Poem: Sometimes

[muFFin1811]

Hope ya like this. It's my first attempt of writin' somethin'. Don't kill a german girl 4 her depressing mood



Sometimes

Sometimes I don'nt know what to do,

I don't know what to say

I only want to go away;

to do the things I always wanted to do or say.



Sometimes I want to ease the pain inside of me,

but I have to stay;

I should be free,

and say

everything I want to say.



Sometimes I think I can't handle

the life of mine,

the time left for me;

'till I die.



Sometimes I wish anywone would notice me

help me out of this

but I have to stay at this

place everybody says I belong.



Enjoy!

muFF'

All they gave me was this ticket to heaven, a damn ticket to heaven...

Now I'm restless and I'm running from everything, I'm running from everything - 3 Doors Down

[xita]

MuFF' thanks for sharing that with us. Reading it brought me back to a time when I felt that way. Nothing more you can ask for in writing. You aren't alone here at the kitten

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Si nos dejan buscamos un rincón cerca del cielo

Si nos dejan haremos con las nubes térciopelo


José Alfredo Jiménez

[pacou]

Hey muffin



That was a sweet poem, very, very cool and sad



I wish I could write stuff like that lol and all the rhime scheme, it's cool



Thanks for sharing and like xita said, you're not alone here on the kitten



-Viv-

Medicine, law, banking – these are necessary to sustain life. But poetry, romance. love, beauty? These are what we stay alive for!

[muFFin1811]

Thanx. Your replies made/make me sooo happy .



Maybe I should write somethin' more "good moody" sometime ...



muFF'

All they gave me was this ticket to heaven, a damn ticket to heaven...

Now I'm restless and I'm running from everything, I'm running from everything - 3 Doors Down

[SJ]

Good poem

[Drumbly]

Heeeeeeeeeeey ..



this is me liking your Poem here ... *WOW*



Spreak to you later ..



LOve: Jesse