I love you now and forever and a week

mocha fiend 22
 


Re: Lyrics and Poems

Postby Hanki » Fri Mar 28, 2003 2:05 pm

i realised it'd probably be easier to give u the link to my webpage with all my lyrics/poems on: www22.brinkster.com/hanki there are also some of my girlfriend's poems on there hehehe... shes gonna kill me for posting that

~ Han ~


"the fatal flaw of 'Who's Gurkhan?' was that nobody cared who he was as long as Gabrielle kept dancing in that skimpy outfit..." ~ me on Xena season six ep 'Who's Gurkhan.'

Hanki
 


Re: Lyrics and Poems

Postby sprhrgrl » Sat Mar 29, 2003 3:52 am

hanki - first of all, the way your av matches your girl's handle is the most adorable thing ever. secondly, i really like your poems. a lot the titles, i was always bad a titles. i was drawn especially to 'super hero' (maybe just my penchant for them, though) and i like it generally a lot.

sprhrgrl.com

counting*stars


racism=sexism=homophobia

The truth shall set you free, but first it will piss you off. – Gloria Steinem

sprhrgrl
 


Re: Lyrics and Poems

Postby Hanki » Sat Mar 29, 2003 1:55 pm

thanks for the feedback... i'm glad you liked super hero, it's one of my favourites, one of my nicknames is 'superhan' lol. and as for the avatar thing... :blush hehehee

~ Han ~


"the fatal flaw of 'Who's Gurkhan?' was that nobody cared who he was as long as Gabrielle kept dancing in that skimpy outfit..." ~ me on Xena season six ep 'Who's Gurkhan.'

Hanki
 


Re: Lyrics and Poems

Postby shootingstar » Sat Apr 05, 2003 1:31 pm

More lyrics :grin



But giving that link? Your in trouble now missy....

* * * * * * * * *

A pretty girl happy in an ugly world, watching all the pretty people doing lots of ugly things...

shootingstar
 


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